1. Easy (3.2 stars, 240 notes)
2. Hard (4.77 stars, 454 notes)
3. Insane (4.94 stars, 583 notes)
4. pkmnyab's Normal (4.02 stars, 297 notes)

MY MOTIVATION >:O

Half wtf

1. Easy [100%] KK MODS NOW PLZ!
2. pkmnyab's Normal [Done] Mod this too :3
3. Hard [Done] PLEASE MOD!
4. Insane [Done] ^Mod this too please <3
   
   
   Just did some pretty big changes to improve flow lol
   More flow improvement - 20/02/2014
   ^ 27/02/2014
   Added some linear sliders n stuff 28/02/2014
   Improving rhythm super big changes so gunna need more mods xD 09/03/2014
   umm, TRIED to do some NC stuff, but truthfully, i had no idea what i was doing haha... ^^' 11/03/2014
   Changed up some ugly patterns on easy 21/03/2014
   23/03/2014 more flow stuff ._. (damn dis stuff is hard)
   Rearranged objects for first section of Insane and rearranged some jumps 04/04/2014
   Rearranged objects for insane 05/04/2014
   Repositioned easy 08/04/2014

pkmnyab wrote:

[Hard]
00:11:375 (2) - slider is shaped a bit weird, I think you should make it simple here, like this: fixd, made a blanket

SPOILER

I'm not sure how to explain it, but it feels smoother this way compared to the original slider.

00:22:961 (1) - distance snap this, it will throw people off since it is so close to (5). If you distance snap (1) you will also have to snap (2), etc
fixd (sorta), mostly at least

01:55:651 (1) - distance snap this as well, it's a bit too close to (5) fixd

02:08:892 - why not have the (1) slider like this so it matches the vocal? (it's moved earlier and extended, the shape and orientation of the slider is up to you) : k done

SPOILER

02:16:134 - I think it would sound better if you extended the (1) slider by one tick. This also applies to 02:17:789. This is what it would look like:

SPOILER

im not really a fan of having things start or end in the off beats

As for the storyboard, I'm not sure where you got the picture of the butterfly from but IF there is one with the wings open, you can switch between the two pictures when the butterfly changes directions, which makes it look like it's flapping (sort of). hmm that's a good idea i'll do so if i get the pictures

[Insane]
00:26:272 (1) - (3) and (1) are too close together considering the spacing before. Maybe try to space it out, kind of like this? : hmm i think this part is fine, the difference isnt too big

SPOILER

01:57:720 (7) - spacing of the jumps is inconsistent. Pro tip: while holding alt, you can change the distance snap multiplier in the top right corner. This is useful in your case for the jumps, just set the multiplier somewhere near 2.0 x and rearrange the circles. alright i will do this

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I didn't find anything else wrong with the map. Overall it feels right when you play it, the song is also nice
Since you are open for guest difficulties, I guess I can do an easy version sometime this week. If you need any other mods don't hesitate to ask

1. Useless stuff, but current BG is 1365x768, might want to fix it for sake of having it right
2. Set a preview point for all diffs
3. I'm pretty sure offset is really late.. I'm not a timing expert myself, but 2257 sounds much better for me (don't forget to resnap notes and timing sections)

1. 00:07:237 (1,2,3) - Aren't these overlapping too much?
2. 00:10:547 (1,2) - This almost-overlap looks pretty ugly to be honest
3. 00:49:030 (1,2) - Same as before, these overlaps are just ew
4. 00:51:099 (5,1) - Spacing plays pretty much awkward here, consider adding a note at 00:51:720
5. 01:11:582 (2) - Making this slider's curve like this would improve flow
6. 01:36:616 (1,2) - Spacing is a bit wrong
7. 01:47:789 (2) - Finish hitsound at the end?
8. 01:56:478 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ehm... pretty unpredictable and plays awkwardly
9. 02:08:065 (4,5) - Not a big fan of this jump, but I don't see how to fix it
10. 02:13:858 (4,1) - osu!'s spacing system when there's a slowdown is a bit fucked up. In this case, it becomes really confusing. I'd move (1) and its pattern further away from the previous note
11. 02:42:409 (4) - Move to x200 y124 so it doesn't overlap with the previous note?
12. 02:45:099 (3) - I'm pretty sure this isn't allowed, especially in a Hard diff. For a simple fix, ctrl+g this slider.
13. 03:01:030 (1,1) - No need for 2 new combos here
14. 03:07:651 (1) - Maybe use a normal-hitnormal in this spinner?

1. 00:33:705 (3,4,5) - Flow doesn't really make much sense here. I'd stack (4,5), but dunno about you
2. 00:36:188 (3,4) - Spacing between these seems a bit too short... Ctrl+G'ing (3) would solve the problem and flow would be nice as well
3. 00:48:601 (4) - Finish hitsound?
4. 01:44:481 (7) - Move to x104 y212 so they're blanketing?
5. 01:50:895 (3,4) - Not a big fan of the flow here, but dunno how it'd work
6. 02:17:378 (4,1) - why such a big jump? o_o you didn't really do this anywhere else in the diff

Blue Dragon wrote:

[General]

1. Useless stuff, but current BG is 1365x768, might want to fix it for sake of having it right hmm what dimensions should the image be? fixed... i think
2. Set a preview point for all diffs done
3. I'm pretty sure offset is really late.. I'm not a timing expert myself, but 2257 sounds much better for me (don't forget to resnap notes and timing sections) hmm that seems better thanks!

[Hard]

1. 00:07:237 (1,2,3) - Aren't these overlapping too much? k spaced out a bit
2. 00:10:547 (1,2) - This almost-overlap looks pretty ugly to be honest oops i think i forgot to update map after the previous mod, owo
3. 00:49:030 (1,2) - Same as before, these overlaps are just ew ^
4. 00:51:099 (5,1) - Spacing plays pretty much awkward here, consider adding a note at 00:51:720 fixd
5. 01:11:582 (2) - Making this slider's curve like this would improve flow fixd
6. 01:36:616 (1,2) - Spacing is a bit wrong fixd
7. 01:47:789 (2) - Finish hitsound at the end? fixd
8. 01:56:478 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ehm... pretty unpredictable and plays awkwardly changed a little
9. 02:08:065 (4,5) - Not a big fan of this jump, but I don't see how to fix it hmm, how bout now?
10. 02:13:858 (4,1) - osu!'s spacing system when there's a slowdown is a bit fucked up. In this case, it becomes really confusing. I'd move (1) and its pattern further away from the previous note fixd
11. 02:42:409 (4) - Move to x200 y124 so it doesn't overlap with the previous note? fixd
12. 02:45:099 (3) - I'm pretty sure this isn't allowed, especially in a Hard diff. For a simple fix, ctrl+g this slider. fixd, ty for suggestion
13. 03:01:030 (1,1) - No need for 2 new combos here fixd
14. 03:07:651 (1) - Maybe use a normal-hitnormal in this spinner?

done.. i think

[Insane]

1. 00:33:705 (3,4,5) - Flow doesn't really make much sense here. I'd stack (4,5), but dunno about you k did that
2. 00:36:188 (3,4) - Spacing between these seems a bit too short... Ctrl+G'ing (3) would solve the problem and flow would be nice as well k did that
3. 00:48:601 (4) - Finish hitsound? done
4. 01:44:481 (7) - Move to x104 y212 so they're blanketing? ^
5. 01:50:895 (3,4) - Not a big fan of the flow here, but dunno how it'd work changed it up a little
6. 02:17:378 (4,1) - why such a big jump? o_o you didn't really do this anywhere else in the diff

ok moved it down a bit

That's it, good luck!

Kibbleru wrote:

hmm what dimensions should the image be?

Mira-san wrote:

Sorry for the late mod! :<

Also you get a ticket for guessing where my name was based from (actually old IGN).

[Easy]
00:23:775 (3) - This isn't stacked to (4)'s end properly. can u explain? o-o nm got it
00:48:602 (3) - Fix this blanket, if possible. k
01:06:395 (2) - Move this to x:200 y:156 so it creates a smoother flow within the sliders. k
01:53:154 (1) - The position of this slider can cause confusion to other players, probably. Maybe try to put it above 01:51:499 (1) since there's still available space. k

[Normal]
01:21:722 (4) - Move this to y:215 so it's collinear with (3). k
01:36:602 (3) - Is it intended to be not aligned to (2)? If it's not then I suggest to move it to y:80. k
03:06:395 (2) - Not stacked properly to (3). i don't really get what you mean. should i stack (2) and (3)? nm got it

[Hard]
01:11:567 (2) - It seems that you're following vocals and the beat. If you're going to follow the vocals, change this to a 1/1 slider, if not, then keep the current one. i like the current 1
01:22:325 (2) - Fix this blanket. ok
01:58:946 (3,1,2) - Kinda weird how the distance between these three are different. Especially (3) and (1) lol. i c what u mean. ill try to do something about it
02:03:084 (4,5,6) - Make this one similar to this: 00:45:291 (1,2,3) ok

[Insane]
00:22:532 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of pattern is inconsistent. Try making this a trapezoid or something. There are similar inconsistencies within the map as well. k
00:53:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this a perfect pentagon. trying ><
00:56:463 (5) - This one isn't stacked properly. can u explain ><? nm got it
01:20:463 (2) - You could try making some of these into triples. >>suggestion only<< hmm triples won't really work here

[SB suggestions]

From 02:14:670 - 02:27:912: I suggest putting a dark BG when it's on this part, so it emphasizes the slowness.
From 02:27:912 - 02:41:050: I suggest putting a dark BG but LIGHTER from the previous one, this part is like when 'everything is going to be restored ' or something. (I hope you can get my point here lol).

ill test them out, ty
Good luck! Sorry for the late mod.

Autumn wrote:

Hi!
From my queue

[General]
Display epilepsy warning (Song setup-design-misc-toggles)

Easy is fine to me.

[pkmnyab's Normal]
some jumps like 00:56:464 (3) - are bit too far imo. fixd

[Hard]
00:32:257 (3) - Distance: http://puu.sh/6IqRi.jpg fixd
01:08:877 - Add a circle? Stack with 01:09:084 (1) - fixd
01:09:084 (1) - ^ ?
01:57:705 - Clap fixd

[Insane]
00:19:636 - Add a circle? There's a drum sound here. fixd
00:22:532 (1) - Too close to 00:22:119 (6) - move right a little fixd
02:11:774 (3) - Try Ctrl+G to get a better distance. fixd

GL~

Tsumetaku wrote:

awesome DECOOOOO

(　ﾟдﾟ)ノ☆

EDIT:
I wonder whether you seen my in game PMww so i stick it here too

drum for clap~
http://puu.sh/6DeBe.wav

No Dap wrote:

Hi M4M from modding Q~~

Very good song!! I love it <3

[General]
looking good

[Easy]
fixed all the nc and hitsound stuff
AR +1 OD+1
00:08:050 (1) - delete NC
00:08:878 (2) - NC
00:17:981 (5) - NC
00:20:050 (1) - NC
00:20:464 (2) - delete NC
00:22:947 (1) - delete clap
00:23:361 (2) - add clap
00:28:740 (5) - delete NC
00:29:154 (1) - NC
00:29:775 (3) - This sounds more fun im still a bit confused to where to put that at lol

SPOILER

00:46:947 (1) - delete NC
00:48:602 (7) - NC
00:49:430 (1) - NC
00:49:430 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - too many circles all of sudden!? consider substituting sliders k
00:54:809 (5) - delete NC
00:55:223 (1) - NC
01:02:257 (3) - NC
01:12:602 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Too many circles, and ugly flow. k
01:16:740 (2,3) - blanket properly
01:20:878 (3,4) - convert to slider k. i tried but the slider looks a bit weird lol
01:38:257 (6) - NC
01:39:499 (1) - delete NC
01:42:395 (7) - delete NC
01:42:809 (1) - NC
01:43:223 (3,1) blanket
01:47:775 (6) - stack this on 4 and move the rest accordingly.. k
01:55:637 (1,2) - blanket properly
02:01:016 (4) - delete NC
02:01:430 (1) - NC
02:07:223 (5) - NC
02:08:464 (1) - delete NC
02:27:912 (1,2) - blanket
02:29:154 (3,1) - blanket
02:34:947 (1,2) - blanket
02:44:464 (1,2) - blanket
02:46:947 (5,6) - you have stacked notes on easy and hidden notes too. i dont get what u mean here lol but i stacked it better
02:57:706 (1) - move these around so 02:57:706 (1) can stack on 02:55:637 (3) k

[Normal]
fixed everything here except the hidden notes; since osu automatically shifts them over when playing, i think they're fine
HP+1 AR+2 OD+1
00:06:395 (2,3) - blanket properly
00:08:050 (5,1) - why not fill in notes? ill do that later when i feel like it lol xD
00:18:395 (7) - no hidden note
00:22:119 (1) - remove curve, make it like the previous slider
00:29:154 (2,3,4) - unify rhythm like this one 00:32:050 (4,5) 00:36:188 (2,3) ~~ im not exactly sure what u mean here lol ewe
00:31:016 (2,3) - no hidden note
00:34:326 (2,3) - ^
00:53:154 (2) - its up in the sky and looks awkward :3 change 00:51:912 (1) so you can move it to somewhere else
00:55:844 (2,3) - spacing
00:56:671 (4,1) - they overlapped
00:57:498 (5,6) - spacing
00:59:154 (2,3) - spacing
01:08:464 (1,4) - overlapped
01:09:912 (4,1) - overlapped
01:11:567 (1,3,1) - overlapped. Blanket properly
01:12:395 (2,3) - spacing
01:39:912 (1) - delete NC
01:42:395 (7) - NC
01:43:223 (1) - delete NC
01:48:602 (2,3) - spacing
01:50:464 (6,7) - hidden note
01:51:706 (2,1) - fill in notes
01:58:947 (2,3) - spacing
02:06:809 (4,5) - spacing
02:09:499 (4,5) - spacing
02:14:671 (7) - add finish
02:34:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is a heck of a jump for normal diff fixd
02:41:775 (2,3) - spacing
02:43:430 (5,6) - spacing
02:45:085 (2,3) - spacing
02:49:844 (4,1) - blanket
02:51:499 (3,4) - spacing
02:53:982 (1,3) - overlapped
02:54:603 (2,3) - spacing
02:56:878 (5,6) - spacing
02:58:326 (1) - delete NC
02:58:326 (1,2) - spacing
02:59:153 (1) - NC
03:04:326 (1,2) - spacing

Sorry I have to finish up now... got something to do

[Hard]
HP+1 AR+1 k

[Insane]
HP+1 k

Hope my mod helped >~< thanks, it was a big help!

Good map and really good song!! good luck~~

Papcio wrote:

m4m here
[insane]
00:03:084 (3,4,5,6) - What about square? nah i like it how it is now
00:15:498 (5) - Spacinggg wow cant believe i didnt see this o-o
00:23:360 (1,2) - Make it so that 1 looks the part of the other. design changed
00:28:739 (1,2) - Blanket? good idea
00:50:257 (3) - This slider can be reverse of 1 and mirror-edge of 5 XD i dont quite understand :/
00:58:119 (4) - Blanket of 00:59:153 (1) ? i dont see a good way of making this working so no for now

I can't see more, it's perfect ;w; ty :3

[hard]
AR- ill change if more ppl tell me to
OD-
00:05:153 (4) - This slider can be less curve hmm k i agree
00:43:636 (1) - Spin this more kk
01:47:774 (2) - Blank this XD fixed? maybe?
01:58:946 (3) - Ugly :/ i tried to make it fit with 01:58:119 (1) ;-;
02:16:946 (2,3,4) - It isn't triangle nice catch
02:45:912 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's too hard to hard i think its ok tbh

Sorry for short mod, it's too high level of making to mod by me XD np ty for mod~

1. plz control Eazy star rating below 3 or near 3
2. spacing should be same in easy and normal diff. I’ll check it out
3. add source "Rabukarenda" (ラブカレンダー )
4. add "so18140621 Ryosuke "Dr.R" Sakai " in tags

1. plz reduce your SB load and it is very very high(over 5X) after 02:54:395 -

1. ar-1
2. 01:17:568 (3,4) - spcaing
3. 00:12:188 (1,2) - spacing
4. 00:27:912 (4,5) - spacing
5. 00:59:361 (2) - spacing
6. 01:15:085 - add circle? and clap at 01:13:430 (1,2) - slider's tail
7. move break time to 02:14:671 - ( just for perfect )

1. 00:31:637 (3,4) - spacing
2. 00:18:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:430 (1,2,3) - ^ and etc
4. different spacing may make new player confused, keep your distance open as you map easy and normal diff

1. 00:10:532 (1,2) - why not keep the same rhythm as 00:07:222 (1,2,3,4) -
2. 00:33:291 (1,2) - this overlap looks bad
3. 00:27:912 (5) - remove the clap on the tail
4. 00:44:463 - add something here?
5. 00:47:774 - add something here?
6. 01:01:843 - lose a necessary object
7. 01:15:084 - ^
8. 03:07:636 (1) - turn down the spinner volume

1. 00:13:636 (6,1) - too close
2. 00:16:532 (2,4) - ctrl+G
3. 00:22:532 (1,3) - ctrl+G
4. 00:23:153 (4) - keep the same spacing plz, P:1X N:1.1X now
5. 00:29:774 (3,4,5) - ctrl+G
6. 00:40:532 - add something?
7. 01:10:325 (6,1) - ctrl+G make a flow
8. 01:17:774 (4,6) - ctrl+G and you may not put these two so close
9. 02:17:360 (4,1) - this jump a "bit" big 5X and 02:15:705 (4,1) - only 0.83X
10. 02:29:153 (4,5) - too close (it may disorder your map
11. 02:33:084 (3,4) - blanket better
12. 02:37:429 - I suggest put a hit point at long white tick (like this
    
    click

    
13. 02:39:291 (1) - use two circle plz, a slider is kinda confusing (try this
    
    click

    
14. 03:00:601 (8,9,1) - keep the same spacing

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue~
sry for late~

[Normal]

1. 00:31:637 (3,4) - spacing fixed
2. 00:18:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:430 (1,2,3) - ^ and etc
4. different spacing may make new player confused, keep your distance open as you map easy and normal diff

looked over the map and resnapped most objects.

pkmnyab wrote:

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue~
sry for late~

[Normal]

1. 00:31:637 (3,4) - spacing fixed
2. 00:18:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:430 (1,2,3) - ^ and etc
4. different spacing may make new player confused, keep your distance open as you map easy and normal diff

looked over the map and resnapped most objects.

Thanks for the mod!

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue~
sry for late~
[General]

1. plz control Eazy star rating below 3 or near 3 i think its pretty close to 3 .-. not quite sure >< uhg i hate osu's star system
2. spacing should be same in easy and normal diff. I’ll check it out
3. add source "Rabukarenda" (ラブカレンダー ) should only do this if the source made this song famous or came from it
4. add "so18140621 Ryosuke "Dr.R" Sakai " in tags

k
[SB]

1. plz reduce your SB load and it is very very high(over 5X) after 02:54:395 -

explain this a bit more pls? like how and what is a SB load lol Edit: it doesnt get over 5x o-o? Edit Edit: took out SB
[Easy]

1. ar-1 k
2. 01:17:568 (3,4) - spcaing k
3. 00:12:188 (1,2) - spacing k
4. 00:27:912 (4,5) - spacing k
5. 00:59:361 (2) - spacing k
6. 01:15:085 - add circle? and clap at 01:13:430 (1,2) - slider's tail k
7. move break time to 02:14:671 - ( just for perfect )

k
[Normal]

1. 00:31:637 (3,4) - spacing
2. 00:18:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:430 (1,2,3) - ^ and etc
4. different spacing may make new player confused, keep your distance open as you map easy and normal diff

[Hard]

1. 00:10:532 (1,2) - why not keep the same rhythm as 00:07:222 (1,2,3,4) - i like some variety
2. 00:33:291 (1,2) - this overlap looks bad hmm k i tried to fix
3. 00:27:912 (5) - remove the clap on the tail k
4. 00:44:463 - add something here? doesn't fit music
5. 00:47:774 - add something here? k
6. 01:01:843 - lose a necessary object k
7. 01:15:084 - ^ k
8. 03:07:636 (1) - turn down the spinner volume

did i do it right?
[Insane]

1. 00:13:636 (6,1) - too close k
2. 00:16:532 (2,4) - ctrl+G k
3. 00:22:532 (1,3) - ctrl+G k
4. 00:23:153 (4) - keep the same spacing plz, P:1X N:1.1X now k
5. 00:29:774 (3,4,5) - ctrl+G k
6. 00:40:532 - add something? k
7. 01:10:325 (6,1) - ctrl+G make a flow k
8. 01:17:774 (4,6) - ctrl+G and you may not put these two so close k
9. 02:17:360 (4,1) - this jump a "bit" big 5X and 02:15:705 (4,1) - only 0.83X k
10. 02:29:153 (4,5) - too close (it may disorder your map k
11. 02:33:084 (3,4) - blanket better k
12. 02:37:429 - I suggest put a hit point at long white tick (like this k
    
    click

    
13. 02:39:291 (1) - use two circle plz, a slider is kinda confusing (try this i like the slider, fits better with vocals
    
    click

    
14. 03:00:601 (8,9,1) - keep the same spacing

k
that's all, good luck