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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 05 de abril de 2014 at 13:20:38

Artist: Gabriela Vega y Maggie Vera
Title: La Eterna Luz (TV Size)
Source: Shaman King
Tags: newtoniorock8 yoh hao anna opening
BPM: 135
Filesize: 2452kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:

Download: Gabriela Vega y Maggie Vera - La Eterna Luz (TV Size)
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SHAMAN KING <3
Last edited by eldnl on , edited 27 times in total.
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updated, ready for mods!
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add tag : newtoniorock8



cup
AR=OD


salad
AR=OD



00:15:092 (4) - add note

00:15:536 (5) - ^

00:22:203 (8) - ^

00:22:647 (9) - ^

00:29:314 (4) - ^

01:14:203 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - to Image so that its timed properly

01:24:092 (1) - Image ^





Platter

AR=OD


00:04:870 (3) - NC

00:05:981 (1) - remove NC

00:06:647 (3) - NC

00:07:758 (1) - remove NC

00:08:425 (3) - NC

00:16:869 (1) - remove NC

00:17:314 (2) - NC

00:18:203 (1) - remove NC



01:15:092 (1) - remove NC

01:16:869 (1) - ^

01:17:758 (4) - NC

01:18:869 (1) - remove NC

01:19:536 (1) - NC




Rain
AR=OD


00:04:870 (3) - NC

00:05:981 (1) - remove NC

00:06:647 (3) - NC

00:15:425 (1) - remove NC

00:15:758 (2) - NC

00:16:869 (1) - remove NC

00:17:314 (2) - NC

00:38:647 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - what .. / these are just my opinion Image


move

01:02:647 (4) - x432

01:02:869 (5) - x256

01:03:092 (6) - x80

01:03:314 (7) - x256

01:03:758 (2,4,6) - x -4




modding so troll ;w; sorry
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add tag : newtoniorock8 oops



cup
AR=OD ok


Platter

AR=OD I used AR=HP for score purposes


00:04:870 (3) - NC the nc are good as they are!

00:05:981 (1) - remove NC

00:06:647 (3) - NC

00:07:758 (1) - remove NC

00:08:425 (3) - NC

00:16:869 (1) - remove NC

00:17:314 (2) - NC

00:18:203 (1) - remove NC



01:15:092 (1) - remove NC

01:16:869 (1) - ^

01:17:758 (4) - NC

01:18:869 (1) - remove NC

01:19:536 (1) - NC




Rain
AR=OD ok


00:04:870 (3) - NC same as before

00:05:981 (1) - remove NC

00:06:647 (3) - NC

00:15:425 (1) - remove NC

00:15:758 (2) - NC

00:16:869 (1) - remove NC

00:17:314 (2) - NC

00:38:647 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - what .. / these are just my opinion Image I prefer to keep the spins!


move

01:02:647 (4) - x432 yes i like it but this is the only note i'll move

01:02:869 (5) - x256

01:03:092 (6) - x80

01:03:314 (7) - x256

01:03:758 (2,4,6) - x -4




modding so troll ;w; sorry


thank you a lot men!
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salad
AR=OD



00:15:092 (4) - add note erm.. no, im following the vocal here..

00:15:536 (5) - ^

00:22:203 (8) - ^

00:22:647 (9) - ^

00:29:314 (4) - ^

01:14:203 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - to Image so that its timed properly - thanks!

01:24:092 (1) - Image ^

modding so troll ;w; sorry


- Thank you! :3

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Code:
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shaman King.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 41425
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 4870,26203,42203,56425,70647,77758
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:La Eterna Luz (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:La Eterna Luz (TV Size)
Artist:Gabriela Vega y Maggie Vera
ArtistUnicode:Gabriela Vega y Maggie Vera
Creator:eldnl
Version:newtoniorock8's Salad
Source:Shaman King
Tags:newtoniorock8
BeatmapID:335981
BeatmapSetID:130826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Last edited by newtoniorock8 on , edited 3 times in total.
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Modding Time

Rain
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00:16:869 (1) - i think it would be nicer if it become like this http://puu.sh/5VOv7.jpg than just only slider
00:17:758 (1) - Same as above ^
00:21:758 (4,5,6,1) - make it like this http://puu.sh/5VOZp.jpg
00:28:647 (3,1) - for this part , i think it would be better if the spinner start from 00:28:758 so i think it would be easy for reaction to catching the spinners
00:32:202 (3,1) - same as & (but the spinners start from 00:32:314)
00:38:647 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ok , this is the most trolling part & fun part , so (Keep this part 8-) )
00:51:758 (4) - make it like http://puu.sh/5VOv7.jpg
00:52:203 (5) - same as above ^
01:26:869 (1,2,3,4) - , make the ending sharp 8)

Platter
======= =
00:16:869 (1) - make it like this 8) http://puu.sh/5VOv7.jpg
00:17:758 (4) - same as ^
00:27:981 (6) - i think it would be better if this changed into jump pattern
00:31:536 (6) - same as ^

newtoniorock8's Salad
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( I think you should add circle here, because it kinda strange why this part has been blank)
00:55:536 (3) - ^
00:14:647 (3) - ^
00:15:092 (4) - ^
00:22:203 (8) - ^
00:22:647 (9) - ^

Salad
========
00:04:870 (2) and 00:06:647 (2) i think it this slider should be same length, becasue it sounds strange
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ursa wrote:
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Rain
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00:16:869 (1) - i think it would be nicer if it become like this http://puu.sh/5VOv7.jpg than just only slider done
00:17:758 (1) - Same as above ^ done
00:21:758 (4,5,6,1) - make it like this http://puu.sh/5VOZp.jpg I prefer to keep that part
00:28:647 (3,1) - for this part , i think it would be better if the spinner start from 00:28:758 so i think it would be easy for reaction to catching the spinners I don't like how it feels, it's like too fast, it's not a big change so i'll keep it
00:32:202 (3,1) - same as & (but the spinners start from 00:32:314)
00:38:647 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ok , this is the most trolling part & fun part , so (Keep this part 8-) ) yeyeye
00:51:758 (4) - make it like http://puu.sh/5VOv7.jpg na
00:52:203 (5) - same as above ^
01:26:869 (1,2,3,4) - , make the ending sharp 8) dafuq that means

Platter
======= =
00:16:869 (1) - make it like this 8) http://puu.sh/5VOv7.jpg it's harder but ok
00:17:758 (4) - same as ^ it's harder but ok
00:27:981 (6) - i think it would be better if this changed into jump pattern true fact
00:31:536 (6) - same as ^ ^


Salad
========
00:04:870 (2) and 00:06:647 (2) i think it this slider should be same length, becasue it sounds strange done


thank you old men!
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Hi, my first mod ever ^^

Image Cup

00:35:092 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:425 (1) - I think it would be better like this. You Have here nice rhythm.

1
Image


00:47:536 (1) - Ok, just suggestion. Maybe try this:

2
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00:58:203 (3) - Maybe Remove NC

Nice Diff.


Image Salad

00:04:647 (2) - Delete finish.
00:07:981 (2) - Reduce Spacing

3
Image


00:11:092 (1) - Spinner is weird. Should be begins on white line.

4
Image


00:12:203 (1) - Maybe something like this. Only suggestion

5
Image


00:14:647 (3) - Reduce Spacing. Maybe pattern like this

6
Image


00:21:758 (7) - Reduce Spacing

7
Image


01:25:092 - You should add final pattern :p

I think it's too hard for Salad. Anyway good diff.


Image Platter

OD - 8

00:40:758 (2) - Maybe something like this :

8
Image


01:05:314 (1) - Spinner is weird. Should be begins on white line.

9
Image


I love this diff. It's just amazing.


Image Rain

00:38:758 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - :o. I think you should make there one spinner xD

01:05:314 (1) - Spinner is weird. Should be begins on white line.

10
Image


Nice and Hard Diff :)




Mapset is very good. Sorry if my mod was useless


Good Luck !
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Kandai-sa wrote:
Hi, my first mod ever ^^

Image Cup

00:35:092 (1) - Remove NC is not necessary, look carefully at my nc pattern
00:40:425 (1) - I think it would be better like this. You Have here nice rhythm. i did the same in all diffs so no, to keep consistency

1
Image


00:47:536 (1) - Ok, just suggestion. Maybe try this: done

2
Image


00:58:203 (3) - Maybe Remove NC is not necessary, look carefully at my nc pattern

Nice Diff.



Image Platter

OD - 8

00:40:758 (2) - Maybe something like this : as i said before:p

8
Image


01:05:314 (1) - Spinner is weird. Should be begins on white line. hmm yea but the very first fruits in the spin are not catchable anyways, i'll keep it

9
Image


I love this diff. It's just amazing.


Image Rain

00:38:758 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - :o. I think you should make there one spinner xD NEVER

01:05:314 (1) - Spinner is weird. Should be begins on white line. na, to keep consistency with platter

10
Image


Nice and Hard Diff :)




Mapset is very good. Sorry if my mod was useless


Good Luck !


thank you men!
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ursa wrote:
Modding Time

newtoniorock8's Salad
========
( I think you should add circle here, because it kinda strange why this part has been blank) it is not strange. imo. still no change here.
00:55:536 (3) - ^
00:14:647 (3) - ^
00:15:092 (4) - ^
00:22:203 (8) - ^
00:22:647 (9) - ^


Kandai-sa wrote:
Hi, my first mod ever ^^

Image Salad

00:04:647 (2) - Delete finish.
00:07:981 (2) - Reduce Spacing

3
Image


00:11:092 (1) - Spinner is weird. Should be begins on white line. ok ~

4
Image


00:12:203 (1) - Maybe something like this. Only suggestion ok :3

5
Image


00:14:647 (3) - Reduce Spacing. Maybe pattern like this

6
Image


00:21:758 (7) - Reduce Spacing

7
Image


01:25:092 - You should add final pattern :p :D

I think it's too hard for Salad. Anyway good diff.


Mapset is very good. Sorry if my mod was useless


Good Luck !


thanks ~

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As requested here is my mod



General

  • I have a problem with your ar ... Ar4 (the cup) is really horrible to play in ctb (too slow) and the gap between the salad (ar5) and the platter (ar8) is probably too much. This will be more logic if you increase the ar of the and cup and the salad by 1. (ar4=>ar5 and ar5=>ar6) or at least the salad ... Don't forget to fix your od if you change the ar.
  • Add the lyrics in the OP ?
  • Change your combo colour. It's impossible to clearly see a hdash with your red
  • Excepted for the salad all the sliders are really straight with only horizontal, vertical and 45°. Add more curves next time for a better flow or even to complicate the slider tick positions


Cup




Salad

  • Hp+1, 3 is too low for a salad and the cup is also hp3 ...
  • If you don't change the ar of the cup change at least this one ... It's really easier to play with ar6
  • 00:06:203 (2) - Unwanted whistle ?
  • 00:32:647 (4) - Ctrl+g, it's more important to have a better transition with the following (1) than with (3)
  • 00:38:647 (1) - Change this to two notes. This part is important and deserve more notes :s
  • 00:51:092 (1) - This one doesn't follow nothing... If you follow the voice it's should end here 00:51:758 - so fix change this to something more logic.
  • 00:55:758 (1,2,3,4) - O rly, jump, anti-jump, jump closer to hdash in a salad ... Try to swap the x of (1,3) and (2) this should fix your problem here or try to find something more interesting than this but without this insane jump
  • 00:56:425 (4) - Nc it's the begining of your kiai (yep one note)
  • 01:05:314 (1) - Same as 00:51:092 (1) -
  • 01:09:092 (2,1) - Same problem as 00:55:758 - a jump like this + an anti jump isn't a acceptable thing in a salad
  • 01:10:647 (6) - If you follow the voice he should end here 01:11:536 - currently I can't understand what you follow
  • 01:15:758 (3,1,2) - Same as previously, this kind of jump is really limit for this diff (and can also be really frustrating at the "end" of the map). Try to keep at least a constant spacing for your 1/2 between those two 01:14:869 (3,1) - 01:15:758 (3,1) -



Platter




Rain




Hope this will help =)
Good luck, osu need more non-japanese tv size (those one are more fun '-')
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And Hi '-'
As requested here is my mod



General

  • I have a problem with your ar ... Ar4 (the cup) is really horrible to play in ctb (too slow) and the gap between the salad (ar5) and the platter (ar8) is probably too much. This will be more logic if you increase the ar of the and cup and the salad by 1. (ar4=>ar5 and ar5=>ar6) or at least the salad ... Don't forget to fix your od if you change the ar. no one says that it have to be plus 1 on every difficulty, it is not hard to read and it doesn't plays horrible christ!! (just talking about my diffs k)
  • Add the lyrics in the OP ? sounds interesting but i don't get your point, i have many ideas about this
  • Change your combo colour. It's impossible to clearly see a hdash with your red yup
  • Excepted for the salad all the sliders are really straight with only horizontal, vertical and 45°. Add more curves next time for a better flow or even to complicate the slider tick positions leave my style alone beitch, i don't like stupid movements on sliders k


Cup

  • 00:08:425 (1,2) - Curves them ? With your constant spacing of 1* all this part is really tight. I prefer to keep it
  • 00:10:203 (3,1) - Keep at least a 1/1 break in a cup before a spinner. Ok
  • 00:14:647 - and 00:14:758 - those green lines are useless in the cup Ok
  • 00:19:314 (3) - Ctrl+g ? I think it's better if you have a good transition with (4) than with (2) Nop
  • 00:27:092 (3,4) - Move those notes to the right to do something more interesting (even with no need for a dash). For exemple move (3) to x=316 and (4) to x=148 I don't think something interesting is necessary in a cup, I've made this diff for those who haven't played ctb at all, these kind of movement are fine.
  • 00:30:647 (3,4) - ^ But move those notes to the left
  • 00:36:869 (1,2,3,4) - Those transitions are bad. Leans your sliders ? I mean try to to have here a fluid movement. this kind of thing http://puu.sh/67CRp.jpg even if I do that, it's not a fluid movement, so in this way it is easier to read imo
  • 00:40:425 (1,2,3,4) - Please unstack this ... Those notes are strong you can add at least a little movement here. it's really an important part of the song. you're right, is that good that i prefer to listen to the song instead of playing lel i won't change it to be consistent with my other diffs
  • 00:55:536 (3) - Nc this part isn't in your kiai (yep it's just for one note) it is not a reason to break the nc pattern
  • 01:01:758 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:36:869 (1,2,3,4) - nop
  • 01:10:647 (3,1) - Same as 00:10:203 (3,1) - yep
  • 01:23:981 (2,3,1) - Same as 00:36:869 (1,2,3,4) - nop
  • 01:26:869 (4) - 5/4slider ? Plz change this to 2sliders 1/2 ... http://puu.sh/67yCf.jpg



Platter

  • 00:11:092 (4) - Nc ? There is probably too many fruit for this combo without a nc here :s ok
  • 00:16:869 (1) - Ctrl+g for a better flow ok
  • 00:17:758 (4) - ^ ok
  • 00:27:981 (6) - Nc those notes are important and there is big white bar so :s ok
  • 00:36:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern would be really awesome if you increase the space between each 2notes. I mean more than actually nop
  • 00:40:425 (1,2,3,4) - Unstack please :'( Even if you reject this in cup do this at least here... It's a platter :s saaame reason, am i the only one who likes this?
  • 00:55:536 (4) - Same as cup nop
  • 01:14:203 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Give me more spacing for the end of this kiai ... You have a lot of important notes but I can see this in your pattern. :( the jump is in the important note ... and the flow is quite good to me, i'll increase the space between the jumps
  • 01:23:981 (4) - Nc, the plate can be quickly full of fruits with (4) and (5) ok
  • 01:27:425 (3,4) - Unstack, you give a movement here 01:26:869 (1,2,3) - but this one don't follow the movement there are no stacked notes



Rain

  • 00:10:536 (2,3,4) - The anti jump just after a hdash is probably too hard for a rain. Try to reduce the spacing between (3,4) there is no antijump there D:
  • 00:16:869 (1) - and 00:17:758 (4) - Ctrl+g same as platter for a better flow. ok
  • 00:38:647 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - No, seriously wtf is that ? 1/2 spinners and 1/4 notes between them ... It's probably unrankable and totally impossible to sightread ... Also 1/4space between a spinner and a not is heavily not recommended. NO ONE EVER HAS MISSED THERE BEFORE ON THE FIRST PLAY
  • 00:55:536 (4) - same as cup nop
  • 01:27:425 (3,4) - Untack them at least ... there is no reason for a movement there, it will be pointless because of the time between the notes, and it gives a nice feel to me:p

thanks a lot for the mod!!

Hope this will help =)
Good luck, osu need more non-japanese tv size (those one are more fun '-')
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Hey daniel~
Saqué el mapa del foro de Ctb y como es una canción en español quisiera verla ranked :3 y es una de Shamaaaaan Kiiing ♥

General:
  • Tal vez agregar a los tags los nombres de los personajes principales:
    Yoh Hao Asakura Anna Manta Len Tao HoroHoro Lyserg Ryu Fausto Chocolove Amidamaru Bason Tokagero Eliza Morphine Mic Jaguar
    también podría ser: Anime Opening Alma Great Spirits (también los Soldados X pero no sé si llamaran igual en inglés xd)
  • Sería bueno agregar el video :c , si no puedes trataré de buscar uno decente, claro si es que tú gustas (espero encontrar alguno y si no encuentro te lo haré saber)

Cup:

newtoniorock8's Salad:
AR +1
  • 00:36:647 (3) - move it slightly to the right and look great
  • 00:56:203 (3,4) - this jump seemed a bit complicated for this difficulty, I would recommend it to be something a little easier.
  • 01:05:203 - add circle, fits well with the rhythm

Platter:

Rain:
  • Hermosa, simplemente hermosa. No hay nada que decir aquí.

Me gustaron muchísimo todas las diff, no fue un gran mod ya que vi todo muy bien >w<
Espero haberte ayudado! Mucha suerte en el rank Daniel.
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