Damnae wrote:

Hello,

Normal

Looks fine

Azmato's Hard

Edit: the video is missing from this diff Fixed

Insane

00:05:518 (1) - feels to close to 00:05:282 (9) - , and from the previous movements it's expected to be more on the right side. I suggest to ctrl-h + ctrl-g it so it looks like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161361
if you do this ^, you should 00:06:699 (5) - move to x232 y304 (on top of 00:04:101 (5) - ) Good idea

00:07:408 (1) - move to x106 y368 (on top of 00:07:408 (1) - ) instead? OK
00:08:589 (4,5,6) - I can't hear any sound for 5, same thing for the next triples Uhh...Actually I chould hear the guitar here
00:20:400 (5) - would feel better if 5's head was lower (something like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161650) OK

00:42:132 (4,5) - swap their positions? Current one is better imo
00:42:605 (6,7) - ^ and these too ^

00:47:565 (1) - couldn't read that slowdown... might work better if it was reversed? (ctrl-g) I'll consider, this part is pretty hard indeed

00:57:959 (1,2,3) - maybe something that goes a bit more across the screen? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161671 I made this as a parallel flow
00:59:140 - I think you should add a circle here and more the spinner's start 1/4 later (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161679 if you used my previous suggestion) Actually I should add a note at 00:59:376 - ,but the spinner is just too short, I'll consider removing it later

01:10:243 (5) - what about moving it 01:08:589 (2) - on top of this, and moving 01:10:715 (1) - there too, for a left/right/left movement? The jump is a little too far ;w;

01:32:684 (1,2) - would fit the stronger voice better if the spacing was a bit larger between these two You're right, but I arrange the strong part on 01:32:684 (1) - , I think it's not necessary to arrange 2 jumps, but I'll consider later
01:48:510 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - nice, but maybe a bit too many nc, you could group them by two instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161700 I mean, the colour makes it easier to read
01:59:613 - add a circle here and move the spinner 1/4 away? same as 00:59:140 -
02:16:857 (1,2,3,4,1) - that broken heart :p

best avatar Best ever

Zero__wind wrote:

咦 还是觉得很不可思议有人做这歌

Insane
00:14:495 (3) - 感觉CTRL+G会让flow更好些 √ 这梗我纠结了很久
00:21:581 (1) - 这种没vocal的地方建议还是用1/2 slider打拍子 因为伴奏还是很规律的，00:22:526 (3) - 这个3/4我觉得就比较合适 OK 好
00:28:668 (4) - 这不应该叠在和红锚点一样的位置 (316,120)吗？Fixed
00:32:684 (5) - 这肯定漏了NC。 还有就是这个如果放到右上角的话flow应该会舒服一些如下图，当然你也可以换个滑条形状，我只是简单把它转了个角度示意一下 Added，调整了排列

SPOILER

00:58:904 (3) - 扔到和前面的2中心对称的位置怎样 用来和spinner衔接 好
01:03:156 (1) - 头上finish美丽 加丽
01:17:802 (3) - 最近这种slider有风险 祝你好运 谢提醒 有问题就换减速
01:47:565 (9) - 感觉这个3/4不太舒服 一个是因为后面那个是减速滑条 还离那么远 还有就是回碰到上一个slider感觉不太好看 建议还是用1/2 反正前面那个"acting"也不是什么长音 好
02:03:628 (1) - 头上的finish也美丽 有丽
02:04:573 (3,1) - 或许可以让它们不挨上？ 调整一下前面的东西的位置 嘛 也不是什么大事儿 分开了
02:16:857 (1,2,3,4) - 建议头上只用clap 这两个鼓一起打听起来很奇怪 至少我从打鼓的角度讲这个真的很奇怪…… OK

Normal
00:32:684 (3) - 建议NC 因为这里应该算是进入了一个新段落 √
01:03:156 (1) - 头上的finish√
01:33:392 (3) - ^ 而且我还是觉得这里应该起新NC 你看要不要把前面的NC调整一下，让01:32:447 (1,2) - 它们两个归到前一组里去已调整
01:45:439 (2,3,4) - 连续掉了好几个鼓音感觉还是有点难受 再考虑下节奏吧 这个完全就是跟的vocal（A-O-A） 我觉得还行
01:48:274 - 无用绿线 Removed
02:11:187 (1) - 从这个地方开始我建议全都用clap whistle都去掉 感觉比较合曲 强调效果也好 好主意
02:16:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成一个spinner 毕竟是最低难度 我再考虑考虑，这里其实是属于那种戛然而止而不是渐出效果，转盘有点软

That's all
Good luck
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Damnae wrote:

Azmato's Hard

00:48:038 (1,1,1,1,1) - this and the other similar parts are way too simple imo. you should reuse what you made for the second kiai here instead. Sure!
01:06:699 (1) - I think it would be better if you kept going with these 01:05:754 (6) - instead of putting a spinner here. nope..
01:10:715 (6) - would feel better around x376 y132 ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161735 ) nope..
01:41:896 (5) - ctrl-g? nope..
02:02:211 - you should add a circle here Sure!
02:07:172 (1) - as in the previous kiai I think you should map this instead of having a spinner. Ok but I think It already have spinner

Zero__wind wrote:

Azmato's Hard
plz use AR7 for this diff, as the song is slow and diff is quite easy, and to make a difference between the Insane
I would also recommend OD6, but this is optional
00:20:400 (5,6) - this spacing is really unintuitive, plz better use a ordinary spacing for it
00:27:959 (1) - I think you kinda messed up the NCs here. I would suggest that you move this NC to 00:29:140 (3) - and move 00:31:739 (1) - 's NC to 00:32:920 (4) - , and your NCs would be more consistent
00:31:739 (1) - better use a 1/2 slider here, imo the "hurt" is not a long vocal sound at this point
00:32:920 (4) - I think you need a finish on its head to match with the music
00:33:865 (6) - missing whistle on head
00:37:172 (4) - missing whistle at end
00:43:550 (1,2) - recommended to exchange NC for consistency
00:59:140 (1) - whistle for ite end?
01:03:156 (1) - missing finish on head
01:16:384 - useless green lines should be removed
01:58:904 (2) - missing whistle
02:17:802 (4) - missing whistle at end

All Applied! Thanks

Cleto wrote:

00:11:187 (3,4) - 앞 슬라이더 패턴처럼 곡선으로 바꿔주시는게..? 보기 안좋아요 곡선은 아니지만 일부 적용
00:12:605 (7,8) - 00:12:132 (5,6) - 이거랑 모양 맞춰주세요. 이미 맞춰져있는듯...?
00:37:880 (5,6,7) - 노래랑 박자가 ... 안맞는거같기도 하고 X
01:04:809 (4) - Ctrl + G O
01:20:872 (1) - 여기에 뉴콤 지우고 01:22:526 (4) - 여기에 추가 O
01:24:652 (1) - 스핀 대신에 노트를 넣어도 괜찮을거 같습니다 X
01:52:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 하드에 이런 패턴 잇어도 되는건가영 'ㅅ' ..?네 아마 괜찮을 겁니다. 겟난이라..한번더 지적오면 바꿀게요.