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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sabato 31 ottobre 2015 at 11:37:51

Artist: supercell
Title: Hero
Tags: ryo nagi Today Is A Beautiful Day Aoharu
BPM: 177
Filesize: 8230kb
Play Time: 04:50
Difficulties Available:
  • Easy (1,35 stars, 208 notes)
  • Hard (3,32 stars, 542 notes)
  • Insane (5,76 stars, 1032 notes)
  • Normal (2,05 stars, 318 notes)

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(????)? My 3? map for rank :3 enjoy

- (24/11/13) : Changed name of song and others metadata [REDOWNLOAD]
- (20/11/13) : Changed audio bitrate 193 -> 192 [REDOWNLOAD]
- (17/11/13) : Timing fixed [NO REDOWNLOAD]
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Timing check


Found the timing request via the help thread so, here you go!

I found your offset to be off (late) by 4ms with this as the result -
  • BPM: 177 (correct)
  • Offset: 607
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Timing check


Found the timing request via the help thread so, here you go!

I found your offset to be off (late) by 4ms with this as the result -
  • BPM: 177 (correct)
  • Offset: 607



Thanks :D
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Hi, here from my modding queue


General

I think you should move your preview point to somewhere with more action like around 02:16:176.
This is what AI Mod says: http://puu.sh/5nxDI.png. You should get that fixed.


Normal

01:47:294 (2) - You have a note on a blue tick. I'm pretty sure this was just an accident though. If it was on purpose then I'd say it sounds better on the white tick anyways.
03:57:848 (4) - Possible NC?



Hard

01:19:764 (2) - Blanket better?
02:02:624 - 02:04:826 - Maybe add more variety to your sliders like you did at 00:45:316.


Insane

Either I suck or these jumps are extremely hard. :3 (An example of these jumps would be at 00:42:640)

00:32:979 (1,2) - I think it'd look/play better if you lowered the DS on these.
01:02:640 (1,2,3,4) - Should probably lower the DS on these too.
01:38:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This patterns actually pretty annoying/not fun to play. That's just my opinion though, do what you want with it.
02:41:923 - Hitsounds are starting to sound weird from here. I'm not an expert at hitsounding though so this is just my crappy opinion.
04:32:234 (2,3) - Space this out a little.

Hopefully I helped you out at least a little. Tell me what you changed/didn't change so I can improve as a modder so next time you won't get this crappy mod!
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Hi, here from my modding queue


General

I think you should move your preview point to somewhere with more action like around 02:16:176. I prefer my preview
This is what AI Mod says: http://puu.sh/5nxDI.png. You should get that fixed. Ok changed bitrate


Normal

01:47:294 (2) - You have a note on a blue tick. I'm pretty sure this was just an accident though. If it was on purpose then I'd say it sounds better on the white tick anyways. Fixed
03:57:848 (4) - Possible NC? i think not



Hard

01:19:764 (2) - Blanket better? Ok
02:02:624 - 02:04:826 - Maybe add more variety to your sliders like you did at 00:45:316. No


Insane

Either I suck or these jumps are extremely hard. :3 (An example of these jumps would be at 00:42:640)

^ I want make hard jump, but i need to check some spacing and pattern

00:32:979 (1,2) - I think it'd look/play better if you lowered the DS on these. Stacked
01:02:640 (1,2,3,4) - Should probably lower the DS on these too. Done
01:38:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This patterns actually pretty annoying/not fun to play. That's just my opinion though, do what you want with it.Changed
02:41:923 - Hitsounds are starting to sound weird from here. I'm not an expert at hitsounding though so this is just my crappy opinion. I think is correct
04:32:234 (2,3) - Space this out a little. Stacked

Hopefully I helped you out at least a little. Tell me what you changed/didn't change so I can improve as a modder so next time you won't get this crappy mod!


Thanks ^^
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Hello :3
from M4M :3
the map is too long D: lets do this XD


Insane
00:29:081 (1,2) - a little overlap here,doesnt look good to me, maybe you can move it 1 grid, dont forget to curve a little so the slider wont be off the screen
00:34:166 (5,8) - stack properly
00:45:013 (7,8) - the 2 notes here is a bit messy, maybe you can make it more symmetrical and make the spacing consistent to the previous note
00:45:013 (7) - 328 || 104 ..00:45:183 (8) - 184 || 144
00:56:030 (1,3,4,5) - maybe you can increase the stream spacing a little bit, so the slider dont overlap
01:05:352 (8,1) - make it something like this, so its look like a blanket
00:57:556 (1) - this slider is too high and it touches the HP bar, lower it a bit
01:09:764 (1) - same as here
01:36:883 (1) - and here
01:43:653 (5,1) - blanket?
01:43:653 (5,2) - ^?
02:40:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this, when i played it for the 1st time, i was surprised, i cant read it well so i spammed it LOL, anyway, you can scatter the notes so its more readable
03:13:769 (5,6,7,8) - same as here
03:35:790 (5) - blanket
03:36:298 (7) - ^
03:42:735 (4) - this one is too far unlike the others
04:10:044 (1,2) - make this a repeat slider instead, well its like its pointing in 04:10:552 (3) -
04:10:722 (4,5) - this too, and its like pointing on 04:11:230 (6) -
04:16:650 (4,5) - overlapped ,move 04:17:159 (5) - a bit
04:47:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - most hated pattern, the square of doom LOL, better to change this, or they will be pissed off LOL
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nicely done with the insane :)
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i checked all the diffs, i cant see any errors(its not a big deal anyway lol) in all diff D:, so sorry if i just modded insane, dont KD if useless
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Good Luck :D
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-Asagi wrote:
Hello :3
from M4M :3
the map is too long D: lets do this XD :D


Insane
00:29:081 (1,2) - a little overlap here,doesnt look good to me, maybe you can move it 1 grid, dont forget to curve a little so the slider wont be off the screen Fixed :D
00:34:166 (5,8) - stack properly Ok
00:45:013 (7,8) - the 2 notes here is a bit messy, maybe you can make it more symmetrical and make the spacing consistent to the previous note
00:45:013 (7) - 328 || 104 ..00:45:183 (8) - 184 || 144 Fixed in other way
00:56:030 (1,3,4,5) - maybe you can increase the stream spacing a little bit, so the slider dont overlap Ok
01:05:352 (8,1) - make it something like this, so its look like a blanket Good think
00:57:556 (1) - this slider is too high and it touches the HP bar, lower it a bit Ok
01:09:764 (1) - same as here Ok
01:36:883 (1) - and here Ok
01:43:653 (5,1) - blanket? Done
01:43:653 (5,2) - ^? Done
02:40:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this, when i played it for the 1st time, i was surprised, i cant read it well so i spammed it LOL, anyway, you can scatter the notes so its more readable I think it's readable, but i dont find other pattern to use
03:13:769 (5,6,7,8) - same as here Same
03:35:790 (5) - blanket Done
03:36:298 (7) - ^ Done
03:42:735 (4) - this one is too far unlike the others Fixed
04:10:044 (1,2) - make this a repeat slider instead, well its like its pointing in 04:10:552 (3) - Done
04:10:722 (4,5) - this too, and its like pointing on 04:11:230 (6) - Ok
04:16:650 (4,5) - overlapped ,move 04:17:159 (5) - a bit Done
04:47:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - most hated pattern, the square of doom LOL, better to change this, or they will be pissed off LOL I maked it for rage!
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nicely done with the insane :)
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i checked all the diffs, i cant see any errors(its not a big deal anyway lol) in all diff D:, so sorry if i just modded insane, dont KD if useless
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Good Luck :D


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From my queue~
Thanks for M4M!

General
  • Title: "ヒーロー"
  • Tags suggetion
    "ryo"
    "nagi"
    "Today Is A Beautiful Day"
    "Aoharu"
  • Kiai-Time suggetion
    02:37:858~02:48:699- add Kiai-Time in common with previous part
    03:15:801~03:42:942- kiai-time is unnecessary, imo
  • I don't recommend to use "soft-slidertick.wav" instead of "soft-hitclap.wav". it is hard to adjust, imo

Easy

Normal

Hard

Insane

~Good Luck~
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RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
Thanks for M4M!

General
  • Title: "ヒーロー"
  • Tags suggetion
    "ryo"
    "nagi"
    "Today Is A Beautiful Day"
    "Aoharu"
    Ok
  • Kiai-Time suggetion
    02:37:858~02:48:699- add Kiai-Time in common with previous part No
    03:15:801~03:42:942- kiai-time is unnecessary, imo No
  • I don't recommend to use "soft-slidertick.wav" instead of "soft-hitclap.wav". it is hard to adjust, imo Why?

Easy
Ok

Normal

Hard

Insane

~Good Luck~


Thanks ^^
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oh,sorry...it was very late.

Easy
i suggest you used grid 4,it'll be more neat.
and i think you should regular your distance like 0.8 ( so...like 01:00:268 (4,5),it's really not easy to play for beginner)
00:23:657 (2) - hmm,i think jump is not allowed in easy..
00:30:437 (3) - ^
00:33:149 (1,2) - ^ i really don't want to catch this problem,but this is necessary :<
00:36:539 (3,4) - this rhythm :> :
Image

02:21:257 - add a circle here
02:31:760 (1) - maybe you lost a clap here


Normal
00:57:556 (1,2,3) - consider to change to fit background's rhythm
02:36:164 (2,3) - blanket better

i can't find more problem,but still have some jump doubt...


Hard
01:51:783 (1) - try this may be more neat :
Image

04:03:268 (1,2) - uhh..why these slider bonding together :<


Insane
haha,so sorry,i can't find any problem,this Diff is very nice in my mind :3



that all,this is a good song
Good Luck~~
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bigfrog wrote:
oh,sorry...it was very late.

Easy
i suggest you used grid 4,it'll be more neat.
and i think you should regular your distance like 0.8 ( so...like 01:00:268 (4,5),it's really not easy to play for beginner)
00:23:657 (2) - hmm,i think jump is not allowed in easy.. No
00:30:437 (3) - ^ No
00:33:149 (1,2) - ^ i really don't want to catch this problem,but this is necessary :< No
00:36:539 (3,4) - this rhythm :> : Oh i like this
Image

02:21:257 - add a circle here Ok
02:31:760 (1) - maybe you lost a clap here Ok


Normal
00:57:556 (1,2,3) - consider to change to fit background's rhythm I think is good
02:36:164 (2,3) - blanket betterDone

i can't find more problem,but still have some jump doubt...


Hard
01:51:783 (1) - try this may be more neat : Wrong image? ò.o
Image

04:03:268 (1,2) - uhh..why these slider bonding together :< Fixed blanket


Insane
haha,so sorry,i can't find any problem,this Diff is very nice in my mind :3 No problem ^^



that all,this is a good song
Good Luck~~


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Ciao! finalmente posso rimediare quel vecchio M4M >.< scusa per il grande ritardo! ma ora ho finalmente finito gli esami, quindi mi sono precipitato a moddare :)

EASY

01:02:979 (1) - fai meglio il blancket con 01:01:623 (5) -
01:16:544 (1,1) - lo slider è troppo vicino alla fine dello spinner, prova a far finire lo spinner a 01:19:256 - e dar iniziare lo slider senza reverse a 01:19:764 - così ci sarà un piccolo stacco di tempo tra i due, che è meglio per una easy.
01:56:187 (4,5,6,1,2) - prova qui a distanziare maggiormente 01:56:187 (4,5,6) - magari in questo modo:
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nota che ho anche invertito 01:57:204 (1,2) - così che viene anche con più fluidità.
02:00:930 - dovresti aggiungere una nota qui, visto che fino a poco fa hai seguito la musica invece che il testo.
02:38:535 (1) - fai iniziare questo slider a 02:38:197 - e fallo finire a 02:39:213 -
03:13:091 (1,1) - stesso problema di prima con lo spinner e lo slider segnuente.
03:37:484 (1) - sicuro che questo spinner debba finire 03:42:904 - invece che 03:42:942 - ?
04:11:399 (1) - perchè la fine di questo slider è così silenziosa? sarebbe meglio aumentare un po' il volume o non sembrerà di colpirlo.
04:22:240 (5,6,1) - la posizione di questi sembra alquanto random, e non sono sicuro neanche dello spacing, meglio cambiarli...

NORMAL

forse la slider velocity è troppo alta per una normal... ma forse va bene anche lasciarla così (so che è una pezza cambiarla specialmente su una map così lunga >.<)
00:18:234 (5) - 4 repeat? meglio 3 ed aggiungere una nota alla fine.
01:20:273 (2) - muovilo un paio di grid in basso per renderlo simmetrico allo slider precedente
01:50:428 (6) - stesso problema di prima con i repeat
01:55:849 (3) - ^
02:09:422 (3) - sbaglio o questa nota non è... "snapped" (come si dice in ita O.o) XD

HARD

01:01:284 - aggiungi una nota qui? lo sento un po' vuoto questo pezzo sennò
01:51:614 (8) - questa invece eliminala, secondo me il ritmo così ha più consistenza
01:54:494 - qua invece ci va una nota XD
02:04:318 (2) - ctrl+j?
02:04:657 (3) - ^
02:46:497 (2,3,4) - prova questo ritmo qua:
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03:07:332 - qua ci va una nota
03:37:484 (1) - stesso problema su questo spinner come nelle altre diff.

INSANE

01:47:040 (6) - forma bruttina...
02:05:504 (2,3,4) - queste tre note si dovrebbero sentire di più, alza un po' il volume
02:17:361 (4) - cancella questo slider e mettici al suo posto una nota a 02:17:361 - e uno slider della stessa lunghezza a 02:17:531 - anche per mantenere la consistenza con la pattern precedente (ah, ovviamente cancella 02:17:870 (5) - e rimpiazzalo con una nota a 02:18:039 - )
03:14:446 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - posizionali in modo da creare una curva ben fatta

oook, è tutto per ora! buona fortuna con questa map! :)
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luxoDeh wrote:
Ciao! finalmente posso rimediare quel vecchio M4M >.< scusa per il grande ritardo! ma ora ho finalmente finito gli esami, quindi mi sono precipitato a moddare :)

EASY

01:02:979 (1) - fai meglio il blancket con 01:01:623 (5) -
01:16:544 (1,1) - lo slider è troppo vicino alla fine dello spinner, prova a far finire lo spinner a 01:19:256 - e dar iniziare lo slider senza reverse a 01:19:764 - così ci sarà un piccolo stacco di tempo tra i due, che è meglio per una easy.
01:56:187 (4,5,6,1,2) - prova qui a distanziare maggiormente 01:56:187 (4,5,6) - magari in questo modo:
collapsed text
Image
nota che ho anche invertito 01:57:204 (1,2) - così che viene anche con più fluidità.
02:00:930 - dovresti aggiungere una nota qui, visto che fino a poco fa hai seguito la musica invece che il testo.
02:38:535 (1) - fai iniziare questo slider a 02:38:197 - e fallo finire a 02:39:213 -
03:13:091 (1,1) - stesso problema di prima con lo spinner e lo slider segnuente. Non posso quà
03:37:484 (1) - sicuro che questo spinner debba finire 03:42:904 - invece che 03:42:942 - ? No ho controllato bene
04:11:399 (1) - perchè la fine di questo slider è così silenziosa? sarebbe meglio aumentare un po' il volume o non sembrerà di colpirlo. Fatto apposta per dare un effetto particolare
04:22:240 (5,6,1) - la posizione di questi sembra alquanto random, e non sono sicuro neanche dello spacing, meglio cambiarli...

NORMAL

forse la slider velocity è troppo alta per una normal... ma forse va bene anche lasciarla così (so che è una pezza cambiarla specialmente su una map così lunga >.<)
00:18:234 (5) - 4 repeat? meglio 3 ed aggiungere una nota alla fine.
01:20:273 (2) - muovilo un paio di grid in basso per renderlo simmetrico allo slider precedente
01:50:428 (6) - stesso problema di prima con i repeat Quà è meglio di no
01:55:849 (3) - ^ ^
02:09:422 (3) - sbaglio o questa nota non è... "snapped" (come si dice in ita O.o) XD

HARD

01:01:284 - aggiungi una nota qui? lo sento un po' vuoto questo pezzo sennò No
01:51:614 (8) - questa invece eliminala, secondo me il ritmo così ha più consistenza
01:54:494 - qua invece ci va una nota XD
02:04:318 (2) - ctrl+j?
02:04:657 (3) - ^
02:46:497 (2,3,4) - prova questo ritmo qua:
collapsed text
Image

03:07:332 - qua ci va una nota No
03:37:484 (1) - stesso problema su questo spinner come nelle altre diff. Già scritto

INSANE

01:47:040 (6) - forma bruttina... A me piace
02:05:504 (2,3,4) - queste tre note si dovrebbero sentire di più, alza un po' il volume
02:17:361 (4) - cancella questo slider e mettici al suo posto una nota a 02:17:361 - e uno slider della stessa lunghezza a 02:17:531 - anche per mantenere la consistenza con la pattern precedente (ah, ovviamente cancella 02:17:870 (5) - e rimpiazzalo con una nota a 02:18:039 - ) Non mi piace
03:14:446 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - posizionali in modo da creare una curva ben fatta

oook, è tutto per ora! buona fortuna con questa map! :)


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After many requests, I thought:
Ok this map need rank, i'll try to rank it ^^
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