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Kalafina - Oblivious

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Melt
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Melt
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年11月26日 星期二 at 22:20:25

Artist: Kalafina
Title: Oblivious
Source: Kara no Kyoukai
Tags: ufotable ANIPLEX Ryougi_Shiki shiki tsukihime Evil_Twilight Wakana Keiko Seventh Heaven type moon
BPM: 125
Filesize: 10794kb
Play Time: 04:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. G's Normal (2.15 stars, 221 notes)
  2. Hard (4.36 stars, 407 notes)
  3. Oblivious (4.76 stars, 500 notes)
Download: Kalafina - Oblivious
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Oblivious
—————— 俯瞰风景 ——————

Normal By Evil_Twilight - done
Hard By me - done
Insane By me - done

SPOILER
Last edited by Melt , edited 35 times in total.
Evil_Twilight
587 posts
Joined July 2010
Evil_Twilight
o3o
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib
:3
buhei
567 posts
Joined February 2012
buhei
妹儿特又开神图
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
怀疑会被全部ignore

哇妹儿贴音效包好好 好想盗几个;w;

[Hard]

00:54:873 (2) - 试试ctrl+g

01:35:673 (6,7) - 交换下试试

02:20:313 (3) - 感觉可以和1一样的fin

02:35:673 (1) - 感觉音乐挺激昂的 nc不用这样颜色的combo color了吧？ 03:05:433 (1) - 然后从这里再开始用白黑色

03:56:793 (3) - 感觉可以ctrl+g

01:42:153 (5,6) - 跟上面一样1.5x吧

01:48:153 (7) - 感觉这里的SV可以更慢一点拖拽感更强一点w

03:34:233 (2) - fin

最后一段kiai感觉不够激情 建议fin用多一点 然后音量大一点w

GL~

我为这悲
_AI
225 posts
Joined February 2013
_AI
GD accepted ? :D
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

_AI wrote:

GD accepted ? :D
sorry, the mapset is full :(
- Jelly -
30 posts
Joined April 2013
- Jelly -
[Insane]

00:38:553 (6,7,8) - 放在 00:37:113 (4) - 的位置感觉更流畅
00:48:873 (7) - 位置略奇怪 ，向下移动一点试试？
00:52:473 (5) - 微调下从00:52:953 开始弯曲
01:02:553 (1) - 1.6x感觉快了点
01:42:633 (7) - 下移一点
01:51:513 (2,3,4,5) - 3 4交换位置
03:29:673 (3,4) - 会当成2连吧 - -
03:34:953 (3,4,5,6) - 间距控制有些随意

音效感觉不能多说;w;

我其实是来建（tou）议（xue）的
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello o3o random mod!

[G's Normal]
  1. I suggest raising the slider velocity up a bit, since your sliders look so small and looks tightly placed together whenever they're 1/4 apart.
00:16:473 (1) - Try adding a finish or whistle on the head?
00:51:033 (4) - NC
00:58:233 (4) - ^
01:02:553 (1) - Add finish on the head?
01:37:113 (1,2) - Ugly overlap.
01:58:233 (4,5) - ^
03:54:873 (3,4) - ^
04:09:273 (1,2) - Try to move them apart?

Looks pretty good :)

[Hard]
01:41:913 (5,6) - ? Try to adjust the spacing so it's the same as 01:41:673 (4,5) -
01:47:673 (6) - Add finish on the head.
02:46:233 (2,1) - Move father apart please.

Aww who am I kidding, this looks perfect! ^^

[Oblivious]
01:07:593 (7,8) - Dat spacing O^O
01:11:673 (5,6) - hmm, can you try to move 5 above the slider instead of on it?
02:19:833 (2,4,2,4,2,4,2) - Stack properly?
03:30:153 (5,6) - Move 5 off of the slider?

Wow, this map looks too good! Hope it gets ranked soon! :D *Throws a kudos*
Hope this helps~!
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt
Awaken
怀疑会被全部ignore

哇妹儿贴音效包好好 好想盗几个;w;

[Hard]

00:54:873 (2) - 试试ctrl+g

01:35:673 (6,7) - 交换下试试 感觉不需要那么远0.0

02:20:313 (3) - 感觉可以和1一样的fin

02:35:673 (1) - 感觉音乐挺激昂的 nc不用这样颜色的combo color了吧？ 03:05:433 (1) - 然后从这里再开始用白黑色 增加了红和粉的比例

03:56:793 (3) - 感觉可以ctrl+g

01:42:153 (5,6) - 跟上面一样1.5x吧 为了造型就牺牲掉了orz

01:48:153 (7) - 感觉这里的SV可以更慢一点拖拽感更强一点w fixed

03:34:233 (2) - fin 加上了一个鼓的fin

最后一段kiai感觉不够激情 建议fin用多一点 然后音量大一点w 好主意

GL~

我为这悲

Jelly
[Insane]

00:38:553 (6,7,8) - 放在 00:37:113 (4) - 的位置感觉更流畅 其实感觉两种都不错，不过为了排列就没改:3
00:48:873 (7) - 位置略奇怪 ，向下移动一点试试？fixed
00:52:473 (5) - 微调下从00:52:953 开始弯曲 good idea!
01:02:553 (1) - 1.6x感觉快了点 因为要跟前面的形成一个落差
01:42:633 (7) - 下移一点 fixed
01:51:513 (2,3,4,5) - 3 4交换位置
03:29:673 (3,4) - 会当成2连吧 - - 其实我感觉这个还行啊，再有人提就改掉
03:34:953 (3,4,5,6) - 间距控制有些随意

音效感觉不能多说;w;

我其实是来建（tou）议（xue）的

10crystalmask01
Ello o3o random mod!

[G's Normal]
  1. I suggest raising the slider velocity up a bit, since your sliders look so small and looks tightly placed together whenever they're 1/4 apart.
00:16:473 (1) - Try adding a finish or whistle on the head?
00:51:033 (4) - NC
00:58:233 (4) - ^
01:02:553 (1) - Add finish on the head?
01:37:113 (1,2) - Ugly overlap.
01:58:233 (4,5) - ^
03:54:873 (3,4) - ^
04:09:273 (1,2) - Try to move them apart?

Looks pretty good :)

[Hard]
01:41:913 (5,6) - ? Try to adjust the spacing so it's the same as 01:41:673 (4,5) - i think its may better to me to increase the distance since the vocal changed here =P
01:47:673 (6) - Add finish on the head.
02:46:233 (2,1) - Move father apart please. fixed

Aww who am I kidding, this looks perfect! ^^

[Oblivious]
01:07:593 (7,8) - Dat spacing O^O a little jump here O^O
01:11:673 (5,6) - hmm, can you try to move 5 above the slider instead of on it?
02:19:833 (2,4,2,4,2,4,2) - Stack properly?changed a little
03:30:153 (5,6) - Move 5 off of the slider?

Wow, this map looks too good! Hope it gets ranked soon! :D *Throws a kudos* thanks a lot :3
Hope this helps~!

Thanks for your modding!
bokito
76 posts
Joined July 2010
bokito
[Obivious]
00:41:193 (4) -
00:47:913 (3,4,5,6,7) - 排成个星状？
00:56:793 (6,7,8,9) - 这句个我觉得距离不适当 另外00:57:753 (10) - 建议不要和00:57:273 (8) - overlap
01:41:673 (3,4,5,6) - 这几个搞个菱形?
01:42:633 (1) - nc
01:48:153 (7) - ctrl+g
01:49:113 (2,3,4,5,6) - 搞个星星形状？
01:56:313 (2) - add finish 顺便在这里弄个喷泉效果
03:32:313 (1) - nc
00:15:993 (5) - x160 y288
01:25:593 (1) - x320 y334
01:36:633 (1,3) - 这两个直线对齐
[hard]
00:15:993 (5) - x160 y288
01:25:593 (1) - x320 y334
01:36:633 (1,3) - 这两个直线对齐
01:38:553 (5,6) -
[Normal]
- - - - - - -
good luck
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udongein
50 posts
Joined March 2012
udongein
how to 摸？

[General]
既然加了SB是不是可以放瞎眼警告？

[Oblivious]
00:04:953 (5,1) - swap NC?
00:51:753 (4,5) - 老实说不太好看._.可能4和5隔得太远？
01:00:153 (4) - 好像太长了= =尝试下多弯几次？比如
SPOILER
01:04:233 (5) - 角度大点可能更好看
04:06:633 (4) - 没包好
音效无能为力orz

[Hard]
00:51:753 (4) - 位置太上，碰到血条了
01:02:553 (1) - ^

[Normal]
AImod里有几个distance snap问题
01:17:913 (5) - kiai NC
02:03:993 (5) - ^
01:48:633 (1) - 为啥这里有个clap前面01:02:553 (1) - 没有。。
03:57:273 (5) - NC
FoolB
53 posts
Joined June 2011
FoolB
[Oblivious]
■ 00:19:113 (5,6) - 这里5和6叠起来感觉不够爽
可以这样
不过blanket就美丽了
■ 01:55:833 (1) - 这里和前面那个滑条靠太近啦
这样试试？
其实这图我画得不咋地
■ 03:04:713 (6,7,1) - 这里嘛...也是俩滑条靠得近
大家好我是“可以这样”君
6我叠在了3那里
■ 03:07:353 (6,7,8) - 似乎靠得有些近
■ 03:39:033 (6,7) - 这里做个blanket？

[Hard]
■ 04:11:673 (8,9,10) - 这里Ctrl+G？

[G's Normal]
■ 00:39:513 (1,2,3) - 滑条弧度太大了，没包住(其实好多是这样，比如02:48:153 (3,4) - )
■ 04:09:753 (2) - 这个滑条不如左移一点？干脆多遮一些


没了orz，我太弱
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

bokito wrote:

[Obivious]
00:41:193 (4) -
00:47:913 (3,4,5,6,7) - 排成个星状？还是原来的摆法 稍微修改了一下位置
00:56:793 (6,7,8,9) - 这句个我觉得距离不适当 另外00:57:753 (10) - 建议不要和00:57:273 (8) - overlap 找不到地方放了orz
01:41:673 (3,4,5,6) - 这几个搞个菱形? 往左摆了一点
01:42:633 (1) - nc 感觉没必要
01:48:153 (7) - ctrl+g
01:49:113 (2,3,4,5,6) - 搞个星星形状？根据vocal 01:49:593(4,5,6,7)才应该是跳跃，说以1,2,3的ds是比较小的
01:56:313 (2) - add finish 顺便在这里弄个喷泉效果
03:32:313 (1) - nc
00:15:993 (5) - x160 y288？
01:25:593 (1) - x320 y334？ 这两个地方都放不过去啊o.o
01:36:633 (1,3) - 这两个直线对齐 fixed
[hard]
00:15:993 (5) - x160 y288 another fixed
01:25:593 (1) - x320 y334 感觉原来这个还行 稍微动了一点
01:36:633 (1,3) - 这两个直线对齐
01:38:553 (5,6) - 原来这个还行0.0
[Normal]
- - - - - - -
good luck
thanks for modding
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

epocsodielaK wrote:

how to 摸？

[General]
既然加了SB是不是可以放瞎眼警告？其实我感觉比nightcore什么的好多了，再有人提就加0.0

[Oblivious]
00:04:953 (5,1) - swap NC? 感觉没必要
00:51:753 (4,5) - 老实说不太好看._.可能4和5隔得太远？修正了一点距离
01:00:153 (4) - 好像太长了= =尝试下多弯几次？比如 拉了半个小时还是觉得我用不来红点orz
SPOILER
01:04:233 (5) - 角度大点可能更好看 好
04:06:633 (4) - 没包好 fixed
音效无能为力orz

[Hard]
00:51:753 (4) - 位置太上，碰到血条了 其实感觉这种问题不是很大（逃
01:02:553 (1) - ^

[Normal]
AImod里有几个distance snap问题
01:17:913 (5) - kiai NC
02:03:993 (5) - ^
01:48:633 (1) - 为啥这里有个clap前面01:02:553 (1) - 没有。。
03:57:273 (5) - NC
Thanks for modding
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

FoolB wrote:

[Oblivious]
■ 00:19:113 (5,6) - 这里5和6叠起来感觉不够爽
可以这样
不过blanket就美丽了
好主意
■ 01:55:833 (1) - 这里和前面那个滑条靠太近啦
这样试试？
其实这图我画得不咋地
感觉原来那个还将就 稍微放开了点
■ 03:04:713 (6,7,1) - 这里嘛...也是俩滑条靠得近
大家好我是“可以这样”君
6我叠在了3那里
其实这图叠的东西也不算很多 所以我还是把距离拉开了
■ 03:07:353 (6,7,8) - 似乎靠得有些近 ds不算小了orz
■ 03:39:033 (6,7) - 这里做个blanket？7是顺着6出去的方向上的

[Hard]
■ 04:11:673 (8,9,10) - 这里Ctrl+G？都快完了 感觉ctrlG要被差评orz

[G's Normal]
■ 00:39:513 (1,2,3) - 滑条弧度太大了，没包住(其实好多是这样，比如02:48:153 (3,4) - )
■ 04:09:753 (2) - 这个滑条不如左移一点？干脆多遮一些


没了orz，我太弱
Thanks for modding :3
Evil_Twilight
587 posts
Joined July 2010
Evil_Twilight
10crystalmask01
I suggest raising the slider velocity up a bit, since your sliders look so small and looks tightly placed together whenever they're 1/4 apart.
00:16:473 (1) - Try adding a finish or whistle on the head? :arrow: O
00:51:033 (4) - NC :arrow: O
00:58:233 (4) - ^ :arrow: O
01:02:553 (1) - Add finish on the head? :arrow: O, i forgot to add finish here lol
01:37:113 (1,2) - Ugly overlap. :arrow: X
01:58:233 (4,5) - ^ :arrow: X
03:54:873 (3,4) - ^ :arrow: X
04:09:273 (1,2) - Try to move them apart? :arrow: X

epocsodielaK
AImod里有几个distance snap问题 我怎麼沒有看到 :?
01:17:913 (5) - kiai NC :arrow: O
02:03:993 (5) - ^ :arrow: O
01:48:633 (1) - 为啥这里有个clap前面01:02:553 (1) - 没有。。 :arrow: 因為忘惹加
03:57:273 (5) - NC :arrow: O

FoolB
■ 00:39:513 (1,2,3) - 滑条弧度太大了，没包住(其实好多是这样，比如02:48:153 (3,4) - ) :arrow: X, 不要在意小細節 :P
■ 04:09:753 (2) - 这个滑条不如左移一点？干脆多遮一些 :arrow: O, 移到旁邊去了

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Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt
Updated
AruOtta
1,296 posts
Joined May 2012
AruOtta
From your M4M request <3

[Easy]
00:56:793 (3) - Try this patern :
SPOILER
01:38:553 (2,3,4) - Try this :
SPOILER

01:55:353 (5,1) - Blanket ?
01:59:673 (5,1) - Try this :
SPOILER
02:27:033 (2,1) - Distance Snap
02:37:593 (7,8) - Try this (more easy) :
SPOILER
02:41:433 (2,3) - ^
02:45:273 (2,3) - ^
03:08:793 (5) - Try this :
SPOILER
03:33:753 (5) - Slider => Circle
03:49:113 (3,1) - ^
03:56:313 (4) - Try this :
SPOILER

[Hard]
Circle Size => 3 ?
00:15:993 (5,1) - Distance Snap
00:17:193 (2,3) - ^
00:23:193 (4,1) - ^
01:01:593 (6,7) - ^

[Oblivious]
Nothing to say ^^

Good Luck *u*
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

Kenterz9 wrote:

From your M4M request <3

[Hard]
Circle Size => 3 ?its 4 ;w;
00:15:993 (5,1) - Distance Snap fixed
00:17:193 (2,3) - ^ changed a little
00:23:193 (4,1) - ^
01:01:593 (6,7) - ^ its fine :3

[Oblivious]
Nothing to say ^^

Good Luck *u*
Thanks for help ~
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