2013-10-06 01:10 Hollow Wings: irc还是
2013-10-06 01:10 wonders: orz
2013-10-06 01:10 wonders:
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1DsbUK 2013-10-06 01:10 wonders: 0.0都行
2013-10-06 01:10 wonders: 你看吧
2013-10-06 01:11 Hollow Wings: 我随意吧
2013-10-06 01:11 Hollow Wings: 那就方便点irc好了
2013-10-06 01:11 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:12 Hollow Wings: 好我开始看了-。-
2013-10-06 01:12 wonders: 好0.0
2013-10-06 01:12 wonders: 先哪个难度
2013-10-06 01:12 Hollow Wings: MP3文件最高只能用192kbps的
2013-10-06 01:12 Hollow Wings: 你的事320的
2013-10-06 01:12 Hollow Wings: 要换掉
2013-10-06 01:13 wonders: 诶?
2013-10-06 01:13 Hollow Wings: 换掉后timing要重新测过
2013-10-06 01:13 wonders: 我偷的rank版啊
2013-10-06 01:13 Hollow Wings: 估计那张rank图很老了
2013-10-06 01:13 Hollow Wings: 新rank规则规定最高码率是192
2013-10-06 01:13 wonders: 。
2013-10-06 01:13 wonders: 好吧
2013-10-06 01:13 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:13 Hollow Wings: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:14 Hollow Wings: 00:09:610 (9) - nc
2013-10-06 01:14 Hollow Wings: 00:11:210 (7) - nc
2013-10-06 01:14 Hollow Wings: 00:14:810 (1) - 从这里开始clap的声音太响了,换个轻一点的
2013-10-06 01:14 wonders: orz我看到比较慢
2013-10-06 01:15 Hollow Wings: 啊现在是nc难度
2013-10-06 01:15 Hollow Wings: 好,你先看这三个
2013-10-06 01:15 wonders: 你先说,我存下来慢慢改
2013-10-06 01:15 wonders: ~
2013-10-06 01:15 Hollow Wings: 那irc有什么意义orz
2013-10-06 01:15 wonders: 0.0好吧
2013-10-06 01:15 Hollow Wings: 嘛那我先说过去吧
2013-10-06 01:15 Hollow Wings: 你慢慢看
2013-10-06 01:15 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:16 Hollow Wings: 00:16:010 (8) - nc
2013-10-06 01:17 wonders: clap太响是指音色还是音量
2013-10-06 01:17 Hollow Wings: 00:17:310 (9) - 前后ds差的太多了,微调一下
2013-10-06 01:17 Hollow Wings: 音量太高,finish也是
2013-10-06 01:17 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:17 Hollow Wings: 其实前面那段一直很吵,直接全部调轻感觉也不错
2013-10-06 01:17 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:18 Hollow Wings: 00:17:710 (1,2) - 和00:18:810 (5,6) - 这种二连,感觉二连的轨迹和之后滑条身的角度统一一下比较好,至少不要差那么多
2013-10-06 01:19 wonders: 我故意放的这么跳的
2013-10-06 01:19 Hollow Wings: 比如把00:17:710 (1) - 放在71,347看上去就好看一些
2013-10-06 01:19 wonders: 感觉难度还可以
2013-10-06 01:19 Hollow Wings: 不不你先看看我说的
2013-10-06 01:19 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:19 Hollow Wings: 00:21:010 (8) - nc
2013-10-06 01:20 Hollow Wings: 00:23:610 (9) - nc。。。你那么喜欢接长连么,其实combo数字到789左右就差不多可以nc了
2013-10-06 01:20 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:21 Hollow Wings: 后面nc我就不说了,你都改一下吧
2013-10-06 01:21 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:22 Hollow Wings: 00:29:610 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 这个串的形状。。。好吧虽然也还行不过或许可以换个形状
2013-10-06 01:23 wonders: 0.0
2013-10-06 01:23 wonders: 我考虑一下
2013-10-06 01:24 Hollow Wings: 00:45:510 (3,4) - 这离前面太近了,建议放到180,273附近
2013-10-06 01:24 wonders: 把角度打开一点可以吗
2013-10-06 01:24 Hollow Wings: 可以,不过那个串前五个的note之间距离不要太大
2013-10-06 01:25 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:26 Hollow Wings: 第一段kiai后半部分是复制粘贴了么。。。
2013-10-06 01:27 Hollow Wings: 不试试其他排列吗
2013-10-06 01:27 wonders: 对的
2013-10-06 01:27 wonders: 偷懒了>.<
2013-10-06 01:27 Hollow Wings: 前半段我觉得做的很好
2013-10-06 01:28 wonders: 谢啦XD
2013-10-06 01:28 Hollow Wings: 后半段复制粘贴有点遗憾的说,其实可以考虑换一下滑条顺序,然后再重新组合成新的排版
2013-10-06 01:28 wonders: 0.0
2013-10-06 01:28 wonders: 我在想想
2013-10-06 01:29 Hollow Wings: 我个人不是很推荐直接复制粘贴的,不过不改的话也没事就是了。。。
2013-10-06 01:29 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:30 Hollow Wings: 像01:34:210 (7) - 所在的那个串,其实可以考虑一些其他的形状,比如把这个note放在144,137
2013-10-06 01:31 Hollow Wings: 嗯,你放串的形状和你滑条的形状很类似
2013-10-06 01:31 Hollow Wings: 滑条的形状也可以多球点变化
2013-10-06 01:31 wonders: 额
2013-10-06 01:32 wonders: 弯一下是吗
2013-10-06 01:32 Hollow Wings: 嗯,不过只是建议而已
2013-10-06 01:32 Hollow Wings: 都摆直的也可以很出彩的
2013-10-06 01:33 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:33 Hollow Wings: 02:12:010 (1,2,3) - 摆个三角什么的吧233
2013-10-06 01:33 Hollow Wings: 前面三个也可以不stack
2013-10-06 01:33 wonders: 0.0
2013-10-06 01:34 wonders: 然后是MC?
2013-10-06 01:34 Hollow Wings: 等等
2013-10-06 01:34 Hollow Wings: 我总体再看一下
2013-10-06 01:34 wonders: 好
2013-10-06 01:34 Hollow Wings: 00:36:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 像这种串柑橘就很和我胃口
2013-10-06 01:35 Hollow Wings: 不过只是折线的串我也不是不喜欢,就是不要太僵硬
2013-10-06 01:35 wonders: 嗯,但是不想都放这种。
2013-10-06 01:35 Hollow Wings: 那好,我就说一个事
2013-10-06 01:35 wonders: 0.0
2013-10-06 01:35 Hollow Wings: 00:37:910 (10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 像这种,老实说直角是不太好看的,不管摆串还是滑条形状,我都建议尽量避免出直角
2013-10-06 01:36 Hollow Wings: 除非是特殊的梗或者flow
2013-10-06 01:36 wonders: 我摆成这样是和前后的slider呼应orz
2013-10-06 01:37 wonders: 一般放串都跟着slider的形状走的
2013-10-06 01:37 Hollow Wings: 那总之就想办法避免。。。我个人意见而已。。。像01:40:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个就非常好
2013-10-06 01:38 Hollow Wings: 00:37:910 (10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 你这串完全可以12345从右上摆到左下,然后67再以锐角上去,看上去就舒服得多
2013-10-06 01:38 Hollow Wings: 12345的ds大点也没事
2013-10-06 01:39 wonders: 0.0
2013-10-06 01:39 wonders: 再看吧
2013-10-06 01:39 wonders: 不行我remap
2013-10-06 01:39 Hollow Wings: orz只是建议而已
2013-10-06 01:40 wonders: 0.0
2013-10-06 01:40 Hollow Wings: 第一段kiai还是很惊艳的
2013-10-06 01:40 wonders: 是吗
2013-10-06 01:40 wonders: 我就随便啦的一些直slider而已orz
2013-10-06 01:40 Hollow Wings: 00:01:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这种style的串后面就木有了么。。。惊愕交响曲啊orz
2013-10-06 01:41 wonders: 太难了
2013-10-06 01:41 wonders: 我这个都有人建议改掉
2013-10-06 01:41 wonders: 不过放开头的话retry几次应该能打
2013-10-06 01:41 Hollow Wings: -。-
2013-10-06 01:41 Hollow Wings: 我是在奇怪你后面为啥不放orz
2013-10-06 01:41 wonders: 我想不要弄太难
2013-10-06 01:41 Hollow Wings: 这个串不难
2013-10-06 01:42 wonders: 150本来就已经不好打了
2013-10-06 01:42 Hollow Wings: 150是因为你cs5pd8才不好打
2013-10-06 01:42 Hollow Wings: 这个串对我来说很科学
2013-10-06 01:42 wonders: 哦
2013-10-06 01:42 Hollow Wings: 换mc
2013-10-06 01:43 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:43 wonders: 我下下来在看一遍
2013-10-06 01:43 wonders: 可能改得不多,不过mod很有用~
2013-10-06 01:43 Hollow Wings: 23333
2013-10-06 01:43 Hollow Wings: 我还是新人而已orz
2013-10-06 01:44 wonders: XD你的图很有爆发力的
2013-10-06 01:45 Hollow Wings: 233我有张新图你待会儿先看看
2013-10-06 01:45 Hollow Wings: 不过不要摸我想让某人先摸
2013-10-06 01:45 wonders: 额
2013-10-06 01:45 wonders: 明天吧
2013-10-06 01:45 Hollow Wings: 嗯,不急
2013-10-06 01:45 wonders: 我今天称不太住了
2013-10-06 01:45 Hollow Wings: 这个难度的nc和nc难度一样,注意别太长,以及到了重音什么的最好还是nc一下
2013-10-06 01:46 Hollow Wings: 0.=
2013-10-06 01:46 Hollow Wings: 那你早说嘛=。=
2013-10-06 01:46 Hollow Wings: 还irc=。=
2013-10-06 01:46 wonders: 0.0
2013-10-06 01:46 wonders: 没事,弄完好了
2013-10-06 01:46 Hollow Wings: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:47 Hollow Wings: 00:45:210 (2,1) - 这里我建议2放在1的位置
2013-10-06 01:47 Hollow Wings: 00:46:610 (3) - 这个nc
2013-10-06 01:47 Hollow Wings: 00:56:810 (3) - nc
2013-10-06 01:49 wonders: 好
2013-10-06 01:49 Hollow Wings: 01:44:010 (12) - 这必须nc啊orz,像这种地方很多。。。基本上重音长白线都得nc
2013-10-06 01:50 wonders: orz
2013-10-06 01:50 wonders: 不是很喜欢用很多NC
2013-10-06 01:50 Hollow Wings: 02:08:810 (6) - 这个nc一下?
2013-10-06 01:50 wonders: 我再查一遍NC吧
2013-10-06 01:50 Hollow Wings: 现在nc都频繁到用来分割梗的等级了。。。
2013-10-06 01:50 Hollow Wings: 你也想逆大流么orz
2013-10-06 01:51 wonders: 0.0
2013-10-06 01:51 Hollow Wings: 第二个kiai里的1/1滑条感觉都拉的很随意
2013-10-06 01:51 wonders: 我一般是遮挡的NC表示一下,还有就是区分一下小节
2013-10-06 01:52 Hollow Wings: nc区分小节这点做好了nc基本就没问题了,不过你貌似还是没做好
2013-10-06 01:52 Hollow Wings: 因为有些地方实在是不nc不爽orz
2013-10-06 01:52 Hollow Wings: nc最重要的作用就是帮助读图
2013-10-06 01:53 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:53 Hollow Wings: 第二个kiai里1/1的滑条都是成对出现的,相互关系可以多尝试一下别的组合
2013-10-06 01:53 wonders: 但是感觉NC多了影响美观
2013-10-06 01:53 Hollow Wings: 美观是次要。。。
2013-10-06 01:54 wonders: 我hard就弄的简单点考虑下的
2013-10-06 01:54 Hollow Wings: 比如00:56:410 (1,2,3) - ,你3这里不nc很多人都会当三连就打下去然后miss
2013-10-06 01:54 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:55 Hollow Wings: 音效柑橘没啥规律。。。果然音太多了我听不过来了么orz
2013-10-06 01:55 wonders: 额
2013-10-06 01:55 Hollow Wings: 不过其实可以试试一大段clap然后一大段finish的那种感觉
2013-10-06 01:55 wonders: 音效我下的很随便
2013-10-06 01:55 Hollow Wings: 2333
2013-10-06 01:55 wonders: 我倒是音效喜欢比较乱的
2013-10-06 01:56 wonders: 排版偏整齐一点那种
2013-10-06 01:56 Hollow Wings: 这曲子本身音就多,你乱点没事。。。安静的曲子就不能这么搞了orz
2013-10-06 01:56 Hollow Wings: 没了,换lc吧
2013-10-06 01:56 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 01:57 wonders: 好
2013-10-06 01:57 Hollow Wings: 音效音量太响了。。。
2013-10-06 01:57 Hollow Wings: hitnormal感觉也太响,因为note很少,所以还是搞轻一点
2013-10-06 01:57 wonders: 音量我再调一遍
2013-10-06 01:57 wonders: 懒得插绿线了
2013-10-06 01:58 wonders: 今天刚赶完的音效orz
2013-10-06 01:58 Hollow Wings: -。-|||
2013-10-06 01:58 wonders: 0.0
2013-10-06 01:59 wonders: XD
2013-10-06 01:59 Hollow Wings: 这图需要的绿线也不多吧,看你貌似也没想做什么复杂的音效
2013-10-06 01:59 Hollow Wings: 大致调一下音量就好了9,9
2013-10-06 01:59 wonders: ·嗯
2013-10-06 01:59 wonders: 我直接偷懒全默认了
2013-10-06 02:00 wonders: 就NC难度音效认真下了
2013-10-06 02:00 Hollow Wings: 认真一点不好吗噗
2013-10-06 02:01 Hollow Wings: 00:58:810 (4,1) - 不来一发blanket么
2013-10-06 02:01 wonders: orz学校太忙
2013-10-06 02:01 wonders: 不喜欢blanket
2013-10-06 02:02 wonders: 我一般一张图只放一两个blanket
2013-10-06 02:02 Hollow Wings: 那就错开点。。。这样不blanket又贴在一起的样子柑橘难受
2013-10-06 02:02 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 02:02 Hollow Wings: 01:31:810 (2) - 这个滑条的尾巴果然还是拖到白线上
2013-10-06 02:02 Hollow Wings: 红线结尾柑橘怪怪的
2013-10-06 02:03 Hollow Wings: 01:42:410 (3) - 这个折返箭头被1挡住了unrankble的。。。
2013-10-06 02:03 wonders: 额
2013-10-06 02:03 Hollow Wings: 3的尾巴换个位置
2013-10-06 02:03 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 02:05 Hollow Wings: 01:48:010 (5) - 这个折线slider因为tick很多的关系,如果不搞成对称的柑橘很难看=。=
2013-10-06 02:05 Hollow Wings: 要么弄弯一部分要么再加个弯
2013-10-06 02:05 Hollow Wings: 0.0
2013-10-06 02:05 wonders: 后面也有一样的
2013-10-06 02:06 wonders: 故意做的长短的
2013-10-06 02:06 Hollow Wings: 后面因为你折的两边差距比较大,看上去很和谐
2013-10-06 02:06 Hollow Wings: 这个的两边差的不多又木有一样柑橘难受=。=
2013-10-06 02:07 Hollow Wings: 01:54:410 (2) - 你看这个多好
2013-10-06 02:07 Hollow Wings: 02:00:810 (2) - 要么就这样
2013-10-06 02:08 wonders: 嗯
2013-10-06 02:08 Hollow Wings: 咩
2013-10-06 02:08 Hollow Wings: 咩了
2013-10-06 02:08 Hollow Wings: 没了=。=
2013-10-06 02:08 wonders: XD