Accidentally posted it! mod not done yet!Done~Hi from my queue
You forgot to say something about yourself in my queue...
...but I'll let it slide
GeneralUse distance snap more;adjust it using Alt+Scrollwheel, It's all about flow and readability
NormalKiai Timing00:54:080 - Turn off kiai here and start it again on 00:54:541
01:00:080 - Turn off here, restart 01:01:233
01:08:849 - Turn off here, restart 01:09:310
01:12:541 - Turn off here, restart 01:13:003
01:14:387 - Turn off here, restart 01:14:849
Kiai loses the special feeling if it's too long, chopping up kiai adds emphasis on espacially strong notes. I don't know if this applies to the other diffs since they may have different kiai times
Cleanup each combo so that distance snap is consistent
00:04:233 (6,7,1) - Use the 'Create Polygonal Circles' function
Compose -> Create Polygonal circles or
Ctrl+Shift+D. To make it look and flow better
00:05:618 (1) - Go in another direction so that the flow of the map is smoother (The zigzag doesn't feel nice and the next circle is poorly placed)
00:07:003 (2) - nudge it farther away so the distance is consistent; Prev and Next should be almost equal
00:10:695 (1,2,3,4) - fix the arrangement?
00:07:464 (3,4,5,6,7) - Arrange the circles in a curve and the slider less compact
00:15:310 (7) - NC and the slider doesn't cut it, try:
00:20:387 (3,4,5,6) - Very hard to read especially on a normal map! My suggestion for a pattern:
00:22:233 - circle here
00:22:695 (7) - NC
00:23:618 (8) - jump is too large
00:28:695 (1) - end this spinner at 00:30:541
00:32:849 - Circle here
00:35:157 - Circle here
00:37:003 - Circle here
00:37:464 (2) - extend with a reverse arrow (shift the distance of following notes to match distance snap too)
00:39:772 - circle here
00:43:464 (2,3) - Spacing is huge even keep it consistent at normal maps
00:55:926 (4) - snap the end of the slider back on the white tick
01:01:003 (5) - out of place; move up to the red tick but shorten it so it still ends at the next red tick, NC here too
01:01:926 - awkward silence here. use sliders to fill gaps:
01:05:156 (2) - remove circle
01:18:080 (2,3,4) - large jumps ,(2) especially confused me. Keep distances in a combo consistent
Hard00:00:339 - Inherit timing section is not snapped (actually its snapped on a 1/16 but you should fix it to the close red or white tick)
00:16:493 - ^
00:30:339 - ^
00:46:378 - ^
01:01:147 - ^
01:16:493 - ^
00:05:156 (2,3,4) - arrange into a triangle?
00:11:387 - circle?
00:18:771 (8) - remove claps
00:23:272 (2) - move this backwards in to the white tick, extend it with a reverse arrow too
00:31:464 - circle here
00:31:695 (2) - too close to the previous note
00:34:002 (6,7) - i think a Slider -> Circle would work better than a Circle -> Slider
00:35:848 (1) - reverse arrow doesn't fit, lengthen the slider all the way through
00:38:617 (5,6) - these are out of place, try:
01:07:579 (1) - end the slider at 01:08:387
01:17:849 - Circle?
01:20:387 - ^
01:24:771 (5) - move this back to the white tick
01:25:695 (7) - lengthen the end to the white tick
01:26:617 (1) - remove circle
01:27:079 (2,3,4,5,6) - the melody is off, this sounds better:
EruJazz's Insane00:11:618 (7) - NC
00:17:387 (7) - ^
00:43:233 (5) - replace with:
00:44:618 (6) - NC
00:46:464 (10) - NC
00:49:464 (5,6,7,8) - gets very clustered and confusing, spread out the notes and place them neater
01:05:618 (9) - NC
01:25:349 (6) - remove circle
01:31:233 (8) - NC?
01:32:618 (9) - NC