1. Blaze (5 stars, 273 notes)
2. Easy (1,84 stars, 84 notes)
3. KSHR's Normal (4,07 stars, 129 notes)
4. Laurier's Hard (4,75 stars, 188 notes)

1. 00:05:640 (4) - make this same distance between 00:04:940 (3) - and 00:05:873 (1) -
2. 00:07:762 (1) - NC might not be necessary for such a small gap?
3. 00:10:574 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:14:793 (1) - remove NC and NC on next note
5. 00:15:965 (3) - move to x:152 y:304 (for equal spacing)
6. 00:16:199 (1) - remove NC
7. 00:19:363 (10) - NC
8. 00:19:715 (1) - remove NC
9. 00:29:793 (9) - ^
10. 00:37:762 (1) - add finish ~
11. 00:38:699 (3) - whistle sounds too random at the end imo
12. 00:51:590 (5,6,7,8) - stack these couples like u did before?
13. 00:59:207 (1) - remove NC

meiikyuu wrote:

mod ~~

Blaze

1. 00:05:640 (4) - make this same distance between 00:04:940 (3) - and 00:05:873 (1) - done
2. 00:07:762 (1) - NC might not be necessary for such a small gap? it here for kiai :p
3. 00:10:574 (1) - remove NC yup
4. 00:14:793 (1) - remove NC and NC on next note done
5. 00:15:965 (3) - move to x:152 y:304 (for equal spacing) done
6. 00:16:199 (1) - remove NC done
7. 00:19:363 (10) - NC done
8. 00:19:715 (1) - remove NC done
9. 00:29:793 (9) - ^ done
10. 00:37:762 (1) - add finish ~ done
11. 00:38:699 (3) - whistle sounds too random at the end imo oops my mistake
12. 00:51:590 (5,6,7,8) - stack these couples like u did before? no, i love this pattern :p
13. 00:59:207 (1) - remove NC nc since jump, its ok :p

nothing big to point out , just some combos and little spacing
good luck!!

[Epicz] wrote:

Source should be: Shakugan no Shana II (w/o OP)
Tags: Anime Animation Opening J.C Staff Takase Kazuya

ignorethis wrote:

1) mp3 should be changed okay

2) raise the volume to ~80% since i could bearly hear any hitsounds i raised to 65-70%

3) arrangement of objects could be more variable i'll change some... maybe. but generally you're right here

00:00:275 - 00:05:640 (4) - you could make this part match the song rather than using your own rhythm nope, it was planned

rhythm in other parts of the map is great though thanks ^^

1. Why do you demand other mp3? I felt that it is already sufficient quality. but I tried a thing of other sound quality. so Please check it by yourself once. and attach low-quality video together ⇒ http://puu.sh/3tjho.zip
2. Song Setup - Audio Lead-in - It seems too short. +2000ms

1. 00:01:674 (4,1) - It seems to be randomly placed. for ex, how to put it to have a pattern. http://puu.sh/3tjZK.jpg ( i use 00:01:674 (4) - copy 00:00:275 (1). 00:02:141 (1) - copy 00:00:974 (3). )
2. 00:02:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hmm.. It has the original rhythm as compared to the rhythm of before or after. I prefer to put them in a constant rhythm. for ex: http://puu.sh/3tkzS.jpg ( and Place to put a whistle: 00:02:607. 00:03:191. 00:03:424. 00:03:774. ) and 00:03:191 (5) - if you change the rhythm, I think there is no need to change the volume here. or even if you do not change the rhythm, I thought there is no need to change the volume and whistle.
3. 00:07:273 (7) - remove whistle to start and end of the slider. and volume change to 40%. ( do not have a sound almost here. so I recommend that place to fit the sound rather than put a whistle. )
4. 00:07:762 - Overlap of the green line and red line. so plz remove green line that does not have a meaning. also 00:07:820.
5. 00:10:574 (5,6,7) - 00:11:043 (6,7) - I feel that these do not match vocal. even if it is based upon the sound 00:11:277 - I think that you should put a sound for the beginning of vocal here. for ex: http://puu.sh/3vj13.jpg (I thought this was enough.) or http://puu.sh/3vj8u.jpg ( emphasize a vocal rhythm. i prefer this. ) or http://puu.sh/3vjlG.jpg ( another pattern )
6. 00:15:144 (x) - i prefer to put the sound here for vocal. so i suggest add note here or 00:14:793 (9) - extend the slider end.
7. 00:17:137 (5,6) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/3vjNn.jpg ( just suggest. but also it is important that use map widely )
8. 00:22:762 (9) - add finish. ( additions-soft )
9. 00:27:215 (1,2) - volume is slightly lower. I think that even 65% are enough. >_<;
10. 00:30:965 (1,2) - ^
11. 00:34:949 (4,1) - Suggestion of the flow for ex: http://puu.sh/3vkvB.jpg ( 00:34:949 (4,1) - The distinction between the flow of these. )
12. 00:47:137 (4) - if you want can be expanded end to 00:47:488. and 00:47:605 (5) - end to 00:47:840. and 00:48:074 - add note. and with 00:49:012 (3) - end to 00:49:363. http://puu.sh/3vkMG.jpg
13. 00:51:590 (5) - i prefer add NC here. and 00:52:293 (1) - remove NC.
14. 00:53:933 (1) - add whistle. It will be able to emphasize the vocal as 01:01:433 (1) -
15. 00:55:808 (1) - ^
16. 00:59:324 (2,3) - add finish to end of the slider. ( sampleset-soft )
17. 01:06:590 (x) - have a vocal should be emphasized here. since you match most with vocal-rhythm in kiai-time. so I suggest rhythm to put note here. for ex: http://puu.sh/3vlrk.jpg ( i use 1/4. Because I thought that it was fit even if it was not 1/8. )

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ Kodora :3

thank you for the request~

here my mod~

[General]

1. Why do you demand other mp3? I felt that it is already sufficient quality. because of two reasons: first - it have unnaturally bpm change what most like should not exist (probably mp3 fault). second - soft "clicking" sound at some parts what is not part of music. If its ok i'll try to get more opinions about mp3's quality.but I tried a thing of other sound quality. so Please check it by yourself once. and attach low-quality video together ⇒ http://puu.sh/3tjho.zip thanks ^w^ denied video due to quality & because it not fit the song as for me lol
2. Song Setup - Audio Lead-in - It seems too short. +2000ms added lol i was sure that i set it before

[Blaze]

1. 00:01:674 (4,1) - It seems to be randomly placed. for ex, how to put it to have a pattern. http://puu.sh/3tjZK.jpg ( i use 00:01:674 (4) - copy 00:00:275 (1). 00:02:141 (1) - copy 00:00:974 (3). ) changed
2. 00:02:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hmm.. It has the original rhythm as compared to the rhythm of before or after. I prefer to put them in a constant rhythm. for ex: http://puu.sh/3tkzS.jpg ( and Place to put a whistle: 00:02:607. 00:03:191. 00:03:424. 00:03:774. ) and 00:03:191 (5) - if you change the rhythm, I think there is no need to change the volume here. or even if you do not change the rhythm, I thought there is no need to change the volume and whistle. very good, applied all
3. 00:07:273 (7) - remove whistle to start and end of the slider. and volume change to 40%. ( do not have a sound almost here. so I recommend that place to fit the sound rather than put a whistle. ) i do not know how this instrument called but it sounds so loud here and i think that whistle is needed because of it.
4. 00:07:762 - Overlap of the green line and red line. so plz remove green line that does not have a meaning. my fault, fixed. (i found bpm change here after adding green lines) also 00:07:820.
5. 00:10:574 (5,6,7) - 00:11:043 (6,7) - I feel that these do not match vocal. even if it is based upon the sound 00:11:277 - I think that you should put a sound for the beginning of vocal here. for ex: http://puu.sh/3vj13.jpg (I thought this was enough.) or http://puu.sh/3vj8u.jpg ( emphasize a vocal rhythm. i prefer this. ) or http://puu.sh/3vjlG.jpg ( another pattern ) Applied first one. Second one missed strong best on vocal-based slider so i prefer first instead :p
6. 00:15:144 (x) - i prefer to put the sound here for vocal. so i suggest add note here or 00:14:793 (9) - extend the slider end. extended slider
7. 00:17:137 (5,6) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/3vjNn.jpg ( just suggest. but also it is important that use map widely ) keeping mine for now because your added jump and i'm not sure about this but maybe i'll change it later
8. 00:22:762 (9) - add finish. ( additions-soft ) yes
9. 00:27:215 (1,2) - volume is slightly lower. I think that even 65% are enough. >_<; was unsure about it too, applied!
10. 00:30:965 (1,2) - ^ here too
11. 00:34:949 (4,1) - Suggestion of the flow for ex: http://puu.sh/3vkvB.jpg ( 00:34:949 (4,1) - The distinction between the flow of these. ) i like it, applied!
12. 00:47:137 (4) - if you want can be expanded end to 00:47:488. and 00:47:605 (5) - end to 00:47:840. and 00:48:074 - add note. and with 00:49:012 (3) - end to 00:49:363. http://puu.sh/3vkMG.jpg good, applied all.
13. 00:51:590 (5) - i prefer add NC here. and 00:52:293 (1) - remove NC. nope because pattern combo
14. 00:53:933 (1) - add whistle. It will be able to emphasize the vocal as 01:01:433 (1) - yes
15. 00:55:808 (1) - ^ yes
16. 00:59:324 (2,3) - add finish to end of the slider. ( sampleset-soft )
17. 01:06:590 (x) - have a vocal should be emphasized here. since you match most with vocal-rhythm in kiai-time. so I suggest rhythm to put note here. for ex: http://puu.sh/3vlrk.jpg ( i use 1/4. Because I thought that it was fit even if it was not 1/8. ) sorry, no, because i focusing mostly on drums here :p

>.<

Good luck

Mashley wrote:

Both diffs are generally pretty solid and hard to criticise. Nice work!


Blaze
Spacing is very inconsistent, but I would say that I didn't feel like it was off while playing so it might just work. Yes, it was planned, just a little spacing raising on strong parts, that wouldnt hurt players even if they will play with mods.
00:06:573 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Daaamn this pattern is hard to read. Just change it somehow, the spacing and timing changes make it cramped and confusing. This really threw me off when I was playing it. It technically fits the music but players will be confused by this. This is most generosity thing what i can made here, song naturally have 1/8 beats here and just replacing with 1/4 will not work - sounds too empty. Timing change is probably mp3's fault, but in any case note on new timeline is way far away to get any confusion here.
01:26:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - As above, this is a little weird. same here

As I said I will check the new difficulty when it's added, but may time some reminding.