1. Collab (4.96 stars, 758 notes)
2. Hard Collab (4.79 stars, 628 notes)
3. KPY & aabc's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1464 notes)
4. Normal (2.88 stars, 324 notes)
5. Taiko Muzukashii (4.62 stars, 1091 notes)

Hard

1. Have you missed some tags? Collab and collaboration? I guess you can add them
2. Try to use Slider Tick Rate 2 for all diffs? It sounds much better here, imo.

1. Same OD as [Hard] diff here, why? Probably it's here because of mistake. Try to use OD3 or 4 to keep diff settings balanced. I strongly recommend you to use OD 3 because this diff is the easiest in this mapset!
2. 00:30:694 (1) - too soon after spinner. This is the easiest diff on relaxing song. So, players should relax and enjoy playing. This slider appears too fast and players have no time to focus on it.
3. 00:37:805 (1) - are you sure about finish sound here? I feel like it sounds kinda weird here, consider removing it, please.
4. 00:40:916 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - even if it's [Normal], it's still the easiest diff. So, 1/2 notes here are a bit overused. Try to replace some of them with reversed 1/2 sliders? example
5. 00:55:583 (1,3) - nazi - this overlap a little bit messy, can't you fix it somehow? example-pattern
6. 01:16:916 (5,6) - this combo is the way too long! I bet you've missed NC somewhere on 01:16:916 (5). NC here will fit with vocals, too!
   Note:01:34:694 (7) - 02:35:138 (6) - same
7. 03:14:249 (1) - sudenly spacing breaks here for no reason. I guess you should fix it to make consistent and readable flow here.
8. 03:19:583 (1,2) - it is impossible for players to read this note properly. It is simply hidden under the slider. It makes this pattern unacceptable for the easiest diff nad for [Normal] diff!
9. 04:01:138 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1,1,2) - overusing new combos is a no-no-no thing for a [Normal] diff. How do you want beginners to read your patterns if there's NC spam :V
10. 04:12:694 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - too many 1/2 notes in a row. This is the easiest diff in the mapset, remember? :<
    Note: a little bit more about 1/2 patterns here. I really don't like the way how 04:23:361 (3,4) - are placed. (2) is unstacked and (3) is stacked. Both notes have 1/2 rhythm. It makes this pattern inconsistent and hard for players. Consider unstacking 04:23:361 (3,4) -
11. 05:02:694 (1) - silince this spinner to make sound more pleasant. Tрat soft-hitnormal sounds weird here, tbh.

1. Consider using OD+1 to make diff spread more balanced in this mapset.

1. 00:37:138 (4,5,6) - usually, you aavoid 1/4 notes. Try to replace them with 1/4 slider here to keep patterns more consistent. You'll get the same sound but easier playable pattern!
   Note:02:13:138 (5,6,7) - 02:22:472 (6,7,1) - same as above. Those 1/4 notes normally aren't used in this diff, so remove those 1/4s as well.
2. 00:50:694 (1,1) - you have no any reason to put NCs here, imo. Those NCs break you omboing, look inconsistent and confuse players. Consider removing them!
   Note: guess what? 01:58:694 (1,2,1,2) - same here :<
3. 00:59:138 - place a circle here, to make end of the stream more epic! It sounds like you've missed a circle here. Also it plays the way better with a circle here, imo.
4. 02:09:583 (3,4,1) - nazi 01/2 and then 1/1 on the same stack? Are you sure? I think it may confuse players and it doesn't flows that good, tbh. TRy to unstack 02:10:249 (1) - for better flow.
5. 02:20:916 (1) - overlapped with HP bar. NOT an unrankable mistake, but looks messy and makes gameplay less enjoyable. You should fix it asap!
6. 02:31:138 (3,4,5,6,1) - i don't mind 1/4 triplets, but if you use more than three 1/4 circles, you'd better replace them with sliders. Streams on [Hard] diffs is a bad idea, a specially if song is calm :<

1. 01:23:583 (4) - spacing is inconsistent here. I think you've done it to avoid overlap, but it looks weird, imo. Try to increase distance between sliders to make a readable jump, or avoid hat awkward spacing here.
   Note: same with some other patterns like 01:32:694 (1) - and so on.
2. 04:00:027 (5) - try to increase velocity of this slider to make reverse-arrow easier readable. Don't forget to place a NC for SV changes if you'll do it.
3. 04:24:249 (1,2,3) - this combo feels the way too short towards other combos. Can't you re-arrange your comboing a bit to keep it more consistent?

1. 02:43:138 (5) - don't you feel like you should place a new combo here? This combo is much longer than other combos and it feels weird. :<
2. 02:48:027 (2,3) - I'm sure you've placed this jump to avoid overlap. If overlap is still here, what's the point of jump? fix overlap or use regular spacing here to make map more playable.
3. 02:55:361 (1,2) - 02:58:249 (1,2) - short combos. It feels pretty weird towards other combos in this part. Consider re-arranging New Combos in this part?
4. 04:51:361 (3,4,5) - can't say that this trilet is readable enough for a [Hard] diff. can you make it a bit easier to read?
5. 04:56:916 (5) - try to increase velocity of this slider to make reverse-arrow easier readable. Don't forget to place a NC for SV changes if you'll do it.
   Note: talk to Evil_Twilight, you should fix it both on yours and his/her part, or not to fix it at all!
6. 05:02:722 (1) - I'd say that spinner appears too soon. Can't you place it at least at 05:02:805? :V
   

1. Consider reducing OD by one tick to make it a little bit more playable for players.
2. I have nothing else to say about this diff, it's really nice, but some NCs and jumps in Strawberry's part confuse me a lot.
   04:36:027 (1,1,1,1,1) -04:39:583 (1,1,1,1) - no, really, you don't need all those NCs. It looks messy :< Try to avoid NC spam
3. As for jumps
   I've seen some ultra-crazy jumps in calm parts: 04:58:027 (3) - @ Berry and 00:34:249 (1,2) - @ JauiPlay
   guys, please, do not use ultra-crazy x3.0+ DS jumps in calm part. Those jump don't fit here at all and ruin the balance of this diff :<

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  Nice song
  
  只是给一些建议..不过这边每个mapper都有自己的风格所以有点虚

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  00:44:916 (1,2,3) - 感觉可以摆开一点，虽然歌不是很快不过note放开一些打起来会更爽(....
  
  01:14:027 (2) - 推荐 ctrl+g 这边用一个反向感觉好一些，而且之前的一个梗也是反向的，后面的顺势逆过来.
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  03:16:805 (4) - 感觉还是放在两个slider中间好
  
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  03:29:138 (3,4,5,6,7) - 感觉也可以稍微距离再拉大一些,会比较爽
  
  03:44:472 (1,2,3) - 要试试看这样的小梗吗
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  04:41:249 (2) - 感觉还是跟04:40:916 (1) - 的尾贴在一起好..打的时候被坑了一下
  
  04:48:694 (2,3,4,5) - 总觉得这里突然特别的急促.

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  01:34:694 (1) - 间距还是跟之前的456看齐吧.
  
  01:39:805 (5) - x.372 y.152 顺势 01:40:249 (6) - x.360 y.308
  
  02:20:916 (1) - 这个地方戳到血条菊花了没问题吗
  
  02:35:138 (1) - 个人比较喜欢把长slider这样错开放
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  03:19:805 (1) - 总觉得这边连续两个短slider不太合适 .试试看这个？
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  04:22:027 (2) - 这里也按照DS1.3吧
  
  04:51:361 (3,4,5) - 这个三连排列感觉有点突然

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  02:32:027 个人感觉这里还是压住节奏加个note
  
  03:10:249 (2) - 这里是可以用这个DS摆是吗 0 0

-Bakari- wrote:

buhei

1. 02:43:138 (5) - don't you feel like you should place a new combo here? This combo is much longer than other combos and it feels weird. :<
2. 02:48:027 (2,3) - I'm sure you've placed this jump to avoid overlap. If overlap is still here, what's the point of jump? fix overlap or use regular spacing here to make map more playable.
3. 02:55:361 (1,2) - 02:58:249 (1,2) - short combos. It feels pretty weird towards other combos in this part. Consider re-arranging New Combos in this part?
4. 04:51:361 (3,4,5) - can't say that this trilet is readable enough for a [Hard] diff. can you make it a bit easier to read?
5. 04:56:916 (5) - try to increase velocity of this slider to make reverse-arrow easier readable. Don't forget to place a NC for SV changes if you'll do it.
   Note: talk to Evil_Twilight, you should fix it both on yours and his/her part, or not to fix it at all!
6. 05:02:722 (1) - I'd say that spinner appears too soon. Can't you place it at least at 05:02:805? :V
   

• 02:31:583(1)这里改成这样怎么样，总感觉spin压在这不好
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  03:19:583(1)slider做成下弧把2露出来？
  03:53:138(6)觉得删掉这个note好些..
  04:42:916(3)^ 没音好诡异啊

• 00:19:361(3)我觉得换成这样可能会好点
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  00:58:694(6)再折一次延长到00:59:138 o.o
  02:20:916(1)上面有血条超过这么多不好吧
  02:29:805(1)这nc可以移到后面的2上去的样子

• 00:16:472这里不加个note么.-.
  02:20:916(9)感觉这个节奏更舒服的样子
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  02:36:472(4)中间的锚点拉到x:379 y:184
  03:48:027(4)个人感觉这个slider不好看orz 弄成一般的弧就行了

1. fixed title and artist.
2. changed setup on normal and collab diff. should be more reasonable now.

1. added and changed some hitsounds.
2. reduced new combos not suitable and added some for avoiding such long combo like (9) (10)
3. trimed the positions of few spinners.
4. remaked some pattern maybe confused.