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otetsu - Sai afure, Ketsurakusha [Taiko|Osu]

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Kite
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Kite
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 18. Juni 2013 at 14:35:08

Artist: otetsu
Title: Sai afure, Ketsurakusha
Tags: sweet_serenitee haruka Vocaloid Nyquill megurine luka balad Lunarsakuya
BPM: 135
Filesize: 7201kb
Play Time: 04:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Haruka's Oni (4,89 stars, 1368 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 746 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (4,69 stars, 756 notes)
  4. Nyquill's Hard (4,84 stars, 488 notes)
  5. Sakuya's Normal (2,59 stars, 191 notes)
Download: otetsu - Sai afure, Ketsurakusha
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal made by LunarSakuya
Hard made by Nyquill
Oni made by Haruka
Thanks a lot for the guest difficulties!

Have fun~

Last edited by Kite , edited 41 times in total.
LunarSakuya
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LunarSakuya
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Haruka_old
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Joined February 2011
Haruka_old
Taiko as requested! :)
bg and muzu will come soon. :3
Nyquill
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http://puu.sh/1TJHu
Natteke
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Natteke
Your mp3 is above 192kbps, fix that shit bro
Kite
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Kite
I always forget that.. sigh
LunarSakuya
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_(┐ http://puu.sh/292M6「ε:)_
Andrea
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Andrea
~General~
  1. Your background has the wrong dimensions, resize it to 1366x768 to avoid this problem.
  2. All of the difficulties have inconsistencies in Preview Time, Countdown, Letterbox, Source and Timing. Please make sure to fix that.
~Nyquill's Hard~
  1. 00:21:449 (3,4) - I know you did this for symmetry, but it seems like a forced pattern, follow the distance snap properly, please.
  2. 01:38:782 (3,4,5) - This pattern doesn't look so good, try to make them this way instead for a better looking.
    SPOILER
  3. 01:41:449 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, please make it consistent through using the distance snap correctly.
  4. 01:47:005 (6) - This slider is almost touching the HP Bar, I suggest you to move it down a bit to fix this problem.
  5. 02:24:782 (4,5,6,1) - Spacing doesn't look so good here, I'd make it this way instead.
    SPOILER
  6. 02:54:116 (4) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit please.
  7. 03:02:116 (10) - I'd suggest you to add a new combo here to emphasize the lyrics change and the strong beat of this part.
  8. 03:40:560 (1,5) - These sliders could be stacked much better each other, try to disable grid snap and give it a try.
~Insane~
  1. 00:03:449 (5) - New combo due to the spacing change, so it will be easier to read for players.
  2. 00:43:894 (8) - Move this circle down a bit, it's touching the HP Bar a bit right now.
  3. 00:46:116 (6,7,8) - Make the spacing consistent here perhaps? It doesn't look so good like you did to me.
  4. 01:10:116 (10) - There should be a new combo here due to the new lyrics and stanza change.
  5. 01:56:561 (2) - Move this circle down a bit, it's touching the HP Bar a bit right now.
  6. 02:43:894 (7) - I'd actually prefer if you stack this note on slider end and not on slider begin like you did.
  7. 02:46:116 (5) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit please.
  8. 02:48:783 (1,2) - New combo should go on (2) due to the new stanza actually, remove it on (1) then.
  9. 03:12:227 (2) - Unsnapped slider, please make sure to resnap it correctly.
  10. 03:12:672 (3) - Unsnapped slider, please make sure to resnap it correctly.
  11. 03:28:560 (2) - Move this circle down a bit, it's touching the HP Bar a bit right now.
I'll mod the rest when it's ready, good luck.
Kite
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Kite
I am also going to leave a small mod on your diff Nyquill, since there are a few little things that bother me, hope you can convince yourself to fix them!

[Nyquill's Hard]
To make the transition between the Normal -> Hard a bit better can you get rid of unneccessary 1/4s?
Just to make it overall a bit easier.
For example :
00:23:783 (4) -
00:29:116 (4) -
00:55:782 (3) -
00:58:449 (3) -
01:12:449 (5) -
01:15:116 (4) -
01:17:782 (5) -
01:28:449 (5) -
and so on, you can leave the section here 02:06:782 - 02:27:894 - as it is, should be fine.

Can you get rid of ugly slider overlaps? Mainly speaking about
00:22:783 (1) -
00:45:227 (3) -
00:48:782 (4) -
01:00:782 (2) - !!
01:38:116 (2) - !

The difficulty raise in the last section 03:13:894 - is too much for my liking, can you try to tone it down?
Mainly speaking about
03:19:671 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
03:23:894 (4,5,6,7,8) -
03:27:449 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
03:33:005 (4,5,6) -
03:34:560 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
03:40:449 (5) -
03:41:005 (2,3,4) -

I decided to post it here so that you can check together with Andrea's mod.
Oh and could you please pm me once you get the chance? I'd like to help out with suggestions since I only rudely pointed stuff out :?
Kite
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Kite

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. Your background has the wrong dimensions, resize it to 1366x768 to avoid this problem. Fixed
  2. All of the difficulties have inconsistencies in Preview Time, Countdown, Letterbox, Source and Timing. Please make sure to fix that.
Only Preview Time was missing on Nyquill's diff, Letterboxes and Countdown got disabled for all diffs, Source and Tags are now the same... Timing was the same on all diffs though?

~Insane~
  1. 00:03:449 (5) - New combo due to the spacing change, so it will be easier to read for players. I don't see how a new combo at that spot helps with reading
  2. 00:43:894 (8) - Move this circle down a bit, it's touching the HP Bar a bit right now. Why are we even able to place beats at points where they touch the user interface / skin.. Fixed
  3. 00:46:116 (6,7,8) - Make the spacing consistent here perhaps? It doesn't look so good like you did to me. Sorry, keeping this the way it is
  4. 01:10:116 (10) - There should be a new combo here due to the new lyrics and stanza change. You are right, fixed
  5. 01:56:561 (2) - Move this circle down a bit, it's touching the HP Bar a bit right now. Fixed
  6. 02:43:894 (7) - I'd actually prefer if you stack this note on slider end and not on slider begin like you did. Sorry I like it like this more
  7. 02:46:116 (5) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit please. Fixed
  8. 02:48:783 (1,2) - New combo should go on (2) due to the new stanza actually, remove it on (1) then. Fixed
  9. 03:12:227 (2) - Unsnapped slider, please make sure to resnap it correctly. Woah you are right, never noticed this, Fixed
  10. 03:12:672 (3) - Unsnapped slider, please make sure to resnap it correctly.Fixed
  11. 03:28:560 (2) - Move this circle down a bit, it's touching the HP Bar a bit right now.Fixed
I'll mod the rest when it's ready, good luck.
Alright, thanks for the mod.
Ill place some hitsounds on Sakuya's diff and make my own Muzukashii diff because Haruka dislikes the one she made.
I don't think there is a need to make an Easy diff this time, the Normal is quite easy and really amazing to play.
Once the diffspread gets evened out with some fixed on the Hard it will be good to go :3

EDIT: Nyquill fixed his diff with Andrea's mod and also reworked some sections that I pointed out to him via IRC.
Last edited by Kite , edited 1 time in total.
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LunarSakuya
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SPOILER
osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:才溢れ、欠落者
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ArtistUnicode:otetsu
Creator:Kite
Version:Sakuya's Normal
Source:
Tags:sweet_serenitee haruka Vocaloid Nyquill megurine luka balad Lunarsakuya
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204,124,118783,2,0,P|280:124|356:56,2,182.160005559082,2|0|2,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,48,120783,1,0,1:0:0:0:
100,192,121449,54,0,L|88:252,2,60.7200018530274,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,180,122116,2,0,L|160:120,2,60.7200018530274,0|2|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,204,122783,2,0,L|180:264,2,60.7200018530274,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,196,123449,2,0,L|252:136,2,60.7200018530274,0|2|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,232,124116,6,0,P|336:268|440:232,2,182.160005559082,2|0|2,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,126116,2,0,P|125:65|61:101,1,182.160005559082,0|4,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,126894,12,0,129449,0:0:0:0:
120,180,130116,6,0,L|120:264,2,69,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,124,130783,2,0,P|164:68|296:100,1,207
296,252,132116,6,0,P|360:276|460:196,2,207,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,134116,2,0,L|108:116,2,69
240,92,134783,2,0,P|284:128|292:212,1,138
264,252,135449,2,0,P|204:260|144:320,1,138
100,336,136116,2,0,P|32:256|28:148,1,207
136,36,137449,6,0,L|204:31,2,69,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,90,138116,2,0,L|49:94,2,69,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,141,138783,2,0,P|202:163|274:134,1,138
308,104,139449,2,0,P|351:152|426:160,1,138,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,148,140116,2,0,L|487:76,2,69
500,196,140783,2,0,L|488:267,2,69,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,204,141449,2,0,P|376:192|308:224,1,138
280,264,142116,2,0,P|220:240|148:256,1,138,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,200,142783,6,0,B|92:156|92:104|92:104|124:68|152:24,2,207,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,144783,2,0,L|264:220,2,69,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,145449,2,0,P|256:72|164:124,2,207,0|2|2,1:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
340,272,147449,6,0,P|256:320|164:268,2,207,0|4|2,1:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
428,132,149449,2,0,L|444:200,2,69,2|0|2,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
372,124,150116,2,0,L|356:56,2,69,0|2|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,160,150783,2,0,L|344:228,2,69,2|0|2,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
272,152,151449,2,0,L|256:84,2,69,0|2|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,204,152116,2,0,P|208:252|72:236,1,207,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
164,100,153449,6,0,P|216:52|352:68,1,207,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
424,208,154783,2,0,L|376:344,1,138,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,336,155449,2,0,P|260:308|192:316,1,138,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,156116,12,0,157449,0:0:0:0:
160,92,158116,54,0,L|96:120,2,69,2|2|2,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
208,68,158783,2,0,P|268:112|400:92,1,207,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
416,260,160116,2,0,L|436:332,2,69,2|0|2,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
364,236,160783,2,0,L|344:164,2,69,0|2|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,280,161449,2,0,P|260:300|152:236,2,207,0|2|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,132,163449,1,2,0:2:0:0:
100,192,164116,6,0,L|108:264,2,69,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,164,164783,2,0,L|140:92,2,69,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,180,165449,2,0,L|208:252,2,69,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,140,166116,2,0,L|376:76,1,138,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,166783,6,0,P|464:144|424:252,1,207,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
268,288,168116,2,0,P|212:224|88:216,2,207,0|6|4,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,169561,12,0,171449,0:0:0:0:
256,64,172116,6,0,L|256:272,1,207,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
168,132,173449,2,0,P|256:176|352:124,1,207,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
256,272,174783,2,0,P|164:261|69:320,1,207,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
68,156,176116,2,0,L|48:88,2,69,2|0|2,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
120,172,176783,2,0,L|140:240,2,69,0|2|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,124,177449,54,0,P|248:144|348:88,1,207,6|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
436,232,178783,2,0,P|336:240|272:328,1,207,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
120,264,180116,2,0,P|72:192|104:68,2,207,4|2|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,268,182116,2,0,P|340:232|412:228,1,138,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
456,260,182783,6,0,L|488:44,1,207,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
336,124,184116,2,0,L|348:196,2,69,2|0|2,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
284,108,184783,2,0,L|272:36,2,69,0|2|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,185449,2,0,P|168:204|68:164,1,207,6|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
192,288,186783,2,0,L|128:316,2,69,2|0|2,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
192,232,187449,2,0,L|128:204,2,69,0|2|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,192,188116,6,0,P|320:148|424:164,1,207,6|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
316,288,189449,2,0,P|256:252|232:188,1,138,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,190116,2,0,L|240:68,2,69,2|0|2,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
164,140,190783,2,0,P|96:160|52:288,2,207,4|2|4,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,252,192783,6,0,B|376:260|424:252|428:248,2,86.25,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,193449,2,0,P|250:228|212:238,1,69,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,280,193894,6,0,P|92:240|60:156,1,172.5,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
196,148,194782,2,0,P|228:104|224:24,2,129.375,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,212,195671,2,0,P|304:248|400:220,1,172.5,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
464,112,196560,2,0,L|492:240,2,129.375,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,64,197449,6,0,P|336:36|248:64,1,172.5,6|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
164,168,198338,2,0,P|100:116|116:32,1,172.5,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
164,168,199227,2,0,P|228:220|212:304,2,172.5,2|2|6,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
80,280,200560,1,2,0:2:0:0:
48,144,201005,86,0,P|100:64|188:52,1,172.5,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
292,116,201894,2,0,P|356:120|420:80,2,129.375,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,148,202782,2,0,B|212:216|212:216|212:232|212:232|188:320,1,172.5,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
120,196,203671,2,0,P|168:156|232:148,2,129.375,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,264,204560,6,0,P|160:308|272:312,1,172.5,6|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
392,252,205449,2,0,P|340:188|340:100,1,172.5,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
208,60,206338,2,0,B|144:92|144:92|84:92,2,129.375,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,108,207227,1,6,0:2:0:0:
320,228,207671,86,0,B|372:240|404:208|436:180|488:184,2,172.5,2|6|2,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
200,296,209005,2,0,P|248:340|320:336,2,129.375,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,209893,2,0,B|140:240|108:208|76:180|24:184,1,172.5,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
160,140,210782,2,0,P|128:100|132:24,2,129.375,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,124,211671,6,0,B|284:160|284:160|324:128|392:120,1,172.5,6|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
332,252,212560,2,0,B|388:216|388:216|428:248|496:256,1,172.5,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
376,340,213449,2,0,P|304:352|248:200,1,258.75,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,152,214338,1,6,0:2:0:0:
176,68,214782,6,0,B|128:100|112:144|112:144|136:216,2,172.5,2|6|2,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
256,180,216116,2,0,B|276:216|236:272|256:308,2,129.375,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,217005,2,0,B|376:140|376:140|424:172|432:244,2,172.5,2|2|2,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
256,124,218116,2,0,L|256:36,2,86.25,0|2|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,144,218782,6,0,P|120:188|96:280,1,172.5,6|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
208,356,219671,2,0,P|276:312|300:220,1,172.5,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
380,116,220560,2,0,L|448:232,2,129.375,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,56,221449,2,0,B|281:15|195:31|180:89|185:153|103:173|41:135,1,345,6|4,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Cilvery
hi~ reques from ingame

Nyquill's hard

03:32:560 (3,4) - 1grid left D:

03:35:227 (1) - add finish
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good diffs \o/

good luck! ganbatte :3
y u c a
844 posts
Joined April 2009
y u c a
Normal

AR5? are you sure?
02:06:116 (2) - try this?
SPOILER
02:48:116 (2) - remove reverse like this?
SPOILER

Hard

00:22:116 (4) - slider end should be 00:22:783. also if you will change it add finish at slider end(if you wont change, add finish to 00:22:783 (1) xD)
00:59:894 (5) - add volume 5% green line here? like insane
01:20:782 (6) - try this?
SPOILER
02:51:449 (7) - this slider's end too! use 5% volume please
03:28:116 (1) - add finish here

Insane

00:28:116 (1) - add finish better sound IMO
01:04:449 (x) - add note here?
01:50:783 (8) - try this?
SPOILER
02:09:672 (2,3,4,5,6) - should add sound here. i mean whistle

good luck you guys :)
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo
[Sakuya's Normal]
00:22:894 (1) - you shouldn't start a spinner a 1/4 after some note, especially on easier difficulties. this kinda repeats on all of the spinners, so make sure to fix all of them.
01:15:449 (6) - I'd place that NC here.

[Muzukashii]
01:01:672 (151) - sounds unnecessary.
03:15:005 (659) - I guess you shouldn't be afraid to use some doublets in that part of the song, they won't be too confusing if they're the same colour.

[Nyquill's Hard]
00:12:783 (2) - spacing's too big.
01:21:449 (7) - insert a break time after that note.
02:10:116 (4) - NC here, to keep consistency with the same pattern at chorus?
03:28:116 (1) - add a finish.

[Haruka's Oni]
I guess there's nothing I could complain about.

[Insane]
00:42:561 (3,1) - I guess that will play a bit better with some more spacing between these two notes, like 1.2-1.3x or so.
00:47:894 (3) - ^
01:05:005 (5) - move it a bit higher.
01:06:116 (2,3,4,5) - higher spacing perhaps?
01:26:783 (7) - NC
01:37:449 (5) - not sure about it, but maybe NC here as well?
01:42:116 (7) - NC
02:01:449 (2) - you're missing a lot of good places to put a finish at in these 30 seconds, here's an example.
02:11:449 (8) - NC
02:49:449 (1) - you're missing a finish.
02:54:783 (7) - NC
03:33:227 (9) - I'd place a NC here.


also, colours 5 and 6 are kinda blending with each other. I'd suggest RGB: 170/0/0 on the sixth one
Haruka_old
315 posts
Joined February 2011
Haruka_old
change my diff from Inner Oni to Oni in the OP

[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:22:783 (1) to 00:25:449 - I would make this segment like this (and the first note would be a D):
  2. 00:30:338 (31) - if you applied the above change, just change this note to a d for consistency.
  3. 00:33:449 (43) - finisher here for consistency?
  4. 00:55:005 (125) - perhaps delete to give players a beat of rest?
  5. 00:57:672 (137) - ^
  6. 01:01:672 (151) - maybe move this to 01:01:894 to stay on the downbeats (and make it a k instead)?
  7. 01:03:227 (156) and 01:03:894 (158) - delete these to be consistent with how you use the finishers in the next phrase.
  8. 01:06:561 (168) - d for consistency to 01:01:227 (149).
  9. 01:07:227 (171) - make this a k to better suit the drums in this part?
  10. 01:11:894 (185,186) - I would consider making these two notes d k to flow better.
  11. 01:13:005 - you could add a d here to help the building of density.
  12. 01:14:561 (193,194) - these could also be d k if you want.
  13. 01:18:338 (208) - you should delete this to break up this long section of just 1/2.
  14. 01:26:561 (238) - a d to contrast the end of the phrase here: 01:29:227 (250).
  15. 01:37:227 (285) - if you followed the above, make this a d for consistency.
  16. 01:41:227 (302,303) - these could be k d to flow better.
  17. 01:43:894 (313,314) - to be consistent with the above, you should change this from k D to d k (the finisher is uncalled for here).
  18. 01:50:561 (335,336) - instead of d D, you can just have it as k d to end this phrase (you don't really need a finisher here).
  19. 01:53:449 (347) - don't need a finisher here either imo.
  20. 01:58:783 (367) - ^
  21. 02:01:449 (377) - ^
  22. 02:09:449 (406) - ^
  23. 02:12:338 (420,421,422) - triples right after a finisher isn't so good for playability in a muzu; just keep the d on the downbeat.
  24. 02:13:672 (427) - delete to break up the random density here.
  25. 02:23:894 (464,465) - k d for flow?
  26. 02:27:005 (477,478,479) - if you're following the guitar here, this should be k d K instead of d k D.
  27. 02:31:894 (493,494) - k d for flow.
  28. 02:35:005 (505) - you could delete this to break up the density here.
  29. 02:41:449 (528) - this finisher is inconsistent and should be removed.
  30. 02:44:338 (539) - just like the previous finisher here, remove this to give players a beat of rest.
  31. 02:48:783 (551,552) - K D instead to follow the vocal pitch change.
  32. 02:54:561 (572) - d like before.
  33. 03:01:449 (600) - remove this because there is no sound here and it breaks up the density.
  34. 03:05:227 (618) - d again.
  35. 03:09:227 (634,635) - again, I would use k d here to improve flow.
  36. 03:17:671 (671) - remove to break up density and give players a full beat rest after all that consecutive 1/2 and the finisher.
  37. 03:21:227 (685) - ^
  38. 03:25:005 (701,702,703) - tbh these finishers don't really fit and I would just map this part in instead.
  39. 03:28:338 (714) - remove for a rest.
  40. 03:31:893 (730) - ^
  41. 03:35:449 (744) - ^
  42. 03:39:227 (760,761,762) - same as before.
  43. 03:41:004 (765,766,767) - k d K would be a more fitting ending imo.
Kinda got lazy towards the end. OTL I hope this helps!
Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
Kite
wow okay ill fix the diff soon
edit: fixed most things
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Here, Kitey Kitey. I'm gonna give you a fish (modpost)

[Sakuya's Normal]
02:20:116 (5) - New combo?


[Nyquill's Hard]
* This diff have a 4 red timing section, while others have 3. Remove one of them

02:04:338 (2) - Spacing error here. It too close from previous one
02:45:449 (3) - Why finish at start? It doesn't following cymbal


[Insane]
00:49:449 (1,2) - How about making slider like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/674667
00:52:116 (2) - I saw a red sliderpoint at beginning. Is this intentional?
01:24:338 (2) - New combo?
01:37:449 (5) - ^
01:42:561 (3) - Use 1.60x distance spacing to fix this to make the jump is having an equal spacing?
02:43:449 (6,7) - Because of this, it feels like that the slider is having one repeating slider. Perhaps, remove (7) and add 1 repeating slider
02:52:338 (2) - New combo?


Good luck~
Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
Kite
gonna fix soon when I have time, thanks for the mod :3

Leorda wrote:

Here, Kitey Kitey. I'm gonna give you a fish (modpost)

[Insane]
00:49:449 (1,2) - How about making slider like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/674667 I prefer it the way it is right now
00:52:116 (2) - I saw a red sliderpoint at beginning. Is this intentional? Yes but I made it look a bit better now, I think
01:24:338 (2) - New combo? I think it's not really needed
01:37:449 (5) - ^ I think it's not really needed
01:42:561 (3) - Use 1.60x distance spacing to fix this to make the jump is having an equal spacing? Should be fine the way it is, plays good this way imo
02:43:449 (6,7) - Because of this, it feels like that the slider is having one repeating slider. Perhaps, remove (7) and add 1 repeating slider ^ same here
02:52:338 (2) - New combo? Same as before

Good luck~
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