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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 04 de abril de 2013 at 09:46:38 p.m.

Artist: Marisa De Lille
Title: Mi Mañana
Source: Digimon Tamers
Tags: Digimons Adventure My Tomorrow Terriermon Renamon Guilmon Tamer Ending mancusojuanmattos manana
BPM: 161.01
Filesize: 7218kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:

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#spanish ODs/EDs Project
Hard by mancusojuanmattos, thanks a lot!
Special thanks to Blissfulyoshi who helped me ripping the audio and video, thanks Blissy!
Last edited by Gonzvlo on , edited 18 times in total.
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Pequeño mod en la Insane :P


General:

• Agrega el Preview Point che! (Hace mil años que no mencionaba esto en mis mods xD)


Insane:

00:10:417 (3)Siento que los sonidos que aparecen en la musica para (2,3) no son lo mismo como para que tengan el mismo Hitsound. Te sugiero que en esta Nota agregues un Drum (Adidtion) Clap en lugar del Finish
00:32:764 (3)Olvidaste el Normal Hitsound al comienzo del Slider
00:37:233 (3)Yo remarcaria el 1/4 en este lugar, es bastante notorio en la musica como para ser pasado por alto. Reduce este Slider en 1/4 para remarcar esto
00:37:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)No estaria mal agregar algun Whistle en esta seccion, entran bien de bien si sigues la vocal (o lo que desees :P)
00:54:179 (1,1,1)Omg.. Dat Combo spam.. Yo creo que aca juega mejor el (1,2,3) :P
00:55:855 (1,2,3,1,2)Despues del 3-plet, el jump que pusiste juega bastante raro. Intenta reducir el jump de (3,1) y por simetria el de (1,2).
01:19:365 (6)Un New Combo entra correctamente aca.

- En general eso es lo que mas me llamo la atencion.. El resto se ve bien :3

Buee.. pero no vine por esto en realidad. Aca te dejo la Hard que prometi hace bastante xD..

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mi Mañana
TitleUnicode:Mi Mañana
Artist:Marisa De Lille
ArtistUnicode:Marisa De Lille
Creator:Gonzvlo
Version:Mancuso's Hard
Source:Digimon Tamers
Tags:Digimons Adventure My Tomorrow Terriermon Renamon Guilmon Tamer Ending
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Espero que te guste. Ahora.. TERMINA CON ESTO :P
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Gracias Mancuso, todo listo excepto el 1/4 y el ultimo NC. Y gracias por la GD.

Solo falta un poco del Easy y Normal
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Hello! I'm so sorry for taking so long to get to this. I hope you don't mind :(

By the way , I decided to skip the normal diff because it's still WIP. :3


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  • the current bitrate of .mp3 is unrankable, it needs to be under 192kbps.
  • Insane diff has a different preview time.
  • Audio lead-in for Insane diff is too short now. it needs to be at least 1500ms.



Insane

Hard



Easy
And that's all. All difficulties have a good flow and pretty solid despite the amount of mods they have recieved. Also nice song. It reminds me of my childhood. xD You can call me back for re-mod and a bubble once you think this mapset is good enough to go. Starred! :D
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THIS.
uvu dejo mi estrellita
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Lo prometido es deuda Cariño..
Image :)
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Thanks Melophobia!, many fixes applied. Also, sorry for the late response, I've been trying to finish mapping Normal and tweaking some stuff.

Thanks for the support guys!

Mancuso:

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Concuerdo con esto, lo aplique, fíjate si te parece bien.
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Melophobia wrote:

Hard

Thanks for the mod, Melo. (Remember, deleted lines mean fixed :P)

Gonz: Para mi queda mejor AR7 en mi diff y AR8 en la Insane, pero bueno, no me molesta para serte sincero :P.
Con respecto al pattern mencionado por erufen, no creo que sea dificil, es una Hard y ahi un NC para diferenciar el cambio de Spacing. Me parece que no es un pattern dificil, por eso lo mantendre

Diff. :D (Perdon por la demora)
Code:
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TitleUnicode:Mi Mañana
Artist:Marisa De Lille
ArtistUnicode:Marisa De Lille
Creator:Gonzvlo
Version:Mancuso's Hard
Source:Digimon Tamers
Tags:Digimons Adventure My Tomorrow Terriermon Renamon Guilmon Tamer Ending mancusojuanmattos
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Last edited by mancuso_JM_ on , edited 2 times in total.
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Easy


    This AR is WAY too low, even for an Easy diff. The spacing and SV require something higher. AR +1 please.

  • 00:01:844 (3) - I see you didn't use a newcombo here, but you used it in every other difficulty (even the guest). Maybe add a new combo here?
  • 00:11:160 (1) - Imo, you could map something here, and start the spinner on 00:12:278. Even in that location, the spinner shouldn't be too short for a beginner. Besides, the beginning of this spinner (as it actually is) doesn't fit with the song.
  • 00:16:750 (3) - You could really add a note here on x:220 y:280. You know, it sounds a bit empty here.
  • 00:31:283 (5) - Same as ^ here. Don't forget the normal-hitnormal sound you used.
  • 01:06:685 (2,3) - I think you messed up something in here. Shouldn't these be symmetrical? :P


Normal


  • 00:25:135 (2) - This seems a bit unpredictable rhythm for a beginner player. You could add a hitcircle in the red tick then make the slider 1/2 shorter, beginning in 00:25:321 (2). That'd ruin your symmetry, but it'd play much better.
  • 01:16:374 (5) - Push the middle point up so this slider is actually symmetric?


Hard


  • 00:12:092 (1) - This spinner should begin 1/2 later. There's no reason, musically, to begin it where it is.
  • 00:16:378 (4) - Shouldn't you have the normal-hitnormal sound at the start of this slider?
  • 00:25:321 (2) - Same as above, in this hitcircle.
  • 00:38:364 (3) - Bugged slider? D:
  • 00:46:562 (3,5) - (3) should go 2 grids right and (5) should go 2 grids left. This blanket is currently not-so-much good looking ):
  • 01:04:076 (5) - Maybe make this blanket with (4)'s end?
  • 01:14:883 (1,2,3,4) - These blankets don't look too beautiful to me, but it's up to you. :P
  • 01:17:864 (1) - Move the red point up so this slider is actually symmetric.


Insane


    Amazing difficulty. There's not much to say, besides the AR seems a bit too low, and the ending part with the faster sliders and back-and-forth patterns is almost unplayable this way. I strongly recommend you to AR+1 here.

  • 01:11:529 (4,4) - Maybe ctrl+g these sliders (separately?) They have better flow with their respective (3)s when reversed.

Good luck. As always, great map, so there's not much to mod. Great job!
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Oh.. I post my previous fixes, some seconds ago xD. Well, I'm here so, I'll fix that too.

Blue Dragon wrote:

Hard


  • 00:12:092 (1) - This spinner should begin 1/2 later. There's no reason, musically, to begin it where it is. Explained in Melophobia's mod.
  • 00:38:364 (3) - Bugged slider? D: Yes xD. Fixed in my previous update.
  • 01:04:076 (5) - Maybe make this blanket with (4)'s end? Nah, I'm fine with that as it is.
  • 01:14:883 (1,2,3,4) - These blankets don't look too beautiful to me, but it's up to you. :P I like them xD. I'll leave it as it is.

Thanks BD ;) (As I said to Melo, Removed lines mean fixed).
Meh.. OLVIDATE DEL CODIGO EN EL POST PREVIO, mejor usa este xD

Diff.
Code:
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 56879
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mi Mañana
TitleUnicode:Mi Mañana
Artist:Marisa De Lille
ArtistUnicode:Marisa De Lille
Creator:Gonzvlo
Version:Mancuso's Hard
Source:Digimon Tamers
Tags:Digimons Adventure My Tomorrow Terriermon Renamon Guilmon Tamer Ending mancusojuanmattos
BeatmapID:216367
BeatmapSetID:71438

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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480,176,7061,2,0,P|480:256|512:332,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
348,332,7807,85,2,0:0:0:0:
188,324,8179,2,0,P|108:320|50:268,1,160,8|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,8738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,140,8925,2,0,P|172:144|229:195,1,160,8|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,288,9670,2,0,P|417:339|497:343,2,160,8|2|8,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
388,132,10788,5,2,0:0:0:0:
382,126,10974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,120,11160,1,8,0:3:0:0:
255,41,11533,2,0,B|256:112|192:112|192:183,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12092,12,4,13769,0:0:0:0:
176,40,14328,22,0,P|256:76|336:40,1,180.000006866455,8|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,140,15260,2,0,P|368:220|404:300,1,180.000006866455,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
500,224,16191,1,8,0:3:0:0:
500,224,16378,2,0,P|508:160|481:113,1,120.000004577637,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
312,52,17309,53,8,0:3:0:0:
312,52,17495,2,0,P|264:88|252:148,1,120.000004577637,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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72,308,18800,2,0,P|128:320|164:368,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,356,19359,1,0,1:0:0:0:
340,320,19731,54,0,L|412:224,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,164,20290,1,4,0:3:0:0:
352,180,20477,2,0,L|280:276,2,120.000004577637,0|0|4,0:0|1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
392,68,21595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,68,21781,2,0,P|316:24|240:64,1,180.000006866455,4|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
148,140,22713,1,4,0:3:0:0:
128,320,23272,54,0,B|176:264|236:288|256:320|256:320|276:288|336:264|384:320,2,300.000011444092,4|4|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
128,320,25321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
24,256,25694,53,4,0:0:0:0:
200,104,26253,1,4,0:3:0:0:
200,104,26439,2,0,P|256:124|312:104,1,120.000004577637,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,160,26998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,160,27184,2,0,P|256:196|144:160,1,240.000009155274,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,80,28302,1,4,0:3:0:0:
4,188,28675,53,0,0:0:0:0:
136,312,29234,1,4,0:3:0:0:
136,312,29420,2,0,P|176:264|232:252,2,120.000004577637,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,364,30538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,364,30724,2,0,P|298:351|338:303,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,260,31283,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,200,31470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,140,31656,54,0,P|340:60|260:52,2,180.000006866455,4|4|0,0:3|0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
276,180,33147,2,0,P|197:171|145:91,2,180.000006866455,4|4|0,0:3|0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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432,132,36873,1,4,0:3:0:0:
412,52,37059,1,8,0:3:0:0:
332,44,37246,2,0,L|292:56,1,34.0000006484985,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,168,37618,6,0,P|192:188|136:152,1,136.000002593994,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
60,124,38177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,204,38364,2,0,P|110:258|88:328,1,136.000002593994,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
28,272,38923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,272,39109,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,356,39482,6,0,B|214:371|230:343|250:311|293:324,1,136.000002593994,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,208,40227,2,0,B|365:194|345:226|329:254|282:239,2,136.000002593994,0|2|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
492,68,41345,2,0,B|449:54|429:86|413:114|366:99,1,136.000002593994,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
212,44,42090,5,2,0:0:0:0:
60,100,42463,2,0,L|24:164,1,68.0000012969971,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,240,42836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,200,43022,2,0,L|149:140,1,68.0000012969971,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
228,120,43394,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,88,43581,86,0,P|356:128|428:120,1,136.000002593994,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
423,285,44326,2,0,P|355:279|303:319,1,136.000002593994,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,384,44885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,319,45071,2,0,P|156:279|89:285,1,136.000002593994,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
132,356,45630,1,8,0:3:0:0:
380,356,46003,5,8,0:3:0:0:
380,356,46189,1,0,1:0:0:0:
400,196,46562,2,0,P|384:132|327:96,1,136.000002593994,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,47121,2,0,B|282:190|254:174|254:174|226:190|189:175,1,136.000002593994,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,96,47680,2,0,P|128:132|112:196,2,136.000002593994,0|2|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,48612,1,8,0:3:0:0:
420,44,48984,2,0,L|488:60,1,68.0000012969971,8|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,240,49543,6,0,P|476:304|400:320,1,151.999995941162,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,232,50102,2,0,P|343:248|307:312,1,151.999995941162,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,312,50661,1,0,1:0:0:0:
124,304,51034,2,0,B|112:256|76:248|32:236|36:180,1,151.999995941162,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,140,51593,2,0,B|127:186|163:194|207:206|204:256,1,151.999995941162,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,348,52152,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,216,52524,6,0,P|416:220|499:111,2,227.999993911743,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,54015,2,0,P|223:73|375:81,2,303.999991882324,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,344,55878,2,4,L|256:304,2,37.9999989852906,4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
340,376,56251,53,4,0:0:0:0:
350,365,56623,1,4,0:0:0:0:
364,352,56996,1,4,0:0:0:0:
504,280,57369,70,0,P|464:216|480:136,1,151.999995941162,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,60,57928,2,0,P|460:56|416:72,1,75.9999979705811,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
364,124,58300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,196,58487,2,0,P|300:272|328:344,1,151.999995941162,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
184,196,59232,2,0,P|212:272|185:342,1,151.999995941162,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
40,276,59977,6,0,P|80:280|117:269,1,75.9999979705811,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,204,60350,1,4,0:3:0:0:
100,128,60536,2,0,P|132:104|172:92,1,75.9999979705811,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,80,60909,2,0,P|285:68|317:44,2,75.9999979705811,4|2|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,160,61468,5,2,0:0:0:0:
243,171,61841,1,4,0:3:0:0:
254,182,62213,1,2,0:0:0:0:
265,193,62586,1,4,0:3:0:0:
420,236,62958,85,4,0:0:0:0:
480,288,63145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,356,63331,1,4,0:3:0:0:
376,312,63517,2,0,P|340:328|300:324,2,75.9999979705811,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,248,64076,2,0,P|252:244|216:316,1,151.999995941162,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,316,64822,102,0,L|8:156,1,151.999995941162,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,88,65381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,136,65567,2,0,L|149:289,2,151.999995941162,4|2|4,3:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
144,68,66499,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,24,66685,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,76,66871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,124,67058,1,4,0:3:0:0:
92,228,67430,22,0,B|48:288|60:376|184:408|256:336|256:336|328:408|452:376|464:288|420:228,1,607.999983764649,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,84,69293,1,4,0:3:0:0:
292,140,69480,2,0,P|256:156|220:140,1,75.9999979705811,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,84,69852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,12,70039,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,64,70225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,12,70411,6,0,P|392:12|454:62,1,151.999995941162,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
476,220,71157,2,0,P|413:270|337:270,1,151.999995941162,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
223,157,71902,2,0,P|183:153|147:173,2,75.9999979705811,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
200,236,72461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,236,72647,2,0,P|132:272|68:228,1,151.999995941162,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
36,56,73393,86,0,P|108:36|178:60,1,151.999995941162,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,108,73952,1,4,0:3:0:0:
333,60,74138,2,0,P|404:36|476:56,1,151.999995941162,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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136,304,76933,1,8,0:3:0:0:
44,172,77305,1,8,0:3:0:0:
44,172,77492,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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464,52,78796,2,0,P|500:72|512:107,1,75.9999979705811,4|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
486,263,79355,54,0,B|468:362|408:226|284:202|256:362|256:362|228:202|104:226|44:362|28:264,1,640,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81032,12,0,83827,0:0:0:0:
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Easy


    This AR is WAY too low, even for an Easy diff. The spacing and SV require something higher. AR +1 please. True! Fixed.

  • 00:01:844 (3) - I see you didn't use a newcombo here, but you used it in every other difficulty (even the guest). Maybe add a new combo here? I wasn't sure about this but okay.
  • 00:11:160 (1) - Imo, you could map something here, and start the spinner on 00:12:278. Even in that location, the spinner shouldn't be too short for a beginner. Besides, the beginning of this spinner (as it actually is) doesn't fit with the song. I agree, speed mapping sucks.
  • 00:16:750 (3) - You could really add a note here on x:220 y:280. You know, it sounds a bit empty here. I'll leave this as it is, sometimes it's okay to skip some beats in easier diffs.
  • 00:31:283 (5) - Same as ^ here. Don't forget the normal-hitnormal sound you used. ^
  • 01:06:685 (2,3) - I think you messed up something in here. Shouldn't these be symmetrical? :P Ooops, probably when re-calculates slider lengths


Normal


  • 00:25:135 (2) - This seems a bit unpredictable rhythm for a beginner player. You could add a hitcircle in the red tick then make the slider 1/2 shorter, beginning in 00:25:321 (2). That'd ruin your symmetry, but it'd play much better. Re-mapped this part.
  • 01:16:374 (5) - Push the middle point up so this slider is actually symmetric? Oops, silly sliders again



Insane


    Amazing difficulty. There's not much to say, besides the AR seems a bit too low, and the ending part with the faster sliders and back-and-forth patterns is almost unplayable this way. I strongly recommend you to AR+1 here. I agree, I changed it because somebody mentioned but I agree with 8

  • 01:11:529 (4,4) - Maybe ctrl+g these sliders (separately?) They have better flow with their respective (3)s when reversed. I tried this but I don't like it, I believe it should be okay in its current state.

Good luck. As always, great map, so there's not much to mod. Great job!


Thanks a lot BD, I'll get to you map soon! (really soon)
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As asked in-game.
DIGIMOOOOOON♥

Easy and Normal has the same Slider Velocity.. owo

Easy
  • 00:01:099 (1,2,1) - Like I told you in-game, I suggested you to make something else here because, normally, beginners are not experienced enough to play, click or even see stacked notes. You should be doing the same thing on 00:56:251 (1,2,1) - since you made a copy/paste.
  • 00:36:128 (1) - I think I can understand what you did there with your new combo, but I swear it's represented in a weird and inconsistent way. Actually, this slider is a one-combo-object and on the previous pattern, you haven't added a new combo at this place. Is it because it's getting louder here? I just wanted to point that, since I am not sure about this one-combo
  • 01:01:841 (4) - This slider is misplaced, it's not placed symmetrically with the previous slider and it doesn't keep the same spacing consistency with the previous and the next object. It's a bit obvious if you see it like this. To make it symmetric and have a consistent spacing, move this slider to x:316 y:266
  • 01:03:704 (2,4) - Both of these sliders are not symmetric, which makes a weird looking pattern. I suggest you to make them more symmetric for the only reason that it's going to make it looking better and have a nicer spacing. All you have to do is to move the second (the middle) node two grids up for the Slider (2) and two grids down for the slider (4)
    Example
    Image
  • 01:10:411 (3) - Wrong spacing between the previous and the next object. It's me or you have some problem with your copy/paste? LOL
  • 01:14:883 (1,2) - Again a spacing problem here owo

Normal
Really awesome diff c:!

Hard
  • 00:56:251 (1,2,3) - Try to keep the same spacing consistency with these objects, since they're consistent on the timeline, they should also be placed consistently on the playground.
  • 01:16:001 (3) - This slider could be looking better if it was a copy/paste from the previous slider, right now, it looks like you have copied it but have placed it in the wrong place.
  • 01:19:355 (1) - This slider is really, really looking good! I like it. The only thing is, both start and end nodes are unsymmetrical. You should make the fix, which is pretty minor.

You're now my idol. I have nothing to say for Insane.
Good luck Gonzvlo!
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Gabe wrote:
As asked in-game.
DIGIMOOOOOON♥

Easy and Normal has the same Slider Velocity.. owo

Easy
  • 00:01:099 (1,2,1) - Like I told you in-game, I suggested you to make something else here because, normally, beginners are not experienced enough to play, click or even see stacked notes. You should be doing the same thing on 00:56:251 (1,2,1) - since you made a copy/paste.
  • 00:36:128 (1) - I think I can understand what you did there with your new combo, but I swear it's represented in a weird and inconsistent way. Actually, this slider is a one-combo-object and on the previous pattern, you haven't added a new combo at this place. Is it because it's getting louder here? I just wanted to point that, since I am not sure about this one-combo
  • 01:01:841 (4) - This slider is misplaced, it's not placed symmetrically with the previous slider and it doesn't keep the same spacing consistency with the previous and the next object. It's a bit obvious if you see it like this. To make it symmetric and have a consistent spacing, move this slider to x:316 y:266
  • 01:03:704 (2,4) - Both of these sliders are not symmetric, which makes a weird looking pattern. I suggest you to make them more symmetric for the only reason that it's going to make it looking better and have a nicer spacing. All you have to do is to move the second (the middle) node two grids up for the Slider (2) and two grids down for the slider (4)
    Example
    Image
  • 01:10:411 (3) - Wrong spacing between the previous and the next object. It's me or you have some problem with your copy/paste? LOL
  • 01:14:883 (1,2) - Again a spacing problem here owo

Fixed all the sliders/spacing problems caused by "recalculation of sliders" and tweaked those stacks.

Normal
Really awesome diff c:!

Same here!


You're now my idol. I have nothing to say for Insane.
Good luck Gonzvlo!


Thanks a lot, Gabe!
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mod4mod :3



General
- http://puu.sh/2bZrM - your mp3 has unrankable bitrate, consider to encode to 192 etc etc etc, you know very well.
- i'd set audio lead in to 2,5 seconds


Insane

Everything is great, but, i do not liked only this 01:14:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - , in my opinion you can improvise with patterns much better here.


Hard
00:30:538 (4,5,6,7,1) - stacky spacing, i think you can improvise here muuuuuuch better, bcz these patterns have strong accent among whole map.
00:41:345 (3) - this slider supposed to be unlike 2 previous ones.
00:56:251 (1,2,3) - please adjust spacing. '3' goes a bit away.
01:02:958 (1,2,3,4) - ... please adjust spacing till you get perfect square.
01:06:499 (4,5,6,7) - ^


Normal
00:12:278 (3) - i don't know how much this is acceptable for middling difficulties, bcz about 50% of slider is hidden
00:54:015 (1) - i feel that second repeat is too sudden for middling players.


Easy
Clear ~.


Damn, it's really strange, but i like spanish version much more then the original one lol. Good luck ~
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Louis Cyphre wrote:
mod4mod :3



General
- http://puu.sh/2bZrM - your mp3 has unrankable bitrate, consider to encode to 192 etc etc etc, you know very well. Oops fixed.
- i'd set audio lead in to 2,5 seconds Already increased it by 1s but I'll consider it!


Insane

Everything is great, but, i do not liked only this 01:14:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - , in my opinion you can improvise with patterns much better here. I actually like this shape but I'll change it if somebody else mentions it



Normal
00:12:278 (3) - i don't know how much this is acceptable for middling difficulties, bcz about 50% of slider is hidden I'm guessing it's okay because it's intuitive but I'll keep that in mind
00:54:015 (1) - i feel that second repeat is too sudden for middling players. Tweaked this pattern


Damn, it's really strange, but i like spanish version much more then the original one lol. Good luck ~


Thanks a lot Louis! o3o
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