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BURTON - Himawari no Youni

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Gloria Guard
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 2월 4일 월요일 at 오후 7:50:24

Artist: BURTON
Title: Himawari no Youni
Source: Mashiro-iro Symphony -Love is pure white-
Tags: zejky Palette Sena Airi Sakuno Sakura
BPM: 85
Filesize: 5899kb
Play Time: 03:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.26 stars, 300 notes)
  2. Zej's Normal (2.11 stars, 172 notes)
Download: BURTON - Himawari no Youni
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My second rank map XD
Zejky
hi Grolia-chan :D
my diffculty of me
hope you like it :D
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

Zejky wrote:

hi Grolia-chan :D
my diffculty of me
hope you like it :D


yep~ Thank you !
PROGUY
Hi there, from my mod queue.

[General]
Your mp3 has a bit rate of 320 kilobits/sec (kbps). You should reduce this to 192 kbps for rank. I recommend using Audacity for this ;)
Also your mp3's title says "向日葵のように". You should put that in the Title (not Romanised Title). I'm not sure for the Artist, so you'll have to check the sources for that.

[Zej's Normal]
No problem to me :)

[Hard]
02:09:300 (7) x-axis position of this slider should be 338 for a clean overlap.

Hope this helps, even if it's just a little! Here's a star!
Good luck and Happy New Year!
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there, from my mod queue.

[General]
Your mp3 has a bit rate of 320 kilobits/sec (kbps). You should reduce this to 192 kbps for rank. I recommend using Audacity for this ;)
Also your mp3's title says "向日葵のように". You should put that in the Title (not Romanised Title). I'm not sure for the Artist, so you'll have to check the sources for that.

[Zej's Normal]
No problem to me :)

[Hard]
02:09:300 (7) x-axis position of this slider should be 338 for a clean overlap.

Hope this helps, even if it's just a little! Here's a star!
Good luck and Happy New Year!




Thank you modding ~
Sushi
Hello,

[Zej's Normal]
Please set a Preview Point for your map
01:04:359 (1) - This slider, if it finished 1/4 later, would really sound better. at the moment finishing on the 1/2 sounds really weird imo.
Also, the new combo are not very consistent x_x I don't know exactly what you were following for this, but w/e this is a very minor issue.

[Hard]
Please set a Preview Point for your map
02:54:477 (4) - Make this slider end 1/4 later (on the red tick) definitely sounds better (I know you wanted to do it according to the violin, but sounds really weird >_<)
03:03:135 (1) - Just a minor suggestion, but having a note then a spinner would be better (it gives more impact for the final note, with a finish ;) )

That's a good map, we lack of slow songs (huhu)
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

Sushi wrote:

Hello,

[Zej's Normal]
Please set a Preview Point for your map
01:04:359 (1) - This slider, if it finished 1/4 later, would really sound better. at the moment finishing on the 1/2 sounds really weird imo.
Also, the new combo are not very consistent x_x I don't know exactly what you were following for this, but w/e this is a very minor issue.

[Hard]
Please set a Preview Point for your map
02:54:477 (4) - Make this slider end 1/4 later (on the red tick) definitely sounds better (I know you wanted to do it according to the violin, but sounds really weird >_<)
03:03:135 (1) - Just a minor suggestion, but having a note then a spinner would be better (it gives more impact for the final note, with a finish ;) )

That's a good map, we lack of slow songs (huhu)


Thank you modding
Zejky

Sushi wrote:

Hello,

[Zej's Normal]
Please set a Preview Point for your map
01:04:359 (1) - This slider, if it finished 1/4 later, would really sound better. at the moment finishing on the 1/2 sounds really weird imo.
Also, the new combo are not very consistent x_x I don't know exactly what you were following for this, but w/e this is a very minor issue.
That's a good map, we lack of slow songs (huhu)
thank you Sushi
sorry for delay
i fix all :D
update
http://puu.sh/1IWlf
B2IN
Hi~ Gloria Guard :3
m4m

[General]
lead-in 3초는 너무 긴거같아요 1.5 ~ 2초 정도로 바꿔주세요.
letterbox 체크 해제해주세요.
하드 난이도 bg가 좀 눌렸어요 ㅠ 이런거 보면 못 참는 성격이라.. 필요하시면 제대로된거 구해드릴게요.
[Zej's Normal]
00:57:300 (1) - you should add finish on slider start. sound much better.
[Hard]
01:31:182 (1,2) - 노래 흐름 상 박자는 이게 더 어울릴듯 싶어요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/554346
02:38:947 (3,4,5) - 여기는 연타 보다는 1/2 슬라이더로 놓는게 더 어울리네요.

나머지 박자쪽은 딱히 건들건 없어보이네요. GL~
Zejky

B2IN wrote:

Hi~ Gloria Guard :3
m4m

[General]
lead-in 3초는 너무 긴거같아요 1.5 ~ 2초 정도로 바꿔주세요. | down 2.5s
letterbox 체크 해제해주세요.| because my diff have break should i think keep it same nothing bad :D
[Zej's Normal]
00:57:300 (1) - you should add finish on slider start. sound much better. | ok i add it
나머지 박자쪽은 딱히 건들건 없어보이네요. GL~
thank you a lot B2IN

my diff update
http://puu.sh/1JgcC
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

B2IN wrote:

Hi~ Gloria Guard :3
m4m

[General]
lead-in 3초는 너무 긴거같아요 1.5 ~ 2초 정도로 바꿔주세요.
letterbox 체크 해제해주세요.
하드 난이도 bg가 좀 눌렸어요 ㅠ 이런거 보면 못 참는 성격이라.. 필요하시면 제대로된거 구해드릴게요.
[Zej's Normal]
00:57:300 (1) - you should add finish on slider start. sound much better.
[Hard]
01:31:182 (1,2) - 노래 흐름 상 박자는 이게 더 어울릴듯 싶어요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/554346
02:38:947 (3,4,5) - 여기는 연타 보다는 1/2 슬라이더로 놓는게 더 어울리네요.

나머지 박자쪽은 딱히 건들건 없어보이네요. GL~

OK~ all fixed! 좋은 bg있으시면 보내주시면 감사해요 ~
Poggo
Hi from my mod Q~


Hard

00:27:300 - better make this slider double, it better follow for music

Diff looks good, but plz fix all nc~ Better put on every white tick for consistency~
Example:
00:24:829 - remove NC
00:26:241 - add NC
00:28:359 - remove NC
00:29:065 - add NC e.t.c Plz fix this all~

Zej's Normal

Same problem with NC~ Fix this~

It's all~ Nice mapset~ good luck~
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q~


Hard

00:27:300 - better make this slider double, it better follow for music

Diff looks good, but plz fix all nc~ Better put on every white tick for consistency~
Example:
00:24:829 - remove NC
00:26:241 - add NC
00:28:359 - remove NC
00:29:065 - add NC e.t.c Plz fix this all~

Zej's Normal

Same problem with NC~ Fix this~

It's all~ Nice mapset~ good luck~
All fix Thank you ~!
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard
:)
Zejky

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q~

Zej's Normal

Same problem with NC~ Fix this~
ok this is
02:20:594 (1) - NC
02:24:829 (1) - NC
02:31:888 (1) - NC
02:43:182 (5) - NC
02:47:418 (1) - NC
02:54:477 (1) - NC
02:58:712 (1) - NC

It's all~ Nice mapset~ good luck~
done
thank you Pie-chan
Update
Dark Fang
하나의 해바라기 처럼

[General]

change mp3 file's bitrate to 192kbps
unify Leat-In Time, inconsistent in Normal diff


[Zejky]

AR +1 ?
00:16:006 (4) - move up 1 grid
01:12:829 (5) - about this note, you will use Ctrl + >, Ctrl + G and tilt some angle, flow more good
02:23:418 (2) - move right 1 grid for distance

[Huard]

00:41:241 (4) - remove this note
01:17:065 (1) - 다음 노트들과 함께 한칸 아래로
01:28:006 (4) - 한칸 위로 헝헝
02:34:182 (4) - remove this note


모딩할거 없는걸 들이대다니, 차라리 사약을 먹이소
Sonnyc
Normal:

-- No big issue about spacing etc, but I've done a lot of Clap suggestions based on the song.

00:22:006 (4) - Delete Clap at the end
00:31:888 (3) - ^
01:01:888 (1) - Delete Clap at the start
01:02:947 (2) - ^
01:04:359 (1) - ^
01:05:771 (3) - ^
01:05:418 (2) - Delete Clap
01:07:182 (4) - ^
01:07:535 (5) - Delete Clap at the start
01:30:124 (3) - ^
01:35:418 (4) - Delete Clap at the reverse
01:40:712 (4) - Delete Clap at the start
01:47:418 (5) - Delete Clap at the end
01:52:712 (5) - Delete Clap at the start
01:55:888 (3) - Delete Clap at the end
02:00:477 (2) - Delete Clap at the start
02:07:182 (3) - Delete Clap at the end
02:10:359 (3) - Delete Clap at the start
02:11:418 (1) - Delete Clap at the reverse

Hard:

00:32:947 (6) - Add Clap
00:33:477 (8) - 그리드 풀고 0.80으로 맞춰보세요. 한 (99,255)?
00:56:418 (5) - Add Clap
00:56:594 (6) - Drum-Clap 은 어때요?
01:17:065 (1) - 1칸 내리면 좋았을텐데... 이후 패턴에 차질이 생기네요 뭐 (2)도 같이 내려도 되겠네요
01:36:830 (1) - 1칸 오른쪽
01:52:888 (6,7) - 슬라이더를 따라서 둥글게 배치해 보세요
02:07:888 (5) - http://puu.sh/1JQqg
02:21:300 (1) - ^
02:13:182 (7) - (224,256)에 두는게 더 좋을거 같아요
02:25:888 (3) - 클랩
02:31:535 (7,8) - 여기에서는 1.00x로 두셔서 (8)의 끝이 02:30:477 (6) 끝과 만나는게 더 좋아요
02:47:065 (4) - (404,336)에 두셔서 완벽한 네모로!

잘 만드셨네요. 모딩 더 받으시면 버블도 가능하겠어요
Zejky

Dark Fang wrote:

하나의 해바라기 처럼

[General]

change mp3 file's bitrate to 192kbps
unify Leat-In Time, inconsistent in Normal diff


[Zejky]

AR +1 ? | no, it very fast for a diffculty normal
00:16:006 (4) - move up 1 grid | ok
01:12:829 (5) - about this note, you will use Ctrl + >, Ctrl + G and tilt some angle, flow more good | That is my deliberate
02:23:418 (2) - move right 1 grid for distance | ok

모딩할거 없는걸 들이대다니, 차라리 사약을 먹이소

Sonnyc wrote:

Normal:

-- No big issue about spacing etc, but I've done a lot of Clap suggestions based on the song.

00:22:006 (4) - Delete Clap at the end | I will not fix because it does not emphasize the music changes. however, i will add point green 30% volume
00:31:888 (3) - ^ | I will not fix because it does not emphasize the music changes
01:01:888 (1) - Delete Clap at the start | it almost follow music
01:02:947 (2) - ^ | ^
01:04:359 (1) - ^ | ^
01:05:771 (3) - ^ | ^
01:05:418 (2) - Delete Clap | ^
01:07:182 (4) - ^ | ^
01:07:535 (5) - Delete Clap at the start | ^
01:30:124 (3) - ^ | it's the intention me
01:35:418 (4) - Delete Clap at the reverse | it's the intention me
01:40:712 (4) - Delete Clap at the start | it's the intention me
01:47:418 (5) - Delete Clap at the end | it's the intention me
01:52:712 (5) - Delete Clap at the start | it's the intention me
01:55:888 (3) - Delete Clap at the end | it's the intention me
02:00:477 (2) - Delete Clap at the start | it's the intention me
02:07:182 (3) - Delete Clap at the end | it's the intention me
02:10:359 (3) - Delete Clap at the start | it's the intention me
02:11:418 (1) - Delete Clap at the reverse | it's the intention me
I know what you do is good, I had done so earlier, but, I do not want it too boring, should .............

잘 만드셨네요. 모딩 더 받으시면 버블도 가능하겠어요
thank everyone very much
Update
[ Zzz ]
Hard

02:08:967 (6,7) - 위치를 바꿔보는게 어떰?

02:30:497 (6) - http://puu.sh/1LAoe 저렇게 해보는건 어떰?

Zej'Mormal

02:36:144 (4) - http://puu.sh/1LAtq > http://puu.sh/1LAtb Can you try
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard
Thank you [ Zzz ]
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