1. Hard (4,95 stars, 414 notes)
2. Insane (4,86 stars, 536 notes)
3. Normal (4,12 stars, 280 notes)
4. senaya's Easy (1,54 stars, 137 notes)

Irreversible wrote:

hi m4m

Static Noise Bird wrote:

[General]
Yay more Caravan Palace <3 pls check my map too heuhuhua done
Move Clash to tags done
Snap all the green timing sections I don't see any reasons to do it. I've checked all hitsounds after BPM-changing. One BAT said me that this is ok.

[Easy]
Resnap all the notes
01:01:230 (1) - End at 01:02:277
01:15:381 (4) - Could be blanketing the next one
02:09:176 (1) - Blanket for the previous one's end could be better

[Normal]
Everything's cool here.

[Hard]
00:45:104 (6) - After this, insert break, like in other diffs. Just a mistake

[Insane]
Offset: 9140 Oh, sh~
00:55:280 (6,8) - Stack these just a SL
01:28:682 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You could use a proper square here I think, it's ok
01:50:195 (6) - Ctrl+G done

Overall one of the best things in this game for a while, amazing song, and the mapset plays well, especially Insane. Favourited and starred, hoping to see this ranked soon.

femaleLogic wrote:

Фаст чек. Мне лениво копаться в мапе по два часа, да.

Sieg wrote:

Отмечусь

1. Your bitrate is too high, try to encode your mp3, then you probably will have to fix offset a bit. It will take 3-5 minutes!
2. Disable letterboxes during breaks, it looks really wairrd here with the video :<

1. Your diff settings are too high! Even with such an energetic song you should reduce AR/OD and HP drain. I'm pretty sure that AR3/ HP Drain 2 and OD 2 will fit here better.
2. Try to add one more breaks song is fast and it may be too tiring for beginners!
3. 00:29:536 (1) - nazi - this pattern kinda breaks your consistent comboing, it fits with vocals but combos are TOO short. It may stress players, tho
4. 01:23:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2) - same as above. I don't really approve your comboing here, try to keep something consistent.
5. 01:39:737 - drag break to here, dis will give you an awesome effect, trust me!
6. 02:05:213 (1) - it's all about your comboing. 1 object long combo isn't really ok, it just looks weird here! C'mon, you can fix it in awesome way!
7. 02:47:673 - place here a circle. Beginners will expect something like "final note" here. Don't confuse them.
   
   Fix comboing and diff settings. (and unsnapped green lines). So you will have a perfect diff here.

1. Your OD/HP are even lower than HP/OD in [Easy]. Try to use HP/OD 4 to keep mapset balanced! And possibly AR5, current one seems kinda low here.
2. I'm quite unsure about your breaks. How about using one more break here?
3. 00:40:198 (2) - try to put it on white tick (00:40:292) it's better to keep here consistent rhythm 1/6 is quite hard, y'know
4. 00:52:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - for beginner players it's quite a stressful thing to play many circles in a ro and for a bit more advanced players it's boring. So, no one likes many-circles-in-a-row-patterns.
5. 01:02:372 - nazi - it's better to remove unused green lines here, man. :<
6. 02:17:213 - this pattern is quite hard for normal, but still looks cute. how about replacing stacks with sliders, it'll fit with Normal diff better, i guess.
7. 02:20:499 - for consistent hythm and enjoyable flow, place a circle here! It'll make rhythm more consistent, which is easier to play and plays easier here.

1. Consider using AR8 here, it fits with SV and patterns. But this is a [Hard] diff, tho.
2. HP Drain +1 you have consistent flow, so it is reasonable. What's more it'll make mapset better-balanced.
3. Distance spacing here is quite big x1.5 but somehow it fits with the song.
4. 01:48:795 (1) - x1.7 spacing here, if it's jump, make it bigger, so we'll be able to see and feel it!
5. 01:50:493 (7) - and other similar patterns, I'd unstack (7) to make it easier to read. It looks so awesoooooome <3 man, I approve your sliders!
6. 02:47:673 (4) - try to unstack it and place somewhere else with a new combo on it. people like "epic" final notes!

1. Try not to overuse jumps, in some parts it feels totally overused.
2. Try to reduce HP Drain by 1 tick. Due to empty parts like 01:20:771 - HP Drain 8 may be too stressfyl here :<

-Bakari- wrote:

YEAAA AWESOME SONG
It ain't right, babe, no
It ain't right, no no

[General]

1. Your bitrate is too high, try to encode your mp3, then you probably will have to fix offset a bit. It will take 3-5 minutes!
2. Disable letterboxes during breaks, it looks really wairrd here with the video :<

[Normal]

1. Your OD/HP are even lower than HP/OD in [Easy]. Try to use HP/OD 4 to keep mapset balanced! And possibly AR5, current one seems kinda low here. HP\OD were increased
2. I'm quite unsure about your breaks. How about using one more break here?
3. 00:40:198 (2) - try to put it on white tick (00:40:292) it's better to keep here consistent rhythm 1/6 is quite hard, y'know I think it is playable for now because of low OD
4. 00:52:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - for beginner players it's quite a stressful thing to play many circles in a ro and for a bit more advanced players it's boring. So, no one likes many-circles-in-a-row-patterns. Same as above. There's an (Easy).
5. 01:02:372 - nazi - it's better to remove unused green lines here, man. :< Ok
6. 02:17:213 - this pattern is quite hard for normal, but still looks cute. how about replacing stacks with sliders, it'll fit with Normal diff better, i guess.I'll look into it.
7. 02:20:499 - for consistent hythm and enjoyable flow, place a circle here! It'll make rhythm more consistent, which is easier to play and plays easier here.I don't know how i can put note in the empty place in (Normal) and make this diff more easily. This rhytm starts with the vocal.

[Hard]

1. Consider using AR8 here, it fits with SV and patterns. But this is a [Hard] diff, tho. No
2. HP Drain +1 you have consistent flow, so it is reasonable. What's more it'll make mapset better-balanced. Yes
3. Distance spacing here is quite big x1.5 but somehow it fits with the song.
4. 01:48:795 (1) - x1.7 spacing here, if it's jump, make it bigger, so we'll be able to see and feel it! It was just a mistake, man. There's no jump anymore
5. 01:50:493 (7) - and other similar patterns, I'd unstack (7) to make it easier to read. It looks so awesoooooome <3 man, I approve your sliders!Probably later. I think it is readable for now.
6. 02:47:673 (4) - try to unstack it and place somewhere else with a new combo on it. people like "epic" final notes!Ok

[Insane]

1. Try not to overuse jumps, in some parts it feels totally overused.
2. Try to reduce HP Drain by 1 tick. Due to empty parts like 01:20:771 - HP Drain 8 may be too stressfyl here :<
   I don't want to do it because it's still an insane-diff

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Rock it fo me, baby! ~

Awesome! ♥

1. с настройками ты что-то загнул, HP2 AR3 OD2
2. 00:34:065 (3) - я бы добавила нк ибо не вижу причины прерывание комбопаттерна (1,2,1,2)
3. 00:43:123 (3) - ^
4. 00:45:387 - перетащи начало брейка до сюда?
5. 00:53:313 (2) - ох, я яростный противник 1/2 репитов в изях когда это не очень оправдано, лучше заменить на два серкла/1/1 слайдер (если не согласен, то добавь миссд клап на конец)
6. 01:00:107 (4) - ^
7. 01:04:636 (2) - как насчет вистла сюда?
8. 01:09:165 (2) - ^
9. 01:26:149 (3) - нк тут ибо оно 100% мисснутое по комбопаттерну
10. 01:28:414 (5) ; 01:37:472 (3) - та же самая фигня как в начале (в конце тоже, но писать не буду, если понравится, посмотришь)
11. 01:39:595 - сюда б тоже начало брейка перетащить
12. 02:00:118 (3) - нк по паттерну тоже
13. 02:05:213 (1) - удалить нк мб? о3о
14. 02:47:673 - сюда б ноту с софт финишем

1. 00:31:140 (2) - без софтсамплсета намного лучше
2. 00:35:669 (4) - снапни это по 1/6 как в предыдущей части, чтобы ритм одинаковый и там и там был
3. 00:44:727 (4) - ^
4. 00:45:387 - ох брейку бы здесь начаться :с
5. 01:02:372 - даже в изе это место мапнуто, лучше его тоже замапать :с
6. 01:30:018 (3) - тоже бы по 1/6 снапнуть
7. 01:39:171 (4) - ^
8. ]01:53:324 - брейк б сюда перетащить :3
9. 02:28:991 (3) - ^
10. 02:37:483 (2) - ^
11. 02:47:107 (3) - ^

1. 01:02:277 (5) - я бы его стакнула с предыдущим (7) http://puu.sh/2rNmB
2. 01:10:864 (3) - ^
3. 01:14:544 (8) - смотрится чутка поприятнее, если обвести им начало (4) http://puu.sh/2rNqd
4. 01:32:094 (5) - отзеркалить (3) мб? :с
5. 01:53:324 - брейк б сюда перетащить :3
6. 02:03:232 (4) - репит должен стоять на 1/4, звучит намного лучше
7. 02:19:933 - такой рандомно пустой кусок, лучше мапнуть

1. 00:43:123 (4,1) - мб нк местами поменять?
2. 00:47:841 (3) - я бы нк поставила, тут на нем уже новый инструмент включается в игру (яхз что это, труба наверное, но tl;dr это смотрится супер)
3. 00:55:861 (8) - хорошенько стакни его под начало (6)
4. 01:53:324 - то же самое с брейком
5. 02:03:137 (1,2) - то же что и в харде, (2) должен быть по 1/4 снапнут
6. 02:19:711 - тоже что-то как-то рандомно пустой кусок

1. Insane: NCs were fixed, one missnaped slider was fixed, some nazi-stuff
2. Hard: some nazi-stuff, missnapped slider
3. Normal: misplaced soft-normal, one break was revorked

1. Nothing to point out

• - 01:39:359 (x) - Move this break to 01:39:737, fits very well with the music
  - 02:05:213 (1) - Why the new combo here? Remove it

• - 00:45:529 (x) - Add a break like the others difficulties?

• - 01:10:864 (3) - Stack this note with (6) - 01:09:448

• - 02:45:409 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern looks boring when you play, in my opinion you should unstack these notes