Satou Shizuku & Sakakibara Yui - Eternal Melodia (Short Ver.‬ · forum‬

terametis

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2012-10-28T17:25:26+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年11月10日 at 4:12:44

Artist: Satou Shizuku & Sakakibara Yui
Title: Eternal Melodia (Short Ver.)
Source: Ryuuyoku no Melodia -Diva with the blessed dragonol-
Tags: whirlpool NewRulerNA Patchouli wring ReySHeL
BPM: 165
Filesize: 18926kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:

Collab (2.05 stars, 112 notes)
N.Ruler (4.9 stars, 429 notes)
Normal (4.15 stars, 166 notes)
Patchy (5 stars, 425 notes)
ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii (4.83 stars, 463 notes)
ReySHeL's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 605 notes)
wring's Hard (4.87 stars, 299 notes)

Download: Satou Shizuku & Sakakibara Yui - Eternal Melodia (Short Ver.)
Download: Satou Shizuku & Sakakibara Yui - Eternal Melodia (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ummmmm
[collab(Easy)] NewRulerNA and me
[Nornal] me
[wring's Hard] wring
[N.Ruler] NewRulerNA
[Patchy] patchouli
[Taiko] ReySHeL

Last edited by terametis 2013-11-09T19:14:10+00:00, edited 35 times in total.

NewRulerNA

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NewRulerNA 2012-10-28T18:24:36+00:00

竜翼のメロフォビア

those

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those 2012-10-28T18:27:53+00:00

terametis wrote:
Eternal Melophobia (9.28 now on sale)[/list]

LOL

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-10-28T18:30:50+00:00

terametis wrote:
Extera (4.97 stars, 54 notes)
Eternal Melophobia (9.28 now on sale)

.......

alacat

osu! Alumni

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alacat 2012-10-29T14:24:50+00:00

Eternal Melophobia　o.o

NewRulerNA

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Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2012-11-15T13:46:41+00:00

この譜面のソースは"Ryuuyoku no Melodia -Diva with the blessed dragonol-"です
kds plz

Laurier

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Joined February 2011

Laurier 2013-01-05T21:17:42+00:00

mod4mod

General
Eastyがコラボ？みたいなので譜面のTOPページに誰と誰のコラボか書いたほうがいいかなーと思います。
SBとかで名前出たりしないみたいなので、作った人がわかったほうがうれしい

KIAIについて　終わりを01:44:737 に設定したほうが個人的に好きです。KIAI入れるのは見た感じここまでかなーって思います。特にNormalとかはKIAI入れてspin回せやおらって感じなのかなってちょっと疑問に思いました

Collab
00:04:373 (2) - http://puu.sh/1JUmV こういう音取りの方がEasyっぽくていいんじゃないかなと思います。好みの関係もあると思いますけど自分は若干リズムに違和感も感じました
00:07:282 (2) - こちらも同様に
00:12:737 (2) - 00:13:464 - この位置に音のアクセントがあるので、ここにnoteの始点or終点をおいたほうがbetter
00:41:646 (5) - BGMに何も音がないところにnoteがあるので不自然になっています。次の白tickに移動したほうが音的にはbetter.けどEasyということを考えると今の音取りの方が単純にクリックすることだけ考えると簡単なので、お任せで
01:49:464 (1) - リバースなしのsliderにして終点を01:50:373 にするのはどうでしょうか。途中のtickでclapは拾えますし、この赤tickの音拾ってからのspinの方が流れが自然です。clapをtickで拾ってる場所はほかにもあるので変に浮くこともないと思います

Nromal
00:11:737 (1) - この難易度のAR３だとsliderの途中でspinがプレッシャーかけてくるから開始は次の赤tickでいいかなーっとおもいます。曲の終わりの方は赤tickに設定してあるのでこっちも赤にすれば統一性がでるんじゃないでしょうか。
00:29:100 (1,2) - stackさせるパターンがいくつかありますが、微妙な間空くのはわかりにくいのでstackさせない方がいいかも？個人的にはstackは1/1のみで統一の方がいいかなーと思います。が、1/2でおいてる場所結構たくさんあるのでそっちは指摘しても直すのあれなのでまぁいいっかなって思います
00:52:373 (1) - 00:52:555 - にnoteを追加して、始点を00:52:737 - に変更。vocalとってそうなパートなので歌に合わせてspinも回し始めたい感じです
01:24:373 - サビ前半とここからではNCのパターンが変わっているので、統一したほうがbetter
01:49:464 (1) - ここNC必要かな？青いのがなんか浮いてる気がします

Wring's
00:05:009 - ここにnote追加してvocal拾いましょう。全体を見ると３連打を嫌っているわけではなさそうなので、後に連打でvocal拾ってるところに合わせてこっちも拾っちゃいましょう
00:17:464 - NCのパターンに違和感を感じます。ここにNC
00:18:919 (1) - NC削除
00:20:373 (4) - NC追加
00:21:828 (1) - NC削除　が1番自然かなと思います
00:30:009 (2,3,4,5) - ちょっと流れが不自然かなーとプレイしてて感じました。http://puu.sh/1JYt2　適当に向きを変えただけですがこっち向きの方が自然な流れを作れますよかったら考慮してみてください
00:41:828 - note 追加+CS:1のフィニッシュ追加　バスドラムの音聞こえるので、ここおさせたほうが次つなげやすいと思いました
01:25:100 (3) -個人的な好みで提案ですが　http://puu.sh/1JYA7　こっち側に移動させるのはどうでしょうか
01:43:282 (4) - 削除してもいいかも。vocalとっておいてるのかなとは思いますが、永遠のぉ↑のぉの部分は取らない方が締りがいい気がします

N.Ruler
00:13:554 (3) - この子は(2)(4)に対して上じゃなくしたにおいてあげたほうが流れがいいはず
00:16:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ここのﾋﾟｯのパターンについて　00:16:009 (1) 　00:16:190 (3) end 00:16:918 (7) 00:17:100 (9) につける感じはどうでしょうか
00:22:372 (4) - ここが極端なアンチジャンプになっててすごく詰まる感じがします。http://puu.sh/1JYTl このぐらい離したほうが苦なく遊べました
00:55:099 (1) - このぐらいの長さのsliderになるとwaypoint２個使ったほうが綺麗に見える法則　http://puu.sh/1JYWa 特にnoteを覆ってるのに対して強いので暇だったら変更してみてください
01:25:463 (4) - これの中心が01:25:827 (1) - の着弾点を覆う形たちの方がbetter　http://puu.sh/1JYZk
01:29:827 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - このへんの音取りと配置の提案　http://puu.sh/1JZ3Z　パターンを作るなら(2)の場所からかなって思います。(6)(1)はsliderにしてもいいかもしれない。(5)(6)のsliderが赤tickからはじまるのはNG
↑変更した場合は01:31:463 (1,2) - のNCも入れ替え
01:43:099 (7) - hardと同じくここは赤tickで単発でびしっと終わったほうがいい
01:43:645 (1) - vocal的に01:43:828 - この位置にnote奥音取りが好ましいかな
01:49:464 (1) - 最後の方spinばっかりになってるのでこれの開始もvocalに沿った位置でいいんじゃないかなと思います。01:48:919 ~01:50:555 このへんまでnoteおけますよね^-^
01:52:373 (1) - 同様にnote置ける感じ

Insane
00:07:282 (1,2) - ここをSVゆっくりにするなら、00:04:373 (1,2,3) - ここもBGMのパターン的にゆっくりで合わせたほうがbetter
00:15:828 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - BGM的にはﾀﾀﾀ　ﾀﾀﾀじゃなくてﾀﾀﾀﾀﾀ　ﾀﾀﾀ　なので　00:15:919 - ここにnote置ける可能性　だが今の方が押しやすいし特に大きい問題にはなっていないのでお任せします
01:12:009 (1) - このnoteは直前の(7,8)の3連だからのつなぎになるようにくっつけてもいいんじゃないでしょうか
01:40:373 - ここのバスドラム音の主張が少し激しいのでnoteおいてあげたい(4,5)にそのままstackさせておいてはどうでしょうか
01:48:373 (1) - ここからのパートも今まで同様vocal取っておいたほうがbetter

Patchy
00:20:009 (7) - streamの終わりsliderにして流してあげたほうが次につなげやすいと思います。http://puu.sh/1JZRg なんか後ろにうっすら見えるの囲めばそれっぽく見えるかも
00:33:282 (4) - 00:41:282 (3) - こだわりなら大丈夫だけどslider音がすごく耳につくlol
01:17:828 (3,4) - CTR+G? のほうが(6)に自然に繋げられます
01:56:464 (1) - spinの音量調節して徐々に下げましょう

土下座がとまらない

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2013-01-06T05:27:21+00:00

Laurier wrote:
mod4mod

General
Eastyがコラボ？みたいなので譜面のTOPページに誰と誰のコラボか書いたほうがいいかなーと思います。
SBとかで名前出たりしないみたいなので、作った人がわかったほうがうれしい

KIAIについて　終わりを01:44:737 に設定したほうが個人的に好きです。KIAI入れるのは見た感じここまでかなーって思います。特にNormalとかはKIAI入れてspin回せやおらって感じなのかなってちょっと疑問に思いました

Collab
00:04:373 (2) - http://puu.sh/1JUmV こういう音取りの方がEasyっぽくていいんじゃないかなと思います。好みの関係もあると思いますけど自分は若干リズムに違和感も感じました

このnoteは画像のような位置で音を取ることが可能で、私は現在の方が単位時間あたりにおける平均note数を減らすことが出来、Easyらしさを持たせることができるように思えました
00:07:282 (2) - こちらも同様に
^
00:12:737 (2) - 00:13:464 - この位置に音のアクセントがあるので、ここにnoteの始点or終点をおいたほうがbetter
no changed. Easyとしてのバランスとボーカルの伸ばしている音に合わせる感じのイメージを持ったnoteで、この箇所に関しては修正を行いません
00:41:646 (5) - BGMに何も音がないところにnoteがあるので不自然になっています。次の白tickに移動したほうが音的にはbetter.けどEasyということを考えると今の音取りの方が単純にクリックすることだけ考えると簡単なので、お任せで
あまり納得はできていませんがfixed. ただしnoteは削除
01:49:464 (1) - リバースなしのsliderにして終点を01:50:373 にするのはどうでしょうか。途中のtickでclapは拾えますし、この赤tickの音拾ってからのspinの方が流れが自然です。clapをtickで拾ってる場所はほかにもあるので変に浮くこともないと思います
no changed.01:50:373 の音を拾うとスピナーとのバランスが微妙になる感じがしました

N.Ruler
00:13:554 (3) - この子は(2)(4)に対して上じゃなくしたにおいてあげたほうが流れがいいはず

no changed. 画像のように真横に動く流れをイメージしたもので、ここに回転要素を付けておらず、このあとの大きな変化をより活かすためのバランスとなっています
00:16:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ここのﾋﾟｯのパターンについて　00:16:009 (1) 　00:16:190 (3) end 00:16:918 (7) 00:17:100 (9) につける感じはどうでしょうか
no changed. 試してみましたがこのBPMだとこのStream中にかなり短い間で何度もなっていて浮いてしまう感じがあり、私にはそれが今より良くなるとは思えず変更を保留としました
00:22:372 (4) - ここが極端なアンチジャンプになっててすごく詰まる感じがします。http://puu.sh/1JYTl このぐらい離したほうが苦なく遊べました
fixed
00:55:099 (1) - このぐらいの長さのsliderになるとwaypoint２個使ったほうが綺麗に見える法則　http://puu.sh/1JYWa 特にnoteを覆ってるのに対して強いので暇だったら変更してみてください
たしかにそれは理にかなっているのですが、その箇所では横に引っ張っていく流れを作っており、カーブを付け加えることでその流れに妙な歪みが発生してしまいます・・・・故にno chengedです
01:25:463 (4) - これの中心が01:25:827 (1) - の着弾点を覆う形たちの方がbetter　http://puu.sh/1JYZk
no changed. そこは延長線上にnoteを置いた配置にしています
01:29:827 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - このへんの音取りと配置の提案　http://puu.sh/1JZ3Z　パターンを作るなら(2)の場所からかなって思います。(6)(1)はsliderにしてもいいかもしれない。(5)(6)のsliderが赤tickからはじまるのはNG
↑変更した場合は01:31:463 (1,2) - のNCも入れ替え
no changed. 01:30:190 (2,3) - 01:30:554 (4,5) がボーカルの大きさと合わせたジャンプを入れているというのと、01:30:736 (5,6) - が曲ではなくボーカルに従ったバランスとなっており、曲全体がボーカルに従ったバランスに対してこの箇所だけが細かく見た時に浮いてしまうので今回は変更をしません
01:43:099 (7) - hardと同じくここは赤tickで単発でびしっと終わったほうがいい
no changed. ボーカルの母音がその位置で終わり、私にはここで区切ったほうがバランスがよくなるように思えました
01:43:645 (1) - vocal的に01:43:828 - この位置にnote奥音取りが好ましいかな
fixed
01:49:464 (1) - 最後の方spinばっかりになってるのでこれの開始もvocalに沿った位置でいいんじゃないかなと思います。01:48:919 ~01:50:555 このへんまでnoteおけますよね^-^
プレイヤーたちに長いスピナーをプレイさせ苦痛を与えたかったのでこうしています。HRを潰すという意味でもこれがその役目を担っています
ですがこれに関しては変更の可能性も十分あります。すみませんが今はこのままでいきたいと思います
01:52:373 (1) - 同様にnote置ける感じ
^

ty

Collab

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Source:Ryuuyoku no Melodia -Diva with the blessed dragonol-
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terametis

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terametis 2013-01-06T06:04:02+00:00

Laurier wrote:
mod4mod

General
Eastyがコラボ？みたいなので譜面のTOPページに誰と誰のコラボか書いたほうがいいかなーと思います。
SBとかで名前出たりしないみたいなので、作った人がわかったほうがうれしい
SBは分からないのでとっぷにかいておきます！！

KIAIについて　終わりを01:44:737 に設定したほうが個人的に好きです。KIAI入れるのは見た感じここまでかなーって思います。特にNormalとかはKIAI入れてspin回せやおらって感じなのかなってちょっと疑問に思いました
僕の難易度はKIAI修正

Nromal
00:11:737 (1) - この難易度のAR３だとsliderの途中でspinがプレッシャーかけてくるから開始は次の赤tickでいいかなーっとおもいます。曲の終わりの方は赤tickに設定してあるのでこっちも赤にすれば統一性がでるんじゃないでしょうか。修正
00:29:100 (1,2) - stackさせるパターンがいくつかありますが、微妙な間空くのはわかりにくいのでstackさせない方がいいかも？個人的にはstackは1/1のみで統一の方がいいかなーと思います。が、1/2でおいてる場所結構たくさんあるのでそっちは指摘しても直すのあれなのでまぁいいっかなって思います　配置に追い詰められた結果統一するのをあきらめました
00:52:373 (1) - 00:52:555 - にnoteを追加して、始点を00:52:737 - に変更。vocalとってそうなパートなので歌に合わせてspinも回し始めたい感じです　リズム自体を変更して叩きやすくなったと思いますたぶん
01:24:373 - サビ前半とここからではNCのパターンが変わっているので、統一したほうがbetter　修正!
01:49:464 (1) - ここNC必要かな？青いのがなんか浮いてる気がします　ちょいちょいリズム自体変更

Insane
00:07:282 (1,2) - ここをSVゆっくりにするなら、00:04:373 (1,2,3) - ここもBGMのパターン的にゆっくりで合わせたほうがbetter　このままで!!!!!(強気)
00:15:828 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - BGM的にはﾀﾀﾀ　ﾀﾀﾀじゃなくてﾀﾀﾀﾀﾀ　ﾀﾀﾀ　なので　00:15:919 - ここにnote置ける可能性　だが今の方が押しやすいし特に大きい問題にはなっていないのでお任せします　とりあえず保留　後で暗黒配置になるかもしれません
01:12:009 (1) - このnoteは直前の(7,8)の3連だからのつなぎになるようにくっつけてもいいんじゃないでしょうか　暗黒配置をつくりたいのでこのままで
01:40:373 - ここのバスドラム音の主張が少し激しいのでnoteおいてあげたい(4,5)にそのままstackさせておいてはどうでしょうか　僕的にはここはvocalを重視したいのでこのままで!l
01:48:373 (1) - ここからのパートも今まで同様vocal取っておいたほうがbetter　01:48:373 (1,2) - にnoteを(個人的には)おきたいのですが、そうするとvocalで取ると浮いてしまうよな気がしたのでこの音鳥にしました。指摘が多ければ修正するかも

thanks mod~~<33

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2013-01-07T15:26:44+00:00

Laurier wrote:
Wring's
00:05:009 - ここにnote追加してvocal拾いましょう。全体を見ると３連打を嫌っているわけではなさそうなので、後に連打でvocal拾ってるところに合わせてこっちも拾っちゃいましょう no, つめすぎもどうかなあと思うので.
00:17:464 - NCのパターンに違和感を感じます。ここにNC
00:18:919 (1) - NC削除
00:20:373 (4) - NC追加
00:21:828 (1) - NC削除　が1番自然かなと思います ok
00:30:009 (2,3,4,5) - ちょっと流れが不自然かなーとプレイしてて感じました。http://puu.sh/1JYt2　適当に向きを変えただけですがこっち向きの方が自然な流れを作れますよかったら考慮してみてください changed to another pattern
00:41:828 - note 追加+CS:1のフィニッシュ追加　バスドラムの音聞こえるので、ここおさせたほうが次つなげやすいと思いました no, ここだけ取ると不自然になります.
01:25:100 (3) -個人的な好みで提案ですが　http://puu.sh/1JYA7　こっち側に移動させるのはどうでしょうか ummmm,,,,,,とりあえずは保留で.......
01:43:282 (4) - 削除してもいいかも。vocalとっておいてるのかなとは思いますが、永遠のぉ↑のぉの部分は取らない方が締りがいい気がしますいれかえました.

thx mod

http://puu.sh/1KOsw

qkenan

134 posts

Joined October 2010

qkenan 2013-01-10T15:31:16+00:00

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

Mod from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_
Sorry for taking so long.

General

In Collab may use sb to show different creator？umm since it's just an Easy that doesnt matter...

Normal

00:52:555 (1) - The spinner ends at not very good point...end a little earlier?
01:36:009 (1) - Bad shape

wring's Hard

00:17:464 (5) - Make it longer to one-beat slider? I think this would fit the music better.
00:29:100 (1,5) - Shapes not good...The music dont let me feel there is a reverse here
01:17:828 (3) - The slider doesnt surround the circle well, fix it
01:34:737 (1,2) - Not recommend to use 1/6 beat snap here and make it like this……even the rhythm is it.

N.Ruler

AR-1，this helps player read the notes
00:19:464 Add a note here?
00:25:736 (7) - Move it a little left and up
01:22:918 (3,4) - ③end and ④head more closer ?
01:34:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The sequence not good...Use regular diagonal jump ?
01:36:009 (2,3,3) - Heads + Finsh
01:44:918 (1,1,1,1) - Too lazy for you...And too tired for player especially who is hard at spinning

Insane

Awesome SV ! But I'm not very fond of it...

00:05:100 (3) - Not necessary to shape like this, just use regular 3-point slider.
00:15:828 (2,1,2,3) - The stack makes the white 1/2 circle and after triple circles hard to see.Remove stack?
00:43:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too far,I think
01:21:828 (2,3,1) - The jump feels weird
01:27:646 (2) - move it a bit farther ?
01:11:919 (2) - Remove it

Patchy

00:36:737 (2,3) - Make them one straight up and the other straight down？->> Ctrl+J & Ctrl+H
01:08:009 (4) - Not recommended for stack becauze your previous SE would confuse the player and make them feel here is a 1/4 circle.
01:20:555 (3) - Dont stack ? It doesnt feel good.
00:52:919 (2) - ^

Really Nice Diff

Good luck~

terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2013-01-11T10:40:04+00:00

qkenan wrote:
Normal
00:52:555 (1) - The spinner ends at not very good point...end a little earlier?　ahh, my missed. Fix~~
01:36:009 (1) - Bad shape little change

Insane
Awesome SV ! But I'm not very fond of it...
00:05:100 (3) - Not necessary to shape like this, just use regular 3-point slider.　sorry, I liked state of now.
00:15:828 (2,1,2,3) - The stack makes the white 1/2 circle and after triple circles hard to see.Remove stack?　no, this diff is Insane. I think player can see it.
00:43:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too far,I think　sorry, keep now state.
01:21:828 (2,3,1) - The jump feels weird hum, I dont think weird
01:27:646 (2) - move it a bit farther ?　little change
01:11:919 (2) - Remove it　I prefer this design.

thanks for mod :3

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2013-01-11T11:31:50+00:00

qkenan wrote:
General
In Collab may use sb to show different creator？umm since it's just an Easy that doesnt matter...
placement and rhythm was made me, and hitsound was terametis. so not needs SB imo. but if terametis want to add, I would cooperate it.

N.Ruler
AR-1，this helps player read the notes
no changed. AR8 is not easy to read
00:19:464 Add a note here?
no changed. this section should have gap imo
00:25:736 (7) - Move it a little left and up
why....?
01:22:918 (3,4) - ③end and ④head more closer ?
^
01:34:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The sequence not good...Use regular diagonal jump ?
no changed. I wanted to add jump in 01:34:736 (3) and 01:35:099 (5).
01:36:009 (2,3,3) - Heads + Finsh
no changed. I think this finish does not fit...sry
01:44:918 (1,1,1,1) - Too lazy for you...And too tired for player especially who is hard at spinning
I really wanted to give pain to the player. but I changed

Good luck~

thanks

N.Ruler

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wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2013-01-12T21:17:57+00:00

qkenan wrote:
wring's Hard
00:17:464 (5) - Make it longer to one-beat slider? I think this would fit the music better. no, the main melody is finished here imo.
00:29:100 (1,5) - Shapes not good...The music dont let me feel there is a reverse here oh...already finished but unsuccessfully updated, but ok change a little
01:17:828 (3) - The slider doesnt surround the circle well, fix it no, I don't intend to surround it.
01:34:737 (1,2) - Not recommend to use 1/6 beat snap here and make it like this……even the rhythm is it.umm...but I can hear the beat, so no changed

Thanks

http://puu.sh/1MVib

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,703 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2013-01-17T12:42:51+00:00

lω-。)/☆

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-01-19T09:39:19+00:00

Hello.

For M4M on your queue.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General

BG and BG8's file size are ~400 and ~300 KBs, respectively. Why don't you try to reduce them to around ~200 KBs so you can make the package size smaller?

>Collab

I don't care about the fact that Easy is a collab diff, but I don't like to see an Easy diff named Collab, because Collab is usually used for collaboration diffs of Insane difficulty or harder. Name this diff Collab Easy instead?
00:17:464 (1,2,3) - Umm... This looks weird, IMO. Make them look like this?
00:37:828 (4,1) - Swap NC?
01:00:009 (2) - Make it like this instead?

>Normal

00:11:282 (3) - Make this a 1/2 slider that repeat once?
00:29:646 (2) - A 3/2 stack is confusing here, so unstack?
00:49:828 (1) - Remove NC?

>wring's Hard

00:04:373 - Whistle?
00:16:009 - Make two 1/4 sliders that repeats twice (like 00:16:737 (3,4)) and remove 00:16:191 (1,2)?
00:32:191 (2,3) - Remove (3) and make (2) repeat once?
01:56:009 (5,1) - Make (5) repeat once more and move (1)'s start to 01:56:464? Make sure to add finish on 01:56:373.

>N.Ruler

AR8 is enough. AR9 is too fast for this. With AR8, this diff is far more fun to play and intuitive.

>Insane

No, don't use OD8 please; it's too accuracy-demanding for a map like this. Use OD7.
00:15:464 - Add note and stack below 00:15:282 (1)?
00:15:646 - ^
00:31:919 - Add note and stack above 00:32:009 (4)?
00:41:646 (3) - NC?
00:42:373 (6) - ^
00:43:464 (4) - Move to 00:43:555 and stack above 00:43:646 (5)?
01:05:464 (1,2,1,2) - A jump, and then an anti-jump. Make the two of them the same (jump or anti-jump). I can't see why you should switch between them here...
01:11:828 (1,2,1,1,1,1) - NOPE. These 1/4 jumps are very hard to read and is very, VERY unexpected. Arrange them into a slightly more sane pattern. Yep, they fit with the song's atmosphere, but it's just too unintuitive, IMO.
01:19:646 (1) - Remove NC?
01:21:100 (1) - ^
01:23:646 (1,2,3) - Umm, these 1/4 jumps are also really awkward to play...

>Patchy

00:03:464 - Remove whistle?
00:05:464 - ^
00:06:919 (3) - ^
00:08:009 - ^
00:08:737 - Whistle?
00:09:100 - Remove whistle?
00:09:646 - ^
00:10:737 - Add circle to follow the vocal here?

Okay, that's it I guess.

Good luck on the way

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2013-01-19T11:04:58+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
Hello.

For M4M on your queue.

>Collab
I don't care about the fact that Easy is a collab diff, but I don't like to see an Easy diff named Collab, because Collab is usually used for collaboration diffs of Insane difficulty or harder. Name this diff Collab Easy instead?
no changed. I really dislike "Easy Collab". It is uncool. In addition, "Collab" is the name that is used in a variety of difficulty.
00:17:464 (1,2,3) - Umm... This looks weird, IMO. Make them look like this?
no changed. these placement has symmetry. so I did not fix it.
00:37:828 (4,1) - Swap NC?
fixed
01:00:009 (2) - Make it like this instead?
no changed. this part is silently. so it too has a lot of rhythm
>N.Ruler
AR8 is enough. AR9 is too fast for this. With AR8, this diff is far more fun to play and intuitive.
sry, no changed. this diff has some polygon placement. it is hard to see in AR8 imo.

Good luck on the way

thanks~

Collab

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terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2013-01-19T11:43:08+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
Hello.
>General
BG and BG8's file size are ~400 and ~300 KBs, respectively. Why don't you try to reduce them to around ~200 KBs so you can make the package size smaller?
hmm, keep state of the now. Honestly, I'm not familiar with it, so I may try later.

>Normal
00:11:282 (3) - Make this a 1/2 slider that repeat once?
Since I dont like that pattern, I keep it
00:29:646 (2) - A 3/2 stack is confusing here, so unstack?
That's right, but I can't come up with a good new one..
00:49:828 (1) - Remove NC?
No.

>Insane
No, don't use OD8 please; it's too accuracy-demanding for a map like this. Use OD7.
No, I can get over 99% easily. This map assume to be sufficiently experienced players. This map have a lot of diff, and players can choose them. so I keep it.
00:15:464 - Add note and stack below 00:15:282 (1)?　
why? I don't find this sound.
00:15:646 - ^　
^
00:31:919 - Add note and stack above 00:32:009 (4)?　
don't have sound here.
00:41:646 (3) - NC?
ok, added
00:42:373 (6) - ^　
no
00:43:464 (4) - Move to 00:43:555 and stack above 00:43:646 (5)?　
why..?
01:05:464 (1,2,1,2) - A jump, and then an anti-jump. Make the two of them the same (jump or anti-jump). I can't see why you should switch between them here...　
I place it because change vocal here. I asked to test many experienced players, everyone is not confused here.　
01:11:828 (1,2,1,1,1,1) - NOPE. These 1/4 jumps are very hard to read and is very, VERY unexpected. Arrange them into a slightly more sane pattern. Yep, they fit with the song's atmosphere, but it's just too unintuitive, IMO.
no.
01:19:646 (1) - Remove NC?
No. This is a slider that is completely overlap. I put it as fun for me, NC is better visibility.
01:21:100 (1) - ^
^
01:23:646 (1,2,3) - Umm, these 1/4 jumps are also really awkward to play...
Fun for me :3

thanks for mod<3

ReySHeL

612 posts

Joined March 2012

ReySHeL 2013-02-21T05:14:05+00:00

Taiko Oni diff finished

http://puu.sh/25YOj

~~Taiko Muzukashii完成次第ここに貼りますね！~~

Taiko Muzukashii
http://puu.sh/260v7

Taiko OniとMuzukashiiのBG変えておいていただけると助かります >w<
今のままだと2つかぶってるので;w;

Lundlerol

651 posts

Joined May 2011

Lundlerol 2013-02-21T07:53:28+00:00

Hi all~
Irc mod~

Let's Mod~

SPOILER

16:33 Lundlerol: よし
16:33 *Lundlerol is listening to Satou Shizuku & Sakakibara Yui - Eternal Melodia (Short Ver.)
16:33 Lundlerol: これ今まともにできたわ
16:33 ReySHeL: おお
16:33 ReySHeL: どうだった？
16:34 Lundlerol: んとー
16:34 Lundlerol: サビのところ気になったかなーって
16:34 ReySHeL: fm
16:34 Lundlerol: 01:24:191 (2,3,1) - 
16:34 Lundlerol: これやったら
16:35 Lundlerol: 01:24:373 (1) - 
16:35 Lundlerol: ここの音目立たんよなーって
16:35 ReySHeL: hou
16:35 ReySHeL: 配置迷ったとこやw
16:36 Lundlerol: こういうのは
16:36 Lundlerol: 迷ったらあかん
16:36 Lundlerol: あとこういう部分こそ
16:36 ReySHeL: うん
16:36 Lundlerol: 強調しな
16:36 ReySHeL: D?
16:36 Lundlerol: Dだなー
16:36 ReySHeL: なる
16:39 ReySHeL: 変更したわー　ありがとう
16:39 Lundlerol: おう
16:39 Lundlerol: あと
16:39 Lundlerol: 01:12:373 (1,2,3,4,1) - 
16:39 Lundlerol: ここなんだよな
16:39 ReySHeL: あぁ
16:39 Lundlerol: 音が入ってんだわ
16:39 Lundlerol: 01:12:646 (4) - 
16:39 Lundlerol: このやらしい場所に
16:39 ReySHeL: うん
16:40 Lundlerol: これでいいか
16:40 ReySHeL: うん
16:40 Lundlerol: 01:24:191 (2,3) - 
16:40 Lundlerol: この２つは消しといたほうがいいぞ
16:41 ReySHeL: もっかい　バグってる
16:41 Lundlerol: 01:24:191 (2,3) - 
16:41 Lundlerol: w
16:41 ReySHeL: 01:24:555 - 
16:41 ReySHeL: ここと
16:41 ReySHeL: もう一個は？
16:41 Lundlerol: そこ３連だったっしょ？
16:42 ReySHeL: うん
16:42 Lundlerol: 余分な2個消した？
16:42 ReySHeL: 3連単発にってこと？
16:42 Lundlerol: 01:24:191 - 
16:42 Lundlerol: ここ消した？ってこと
16:42 ReySHeL: けした
16:42 ReySHeL: 01:24:555 - ここもか
16:43 Lundlerol: そこおいとけよww
16:44 Lundlerol: ！？
16:44 Lundlerol: 01:24:373 (1) - 
16:44 Lundlerol: ここD
16:44 Lundlerol: 01:24:191 (2,3) - 
16:44 ReySHeL: やったww
16:44 Lundlerol: ここいらん
16:44 Lundlerol: うぃ

finished
this map so good _(:3｣ _ )_

ReySHeL

612 posts

Joined March 2012

ReySHeL 2013-02-21T07:54:19+00:00

Lundlerol wrote:

Hi all~
Irc mod~

Let's Mod~

SPOILER

16:33 Lundlerol: よし
16:33 *Lundlerol is listening to Satou Shizuku & Sakakibara Yui - Eternal Melodia (Short Ver.)
16:33 Lundlerol: これ今まともにできたわ
16:33 ReySHeL: おお
16:33 ReySHeL: どうだった？
16:34 Lundlerol: んとー
16:34 Lundlerol: サビのところ気になったかなーって
16:34 ReySHeL: fm
16:34 Lundlerol: 01:24:191 (2,3,1) - 
16:34 Lundlerol: これやったら
16:35 Lundlerol: 01:24:373 (1) - 
16:35 Lundlerol: ここの音目立たんよなーって
16:35 ReySHeL: hou
16:35 ReySHeL: 配置迷ったとこやw
16:36 Lundlerol: こういうのは
16:36 Lundlerol: 迷ったらあかん
16:36 Lundlerol: あとこういう部分こそ
16:36 ReySHeL: うん
16:36 Lundlerol: 強調しな
16:36 ReySHeL: D?
16:36 Lundlerol: Dだなー
16:36 ReySHeL: なる
16:39 ReySHeL: 変更したわー　ありがとう
16:39 Lundlerol: おう
16:39 Lundlerol: あと
16:39 Lundlerol: 01:12:373 (1,2,3,4,1) - 
16:39 Lundlerol: ここなんだよな
16:39 ReySHeL: あぁ
16:39 Lundlerol: 音が入ってんだわ
16:39 Lundlerol: 01:12:646 (4) - 
16:39 Lundlerol: このやらしい場所に
16:39 ReySHeL: うん
16:40 Lundlerol: これでいいか
16:40 ReySHeL: うん
16:40 Lundlerol: 01:24:191 (2,3) - 
16:40 Lundlerol: この２つは消しといたほうがいいぞ
16:41 ReySHeL: もっかい　バグってる
16:41 Lundlerol: 01:24:191 (2,3) - 
16:41 Lundlerol: w
16:41 ReySHeL: 01:24:555 - 
16:41 ReySHeL: ここと
16:41 ReySHeL: もう一個は？
16:41 Lundlerol: そこ３連だったっしょ？
16:42 ReySHeL: うん
16:42 Lundlerol: 余分な2個消した？
16:42 ReySHeL: 3連単発にってこと？
16:42 Lundlerol: 01:24:191 - 
16:42 Lundlerol: ここ消した？ってこと
16:42 ReySHeL: けした
16:42 ReySHeL: 01:24:555 - ここもか
16:43 Lundlerol: そこおいとけよww
16:44 Lundlerol: ！？
16:44 Lundlerol: 01:24:373 (1) - 
16:44 Lundlerol: ここD
16:44 Lundlerol: 01:24:191 (2,3) - 
16:44 ReySHeL: やったww
16:44 Lundlerol: ここいらん
16:44 Lundlerol: うぃ

finished
this map so good _(:3｣ _ )_

thanks for mod (¦3[___]

http://puu.sh/261LT

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2013-02-24T08:13:32+00:00

qkenan wrote:
wring's Hard
00:17:464 (5) - Make it longer to one-beat slider? I think this would fit the music better. no. some rhythm will be bad after that.
00:29:100 (1,5) - Shapes not good...The music dont let me feel there is a reverse here fmm....but this's my feeling sorry.
01:17:828 (3) - The slider doesnt surround the circle well, fix it it's not my intention and I don't think it's necessary. But ok, changed a little.
01:34:737 (1,2) - Not recommend to use 1/6 beat snap here and make it like this……even the rhythm is it. It's just a hard and just two sliders. I think it's readable and easy enough.

Hinsvar wrote:
>wring's Hard
00:04:373 - Whistle? no
00:16:009 - Make two 1/4 sliders that repeats twice (like 00:16:737 (3,4)) and remove 00:16:191 (1,2)? there's no beat imo. just follow the snares.
00:32:191 (2,3) - Remove (3) and make (2) repeat once? sorry keep this rhythm
01:56:009 (5,1) - Make (5) repeat once more and move (1)'s start to 01:56:464? Make sure to add finish on 01:56:373.I know you point, but I keep this because 01:56:373 (1) - 's beat is not same kind f before imo.

Thanks mod.

osu file format v12

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ArtistUnicode:Satou Shizuku & Sakakibara Yui
Creator:terametis
Version:wring's Hard
Source:Ryuuyoku no Melodia -Diva with the blessed dragonol-
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yuuki0310_old

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yuuki0310_old 2013-02-27T15:42:31+00:00

Good Map!!
これからもがんばってください！　星投げときますね！

terametis

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terametis 2013-02-28T08:38:11+00:00

☆ありがとうございます<33

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