1. Easy (1,24 stars, 119 notes)
2. Hard (4,41 stars, 260 notes)
3. Normal (3,67 stars, 209 notes)

XavierJones wrote:

Can I make a Hard diff? Q.Q

Stefan wrote:

:p :b

[General]
- No breaks? I suggest to make a Break from 01:45:785 to 01:54:356 since you don't have any Breaks. You also could short it a bit, but you really should a Break at least in Easy. maybe, but for now I want to leave as it is

[Easy]
00:51:678 (2) - Use Finish at both points, fits great with the Music. indeed
01:14:713 (3) - Clap is missing at the Middle Point. yep +
01:22:749 (2) - You can call me as Nazi Bitch, but I hate it how it touchs the Slider before. Change this part like that: http://puu.sh/1Tdjk oh you +
01:54:356 (3) - NC done +

[Normal]
00:51:678 (3) - Finish +
00:52:213 (5) - Finish at the Start and NC +
00:54:356 (1) - remove NC + comboing makes me sad so all fixed
00:55:428 (1) - remove NC +
00:56:499 (6) - NC +
00:57:571 (1) - remove NC, this works way better. :c +
01:12:571 (1) - remove NC +
01:13:642 (6) - NC +
01:14:713 (1) - remove NC +
01:23:954 (1) - Spinner should start at the red Tick. noooo, I love this way spinners
02:00:651 (1) - ^ at the white Tick same as above

[Hard]
00:51:677 (3,1) - Same thing with the Finishes what I suggested in Normal. yes, but there finishes already on 3 and start of slider, end have stronger clap sound compare to easy and normal so no needed in finish

I really could not find important things.. I will check it later again to be sure. ^_-

• 
  I see there is a lot of inconsistency in the combo patterns, is this done on purpose? I didn't list NC's on purpose, you might want to check them, most NC's are supposed to start on the big white lines.

• 
  00:39:356 (1,5) - Making these sliders have downwards curves creates more flow, which plays a lot better specially at (1)
  01:00:517 (4,1) - Kind of bothers me how this doesn't flow perfectly into eachother, Try putting 01:00:785 (1) - at x:280 y:360 and 01:02:124 (2) - at x:228 y:236
  01:02:928 (4) - If you make a downwards curve with this slider it creates a nice flowing effect with (3)
  01:28:642 (1,3) - A bit more curve would look a lot better
  01:31:856 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest making a more symmetric pattern here, as this looks pretty randomly placed
  01:34:535 (4) - CTRL+G this?
  01:55:160 (4) - A slider doesn't fit here, mostly because it starts on a red line
  02:03:463 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is a bit awkwardly placed, rather stack (5,6,7) with the other notes than putting them half over them in this way
  02:09:357 (1,2) - This could look so much better, (1) can easily serve as a blanket for (2), and a bit more curve at (1) would be nice too
  02:10:964 (4,5) - ^ (Copy paste if you fixed the previous one)
  02:31:588 (2,1) - Stack these
  02:52:213 (1,2,3,4) - This feels a bit unecessary, how about placing a note at 02:52:213 - and a spinner from 02:53:285 - till 02:55:428 - (Don't forget hitsounds)

• 
  00:38:285 (1) - Could be a better blanket
  00:42:571 (1) - ^ Copy paste the previous one
  00:47:660 (4,1) - Could definitely fom a better blanket
  00:50:071 (5) - Copy paste the previous slider after you fixed it so it's symmetric again
  00:52:213 (1,2) - Spacing has to be consistent here
  01:26:499 (1,2) - Adding a little bit more curve to these so (1) forms a blanket over (2) and (2) over (3) would be great
  02:35:071 (4,5) - Doesn't fit at all, I suggest removing (4) and either start a spinner from there, or a long slider(With or without repeat) till 02:37:749 -
  02:47:392 (1,2,3) - Kind of awkward, not really mapped on the lyrics, I suggest starting (3) at 02:47:928 -
  02:52:213 (1,2,3,4) - Same issue as hard

• 
  01:29:178 (1) - Might be a bit soon after the spinner
  01:32:928 (1,2) - Pretty bad flow here
  02:52:213 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing again

Kyshiro wrote:

Hai there, mod request from my queue. Hey!

Awesome song choice :3

General

• 
  I see there is a lot of inconsistency in the combo patterns, is this done on purpose? I didn't list NC's on purpose, you might want to check them, most NC's are supposed to start on the big white lines. Comboing makes me sad and I think this is overrated mostly by modders. Personally when plying I don't give a hmmm if map combos solid or follows this and then follows that. But I'll fix this someday maybe.

Hard

• 
  00:39:356 (1,5) - Making these sliders have downwards curves creates more flow, which plays a lot better specially at (1) I love to use this kind of flow break from time to time, I don't think that's a bad thing tho.
  01:00:517 (4,1) - Kind of bothers me how this doesn't flow perfectly into eachother, Try putting 01:00:785 (1) - at x:280 y:360 and 01:02:124 (2) - at x:228 y:236 good idea
  01:02:928 (4) - If you make a downwards curve with this slider it creates a nice flowing effect with (3) yep
  01:28:642 (1,3) - A bit more curve would look a lot better I don't think so
  01:31:856 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest making a more symmetric pattern here, as this looks pretty randomly placed actually that's a good flow and symmetry should not be all the way choice
  01:34:535 (4) - CTRL+G this? why? such a good looking and playing pattern
  01:55:160 (4) - A slider doesn't fit here, mostly because it starts on a red line actually this slider follows lyric, lyric is stronger then music in this spot and slider is 1\2 so...
  02:03:463 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is a bit awkwardly placed, rather stack (5,6,7) with the other notes than putting them half over them in this way my favorite square style, I'm so much in love with this
  02:09:357 (1,2) - This could look so much better, (1) can easily serve as a blanket for (2), and a bit more curve at (1) would be nice too the this sliders is not supposed to be blanket from the start, main idea that I don't need blankets in such symmetry pattern like 1,2,3,4,5
  02:10:964 (4,5) - ^ (Copy paste if you fixed the previous one)
  02:31:588 (2,1) - Stack these yep
  02:52:213 (1,2,3,4) - This feels a bit unecessary, how about placing a note at 02:52:213 - and a spinner from 02:53:285 - till 02:55:428 - (Don't forget hitsounds) that how I feel song, no change

Normal

• 
  00:38:285 (1) - Could be a better blanket yep it could be more curved but already a nice blanket
  00:42:571 (1) - ^ Copy paste the previous one
  00:47:660 (4,1) - Could definitely fom a better blanket indeed
  00:50:071 (5) - Copy paste the previous slider after you fixed it so it's symmetric again
  00:52:213 (1,2) - Spacing has to be consistent here actually no, this is played easily
  01:26:499 (1,2) - Adding a little bit more curve to these so (1) forms a blanket over (2) and (2) over (3) would be great little fix over here
  02:35:071 (4,5) - Doesn't fit at all, I suggest removing (4) and either start a spinner from there, or a long slider(With or without repeat) till 02:37:749 - I don't get idea why this "Doesn't fit at all", personally I think 02:35:071 (4,5) - fits fine to song
  02:47:392 (1,2,3) - Kind of awkward, not really mapped on the lyrics, I suggest starting (3) at 02:47:928 - awkward... you mean not following 1\2 lyric? but hey! that perfectly follows rhythm of song and slowdown at the end of map\song
  02:52:213 (1,2,3,4) - Same issue as hard same as for hard

Easy

• 
  01:29:178 (1) - Might be a bit soon after the spinner maybe, who knows
  01:32:928 (1,2) - Pretty bad flow here wow, that a really bad flow, I don't even remember mapping this
  02:52:213 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing again same as for hard

This mapset is fine, although it definitely needs some work on the looks(Slider forms and blankets etc.) and the flow.

For any questions you may contact me in-game

Sieg wrote:

Thank Kyshiro some suggestions was really nice!
I think you too much focused on nazi and blankets and I bet you need to play diff to feel it more before modding.

edit: updated

Kyshiro wrote:

I did play it before modding it, Most suggestions are based upon how it felt while playing, I didn't focus on nazi and blankets either, I do care a lot about the quality of maps and how they look. maybe that's why some stuff listed might be seen as a bit nazi.
Anyhow, I think you denied some of the suggestions way too easily,

Stefan wrote:

Okay, what I've found after some Testplays and checking:

[Easy]
01:00:785 (1,2) - People are going to nagging about the inconsistent Spacing. I had this experience and even if you say "for the sake of creativity", it is no excuse. However, to create a perfect curve at (1), use Grid Level 4 and move the 2nd white Point for one grid up. fixed
01:32:928 (1) - I guess you forgot to add Clap at the End, right? yep
01:54:356 (1,2,3,1,2) - Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/1TGga (The Slider fits with the Voice and to avoid too many Circle in raw, also the 2nd Slider fits so much better at 01:56:499 because the singer holds her voice, the current pattern let the Slider comes too early, I hope you can follow me. ) as you wish But last slider I made not x2 but x1
02:47:392 (1) - Fits better if you move the Start at 02:47:928. I prefer to start this part from "love"

[Normal]
01:16:588 (6,1) - Switch the pattern, sounds better and playing better tho. +
02:20:071 (5) - Clap at the End? I find it good. +
02:47:928 (2,3) - Fits better if you move the Start at 02:47:928. And move 02:47:928 (2) to 02:51:678. no, I still believe this rhythm fits well

[Hard]
01:28:106 (5) - I hate this Kick-Slider.. it ruins the Flow very hard, so please remove the Repeat on the Slider and add one more 1/2 Slider to you-know-where. no love for my sliders, eh...
01:59:446 (4,1,2) - I strongly suggest to remove Finish from (4), about (1,2) you should think about it. But the Finish at (4) fits absolutley not. my sexy finishes, noooooo.... fixed
02:47:928 (2,3) - Same as in Normal. indeed

Well, that's REALLY all what I could find.

Sieg wrote:

who cares ¯\_(ツ)_/¯