Hi hi, spontaneous M4M (for ultrasonic anthem)
If a timestamp has nothing written next to it, it is because I have already commented on that exact same thing earlier in the song, not because I forgot to write something for it.[Kantan]
-OD 3.5 or 3
00:14:646 (7) - Can possibly remove for finisher emphasis on note 6
00:15:979 (11) - Same relative concept as above
00:24:979 (4) - Both vocal and instrumental pitch increase here, I'd suggest making this a kat
00:27:646 (7) - Same thing, instead the pitch
decreases here, so it'd be a don
00:30:313 (11) - Same as 00:24:979 (4) -
00:52:146 (52) - For the sake of simplicity I'd suggest moving this to 00:52:313 instead
Worth noting that the kantan is over 2.0*, which doesn't matter obviously so long as the difficulty elements are that of a kantan (which stands true here), but if you can simplify some of the off-beat rhythms to be on beat that would lower the SR dramatically [Futsuu]
-OD 4
00:18:979 (27) - I think this note sounds a bit weird, and this mini build-up section would sound better if it wasn't there
00:24:979 (8) - and 00:27:646 (11) - Same thing as I suggested in the kantan
00:35:146 (27) - What you could do here to acknowledge the snare hit on 00:34:979 is place a kat there, and another one after note 27 (k d k). k d could also work.
From 01:10:646 - 01:31:313 there's no 2/1 breaks. In a futsuu, 2/1 breaks are instrumental, and in a bpm like 180, I'm not sure that a few 3/2 breaks will be enough to fill that role.
[Muzukashii]
00:03:229 (11) - Shouldn't this note be on 00:03:396 like you did at 00:04:646 (18,19,20) - ? Or was this for variation :thinking:
00:24:979 (10) - and 00:27:646 (13) -
00:34:979 - Consider adding a kat here, to emphasize that same snare hit I mentioned in the futsuu
Make sure that in the muzu as well, you're not going too long without any 2/1 breaks, if I got a DQ for it I think it's kind of important [Oni]
00:24:979 (10) - and 00:27:646 (13) -
00:40:563 (57) - You could delete this note to create an even longer build-up, as xxx x x xxx x x is quite different than xxx xxx xxx x
00:49:146 (103) - Sounds decrease in pitch starting at note 102, meaning this note would sound better as a D
00:51:313 (113,114,115,116) - Pitches sound reversed here, I suggest ctrl+g
00:59:813 (159) -
01:08:979 (209) - Would be better as a kat finisher in my opinion
[Inner Oni]
00:24:979 (185) - and 00:27:646 (188) -
The same finisher stuff I pointed out in the Oni goes for this difficulty as well.01:39:257 (66,67,68) - I get why this is here, but personally I don't think that the 1/6 snapping is necessary, and that this can be simplified to represent something else, if not the vocal at minimum.
01:43:646 (72) - Pitch increase, I suggest k
Cool song, cool map, hope to see this ranked soon!~