General:- Im kinda outdated but, is 2037x1199 dimensions BG rankable? as i know it has to be between 1920x1080 and 1360x768
- I guess you'll do hitsounds soon, right?
- Tags should be: tvsize kantoku カントク one room ワンルーム remix
I still have concerns about "kantoku", since he's not the artist of the bg but the artist of the anime designs
yea but the song is from the animeFor "remix", i added it because as someone who search maps i actually put remix instead of mix and that could happen to everyone
- Countdown enabled in purpose?
- The whole map is actually 67% volume lol, i hope you change it when doing hitsounds or it would be pretty monotone
Objects:• 00:00:369 (1,2,1) - Why did you use different spacing? was it for emphasis? Maybe you should add more at the third circle since its the louder one because the piano as you did here 00:05:438 (4,1) -
but its already changing from a stack • 00:03:538 (3,4,1) - You could move this triple shape a bit up so 00:03:749 (1) - isnt that closer to 00:03:115 (1) -
• 00:07:129 (1) - Ctrl + H? It would actually fit with 00:07:763 (2) -
meh• 00:08:608 (1) - I'd recommend to change this into a triple to make this 00:08:818 - clickable (it's a kinda loud sound so you shouldn't avoid it imo)
• 00:13:045 (5) - Add NC for emphasis? It would also make a difference between this 00:10:509 (1,2,3,4) - and this 00:13:044 (5,6) - instead of having all of these in the same combo as if they were only 1 pattern
• 00:30:369 (5) - You could move this a bit down so it would overlap better with 00:29:523 (3) -
not visible in game tho• 00:48:431 (4,5) - This feels like out of position, maybe you should move the whole stream just a bit to the right
think its fine• 00:52:974 (2) - What about moving this to x:288 y:160 so it would overlap correctly with 00:51:707 (2) - ?
• 00:56:143 (5) - It kinda feels that the NC should be here
• 00:57:833 (5) - Same
• 00:59:101 (5) - Stacking this one with 00:56:777 (6) - wouldn't be a bad idea i think
• Being a bit nazi, 01:00:580 (2) - moving this to x:248 y:225 wont do a big change, but it would still be a visual detail that some players will actually notice, so making that circle being exactly between 00:59:735 (2,2) - could make a good impression about the map aesthetics while playing
--- I tried being a super nazi there :v) ---
• 01:01:214 (1) - If you move this to x:95 y:310, the spacing between this three 01:00:157 (2,2,1) - would be the same (another visual impression)
• 01:02:481 (4,2) - This two are kinda weird since they actually overlap (and its noticeable while playing), so you could move 01:03:115 (2) - to x:260 y:156 (or around, just dont overlap it like that)
• 01:02:164 (2,2) - Stack?
• 01:04:594 (1) - Same thing about visuals, if you think this is too much nazi already you can just skip this kind of things, x:440 y:135
• 01:07:340 (2) - x:65 y:173, the overlap right there is actually kinda weird
• 01:12:622 (1,2,3,4,1) - About this, you could actually make it a bit less curvy?
like this i guess?, i mean, right now its curvy but at the same time it seems like it isnt xD
• 01:15:580 (1,2) - Stack? (so the circle 2 wont overlap like that with the kickslider)
• 01:19:594 (5,6,1) - Even if you want to keep spacing, it feels so odd that this isn't stacked, maybe add a bit of spacing to overlap it, or just stack it
• 01:20:861 (2) - x:270 y:12
• 01:21:283 (4) - NC for emphasis and downbeat
• 01:22:552 (2,3) - Even thought the claps are loud, the spacing seems just too high, reducing it just a bit wont hurt anybody, right?
highest energy vocals + claps + anime map• 01:24:030 (4,3) - Fix stack
• 01:25:721 (1,2,3) - What about making this triple straight? I think that it would fit better than a curve
• 01:29:101 (5) - Same NC thing than before, but this time it feels like this 01:29:523 (6) - should be like... Ctrl + G? like breaking the flow there would be a really good idea and it would fit pretty good
• 01:32:481 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Why don't you try doing the same thing you did before for this pattern?
Something like this would fit cuz i already did that >.> some variation is fine• You did this first 00:15:791 (1) -
then you did this 01:31:847 (7) -
why being unconsistent mr.nao?
• Ok this is a bit different, its not "inconsistent" but it would be good if you use here 01:34:383 (4,1) - the same (or similar) spacing that you used here 00:18:326 (4,5) - . Also that low spacing could be confused with an 1/2 rhythm so even if you're not agree to that, adding spacing is still a solution
the first time it was to introduce the rhythm, this time is same rhythm anyway so ppl will recognize that and the entire section is a bit more visually cohesive cuz smilar spacing• 01:45:580 (4) - x:464 y:270 ?
• 01:56:883 (6,1) - Stacking and adding spacing would fit better imo
but i use this kind of pattern for 1/4 everywhere• 01:58:678 (5,5) - Same NC thing than before
• 02:05:228 (5,2) - Stack?
• 02:08:185 (3,2) - Stack?
• 02:09:242 (1) - Moving this to x:11 y:106 wouldn't be bad, the current overlap is less cool than this
• 02:10:087 (3,4,5) - Wait what happened here? why a triple of all the sudden?
dunno, why not?You did 01:06:073 (4,5,1,2) - this before and it was pretty cool, i would recommend you to repeat it here 02:10:087 (3,4,5,6) -
but its
different part >.> the analogous one is 01:07:551 (3,1) - • 02:12:833 (2,3) - Aw shit the spacing xD
anime• 02:15:262 (2,2) - Stack?
• 02:17:270 (1,2) - Stack?
• 02:42:621 (1,2) - Moving them a bit far from 02:42:198 (1) - wont hurt anyone too
• 02:45:579 (6) - It feels like you should add NC here since its a pretty unexpected pitch change
• 02:46:424 - I think that you should start the break here (i dont mean to add more notes, just move the start of the break a bit)
• 03:06:917 (2,1) - Stack? (1 with 2)
the tails are stacked tho• 03:07:762 (4,2) - Fix this slightly wrong stack
------ 03:20:438 - This as preview point wouldn't be that bad (at least it sounds better than the kiai)
yea but its rly far into the song >.>• 03:18:114 (5,5) - Same NC thing x3
• 03:33:537 (2,2) - Fix stack
• 03:45:156 (6) - NC?
• 03:51:283 (1) - Starting this on the same position than 03:50:015 (1) - would be making a better use of that small break imo
• 04:06:283 (5,6) - Same than before :p (unlike before, this time im just going for the NC thing)