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Hotaru Murasaki - Re:TrymenT [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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Xinnoh
Elite Mapper
1,950 posts
Joined April 2014
Xinnoh
no kudosu
edit: u fuckin wut

i want to get off ascendance's pp ride
00:06:202 (2) - Slider goes over fairly loud piano, could change rhythm
00:11:728 (3) - consider more angle since this is still the opening, and you use this angle at the final part of chorus
00:15:044 (2,3) - Consider making less edge-dashy cause it's reducing in pitch
00:18:517 (2) - Probably overspaced here
00:28:307 (4) - nc
00:28:307 (4,5) - Could be underspaced
00:35:412 (3,4) - ^
00:39:202 (3) - Reduce slider speed cause less emphasis
00:46:465 (2,3) - Could be better if 2 was angled so it moved less compared to 3
01:02:570 (1,2) - Maybe overspaced
01:17:412 (3,4,5,6) - Underspaced,
01:24:675 (2) - Doesn't flow to the right well
01:26:412 (3,4) - ^
01:26:412 (3) - nc
01:30:360 (1,1) - Should these really be 1/4 hdashes, also the speed they go at is really easy for miss drops, consider reducing
01:31:623 (1) - hitsound
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TequilaWolf
279 posts
Joined November 2013
TequilaWolf
mod
Nowa's FloweR-

00:06:202 (2,3) - you can try using a 1/2 slider starting from 00:06:044 and a circle on 00:06:360 (3) - , sounds ok to me even though it doesn't actually start on a beat

00:07:465 (2) - consider 1/1 slider

00:21:360 (2) - unnecessary I think, there's no sound. also you can try positioning 00:20:886 (1) - higher up and stacking it with 00:22:149 (1) -

00:23:412 (1) - why not 2 1/2 sliders like you did here 00:25:939 (1,2) -

00:33:044 (4,5,1) - think you can stack 4 on 5/1, feels better

01:25:623 (2) - maybe you can ctrl+g this for flow

01:27:833 (1) - I think using 2 circles at 01:27:675 and 01:27:833 might be better
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Nowaie
1,021 posts
Joined December 2014
Nowaie

TequilaWolf wrote:

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Nowa's FloweR-

00:06:202 (2,3) - you can try using a 1/2 slider starting from 00:06:044 and a circle on 00:06:360 (3) - , sounds ok to me even though it doesn't actually start on a beat RC doesn't let me do something like this

00:07:465 (2) - consider 1/1 slider I pretty much have every single similiar piano beat mapped as a single hitcircle so there isn't really a reason to map this one differently

00:21:360 (2) - unnecessary I think, there's no sound. also you can try positioning 00:20:886 (1) - higher up and stacking it with 00:22:149 (1) - What do you mean by that there is no sound? Also a big jump there does not really fit to the (descending) rhythm

00:23:412 (1) - why not 2 1/2 sliders like you did here 00:25:939 (1,2) - 00:23:728 - The vocal here is more like an echo than the initial vocal ascending like here 00:26:254 - so that's why i'd prefer to keep it like so

00:33:044 (4,5,1) - think you can stack 4 on 5/1, feels better I don't want jumps there

01:25:623 (2) - maybe you can ctrl+g this for flow I'm not really looking for flow in that pattern. Though i have to redo it because it does not really represent the song too well

01:27:833 (1) - I think using 2 circles at 01:27:675 and 01:27:833 might be better 01:27:675 - There is nothing mappable here and the other one acts as a hitcircle already but it takes the whatever instrument the other sliderpoints are mapped on into the count aswell
Thanks for the suggestions

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-NanoRIPE-
2,022 posts
Joined October 2013
-NanoRIPE-
yo

easy
00:10:781 (1) - im prefer you put 3/2 reverse slider here ~ for emphatize the piano more
00:01:939 (1) - im prefer you add 3/2 reverse slider here ~ for emphatize the piano more
00:04:465 (1) - ^
00:10:781 (1) - ^ cause the piano is strong at 00:11:254 -
00:24:675 (4) - nc here for consistency
00:29:728 (4) - ^
00:41:728 (3,1) - overlap a bit
00:52:781 (3) - nc here
00:56:254 (2) - i think the slider should be start at 00:56:096 cause the vocal looks strong at that
01:03:517 (2) - hmm you made reverse slider here but you skipped the strong beat at 01:04:465 - so maybe make the slider unreverse and then 1/1 slider?
01:16:307 - hmm you should map this imo cause the cymbal looks strong here
01:17:728 (1) - finish for cymbal

gl

(and maybe if you have free time,would you mod my map? just the easy diff :3 if you dont mind ~)
Xinnoh
Elite Mapper
1,950 posts
Joined April 2014
Xinnoh
no kudosu

Not a BN's BN check

General
  1. Difficulty Spread : What's with the HP and OD being all over the place, decimal HP does literally nothing. Make it more linear/whole numbers
  2. Background Size : You can use 1080p one if you have it
  3. Unsnapped objects : Hard, Rain (wtf how)
  4. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : gr8
  5. Metadata Issues : add retryment to the tags you fucktard
  6. Timeline Issues : In the diffs
  7. Combo Colors : Normal is the only diff to use a slider border, change?
  8. Unused Hitsounds : fine
  9. Hitsounds Issues : You don't have a silent normal-sliderslide.wav
  10. Unused Files / Other : meme

Easy
SV might be too high imo
00:06:991 (1) - 01:29:728 (2) - These are the only object on the 1/2 snap in the diff, remove/simplify? https://puu.sh/uslwB/4c1090eec6.png
00:06:991 (1) - Could rotate so it blankets 00:05:728 (3) - and flows to 00:08:254 (2) - better
00:09:517 (1,2) - Move 2 left or tail of 1 right so that this triggers me less
00:15:833 (3) - Why does this slider go over the violins? Imo should be clickable (that said I rarely map easies so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯)
00:26:570 (6,1) - Blanket
00:37:939 (2) - Minor but move away a bit so it's consistent with the spacing of 1
00:53:096 (4) - NC somewhere?
00:58:465 (2) - The rhythm should really be on the large ticks here, feels weird, again, unexperienced with easy diffs so idk
01:03:517 (2,2) - Only spot with an overlap, could change but not needed
01:12:675 (1,2,3) - Bit odd that the exact same pattern maps two different parts. Should mixup imo
01:15:202 (1) - Give little bit more blanket space for breathing room
01:24:991 (3,1) - ^
01:21:833 (2) - Option to blanket around tail so it makes it a bit different, last slider was lower pitched.
01:30:360 (1) - Could just change to reverse slider so player doesn't have to read weird rhythm on last circle, or just do something like Insane diff

Normal
00:01:939 (1) - & 01:29:728 (2) - Unused timeline points
00:08:254 (3) - Move left a little. Triangles 00:06:675 (3,2,3) -, flows to 2 and 4 better
00:23:096 (3) - Why is 3 clickable with no sound, but 00:23:412 (4,5) - have words on their tail and aren't clickable (00:28:149 (3) - is supported so fine)
00:25:939 (3) - Hitsound
00:36:675 (5) - Move red tick so angle matches up with vocal change + better blanket + consistency
00:48:360 (2,3) - Nothing special here that justifies two circles in a row, nitpicky though
01:15:202 (1,2) - pls just rotate either one so they're both 5degree angle or straight


Hard
00:05:728 (2) - Rip aesthetics
You used antiflow at 00:26:570 (6,1) - but not 00:36:675 (7,1) -, should/could change so they're similar or just change so 6 flows somewhere other than top left corner
00:40:781 (2,3,1) - Unsure if this is readable
00:52:781 (2) - Yeah these finish spams don't work
01:00:044 (1,2) - Doesn't flow, can't check cause using trackpad
01:25:307 (1) - Rip aesthetics
01:30:360 (1) - Just add a white slider point before the red ones so it's curved
01:35:412 (1) - You can remove a green line here if you apply sampleset-normal to the spinner. Applies to Insane. (Also spinner sound is inconsistent with other diffs cause some have hitnormal some don't)

Insane
00:06:991 (1) - Rotate by 5-10 degrees
00:19:307 (5) - Kind of ignoring an important sound on red tick, change to a slider?
00:21:360 (2) - imo should be 4x like my diff, optional
00:57:202 (1) - The violin follows 1/4, why is this 1/6
01:00:517 (3,4,5) - Doesn't reallly emphasise vocals because 3,4 is larger than 4,5
01:25:939 (3,4) - This flow has mild cancer, not sure why slider flow breaks here.
01:30:360 (1) - Still has better circular flow if you ctrl-g

Flower
00:42:044 (1) - Imo would be better if it was a little lower, but minor.
01:07:623 (1) - 01:12:675 (1) - Unused timing points
Hitsounds in the kiai are significantly weaker than the rest of the song, use more of the normal-hitormal
01:32:254 (1) - I like the more interesting take on the final part here :)

Rain
Unsnapped shit everywhere because a green line got deleted
00:18:833 (4) - increased slider leniency here
00:30:202 (2,2) - reduced distance a little
00:54:360 (5) - reduced slider difficulty here
fixed NCs
wow perfect diff - fixed all http://pastebin.com/u6LZN7kM

I already did Ascendance's diff in the last post.
Kyuukai
1,511 posts
Joined December 2014
Kyuukai

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

yo

easy
00:10:781 (1) - im prefer you put 3/2 reverse slider here ~ for emphatize the piano more no, I don't want to break the consistancy of the map by making sliderends on red ticks since I've mapped full 1/1
00:01:939 (1) - im prefer you add 3/2 reverse slider here ~ for emphatize the piano more ^
00:04:465 (1) - ^ ^
00:10:781 (1) - ^ cause the piano is strong at 00:11:254 - ^
00:24:675 (4) - nc here for consistency ok
00:29:728 (4) - ^ ^
00:41:728 (3,1) - overlap a bit its not overlapped D:
00:52:781 (3) - nc here ok
00:56:254 (2) - i think the slider should be start at 00:56:096 cause the vocal looks strong at that no, would break the consistancy
01:03:517 (2) - hmm you made reverse slider here but you skipped the strong beat at 01:04:465 - so maybe make the slider unreverse and then 1/1 slider? why not
01:16:307 - hmm you should map this imo cause the cymbal looks strong here blame meep
01:17:728 (1) - finish for cymbal ^

gl ty for modding

(and maybe if you have free time,would you mod my map? just the easy diff :3 if you dont mind ~) ask meep xddd

Sinnoh wrote:

Easy
SV might be too high imo no its not xddd
00:06:991 (1) - 01:29:728 (2) - These are the only object on the 1/2 snap in the diff, remove/simplify? https://puu.sh/uslwB/4c1090eec6.png well, it would feel really weird to not map the 1/2 on thoses, and the sliders ends on a 1/1 tick so I don't think its a problem
00:06:991 (1) - Could rotate so it blankets 00:05:728 (3) - and flows to 00:08:254 (2) - better not needed, the 3 is emphasized by placing it under the 00:06:675 (4) - while the 00:05:728 (3,4) - makes a linear movement. 00:08:254 (2,3) - have different soundings, so a flow like that is not really a prob
00:09:517 (1,2) - Move 2 left or tail of 1 right so that this triggers me less yes xdd
00:15:833 (3) - Why does this slider go over the violins? Imo should be clickable (that said I rarely map easies so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯) because i'm simplifying the map
00:26:570 (6,1) - Blanket fixed
00:37:939 (2) - Minor but move away a bit so it's consistent with the spacing of 1 but I've used Distance snapping through the whole map how can the distance be not consistent
00:53:096 (4) - NC somewhere? last mod fix
00:58:465 (2) - The rhythm should really be on the large ticks here, feels weird, again, unexperienced with easy diffs so idk simplifying the rhythm of the piano, mapping too much would make em' confused
01:03:517 (2,2) - Only spot with an overlap, could change but not needed changed with the last mod
01:12:675 (1,2,3) - Bit odd that the exact same pattern maps two different parts. Should mixup imo 01:13:939 (3) - is just a more intense sound of 01:12:675 (1) - so the pattern kinda fits I guess
01:15:202 (1) - Give little bit more blanket space for breathing room dunno how, distance snapping problems xdd
01:24:991 (3,1) - ^ ^
01:21:833 (2) - Option to blanket around tail so it makes it a bit different, last slider was lower pitched. alright
01:30:360 (1) - Could just change to reverse slider so player doesn't have to read weird rhythm on last circle, or just do something like Insane diff. okay xd

ty for modding
not even tragic love
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_Meep_
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_Meep_
why do i keep giving sinnoh kds well knowing he shouldnt be having kds :thonkang:
i have inhumane reactions
Kyuukai
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Kyuukai

_Meep_ wrote:

why do i keep giving sinnoh kds well knowing he shouldnt be having kds :thonkang:
i have inhumane reactions
_Meep_
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_Meep_

Sinnoh wrote:

no kudosu

Not a BN's BN check

Hard
00:05:728 (2) - Rip aesthetics Fixed
You used antiflow at 00:26:570 (6,1) - but not 00:36:675 (7,1) -, should/could change so they're similar or just change so 6 flows somewhere other than top left corner I never really thought about this lol,I just went with what I thought felt natural,I'll see if it needs changes
00:40:781 (2,3,1) - Unsure if this is readable Unstacked.
00:52:781 (2) - Yeah these finish spams don't work wut finishes theres only whistles ._.
01:00:044 (1,2) - Doesn't flow, can't check cause using trackpad doesn't exactly need to flow well imo, she emphasises her voice quite a lot here and the sudden change in direction/placement of cursor should be able to clearly emphasize her bootiful voice
01:25:307 (1) - Rip aesthetics but this ones fine ;w;
01:30:360 (1) - Just add a white slider point before the red ones so it's curved meh >_>
01:35:412 (1) - You can remove a green line here if you apply sampleset-normal to the spinner. Applies to Insane. (Also spinner sound is inconsistent with other diffs cause some have hitnormal some don't) Fixed

Insane
00:06:991 (1) - Rotate by 5-10 degrees Fixed
00:19:307 (5) - Kind of ignoring an important sound on red tick, change to a slider? Fixed
00:21:360 (2) - imo should be 4x like my diff, optional meh .-.
00:57:202 (1) - The violin follows 1/4, why is this 1/6 tbh we dont give a damn anymore, neither do I, I feel like this fits the intensity of the buildup so I leave it as 1/6,unless someone actually can hear 1/4 and 1/6 separately in a 1 second timeframe whilist playing oss, i dont think it matters.
01:00:517 (3,4,5) - Doesn't reallly emphasise vocals because 3,4 is larger than 4,5 I don't exactly get you here, she says 'mo' at 4, and its because she upped her pitch a bit on saying that,thats why I place it further.
01:25:939 (3,4) - This flow has mild cancer, not sure why slider flow breaks here. Doesn't always need to flow well,I went with what felt natural here, and its a slow part,so i dont think anyone would care XD
01:30:360 (1) - Still has better circular flow if you ctrl-g NU DONT TOUCH MY FLOWER ;w; well i dont think it needs circular flow in the first place ._.

http://pastebin.com/u6LZN7kM

I already did Ascendance's diff in the last post.
_handholding
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Nowa
  1. 00:15:833 (1) - There is a drum kick here but not a piano note so it feels a bit odd that to have this note here as it seems the entire pattern from 00:13:307 (1) to 00:20:886 (1) is following the piano. I really do think a turning 00:15:675 (7) into a half slider would follow it better. If you really didn't want to do that at least have a change of flow from 00:15:833 (1) -
  2. 00:33:044 (4) - you've mapped this vocal sound with a held note (slider) for the rest of the section. Feels a bit weird rhythmically to have this as a circle at this specific spot
  3. 00:34:781 (1,2) - doesn't look too appealing aesthetically, in fact looks somewhat random and out of place. Recommend to just stack like 00:24:675 (1,2) for a more cleaner and polished look
  4. 01:02:254 (1,1) - because of the SV change these look like 2 1/2 sliders visually. As a result it throws you off whilst playing, do something to make the 1/4 gap more obvious

Insane
  1. 00:30:675 (3,4) - I'm not really sure about stacking the circle on the slider head like for the readability and the flow of the pattern as well as the emphasis given to the downbeat. After some thought I'm starting to think this may be subjective but I'm gonna say it anyways because reasons
[]GL!
Nowaie
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Nowaie
Holy it has been a long time since i touched this

Sinnoh wrote:

Flower
00:42:044 (1) - Imo would be better if it was a little lower, but minor. I'll try a different kind of slider
01:07:623 (1) - 01:12:675 (1) - Unused timing points Removed first one, pumped the second one to like 75% volume
Hitsounds in the kiai are significantly weaker than the rest of the song, use more of the normal-hitormal Will be making some changes
01:32:254 (1) - I like the more interesting take on the final part here :) ^_^

Kisses wrote:

Nowa
  1. 00:15:833 (1) - There is a drum kick here but not a piano note so it feels a bit odd that to have this note here as it seems the entire pattern from 00:13:307 (1) to 00:20:886 (1) is following the piano. I really do think a turning 00:15:675 (7) into a half slider would follow it better. If you really didn't want to do that at least have a change of flow from 00:15:833 (1) - I guess i was kinda dumb back when i mapped this... changed stuff around and it should be better
  2. 00:33:044 (4) - you've mapped this vocal sound with a held note (slider) for the rest of the section. Feels a bit weird rhythmically to have this as a circle at this specific spot Fixed
  3. 00:34:781 (1,2) - doesn't look too appealing aesthetically, in fact looks somewhat random and out of place. Recommend to just stack like 00:24:675 (1,2) for a more cleaner and polished look I agree 100%
  4. 01:02:254 (1,1) - because of the SV change these look like 2 1/2 sliders visually. As a result it throws you off whilst playing, do something to make the 1/4 gap more obvious The NCs should warn enough, also why would i use that small spacing for 1/2 sliders in the kiai anyway
upd tomorrow, kinda sad this won't like ever get nominated
_Meep_
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_Meep_
Im loving this set, I dont see it going anywhere and I think I cant work on it anymore
sad i cant get bns
sorry guys.
I'll wait for nowa to do some changes on his hitsounds,then we love it
then again
im sorry.
Nowaie
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Nowaie

_Meep_ wrote:

Im loving this set, I dont see it going anywhere and I think I cant work on it anymore
sad i cant get bns
sorry guys.
I'll wait for nowa to do some changes on his hitsounds,then we love it
then again
im sorry.
Sometimes something like this happens, sadly. What is with BNs not wanting to nominate stuff from new mappers that look promising, promoting their mapping and making them want to improve and continue their mapping career

Not straight up begin friends with nominators should not be a reason to not get something nominated
Kyuukai
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Kyuukai

_Meep_ wrote:

Im loving this set, I dont see it going anywhere and I think I cant work on it anymore
sad i cant get bns
sorry guys.
I'll wait for nowa to do some changes on his hitsounds,then we love it
then again
im sorry.
Pentori checked ur map, but he didn't nominate ur stuff, so what's the problem ? I think it's pretty obvious, the mapset is not ready yet.

It's not that the mapset is not going anywhere, it's just that the map can be improved, and I think that this map can get ranked if you work on it a little more. You can rank it, it might take a while, but you can. If you choose to make it Loved, well I'm fine with it, but it has the potential to get ranked and it would be sad seeing it Loved instead of ranked.

I know it's a pain to look for BNs tho, every ranked or qualified map are made by the same mappers and new ones are left behind.
Riari
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Riari
ctb is bad thats why
Xinnoh
Elite Mapper
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Xinnoh

Riari wrote:

ctb is bad thats why rejected, it's my style
no changes
Net0
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Net0
"it's just that the map can be improved"
Considering the stuff that get pass qualify this criteria is really subjective. The fact is that BNs didn't nominate simply because they didn't want to. That's how it goes.

Btw Meep, any news of this getting loved, I'm also tired of the wait o.o
_Meep_
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_Meep_

Net0 wrote:

"it's just that the map can be improved"
Considering the stuff that get pass qualify this criteria is really subjective. The fact is that BNs didn't nominate simply because they didn't want to. That's how it goes.

Btw Meep, any news of this getting loved, I'm also tired of the wait o.o
nop lol
_Meep_
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_Meep_
loved d
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
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Ascendance
Really dislike people who give up on ranking things and push it to loved lol

Super disappointing really :/
619
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619
O gratz Meep!
sorry i forgot remap my diff xd
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Monstrata
I almost wanted to pass on the map, but then I saw your slider art on Insane decided it was worth trying :D.

Insane

00:10:465 (3,1) - This doesn't flow that nicely imo. Try Ctrl+G'ing 1, and also Ctrl+G'ing 2. I think the flow still works really well, and now accounts for slider 3 too.
00:14:886 (2,4) - just stack 4 with 2? The overlap doesn't look nice when there isn't another similar overlap to create a visual pattern with.
00:16:781 (6,7,1) - Emphasis is a bit misplaced between 6>7>1. Put more on 7>1 and less on 6>7 imo
00:19:623 (1,2,3,4) - Take 1+3 and copy/paste to get a better coordinate for 4.
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00:20:254 (5) - I think two 1/2 sliders will work better.. don't neglect 00:20:728 -

00:22:781 (3,2) - the overlap looks pretty bad imo... You have a lot of room at the bottom of the screen to work with., use that area instead of an overlap? It keeps the map less congested.
00:30:675 (3,4) - It was quite hard to see this circle. I would just position it somewhere easy to see since you use overlaps later already so the full overlap here seems a bit unnecessary. The position of 4 is fine, maybe move slider 3 elsewhere to avoid the overlap instead of trying to move 4.

Wait im dumb i just realized this is Loved. okay whatever cya looool ;w; at least i only spent 2 minutes writing this
Xinnoh
Elite Mapper
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Xinnoh
there's nothing stopping you from helping it get ranked
_Meep_
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Topic Starter
_Meep_
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upon advice from triangle god, i will keep this in loved and move on c:
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-Kazuto
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-Kazuto
Maru is my waifu
PatZar
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Joined March 2013
PatZar

it's better you to play the VN too
momo's route is masterpieces
unko
517 posts
Joined March 2014
unko
how is this even loved? i tought u needed 100sp
Xinnoh
Elite Mapper
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Joined April 2014
Xinnoh
every mod gives +1 or +2 sp, they add up
_Meep_
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_Meep_
3 days later
im booting this out of loved
lets go for rank bois
JierYagtama
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JierYagtama
:eyes:
Asherz007
Beatmap Nominator
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Asherz007
Unloved as requested.

minichat
2018-03-24 22:40 _Meep_: asherz
2018-03-24 22:40 _Meep_: o/
2018-03-24 22:40 _Meep_: can u unlove sets?
2018-03-24 22:41 Asherz007: uh, I can I guess, why
2018-03-24 22:41 _Meep_: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1101073 Hotaru Murasaki - Re:TrymenT]
2018-03-24 22:41 _Meep_: please ;3c
2018-03-24 22:42 Asherz007: you wanna try and rank it or something I guess?
2018-03-24 22:42 _Meep_: yep
2018-03-24 22:42 Asherz007: aight then

Good luck on ranking this!

This is how I do this right
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
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Ascendance
oh hello
BoberOfDarkness
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BoberOfDarkness
respect for unloved
Kyuukai
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Kyuukai
yo wtf Yaleufeu's EasY
Joe Castle
802 posts
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Joe Castle
YO YOU ACTUALLY GOING FOR RANK?
intiaz
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intiaz
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
You can do it _Meep_! I believed in you then and I still do now! :D
_Meep_
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_Meep_
i am going for rank
im just taking fucking ages to remap my insane
- Ed -
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- Ed -
This better get ranked, I just lost a #1 and I want it back :eyes:
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