Crusts wrote:

hai ajee m4m dari queue

Uncheck all widescreen support at all diff

col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

ini kotak mod

4K Hard
00:10:517 (10517|3,10517|0) - ini gk jadiin LN kek sebelumnya sama kok suaranya :/
00:14:267 (14267|1) - ini bukannya ghost ?
00:16:329 - add |3| // keep yg ini aja C:
00:48:204 (48204|2,48298|3,48392|2,48485|0,48579|3,48673|2) - re-arrange kek gini aj, ya buat avoid trill http://puu.sh/s9nHV/0e0fc8fd98.png
ok buat diff ini wa rasa LNnya pas kiai agak yaa... gimana lah buat wa sih keknya lebih enak kalo LN yg anya 1/4 kek 01:31:142 (91142|1) - bisa diganti note biasa

7K Hard
00:41:735 (41735|3,41923|3) - move 1 col ke kiri ini makek space susah dah, masih hard juga
01:24:579 (84579|1) - move ke 6
01:25:610 (85610|3,85798|3) - i hate this idea of trill using space re-arrange pls

anya itu sori gk banyak
good luck
aku noob

xanibabe wrote:

Not really mod, but I was playing the 7K Goodbye difficulty today and thought I'd leave a comment.

00:14:267 - and 00:16:329 - I understand you left these notes out because they were very quiet, but it's almost jarring to not hit something there, mostly because in the original game and in almost every other chart of this song there are notes there. // i think small 1/1 spacing like that is a great addition for additive rhythm, rather personal preference so i'll keep this way

00:22:142 (22142|2,22517|2) - The use of the finish hitsound seems a bit excessive throughout the beginning of the song, after a while the sound kinda becomes white noise and loses its effect and becomes more annoying. (I think part is because the default osu cymbal sound is so long, if it had a bit more punch and was a bit shorter it might be fine.) // hoo changed to a chimes then

01:18:017 - The double staircase and brackety patterning throughout the kiai time is really difficult to read and play compared to the rest of the map. (Like 01:36:579 (96579|1,96579|3,96579|5,96767|4,96767|6,96767|0,96767|2,96860|5,96860|3,96860|1,96954|2,96954|4) - )
// yeah, i think 160 bpm with staircase & bracket in chorus part would be great to emphasize what makes this map as it is, i sightly adjusted the amount of brackets C:

Again I'm just leaving my thoughts while playing, you can leave the map as is if you want. (No kds.)

YaHao wrote:

[Etlie's 7K Easy]
01:09:017 - Suggest add one, since the intensity of this section goes up, you can show that by adding a note here (for the finish sound as well
01:22:142 (82142|6) - Since there are several different instrument in this timing, i will suggest you move the note to 01:22:048 - for the drum, which i think is more audible than the current one. Plus 01:34:048 - the same
[4K Easy]
01:11:454 - kinda out of nowhere
[7K Normal]
01:23:735 (83735|5,83829|3) - ctrl+j? / too anchory, would keep this
[4K Normal]
01:44:267 - double is enough for the finish sound, and using triple in normal is kind of difficult
01:55:517 (115517|0) - what is the reason you extend this LN to the blue tick? isnt it should be ended at 01:55:892 -
[7K Hard]
00:18:767 - One thing about this pattern here, i think the new pitch start at 00:19:204 - , like you did to 00:18:767 (18767|0,18829|6,18892|5,18954|4,19017|3,19079|2) - , strong beat 00:18:767 (18767|0) - then new stair pattern 00:18:829 (18829|6,18892|5,18954|4,19017|3,19079|2) - , so i suggest CTRL+H 00:19:204 (19204|1,19267|2,19329|3,19392|4,19454|5,19517|0,19517|6,19517|1) - and move this 00:19:142 (19142|0) - to 2. If you think its too much "right to left" stair, then CTRL+J 00:18:579 (18579|2,18673|1,18767|0) - . After you apply, you can see 00:18:767 (18767|2,18829|6,19142|1,19204|5) - makes really nice flow

01:15:017 (75017|0,75767|3,77454|6,77454|4) - Kinda confuse with the LNs here (compare with 4k hard
01:27:579 (87579|2,87673|0,87767|2) - a bit weird to hit this, 01:27:673 (87673|0) - move this to 5th col maybe
[4K Hard]
00:55:142 (55142|2) - Instead of using 2 LNs and ignore the drum 00:55:329 - (which i think its very catchy), delete one LN so you can have the space to add one for the drum and also you can triple this 00:55:517 - to emphasize the finish

Thats all for now, try to catch me in game, want to continue the rest of the diff via irc

Maxus wrote:

Here we go, sorry that this needs to be popped first since the mapper change his IGN and can't update (already talk with the mapper first before)

[General]

1. Don't forget change SV that we already discuss before.

// done

[7K Goodbye]

1. 00:16:329 - piano Intentionally being ignored?
2. 00:18:392 (18392|1,18485|3) - Felt that the pattern will expresses the piano better if you move these 2 notes to col 4 and col 5, literally following how 00:18:204 (18204|5,18298|6) - play more intuitively correct imo.
3. 00:25:329 (25329|0) - It will suit more if you make this at col.2 , that way, 00:24:954 (24954|3,24954|5,25142|5,25142|3) - have "2 jack" , while 00:25:142 - and 00:25:329 - have 1 jack (if you know what i mean xd)
4. 00:34:142 (34142|4,34329|5) - Ctrl+G this? seems more correct pitch, and gives different vibe and flow with 00:34:892 (34892|4,35079|5) -
   
5. 00:52:142 - Reduce one note here? not crash like 00:51:767 - // keep, has quiet loud violin to emphasize
   
6. 00:55:142 - Make this quad for crash consistency
7. 01:14:267 (74267|1,74360|0,74454|1,74548|2) - Don't really get this flow, felt out of place somehow, http://puu.sh/w8pLr/c12618f7d4.jpg
8. 01:26:360 - Personally not really fan of bracket in the middle of LN like this, it makes the pattern really hard to transitioned within especially when you have harsh SV like this. I prefer if you move 01:26:360 (86360|3,86548|3) - to col 2 and col 6.
9. 01:31:610 (91610|3) - Move to col 5 to give more space for upcoming LN at 01:31:892 (91892|3,92267|3) -
10. 01:36:017 (96017|4) - prefer at col 4 just for neatness.
11. 01:45:392 (105392|4,105579|3,105673|1) - The violin is better to be emphasized with small LN , It has noticeably difference with 01:47:079 - , so its kinda awkward that small violin doesn't get 1/4 LN.
12. 01:52:454 (112454|2) - I'm not sure bout this LN, i only hear a hazy BG sound and don't even know the snap, i suggest to be 1/4 if want simplification. // its 1/6 actually and i just noticed it now lol

[4K Aria]

1. 00:16:704 - I know that you probably want to make variation out of this, but i still felt awkward that this trilly piano sound have literally almost same pattern like 00:18:392 (18392|3,18485|2,18579|1,18673|0) - whose piano is clearly different, i will suggest http://puu.sh/w8qKj/09b9422972.jpg
2. 00:42:767 - make this double for consistency with 00:42:017 - ?
3. 00:54:954 (54954|2,54954|0,55048|0,55048|1,55142|3,55142|2) - Expect something a bit more of this, i know it wanna copy previous pattern, but the loud drum maybe can be emphasized in different way like http://puu.sh/w8qRA/6a49bf2e38.jpg
4. 01:06:017 - triple intentional? felt like no emphasis here. // a transition into different section, it has some cymbal
   
5. 01:25:704 (85704|2,85892|2,86173|2,86267|2,86454|2) - I know this still seems like a far away gap from each other jack, but the spiking of diff literally cause by this stack. I will chose a bit more stack at column 4 to lighten the col 3 for the upcoming LN like http://puu.sh/w8r24/e44fe119df.jpg
6. 01:52:454 (112454|2) - Same as 7k Goodbye

[7K Hard]

1. 01:00:767 (60767|4,60767|2,61142|2,61142|4) - Not fond of how they are in the same column due to how they are different in instrument.Suggest move 01:00:767 (60767|4) - to col 4
   
2. 01:20:079 - Felt awkward this got ignored when 01:20:454 - isn't. // emphasizing the kick?
   
3. 01:23:267 - Better add note here, and no, i'm not ask to add because of snare sound, i know this follow main melody here, and this one actually exist, so need for double.
4. 01:37:610 (97610|3,97798|3,97892|4) - Not too fond of how this trill formed, it makes it a bit too hard and a bit out of structure, I suggest move 01:37:798 (97798|3) - to col 3, following structure at 01:37:423 (97423|5,97517|6,98079|2,98173|3) -
5. 01:45:392 - Felt the rythm is a bit missing without note in this, you might want to add one note.

[4K Hard]

1. 00:27:204 - Don't really get it why ignore the thin violin here, it makes it kinda inconsistent with previous part.
2. 01:09:392 (69392|1,69579|1,69767|0) - I'm OCD here, so i prefer you to make this 1-1-2

[7K Normal]

1. 00:19:142 (19142|4,19329|2) - felt kinda antiflow having broken pattern but the instrumen is in glissado part, better Ctrl+H.
2. 01:10:517 - I'm.. not really sure if this one approriate for novice player, i even felt hard diff have easier pattern in this section than normal diff.
3. 01:28:329 (88329|3) - Should be LN here, continuous synth from 01:27:954 (87954|4) -
4. 01:48:767 - wew it's kinda cruel giving this complicated pattern for novice player.. even hard is easier..
5. 01:51:579 (111579|5,111767|6) - better be at col 4 and col 5 here, this way you can emphasize pitch at 01:52:142 (112142|5,112329|6,112517|6) - better.

[4K Normal]

1. 01:07:329 (67329|2,67517|3) - Think it's better to make this at col 4 and col 1 to be consistent with the gap you gave between 01:06:204 (66204|0,66392|0) - and 01:06:579 (66579|2) -
2. 01:28:329 (88329|1) - Same as 7k Normal
3. 01:51:579 (111579|3,111767|3) - jack is better at col 3 to accent the high pitch at 01:52:517 -

[4K Easy]

1. 00:10:517 (10517|0,10892|1) - Better in col 3 and col 1, it will solve balance issues with 00:08:642 - and essentially mirroring 00:11:642 -
2. 01:27:954 (87954|0) - better move to col 4, that empty col 4 triggering me somehow
3. 01:55:329 - Felt like you missing the rythm if this remain empty, add note to this will connect the rythm of the violin.

[Etlie's 7K Easy]

1. 00:08:642 (8642|1) - This note kinda out of place because it's stacked with piano note at 00:09:392 (9392|1,10142|1) - , while those 2 note fit, but this one isn't piano , so i suggest better move 00:08:642 (8642|1) - to col 3.
2. 01:28:329 - The rythm will be much clearer if you add this too.

nice one here.

Another Lie wrote:

Sorry ga bisa post pake tangan kanan gw, dia lagi bobo cantik

Aria

01:56:454 - serasa hampa disini & 01:56:829 - disini
01:57:392 - quiet sound here... maybe add?
01:57:673 - suara click disini sengaja di ignore?
00:38:829 - 00:39:204 - 00:39:579 - sengaja di ignore? soalnya suara sama kyk ini 00:38:454 (38454|0) -
00:41:079 - ^
00:52:329 - ^
01:03:954 - 01:04:329 - ^
01:15:954 - whoops piano here