hi
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00:34:513 (4,5,6,7) - using a duplet pattern would make this more consistent with 00:37:210 (3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:39:906 (3,4,5,6,7) - since the sounds are the same
01:03:165 (5,6,7) - would look nicer if you used a lower spacing, then stacked 01:04:007 (2) - on 7
http://puu.sh/uk45Q/eb11b4d305.jpg. the 1/4 spacing you used just seemed a little inappropriate compared to your sv, since later on you did stuff like 01:08:558 (4,5,6)
01:23:726 (6) -
too much of a reading hazard. in this instance, both slider head and tail are covered completely. and since the sliders are very short in length, the slider path isn't very visible. you could either overlap these to make the slider more visible or do something like 01:17:996 (4,5,6) .
01:31:564 (5) - not exactly sure what this is following. would be better if you started on the white tick 01:31:648 - to maintain a similar patterned build up 01:30:299 (6,7,8,9)
01:45:131 (6) - would be cool if you extended this to the blue tick for the held sound. 01:45:468 (1) - isnt very spaced so this works
02:00:299 (1,2,3) - use consistent spacing?
02:03:839 (4) - use a 1/8 slider instead? the sound identical to 02:03:333 (1)
02:48:839 (1) - why not make this a kick slider? the 1/2 spacing between 02:48:839 (1,2) - is really small
03:14:288 (1) - i dont need u need an nc here, the sv change isn't noticeable
03:16:985 - if you're going to drag the break's start time out, its better to snap it to a strong beat 03:17:153 - 03:15:805 . otherwise just drag it back to how it normally would be
03:51:788 (5) - use 1/4 from white tick? to be consistent with 03:50:524 (6,7,8,9)
03:54:063 (3,4) - kinda breaks flow and plays really uncomfortably, since 03:52:715 (3,4) - and 03:53:389 (6,1) - used up and down motions while this uses a wider angle and isn't as far down
04:06:704 (6) - extend to blue tick?
04:25:412 (4) - mayb use 1/8 slider
04:26:592 (3) -
the reverse arrow is covered by 04:26:255 (2) . you'll have to work around this. could also extend the reverse slider to the blue tick for the held sound
04:42:266 (2,3) - jump seems a bit excessive, i would move 04:42:266 (2) - in closer since it uses a completely different area of the playfield compared to everything else
04:50:524 (5) - 04:51:198 (5) - nc?
04:52:462 (2) - the kick drums are much more prominent here, so mapping the quieter 1/4 ruins that. would play much nicer if you made 04:52:041 (1,2,1) - a mirrored copy of 04:51:535 (1,2,3)
05:02:322 (1,2) - surprised you didn't use a slider instead like 02:40:749 (1)
really nice, will have to pop for things in bold. call me when you're ready