Haruna Luna - Startear -TV size ver.- · forum

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2014-08-15T05:21:24+00:00

Hi Fumika , from #modrequest

Nich's Easy

00:09:003 (1) A Whistle at the slider end could be great!. Since you can hear a strong piano sound here
00:14:824 (4) Maybe a curved slider could flow better here (?
SPOILER
00:39:450 (3) What about to use a Drum Clap at slider end? . As you did it in 00:32:958 (4)
00:35:868 (3) (^)

Normal

00:07:436 (1) Could be better if you unstack this object, feels a bit hard in my opinion
00:43:928 (4) In my opinion this sliders feels a bit weird (rhythm). Maybe you could change it for a 1/2 slider in 00:44:152. Feels much better
SPOILER
01:00:495 (3) Some grids down could improve the flow
01:10:570 (4) It feels better if you replace this slider for a circle, since music ends in 01:10:570
01:11:018 (x) If you do what I mentioned above could add a circle here to not break the rhythm
01:25:570 (3,1) I would like to unstack these objects

Mochi's Hard

00:22:212 (2) 1/3 rhythm feels bad here. Maybe you could change it for a 1/3 slider
00:56:465 (4) Try moving this slider to x:260 y:248 to improve the flow , since the current pattern doesn't flow good imo :/
SPOILER
00:40:122 (4) A Drum Clap at slider end sounds great. Try it
01:24:115 (x) A circle here feels a bit necessary in my opinion. Since vocal is very noticeable here

Insane

00:01:839 (1,1,1,1) OMG!! This is so weird u.u
00:36:988 (1) This NC feels unnecessary , maybe you could remove it
01:08:779 (5) The Sampleset Normal from the beginning of this slider sounds bad in my opinion, what about to remove it?

Wow! This map is simply perfect ~
Good Luck with this!

NickXitco

35 posts

Joined February 2014

NickXitco 2014-08-15T06:03:49+00:00

What a beautiful song~

[Normal]

00:07:436(1,2) I feel like these break the flow. To me they feel a lot better at (x=342, y=109) and (x=315, y=147)
00:18:630(4) I think that this slider should curve to the right, it feels a bit awkward going that high up.
00:23:779(2) I think that this note should go closer to (x=436, y=127), so that it has more of a curve shape.
01:24:898(2) I feel like this slider just curve more to the left, with a point at (x=380, y=327), and a point at (x=366, y=338)
01:25:570(3) To go with the flow of the slider, move this circle around here (x=308, y=331)
01:26:018(1) And this one around here (x=227, y=319)
Overall, very good!

[Insane]

This is an amazing map! It's hard to find bad things!
The flow is fantastic, it's so much fun to play!
00:51:876(2) Maybe move this to (x=333, y=102)? It seems to fit more like the others.
Same thing at 01:00:159(4) , maybe move to (x=169, y=74).
I think this pattern would flow a lot better at 01:05:421(5) if you rotated the slider around the playfeild by -9°, and moved 01:05:309(4) to (x=289,y=44)
That's it! It's a really good map

Awesome maps Fumika. You're really good. If you want me to do the other difficulties I will

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-15T06:48:54+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Hi Fumika , from #modrequest Thanks for accepting!

Normal

00:07:436 (1) Could be better if you unstack this object, feels a bit hard in my opinion Its fine, If you test this with newbie they can actually play it lol
00:43:928 (4) In my opinion this sliders feels a bit weird (rhythm). Maybe you could change it for a 1/2 slider in 00:44:152. Feels much better Fixed
SPOILER
01:00:495 (3) Some grids down could improve the flow Yep
01:10:570 (4) It feels better if you replace this slider for a circle, since music ends in 01:10:570 nope
01:11:018 (x) If you do what I mentioned above could add a circle here to not break the rhythm ^
01:25:570 (3,1) I would like to unstack these objects nah, Its fine
Insane

00:01:839 (1,1,1,1) OMG!! This is so weird u.u I'm weird too lol
00:36:988 (1) This NC feels unnecessary , maybe you could remove it sure
01:08:779 (5) The Sampleset Normal from the beginning of this slider sounds bad in my opinion, what about to remove it? nah, Its fit the drum in the music

Wow! This map is simply perfect ~
Good Luck with this!

Really thank you!!

Learning25 wrote:
What a beautiful song~ indeed

[Normal]
00:07:436(1,2) I feel like these break the flow. To me they feel a lot better at (x=342, y=109) and (x=315, y=147)
00:18:630(4) I think that this slider should curve to the right, it feels a bit awkward going that high up.
00:23:779(2) I think that this note should go closer to (x=436, y=127), so that it has more of a curve shape.
01:24:898(2) I feel like this slider just curve more to the left, with a point at (x=380, y=327), and a point at (x=366, y=338)
01:25:570(3) To go with the flow of the slider, move this circle around here (x=308, y=331)
01:26:018(1) And this one around here (x=227, y=319)
Overall, very good!
[Insane]
This is an amazing map! It's hard to find bad things!
The flow is fantastic, it's so much fun to play!
00:51:876(2) Maybe move this to (x=333, y=102)? It seems to fit more like the others.
Same thing at 01:00:159(4) , maybe move to (x=169, y=74).
I think this pattern would flow a lot better at 01:05:421(5) if you rotated the slider around the playfeild by -9°, and moved 01:05:309(4) to (x=289,y=44)
That's it! It's a really good map
Awesome maps Fumika. You're really good. If you want me to do the other difficulties I will

ur mod is nice, but later don't just use the x: , y: you need to improve ur mod style but nice ! I fixed some slider, Thanks for the mod guys!

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Delis 2014-08-15T09:33:26+00:00

heeee
[■ General]

add ii after sword art online in tags, also somehow 2nd season as well. like this mapset : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/190222

[■ Gu‘s Insane]
change ‘ to ' in the diff name if this was not intentional. also you can remove widescreen support since this mapset doesn't include any SB stuff and other diffs are disabled. just a minor thing but =A=.

00:19:077 (4) - finish to emphasize the strong beat on the music.
00:27:585 (3) - I would avoid overlapping with 00:26:913 (1) - for me look neat and the larger jump feels more comfortable to play.
SPOILER
00:28:704 (1) - probably a whistle here, there's the piano sound which can be emphasized and you actually followed them (00:25:122 - 00:26:913 - )
00:32:734 (2) - what is the whistle is for? if for the vocals, 00:32:510 (1) - has more stronger than current one, and for the piano, the whistle should be at the end of this slider =.=
00:35:868 - >_> this is almost silent orz it actually affects playing I guess. volume +5 - 10% please for players... 00:38:555 - is also
00:40:010 - this green line is probably unnecessary. should be at 00:39:898 - if you wanna make silent slider tick here.
00:47:062 (2) - I'm not sure you don't like to place straight line after a straight slider, but I felt that straight flow will fit better with the clap on (2) here.
SPOILER
00:48:630 (1) - I somehow feel better to place top of 00:48:182 (7) - and 00:47:958 (6,7,1) - the flow (6) => (7) was a bit forced and awkward for me, so maybe my suggestion fits to current flow :
SPOILER
00:54:450 (3) - probably sampleset : normal would nice, also normal claps for all circles of a triplet is noisy for me, remove the clap on (3) too. it also makes consistency with another triplets in kiai.
01:02:510 (1) - I would add a finish on head. also remove some hitsound if needed.
01:18:853 (1) - I can head the sound which is similar to finish sound, so you could add a finish on head but probably just me.

a good insane except 1/6 sliders >.>

[■ Insane]

00:01:839 (1,1,1,1) - these sliders are much fitting the song, although this is just me? I don't think 2nd NEW COMBO (00:02:510 (1) - ) and 4th (00:04:301 (1) - ) are necessary thing. 00:03:630 (1,1) - you're using somehow similar slider to 00:01:839 (1,1) - so removing new combos of 2nd/4th is nice to separate between first 2 sliders and rest.
00:20:868 (1) - this was too close between 00:20:421 (2) - when test played it, I would rather move more distant place. but seems you placed anti jumps by proper spacing, so expand the spacing like x1.9 for better anti jump >.>
SPOILER

00:36:316 (1) - add a whistle for consistency with 00:39:898 (2,3) - and some circles in this part
00:40:794 (2) - drum clap or finish would fit the song better
00:49:749 - I would increase the volume by 10, the sound somehow similar to violin? is starting from this slider, to emphasize the sound and the vocal is more stronger than 00:49:301 (2) -
00:56:018 (1) - add a whistle ~
01:00:271 (5) - sampleset : normal here? there's the beat which is same as 01:00:159 and it can be emphasized by normal hitsound. try it out
01:05:309 (4) - I would add sampleset : normal + a clap as you have hitsounded on 00:50:645 (3,4,5) -
01:12:809 (4) - CTRL + G is also cool flow at all, I especially like the flow between 01:12:809 (4) - and 01:13:256 (1) -
01:14:488 (2,1) - sampleset : normal fits bettter on both, I feel both are really empty here since there are so many hitsound in this part.
01:18:182 (4) - sampleset : normal here? the hitsound patterns in a row are stopped suddenly here, not a big deal but feels a bit uncomfortable.
01:20:645 (1) - I would move a bit top (like x44 y188) for better flow, maybe it doesn't make any changes in edit, but it actually a lot better for playing, so I recommend to do. also add a finish on head to follow the cymbal sound.
SPOILER
01:21:876 (2) - Sampleset : Normal? I had feeling a bit weird here.
01:22:436 (1) - not the cymbal sound but there's still a strong beat which can be added a finish, also it fits better if you applied a finish on 01:20:645 (1) -
01:26:018 (1) - this overlapping is not that bad, though I think avoiding the overlapping by placing with normal spacing is better way in this case, well that's just my personal wish :
SPOILER

omg those anti jumps are really fun to play with double time (<= ORZ)

I decided to shoot a star for this diff lmao

[■ Mochi's Hard]

00:10:570 (1) - the finish doesn't fit the song x.x there is no sound to keep the finish
00:12:137 (1) - the piano sound is actually start from 00:12:081 but no one cares it when playing
00:30:495 (1) - I would move the direction a bit left, it makes a better flow between 00:30:495 (1) - and 00:31:167 (2) - also more smooth flow for 00:30:048 (4,1) -
00:49:749 (3) - what is this slider following? if the sound on the music, a 1/8 slider is better here. I would rather follow a vocal and the drum == :
SPOILER
00:54:674 (3) - the slider's angle makes forced flow imo, I would make a symmetrical slider with 00:53:779 (1) - it definitely much better than current one, or make a natural flow for 00:55:346 (4,1,2) -
SPOILER

/
01:00:271 - why did you ignore the beat which can be emphasized by adding circle orz, you can listen to it exactly and should be added. I'm not sure if you don't wanna put a triplet from white tick, then make a kick slider or something. anyway it's better way than 2 circles while ignoring the beat.
01:25:570 - unnecessary green line

[■ Normal]

heh I didn't know that random distance is allowed for Easy/Normal

00:07:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - uguu a bit many circles for calm part, change both of 2 circles or one to 1/2 slider would better here.
00:23:779 (2) - I would move a bit right side, and then adjust 00:24:003 (3) - too, it looks more smooth flow from 00:23:331 (1) - to them @_@
SPOILER
00:52:883 (1,2) - I would exchange the rhythm, it follow the vocals exactly. I mean doing a ctrl+g only for rhythm
01:02:510 (4) - extend this slider to next red tick, I have no reason to but it feels much better for me.
01:15:271 (5) - add nc here, you added most of nc per 1 down beat so

[■ Nich's Easy]

00:08:331 (3) - a whistle for the piano
00:09:003 (1) - add a whistle on end for the pianooo
00:16:615 (2) - there's no sound to follow at end, the whistle also doesn't fit here. I would extend to the white tick but I don't think using 1/2 rhythm is a good idea for easiest diff. anyway, you can add something strong hitsound on 00:17:734 (1) - head since there's a strong beat to emphasize. also remove nc for consistency
00:19:749 (1) - overlapping to 00:19:077 (2) - is not best way for easier diffs, I would recommend you to avoid it by moving 00:19:749 (1) - a bit right
SPOILER
00:39:450 (3) - add a drum finish or clap on tail, as you added on 00:32:958 (4) - tail, it should be nice here.
01:02:062 (2) - you could add a normal finish on tail, there's a stronger beat than 01:00:943 -
01:12:809 (2,3) - again about overlapping, just try like this :
SPOILER
01:24:227 (1) - uuu this nc isn't suitable here imo orz

zzz

Quilt

1,476 posts

Joined May 2010

Quilt 2014-08-15T09:41:58+00:00

hi im Quilt

normal
01:10:570 (4) - delete this slider then put 1 note 01:10:570?

01:11:018 (1) - move to back 1/2? then it change reverse slider

Hard

00:56:018 (3,4) - try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/aTm2Q/2dd474df0c.jpg

Insane
AR 8.3?

GU's Insane

00:39:450 (1) - make the end 00:39:898?

01:02:510 (1) - ctrl + G?

nerf pro mappers plz

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2014-08-15T11:56:56+00:00

from via PM

General

add "TV ver." , "TV size" or "short ver." in tag ??
find

Nichiyouki

00:28:704 (3,1) - blanket ??
01:26:018 (1) - end same Gu's diff??
very very cute(?) diff

Normal

00:06:092 (2,1) - strike in normal 0.0??
01:19:749 (2,1) - blanket ??
i like hitsound *0*

Momochikun

00:22:212 (2) - hitsound on this slidertail in song is very low , low volume pls maybe 20% - 25%
00:36:540 (3,4,5) - triple here in song is 1/6 , maybe change to 1/6 or 1/2 rhythms
00:50:197 (4,1) - swap NC ??
01:04:525 (4,1) - ^
01:06:316 (5,1) - ^
01:26:130 (1) - end same Fumika diff ??
jump for hard ;w;

Fumika

00:30:495 (1,2,3,4) - make square ??
00:36:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - make triangle ??
00:40:794 (2) - use set drum on addition ?? listen in song :3
01:03:182 (1) - why NC ??
01:26:018 (1) - use finish in hitsound set 2 ??

No_Gu

AR8 pls, it's so sft song ;w;
00:12:809 (2,7) - strike ??
00:39:450 (1) - remove whistle on slidertail
00:59:152 (1) - change to other patern of slider or change to note pls ;w;
01:26:018 (1) - use finish in hitsound set 2 ??

that all , okay good luck!!

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2014-08-15T18:39:41+00:00

Thank you everyone for mod :3

My diff

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48742
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Startear
TitleUnicode:Startear
Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:Fumika
Version:Nich's Easy
Source:ソードアート・オンライン II
Tags:Netsukawa ending Sword Art Online II Phantom Bullet SAO Gun Gale Saku No_Gu NoGu Momochikun nich95 Nichiyouki 2nd season
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BeatmapSetID:199531

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HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
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P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2014-08-16T12:27:39+00:00

[Gu's]

I agreed about ar8, since the bpm is just 134 and I think ar10 when DT is more fit than 10.3. also ar8 won't make your note crowd.
00:07:883 (3) - flip vertically is more flow but it's ok though.
00:13:928 (7) - stack properly?
00:18:406 (3) - you can change this into 2 notes because there are strong beat so I think it more fit than slider, place the second on (4) so it still keep like slider pattern.
00:24:674 (4) - place somewhere else to make a jump to 00:25:122 (1)? more fit with music imo.

[Fumika]

00:02:510 (1,1) - hm... no need to NC imo.. because I think it's the same vocal section as previous but it's ok though you can keep it.
00:18:406 (2) - this slider has strong beat on both head and tail so I suggest to spread it into 2 circles to make it more fit with music? and it will have better feel to press it also.
00:28:928 (1,2,3) - hmm this section is.. kind of low spacing if compare to previous and next and the spacing is a bit not balance. even if you make it intention, make their spacing balance would be good.
00:41:242 - after this part, I know you add it intention but I think they are too much NC so I suggest to add NC just on 00:43:033 (3) and 00:44:824 (3) it more fit imo.
00:47:958 (1,2) - switch NC?
hmm I think the way you add NC is weird. I think NC should be on 00:51:988 (3) , 00:55:570 (3) , 00:57:361 (3).
01:02:510 (1) - remove NC? just two is too little combo and I think remove it is more fit.
01:14:376 (1) - remove NC and add on 01:15:271 (3) is more fit imo.
I don't get the way you add NC, maybe pattern, jump or vocal but I think add too many is not good but overall your pattern is no problem at all, I just wonder about NC, it cause how hard it read and drain too so please consider.

[mochi]

00:10:346 (3) - hmm.. hm..!! hm.. well... I think delete it is really more fit. it really weird ;A;
00:49:749 (3) - shouldn't it be 1/8?

[Normal]

00:00:495 (1) - delete? the gap to next note is way too long, it's like yea the song is start but hit just one note and wait the beat.
00:23:779 (2) - a bit not flow nicely, try to move about 424|132?

[NIch]

mute the slider tick on 00:02:734 and 00:04:525? way too loud imo.

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Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-16T13:05:02+00:00

Thanks u guys for the mod! Almost change all >.< !

Edit : Fix for No_Gu too.

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2014-08-16T16:49:03+00:00

Started with a quick after test-play modding and ended up posting it as a full-mod.

Changes:

General and metadata fixes
Adjusted diff settings a bit
A couple of flow/rhythm fixes

IRC log

20:47 -Bakari-: Netsukawaii!
20:47 Fumika: nani!!!
20:48 *-Bakari- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/478461 Haruna Luna - Startear]
20:48 Fumika: o.o
20:48 -Bakari-: Is there anything you'd like to change before I start? 
20:48 Fumika: nope, I just upload w
20:49 -Bakari-: or we can do an IRC mod, and I'll mod the rest of the diffs in the thread
20:49 Fumika: sure
20:49 Fumika: :D
20:50 -Bakari-: Okay, are you allowed to change guest diff? 
20:50 Fumika: just No_Gu's
20:52 -Bakari-: let me re-dl the map, just to make sure that I won't miss anything important :P
20:54 -Bakari-: Okay, let's start with general stuff
20:54 Fumika: ok
20:55 -Bakari-: add SAOII and second to the tags
20:55 Fumika: second season ?
20:55 -Bakari-: Yup
20:56 -Bakari-: You already have "2nd", why not add "second" as well?
20:56 Fumika: my bad lol
20:56 Fumika: added both
21:00 -Bakari-: Everything else looks nice in general, good job :3/
21:00 Fumika: :3/
21:01 -Bakari-: Okay, now [Normal]
21:02 -Bakari-: I would use HP 3,5 and OD 4
21:02 -Bakari-: this is a Normal diff and the song is quite intense, so, why not
21:02 Fumika: done
21:04 -Bakari-: 00:07:436 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - feels a bit agressive fo this part, I'd remove 00:08:555 (4) - to simplify the rhythm
21:05 Fumika: sooooo
21:05 Fumika: (4) NC ?
21:06 Fumika: and remove NC after that
21:06 -Bakari-: try to remove (4) 
21:06 Fumika: and make it stack to the slider instead ?
21:06 Fumika: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1933250
21:06 Fumika: ?
21:06 -Bakari-: even [http://puu.sh/aUXWM.jpg this] way is fine
21:07 -Bakari-: you can move new combo, or leave it as it is. 
21:07 Fumika: ok
21:07 Fumika: done
21:07 Fumika: ok
21:08 -Bakari-: 00:33:406 (5,1) - x1,5 DS here is a bit too much. the sudden spacing change feels weird, at least to me.
21:08 -Bakari-: I'd use x1.0 DS
21:08 -Bakari-: 00:35:421 (4,1) - same
21:08 -Bakari-: and so on for all the similar patterns
21:10 -Bakari-: oh, and you can move NC 00:31:615 (1,3) - from (1) to (3)
21:10 -Bakari-: it will fit better with the vocals, in my opinion
21:12 Fumika: ok
21:12 -Bakari-: 00:57:809 (1) - remove this new combo, it does not really fit here and makes your pattern look inconsistent
21:13 Fumika: btw, 1,5 is not that much, it would be fine for me
21:13 Fumika: ok remove NC
21:13 -Bakari-: 01:13:033 (4) - the main beat is on the red tick and it feels unstressd this way. remoce the slider and place just one circle at 01:13:256 - to emphasize the drum
21:14 -Bakari-: the thing about 1,5 is that there was x0,8 DS before. 
21:14 -Bakari-: therefore, it feels like the distance is two times bigger, which may confuse some players
21:15 Fumika: Yea, but I reduce slider speed
21:15 Fumika: A little jump migh be fine for that imo
21:15 -Bakari-: 01:26:018 (1,1) - this diff can be played in mania, taiko and ctb
21:16 -Bakari-: and this will be too much for a Normal diff in these modes
21:16 Fumika: ?
21:16 -Bakari-: a sudden 1/4 in the end of the diff, which is purely overmapped does not really fit here. 
21:16 Fumika: What about it o.o?
21:16 -Bakari-: start it on the red tick, at least
21:17 Fumika: ehhhh Dx
21:17 -Bakari-: so, it'll become playable in ALL modes, which is kinda cool
21:17 Fumika: but I want standard ;A;
21:17 -Bakari-: Yeah, but since you have no ctb/taiko/o!m diffs
21:18 Fumika: let me test
21:18 -Bakari-: just because you don't play special modes, doesn't mean that other people don't play it ;_;
21:19 Fumika: ah
21:20 Fumika: Then I will remove tha last note if its a problem
21:20 -Bakari-: yeah, that'd be great
21:21 -Bakari-: and I guess that's it. everything else seems neat and clean
21:21 Fumika: done
21:23 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/473200 Haruna Luna - Startear [Insane]]
21:24 -Bakari-: 00:12:137 (1) - try to make this slider 1/8 shorter
21:24 -Bakari-: so, there will be 1/4 gap between this and the next slider
21:24 -Bakari-: which will make the diff much more playable
21:26 Fumika: I think this will be fine, cuz 1/8 is connect to the next note actually
21:26 Fumika: And If I make a gap between this, sound will be pretty weird lol
21:28 Fumika: nah, I want to keep this
21:30 -Bakari-: and that's pretty much it, let me check it two more times to make sure
21:31 Fumika: okie
21:31 -Bakari-: uh, yeah, 00:13:368 (4) - overmapped circle there 
21:32 -Bakari-: 00:16:055 (2) - and there
21:32 Fumika: Why ??
21:33 -Bakari-: because there're no beats in music
21:35 Fumika: aw, Let me check this with BAT
21:36 -Bakari-: well, okay, leaving the overmapped beats up to BATs, then
21:36 Fumika: okay
21:36 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/474679 Haruna Luna - Startear [Gu's Insane]]
21:39 -Bakari-: 00:36:540 (3,4) - these sliders are snappd to 1/6, which is different from 1/4 used before
21:39 -Bakari-: a new combo would warn players about rhythm changes and give some extra HP which may be quite useful
21:40 Fumika: ok
21:43 -Bakari-: AiBat is telling something about the unsnapped beats in this diff, check them, please
21:45 -Bakari-: 01:13:816 (3,5) - and overmapping stays up to BATs again, right? 
21:45 Fumika: ok
21:47 -Bakari-: well, that's pretty much it. 
21:47 Fumika: o.o
21:47 -Bakari-: I'll mod Easy and Hard soon, and post this veeeery short log

[Nich's Easy]

Due to some 3/2 patterns I highly suggest setting OD to 1,5 or 1. It will make the diff more playable for beginners.
00:35:868 (3,1) - the overlap seems a bit out of your style and looks a bit untidy, in my opinion. I would recommend you to avoid it.

Nothing else to say, not a fun of 3/2 beats in easier diffs, but it was necessary, so it should be fine if you reduce OD. Anyway, the diff is quite nicely done, great job!

[Mochi's Hard]

00:02:510 (2,1) - the fact that players will have to move their cursor 4 times faster that they did it before does not seem like a good idea in a calm part of the diff. Drop the DS here, please.
00:12:137 (1) - I would make this 1/8 shorter. As there is an 1/8 gap between sliders, it feels way too hard for a Hard diff.
01:00:271 - the vocals appar here (at the red tick), therefore, making the slider start here as well will fit much bettr with the song. Example
01:20:645 (1,2) - replacing these tow with a 3/4 slider would acually git better here. Give it a try and see if you like it or not.

That's pretty much it. Quite a nice diff.

I don't really agree with the overmapped beats and some 3/4s, so you might pay more attention to them. Everything else is okay.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2014-08-16T17:58:14+00:00

General
- Check tag via AIMod

Nich's Easy
00:47:958 (3) - clap กับ finish ที่หางเพื่อไม่ให้มันเสียงดังต่างกันจนเกินไปกับ slider ตัวถัดไป (คือตัวหลังมันทำให้รู้สึกว่าดังจนเกินเหตุเพราะตัวก่อนหน้าเบา ทั้งๆที่ตัวเพลงจริงๆมันไม่ได้เสียงต่างกันมาก)
01:24:227 (1) - NC นี้เอาออกได้ถ้าไม่จำเป็น แต่เก็บไว้ก็ไม่มีปัญหา

Normal
fine

Mochi's Hard
00:03:630 (1,2) - 00:05:868 (2,3) - 00:07:659 (2,3) - 00:08:779 (5,1) - can you please not make a jump with the very low slider velocity?
I am sure these are inappropriate in Hard diff. If you want to make jumps, make them on faster slider velocities in the chorus or somewhere that don't feel calm like this part.
00:22:212 (2) - what does this slider end for? It could work if you are mapping an Insane one but the Hard one should be the most simple.
Can you make something like this instead? like what you did on 00:25:794 (3,4) - 00:29:376 (3,4) -

SPOILER

Insane
Can this beatmap stay AR 8.0?
8.3 is too part, plus your diff has less jumps than Gu's Insane so it is distracting the whole calm parts in this diff.

Gu's Insane
AR 8.1-8.3? this AR 8.5 isn't fitting at all. It helps you read jumps but it fails to fit with the atmosphere of the song and feels it's forcing players to pay attention to this map overly and unnecessarily.
00:39:450 (1) - what is this? If you think following to the piano sound with 1/8 snapped is creative, it's ok for you to leave it as is. But to me, this is the most unexpected pattern and I can't find this appropriate to the music where it has vocal on 00:39:898

Good luck

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-08-16T23:08:30+00:00

In the fact i like high jump with low SV >< , changed some of them though.
Thank you !

SPOILER

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Source:ソードアート・オンライン II
Tags:Netsukawa ending Sword Art Online II Phantom Bullet SAO Gun Gale Saku No_Gu NoGu Momochikun nich95 Nichiyouki 2nd season
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Nichiyouki

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Nichiyouki 2014-08-17T03:05:04+00:00

Thank you for mod >w<

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Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-17T09:27:09+00:00

Updated, also change mp3 re-download plz !

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-08-17T12:31:54+00:00

as requested via in game here

General

you ninja'ed me about the title so this is clean now =w=

Easy

00:08:945 (1) - imo the curving on slider is too curvy here. the flow feel bit awkward here. how about smoother the slider something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1935973 ? it giving smoother flow here >_<
00:16:557 (2) - since the string/violin sound on the slider's tail is weak, how about remove the whistle here. imo the whistle here feel kinda loud. if you insist to keep whistle, reduce the volume instead
00:17:676 (1) - hmm just my taste, since i hear the music is so strong here, actually i prefer add finish here since i feel that whistle doesn't strong to emphasize the music
00:19:691 - i feel the 60% here is a little bit loud here. how about 50% here? imo it is the best volume for this part. if you agree with this, 00:34:019 - around 35% or 40% for this part
00:25:064 (3) - hmm just my taste, because the previous slider is kinda curvy here, imo suddenly do a kinda "straight" flow here feel a little bit plain. how about curve this slider slightly? i guess something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1935999
00:32:900 (4) - nazi, blanket it perfectly /runs , i guess around move the slider around 48,248 and the tail (after move the slider first) 176,220
00:37:659 (1) - hmm i don't really like the overlap here, how about make a little bit sliderart instead to avoid the overlap http://puu.sh/aTeFd/6cafe8f7b0.jpg ?
00:42:975 (2) - i don't know this is intentional or not but add whistle here for emphasize the loud piano here >_<
00:47:900 (3) - add aditional normal here. the default whistle feels too random here. the music on the this time actually same with 00:47:004 - (ignore the drum) so imo consistent for the hitsound is really needed here >_<
00:47:900 (3) - oh again for this slider lol , now for the tail. as i heard the musics for this tail with 00:48:572 - are same here so please make its become same. since i hearing here as inconsistency. kinda awkward :< (if from my taste, i would remove finish here since no cymbal at this time)
01:02:004 (2) - altho you hitsounded the 01:02:228 - with tick here. imo this still feel empty since the music on the whitetick is loud here while you mapped the red tick on 01:02:004 - which has weaker sound. map the whitetick with 1/2 slider or 1/2 repeat start from 01:02:004 - to emphasize the whitetick clearly
01:12:079 - remove clap tick on this time. the music doesn't has any kick drum
01:20:139 (3) - imo the circular flow works better here, just move the circle to 16,140
01:25:960 - the music is really dissapear to the end of spinner so 5% please :< , 10% feel still loud here

Normal

OD feel too low here. at least make OD same with the HP for better spread with diffs
Since Easy uses CS3 and the Hard uses CS4. imo CS 3,5 for Normal is the best here
00:00:437 (1) - imo the circle here is really random since the time just has vocal while the vocal is same with 00:00:885 - 00:01:333 - , so if you map the first vocal, imo you should map the other that vocals too
00:08:721 (1) - is the circle itentional here? since the circle just following vocal only here. imo for Normal diff no need to map this.
00:10:512 (1) - finish hear little bit random here since the string sound is going to dissapear. imo the sound is really weak and low here so no hitsound at this time works better imo
00:34:019 (1,2,3) - aa imo the 1/2 on this part this unnecessary since the red ticks just having vocals here. imo 1/2 on this diff too much too, i hope you can reduce 1/2 gaps here by change those sliders into 1/1 slider repeat
00:37:601 (1,2,3) - ^
00:43:422 (3,4,5) - imo the rhythm here kinda complex since you're mapping the music of 00:43:870 - that you aren't map that kind of sound mostly on the diff, i guess something like http://puu.sh/aW7Kq/b0bddc8ed9.jpg works better here
00:48:684 - unnecessary greenline /runs
00:51:706 (3) - i wonder why you map this one which has "normal" while the 00:51:258 - has a strong string sound here. imo remove the circle would be better here
00:58:646 (5) - i understand actually you're mapping the music here, but with the musics you are mapping most of the vocals too here. while 00:58:870 - you skip this time which has vocal, it sounds awkward here. i guess try 1/2 slider repeat instead here
01:02:452 (4,1) - well maybe NC'ing one object before kiai time is your style but imo that's look like unnecessary here. if want to emphasize the music on 01:02:452 - imo swap NC works better here
01:05:139 (2,3) - hmm long 1/2 pattern again imo. if i were you i would make this more simple. i guess just make 1/2 slider repeat start from 01:05:363 -
01:14:094 (2,3) - if you just map the violin sounds here, you can make this become easier with make this one become 1/1 slider
01:21:482 (2) - the slider here looks messy since it kinda different with previous slider, imo symmetrical would be better here http://puu.sh/aW8rE/09ba3e14d7.jpg
01:24:169 (1) - nazi, imo you can move the tail of slider slightly to rightward to make the slider's shape similar with next slider. ofc it looked nicer here. for the tail imo 420,204 works with fine
Our styles are really different here. so i don't want touch too much here. personally i don't like use smaller spacing for 1/2 since spacing 1,0x for 1/2 rhythm here is fine for me (as my thought at first), after i saw your rhythms i know why you're use smaller spacing lol. But i feel the 1/2 gaps here are too much here, might be just different our styles ww

Hard

00:07:825 (3) - nazi, imo sih slider shape e rada kurang melengkung krn previous slider e lek lengkung amat so jadinya kea gak rapi ngono. i would say tail 352,108, skalian tail e nunjuk next circle ben better flow
00:10:512 (1) - podo karo Normal
00:18:348 (4) - imo kan violin sound e jadi luwih keras nang kene. whistle tok kurang greget ngono.. err tambahen finish. kekuatan violin e yo mirip2 karo 00:17:676 - walau lebih lemah sih
00:19:691 (3) - NC soal e SV naik.. walau naik ga drastis sih tp yo, enakan NC .w.
00:22:601 (3) - taste doang sih tp aku luwih seneng lek tail e ngadep nang atas. kiro2 324,8. flow e luwih kroso
00:44:542 (5) - adoh e jump mu. reduce pelis. lek aku dadi kon, tak move 00:44:318 (4) - nang 360,204
00:47:676 (4) - kurang adoh, reduce spacing please. also 00:48:124 (5) - masa cymbal pke normal spacing. gak kerasa feel e disini
00:54:616 (3) - kinda disagree disini, vocal nya di 00:54:840 - kuat sih jadi repeat gak kasih feel kuat gtu.. hmm slider's head please for this time + little jump
00:59:094 (1) - sek2, piano keras nang kene mek di whistle, terus 01:00:885 (1) - piano e keras tp di finish.. consistency please :<
01:04:355 - pitch dari violin nya. malah aneh di skip disini ketika 01:04:131 - drum keras jg di map. imo map aja itu violin pitch nya
01:08:049 (1) - sampleset soft di whistle. buat emphasize vocal. also hindarin 1/2 whistle dengan suara yg sama. entah kenapa kedengaran gak enak

Insane

00:10:512 (1) - hmm just refered my taste but i prefer to normal spacing here something like move to 412,32 >_<
00:15:661 (4) - taste again, altho i saw the normal spacing 1,3x on next of this circle, i prefer do jumps for both previous and next of this circle by move the circle to 348,64
00:39:392 (4,1) - imo a little bit akward here when the loud piano is sounded on 00:39:392 (4) - and mapped it with normal spacing, 00:39:616 (1) - only has vocal and mapped by jump here. i guess the jump should be made on stanza here
00:59:542 (2) - would be cool if the pattern has a jump for 00:59:766 (3) - here. for it i guess move the circle 00:59:542 (2) - to 292,328
01:12:303 (3) - the red node here is making different here that i feel kinda akward, i would say to use curve slider only here. i guess something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1936286
01:20:587 (1,2) - i guess just a taste, i prefer to do something like http://puu.sh/aWaFL/df1f29866e.jpg for this time, since the bpm is low so much of 1/4 here is fine. also harder to play would be feel fun to play for Insane diff
So nazi here. Basically our flow taste and design are same here so i can't catch too much. Nice diff :3~

No_Gu

fine but 00:39:392 (1) - i kinda unsure with this. i know the 1/8 but the sound is really bad here. i guess don't rush to follow the string sound here. 1/1 slider works better

Good Luck ~
the song is nice ofc because Haruna Luna! <3

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2014-08-17T14:11:36+00:00

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@Xinely: I use overlap here to have a hint that it's a 1/8 here,so no problem imo

Fumika

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Fumika 2014-08-17T14:33:02+00:00

Xinely wrote:
as requested via in game here

General
you ninja'ed me about the title so this is clean now =w= HUEHUEHUEHUEHUHEUHEUHEUHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUE

Normal
OD feel too low here. at least make OD same with the HP for better spread with diffs increase by .5
Since Easy uses CS3 and the Hard uses CS4. imo CS 3,5 for Normal is the best here nah, It would be way too big and I need to re-map orz
00:00:437 (1) - imo the circle here is really random since the time just has vocal while the vocal is same with 00:00:885 - 00:01:333 - , so if you map the first vocal, imo you should map the other that vocals too Its fine tho
00:08:721 (1) - is the circle itentional here? since the circle just following vocal only here. imo for Normal diff no need to map this. But It need for me ;_;
00:10:512 (1) - finish hear little bit random here since the string sound is going to dissapear. imo the sound is really weak and low here so no hitsound at this time works better imo Its whistle lmao
00:34:019 (1,2,3) - aa imo the 1/2 on this part this unnecessary since the red ticks just having vocals here. imo 1/2 on this diff too much too, i hope you can reduce 1/2 gaps here by change those sliders into 1/1 slider repeat but its more fun ;A;
00:37:601 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:43:422 (3,4,5) - imo the rhythm here kinda complex since you're mapping the music of 00:43:870 - that you aren't map that kind of sound mostly on the diff, i guess something like http://puu.sh/aW7Kq/b0bddc8ed9.jpg works better here nooooope
00:48:684 - unnecessary greenline /runs wat
00:51:706 (3) - i wonder why you map this one which has "normal" while the 00:51:258 - has a strong string sound here. imo remove the circle would be better here Its fine =w=
00:58:646 (5) - i understand actually you're mapping the music here, but with the musics you are mapping most of the vocals too here. while 00:58:870 - you skip this time which has vocal, it sounds awkward here. i guess try 1/2 slider repeat instead here nuuuuuu
01:02:452 (4,1) - well maybe NC'ing one object before kiai time is your style but imo that's look like unnecessary here. if want to emphasize the music on 01:02:452 - imo swap NC works better here keep this ;w;
01:05:139 (2,3) - hmm long 1/2 pattern again imo. if i were you i would make this more simple. i guess just make 1/2 slider repeat start from 01:05:363 - NOH
01:14:094 (2,3) - if you just map the violin sounds here, you can make this become easier with make this one become 1/1 slider ehhh
01:21:482 (2) - the slider here looks messy since it kinda different with previous slider, imo symmetrical would be better here ITS FLOWWWWWWWWhttp://puu.sh/aW8rE/09ba3e14d7.jpg
01:24:169 (1) - nazi, imo you can move the tail of slider slightly to rightward to make the slider's shape similar with next slider. ofc it looked nicer here. for the tail imo 420,204 works with fine NAZIIIII
Our styles are really different here. so i don't want touch too much here. personally i don't like use smaller spacing for 1/2 since spacing 1,0x for 1/2 rhythm here is fine for me (as my thought at first), after i saw your rhythms i know why you're use smaller spacing lol. But i feel the 1/2 gaps here are too much here, might be just different our styles ww hehehe

Insane
00:10:512 (1) - hmm just refered my taste but i prefer to normal spacing here something like move to 412,32 >_< nah
00:15:661 (4) - taste again, altho i saw the normal spacing 1,3x on next of this circle, i prefer do jumps for both previous and next of this circle by move the circle to 348,64 ^
00:39:392 (4,1) - imo a little bit akward here when the loud piano is sounded on 00:39:392 (4) - and mapped it with normal spacing, 00:39:616 (1) - only has vocal and mapped by jump here. i guess the jump should be made on stanza here Its really fun to play here ;A;
00:59:542 (2) - would be cool if the pattern has a jump for 00:59:766 (3) - here. for it i guess move the circle 00:59:542 (2) - to 292,328 ok
01:12:303 (3) - the red node here is making different here that i feel kinda akward, i would say to use curve slider only here. i guess something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1936286 style wwww
01:20:587 (1,2) - i guess just a taste, i prefer to do something like http://puu.sh/aWaFL/df1f29866e.jpg for this time, since the bpm is low so much of 1/4 here is fine. also harder to play would be feel fun to play for Insane diff nuuuuuuu
So nazi here. Basically our flow taste and design are same here so i can't catch too much. Nice diff :3~ BEST NAZI MAPPING HUEHUEHUE

Good Luck ~
the song is nice ofc because Haruna Luna! <3

Thanks for modding !

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-08-17T17:17:49+00:00

Nich's Easy:

00:32:900 (4) - Well the drum-clap seems not matching the song enough as 00:40:736. normal-clap would be the easy one, but you may keep if you want.
00:45:885 (3) - Sampleset-normal: are you sure? It sounds too loud. Rather it should be an addition-normal.

Normal:

00:21:482 (1,2) - Please make a smoother flow as you've done at the other same patterns. http://puu.sh/aWpoo/77e1fd1914.jpg
00:56:855 (1) - Consider setting the end as a soft whistle. A normal sampleset in a row was a little loud imo.

Mochi's Hard:

00:03:572 (1) - This is a beginning of your map, and it starts with a slow sv. And this jump feels too stressful because of that slow sv. It is true that in fact this isn't a large distance for players to aim, but the song is calm here, and the map is in a slow pace. Reducing the spacing won't be a bad selection this case.
00:13:870 (6) - 2 grids up perhaps for a better distance.
00:36:258 (2) - I don't think it's more important to place at the end of 00:34:691 (2) than maintaining the distance..
00:50:139 (4,1) - I think starting the combo from (4) fits more. How do you think?
01:04:467 (4,1) - ^

Insane:

00:08:945 (1,2) - The wiggling of the sliderball doesn't seem nice compared to the calm song. Whatever effect you intended, mind alleviating by a little?
00:28:870 (1) - Remove new combo. There was a similar pattern of your selected rhythm at 00:25:288 (4) and you can see the consistency was broken. Difference because of slider and note won't matter much here.
00:39:392 (4) - As Xinely, I felt a jump should have actually been made at here, where a new stanza begins, not 00:39:616 (1). But it seems its a little tricky to alter patterns here, so I wouldn't be sad if you decided not to change.
01:03:572 (1) - Consider removing NC? Not sure for here though.
01:07:601 (5) - I think the flow to this object could've been sharper, something like you done at 00:52:825 (5). Currently it feels a little too bland. Mind placing at (324,216)?

Gu's Insane:

00:39:392 (1,2) - The map is really nice, but I think this ruined the map partially... I won't ask you for a change since you seem to like your pattern and you were following an instrument with a distinct style, but just saying that I was sad.

Good luck~

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-17T17:27:20+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Normal:
00:21:482 (1,2) - Please make a smoother flow as you've done at the other same patterns. http://puu.sh/aWpoo/77e1fd1914.jpg Its fine tho
00:56:855 (1) - Consider setting the end as a soft whistle. A normal sampleset in a row was a little loud imo. nope, consistence with Insane diff
Insane:
00:08:945 (1,2) - The wiggling of the sliderball doesn't seem nice compared to the calm song. Whatever effect you intended, mind alleviating by a little? nah, It would be fine >_>
00:28:870 (1) - Remove new combo. There was a similar pattern of your selected rhythm at 00:25:288 (4) and you can see the consistency was broken. Difference because of slider and note won't matter much here. Its anti-jump as you can see by the spacing
00:39:392 (4) - As Xinely, I felt a jump should have actually been made at here, where a new stanza begins, not 00:39:616 (1). But it seems its a little tricky to alter patterns here, so I wouldn't be sad if you decided not to change. Ah fine fine fine, Fixed it
01:03:572 (1) - Consider removing NC? Not sure for here though. nope
01:07:601 (5) - I think the flow to this object could've been sharper, something like you done at 00:52:825 (5). Currently it feels a little too bland. Mind placing at (324,216)? what?
Gu's Insane:
00:39:392 (1,2) - The map is really nice, but I think this ruined the map partially... I won't ask you for a change since you seem to like your pattern and you were following an instrument with a distinct style, but just saying that I was sad.
No_Gu wrote:
@Xinely: I use overlap here to have a hint that it's a 1/8 here,so no problem imo
Good luck~

Thanks for modding!

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-08-19T19:03:05+00:00

Xinely wrote:
as requested via in game here

Hard
00:07:825 (3) - nazi, imo sih slider shape e rada kurang melengkung krn previous slider e lek lengkung amat so jadinya kea gak rapi ngono. i would say tail 352,108, skalian tail e nunjuk next circle ben better flow fine imo, can't see any different ><
00:10:512 (1) - podo karo Normal same as fumika's answer then ~
00:18:348 (4) - imo kan violin sound e jadi luwih keras nang kene. whistle tok kurang greget ngono.. err tambahen finish. kekuatan violin e yo mirip2 karo 00:17:676 - walau lebih lemah sih terlalu berisik ah
00:19:691 (3) - NC soal e SV naik.. walau naik ga drastis sih tp yo, enakan NC .w. nah..
00:22:601 (3) - taste doang sih tp aku luwih seneng lek tail e ngadep nang atas. kiro2 324,8. flow e luwih kroso ud bagus kok
00:44:542 (5) - adoh e jump mu. reduce pelis. lek aku dadi kon, tak move 00:44:318 (4) - nang 360,204 gak jauh" amat kok =3=
00:47:676 (4) - kurang adoh, reduce spacing please. also 00:48:124 (5) - masa cymbal pke normal spacing. gak kerasa feel e disini ud emphasize jump drum
00:54:616 (3) - kinda disagree disini, vocal nya di 00:54:840 - kuat sih jadi repeat gak kasih feel kuat gtu.. hmm slider's head please for this time + little jump player gak bakal recognize deh kyknya.. lagian ini part kn fokus 1/1 drum
00:59:094 (1) - sek2, piano keras nang kene mek di whistle, terus 01:00:885 (1) - piano e keras tp di finish.. consistency please :< soalnya ada 3/4 drum part disini dan vocal serasa lbih kuat jadi finish. gk kyk sbelum nya
01:04:355 - pitch dari violin nya. malah aneh di skip disini ketika 01:04:131 - drum keras jg di map. imo map aja itu violin pitch nya dunno how 2 fix
01:08:049 (1) - sampleset soft di whistle. buat emphasize vocal. also hindarin 1/2 whistle dengan suara yg sama. entah kenapa kedengaran gak enak Ya juga.. removed then

Good Luck ~
the song is nice ofc because Haruna Luna! <3

Sonnyc wrote:
Mochi's Hard:
00:03:572 (1) - This is a beginning of your map, and it starts with a slow sv. And this jump feels too stressful because of that slow sv. It is true that in fact this isn't a large distance for players to aim, but the song is calm here, and the map is in a slow pace. Reducing the spacing won't be a bad selection this case. Keeping this atm, that's not soo far imo
00:13:870 (6) - 2 grids up perhaps for a better distance. Ok
00:36:258 (2) - I don't think it's more important to place at the end of 00:34:691 (2) than maintaining the distance.. I don't get this lol
00:50:139 (4,1) - I think starting the combo from (4) fits more. How do you think? nah.. it's fit the pattern
01:04:467 (4,1) - ^

Good luck~

Thank you :3

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RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-08-22T12:15:45+00:00

Hi, Fumika~

[Normal]

00:08:497- I prefer to add a note to suit to vocal. suggetion~

[Insane]

00:48:348- remove normal hitsound
01:02:676- ^
01:25:960- I prefer to reduce hitsound's volume

[Nich's Easy]

00:17:676- normal clap?
00:32:228 (3,4) - bnalket correctly

[Mochi's Hard]

00:02:452 (2) - suggetion~
00:55:288 (4,1,2) - how about curved pattern instead of straight?
SPOILER
01:19:243- clap?

[Gu's Insane]

00:17:900- remove norma lhitsound
00:48:124 (7,1) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
01:25:960 (1) - I prefer to reduce hotsound's volume

almost good! Sinon is so cute<3
~☆

~Good Luck~

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-23T11:02:25+00:00

Fixed smt

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2014-08-23T13:38:53+00:00

Thank you, fixed mostly >.<

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:Startear -TV size ver.-
Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:Fumika
Version:Nich's Easy
Source:ソードアート・オンライン II
Tags:Netsukawa ending Sword Art Online II Phantom Bullet SAO Gun Gale Saku No_Gu NoGu Momochikun nich95 Nichiyouki SAOII second 2nd season
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Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-08-23T18:37:10+00:00

Modding because of #modreqs.

[Nich's Easy]

In general, I would increase the volume by like 10% of the Sliderslide 3 when you use it so it fits with the hitclap naturally.
01:24:170 (1) - This NC is kinda unneeded, would be cool if you removed it since it looks really single.
Really, really awesome difficulty. Totally clean and nice rhythm!

[Normal]

00:48:796 (5) - Add a drum finish addition here to fit the enduring sound? If you do add it, add it on your other difficulties aswell please.
00:57:304 (2,3) - The phrase calls more for a Slider here in my opinion, how about changing those two into a Slider? Would also make the transition to the next Slider easier to play.
01:05:588 (3) - Delete the Slider and add a note to the white tick? This place just seems to full of notes to me if you look at the previous ones, so might be better to tone it down a bit.
This difficulty is also totally awesome.. Dunno what to say just really nice.

[Mochi's Hard]

00:36:483 (3) - Move this more to the right to create a nice square? It just looks weird like it currently is.
00:37:155 (4) - Might be a good idea to remove this note since you didn't fully follow the drums which makes this a bit confusing to follow.
00:59:991 (3,4) - The double is somewhat hard to get for a decent Hard player I guess, try to shorten this to an 1/2 Slider and make it a triple?
01:17:789 - How about adding a note here to follow the drums? Sounds good and keeps excitement up.

[Insane]

00:18:349 (2) - Just a suggestion but you could try ctrl + G here for a different flow. Just a suggestion as said, but I find it kinda cool.
00:48:125 (1) - Better remove the normal sampleset from the end as there are no drums to back it up.
00:49:244 (2,3,4) - How about decreasing the spacing a bit? I missread them as 1/2 first.
01:02:453 (1) - Same as for 00:48:125 (1) - .
Wow, nice one again!

[Gu's Insane]

00:52:826 (5) - How about ctrl + J on this Slider? Flows better to me but just a suggestion.
01:02:453 (1) - Make the end soft sampleset since there's no drum playing on the Slider's end?
01:24:170 (1) - You could reduce the volume by 20% or something on the end and add a finish with normal addition to follow the cymbals.
Awesome as always! I love your maps!

Really great mapset, has been a long time since I saw a mapset that good!
Take a star and good luck!

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-24T18:23:14+00:00

Change smt!

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Delis 2014-08-25T17:53:20+00:00

seems no need to wait for a week, throw some suggestions *no kudos*

[■ General]

in the source, this should have been better removed the space between ン and II, and then change II to Ⅱ. probably not unrank issue but would be better consistent with Guy and Umi's IGNITE.
1. ソードアート・オンラインⅡ copy this one to source.

[■ Gu's Insane]

00:12:024 (1,2) - can't you resnap them by 1/6 snap divisor? I had talked with Zero__wind and he suggested it and I agreed with that then. I tried to listen to the music and the sound was starting at 00:12:005 - so I don't think you needed to unsnap on propose.
SPOILER
00:38:498 - to be honest the normal sound on head feels out of place well probably just me.
00:54:393 (3) - I thought you don't wanna put a clap at the 1st circle of a triplet.
01:21:819 (5) - sampleset : auto must be better here...

[■ Insane]

00:00:438 (1,2,3) - can you decrease the volume by 10 - 25 for them, the whistles are kinda loud here since the song is too quiet. also I would add a whistle 00:00:886 (2) - it fits for me better.
00:19:692 (1) - I guess this didn't have a finish on head before, dunno but the finish doesn't follow any sound and doesn't fit with the kind of quiet part. I would suggest you to remove Normal diff as well. or at least decrease the volume a bit such as Nich's Easy, it sounds much better imo.
00:39:393 (1) - whistle for the piano?
01:07:938 (2) - I would change sampleset to normal if 01:07:826 (1) - has normal sampleset, it makes more comfortable to play the triplet. or 01:07:826 (1,2) - swap the normalset from (1) to (2)

[■ Mochi's Hard]

00:10:625 - unnecessary green line.
00:59:991 (3,4) - I still wonder why this is not a triplet
01:15:886 (4,5) - I don't like the usage of 3/4 in Hard, not a big deal though.

[■ Normal]

00:07:379 (1,2,3) - I guess this must be hard to read for Normal players, unstack by x1.0 (because 1/1) or something
00:19:692 (1) - I guess a bit nazi but you can place this properly by x1.0

[■ Nich's Easy]

01:02:005 (2) - normal finish on slider end? I feel it fits and there is in all diffs except yours. but you may free to ignore

to fumika : edited to add the General thing

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2014-08-26T04:51:12+00:00

SPOILER

Konei wrote:
[Gu's Insane]

00:52:826 (5) - How about ctrl + J on this Slider? Flows better to me but just a suggestion.hmm i prefer mine
01:02:453 (1) - Make the end soft sampleset since there's no drum playing on the Slider's end?have,though very slight
01:24:170 (1) - You could reduce the volume by 20% or something on the end and add a finish with normal addition to follow the cymbals.kkk
Awesome as always! I love your maps! www

SPOILER

Delis wrote:
[■ Gu's Insane]
00:12:024 (1,2) - can't you resnap them by 1/6 snap divisor? I had talked with Zero__wind and he suggested it and I agreed with that then. I tried to listen to the music and the sound was starting at 00:12:005 - so I don't think you needed to unsnap on propose. seems my mistake
00:38:498 - to be honest the normal sound on head feels out of place well probably just me.hmm..if you delete this note.you can hear a sound.but slight.hmmm turn down the volume a little
00:54:393 (3) - I thought you don't wanna put a clap at the 1st circle of a triplet.if you here clearly,you'll got it.drums in this song is quite a chaos
01:21:819 (5) - sampleset : auto must be better here...no base drum here

SPOILER

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Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-26T10:23:56+00:00

Fixed all except nazi mod, also I fixed for nich and Mochi give me his diff, He fixed only 00:10:625 - this (?) Updated!

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-08-26T10:49:55+00:00

Delis wrote:
seems no need to wait for a week, throw some suggestions *no kudos*

[■ Mochi's Hard]
00:10:625 - unnecessary green line. removed
00:59:991 (3,4) - I still wonder why this is not a triplet i want to keep the rhtyhm variation
01:15:886 (4,5) - I don't like the usage of 3/4 in Hard, not a big deal though. ~~~~

to fumika : edited to add the General thing

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-08-26T13:29:42+00:00

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Gu's Insane

00:11:035 (2,1) - the arrow is overlapped imo
01:18:349 (1) - remover nc, not that necessary here
fine

Insane

01:05:811 (6,1) - blanket maybe?
lol how to me maps like this ;w;

Mochi's Hard

00:07:155 (1,2) - blanket?
00:27:528 (2,3) - perfect this blanket
00:31:782 (4,2) - ^
01:24:170 (1,2,3) - ^
01:11:632 (1) - personally i prefer 3/4 slider to follow both vocal and drum beats here 0.0

Normal

01:17:453 (2,1) - perfect this blanket
01:19:692 (2,1) - ^

Nich's Easy

01:12:752 (2,3) - perfect this blanket

lolololol sao2 shinoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

good luck

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2014-08-26T16:29:05+00:00

Fixed, thank you for mods

SPOILER

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