appleeaterx wrote:

hey~
just a random mod

:idea: General

Source: AMNESIA fixed
Add "アムネシア" to the tags. fixed
"anime opening zoetrope OP" I'm not so sure about these tags - I'd remove them. no change

Easy

00:43:478 (4) - I love this slider thanks, me too ^^
00:57:082 (1) - Extend to large white tick. no change (I thought about that as well, but, since the difficulty is Easy, I'm not sure if there's gonna be enough time for a beginner to notice the next object, which is the circle 1)

Normal

01:07:285 (3,4,1) - Maybe it was intentional, but the x-coordinates of these notes are not the same, so they look a little off. yep, it was intentional

Hard

00:23:412 (7) - NC fixed
00:38:547 (4) - I'd do a NC here, because the 2nd triangle would be a little hard to read. fixed

Cool map!
Sorry for the short, noob-ish mod - hope it helped!
Have a star ~

moonlightleaf wrote:

hi~M4M here

[Easy]

00:21:366 add note fixed

00:29:522 ^ fixed

00:38:018 (3,4) - ctrl+g will be better to play no change

00:42:437 (2) - delete no change

00:43:456 (4) - move to (192,304) so it can't touch 00:46:175 (1) fixed

00:52:292 (2,3,4) - slider 00:52:292 to 00:53:651 no change

00:54:331 (5,6,7,8,1) - try ↓ no change

SPOILER

silder 00:54:331 to 00:55:011 and return 1 time

silder 00:56:200 - 00:56:880

spinner 00:57:390 - 00:59:769

01:06:566 (4,5) - move to 01:06:396 no change

[Normal]

00:13:550 (1,2) - like this ，you can use the Rhythm ↓ no change

SPOILER

00:23:405 (2,3) - try no change

SPOILER

00:31:901 (4,5) - change to silder ? no change - because I want to be the same as 00:25:784 (2,3,4,5)

00:38:018 (1) - try no change

SPOILER

00:45:495 (3) - change to note then 00:45:835 add note on 00:46:005 (1) no change

00:49:913 (2,3) - balnket ? fixed

00:57:390 (1,2) - try no change

SPOILER

01:01:128 (4) - change to two notes ? no change

01:01:978 - add note on 01:01:808 (5) no change

01:07:755 (1) - try no change

SPOILER

01:10:644 (1,2) - no change

SPOILER

01:22:369 (2) - change to note then slider from 01:22:538 - 01:23:558 fixed

01:24:238 (1) - i think start from 01:26:107 will better seem girl sings before 01:26:107 no change

01:24:238 try no change

SPOILER

[Hard]

00:03:864 note fixed

00:18:307 (9) - try no change

SPOILER

00:19:327 (3,4,7,8) - try fixed

SPOILER

00:23:065 ..... map something ? no change

00:25:019 note no change

00:26:294 and 00:26:379 note fixed (only for 00:26:294)

00:29:522 (7) - (208,192) no change

00:40:058 (3) - try no change

SPOILER

00:42:267 (6) - NC no change

00:43:286 (9) - silder to 00:44:136 ? fixed

00:48:894 note no change

00:54:841 (5,6) - DS no change

00:57:050 (1) - delete no change

01:02:233 (4) - delete then 01:02:063 add note no change

01:03:337 (3) - delete fixed

01:12:003 (1) - move to 01:11:833

01:12:768 (4) - delete , here no music no change

01:12:343 (2,3) - exchange no change

01:14:212 (3) - delete fixed

01:17:611 (5) - change to two notes no change

01:19:480 (5) - try no change

SPOILER

01:22:029 (3,4) - ds no change(it would be a bad blanket with slider 4)

spinner the same i say before

map need more work , good luck ~

edit : oh~ if you don't want to map Insane , you can just map Normal and Hard(easy to rank , because just 2diffs) , it rankable , but the Normal's star should < 3.25star ~ you can try yes, I know it's easier, but I want to have 3 difficulties, Easy, Normal and Hard I'm not gonna create an Insane diff because my Hard is already a bit more difficult than an usual Hard diff.

Yales wrote:

Hi, for M4M.

[Genral]
Your kiai time is not constant.
01:02:318 - It should start here for Easy/Hard as you did for normal. fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:18:987 (1,2,3,4,5) - The rythme you gave here isn't bad. But I don't find it really natural. I would do something like this instead.
   clic here

   
   no change
2. 00:57:050 (1) - I would add a note here instead (for the strong beat) and put the spinner here 00:57:390 - and make it finish at 00:59:769 (for the vocal)~ fixed the note part but I can't end the spinner at 00:59:769 because there would not be enough time for a beginner to click the following note
3. 01:02:487 (1) - It should start on the red tick just before. There's no beat/no vocal here (and kiai time will be fixed hehe) all fixed
4. 01:03:847 (2) - ^
5. 01:06:566 (4) - ^ (You can simply move 01:06:396 (4,5,6) a tick before, no need to redo the pattern by the way.
6. 01:07:925 (1) - ^
7. 01:09:284 (2) - ^
8. 01:12:003 (4) - ^
9. 01:13:363 (1) - ^ (You can delete (7) Try this if you like
10. 01:15:402 (2) - same here
11. 01:17:441 (3,4,1,2) - ^
12. 01:21:519 (3) - We're good here ! aha

I don't have much to say on this easy diff, it's well-designed. Just the timing of the kiai time feels off unfortunately.
Try to move a tick before (on the red tick) what I pointed and adjust on the timeline the following notes. No need to change your patterns, they're really nice/neat. Just adjust DS when you have to.
The hitsounds are good too.

[Normal]

1. 00:14:059 (2) - This feels a bit odd to me. You don't have to change this, but I would reduce this slider by 1 tick and move it to 00:14:229 - sounds more catchy. no change
2. 00:19:497 (2) - ^ no change
3. 00:35:979 (3,4) - It's fine here though, cause you're following vocals so it's ok this way.
4. 00:14:909 - add note <- polarity issue I don't know what you mean by "polarity issue", but ok o.o (same for the rest)
5. 00:17:628 - ^
6. 00:20:346 - ^
7. 00:28:503 - ^
8. 00:38:018 (1) - polarity issue. would fix.
9. 01:11:663 - add a note here maybe ? :3 fixed :3
10. 00:16:268 (1,1,1,1,1) - One thing about those sliders. If you like this rythme, it's ok, but I'm just saying it would feel more natural if you put all arrows on white tick.

A good normal diff as well. I like *-*
No hitsound problem it seems.

[Hard]

1. 00:13:550 (1,2,3,4) - Honestly I really don't like this rythme. I would put 1 slider reverse (as you did) then a single note then another slider rever then single note, then slider reverse etc. I like it how it is now, so no change
2. 00:16:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part doesn't play that good neither. Try something like you did here 00:18:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no change
3. 00:23:065 - This is like the strongest note of the pattern and you don't map it ! lol add a note. meh, I don't really like it, but ok...
4. 00:40:058 (3) - Now that it's hard diff, you should try to avoid as muchg as you can those tricky reverses. 1 is enough. Same here : 00:20:346 (7,8,5,6,7) - But those are predictable more or less. hehe, I wanted them to be tricky XD
5. 00:48:894 - Once more, you shouldn't ignore a beat like this. fixed
6. 00:57:050 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I kinda like this thanks ^^
7. 01:02:148 (3,4,5,6,1) - I know it's ok to add a 5 stream note before kiai like this, but it's too late here.The stream should start here 01:01:978 (2) - and the slider 01:02:318 here then. (and if you fixed the kiai time, it will make sense lol). If you don't like the 5 notes stream, put a triple instead but the way you did isn't in time at all. fixed
8. 01:11:154 (4) - Slider here. (switch with 01:11:324 (5) ) I know it kinda mess up your pattern, but it sounds way better though.. meh, fixed :c
9. 01:11:833 - same suggestion as normal diff : add a note ? fixed
10. 01:19:480 (5) - tricky reverses

Same as usual, nice map but those little timing issues...
Nice hitsounds as well

That's pretty much it. The main problem is your timing. Without it, the mapset is damn good, I really like.
Keep it up ! You're on the right way.

I hope it was helpful, and clear. If you have any question about my mod or just about mapping, feel free to send me a PM or to catch me IG.

Good luck.

wuzzat wrote:

hey M4M here,

[General]
I was pretty sure that your Timing was wrong... you should ask other player to find your timing points.like Pishifat <.<
When i was finding this map's timing,i think this map's got multi timing sections.. so i can't go find it D: too noob for timing
Okay,so i'll mod with your current timing sections :3 consider to fix this.oh, one more thing:the BG should be 1024x768 or 1366x768.you can ask
other people like Pishifat or Truonant for resizing BG's.or resize it yourself. hmm I don't think the timing is wrong o.o Anyway, fixed the BG ^^

[Easy]
well this diff 's got serious issue.you should put the right note on the timeline.(there's some late notes)
you can find this issue by yourself after finding the right timing sections :3 I don't know what you're trying to say...
i just suggesting pattern now.
00:23:235 (5) - i prefer ''C'' shaped slider ? fixed
00:40:397 (6) - put this on x:104 y:184? fixed
00:54:331 (5) - NC here no change
00:57:050 (1) - remove NC no change
00:57:390 (1) - this spinner could end here 00:59:769 no change

[Normal]
00:23:065 - add note,since there's a guitar sound. no change
00:24:255 - add note ? no change
00:24:425 (1) - avoid 2 reverse on normal.they may confuse beginners. Easy is for beginners this difficulty is Normal, so there should be no problem...
00:29:862 (1) - ^ ^
00:38:018 (1) - ^ ^
00:57:050 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:03:677 (3) - this slider looks weird imo hmm, I like it ^^
01:15:911 - add note.there's vocal line fixed
01:22:538 - add note? triplets no change
01:24:238 (1) - this spinner is too long.you can make notes just before the long outro. The spinner is the same for all difficulties

[Hard]
00:39:548 (2) - ctrl+G ? no change
01:02:318 (4,5,1) - this part feels awkard.the triplet's not matching the song
01:22:538 - add note fixed
01:24:238 (1) - same as normal same as above...

well.. that's my mod for now
goodluck for rank ...

My map's on the signature

konoshin69 wrote:

omg i think i modded this map before didnt i? lol whatever haha, true XD

Easy

00:20:346 (2) - starting this on a red tick sounds weird, try something like this http://puu.sh/a4hRM/c14aaac0df.jpg fixed
00:23:405 (6) - ^ (i would do something like this http://puu.sh/a4hWD/254a19ca07.jpg fixed
00:33:940 (4) - start on a white tick, make it a 1 beat slider fixed
00:38:528 (4) - blanket on circle 3's approach circle like this fixed

There are some NC problems, try only starting NC's on the largest white tick, after breaks/spinners in instrumental parts and in vocals, do the same but you can start an NC when a new verse is sung


there are also alot of blanket problems just in this level for example this

you can do this: no change


theres also a forum about neat sliders you can read :3 t/208596

01:24:408 (1) - end spinner here no change

Normal

00:24:425 (1) - personally i dont like sliders with more than 1 repeat
00:29:862 (1) - ^
00:38:018 (1) - ^ yeah ill stop mentioning these xD
flow is bad here
you could arrange them like this to improve flow fixed

Hard

i dont think 00:03:695 (3,4) - are necessary no change
00:13:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so many repeat sliders maybe you could try using some circles? if I use circles instead of sliders, the symmetry will be ruined
curve some sliders xD meh, gonna think about this...
00:22:386 (3,4,5,6,7) - this jump is uneven fixed
00:35:300 (1) - the circles are arranged..weirdly ;w; what do u mean ? o.o
this level needs a bit more blanket work
01:12:683 (3) - dont have a stream in hard, i think streams only happen in insane these days since there's no Insane diff in the mapset, my Hard diff has to be a little more difficult than an usual "Hard" difficulty, so streams are ok.
01:24:238 (1) - the spinner is really long, they should usually last less than 7 or 5 seconds ?? i forgot //hit

That's all, hope that helped ~ good luck with your beatmap