1. Easy (2.08 stars, 63 notes)
2. Forseen's Hard (4.9 stars, 166 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 223 notes)
4. Railgun's Normal (3.78 stars, 83 notes)

CodeS wrote:

Thanks for the Tips!
They Helped me a lot!

1. Add Forseen and Railgun to the beatmap's tags since we're guest mappers.
2. You can remove the artist, title, and yourself from the beatmap's tags. It's not needed.
3. Capitalize the I in the source "Mai-Otome Original Soundtrack Vol.2 Otome no Inori".

Regraz wrote:

Hi! From #modreq!


[Forseen's Hard]

00:00:481 (1) - it should be longer Fixed

others are really good!
=============End===========
Good luck!

1. where is an Easy diff? that Normal diff has 3.5 stars, so you must make an Easy diff or remap current Normal diff..
2. Don't you want to add silent soft-sliderslide? the song is kind of relax.. sliders are noisy to me
3. also useless widescreen support and letterbox during breaks, cause doesn't have SB and break time.

• 
  00:35:776 (3) - Blanket like this would be nice http://puu.sh/6yT19.jpg

• 
  01:01:893 (1,2,3) - Remove last finish and replace use 3 claps to match the insane one.

• 
  00:03:305 (3) - Remove the clap from the last note and keep it only on the first to make it sound better
  00:13:187 (3) - Either try something like http://puu.sh/6yTBZ.jpg or http://puu.sh/6yTEI.jpg. I think the NC after (8) looks a bit weird.
  00:06:481 (4) - Add clap
  00:37:011 (2) - Somehow this has a different hitsound so I removed it and placed it again
  00:38:423 (2) - ^
  00:41:776 (6) - ^
  I think these sound a bit out of place.
  00:40:893 (6) - Consider placing a NC here
  00:48:481 (1) - Try this http://puu.sh/6yU6M.jpg
  01:01:893 (1,2,3) -
  This would make nice hitsounding just like with the Normal diff
  http://puu.sh/6yTvl.osu

• 
  00:24:128 (9) - Clap on the last note of the slider
  00:40:893 (2,3,4) - Maybe turn the volume down to about 55% on these, I think they're a bit loud
  00:43:717 (1,2,3) - ^
  00:41:776 (2) - Somehow there keep having different hitsounds also clap on the first one of this
  00:48:481 (1,2,3) - 3x clap?? maybe
  01:01:893 (1,2,3) - The volume on this could be 50% they're a little too soft
  http://puu.sh/6yUBl.osu

Delis wrote:

also useless widescreen support and letterbox during breaks, cause doesn't have SB and break time. Done

Tenderz wrote:

[Insane]

• 
  00:03:305 (3) - Remove the clap from the last note and keep it only on the first to make it sound better
  00:13:187 (3) - Either try something like http://puu.sh/6yTBZ.jpg or http://puu.sh/6yTEI.jpg. I think the NC after (8) looks a bit weird.
  00:06:481 (4) - Add clap
  00:37:011 (2) - Somehow this has a different hitsound so I removed it and placed it again
  00:38:423 (2) - ^
  00:41:776 (6) - ^
  I think these sound a bit out of place.
  00:40:893 (6) - Consider placing a NC here
  00:48:481 (1) - Try this http://puu.sh/6yU6M.jpg
  01:01:893 (1,2,3) -
  This would make nice hitsounding just like with the Normal diff
  http://puu.sh/6yTvl.osu

[Jump-A-Sane]

• 
  00:24:128 (9) - Clap on the last note of the slider
  00:40:893 (2,3,4) - Maybe turn the volume down to about 55% on these, I think they're a bit loud
  00:43:717 (1,2,3) - ^
  00:41:776 (2) - Somehow there keep having different hitsounds also clap on the first one of this
  00:48:481 (1,2,3) - 3x clap?? maybe
  01:01:893 (1,2,3) - The volume on this could be 50% they're a little too soft
  http://puu.sh/6yUBl.osu

CATS :3

1. this mod is a good suggestion for you, for every diffs,especially Normal and Easy.The Hard diff is a good example for you and Project Railgun to learn, a good blanket can make the map more beautiful.

1. 00:09:658 (1,3) overlapped, in the lower diiff, it would be better to avoid this arrangement
2. 00:10:011 (2,3) but overlap this single note is good in sight
3. 00:17:423 (1,3) same as first
4. 00:31:540 (1,2,3) you can see there is a good blanket between the note 2 and slider 3, try to make slider 1 same as them
5. 00:34:364 (1,2,3) try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:36:481 (3,1) this arrangement in normal is bad, it's too hard to read for a new player
7. 00:40:717 (2,1,3) here is a bad arrangement, too
8. 00:52:364 (5,1) you shouldn't use this idea in Normal, it's not good for a new player

1. you can see, most of notes focus on center (just see 00:05:364 - 00:21:615 is very evident)
   and the arrangement of note is casual and disorganized (like 00:09:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 、 00:45:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) or this
   
   SPOILER

   
   all of them are ugly and hated by players,
   try to use ctrl+shift+D to creat a good arrangement

the rhythm is no problem for your diff, just fix your arrangement for last two diffs
GL

Azure wrote:

[General]

1. this mod is a good suggestion for you, for every diffs,especially Normal and Easy.

Yeah the Easy needs a lot of Help, because it's the first Easy I done so.. yeah.. thanks!


[Insane]

1. you can see, most of notes focus on center (just see 00:05:364 - 00:21:615 is very evident)
   and the arrangement of note is casual and disorganized (like 00:09:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 、 00:45:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) or this
   
   SPOILER

   
   all of them are ugly and hated by players,
   try to use ctrl+shift+D to creat a good arrangement

I like mapping in the Center, Still move some notes a bit to avoid everything being there, but the main focus is still, Also I love those kind of patterns, gave them some Spacing and a bit of position so they don't luck as clusterfuck anymore.


the "Jump-A-Insane" has a same problem as Insane Being notes in the center?, I like it, still, changed the Jump a insane a lot, new patterns and more stuff so doesn't look the same all the map, thanks.

the rhythm is no problem for your diff, just fix your arrangement for last two diffs
GL

1. 00:02:599 (3,1) - Just a little comment about this. It's not bad, but however, it can it reworked. What's going on here, is the flow that is broken from the shape of the slider (3) to the slider (1). So first, the movement from those sliders is a bit bad since the slider (3) goes at the left but in order to catch the next slider, you have to back behind this slider. This can be problematic. Maybe you can try to change the slider's (3) shapes like that, which will help the flow a bit.
   
   example

   
2. 00:05:776 (4) - since the circle is overlapping the previous circle, it looks a bit bad. You have two choices here: either move this circle and stack it with the previous one or, you move the circle to x:146 y:260 so it would be overlapped. (I highly suggest you to use the second suggestion)
3. 00:06:128 (5) - A new combo is required here.
4. 00:06:128 (5) - This slider could have a blanket with the previous slider (2). If you followed the previous suggestion, move this slider to x:180 y:344 and move the second dot of the slider a bit and it's going to make a blanket with this circle.
5. 00:11:776 (4) - The song requires a new combo
6. 00:14:599 (1) - Please, keep your spacing consistent with your previous objects. You will need to do the same thing for those objects: 00:16:011 (3,4,5,6) -
7. 00:17:423 (5) - add a new combo here, the current combo is a bit long and the song requires one.
8. 00:20:246 (1) - Both flow and spacing can be improved here. For the flow, we can see that this slider is completely behind and at the opposite side of the previous slider and as for the spacing, it's inconsistent.
9. 00:23:070 (5) - For here, you will need to first, add a new combo after that, to keep it consistent, you have to delete the combo on 00:24:481 - , add another combo on 00:25:893 (2) - and finally delete the new combo on the next circle.
10. 00:31:540 (4) - The song requires a new combo
11. 00:34:011 (1,3) - Stack both of these objects, it's going to look a lot better if you do so.
12. 00:36:834 (5,1) - If we follow the song, add a new combo and 5 and delete the new combo on 1. After that, add another combo on 00:40:011 (4) - .
13. 00:51:305 (3) - I think a new combo would be better here, what do you think?
14. 00:57:305 (3,1) - The way the slider is placed with the circle, it looks like you wanted to do a blanket and it's not pretty good. You should actually either make a blanket or move the slider completely so it will look better o:
15. 00:57:658 (1,2) - Delete the new combo on 1 and add a new combo on 2, it's going to follow the song.

1. 00:13:187 (3,1) - Just because there is a break in the timeline, you shouldn't stack both of these objects. Consider moving the slider (1) somewhere else.
2. 00:35:776 (3,1) - Same as the previous suggestion :3
3. 00:45:658 (1) - To be honest, it looks a bit weird since the previous circle is not between both beginning and end of this slider.. You should try to move or reshape this slider a bit, so the circle would be between them.
4. 00:52:364 (5,1) - Make a better stack here, please.
5. 00:54:128 (3,1) - Same as the first suggestion.

1. 00:18:128 (4,5) - I am not sure if the circle is perfectly stacked with the end of your previous slider, you might want to look at it o3o
2. 00:39:658 (1,2,3) - That's a sudden jump.. I suggest you not to do that. It's not terrible, but it's better if there's no jump in here.
3. 00:40:893 (4,5,6) - Personally, I'd prefer if those were replaced by a reversed slider, it should be more easy, right?

1. 00:13:187 (3,1) - Just because there is a break in the timeline, you shouldn't stack both of these objects. Consider moving the slider (1) somewhere else. Is part of my mapping style! New combo colors & hitsound before break should make it easier to read.
2. 00:35:776 (3,1) - Same as the previous suggestion :3 ~~
3. 00:45:658 (1) - To be honest, it looks a bit weird since the previous circle is not between both beginning and end of this slider.. You should try to move or reshape this slider a bit, so the circle would be between them. Yes I thought the same. Changed.
4. 00:52:364 (5,1) - Make a better stack here, please. I thought it was a bit strange too. Fixed.
5. 00:54:128 (3,1) - Same as the first suggestion. ~~

Gabe wrote:

#modreqs.

Easy
Done Everything

I will come back another day when you get more mods to look at it again, you need to work a lot on it, mainly on the combo, the spacing and the blanket of your objects. Yep, I'm having problems how to properly do Blanket and stuff, but your kind of Mods really helped me, real thanks!


So, I am stopping here, I modded another map before and I am pretty much tired, if you ask me.
For Jump-A-Insane, I don't think the difficulty is necessary, but you might want to rename it as "Extra" I Don't think it feel like an eXtra. but I will keep in mind

Feel free to call me back anytime (:

baraatje123 wrote:

Click HERE to get all diffs with proper hitsounds

Raiku wrote:

Short but sweet mod to smooth out edges~

[Insane]

00:04:011 (1) - I wouldn't NC here to keep the combo going throughout the first little melody (http://puu.sh/6VoIW.jpg). Done!

00:13:540 (1,2,3) - No NC on 1, start it on the slider at 3, just like u did later on in the song here 00:24:128 (1,2,3,4,5) (Continuity ) (http://puu.sh/6VoWP.jpg). Done

00:31:364 (1) - Bit skeptical about the NC here. I Will keep it!

00:32:599 (4,5) - How do you feel about this flow improving alteration? Also start a NC on the 5 to give the next 3 notes their own combo (http://puu.sh/6Vpbm.jpg). ohh that's actually a better one, Done!

00:50:246 (4) - I'd NC. Done

00:50:952 (7) - And NC here. Done

00:53:070 (4) - NC. Done

00:53:776 (7,8,1) - NC on 7 and not on 1. Done

00:55:540 (1) - No NC. Done

00:56:599 (1) - No NC. Done

00:59:423 (5) - NC. Done

01:00:834 (9) - NC. Done

Cute map, lav it~

Gomo Pslvarh wrote:

[General]

fine.

[Easy]

00:02:599 (3) - i think you should make more simply slider. It was changed from a Simple slider for better flow, will keep it thanks.
00:23:070 (5) - add new combo. Done
00:24:481 (1) - delete new combo. Done
00:30:128 (2) - too short time slider, you should fix this note. you can follow this. Done

SPOILER

00:31:540 (1,2,3) - i think this pattern is more hard than easy, normal or hard pattern. follow this? Done

SPOILER

if you follow this, 00:34:011 (1) - delete this circle. Done

00:48:481 (1,1) - i think this pattern is need more distance. That would make a too big Jump for the DS, it's better to add new combo
01:00:834 (1,2) - ^ Looks Boring if I put it far, I find it better to keep it in the same place and so new players doesn't have to move much.

1. 00:00:481 (1) - This will overlap a part of 00:03:305 (1) if you don't activate Snaking Slider in the options. You may want to separate them.
2. 00:15:305 (2,3) - They're touching each other in a slightly unaesthetic way here. Try to make a blanket pattern that can avoid this, if possible, or just normally space them.
3. 00:17:776 (2) - Move the middle node to (416,180) and the last one to (432,224) so the blanket here will be better?
4. 00:23:776 (2) - And move the middle node to (432,228) plus the last one to (444,184)? This is also to make the blanket neater. You'll have to deal with the spacing inconsistency yourself, though.
5. 00:25:893 - 00:33:658 - I think it'd be cool if you used a finish every first white tick and a whistle for every third tick of a stanza. It'd fit with the instruments here a lot. Only using whistles on the first and third white tick is technically the correct way, but using finishes should also work to give more frills in your map. (Same thing applies to similar sections.)
6. 00:48:481 (1,1) - Uh, what's with the spacing here? I understand what are you trying to do, but 00:49:893 (1) is already fully appeared once you hit 00:48:481 (1). It might make players think that they have to hit the second slider immediately after the first.
7. 01:00:834 (1,2) - ^. Stacks are not really recommended in an Easy diff for the same reason as having inconsistently-spaced objects.
8. 01:01:893 - Why 30%? The instrument here isn't that weak. In fact, making the hitsound's volume lowered here will only cause awkwardness for players because there's no feedback (aka sounds) when they hit the head of the slider. Just make it 70% too, I think.

1. I prefer AR5 for this to support the song's relatively high BPM (contrary to Gomo). The decision's up to you, though.
2. 00:05:776 (1,2) - Umm, swap NC? I can't see any reason why should you stop following the stanza patterning here.
3. 00:12:481 (2) - It'd be nice to move this to (304,256). It just looks good combined with 00:11:776 (1), somehow... Of course, if you did it, move 00:13:187 (3) appropriately, too.
4. 00:14:599 (1,2,3) - What about designing them like this? It'll make the pattern look nicer, you know.
5. 00:19:893 (4) - A finish here is something the players would least expect. I mean, it kind of feels like... it appears at all sudden without any reason. Change it to a whistle instead?
6. 00:26:599 (2,3) - Try placing them like this? They'd look better and create a nicer flow.
7. 00:34:364 (1,2,3) - Try this? Same reason as the suggestion above.
8. 00:40:364 (2) - Move this to (340,68)? Again, it's for a nicer flow and design.
9. 00:41:423 (1) - Ctrl+J (vertically flip) this? I think you should've known the reason at this point.
10. 00:47:070 (3) - Move this to (308,156)?
11. 00:47:423 - Might as well add a break here since this part is very silent.
12. 00:51:305 (4,5) - Inconsistent spacing.
13. 00:54:128 (3) - Move this to (48,160)?
14. 00:55:540 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you would like something... like this?
15. 01:00:128 (1) - The song is very, very silent here. A spinner will only make players feel awkward due to the silence, so just use circles and sliders like what the other mappers did.

1. I personally think you used too much map field-wide symmetry patterns, which makes this map a little boring. No need to remap or something, though; just giving some notes here.
2. 00:13:187 (1,2) - Even for a 1/1 jump, I still think this distance is a little too overboard for a Hard diff. Consider just using 1.8-2.0x.
3. 00:15:128 (3,4) - ^ (except 1/2, which doesn't make things any better)
4. 00:34:364 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A 8-note 1/2 circle stream at 170 BPM can be too difficult even for a Hard diff because you have to keep the rhythm for a relatively long time (in a Hard diff, of course). Maybe you can use sliders to replace a few of them.
5. 00:41:776 - Add a whistle because they fit with the instruments here?
6. 00:42:128 (1) - ^
7. 00:45:481 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Similar to 00:34:364.
8. 00:58:011 (1) - What's with the NC here? I think it's redundant since it's supposed to be the part of the previous combo according to the music's rhythm, and there isn't anything, from what I've seen, that justifies the usage of the NC. So uh, remove it?
9. 00:59:599 (2,1,2) - The flow here is very weird because they're spaced the same visually and you have to move to the same direction after hitting the first two circles (upward, though 00:59:776 (1,2) also goes leftward too). I think you can find a solution by yourself; I fear I'll only incorporate my own mapping style if I have to suggest something like this.

1. 00:02:952 (1,3) - If you're placing an NC every two stanzas, I think you should swap the NC position here for consistency.
2. 00:19:893 (1) - Move this to (260,344) for a better flow?
3. 00:25:893 (2) - Move the middle node to (168,140) and the last one to (76,104) to create a better blanket pattern?
4. 00:28:717 (2,4) - Uh, I think the pattern here is way too forced since (4)'s head is only partially overlapped by (2)'s body. It'd look nicer if you placed (4)'s head perfectly below it, or just avoid doing this.
5. 00:29:423 - Try to add a whistle? I think it fits perfectly with the sound of the instrument here.
6. 00:29:952 - ^
7. 00:30:834 - ^ (And applies to similar cases too. It'd make this mod too long if I have to write them one by one.)
8. 00:33:305 (2) - Move this to (264,232)? Again, the flow will be better like this.
9. 00:43:717 (2) - Try adding a whistle here?
10. 00:45:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - And try to make a perfect pentagon? They'd look nice like that.
11. 00:51:305 (3) - Remove the middle node, then add it again (so it'll use the current slider algorithm, not the old one; don't mind it if you don't understand and just do this step) but place it at (400,112), then move the last node to (440,128)? It'll produce a nice blanket pattern alongside 00:51:658 (4). It'll be better if you moved (4) one grid to the left, too.
12. 00:52:187 - I think you should add another circle with a whistle here to support the instrument's sound. Right now, it just feels empty...
13. 00:55:893 (4,7) - You usually add NCs for patterns like this, so add them on these spots too?
14. 00:56:246 (6,7) - Considering you made a jump at 00:55:540 (3,4), try to make one here too? You can try rearranging objects here if you think you'll need it.
15. 00:57:834 - 00:58:011 - Try to add circles here? Same reason as 00:52:187.
16. 00:58:717 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make them look like this? This way, they'll be more good-looking and enjoyable.
17. 01:01:893 - Same as Easy.

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo, modding here!
>Easy
[*]00:15:305 (2,3) - They're touching each other in a slightly unaesthetic way here. Try to make a blanket pattern that can avoid this, if possible, or just normally space them. Done
[*]00:17:776 (2) - Move the middle node to (416,180) and the last one to (432,224) so the blanket here will be better? Done
[*]00:23:776 (2) - And move the middle node to (432,228) plus the last one to (444,184)? This is also to make the blanket neater. You'll have to deal with the spacing inconsistency yourself, though. Done
[*]00:25:893 - 00:33:658 - I think it'd be cool if you used a finish every first white tick and a whistle for every third tick of a stanza. It'd fit with the instruments here a lot. Only using whistles on the first and third white tick is technically the correct way, but using finishes should also work to give more frills in your map. (Same thing applies to similar sections.) Will think, I think hitsounds are good as they are.
[*]00:48:481 (1,1) - Uh, what's with the spacing here? I understand what are you trying to do, but 00:49:893 (1) is already fully appeared once you hit 00:48:481 (1). It might make players think that they have to hit the second slider immediately after the first. Done
[*]01:01:893 - Why 30%? The instrument here isn't that weak. In fact, making the hitsound's volume lowered here will only cause awkwardness for players because there's no feedback (aka sounds) when they hit the head of the slider. Just make it 70% too, I think.[/list] Want the song to be listened, as it work as the hitsound too., Denied


>Insane

1. 00:02:952 (1,3) - If you're placing an NC every two stanzas, I think you should swap the NC position here for consistency. They go with the Song
2. 00:19:893 (1) - Move this to (260,344) for a better flow? Tried and test it, didn't feel right and looks ugly behind the first sliders, so no
3. 00:25:893 (2) - Move the middle node to (168,140) and the last one to (76,104) to create a better blanket pattern? Done
4. 00:28:717 (2,4) - Uh, I think the pattern here is way too forced since (4)'s head is only partially overlapped by (2)'s body. It'd look nicer if you placed (4)'s head perfectly below it, or just avoid doing this. changing this would be like throwing away the style I'm triying to developt, so Denied
5. 00:29:423 - Try to add a whistle? I think it fits perfectly with the sound of the instrument here. Done
6. 00:29:952 - ^ Done
7. 00:30:834 - ^ (And applies to similar cases too. It'd make this mod too long if I have to write them one by one.)
8. 00:33:305 (2) - Move this to (264,232)? Again, the flow will be better like this. Done
9. 00:43:717 (2) - Try adding a whistle here? Done
10. 00:45:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - And try to make a perfect pentagon? They'd look nice like that. Tried and didn't feel right.
11. 00:51:305 (3) - Remove the middle node, then add it again (so it'll use the current slider algorithm, not the old one; don't mind it if you don't understand and just do this step) but place it at (400,112), then move the last node to (440,128)? It'll produce a nice blanket pattern alongside 00:51:658 (4). It'll be better if you moved (4) one grid to the left, too. Done
12. 00:52:187 - I think you should add another circle with a whistle here to support the instrument's sound. Right now, it just feels empty... No, I left that beat alone on similar Beats, I'm not supporting that sound in general, Dunno if I'm explaining myself well.
13. 00:55:893 (4,7) - You usually add NCs for patterns like this, so add them on these spots too? Done, looks cuter now :3
14. 00:57:834 - 00:58:011 - Try to add circles here? Same reason as 00:52:187. I left it blank because I don't support that sound in the mapset
15. 00:58:717 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make them look like this? This way, they'll be more good-looking and enjoyable. Too focused on the center, something I changed by mods before so denied
16. 01:01:893 - Same as Easy.

Same reason as Easy

Well, I think that's all

Good luck on the way

toybot wrote:

No Dap modding team ~~ what is this > : 0

toybot wrote:

(such a short song :p)

toybot wrote:

No Dap modding team ~~

^still on the form, so I guess it's eligible for more modding I guess..

[Easy]
hmm, looks good lol
just maybe..
00:21:305 (2,4) - remove the whistle? Done!
00:25:893 (1) - this slider shape should be better, its uneven Done! I Think..
00:28:717 (1) - missing finish on tail? Done!
00:40:011 (1) - ^ Done!
00:41:776 (2) - i think it might sound better to put a whistle here ;p Done!
01:01:893 (2) - nc nc nc nc Done!


[Insane]
00:18:129 (3) - ctrl +g? CTR g a note?
00:21:305 (2) - ^ Done!
00:34:364 (4) - nc? Done!
00:55:364 (1,2,3) - make these notes have equal distance to each other Done!
00:58:011 - add a note Done!
01:01:893 (1,2,3) - you should make this more interesting.. :c maybe a huge map jump or something? perhaps like this:

SPOILER

I think that jump is a bit excesive, still added more DS! :3

well, good luck on ranked! ^^

(such a short song :p)

1. I prefer AR5 for this to support the song's relatively high BPM (contrary to Gomo). The decision's up to you, though. ar555
2. 00:05:776 (1,2) - Umm, swap NC? I can't see any reason why should you stop following the stanza patterning here. ok
3. 00:12:481 (2) - It'd be nice to move this to (304,256). It just looks good combined with 00:11:776 (1), somehow... Of course, if you did it, move 00:13:187 (3) appropriately, too. ok
4. 00:14:599 (1,2,3) - What about designing them like this? It'll make the pattern look nicer, you know. done
5. 00:19:893 (4) - A finish here is something the players would least expect. I mean, it kind of feels like... it appears at all sudden without any reason. Change it to a whistle instead? I like the finish because the song pattern changes & it helps emphasize the stack.
6. 00:26:599 (2,3) - Try placing them like this? They'd look better and create a nicer flow. ok
7. 00:34:364 (1,2,3) - Try this? Same reason as the suggestion above. changed
8. 00:40:364 (2) - Move this to (340,68)? Again, it's for a nicer flow and design. ok
9. 00:41:423 (1) - Ctrl+J (vertically flip) this? I think you should've known the reason at this point. works well
10. 00:47:070 (3) - Move this to (308,156)? I prefer how it is now.
11. 00:47:423 - Might as well add a break here since this part is very silent. I tried to do so in the editor but it would not let me.
12. 00:51:305 (4,5) - Inconsistent spacing. fixed
13. 00:54:128 (3) - Move this to (48,160)? I will use(48, 156).
    
14. 00:55:540 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you would like something... like this? looks interesting
15. 01:00:128 (1) - The song is very, very silent here. A spinner will only make players feel awkward due to the silence, so just use circles and sliders like what the other mappers did. ok

SapphireGhost wrote:

Recommended by Raiku, so I'll have a quick look.

General
- Set "梶浦由記" as the Artist. Kajiura Yuki is correct as the romanised artist. Done
- The album title should not be in the Source field, so move it to tags instead. According to Wikipedia, the title is "Mai-Otome Original Soundtrack Vol. 2 ~ Otome no Inori (Otome's Prayers)" Done
- Because the song is mostly calm, it doesn't really need kiai sections. I would suggest removing them, or if not make them fully consistent between difficulties. Changed them to be fully consistent on all diff
- You can uncheck "Letterbox during breaks" on all difficulties for consistency. This is optional since there are no breaks. Done

Insane
- AIBat marks some notes as having very small snapping errors, so try resnapping all notes. Done
- Looks technically rankable, but I would encourage you to continue the flow more and leave less spaces between notes that last for a full beat. 00:25:540 to 00:36:481 is one of the best sections in the map because you can see the timeline is filled in each 1/2 tick. Of course, you don't have to do this for the entire map but oftentimes it helps everything come together. Will apply some changes, I still feel adding more notes will make the map feel Overmapped...
- Consider using OD8 to vary the scoreboards more, since the map is short and relatively easy to use DT/NC + HD on. Done


Easy
00:14:599 (1,2,3) - Improve the slider blanketing here. It should look more like this. Done .. I Think...

That's about it. I would like to see Insane improved and cleaned up some before going for a bubble or rank, and since this appears to be your first map going for ranking there's no rush. Collect some more mods and let me know at some point when you think it's all good, or if you want some more advice. Good luck and happy mapping.