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Teara

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Teara 2013-03-12T21:10:22+00:00

IRC mod

To summarize it, I pointed out general stuff like MP3 needing to have a proper name, and that its should be 128 to 192 bitrate. (it was 320)

Pointed out inconsistencies in Preview Points and Kiai.

Worked on a lot of hitsounds/patterns on insane/normal with some new combo changes

Full IRC Log

21:24 Kaneko: hm, first thing, you need to give your mp3 a name lol
21:25 Kaneko: also, bitrate is to high, it can only be 128-196
21:25 Kaneko: its 320 atm
21:25 kevinelson: name was on kanji... editor can't read that
21:25 Kaneko: give it the roman name
21:26 Kaneko: Nanahira works
21:26 Kaneko: just, blank songs can break database queries
21:26 Kaneko: so bats will complain about it
21:26 Kaneko: even 1 works
21:26 Kaneko: but not blank
21:26 kevinelson: okay
21:26 Kaneko: also, you need to reduce quaility of the song, then find a new offset
21:27 Kaneko: btw, is a IRC mod fine with you?
21:27 Kaneko: since your online and all that =p
21:27 kevinelson: i'm fine with it
21:27 kevinelson: i'm working on mp3 right now
21:28 Kaneko: ok, muting slidertick makes the map unrankable btw
21:28 Kaneko: you not allowed to mute anything anymore
21:28 Kaneko: sliderslide*
21:28 Kaneko: but, you can fight this with a mat or bat =p
21:28 Kaneko: (just for the record, I'm a former MAT =p)
21:28 Kaneko: back in 2011
21:29 Kaneko: ok, while you fix the mp3, I'm going to make some tea~
21:29 Kaneko: then we can start with insane
21:29 kevinelson: okay
21:33 kevinelson: kk i'm ready
21:33 Kaneko: alright
21:33 Kaneko: insane flows very nicely
21:33 Kaneko: but there is a few odds places
21:34 Kaneko: 00:41:439 (7,1) -
21:34 Kaneko: this really plays awkward
21:35 Kaneko: the angle of the jump makes it really hard.
21:35 Kaneko: I'd suggest you try something else here
21:36 Kaneko: I' personalyl would make it 1 slider, instead of two notes
21:36 kevinelson: What abount Stack then?
21:37 Kaneko: well, you can stack it
21:37 Kaneko: thats another idea
21:38 Kaneko: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651583
21:40 Kaneko: 00:34:818 (6,1) -
21:40 Kaneko: or something like you did here
21:43 Kaneko: ok, moving along
21:43 Kaneko: 00:44:853 (1) - add a clap on the start of the slider
21:43 Kaneko: 00:45:163 (2) -
21:43 Kaneko: same, add a clap on the start of the sldier
21:43 Kaneko: slider*
21:43 Kaneko: 00:45:473 (3) - clap
21:44 kevinelson: done
21:44 Kaneko: 00:59:335 (3) -
21:44 Kaneko: add a finish on the last repeat
21:45 Kaneko: fits the music

21:45 Kaneko: 01:10:507 (1) - even though it follows the lyrics, I'd remove the NC here
21:45 Kaneko: makes it easy to read
21:46 kevinelson: u mean at 00:59:541 - or 00:59:748 -?
21:46 Kaneko: 00:59:748
21:47 Kaneko: 01:02:232 (1) - finish hitsound to compliment the first and last finish that appear, it also gives more impact the the vocals
21:47 Kaneko: 01:02:232 (1) - finish hitsound to compliment the first and last finish that appear, it also gives more impact the the vocals
21:49 Kaneko: 01:25:818 (3) - this is minor, but you do get big skins, with huge healthbars so, this will be hidden for those players, but its rankable and up to you
21:49 Kaneko: 01:25:818 (3) - this is minor, but you do get big skins, with huge healthbars so, this will be hidden for those players, but its rankable and up to you
21:51 Kaneko: 02:06:784 (1) - this is also awkard to play, but its fine as is, I'd have kept it hitcircles =p
21:53 Kaneko: 02:21:680 (1,2) - clap on the start of the sliders
21:53 Kaneko: for both of them
21:55 Kaneko: 02:50:646 (5) - another slightly hidden under HP bar issue
21:55 kevinelson: same at 02:23:336 (3,4) - ?
21:55 Kaneko: no, you have claps on the end, which fits
21:56 Kaneko: 02:33:679 (3,4,5) - this is also very hard to read
21:57 Kaneko: its fine I guess
21:58 kevinelson: staked
21:58 Kaneko: the slow down part is awesome, no changes here
21:59 Kaneko: 03:27:886 - hitcircle with clap
21:59 Kaneko: 03:28:300 - hitcircle with clap
21:59 Kaneko: or a slider with starts on 27:886 and ends on 28:300
21:59 Kaneko: clap on both ends
22:00 Kaneko: the sudden void feels akward
22:00 Kaneko: and thats it for insane
22:00 Kaneko: now for general stuff, then hard
22:01 Kaneko: the max size a folder can be without a video is 10mb' straight, but I'm guessing when you reduce the bits of the mp3 to 192, it should come down a bit
22:01 Kaneko: the max size a folder can be without a video is 10mb' straight, but I'm guessing when you reduce the bits of the mp3 to 192, it should come down a bit
22:02 Kaneko: a quick check in the folder for all diffs shows me, there is a inconsistency in the preview times
22:02 Kaneko: easy normal and hard start on 142330
22:02 Kaneko: but insane starts on 142441
22:02 Kaneko: this annoyes bats, so better fix it
22:03 kevinelson:

fixed
22:04 Kaneko: once we are done, make sure Kaia is consistant over all diffs
22:04 kevinelson: .mp3 become 5.45 from 9.09mb
22:05 kevinelson: Kiai?
22:05 Kaneko: ye, sorry, Kiai*
22:05 Kaneko: eek, let me play Hard quickly
22:07 Kaneko: hmm
22:07 Kaneko: hard is harder, then insane btw
22:08 Kaneko: we are going to have to do some major work on this diff
22:10 Kaneko: ok, I can see its the same as insane, just different spacing
22:10 Kaneko: this wont work sadly =p
22:11 Kaneko: its much to confusing
22:11 kevinelson: i'm thinking about remapping this
22:11 Kaneko: hmm
22:11 kevinelson: remap*
22:12 Kaneko: well, I really like this song, and I'll offer to make you a cool hard, if you like
22:12 Kaneko: it will take me 2-3 days =p
22:13 Kaneko: well, ok, going to skip this diff, because it needs way to much work
22:13 Kaneko: has to be remap imo =p
22:13 kevinelson: It would be very gratifying to have a guest in one of my first maps
22:14 Kaneko: well, if you give me the go ahead, I'll start tonight =p
22:15 kevinelson: i was looking at kiai i missed some at normal and easy
22:15 kevinelson: fixed now
22:16 kevinelson: about guest a hard dif, go ahead!
22:16 Kaneko: alright

22:17 Kaneko: ok, normal is next then.
22:17 kevinelson: k
22:17 Kaneko: I did a quick testplay with double time
22:17 Kaneko: and spacing is a small issue
22:18 Kaneko: what I'll suggest is, for the normal parts, keep Distance snap 1x
22:18 Kaneko: and for the speed up parts make it 1.2x
22:18 kevinelson: *normal need some aesthetic adjustments
22:18 Kaneko: that too =p
22:19 Kaneko: but, for normal and easy, always try and map with distance snap
22:19 Kaneko: to make the map flow better
22:19 Kaneko: hard and insane can break this rules a bit
22:20 Kaneko: so, I'll suggest when you do some cosmestic improvements on normal to just properly snap them all to the grid
22:20 kevinelson: about spacing and aesthetic i'll mess with it right after mod
22:20 Kaneko: distance snap that is
22:20 Kaneko: so, I wont be focusing to much on spacing for now
22:20 Kaneko: also, normal is missing a red timing section I notice
22:21 Kaneko: 03:32:059 < 145 BPM
22:21 Kaneko: 03:32:059 -
22:21 Kaneko: hard and insane had this
22:21 kevinelson: is that needed same at all difs?
22:21 Kaneko: timing is a must for all diffs
22:21 Kaneko: did you time this yourself?
22:22 kevinelson: yeah
22:22 Kaneko: good job then
22:22 Kaneko: let me ask this then, why the second red timing point
22:22 Kaneko: ?
22:23 Kaneko: (I'm very bad with timing) =p
22:23 kevinelson: from 03:32:059 notes was out of timming
22:23 kevinelson: i needed to fix
22:24 Kaneko: ah ok then
22:24 Kaneko: you need to add these to normal and easy too
22:24 Kaneko: if the offset changes abit
22:24 kevinelson: but at normal and easy i was fine
22:24 Kaneko: regardless, bats will nail you for this
22:24 Kaneko: trust me =p
22:25 Kaneko: Ok, some general guidelines for a normal
22:25 Kaneko: when making repeating sliders, try and keep it constant repeats thought the song, etc, if you have a slider which repeats 2 times
22:25 Kaneko: when making repeating sliders, try and keep it constant repeats thought the song, etc, if you have a slider which repeats 2 times
22:26 Kaneko: try and keep all the following sliders also repeating 2 times
22:26 Kaneko: 00:39:886 (1,2) -
22:26 Kaneko: like, (1) repeats 2 times
22:26 Kaneko: but (2) repeats 4 times
22:26 Kaneko: this can be confusing for newer players
22:27 Kaneko: also, another nice to know thing
22:27 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gB2B
22:27 Kaneko: if you look in the right hand side, the yellow text
22:27 Kaneko: it will show you the distance between two objects
22:27 Kaneko: now, the general rule for a normal mapset is to try and keep the distance spacing about the same thought out the diff ( in the same combo color atleast)
22:27 Kaneko: now, the general rule for a normal mapset is to try and keep the distance spacing about the same thought out the diff ( in the same combo color atleast)
22:28 Kaneko: thoughout*
22:28 Kaneko: thouhout* eek, I cant spell sorry
22:29 kevinelson:

22:29 Kaneko: but this doesnt mean you have to make a plain and boring diff
22:29 Kaneko: but try and keep it to one distance snap, you can ignore this when on a new combo
22:30 Kaneko: if you dont understand something I say, please say so, and I'll try and clearify
22:30 Kaneko: english is my second langauge =p
22:30 Kaneko: but I try my best
22:30 Kaneko: 01:17:955 (3,4,5) -
22:30 Kaneko: this is a no-no spacing btw
22:30 Kaneko: for normal
22:31 Kaneko: 01:19:610 (1,2) -
22:31 Kaneko: I'd make this a slider
22:32 Kaneko: ok, I'd suggest you use a distance snap of 0.8x
22:32 Kaneko: if you press "Alt"
22:32 Kaneko: the top right corner, it shows distance snap
22:33 Kaneko: spacing*
22:34 Kaneko: ok
22:34 Kaneko: 01:56:438 (2,3) -
22:34 Kaneko: I'd delete these two
22:34 Kaneko: make (1) repeat once
22:34 Kaneko: and on 01:56:852 (2) -
22:35 Kaneko: make a slider that ends on the next white tick
22:35 Kaneko: 01:57:473 (3) -
22:35 Kaneko: I'd remove 1 repeat and place a hitcircle the white tick
22:35 Kaneko: ok, going to grab some more tea, and give you some time to catch up =p
22:36 kevinelson: fixed
22:36 kevinelson: okay
22:39 Kaneko: ok
22:39 Kaneko: 02:02:024 (4) -
22:39 Kaneko: delete this and make it a slider that ends the white tick
22:40 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBzf
22:40 Kaneko: ok, and
22:40 Kaneko: 02:02:438 (5) - delete this
22:40 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBBN
22:40 Kaneko: something like that
22:41 Kaneko: and put a finish on (1)
22:41 Kaneko: fix the combo's too
22:41 Kaneko: 02:38:231 (5) -
22:41 Kaneko: new combo here
22:42 Kaneko: 03:03:886 (4) -
22:42 Kaneko: new combo here
22:43 Kaneko: 03:33:059 (7) -
22:43 Kaneko: delete this
22:43 Kaneko: and make (6) repeat once
22:43 Kaneko: and new combo on (7) then
22:43 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBJh
22:44 Kaneko: 03:34:714 (3) - delete this
22:44 Kaneko: and repeat (2) once
22:46 Kaneko: hmm, ok
22:46 Kaneko: 03:36:369 (3) - delete this
22:46 Kaneko: 03:36:576 (4) -
22:46 Kaneko: this too
22:47 Kaneko: make (2) repeat once
22:47 Kaneko: and move (3) to the white tick
22:48 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBU9
22:49 Kaneko: 03:39:266 (2) -
22:49 Kaneko: delete this
22:49 Kaneko: and repeat (1) once
22:49 Kaneko: 03:40:093 (3) - delete this then
22:49 Kaneko: and repeat (2) once
22:50 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBZt
22:50 Kaneko: 03:40:300 (3) - gets a new combo
22:51 Kaneko: 03:42:576 (2) - delete this
22:51 Kaneko: 03:42:783 (1) - and this
22:51 Kaneko: repeat (1) once
22:52 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gC5h
22:53 kevinelson: i still here dont worry o/
22:53 Kaneko: hehe =p
22:53 Kaneko: the reasons for these is, it makes it easier, but it still fits the area
22:54 Kaneko: just fix the last part as the above, you should get the general idea now
22:55 Kaneko: thats it for normal
22:55 Kaneko: quick test play on easy with hr/dt/hd
22:56 kevinelson: xD
22:59 Kaneko: ok, hitnote placement is good for easy
22:59 Kaneko: its just spacing issues
22:59 Kaneko: remember, a Easy must be 100% snapped to once distance snap
22:59 Kaneko: at all times =p
22:59 Kaneko: 01:04:714 (5,1) -
23:00 Kaneko: this doesnt work for example
23:00 Kaneko: also, 01:12:990 (1,2) - this spacing is larger then the rest =p so you will be asked to fix this
23:00 Kaneko: even if the tempo of the song picks up, its a rule that easy should be snapped 100% =p
23:01 kevinelson: =( was so fun
23:01 kevinelson: witch u thing is better 0.8 or 1.0?
23:02 Kaneko: you will have to experiment
23:02 Kaneko: what you can do is
23:03 Kaneko: change the SV
23:03 Kaneko: to 0.85x and 1x
23:03 Kaneko: you can do this in timing
23:03 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gCwJ
23:04 Kaneko: this way, you can have difference in spacing, and it wont break the rules
23:04 kevinelson: then i ill have to fix all sliders right?
23:04 Kaneko: yes
23:05 Kaneko: well, fix the spacing for easy, and it should all be good
23:05 kevinelson: 1x distance does not fill better with SV 1x?
23:06 Kaneko: well, use 0.8 as your base
23:06 Kaneko: for both speedup and slow downs
23:06 Kaneko: or use 1x
23:06 Kaneko: if you dont want them to touch

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-03-13T00:11:52+00:00

Teara Kaneko, Thx for your modding, Map updated.

PS: Teara Kaneko Will map a Guest [Insane] mode Yay!

Last edited by - Kevin 2013-03-21T20:58:24+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Teara

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Teara 2013-03-21T18:34:57+00:00

Took me awhile. orz

Here is "easy" insane owo

http://puu.sh/2ltAy

should even the difficulty spread a bit.

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-03-21T21:09:43+00:00

Awesome, Thx~ Uploaded ! ヽ(*'､＾*)

Teara

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Teara 2013-03-22T18:17:03+00:00

Here is an update.

Thanks to Roddie and SteRRuM for suggestions.

http://puu.sh/2m164

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

P o M u T a 2013-03-25T04:14:24+00:00

hi~.

[Easy]

AR+1 Seems better.
00:07:219 (5) - New combo change.
00:56:874 (5) - ^
01:01:012 (1) - ^
01:07:632 (1) - ^
01:16:322 (7) - ^
02:06:391 (5) - ^
02:10:529 (1) - ^
02:17:150 (1) - ^
02:35:770 (3) - ^

i think NC bit random... so,　you try have a regularity.

[Normal]

AR+1 Seems better.
00:37:426 (2) - (1) ctrl+H and ctrl+J use better.
00:41:563 (10) - Add NC.
00:46:115 (1) - 00:44:874 (1) ctrl+J and ctrl+G use better. . if changed... next spacing check please~.
00:56:460 (6) - Add NC.
00:56:874 (7) - successive repeat (short slider) very confused. i don't like successive repeat. so 1 repeat is nice...
01:55:219 x) - i think add note is better.
02:17:150 (1) - Remove NC.
You more use clap better. this song very match.
02:42:391 (3) - Add finish Slider head.
02:49:012 (1) - Add finish Slider head.
02:52:322 (5) - Add NC.
02:58:115 (1) - slider End time is 03:00:598 better~.

[Hard]

this is Hard diff O:? seems insane...
00:47:357 (4) - two repeat is confused.
00:50:667 (4) - ^
00:57:288 (6) - ^
01:08:874 (5) - slider end time is 01:09:288 better.
01:11:770 (4) - slider end time is 01:12:184 sound good.
01:12:288 (5) - Delete note please. not match sound...
03:15:908 (1) - Remove NC.

[Insane]

00:19:634 (7) - sound not match.. so, 1 right 1/4.

[Teara's Insane]

00:16:115 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stack is confused play.. so, unstack better.
02:19:322 (7) - Add NC.
02:32:046 (4,5) - spacing small is bad. because, It seems 1/4 note.. i am confused.

overall ... NC is random.. so, people confused.
you should NC check~.

good luck

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-03-25T14:48:01+00:00

P o M u T a wrote:
hi~.

[Easy]
AR+1 Seems better. No change
00:07:219 (5) - New combo change.Ok
00:56:874 (5) - ^ Ok
01:01:012 (1) - ^ Ok
01:07:632 (1) - ^ Ok
01:16:322 (7) - ^ Ok
02:06:391 (5) - ^ Ok
02:10:529 (1) - ^ Ok
02:17:150 (1) - ^ Ok
02:35:770 (3) - ^ Ok

i think NC bit random... so,　you try have a regularity.
[Normal]
AR+1 Seems better.No change
00:37:426 (2) - (1) ctrl+H and ctrl+J use better. Ok
00:41:563 (10) - Add NC. Ok
00:46:115 (1) - 00:44:874 (1) ctrl+J and ctrl+G use better. . if changed... next spacing check please~. No change
00:56:460 (6) - Add NC.Ok
00:56:874 (7) - successive repeat (short slider) very confused. i don't like successive repeat. so 1 repeat is nice... Ok
01:55:219 x) - i think add note is better.
02:17:150 (1) - Remove NC.Ok
You more use clap better. this song very match.
02:42:391 (3) - Add finish Slider head. Ok
02:49:012 (1) - Add finish Slider head. Ok
02:52:322 (5) - Add NC. Ok
02:58:115 (1) - slider End time is 03:00:598 better~. Ok
[Hard]
this is Hard diff O:? seems insane...
00:47:357 (4) - two repeat is confused. Ok
00:50:667 (4) - ^ Ok
00:57:288 (6) - ^ Ok
01:08:874 (5) - slider end time is 01:09:288 better. Ok
01:11:770 (4) - slider end time is 01:12:184 sound good. Ok
01:12:288 (5) - Delete note please. not match sound... Ok
03:15:908 (1) - Remove NC.Ok

[Insane]
00:19:634 (7) - sound not match.. so, 1 right 1/4.
Ok

[Teara's Insane]

It's up to You Teara
00:16:115 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stack is confused play.. so, unstack better.
02:19:322 (7) - Add NC.
02:32:046 (4,5) - spacing small is bad. because, It seems 1/4 note.. i am confused.
overall ... NC is random.. so, people confused.
you should NC check~.

good luck

Teara

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Teara 2013-03-25T16:09:57+00:00

P o M u T a wrote:
[Teara's Insane]
00:16:115 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stack is confused play.. so, unstack better. ~ No, I'd rather keep it like this, it fits for me.
02:19:322 (7) - Add NC. ~ Ok
02:32:046 (4,5) - spacing small is bad. because, It seems 1/4 note.. i am confused. ~ I've actually asked a lot of people to test play this, and they all got this on the first try. I don't think its so confusing.

overall ... NC is random.. so, people confused. ~ I've tried to redo the New Combo's, for some reason its very hard to do for this map =p
you should NC check~.

good luck

Thanks for the mod!

http://puu.sh/2nKLi

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

StickyPicky 2013-03-26T04:39:51+00:00

hi ~

#modreqs

Easy

00:03:495 / 00:06:805 / 00:10:115 / 00:53:150 / 02:02:667 / 02:35:770 / 02:42:391 / 02:49:012 / 02:52:322 / 02:55:632 / 02:57:288 / 02:58:943 add finish ~
01:20:460 remove this clap ~
02:33:288 remove this slider change this to a spinner ~

Normal

None ~

Hard

kindly look the AiMod and fix all of this >.<

SPOILER

Insane

02:59:048 Spinners must have new combo.

Teara's Insane

03:15:742 Object's end is not snapped!

SPOILER

Thats all ~ goodluck ~ >.<

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-03-26T13:42:43+00:00

Thx~ for modding newtoniorock8, Followed everything

newtoniorock8 wrote:
hi ~ #modreqs
Mod
:arrow: Easy

00:03:495 / 00:06:805 / 00:10:115 / 00:53:150 / 02:02:667 / 02:35:770 / 02:42:391 / 02:49:012 / 02:52:322 / 02:55:632 / 02:57:288 / 02:58:943 add finish ~
01:20:460 remove this clap ~
02:33:288 remove this slider change this to a spinner ~

Normal

None ~

Hard

kindly look the AiMod and fix all of this >.<
SPOILER

Insane

02:59:048 Spinners must have new combo.

SPOILER
Thats all ~ goodluck ~ >.<

[Teara's Insane]

03:15:742 Object's end is not snapped!
Fixed!

Kiiwa

928 posts

Joined January 2010

Kiiwa 2013-03-28T03:21:03+00:00

Hi~

[General]

Letter boxing during breaks crops your background image in an awkward way, maybe disable it?

[Insane]

OD+1
00:03:497 - Add a finish?
00:07:221 (2) - CTRL+G works better for spacing.
00:37:738 (4) - CTRL+G works better for spacing.
00:42:393 (5) - End this slider at 00:42:600 - for better rhythm.
01:36:186 (1) - Add a clap.
02:05:565 (7) - Extend till 02:05:772 - for better rhythm.
02:14:876 (4) - Delete this note.
02:22:117 - Add a clap.
02:33:702 (3) - Add a clap.
02:59:048 (1) - Add a clap.
03:17:564 (4) - Add a clap.
03:21:290 (1) - Remove new combo, it makes no sense...
03:28:324 (4) - Add a clap.
03:29:152 (1,1) - Remove new combos to match music more.
03:30:393 (1) - Finish sounds awful here, remove it or end your spinner at 03:31:634 -

[Teara's Insane]

OD-1
00:03:495 - Add a finish.
00:16:115 (10,11,12,13,1) - Stacking all this doesn't play nor look nice, I suggest to change.
01:22:529 (4,5) - Better to stack then use this strange spacing.
01:25:426 (1,5) - Add clap.
01:26:253 (8) - New combo, 01:27:081 (1) - remove new combo.
01:27:908 (1,1,1) - Make spacing more consistent?
01:45:184 (11) - Delete note, these is nothing in the music to require this note.
02:03:081 - Add clap, 02:03:908 - Add clap.
02:11:357 - Remove whistle, 02:11:770 - Add whistle.
02:19:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These sliders should start on white/red ticks, not blue... 02:19:012 (6) - Change this to note then start the sliders at 02:19:219 -
02:32:047 (4,5) - Again, this spacing isn't good.
03:17:563 (2) - Add a clap.
03:22:115 - Add a finish.
03:31:943 - Same as Insane, it's a bad choice.
03:40:736 (2,3) - Bad spacing. Suggest you shorten 03:40:736 (2) - to end at 03:40:943 -
03:45:288 (4) - Add new combo, 03:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]

00:03:495 - Add a finish.
00:06:184 (12) - End at 00:06:391 - instead.
00:33:288 (1) - Add a finish.
00:37:839 (11) - Add a clap.
00:43:632 (5) - Add a clap.
00:47:770 - Add a clap.
00:48:598 - Add a clap.
00:51:081 - Add a clap.
00:52:943 - Add a clap.
00:53:563 - Add a clap.
00:54:391 - Add a clap.
00:56:046 - Add a clap.
00:56:874 (4) - Add a clap.
00:57:701 - Add a clap.
01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Long stream for a Hard...
01:12:495 (6) - Delete note.
01:12:599 (7) - End at 01:12:805 - instead.
01:13:427 (2,1) - Recheck your rhythm. I suggest you add a note at 01:13:839 - and delete the note at 01:13:943 (1) -
01:20:047 (4,5) - Same as previous.
01:21:701 - Add clap.
01:22:943 - Change the whistle to a Finish.
01:24:184 - Add clap.
01:57:288 (6) - Add clap.
02:00:598 (7) - Add clap.
02:01:426 (3) - Add clap.
02:03:082 (3,4) - Recheck rhythm.
02:05:563 - Add clap.
02:09:288 (4) - Add finish and new combo, 02:09:496 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:19:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this stream is too long for a Hard.
02:21:805 (4,6) - Delete these notes.
Now just check the rhythm for the rest of your chorus's.../me lazy

[Normal]

00:10:115 - Add a finish.
Maybe extend the first break to 00:20:046 - ?
01:03:081 (3) - New combo.
01:07:632 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:19:632 (6) - New combo.
01:27:495 (2) - Remove finish, it's too noisy here.
02:20:460 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:52:322 (1) - Add a finish.
02:56:460 (4) - New combo.
03:32:460 (5) - New combo, 03:33:495 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:45:288 (6) - New combo, 03:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:46:943 (1,1) - Do not use 1/4 in a normal, even if it's a slider! Change it to 1/2 instead.

[Easy]

I suggest you place more claps on the 1/2 pattern, they are pretty inconsistent in this difficulty in particular.
Maybe extend the first break to 00:20:046 - ?
00:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo, 00:46:943 (2) - Add new combo.
01:29:150 - Remove finish.
02:56:460 (5) - New combo.
02:59:357 (1) - Spinner is too short for an Easy.
03:48:184 (6,1) - Objects are too close for an Easy.

~~My longest mod...~~
Good luck~

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-03-28T05:24:20+00:00

Thx for modding, Kiiwa o/

Kiiwa wrote:
Hi~ Hay ヾ(*´Δ`*)ﾉ"

[General]
Letter boxing during breaks crops your background image in an awkward way, maybe disable it?

All Disable

[Insane]
OD+1 Increased
00:03:497 - Add a finish? Ok
00:07:221 (2) - CTRL+G works better for spacing. No change
00:37:738 (4) - CTRL+G works better for spacing. No change
00:42:393 (5) - End this slider at 00:42:600 - for better rhythm. Ok
01:36:186 (1) - Add a clap. Ok
02:05:565 (7) - Extend till 02:05:772 - for better rhythm. Ok
02:14:876 (4) - Delete this note. Ok
02:22:117 - Add a clap. Ok
02:33:702 (3) - Add a clap. Ok
02:59:048 (1) - Add a clap. Ok
03:17:564 (4) - Add a clap. Ok
03:21:290 (1) - Remove new combo, it makes no sense... Ok
03:28:324 (4) - Add a clap. Ok
03:29:152 (1,1) - Remove new combos to match music more. Ok
03:30:393 (1) - Finish sounds awful here, remove it or end your spinner at 03:31:634 - End at 03:31:634 -

[Hard]
00:03:495 - Add a finish. Ok
00:06:184 (12) - End at 00:06:391 - instead. Ok
00:33:288 (1) - Add a finish. Ok
00:37:839 (11) - Add a clap. Ok
00:43:632 (5) - Add a clap. Ok
00:47:770 - Add a clap. Ok
00:48:598 - Add a clap. Ok
00:51:081 - Add a clap. Ok
00:52:943 - Add a clap. Ok
00:53:563 - Add a clap. Ok
00:54:391 - Add a clap. Ok
00:56:046 - Add a clap. Ok
00:56:874 (4) - Add a clap. Ok
00:57:701 - Add a clap. Ok
01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Long stream for a Hard... Ok
01:12:495 (6) - Delete note. Ok
01:12:599 (7) - End at 01:12:805 - instead. Ok
01:13:427 (2,1) - Recheck your rhythm. I suggest you add a note at 01:13:839 - and delete the note at 01:13:943 (1) - Ok
01:20:047 (4,5) - Same as previous. Ok
01:21:701 - Add clap. Ok
01:22:943 - Change the whistle to a Finish. Ok
01:24:184 - Add clap. Ok
01:57:288 (6) - Add clap. Ok
02:00:598 (7) - Add clap. Ok
02:01:426 (3) - Add clap. Ok
02:03:082 (3,4) - Recheck rhythm. Moved 1 Tick Left
02:05:563 - Add clap. Ok
02:09:288 (4) - Add finish and new combo, 02:09:496 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
02:19:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this stream is too long for a Hard. Ok
02:21:805 (4,6) - Delete these notes. Ok
Now just check the rhythm for the rest of your chorus's.../me lazy Checked hope i didnt miss anything

[Normal]
00:10:115 - Add a finish. Ok
Maybe extend the first break to 00:20:046 - ? No change
01:03:081 (3) - New combo. Ok
01:07:632 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
01:19:632 (6) - New combo. Ok
01:27:495 (2) - Remove finish, it's too noisy here. Ok
02:20:460 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
02:52:322 (1) - Add a finish. Ok
02:56:460 (4) - New combo. Ok
03:32:460 (5) - New combo, 03:33:495 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
03:45:288 (6) - New combo, 03:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
03:46:943 (1,1) - Do not use 1/4 in a normal, even if it's a slider! Change it to 1/2 instead. Ok

[Easy]
I suggest you place more claps on the 1/2 pattern, they are pretty inconsistent in this difficulty in particular. Worked hit sounds on all map
Maybe extend the first break to 00:20:046 - ? No change
00:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo, 00:46:943 (2) - Add new combo. Ok
01:29:150 - Remove finish. Ok
02:56:460 (5) - New combo.Ok
02:59:357 (1) - Spinner is too short for an Easy. Ok
03:48:184 (6,1) - Objects are too close for an Easy.Ok

~~My longest mod...~~
Good luck~

Teara

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814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2013-03-30T06:52:29+00:00

Kiiwa wrote:
Hi~

[Teara's Insane]
OD-1
00:03:495 - Add a finish.
00:16:115 (10,11,12,13,1) - Stacking all this doesn't play nor look nice, I suggest to change. ~ All a matter of opinion, I like it and for it it plays well, so no change.
01:22:529 (4,5) - Better to stack then use this strange spacing.
01:25:426 (1,5) - Add clap.
01:26:253 (8) - New combo, 01:27:081 (1) - remove new combo.
01:27:908 (1,1,1) - Make spacing more consistent?
01:45:184 (11) - Delete note, these is nothing in the music to require this note.
02:03:081 - Add clap, 02:03:908 - Add clap.
02:11:357 - Remove whistle, 02:11:770 - Add whistle.
02:19:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These sliders should start on white/red ticks, not blue... 02:19:012 (6) - Change this to note then start the sliders at 02:19:219 -
02:32:047 (4,5) - Again, this spacing isn't good.
03:17:563 (2) - Add a clap.
03:22:115 - Add a finish.
03:31:943 - Same as Insane, it's a bad choice.
03:40:736 (2,3) - Bad spacing. Suggest you shorten 03:40:736 (2) - to end at 03:40:943 -
03:45:288 (4) - Add new combo, 03:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo.

~~My longest mod...~~
Good luck~

Done everything but the one I commented on, thanks.

http://puu.sh/2qyxn

Stefan

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Stefan 2013-04-15T21:50:44+00:00

This song is incredible funny. no kd for this Post please

I've tested some Diffs and what I could say is that Hard feels quite overmapped, especially the Streams makes it to a very hard Hard Diff. Try to split these Streams like 00:43:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) (delete 6,8 here, they aren't really needed for this kind of Diff). I like the slider shapes you used at this Diff :3

Normal is okay.. sometimes it feels weird how did you mapped and why you set the Circle/Slider begin here and there but yeah, my opinion. You have a cheerful rhythm feeling on this Map as I can see which is a good thing imo.

About Easy, the same thing as Normal: Some weird moments which you choose to map and I find that it's a bit too much mapped. Also I've noticed some Hitsound inconsistency. Try to fix them.

Oh and use this File and add it to the Map. With this file the Sliderslide is silenced.

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-04-18T15:47:55+00:00

Sorry for late reply.

Thx for test play.

About Hard diff, i still trying to make the map easier.

I have not decided whether or not to change the sliderslide.

DragonArchangel

76 posts

Joined January 2012

DragonArchangel 2013-05-24T00:25:46+00:00

Hiii This is my mod!!

General:
Timing point:3495
Tags: add more:Rin,Len (and replace vocal for Vocaloid)

Easy:
01:26:667 - kaia this is not very useful!even to reduce 10% of the volume the music. This for me and dispensable
02:58:115 - this slide would be best if I went through the 02:58:529 02:58:943 here and get here the spinner
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end
00:10:115 (1) - add finish
00:13:426 (1) - add finish
00:46:115 (3) - add finish

Normal:
01:55:219 - put a hit here
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end

Hard:
03:31:839 - here should be the end of the spinner. is very fast for perceived player

SPOILER

Insane:
00:07:221 (2,3) - 4.05x Are you sure?
03:12:393 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - would be so cool ^ ^ (is optional)

SPOILER

03:14:876 (3,4,5,6,7) - this part, the hits have to be closer to the slide, if not, it becomes difficult to understand

Teara´s Insane:
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end

sorry if you have some errors in english ^ ^
my english is bad, I hope it helped good at something
good luck, keep so near and bubbling and after is ranked

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-05-24T14:03:42+00:00

DragonArchangel wrote:
Hiii This is my mod!!

General:
Timing point:3495 *Thx~ i missed this at [Insane]
Tags: add more:Rin,Len (and replace vocal for Vocaloid) *It's not Kagamine's song It's Nanahira ヾ(*´Δ｀*)ﾉﾞ

Easy:
01:26:667 - kaia this is not very useful!even to reduce 10% of the volume the music. This for me and dispensable *no Change
02:58:115 - this slide would be best if I went through the 02:58:529 02:58:943 here and get here the spinner *Hmm i see
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end *no Change
00:10:115 (1) - add finish *OK
00:13:426 (1) - add finish *OK
00:46:115 (3) - add finish *OK

Normal:
01:55:219 - put a hit here *no Change
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end *no Change

Hard:
03:31:839 - here should be the end of the spinner. is very fast for perceived player *OK
SPOILER
Insane:
00:07:221 (2,3) - 4.05x Are you sure? *Yeah!
03:12:393 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - would be so cool ^ ^ (is optional) *Followed
SPOILER
03:14:876 (3,4,5,6,7) - this part, the hits have to be closer to the slide, if not, it becomes difficult to understand *no Change

Teara´s Insane:
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end

sorry if you have some errors in english ^ ^ <- *Yeah I got mistake here too =(
my english is bad, I hope it helped good at something *Don't worry we ill improve
good luck, keep so near and bubbling and after is ranked

Last edited by - Kevin 2013-05-24T14:08:09+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-05-24T14:05:18+00:00

Edit: Sorry, double post >.<

Chloe

1,162 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2013-06-09T14:27:53+00:00

Hello~

As m4m req :>
And just mod as suggestions, not necessary. : )

[General]

[Easy]

00:09:701 (4) - remove the fin will be better
00:13:012 (4) - ^
00:40:736 (2) - remap this?
01:52:736 (5) - ^
03:33:288 (3) - hard to hold for newbie.....

[Normal]

00:47:563 (3) - remove this one and add 00:47:770 (3) -
00:52:529 (5) - 00:52:736 (6) - add these two or a slider here and remove 00:52:943 (5) -
00:57:908 (5) - reverse for 5 times
01:10:115 (3) - reverse for 2 times
02:22:529 (1) - completely stack with the beginning of 02:23:356 (3) -

[Hard]

00:13:219 (8) - move to x182 y252 for better flow
00:16:012 (4) - try remove this one
00:48:598 (7) - flow was bad here
00:53:357 (12) - 00:53:460 (13) - 00:53:563 (14) - there should be a triplet here.. does it right?
01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's overmapped here o_o
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:49:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:19:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
03:08:150 (5) - move this one
Since there're so many stream in it, I think the diff is NOT HARD , JUST CALLED IT INSANE or make it easier plz.

[Teara's Insane]

00:11:150 (5) - ctrl g for better flow
00:11:977 (8) - ^ It's interesting www
00:11:977 (8) - ^
00:11:977 (8) - ^
01:25:943 (6) - remove this one
01:59:253 (2) - ^
02:02:874 (1,2,3) - it's too sharp for me...
02:09:288 (1) - use ds0.13 for better flow
02:28:426 (4) - remove this one
02:50:667 (5) - add finish in the beginning of it
02:53:977 (7) - ^
03:08:150 (7) - remove this one
03:28:115 (2) - add this one
03:45:701 (2) - remove this one and replace the slider behind it
03:48:184 (6) - suggest to map like this in here：http://puu.sh/3bNbl.png

[Insane]

00:04:322 (3) - ds so high
00:07:219 (2) - ctrl g
00:37:012 (2) - use 1/2 slider?
00:41:460 (7) - use ds 1.3
01:24:081 (2) - remove this one?
01:44:253 (6) - ctrl g
01:44:460 (1) - ^
01:52:943 (2) - lol ds so high....
02:22:115 (3) - follow the rythem just like 02:21:701 (1,2) -
03:16:529 (2) - do you like to map as this：http://puu.sh/3bNcc.png
03:23:253 (3) - add this one
03:48:184 (6) - suggest to map like this in here：http://puu.sh/3bNbl.png
Well.. I couldn't understand this mapping style, so it's hard to mod for me ;______;

Good luck to your map <3.

Snowy Dream

2,195 posts

Joined September 2009

Snowy Dream 2013-06-10T03:44:15+00:00

Nanahira ver. (´・ω ・`)

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-06-10T19:16:51+00:00

MOD

Chloe wrote:
Hello~

As m4m req :>
And just mod as suggestions, not necessary. : )

[General]
[Easy]
00:09:701 (4) - remove the fin will be better
00:13:012 (4) - ^
00:40:736 (2) - remap this?
01:52:736 (5) - ^
03:33:288 (3) - hard to hold for newbie.....
[Normal]
00:47:563 (3) - remove this one and add 00:47:770 (3) -
00:52:529 (5) - 00:52:736 (6) - add these two or a slider here and remove 00:52:943 (5) -
00:57:908 (5) - reverse for 5 times
01:10:115 (3) - reverse for 2 times
02:22:529 (1) - completely stack with the beginning of 02:23:356 (3) -
[Hard]
00:13:219 (8) - move to x182 y252 for better flow
00:16:012 (4) - try remove this one
00:48:598 (7) - flow was bad here
00:53:357 (12) - 00:53:460 (13) - 00:53:563 (14) - there should be a triplet here.. does it right?
01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's overmapped here o_o
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:49:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:19:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
03:08:150 (5) - move this one
Since there're so many stream in it, I think the diff is NOT HARD , JUST CALLED IT INSANE or make it easier plz.

[Insane]
00:04:322 (3) - ds so high
00:07:219 (2) - ctrl g
00:37:012 (2) - use 1/2 slider?
00:41:460 (7) - use ds 1.3
01:24:081 (2) - remove this one?
01:44:253 (6) - ctrl g
01:44:460 (1) - ^
01:52:943 (2) - lol ds so high....
02:22:115 (3) - follow the rythem just like 02:21:701 (1,2) -
03:16:529 (2) - do you like to map as this：http://puu.sh/3bNcc.png
03:23:253 (3) - add this one
03:48:184 (6) - suggest to map like this in here：http://puu.sh/3bNbl.png
Well.. I couldn't understand this mapping style, so it's hard to mod for me ;______;

Good luck to your map <3.

Thx for modding, Changed Easy, Normal and Hard, no Changes for Insane.

Gonna w8 for Teara now.

Snowy Dream wrote:
Nanahira ver. (´・ω ・`)

Nanahira Ever. (´・ω ・`)

raulmax319

43 posts

Joined November 2012

raulmax319 2013-06-13T15:56:24+00:00

Great job here you deserve a star o/

Good luck!

Teara

osu! Alumni

814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2013-06-13T18:29:55+00:00

Thanks

http://puu.sh/3eVAx.zip

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-06-13T20:39:39+00:00

Uploaded, Thx for stars~

Slouchy haru

13 posts

Joined October 2013

Slouchy haru 2013-12-12T07:53:15+00:00

hard
00:17:357
00:19:012
00:35:563
01:12:391
01:44:253
Not aligned

00:42:805
01:13:426
01:20:046
Too close
open Distance Snap

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-12-12T12:24:18+00:00

Thx For modding~

Slouchy haru wrote:
hard
00:17:357
00:19:012
00:35:563
01:12:391
01:44:253
Not aligned

00:42:805
01:13:426
01:20:046
Too close
open Distance Snap

kamisamaaa

606 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2013-12-19T06:42:38+00:00

from your M4M req~
I love nanahira ! ❤
osu need more nanahira~

[general]
maybe you should change to this

artist is not the singer. the artist of this song is みきとP ,you should add the nanahira in the tag
maybe use a video like this?
if you use this video youshould add りゅうせー to tag who make this video
about AR~ar9 is not suitable for 145BPM. change to ar8 is better . and hard diff ar6. normal diff ar4 . easy diff ar2. make it proper reasonable。（now your normal diff only have ar3 but hard diff is ar7!）
[insane]
00:06:184 (8) - I think change this kind of rythm to two notes and make a jump is better to the song
00:12:805 (9) - ^ and delete 00:12:701 (8) - this
00:33:081 add two note here? make the begining of vocal feel comfortable
00:39:495 (5) - maybe place it far from the prev? because here has a beat rythm
03:32:046 why dont make some special rythm from here to the end
00:09:391 why add clap here not 00:09:701 (5) - ? and clap here 00:09:805 (6,7) - is ??
00:06:184 (8) - add finish on head and tail and remove finish on 00:06:805 (1) -
00:37:426 (3,4) - miss clap because the rythm. maybe add whistle on these two slider?
01:13:012 (1,2) - add whistle on these two
01:19:632 (1,2) - ^ and all the kiai time is same
01:39:495 from here to 02:09:288, miss so many clap because the rythm , sound strange

try to only add clap on the second whhiteline and remove all clap on the fourth whiteline?
[Teara's Insane]
00:11:770 (7,8) - really hard to play! maybe use ctrl+G on 00:11:977 (8) - and stack 00:11:770 (7) - to the end of 8
02:21:701 (4,5,6,7,8) - maybe use this?

SPOILER

really a good diff ! I like this !

a little tired and find nothing in hard diff..sorry for pass other diff~
hope this mod can help you

good map~and good luck~ star

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-12-19T15:54:06+00:00

Thx for Modding

kamisamaaa wrote:
from your M4M req~
I love nanahira ! ❤
osu need more nanahira~
[general]
maybe you should change to this

artist is not the singer. the artist of this song is みきとP ,you should add the nanahira in the tag
maybe use a video like this?
if you use this video youshould add りゅうせー to tag who make this video Added TAGS and reuploaded video with properly encode, changed artist name
about AR~ar9 is not suitable for 145BPM. change to ar8 is better . and hard diff ar6. normal diff ar4 . easy diff ar2. make it proper reasonable。（now your normal diff only have ar3 but hard diff is ar7!） i'm fine with my AR9 insane, changed Normal to AR5
[insane]
00:06:184 (8) - I think change this kind of rythm to two notes and make a jump is better to the song no change
00:12:805 (9) - ^ and delete 00:12:701 (8) - this done
00:33:081 add two note here? make the begining of vocal feel comfortable added a stream
00:39:495 (5) - maybe place it far from the prev? because here has a beat rythm no change
03:32:046 why dont make some special rythm from here to the end Ctrl + G some notes but i keep the pattern
00:09:391 why add clap here not 00:09:701 (5) - ? and clap here 00:09:805 (6,7) - is ?? Fixed
00:06:184 (8) - add finish on head and tail and remove finish on 00:06:805 (1) - nope
00:37:426 (3,4) - miss clap because the rythm. maybe add whistle on these two slider? Ok
01:13:012 (1,2) - add whistle on these two Ok
01:19:632 (1,2) - ^ and all the kiai time is same Ok
01:39:495 from here to 02:09:288, miss so many clap because the rythm , sound strange try to only add clap on the second whhiteline and remove all clap on the fourth whiteline? Add a new Rythm

a little tired and find nothing in hard diff..sorry for pass other diff~
hope this mod can help you
good map~and good luck~ star Thx~ i gave a star for your map too, mutual help for a Osu! with more Nanahira

Teara

osu! Alumni

814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2013-12-19T23:31:42+00:00

kamisamaaa wrote:
[Teara's Insane]
00:11:770 (7,8) - really hard to play! maybe use ctrl+G on 00:11:977 (8) - and stack 00:11:770 (7) - to the end of 8
02:21:701 (4,5,6,7,8) - maybe use this?
SPOILER
really a good diff ! I like this !

Thanks for the mod! I think its fine as it is now

kamisamaaa

606 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2013-12-20T04:41:01+00:00

- Kevin wrote:
Thx~ i gave a star for your map too, mutual help for a Osu! with more Nanahira

~I have add you as friend~maybe we can make more nanahira's map togather~

forget to say~add Teara to tag

P A N

2,357 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-12-20T10:01:56+00:00

hi, m4m from my queue.
NC = New combo

[Normal]

00:05:977 (4) remove note seems better since you do like this on 00:11:770 (3,4) too.
00:11:770 (3,4) I recommend to remove (4) and add repeat to (3). end at blue tick and start with red tick is too hard for normal imo.
00:41:563 (4) / 00:43:219 (10) - add NC
the rhythm between 00:43:839 (11,1) is too empty. maybe add note on 00:44:460
00:52:736 - add note would be great.
00:53:150 (5,1) - swap NC? and add finish on 00:53:150
00:57:908 (5,1) - too empty too. maybe add something at 00:58:529 / 00:58:943 / 00:59:357 it will easier to catch the beat too.
01:05:563 / 01:05:977 - add something, too empty for me.
01:08:874 / 01:09:288 - ^
remove 01:54:805 (3) or add note on 01:55:219
02:08:046 - same reason as 00:57:908
02:18:391 - add note, there have a vocals sound.
02:33:287 (2) - remove NC
02:35:770 (2) - NC
02:52:322 (1,2,3) - not balance spacing, please check.

[Hard]

make circle size smaller 1 tick and ar-1 hpdrain+1
00:17:978 (6,7) - now are 1 circle and 1 slider, change to slider then circle, I mean this for add NC on 00:18:391 or maybe it can NC instantly on 00:18:184 (7) im not sure about this one.
00:32:874 (1) - remove better imo, let it start on 00:33:288 (2) is better fit with vocals.
00:36:391 (5) - spread it into 2 circle and NC on second circle.
00:38:046 (11,1) - swap NC
00:53:150 (1) - add finish on head.
01:41:770 (3,5) - add clap.
03:11:358 (3) - overlap.
03:27:496 (2) - remove NC
well, you have a problem of NC because some part that big white tick should be NC but your big white tick is a tail of slider so.. here is example 00:36:391 (5)

anyway good luck

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-12-20T13:13:28+00:00

Thx for modding.

MOD

P A N wrote:
hi, m4m from my queue.
NC = New combo

[Normal]
00:05:977 (4) remove note seems better since you do like this on 00:11:770 (3,4) too. Ok
00:11:770 (3,4) I recommend to remove (4) and add repeat to (3). end at blue tick and start with red tick is too hard for normal imo. I'm fine with it since I already dictated the pace in the previous combo
00:41:563 (4) / 00:43:219 (10) - add NC Ok both
the rhythm between 00:43:839 (11,1) is too empty. maybe add note on 00:44:460 No change
00:52:736 - add note would be great. Ok
00:53:150 (5,1) - swap NC? and add finish on 00:53:150 Ok
00:57:908 (5,1) - too empty too. maybe add something at 00:58:529 / 00:58:943 / 00:59:357 it will easier to catch the beat too. No change
01:05:563 / 01:05:977 - add something, too empty for me. No change
01:08:874 / 01:09:288 - ^ No change
remove 01:54:805 (3) or add note on 01:55:219 Removed
02:08:046 - same reason as 00:57:908 No change
02:18:391 - add note, there have a vocals sound. No change
02:33:287 (2) - remove NC Ok
02:35:770 (2) - NC Ok
02:52:322 (1,2,3) - not balance spacing, please check. Thx~
[Hard]
make circle size smaller 1 tick and ar-1 hpdrain+1 +1 HP Drain -1 AR
00:17:978 (6,7) - now are 1 circle and 1 slider, change to slider then circle, I mean this for add NC on 00:18:391 or maybe it can NC instantly on 00:18:184 (7) im not sure about this one. Slider then circle OK!
00:32:874 (1) - remove better imo, let it start on 00:33:288 (2) is better fit with vocals. Ok
00:36:391 (5) - spread it into 2 circle and NC on second circle. Ok
00:38:046 (11,1) - swap NC Ok
00:53:150 (1) - add finish on head. Ok
01:41:770 (3,5) - add clap. Ok
03:11:358 (3) - overlap. Ok
03:27:496 (2) - remove NC Ok
well, you have a problem of NC because some part that big white tick should be NC but your big white tick is a tail of slider so.. here is example 00:36:391 (5) :(
anyway good luck

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-12-21T15:19:37+00:00

Olá!!!!

M4M From Queue

[General]

* Primeiramente, olhando no geral, as posições de algumas notas com relação a outras... sei lá, não me sinto muito bem, mas talvez seja alguma coisa comigo. Nestes últimos dias tou meio que deixando o osu de lado, tou quase que desistindo do negócio... sei lá... Lembro que a BounceBabe estava assim há alguns meses e agora acho que eu a entendo. Um misto de monotonia com alguma coisa de os outros te deixarem em segundo, terceiro plano (me refiro a alguns Guest Differs e, falando nisso, tou pensando seriamente em remover o Anre's easy para um link à parte e ficar só com Normal/Hard). Aplicarei teus mods nas minhas diffs, mas não mexerei na diff dele (até porque é dele). Se em trinta dias o AnreFM não vier (e pelo menos) aplicar os mods no easy diff (que é dele), eu irei tirar o Easy Diff e o porei no link do Mediafire (e no Creator Words) e vou seguir em frente, sozinho.

* Pra falar a verdade, não me sinto bem hoje. Contudo, não o quero deixar esperando. Por isso, não espere Nazi mods de mim esta vez. Focarei nos ritmos, Unrankable stuff e em coisas que me gritarem por atenção (como em alguns SV changes no Normal que me parecem não muito boas). De início, os nomes das dificuldades estão 100% OK (como peppynazi andou comentando um dia desses).

[Easy]

00:46:115 (3,1,2) - Um ritmo meio off (não completamente, mas em parte, sim). Uma sugestão: deletar 00:47:770 (2) - e colocar 00:46:115 (3,1) - para começar em 00:46:529, e depois adicionar uma nota em 00:49:426. Ficaria assim →

00:55:632 (4,1) - Ficaria melhor tirando o repeat do slider, deletando a nota e substituindo-a por um slider 1/1 mais cedo. Não esqueça de adicionar NC ao segundo slider (que vai começar no Big White Tick). Assim

01:48:184 (4,1) - Devido ao AR, estes dois estão um sobre o outro. Fosse num Insane ou mesmo Hard não teria problema, pois o AR alto não deixaria os dois aparecer ao mesmo tempo (talvez um pouquinho só), assim como o CS seria menor. O que não acontece aqui no Easy. Poderia curvar o (4) assim como fez com o 01:49:426 (1) - ou apenas movê-lo para algum lugar de forma a não quebrar o spacing e desfazer o overlap.

02:27:495 (3,1) - Aqui (e em 03:28:736 (3,1) e mais outros lugares), o spacing deixa muito a desejar. O que pode ser um teste um tanto difícil para quem está apenas começando a jogar. Os mais experientes passarão isto com destreza ─ Brainslugs que o diga. Porém, muitos não verão com bons olhos o uso de peppyspacing (vide o mapa de Chatmonchy que o próprio peppy fez, lá dos idos de 2007).

03:33:288 (3) - Tenho certeza que algum BAT vai ranhetar com isso, embora não seja um causo pra tanto.

[Normal]

00:49:012 (6) - Como mencionei acima (na seção General falei justamente desta parte), isto pode ser uma armadilha para muitos. De fato, a colocação de um redutor de velocidade aqui obriga o DS a mudar conforme a nova velocidade (mais lenta), o que deixa o spacing inconsistente com relação aos objetos vizinhos. A música não me parece sugerir algum efeito do tipo neste ponto. Também os sliders 1/1 não possuem Slider Ticks, o que poderia facilitar um pouco (aos medianos) saber que o SV muda aqui. Seria bom se este slider corresse na mesma velocidade, como o próximo slider faz.
Relembrando que SV changes dentro de padrões não são más. Apenas não são adequadas para Easy, Normal, Beginner etc (as diffs desenhadas para serem mais fáceis).

♥ 00:59:770 - A mudança de SV aqui (e também em 02:09:288 - e em 02:35:770 - ) está correta, pois reflete realmente o que a música passa pra gente em termos de andamento.

01:10:115 (3,1) - Uma posição meio canhestra (eu diria incomum) para esse (1). O flow é bom, mas peguei 100 aqui. E também o spacing do (3) com o (1) é menor com relação ao spacing de 01:10:942 (1,2,3). O 01:10:942 (1) - ficaria melhor em x:480 y:208 por isso.

01:23:770 (1) - Niemeyer Slider (lembra um trecho da Av. Niemeyer no Rio de Janeiro). Talvez queira colocar um arco ou uma forma diferente. Ou deixar assim (e ver o que os próximos irão dizer).

[Hard]

00:04:115 (3,4,5) - O flow aqui não me parece muito bom >< mas pode ser apenas uma preferência minha, nada demais.

[Teara's Insane]

♥ A Perfect Insane Diff!

[Insane]

♥ Um Insane Perfeito!

That's all (:

Espero não ter sido inútil, embora seja assim que eu me sinta.
Uma estrela pela perfeição dos Insanes e do Hard.
E muito obrigado

Att.

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-12-21T21:18:10+00:00

Thx for modding ~

MOD

Alarido wrote:
Olá!!!!

[General]

* Primeiramente, olhando no geral, as posições de algumas notas com relação a outras... sei lá, não me sinto muito bem, mas talvez seja alguma coisa comigo. Nestes últimos dias tou meio que deixando o osu de lado, tou quase que desistindo do negócio... sei lá... Lembro que a BounceBabe estava assim há alguns meses e agora acho que eu a entendo. Um misto de monotonia com alguma coisa de os outros te deixarem em segundo, terceiro plano (me refiro a alguns Guest Differs e, falando nisso, tou pensando seriamente em remover o Anre's easy para um link à parte e ficar só com Normal/Hard). Aplicarei teus mods nas minhas diffs, mas não mexerei na diff dele (até porque é dele). Se em trinta dias o AnreFM não vier (e pelo menos) aplicar os mods no easy diff (que é dele), eu irei tirar o Easy Diff e o porei no link do Mediafire (e no Creator Words) e vou seguir em frente, sozinho. Eu também não me sinto confortável com guest diff, mas até o momento Teara está sendo pontual e me ajudou muito.

* Pra falar a verdade, não me sinto bem hoje. Contudo, não o quero deixar esperando. Por isso, não espere Nazi mods de mim esta vez. Focarei nos ritmos, Unrankable stuff e em coisas que me gritarem por atenção (como em alguns SV changes no Normal que me parecem não muito boas). De início, os nomes das dificuldades estão 100% OK (como peppynazi andou comentando um dia desses). Nada cara levanta essa moral ai agradeço sua preocupação em me dar este MOD sem demora mas eu tbm não me importaria de esperar um pouco tendo em vista sua user page eu já estava ciente da sua desmotivação...

[Easy]

00:46:115 (3,1,2) - Um ritmo meio off (não completamente, mas em parte, sim). Uma sugestão: deletar 00:47:770 (2) - e colocar 00:46:115 (3,1) - para começar em 00:46:529, e depois adicionar uma nota em 00:49:426. Ficaria assim →

Tentei fazer desta forma mas não me senti confortável perdendo o hit finish da musica

00:55:632 (4,1) - Ficaria melhor tirando o repeat do slider, deletando a nota e substituindo-a por um slider 1/1 mais cedo. Não esqueça de adicionar NC ao segundo slider (que vai começar no Big White Tick). Assim

Segui sua dica obrigado!

01:48:184 (4,1) - Devido ao AR, estes dois estão um sobre o outro. Fosse num Insane ou mesmo Hard não teria problema, pois o AR alto não deixaria os dois aparecer ao mesmo tempo (talvez um pouquinho só), assim como o CS seria menor. O que não acontece aqui no Easy. Poderia curvar o (4) assim como fez com o 01:49:426 (1) - ou apenas movê-lo para algum lugar de forma a não quebrar o spacing e desfazer o overlap. Ok

02:27:495 (3,1) - Aqui (e em 03:28:736 (3,1) e mais outros lugares), o spacing deixa muito a desejar. O que pode ser um teste um tanto difícil para quem está apenas começando a jogar. Os mais experientes passarão isto com destreza ─ Brainslugs que o diga. Porém, muitos não verão com bons olhos o uso de peppyspacing (vide o mapa de Chatmonchy que o próprio peppy fez, lá dos idos de 2007). Ok

03:33:288 (3) - Tenho certeza que algum BAT vai ranhetar com isso, embora não seja um causo pra tanto. Vou deixar assim até um BAT me obrigar a mudar

[Normal]

00:49:012 (6) - Como mencionei acima (na seção General falei justamente desta parte), isto pode ser uma armadilha para muitos. De fato, a colocação de um redutor de velocidade aqui obriga o DS a mudar conforme a nova velocidade (mais lenta), o que deixa o spacing inconsistente com relação aos objetos vizinhos. A música não me parece sugerir algum efeito do tipo neste ponto. Também os sliders 1/1 não possuem Slider Ticks, o que poderia facilitar um pouco (aos medianos) saber que o SV muda aqui. Seria bom se este slider corresse na mesma velocidade, como o próximo slider faz.
Relembrando que SV changes dentro de padrões não são más. Apenas não são adequadas para Easy, Normal, Beginner etc (as diffs desenhadas para serem mais fáceis). Lembro que esta SV eu coloquei porque meu slider não chegava na posição que eu queria numa versão mais antiga do map, agora consegui fazer sem ele obrigado por me alertar.

♥ 00:59:770 - A mudança de SV aqui (e também em 02:09:288 - e em 02:35:770 - ) está correta, pois reflete realmente o que a música passa pra gente em termos de andamento.

01:10:115 (3,1) - Uma posição meio canhestra (eu diria incomum) para esse (1). O flow é bom, mas peguei 100 aqui. E também o spacing do (3) com o (1) é menor com relação ao spacing de 01:10:942 (1,2,3). O 01:10:942 (1) - ficaria melhor em x:480 y:208 por isso. Arrumei da minha forma

01:23:770 (1) - Niemeyer Slider (lembra um trecho da Av. Niemeyer no Rio de Janeiro). Talvez queira colocar um arco ou uma forma diferente. Ou deixar assim (e ver o que os próximos irão dizer).Sem mudança

[Hard]

00:04:115 (3,4,5) - O flow aqui não me parece muito bom >< mas pode ser apenas uma preferência minha, nada demais. Tentei aplicar uns jumps de leve aqui

[Teara's Insane]

♥ A Perfect Insane Diff!

[Insane]

♥ Um Insane Perfeito!

That's all (:

Espero não ter sido inútil, embora seja assim que eu me sinta.
Uma estrela pela perfeição dos Insanes e do Hard.
E muito obrigado

Att.

Kuron-kun

Kuron-kun 2013-12-30T22:23:49+00:00

Olá, moddando por request via PM

General
• Stack Leniency 5 ou 4 são mais bonitas para stacks
• Marque Widescreen Support
• Que tal deixar o ultimo kiai até 03:52:115 - ?
~~

Easy

00:36:598 (1) - Esse slider, que tal deixar assim? http://puu.sh/63Tuz.png

01:11:357 (3) - What

01:14:667 (4) - Esse slider acho que fica mais bonito assim http://puu.sh/63TFd.png

02:09:288 (1) - Move pra x396 y76

02:13:839 (4) - Deixa assim pra ficar mais bonitinho :3 http://puu.sh/63TMK.png

~~ como modda easy?

Normal

02:00:185 (2) - Que tal deixar o slider assim? http://puu.sh/63V8E.png

~~ como modda normal?

Hard

00:05:563 (8,9) - Essa pattern ficou um pouco estranha, deixa ela assim http://puu.sh/63VwW.png

00:15:288 (5) - Move pra x256 y72

00:16:115 (7) - Move pra x384 y240

00:58:529 (1) - Ficaria mais bonitinho assim?

http://puu.sh/63VSC.png

00:59:770 (4) - Move pra x420 y32

00:59:977 (1) - Pra x488 y92

01:01:839 (3) - Move pra x28 y312

02:08:046 (1) - Que tal mover pra x424 y40 e deixar o slider assim http://puu.sh/63Wau.png

03:23:358 (1,2) - Essa pattern é dificil de ler pois no kiai não tem muita nota assim e parece stream

~~

Teara's Insane

00:39:908 (8) - Move to x279 y49 to stack correctly

02:06:805 (5) - Move to x103 y281

03:30:391 (1) - End the spinner at 03:31:839 -

~~

Insane

De longe a melhor diff, não achei defeito nenhum.

boa sorte rankeando

~~

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2013-12-30T23:08:31+00:00

Thx for modding Kuron-kyun *w*

MOD

Kuron-Kun wrote:
Olá, moddando por request via PM

General
• Stack Leniency 5 ou 4 são mais bonitas para stacks Ok
• Marque Widescreen Support Ok
• Que tal deixar o ultimo kiai até 03:52:115 - ? Prefiro do jeito que está
~~

Easy

00:36:598 (1) - Esse slider, que tal deixar assim? http://puu.sh/63Tuz.png Que bonitinho *w*

01:11:357 (3) - What que slider feio...

01:14:667 (4) - Esse slider acho que fica mais bonito assim http://puu.sh/63TFd.png Ok

02:09:288 (1) - Move pra x396 y76 Ok

02:13:839 (4) - Deixa assim pra ficar mais bonitinho :3 http://puu.sh/63TMK.png Ok

~~ como modda easy?

Normal

02:00:185 (2) - Que tal deixar o slider assim? http://puu.sh/63V8E.png Ok

~~ como modda normal?

Hard

00:05:563 (8,9) - Essa pattern ficou um pouco estranha, deixa ela assim http://puu.sh/63VwW.png Ok

00:15:288 (5) - Move pra x256 y72 Ok

00:16:115 (7) - Move pra x384 y240 Ok

00:58:529 (1) - Ficaria mais bonitinho assim? http://puu.sh/63VSC.png nope

00:59:770 (4) - Move pra x420 y32 Ok

00:59:977 (1) - Pra x488 y92 Ok

01:01:839 (3) - Move pra x28 y312 Ok

02:08:046 (1) - Que tal mover pra x424 y40 e deixar o slider assim http://puu.sh/63Wau.png Sem mudança

03:23:358 (1,2) - Essa pattern é dificil de ler pois no kiai não tem muita nota assim e parece stream Sem mudança

~~

Insane

De longe a melhor diff, não achei defeito nenhum.

boa sorte rankeando

~~

Teara

osu! Alumni

814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2013-12-31T13:38:46+00:00

All done, Thanks!

http://puu.sh/64C0k.zip

BigWilly

214 posts

Joined October 2013

BigWilly 2014-01-03T08:43:58+00:00

[Easy]
Dat Video tho

00:07:219 (1) - Make slider look neater
00:13:426 (1) - ^
00:36:598 (1) - Slider 'bump' is not in the middle
00:42:391 (4) - Slightly Missplaced
00:53:150 (1) - The Direction Change need to be moved forward Slightly
01:11:357 (3) - Slider looks weird
01:49:426 (1) - Does there really need to be a new combo ?

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-01-03T13:09:13+00:00

Thx for modding~
~~EDIT 1: will update later, can't do it now~~
EDIT 2: Updated

MOD

Feverie wrote:
[Easy]
Dat Video tho

00:07:219 (1) - Make slider look neater No change
00:13:426 (1) - ^ No change
00:36:598 (1) - Slider 'bump' is not in the middle Ok
00:42:391 (4) - Slightly Missplaced Whut?
00:53:150 (1) - The Direction Change need to be moved forward Slightly New slider shape
01:11:357 (3) - Slider looks weird Don't make him cry ;w; / changed
01:49:426 (1) - Does there really need to be a new combo ? Missed, Thx!

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-01-04T14:43:36+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

Airtist:ななひら, Rominised:Airtist: Nanahira
(mikitoP should be moved to tags)
if human sing a vocaloid's song, You should add singer for Airtist name
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r=0 ... aloid&m=-1
(in recent ranked map of vocaloid song, Yuikonnu and Himawari are human~)
Tags suggetion:
megpoid
gumi
kagamine rin

[Easy]

AR+1

00:40:736 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about conforming x and y coordinate?

SPOILER

400,300,40736,2,0,L|300:300,2,100
400,200,41977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,200,42391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,100,42805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,100,43219,2,0,P|456:96|512:104,3,100,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:06:391 (1,2) - how about this?
01:23:770 (1) - I prefer to end at 01:24:598
01:55:632 (1) - avoid overlap
02:15:908 (1,2) - same as 01:06:391 (1,2) -
03:29:977 (2,4) - stack correctly
03:38:253 (6) - NC?

[Normal]

for normal, 1/4 rhythm (blue line) like 00:05:150 (3) - is difficult
00:38:460 (4) - it is better to rotate clock-wise more
01:08:874~01:09:288- i suggest to add slider
02:18:391~02:18:805- ^
02:33:287 (2) - how about this?
03:14:667- add a note

[Hard]

AR+1
00:47:977 (4) - stack on 00:46:736 (1) - ?
01:19:633 (2,5) - avoid overlap
01:23:771 (1,1) - ^
01:27:496 (2,4,5) - ^
01:46:116 (1,3) - ^
02:06:598 (4,5) - I prefer to exchange each position
02:17:151 (1,2) - avoid overlap
02:27:082 (4,2) - ^
02:43:633 (3) - curve and blanket
SPOILER
02:44:875 (6,7) - it is better to make parallel (copy+paste and Ctrl+G)
SPOILER
02:51:909 (8,1,2) - ^
03:03:909 (1,4) - avoid overlap
03:13:839 (9,1) - swap NC
03:14:874 (3) - I prefer not to reverse and to end at 03:15:081
03:20:047 (2,3) - avoid overlap
03:27:908 (3) - add NC (because changing DS bery much)

[Insane]

00:17:357 (3,3) - stack correctly
00:20:046 (8) - NC?
00:33:288 (5) - NC
02:05:563 (7) - end at 02:05:770
03:13:839 (4,1) - swap NC
03:27:081 (1,2) - avoid this overlap (it is not good to cover slider's head)
03:30:391 (1) - very difficult. I suggest to end at 03:31:632

[Teara's Insane]

00:20:046 (12) - NC?
02:18:598 (4) - how about stack on the end of 02:17:563 (2) - ?
03:30:391 (1) - end at 03:31:632

it is better to add clap with regularity, imo
~Good Luck~

Teara

osu! Alumni

814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2014-01-04T14:55:33+00:00

Thanks,

http://puu.sh/69eHC.zip

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-01-05T06:44:17+00:00

Thanks for modding, followed everything, unless the only i've commented

MOD

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
Airtist:ななひら, Rominised:Airtist: Nanahira
(mikitoP should be moved to tags)
if human sing a vocaloid's song, You should add singer for Airtist name
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r=0 ... aloid&m=-1
(in recent ranked map of vocaloid song, Yuikonnu and Himawari are human~)
Tags suggetion:
megpoid
gumi
kagamine rin
[Easy]
AR+1
00:40:736 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about conforming x and y coordinate?
SPOILER
400,300,40736,2,0,L|300:300,2,100
400,200,41977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,200,42391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,100,42805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,100,43219,2,0,P|456:96|512:104,3,100,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:06:391 (1,2) - how about this?
01:23:770 (1) - I prefer to end at 01:24:598
01:55:632 (1) - avoid overlap
02:15:908 (1,2) - same as 01:06:391 (1,2) -
03:29:977 (2,4) - stack correctly
03:38:253 (6) - NC?
[Normal]
for normal, 1/4 rhythm (blue line) like 00:05:150 (3) - is difficult I will keep it for
00:38:460 (4) - it is better to rotate clock-wise more
01:08:874~01:09:288- i suggest to add slider
02:18:391~02:18:805- ^
02:33:287 (2) - how about this?
03:14:667- add a note
[Hard]
AR+1
00:47:977 (4) - stack on 00:46:736 (1) - ?
01:19:633 (2,5) - avoid overlap
01:23:771 (1,1) - ^
01:27:496 (2,4,5) - ^
01:46:116 (1,3) - ^
02:06:598 (4,5) - I prefer to exchange each position
02:17:151 (1,2) - avoid overlap
02:27:082 (4,2) - ^
02:43:633 (3) - curve and blanket
SPOILER
02:44:875 (6,7) - it is better to make parallel (copy+paste and Ctrl+G)
SPOILER
02:51:909 (8,1,2) - ^
03:03:909 (1,4) - avoid overlap
03:13:839 (9,1) - swap NC
03:14:874 (3) - I prefer not to reverse and to end at 03:15:081
03:20:047 (2,3) - avoid overlap
03:27:908 (3) - add NC (because changing DS bery much)
[Insane]
00:17:357 (3,3) - stack correctly
00:20:046 (8) - NC?
00:33:288 (5) - NC
02:05:563 (7) - end at 02:05:770
03:13:839 (4,1) - swap NC
03:27:081 (1,2) - avoid this overlap (it is not good to cover slider's head)
03:30:391 (1) - very difficult. I suggest to end at 03:31:632

it is better to add clap with regularity, imo
~Good Luck~

HabiHolic

5,462 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-01-06T06:02:31+00:00

Hi~ from Teara reqs~

look good map~ here is my mod ~ and all suggestion

[Easy]

00:16:736 - break time start here
00:43:219 (6,1) - swap NC
01:01:012 (2) - It is recommended to refine the shape of the slider photo here~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1230654
01:07:632 (2) - add clap please
01:17:150 (2) - Blanket
01:48:184 (4) - ^
02:12:598 (3,4) - same suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1230656
02:24:184 (5) - NC?
02:33:288 (1) - spiner finish 02:34:943 - here?
02:39:081 (5) - NC Here
02:58:943 (1) - spiner finish 03:01:426 - here

[Normal]

00:07:632 (2) - Parallel http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1230665
00:16:736 - Same Easy " break time start here"
00:38:667 - clap?

not finish

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-01-06T17:03:06+00:00

Thanks for modding.

HabiHolic wrote:
Hi~ from Teara reqs~ Thx Teara u3u

MOD

HabiHolic wrote:
[Easy]

look good map~ here is my mod ~ and all suggestion

00:16:736 - break time start here Nah here starts a new combo and i dont want to map this part cos will be hard do follow the rhytm
00:43:219 (6,1) - swap NC Ok
01:01:012 (2) - It is recommended to refine the shape of the slider photo here~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1230654 Ok
01:07:632 (2) - add clap please Ok
01:17:150 (2) - Blanket Ok
01:48:184 (4) - ^ Ok
02:12:598 (3,4) - same suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1230656 Ok
02:24:184 (5) - NC? Ok
02:33:288 (1) - spiner finish 02:34:943 - here? Ok
02:39:081 (5) - NC Here Ok
02:58:943 (1) - spiner finish 03:01:426 - here Ok

[Normal]

00:07:632 (2) - Parallel http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1230665 Ok
00:16:736 - Same Easy " break time start here" Same as easy
00:38:667 - clap? Ok

not finish finish later please

~~EDIT 1: I still with problems at submission some times i just got stuck hours at "creating preview"~~
EDIT 2: Updated

HabiHolic

5,462 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-01-07T15:26:31+00:00

[Hard]

00:11:357 - clap
01:17:564 (4) - Blanket
01:18:806 (3) - delete and 01:19:013 (4) - this move 01:18:805 - here and revers?
01:21:701 (2) - ctrl + g
01:45:288 (8) - hmm. I think it seems like a good interval to equalize
01:46:116 (1) - spaicing
02:32:875 (2) - same suggestion http://puu.sh/6cJzx.jpg
02:37:839 - clap
02:49:427 (2,4) - ctrl + g

[Teara's Insane]

00:45:288 (3) - bad flow.. ctrl + g

good diff teara

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-01-07T16:58:23+00:00

Followed everything and fixed some ugly patterns, damm my hard is so bad

~~w8ing Teara for update.~~

HabiHolic wrote:
[Hard]

00:11:357 - clap
01:17:564 (4) - Blanket
01:18:806 (3) - delete and 01:19:013 (4) - this move 01:18:805 - here and revers?
01:21:701 (2) - ctrl + g
01:45:288 (8) - hmm. I think it seems like a good interval to equalize
01:46:116 (1) - spaicing
02:32:875 (2) - same suggestion http://puu.sh/6cJzx.jpg
02:37:839 - clap
02:49:427 (2,4) - ctrl + g

[Teara's Insane]

00:45:288 (3) - bad flow.. ctrl + g -->

good diff teara

Last edited by - Kevin 2014-01-10T04:56:45+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

deejaydray

166 posts

Joined October 2013

deejaydray 2014-01-09T21:41:05+00:00

Hello, from my modding queue ~ :3

You asked me if I can mod your HARD diff, so here it is:

It's just a suggestion, but I would change the CS from 3 to 4.
00:39:701 (1) - remove this circle
00:39:909 (2) - NC here
00:52:323 (8) - ^ same
02:22:116 (4) - hmm you would want to try to change this into a circle, I think it sounds better
02:38:254 (1) - this slider doesn't need NC
02:39:082 (7) - NC here
03:05:151 (4) - try a circle instead of a slider
03:07:943 (3,4,5,6) - these 4 circles don't sound too nice :c I would delete this 03:07:943 (3) and this 03:08:150 (5)
03:12:391 (5) - NC here
03:14:461 (1) - no need for NC here
03:21:702 (1) - ^ same
03:22:116 (2) - NC here
03:23:358 (1) - move the NC from here to 03:23:771 (3)
03:24:805 (1) - move the NC from here to 03:25:427 (3)
03:27:908 (1) - no NC here
03:48:184 - just a suggestion, but you should try to put a circle here with "finish" hitsound ^^

That's all. Good luck with your map! ^^

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-01-11T13:23:27+00:00

Thx for modding

MOD

deejaydray wrote:
Hello, from my modding queue ~ :3

You asked me if I can mod your HARD diff, so here it is:

It's just a suggestion, but I would change the CS from 3 to 4.
00:39:701 (1) - remove this circle Ok
00:39:909 (2) - NC here Ok
00:52:323 (8) - ^ same Ok
02:22:116 (4) - hmm you would want to try to change this into a circle, I think it sounds better Yes become's cooler
02:38:254 (1) - this slider doesn't need NC Ok
02:39:082 (7) - NC here Ok
03:05:151 (4) - try a circle instead of a slider Ok
03:07:943 (3,4,5,6) - these 4 circles don't sound too nice :c I would delete this 03:07:943 (3) and this 03:08:150 (5) Ok
03:12:391 (5) - NC here Ok
03:14:461 (1) - no need for NC here Ok
03:21:702 (1) - ^ same Ok
03:22:116 (2) - NC here Ok
03:23:358 (1) - move the NC from here to 03:23:771 (3) Ok
03:24:805 (1) - move the NC from here to 03:25:427 (3) Ok
03:27:908 (1) - no NC here I need a new here because DS Change
03:48:184 - just a suggestion, but you should try to put a circle here with "finish" hitsound ^^ Sounds weird, instead i started the spinner here

That's all. Good luck with your map! ^^

Winek

888 posts

Joined September 2013

Winek 2014-01-13T21:27:19+00:00

Hello! From my modding queue. I'll try my best, even tough it's been modded so much.
feel free to ignore all of these suggestion

[General]
Dat video x)

[Easy]
00:37:839 (2,3,4) - Just a suggestion but maybe they should all have the same x axis?
02:33:288 (1) - I think the clap to the spinner doesn't feel it.

[Normal]
Just to follow the vocal, I would recommend a notes here : 00:36:391 same as 00:55:426 - There are other parts like that in the song.
00:53:150 (6) - You should add Nc here and remove NC to 00:53:563 (1)
01:23:770 (1) - Maybe, just maybe make this form prettier.
03:13:012 (1) - ^

[Hard]
For Hard Cs should be like 4
Maybe you're making the combo a bit short. It should be AT LEAST 6. Many of yours have 2-4, fits for easy or normal.
The overall is really great, good job

[Both Insane]
I see nothing on this difficulty, Good job

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-01-13T22:34:58+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
[Insane]
03:27:081 (1,2) - avoid this overlap (it is not good to cover slider's head)

Since i changed this, i've played my map many times and something was wrong this slider should back to his last point, so i moved him to original position again

Winek wrote:
Hello! From my modding queue. I'll try my best, even tough it's been modded so much.
feel free to ignore all of these suggestion

[General]
Dat video x)

[Easy]
00:37:839 (2,3,4) - Just a suggestion but maybe they should all have the same x axis? i think curved is better to follow the flow
02:33:288 (1) - I think the clap to the spinner doesn't feel it. Clap removed

[Normal]
Just to follow the vocal, I would recommend a notes here : 00:36:391 same as 00:55:426 - There are other parts like that in the song. i think is fine following 1/1 mapping here
00:53:150 (6) - You should add Nc here and remove NC to 00:53:563 (1) Ok
01:23:770 (1) - Maybe, just maybe make this form prettier. Any shape suggestion?
03:13:012 (1) - ^

[Hard]
For Hard Cs should be like 4 Everyone said to use CS4 so... well changed to CS4
Maybe you're making the combo a bit short. It should be AT LEAST 6. Many of yours have 2-4, fits for easy or normal.
The overall is really great, good job

[Both Insane]
I see nothing on this difficulty, Good job

Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2014-01-18T05:39:21+00:00

nicely done, some suggestions
[Easy]
00:49:839 (1) - flip it horizontal, because of flow

SPOILER

01:06:391 (1) - ctrl G
03:26:253 (1) - make it blanket to 03:27:908 (2) -

SPOILER

03:26:253 (1) - x 356 y 40, center point x 471 y 114, tail point x 407 y 235
03:27:908 (2) - x 372 y 140
03:28:736 (3) - x 188 y 72

[Hard]
00:04:943 (1,4,1) - better to blanket them
03:33:701 (1) - x 36 y 236

[Insane]
sadistic spacing o.o
mind to reduce spacing of sliders on some gap of 1/4? for streams, it's ok to be like that
examples:
00:03:908 (2,3) -
00:04:736 (4,5) -
00:07:219 (2,3) -

That's all, good luck for ranked
sorry I can't help much

Feith

32 posts

Joined May 2013

Feith 2014-01-18T07:59:27+00:00

hai...hai....
I am from modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/99tq46p24bbi

What is changed :
- Keeping the object is inside the grid because have an impact on standard monitor size
- Change the Red combo color to Blue combo color because the color blended together with the background
- Changing little bit of object timing ....
- Change all the stacking circle after slider, because the circle can't be seen clearly so I move the circle little bit off

That's all from me, sorry for little bit of late ...

Thanks for requesting

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-01-18T14:36:27+00:00

Thx Both for modding.

Setsurei MOD

Setsurei wrote:
nicely done, some suggestions
[Easy]
00:49:839 (1) - flip it horizontal, because of flow OK

SPOILER

01:06:391 (1) - ctrl G OK
03:26:253 (1) - make it blanket to 03:27:908 (2) - OK, Thanks for X and Y points

SPOILER
03:26:253 (1) - x 356 y 40, center point x 471 y 114, tail point x 407 y 235
03:27:908 (2) - x 372 y 140
03:28:736 (3) - x 188 y 72

[Hard]
00:04:943 (1,4,1) - better to blanket them OK
03:33:701 (1) - x 36 y 236 OK

[Insane]
sadistic spacing o.o
mind to reduce spacing of sliders on some gap of 1/4? for streams, it's ok to be like that
examples:
00:03:908 (2,3) -
00:04:736 (4,5) -
00:07:219 (2,3) -

BPM is low, even 4.0 DS would be easy

That's all, good luck for ranked
sorry I can't help much

Feith MOD

I've applied your mod like that

And some others small changes i accepted some and reject others

Feith wrote:
hai...hai....
I am from modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/99tq46p24bbi

What is changed :
- Keeping the object is inside the grid because have an impact on standard monitor size
- Change the Red combo color to Blue combo color because the color blended together with the background
- Changing little bit of object timing ....
- Change all the stacking circle after slider, because the circle can't be seen clearly so I move the circle little bit off

That's all from me, sorry for little bit of late ...

Thanks for requesting

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2014-01-24T00:52:46+00:00

Hello. Sorry for the really late reply.

[General]
I'm not sure but, isn't it 1, 2, Fanclub?

[Easy]
00:10:115 (1) - Do Ctrl+H, and place it where it was for a flow?
01:04:736 (5) - Make a perfect blanket by moving the last point (little square) to x:140 y:248.
01:13:012 (1,2) - Move 01:13:012 (1) to x:0 y:320, and 01:13:426 (2) to x:64 y:244, so it doesn't have confusion.
01:56:460 (2) - Add a new combo?
02:00:598 (3) - Move it one grid upper.
02:05:150 (4) - Make a perfect blanket to 02:04:322 (3,1) by moving the slider to x:200 y:252, the point on the body to x:248 y:272, and the last point to x:304 y:268, and move 02:06:391 (1) to x:264 y:176.
02:39:081 (1,2,3) - I feel that's a repetitive pattern. Try to play with them.
02:52:322 (5) - Add a new combo?

[Normal]
00:06:184 (5) - Remove the clap hitsound on the head, and add it to the tail.
00:07:632 (2) - Remove the clap hitsound on the head, so it'll follow the same hitsound pattern as 00:04:322 (2) .
00:16:115 (5) - Remove the clap on the head, and add it to the tail.
01:07:632 (2) - Replace this slider by copy-paste 01:06:391 (1) , and do Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J, and put it to the way it was (x:136 y:44)
01:08:874 (3) - Stack it with the head of 01:06:391 (1) ? If so, move the last two points that makes a blanket.
01:11:357 (2) - Replace this slider by a simple curve slider?
01:19:632 (1) - Flip it vertically (Ctrl+J), and move it to x:332 y:332 for a flow. Well, sort of.
01:47:977 (4) - Move it to x:80 y:124?
01:56:046 (1) - Remove the repeat of this slider, and move it to 01:56:046 , and add a note to 01:55:632 . This way, it'll follow the beat.
03:05:563 (1) - Ctrl+J, and place it where it was.

[Hard]
00:17:357 (3) - Move it a little more far. It's kind of ugly.
00:19:012 (3) - ^
00:20:046 (7) - Add a new combo.
00:55:426 (1) - Move it a little more far.
01:06:391 (1) - ^
01:12:599 (10) - Move it at x:464 y:256.
01:15:701 (2) - Move it a little more far.
01:19:426 (1) - ^
01:20:667 (5) - ^
01:43:013 (7) - Add a new combo.
01:44:253 (3) - Move it a little more far.
01:47:563 (1) - ^
01:49:219 (1) - ^
01:55:013 (2,1) - ^
02:02:874 (1) - ^
02:07:426 (7) - ^
02:23:563 (4) - ^
02:28:322 (3,1) - ^
02:34:943 (3) - ^
03:34:735 (4) - ^
03:37:839 (3) - ^
03:41:357 (3) - ^

Good Luck on ranking this map.

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-01-24T13:05:49+00:00

Thx for modding... Followed everything except the one i commented

sheela901 MOD

sheela901 wrote:
Hello. Sorry for the really late reply.

[General]
I'm not sure but, isn't it 1, 2, Fanclub? https://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?q=Fan%20Club I think not

[Easy]
00:10:115 (1) - Do Ctrl+H, and place it where it was for a flow?
01:04:736 (5) - Make a perfect blanket by moving the last point (little square) to x:140 y:248.
01:13:012 (1,2) - Move 01:13:012 (1) to x:0 y:320, and 01:13:426 (2) to x:64 y:244, so it doesn't have confusion.
01:56:460 (2) - Add a new combo?
02:00:598 (3) - Move it one grid upper.
02:05:150 (4) - Make a perfect blanket to 02:04:322 (3,1) by moving the slider to x:200 y:252, the point on the body to x:248 y:272, and the last point to x:304 y:268, and move 02:06:391 (1) to x:264 y:176.
02:39:081 (1,2,3) - I feel that's a repetitive pattern. Try to play with them.
02:52:322 (5) - Add a new combo?

[Normal]
00:06:184 (5) - Remove the clap hitsound on the head, and add it to the tail.
00:07:632 (2) - Remove the clap hitsound on the head, so it'll follow the same hitsound pattern as 00:04:322 (2) .
00:16:115 (5) - Remove the clap on the head, and add it to the tail.
01:07:632 (2) - Replace this slider by copy-paste 01:06:391 (1) , and do Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J, and put it to the way it was (x:136 y:44)
01:08:874 (3) - Stack it with the head of 01:06:391 (1) ? If so, move the last two points that makes a blanket.
01:11:357 (2) - Replace this slider by a simple curve slider?
01:19:632 (1) - Flip it vertically (Ctrl+J), and move it to x:332 y:332 for a flow. Well, sort of.
01:47:977 (4) - Move it to x:80 y:124?
01:56:046 (1) - Remove the repeat of this slider, and move it to 01:56:046 , and add a note to 01:55:632 . This way, it'll follow the beat.
03:05:563 (1) - Ctrl+J, and place it where it was.

[Hard]
00:17:357 (3) - Move it a little more far. It's kind of ugly. Double notes are hard i want them near
00:19:012 (3) - ^ ^
00:20:046 (7) - Add a new combo.
00:55:426 (1) - Move it a little more far.
01:06:391 (1) - ^
01:12:599 (10) - Move it at x:464 y:256.
01:15:701 (2) - Move it a little more far.
01:19:426 (1) - ^
01:20:667 (5) - ^
01:43:013 (7) - Add a new combo.
01:44:253 (3) - Move it a little more far.
01:47:563 (1) - ^
01:49:219 (1) - ^
01:55:013 (2,1) - ^
02:02:874 (1) - ^
02:07:426 (7) - ^
02:23:563 (4) - ^
02:28:322 (3,1) - ^
02:34:943 (3) - ^
03:34:735 (4) - ^
03:37:839 (3) - ^
03:41:357 (3) - ^

Good Luck on ranking this map.

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-01-24T16:29:56+00:00

Sorry for late,kinda lazy these days

General
no whistle in easy normal and a little number of whistle in hard and insane bothered me, you can add whistle on 24 white line at the beginning of the song, for example 00:04:736,00:05:563,00:06:391. I think you can hear sth regular
you can also add whistle on 3rd white line in kiai or other parts like 01:42:805-01:54:391 which have 24 clap. 01:13:839,01:15:495... and so on
some whistle in backgroud and vocal, you can add whistle, 01:07:219,01:08:874.......
i think drum hitsoud also works in this song,you can use Additions to add them

SPOILER

Easy
00:38:253 (3) - move it up a bit,for example x152,y24
01:56:460 (1) - remove NC
02:06:391 (1) - spacing

Normal
00:05:977 this is fucking tricky, add sth here or change 00:05:770 (4) - to a slider, or any other way to cover this drum
00:09:288 ^
00:12:598 ^
00:15:908 ^
00:39:908 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - rhythm is too concentrated, remove some notes and use sliders may be a good choice
01:50:253 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:58:529 (5) - remove finish
01:59:357 (1) - finish on head
02:19:633 (3) -try to avoid this even repeater in normal
02:24:184 (4) - remove finish it is unecessary
03:08:460 add note and add finish
03:22:943 (3) - finish on tail
03:29:977 (2) - finish
03:31:632 (4) - finish on tail,not head,listen to music carefully and check missed or mistake snapped finishes, won't check other diffs
03:35:150 (1) - remove finish
03:48:598 (1) - clap is better than finish

Hard
nothing serious
general spacing is a bit too bit imo, which make it a bit more hard

Teara's Insane
it seems to be a very old one you made?
stream spacing is a bit too big imo
00:10:115 (1) - finish
00:16:012 here is a drum,so add a note and make a quint here
00:09:701 (2) - add a repeat, and move 00:10:115 (1) - to it

SPOILER

00:45:701 (4) - 1/4 rhythm ihas similar spacing with 1/2 here,see 00:44:977 (2,3) - ,which is confusing
02:27:909 (2) - ^ same here
01:01:426 (2) - finish on head
00:59:770 (5) - finish
01:04:529 (4) - finish on tail
03:00:598 (1) - remove a repeat and add a note at 03:00:908,stack on 03:01:012 (2) -
03:48:184-03:48:495 add a slider here?

Insane
some NC is unecessary
i notice some patterns you add whistle but some similar patterns not,fix it,it will make your hitsound system looks random,hitsound should be regularly added
00:06:184 (8) - change it to 2 notes is better imo
add whistle pattern here
00:16:736 (1) - head,00:17:150 (2) - ,00:17:460 (4) - ,00:17:770 (6) - ,00:17:977 (7) -
01:54:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ similar here
03:13:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:18:391 rhythm here is wrong, you can't miss this sound since it is very loud
01:28:012 (2,4) - add whistle,01:28:631 (2,4) - add whistle
02:06:391 (1,3) - whistle
03:13:115 add a note and make a quint here,than 03:12:598 (3,1) - add whistle
03:40:322 (1,2) - whistle on head?
03:46:943 (1,5) - add whistle,03:47:563 (1,5) - add whistle

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-01-25T01:07:10+00:00

Thx for modding, I wish I could have helped you more on your map

Tsukuyomi painful MOD

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Sorry for late,kinda lazy these days

General

It took me two hours to understand WHAT you mean here...
Okay, I tried to review the hit sounds primarily in Easy and Normal
I tried to put some points whistle, found some

no whistle in easy normal and a little number of whistle in hard and insane bothered me, you can add whistle on 24 white line at the beginning of the song, for example 00:04:736,00:05:563,00:06:391. I think you can hear sth regular
you can also add whistle on 3rd white line in kiai or other parts like 01:42:805-01:54:391 which have 24 clap. 01:13:839,01:15:495... and so on
some whistle in backgroud and vocal, you can add whistle, 01:07:219,01:08:874.......
i think drum hitsoud also works in this song,you can use Additions to add them
SPOILER

Easy
00:38:253 (3) - move it up a bit,for example x152,y24 OK
01:56:460 (1) - remove NC OK
02:06:391 (1) - spacing Fixed

Normal
00:05:977 this is fucking tricky, add sth here or change 00:05:770 (4) - to a slider, or any other way to cover this drum OK
00:09:288 ^ OK
00:12:598 ^ OK
00:15:908 ^ This one is fine empty
00:39:908 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - rhythm is too concentrated, remove some notes and use sliders may be a good choice OK, i have deleted some notes now have like 4/5 beats each
01:50:253 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
01:58:529 (5) - remove finish OK
01:59:357 (1) - finish on head OK
02:19:633 (3) -try to avoid this even repeater in normal OK
02:24:184 (4) - remove finish it is unecessary OK
03:08:460 add note and add finish This is not good!
03:22:943 (3) - finish on tail OK
03:29:977 (2) - finish OK
03:31:632 (4) - finish on tail,not head,listen to music carefully and check missed or mistake snapped finishes, won't check other diffs hai (∩´﹏`∩)
03:35:150 (1) - remove finish OK
03:48:598 (1) - clap is better than finish Muted

Insane
some NC is unecessary
i notice some patterns you add whistle but some similar patterns not,fix it,it will make your hitsound system looks random,hitsound should be regularly added
00:06:184 (8) - change it to 2 notes is better imo imo a straight-line motion is better for this double tap
add whistle pattern here
00:16:736 (1) - head,00:17:150 (2) - ,00:17:460 (4) - ,00:17:770 (6) - ,00:17:977 (7) - OK
01:54:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ similar here OK
03:13:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ OK
00:18:391 rhythm here is wrong, you can't miss this sound since it is very loud OK
01:28:012 (2,4) - add whistle,01:28:631 (2,4) - add whistle OK
02:06:391 (1,3) - whistle OK
03:13:115 add a note and make a quint here,than 03:12:598 (3,1) - add whistle OK
03:40:322 (1,2) - whistle on head? OK
03:46:943 (1,5) - add whistle,03:47:563 (1,5) - add whistle OK

NoHitter

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Joined June 2009

NoHitter 2014-01-25T10:43:14+00:00

[Insane]
OK so I lost my mod post and can't be bothered to rewrite it from when it died \o/ so I'm skipping Insane. The last part of Insane ~2:30 onwards were really good though so no changes.
Well here are the screenshots from when I modded Insane, so you might want to check them. They belong to parts of the map I believe could have been changed into more aesthetically good patterns/ better flow.
http://puu.sh/6xmgV http://puu.sh/6xmvC http://puu.sh/6xmy2 http://puu.sh/6xmEY http://puu.sh/6xmHV http://puu.sh/6xmP4 http://puu.sh/6xn4f
Also I did remember these ones:
- 00:59:770 (6) - Make this into a note instead of a slider end. The downbeat here is distinct and an actually hitting it (clicking) is better.
- 01:12:598 (3) - This part over here is better as a stream than a long slider since it fits the music more.
- 02:07:426 (3) - New combo here for start of a new pattern.
- 02:08:874 (6) - Same with 00:59:770. Make it into a note.

[Teara's Insane]
- 00:12:391 (9,10,11) - A completely straight pattern is boring IMO. Angle it a bit maybe. Like http://puu.sh/6xnIo.jpg ?
- 00:13:632 (2) - I would place this on the outside than the inside for better flow and to contrast the previous pattern. http://puu.sh/6xnJw.jpg
- 00:16:115 (10,11,12,13,1) - Stacking them all on one area feels kind of boring.
- 00:17:357 (3,4) - Try rotating them a bit. Looks more aesthetically good

http://puu.sh/6xnMa.jpg
- 00:18:184 (6,7) - Same as above. Although you should mirror it with (3,4) if you do rotate them.
- 00:58:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern doesn't quite do accelerated spacing justice. The slider should be flowing along with the notes if you want to use accelerated spacing i.e. http://puu.sh/6xnTu.jpg
- 01:08:667 (7) - I would place this on the outside for better flow. http://puu.sh/6xnVs.jpg
- 01:16:736 (2,3) - For these sliders to flow properly you need to place them such that the ends of each slider move in the start of the next. Somethiong like http://puu.sh/6xo0f.jpg
- 01:18:805 (3,4,5) - Not centered properly
- 01:50:253 (3) - Same comment as sliders and flow earlier.http://puu.sh/6xo4v.jpg
- 01:54:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Pattern looks kind of messy. may I suggest: http://puu.sh/6xo7I.jpg. You can place (6) over (2) as well if you want.
- 02:08:667 (2,3,4) - Why the decrease in spacing between (2,3,4) when compared to (1,2)?
- 02:28:323 (3,4,5) - Not centered.
- I disliked the super closed overlapping spacing towards the end

[Hard]
- 00:17:357 (3,4,5) - Please don't use inconsistent spacing like this. It looks ugly IMO

- 00:19:012 (3,4,5) - Same as above.
- 00:42:805 (6) - Slider doesn't flow well.
- 01:44:253 (3,4) - Why the sudden drop in spacing?
- 01:47:563 (1,2) - Same as above.
- 01:54:391 (1,2) - Same as above.
- 01:56:046 (1,2) - Same as above.
- 02:02:874 (1,2) - ^ Refrain from using spacing like this... Comparing it to 02:01:840 (1,2) which is 1/4 spaced...
- 02:07:426 (7,8) - Same as above.
- 02:23:563 (4,5) - Same as above. Even 02:22:530 (1,2) - has wider spacing that this.
- 02:28:322 (3,4) - ^
- 02:28:943 (1,2) - ^
- 02:34:943 (3,4) - ^
- 03:08:046 (3,4,5) - Spacing like this is fine since there are three and it's more readable, but not the ones earlier.
- 03:37:839 (3,4) - Why the sudden drop in spacing?
- 03:41:356 (3,4) - Same as above.

[Normal]
- Fair enough I guess. There are some slider and patterns I want to see changed but it's a bit too nazi if I do xD

[Easy]
- 01:55:632 (1) - I'm concerned about the readability of this. It's too close to the previous combo.

Teara

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Joined June 2009

Teara 2014-01-25T13:11:51+00:00

Thanks NoHitter,

Did all of them with some changes to pattern and placements.

Teara's Insane

osu file format v12

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Title:1, 2 Fan Club
TitleUnicode:いーあるふぁんくらぶ
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Creator:- Kevin
Version:Teara's Insane
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Tags:MikitoP Loli vocal Teara りゅうせー Nico Nico Douga megpoid gumi kagamine rin
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- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-01-25T14:28:22+00:00

Thx for modding, I followed all but below

[Insane]
01:12:598 (3) - This part over here is better as a stream than a long slider since it fits the music more. Why? there is no such noisy here
http://puu.sh/6xmHV => Preffer the wave moviment http://puu.sh/6xxCz.jpg

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,573 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-01-30T06:10:03+00:00

From my queue~

Please fix this first~

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-01-30T12:16:46+00:00

Fixed~

dunno how it happened

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,573 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-02-03T09:31:13+00:00

From my queue

Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——Unrankable, you must fix it.

[General]

Nice

[Easy]

00:46:115 (4,1) - nazi blanket
01:16:322 (1,2) - ^
01:02:253 (1,2) - whistle and remove finish on 2
02:11:770 (1,2) - whistle
02:21:701 (5) - since you use finish on 01:12:184 (4) - ,so you'd better also use finishe here
02:22:529 (1,2,3) - the ds is a little weird
02:46:529 (3) - make a little curve like 02:44:874 (1) -

[Normal]

00:06:184 (6) - finish?
00:15:908 - add a note
00:39:908 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/6IkKt.jpg sounds better
00:44:874 (1) - whi on the head?
00:46:943 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/6IkNf.jpg
02:03:905 (4) - Unsnapped slider
02:10:116 (2,1) - ds 2.14

ok why not made in cs3? cs4 normal now is a little difficult to rank and may receive some 1 point after ranked(QAQ MY MAP)

[Hard]

od+1
00:06:184 (5) - finish?
00:08:874 (1,2,3) - make it in the same ds?
01:11:358 (7) - change to 1/2 slider is better imo, the hitsound of the end is weird
01:13:839 (1,2,1) - well can you aviod the overlap?
01:27:909 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - yeah hard diff
01:49:219 (1,2) - easy to read it in 1/4, make it in common ds is better imo
02:20:875 (1) - same as 01:11:358 (7) -
03:08:046 (3,4,5) - nc for anti-jump
03:09:701 (3,4,5) - ^
03:14:874 (5) - add whistle to emphasize the vocal?
03:23:358 (4,5,1) - nc for anti-jump

I feel worry about the quality of the hard.

[Teara's Insane]

od-1?
00:11:150 (5,8) - I recommend to change a pattern to0 avoid the overlap of 00:10:322 (2,5) -
00:43:219 (1,2,3,4,5) - change some angle looks better imo http://puu.sh/6IlDC.jpg
03:48:598 (1) - like other diffs end at 03:52:115 - ?
sorry I'm not good at mod a map with symmetry style.

[Insane]

00:53:460 (2,3) - the distance is a little hard to read, I recommend to begin 00:53:460 (2) - at 00:53:563 -
01:17:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flow is better imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1305364
03:37:839 (3,4,5) - ^
a little copy and paste ...... but I think the insane is quite nice

sorry too many reqs so this is a brief mod
good luck~

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-02-03T13:59:05+00:00

Thx for modding

Minakami Yuki MOD

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
[Easy]
00:46:115 (4,1) - nazi blanket Ok
01:16:322 (1,2) - ^ Ok
01:02:253 (1,2) - whistle and remove finish on 2 Ok
02:11:770 (1,2) - whistle Ok
02:21:701 (5) - since you use finish on 01:12:184 (4) - ,so you'd better also use finishe here Ok
02:22:529 (1,2,3) - the ds is a little weird Fixed
02:46:529 (3) - make a little curve like 02:44:874 (1) - Ok

[Normal]
00:06:184 (6) - finish? Ok
00:15:908 - add a note Ok
00:39:908 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/6IkKt.jpg sounds better Ok
00:44:874 (1) - whi on the head? Ok
00:46:943 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/6IkNf.jpg Dont fit, maybe I have not understood
02:03:905 (4) - Unsnapped slider Fixed
02:10:116 (2,1) - ds 2.14 Fixed

ok why not made in cs3? cs4 normal now is a little difficult to rank and may receive some 1 point after ranked(QAQ MY MAP) It's CS3, what you mean?

[Hard]
od+1
00:06:184 (5) - finish? Ok
00:08:874 (1,2,3) - make it in the same ds? Ok
01:11:358 (7) - change to 1/2 slider is better imo, the hitsound of the end is weird Ok
01:13:839 (1,2,1) - well can you aviod the overlap? Ok
01:27:909 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - yeah hard diff Whats the problem with this small e slow stream?
01:49:219 (1,2) - easy to read it in 1/4, make it in common ds is better imo Stacked
02:20:875 (1) - same as 01:11:358 (7) - Ok
03:08:046 (3,4,5) - nc for anti-jump Ok
03:09:701 (3,4,5) - ^ Ok
03:14:874 (5) - add whistle to emphasize the vocal? Ok
03:23:358 (4,5,1) - nc for anti-jump Ok

I feel worry about the quality of the hard.

[Insane]
00:53:460 (2,3) - the distance is a little hard to read, I recommend to begin 00:53:460 (2) - at 00:53:563 - no Change
01:17:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flow is better imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1305364 Ok
03:37:839 (3,4,5) - ^ Fixed with different position
a little copy and paste ...... but I think the insane is quite nice

sorry too many reqs so this is a brief mod
good luck~

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,573 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-02-03T15:24:15+00:00

- Kevin wrote:
ok why not made in cs3? cs4 normal now is a little difficult to rank and may receive some 1 point after ranked(QAQ MY MAP) It's CS3, what you mean? oh sorry I haven't noticed that because I think easy is cs3(in fact cs2) and normal is smaller, so I think normal is cs4 ;______________;

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2014-02-11T00:15:35+00:00

Hi! M4M from my queue.

EASY

00:07:219 (1,2) - fix spacing
00:43:219 (1) - actually it's not really a good idea to use 4 reverse in an easy diff. I would suggest to divide in 2 sliders. maybe a solution can be this placement:

SPOILER

00:56:460 (1,2) - make a better blancket?
00:56:460 (1,2,4,5) - ^
01:46:115 (1,2) - make this a blancket
02:17:563 (3) - make this with the exactly same shape of 02:15:908 (1) -
02:19:219 (1,2) - better blancket
02:23:770 (4) - if you place this at x:344 y:96 you can make a sort of square with these 3 notes. and of caurse if you change here, remember to fix the spacing next, I think it won't be too problematic :3
02:31:632 (6,7) - blancket here
02:36:598 (2) - this sould be one grid down to be at the same high of 02:35:770 (1) -
02:35:770 (1,2,3,4) - also, why don't you move all them to make these symmetric with the y axe?
02:51:495 (4,1) - blancket
02:35:770 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - blancket a bit better
03:48:184 (6) - too strange form for a short slider.

NORMAL

00:15:701 (4,5,6) - hm... don't know, this placement is not the best imo. maybe try this? or something similar.

SPOILER

00:42:805 (5) - I think you can try moving this to x:8 y:176 to be more consistent with the previous pattern.
01:05:563 - I think you can add a note here and also here 01:05:977 -
01:47:977 (4) - not a really good placement. if you want to keep this pattern, maybe is better something like this:

SPOILER

02:12:599 (3) - NC?
02:15:081 - if you did before add a note here too, and also one at 02:15:495 -

HARD

00:16:115 (7,8) - maybe here the rhythm should be this way?

SPOILER

00:42:391 (5) - you're always following the vocals, this should end at 00:42:598 -
00:44:046 (5) - same
01:22:530 (4) - here instead I think making this slider finish at 01:22:839 - sounds better and follow the vocal ina good way
01:25:840 (5) - you can try the same thing also here
01:55:632 (5) - move this in a way to form a square with the other notes 01:55:013 (2,3,4) -
02:01:840 (1) - I think to follow the vocal better make this end at 02:02:046 - and add a note at 02:02:150 -
02:20:875 (1) - also here you can make this finish at 02:21:184 - if you want
02:50:668 (5) - here the flow is not the best, try something like this maybe:

SPOILER

03:26:874 (6) - stack with 03:25:427 (1) - ?

ok, that's all. good luck

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-02-11T13:26:11+00:00

Thanks luxoDeh Fixed all you said

Pappy

1,020 posts

Joined August 2013

Pappy 2014-02-15T18:54:57+00:00

From queue, sorry for late ;_;

In queue i didn't wrote how many diffs i modding, but i mod max 4 diffs so i don't mod quest insane, sorry, i'm lazy x.x

[General]
Creepy video ;_; XD

[Easy]
02:39:908 (2) - Replace this to flipped (1)
02:49:012 (1,2) - Blank this two?
03:38:253 (1) - This can confuse newbies

[Normal]
00:10:115 (1,2) - Blank these
01:02:667 (2) - Move this somewhere else
02:15:908 (1,2) - It is ugly :C
02:22:529 (1,2,3) - Confusing newbies is not funny :c XD
03:41:978 (1,2) - These don't look good :c
I think DS is too high
OD+ AR-

[Hard]
01:02:254 (1,2,1) - Too near
01:14:667 (1) - Curve it?
01:27:909 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Guy, it hard, remove streams, my suppose is kicksliders XD
02:11:771 (1,2,1) - The same three supposes up
03:46:942 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^^
AR-

[Insane]
AR-
02:08:046 (4) - Little ugly : /
03:29:563 (1) - ^
Can't see more : /

If you have time plz mod my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/127777

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-02-17T18:18:21+00:00

Thx~ Updated

Fixed some at Easy and Normal
Replaced streams at Hard due too many request

tutuhaha

3,053 posts

Joined October 2010

tutuhaha 2014-02-19T05:18:06+00:00

Insane
00:10:943 (3,4) - too close？..
00:17:977 (x) - use this rhythm
【just look at rhythm】
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347969
00:40:219 (2) - use note will be better to use slider I think
00:41:150 (6,7,1) - ...look weird..
00:42:184 (4,5) - try to use the distance look like 00:41:046 (5,6) - this two
00:42:391 (5,6) - ...I think this is weird when you play it
00:44:046 (5,6) - too close, try to make a jump
01:12:184 (1,2,3) - I love this part <3
01:15:081 (3) - ctrl+g
01:19:322 (6) - ^
01:20:046 (2) - ..try ctrl+g...I am not sure it will work but..just try?..
01:25:322 (x) - add note
01:50:253 (4,5,6,1) - I love this part too <3
02:22:115 (3) - try to end at 02:22:426
02:30:391 (5) - end at red line
03:20:667 (1) - move to x44 y32

[Teara's Insane]
00:11:770 (7,8) - unrank
00:37:736 (6) - try this rhythm
【just look at rhythm】
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347987
00:45:701 (4) - ctrl+g
00:50:357 (3) - delete
00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - ...when you play you may think this part looks weird
00:56:563 (2) - delete
01:25:839 (5,6,1) - try to use the same distance
01:54:495 (2) - move to 01:54:701 (x) -
01:59:357 (3,6) - unrank
03:16:529 (5,6) - no sure it is unrank or not, but it is weird..
03:33:288 (5) - nc

[Hard]
00:55:426 (1,2) - WHAT D:？
01:06:391 (1,2) - use normal distance or overlap
01:13:013 (1,2) - 01:15:909 (3,1) - use same distance
01:19:633 (2,3) - ^
01:22:530 (4,1) - ^
01:25:840 (5,1) - ^
..just some distance problem...so try too look at all diff

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

- Kevin 2014-02-19T15:12:03+00:00

Thx for modding tutuhaha

tutuhaha MOD

tutuhaha wrote:
[Insane]
00:10:943 (3,4) - too close？.. Ctrl + G
00:17:977 (x) - use this rhythm Ok
【just look at rhythm】
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347969
00:40:219 (2) - use note will be better to use slider I think Dont seems cool
00:41:150 (6,7,1) - ...look weird.. It's fine
00:42:184 (4,5) - try to use the distance look like 00:41:046 (5,6) - this two Ok
00:42:391 (5,6) - ...I think this is weird when you play it It's easy to catch
00:44:046 (5,6) - too close, try to make a jump I think it's fine
01:12:184 (1,2,3) - I love this part <3
01:15:081 (3) - ctrl+g Break the flow
01:19:322 (6) - ^ Ok
01:20:046 (2) - ..try ctrl+g...I am not sure it will work but..just try?.. Ok
01:25:322 (x) - add note Ok
01:50:253 (4,5,6,1) - I love this part too <3
02:22:115 (3) - try to end at 02:22:426 Ok
02:30:391 (5) - end at red line Ok
03:20:667 (1) - move to x44 y32 Ok

[Hard]

Fixed all

00:55:426 (1,2) - WHAT D:？ What? Fixed
01:06:391 (1,2) - use normal distance or overlap
01:13:013 (1,2) - 01:15:909 (3,1) - use same distance
01:19:633 (2,3) - ^
01:22:530 (4,1) - ^
01:25:840 (5,1) - ^
..just some distance problem...so try too look at all diff

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-02-25T22:34:05+00:00

Hello, mod from queue

3 ~ 4 minutes = 3 diffs

[Normal]
00:57:702 (5,6) - Replace with 1 slider, there's no need for a hit object on the 00:57:908. From 00:57:701 - 00:58:115 it follows the long hold on the 'gen' in gokigen
01:23:770 (1) - Should've ended at 01:24:598, so it hits the ne.
01:42:805 (2) - Add finish on the head.
02:35:770 (1) - ^
03:11:357 (5) - You could've made this a curved slider, so it can blanket 03:12:184 (6) -
03:13:012 (1) - Should've ended at 03:13:839, so it hits the ne.
03:38:667 (1) - Add finish on the head.
03:45:288 (1) - Add finish

[Hard]
00:04:322 (4,2) - Try to blanket these notes better, so they will form a more smoother and neater flow.

00:04:943 (1,4) - ^ Same suggestion as above.
00:11:150 (3) - Needs to blanket 00:11:150 (2) - better.
01:11:358 (7) - NC
01:13:013 (1,2) - Really bad blanket here.
01:20:875 (6,2) - Either stack or move apart, the overlap they have with their tails really ruins the neatness of the flow.
01:25:632 (4,5) - Could you try to have them form a blanket?
01:39:908 (3,5) - move a bit more apart, so they don't look to attached to each other.
02:26:254 (2,4) - ^
03:08:046 (1,2,3) - Don't use that small DS stacking effect on these notes. It doesn't work that way, especially after seeing how you've used it for 02:11:771 (1,2,1) - . Just fully stack in on top of the sliders head.
03:09:701 (1,2,3) - ^
03:11:358 (3,4) - Needs better blanket.
03:23:358 (4,5,1) - Fully stack properly.

A few bad blankets here and there. Diff still needs some polishing, but an okay job overall.

[Teara's Insane]
OD - 1?
00:07:426 (3) - A little too far from 00:07:219 (2) - . And try to make 00:06:805 (1,3) - blanket 00:07:219 (2) - better.
00:08:046 (5,7) - Blanket 00:07:839 (4,6) - better.
00:14:874 (6,8) - blanket 00:15:288 (7) - better.
00:18:184 (6) - NC
00:18:805 (3,4,6,1) - Move objects more apart, so they look less crowded on that spot.
00:41:563 (4,7) - Move more apart. Why not make a square formation with 00:41:563 (4,5,6,7) - ?
00:53:150 (7) - NC instead of 00:53:770 (1) -
01:16:736 (2,3,4) - If you're going to create this type of effect, at least make all the 3 sliders have the same shape (but each rotated at 120°).
01:22:943 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:47:770 (6) - NC
02:17:563 (2,3) - Try to blanket these notes?

02:44:046 (3) - Can blanket 02:43:632 (2) - better.
02:47:357 (5,6) - ^
03:08:460 (9) - Add finish on the head.
03:11:770 (4) - Add finish on the tail.
03:27:081 (6,7) - Okay, clearly you should've made a blanket here
03:46:115 (3) - can blanket 03:44:874 (3) - 's head, so that it creates a more neater flow.

A lot of blankets here needs fixing.

Good luck.

Teara

osu! Alumni

814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2014-02-26T14:35:27+00:00

Not everything needs to have a perfect blanket..

Thanks for the mods.

SPOILER

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Creator:- Kevin
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360,216,200874,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,240,201081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,201288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,201391,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,208,201494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,80,201701,2,0,P|256:64|176:96,1,107.999990982056,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,312,202115,6,0,P|256:328|336:296,1,107.999990982056,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,136,202529,2,0,P|112:192|136:272,1,107.999990982056,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,240,202943,2,0,P|399:192|383:136,1,107.999990982056,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,203357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,136,203563,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,280,203770,6,0,P|140:280|192:236,1,107.999996704102
440,280,204184,2,0,P|372:280|320:236,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,204598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,204805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,204908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,205012,2,0,L|256:32,1,161.999986473084,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,205426,1,4,0:0:0:0:
56,272,205839,6,0,P|36:228|52:172,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,264,206253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,120,206460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,288,206667,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,96,206874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,207081,2,0,P|500:192|480:280,1,161.999986473084
432,192,207494,2,0,L|304:192,1,107.999990982056,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,304,207908,5,8,0:0:0:0:
392,304,208322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,232,208736,2,0,B|168:184|168:296|232:232,1,107.999990982056,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,208,209150,2,0,B|280:256|280:144|216:208,1,107.999990982056,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,88,209563,2,0,B|200:40|200:152|264:88,1,107.999990982056,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,64,209977,2,0,B|312:112|312:0|248:64,1,107.999990982056,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,210391,12,0,211632,0:0:0:0:
168,256,212046,6,0,B|160:232|160:232|184:216|184:216|168:192|168:176,1,89.9999952316285
344,128,212460,2,0,B|352:152|352:152|328:168|328:168|344:192|344:208,1,89.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,212874,2,0,L|256:232,1,44.9999976158143,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,213081,2,0,L|256:120,1,44.9999976158143
296,88,213288,6,0,P|256:64|216:96,2,89.9999952316285
360,200,213908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,300,214115,2,0,P|256:320|216:296,1,89.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,200,214529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,112,214736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,80,214839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,214943,2,0,P|392:64|424:104,1,89.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,200,215357,6,0,P|328:248|288:272,1,89.9999952316285,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,296,215770,2,0,P|128:264|88:184,1,134.999992847443,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,176,216184,2,0,P|69:123|136:136,1,134.999992847443
200,84,216598,2,0,B|248:152|180:212,1,134.999992847443,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,296,217012,6,0,P|226:278|256:224,1,90
368,112,217426,2,0,P|318:130|288:184,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,260,217839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,260,217943,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,260,218046,2,0,P|380:252|420:212,2,89.9999952316285,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,218667,6,0,B|152:192|91:133,1,134.999992847443,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,219081,2,0,P|40:88|24:140,1,134.999992847443
32,232,219495,2,0,P|93:199|96:132,1,134.999992847443,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,219908,2,0,P|148:40|204:32,1,89.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,64,220322,6,0,P|364:40|308:32,1,89.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,220736,2,0,B|256:272,1,89.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,248,221150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,248,221357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,248,221563,2,0,P|147:294|167:349,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,333,221977,6,0,P|365:294|352:248,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,222391,2,0,L|256:256,1,89.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,152,222805,2,0,P|352:92|376:60,1,89.9999952316285
176,152,223219,2,0,P|160:92|136:60,1,89.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,232,223632,2,0,P|144:256|98:255,1,89.9999952316285
320,232,224046,2,8,P|368:256|414:255,1,89.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,136,224460,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,136,224667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,224874,2,0,L|256:344,1,89.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,205,225288,6,0,P|392:172|352:136,1,89.9999952316285,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,136,225701,2,0,P|120:172|120:220,1,89.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,312,226115,2,0,P|256:320|184:304,1,134.999992847443,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,226529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,200,226736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,136,226943,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,136,227046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,136,227150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,136,227253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,136,227357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,227563,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,227667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,227770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,227874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,227977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,228598,12,4,232115,0:0:0:0:

- Kevin

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- Kevin 2014-02-26T15:39:10+00:00

Fixed the ones i commented in

10crystalmask01 MOD

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hello, mod from queue
3 ~ 4 minutes = 3 diffs

[Normal]
00:57:702 (5,6) - Replace with 1 slider, there's no need for a hit object on the 00:57:908. From 00:57:701 - 00:58:115 it follows the long hold on the 'gen' in gokigen Ok
01:23:770 (1) - Should've ended at 01:24:598, so it hits the ne.
01:42:805 (2) - Add finish on the head. Ok
02:35:770 (1) - ^ Ok
03:11:357 (5) - You could've made this a curved slider, so it can blanket 03:12:184 (6) -
03:13:012 (1) - Should've ended at 03:13:839, so it hits the ne.
03:38:667 (1) - Add finish on the head. Ok
03:45:288 (1) - Add finish Ok

[Hard]
00:04:322 (4,2) - Try to blanket these notes better, so they will form a more smoother and neater flow. Ok

00:04:943 (1,4) - ^ Same suggestion as above.
00:11:150 (3) - Needs to blanket 00:11:150 (2) - better. Ok
01:11:358 (7) - NC Ok
01:13:013 (1,2) - Really bad blanket here. Fixed
01:20:875 (6,2) - Either stack or move apart, the overlap they have with their tails really ruins the neatness of the flow.
01:25:632 (4,5) - Could you try to have them form a blanket?
01:39:908 (3,5) - move a bit more apart, so they don't look to attached to each other.
02:26:254 (2,4) - ^
03:08:046 (1,2,3) - Don't use that small DS stacking effect on these notes. It doesn't work that way, especially after seeing how you've used it for 02:11:771 (1,2,1) - . Just fully stack in on top of the sliders head.
03:09:701 (1,2,3) - ^
03:11:358 (3,4) - Needs better blanket. Ok
03:23:358 (4,5,1) - Fully stack properly. Ok
A few bad blankets here and there. Diff still needs some polishing, but an okay job overall.
Good luck.

Sayuri-Hime

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Sayuri-Hime 2014-03-12T20:41:04+00:00

hello ^^

mod from queue :3

easy

SPOILER

this map is perfect for the difficult easy

I can find no fault and I have no proposals for improvement ^^

normal

SPOILER

Just as with the "easy" ^^

hard

SPOILER

I would circle the size to make 3 because the circles but for the hard a bit too small ^^'

teara´s insane

SPOILER

in my view is the perfect for their insane difficulty

at this point I would but still a circle inserting

03:48:184

Insane

SPOILER

wow

this insane is in my eyes even more of a lunatic or crazy

also as in the "teara's insane" a circle should be placed here

03:48:184

- Kevin

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- Kevin 2014-03-17T23:17:51+00:00

Thx for modding. Sorry for late reply, i dont know why i didnt received e-mail notification.

Updated

eeezzzeee

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eeezzzeee 2014-04-13T08:04:08+00:00

Hi, from modding queue.

Sorry this took so long! Its because last time I checked you quit the game?? I didn't wanna mod a 5 diff 4 minutes song and the mapper never uses, so I didn't know what to do!

But when I checked my queue today, now you are back! So here is a mod! Again sorry for how late this is!

[Easy]
Fine! nothing

[Normal]
00:08:460 (3) - remove clap
00:39:081 (5) - remove clap from the first hit of slider

[Hard]
00:14:667 (4) - add clap
01:22:943 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - make this 1 combo and 01:25:426 (3,4,5,1) - another combo
03:32:873 (3,4) - i don't think should put 1/4 sliders in a hard diffiuclty
03:39:495 (3,4) - ^

[Teara's Insane]
I think it is strange that the spacing for some of the 1/4 is very far (during the chorus) but the spacing in overall is pretty close
Also some of the triples should be closer

00:03:495 - 00:15:908 - try to break up the combos here they are long
00:16:115 (1,2,3) - make these same space apart
00:18:391 - try adding a circle here, I really think there should be something here
00:39:908 (8,1) - new combo on (8) instead of (1)
00:43:219 (1,2,3,4) - small change on shapes

SPOILER

256,176,43219,6,0,L|256:104,1,44.9999976158143
200,168,43426,2,0,L|184:112,1,44.9999976158143
144,184,43632,2,0,L|112:140,1,44.9999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,216,43839,2,0,L|56:192,1,44.9999976158143

00:52:322 (5) - remove clap
00:54:805 (7) - new combo
01:44:460 (8,1) - new combo on (8) instead of (1)
02:38:253 (6) - new combo
02:41:563 (4) - ^
03:18:391 (5,6) - unsnapped

[Insane]
In general, I think there's a lot of places where you used 1/4 spacing where it should only be 1/2 spacing. However, the spacing for these 1/4 is very different from each other due to the (very pretty) patterns, making it difficult to play

Try AR = 8 since the song is 145 bpm
00:17:977 (1,2,3) - try to move (2) to 00:18:391. If you like this, make new combo on (2) instead of (1)
00:36:495 (8) - 00:39:701 (6) - 00:41:460 (7) - 00:43:115 (7) - 00:48:081 (6) - 00:51:288 (6) - 00:53:046 (6) - 00:54:598 (6) - I feel that these are overmapped notes, try how this sounds without these notes (the slider ones change into just a circle)
00:48:184 (7,1) - the new combo should be at (7), every combo in this section is on the downbeat
01:39:495 (1) - try removing this clap
01:42:805 - 02:05:770 - same idea as before, try to remove a circle between each line of the verse
02:01:012 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make this 1 combo
02:05:977 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - this is very confusing, try different pattern
02:21:701 (1,2) - ctrl+g and then ctrl+g each one individually. i think would flow better
02:23:563 (4) - remove clap
02:33:700 (3) - add clap
03:11:357 (3) - try ctrl+g
03:15:495 - 03:30:184 - the combos here are very short, which is different from same chorus earlier

That's all! Best of luck

- Kevin

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- Kevin 2014-04-16T15:43:12+00:00

Updated...

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-05-13T19:58:43+00:00

General
- Offset seems to be too early. It should be 3515 (+20) from the current. (fix this after you are done applying the mod on every diff for correct timelines)
- Why don't you map to 00:20:046 on Easy, Normal and Hard? I guess they feel weird to have it end on a current point

Easy
01:02:253 (1) - better remove NC here and NC at 01:03:081 (5) - instead?
02:11:770 (1) - ^ and NC at 02:12:598 (5) -
02:19:219 (1) - finish
02:35:770 (1) - finish start
03:46:943 (5) - NC?

Normal
AR4 is enough for this bpm and Normal diff
00:46:115 (1) - remove NC here and NC 00:46:943 (4) - instead

Hard
00:54:805 (6) - this shouldn't end this way. It should end at 00:55:012 to follow vocal and ending a slider on blue tick on Hard diff is not particularly encouraged if music doesn't sound that way.
01:19:633 (2) - similar ^
01:22:530 (4) - ^
01:25:840 (3) - ^
01:28:529 (4) - hard to read from overlapped by a slider at 01:27:495 (2) - Try this way please

SPOILER

02:20:875 (1) - similar to what I mentioned
02:22:530 (1) - ^
02:26:668 (3) - ^
02:34:116 (1) - ^
03:18:806 (3) - ^
03:19:633 (1) - ^
03:36:184 (3) - ^
I don't allow this kind of slider to be placed in Hard diff. Hope you understand (Such sliders in Insane was technically unrankable in past due to misfollowing to the song but it's not anymore in these days and I will let them pass.

Teara's Insane
fine

Insane
00:42:391 (5,6) - spacing too far, can you make them shorter between these 2 notes? it's already 5.12x spacing

SPOILER

00:58:115 (8,1) - this spacing feels too similar to 1/4 beat placements used in this map but this one represents on 1/2 which is confusing.
I would try this way to make it distinguishable

SPOILER

01:49:839 (3) - end this at 01:50:046 plays much better. You don't have to make it jump and it follows drum instead of nothing

forum-pm me back when you are done fixing these mods for a recheck

- Kevin

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- Kevin 2014-05-14T14:18:48+00:00

All followed

Waiting for re-check

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-05-15T00:09:24+00:00

Wish you best of luck for ranking : )

- Kevin

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- Kevin 2014-05-15T00:35:57+00:00

Thx, Frostmourne i'm really happy for this bubble

Pappy

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Pappy 2014-05-16T20:33:47+00:00

Gogogogogo plz ;____; Rank this i need that mapuuu

(/owo)/♥

Lach

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Lach 2014-05-18T01:41:24+00:00

https://www.dropbox.com/s/b938ld33ak3au ... cheina.avi

I can't let you get this ranked with that video, it make me shed tear every day.

The current video offset should be fine, plus this one is smaller with far, far better quality and resolution. Win-win!

hi

- Kevin

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- Kevin 2014-05-18T02:16:10+00:00

Thx i ill upload this after

EDIT1: Ops, I should not have done that

Popped Bubble

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Note: If your map has a bubble, then it will be popped if you update it. If the update wasn't drastic (ex. All you did was fix a slider), then just ask the BAT who bubbled it to rebubble it. Your map will gain 5 SP for a popped bubble icon.

Lach

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Lach 2014-05-19T04:04:20+00:00

I was a super minor fix, nothing to do with the map itself if all you did was change video, go pm frostmourne

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-05-19T05:23:29+00:00

Lach wrote:
I was a super minor fix, nothing to do with the map itself if all you did was change video, go pm frostmourne

super quality approveddddddddddddddd

- Kevin

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- Kevin 2014-05-21T14:06:56+00:00

BATs please?

UnderminE

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UnderminE 2014-05-29T07:49:22+00:00

;_;

captin1

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captin1 2014-06-04T04:04:14+00:00

I'll check this soon

- Kevin

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- Kevin 2014-06-07T05:10:01+00:00

Check it, check it, CHECK IT!

Thx~

captin1

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captin1 2014-06-10T22:47:50+00:00

[General]

Preview time is unsnapped, I think you want it at 02:22:342 -

[Easy]

00:46:549 - it seems you mixed up your claps on this section, they should be on ticks 2 and 4 like the section 00:33:308 - right before it. So put clap on head of 00:46:963 (1) - , not tail, clap on 00:47:790 (2) - and so on
03:03:101 (3) - is this drum whistle on purpose? it doesn't sound right here
03:05:583 (1) - finish?
03:09:721 (3,4) - same as 03:03:101 (3) -
03:23:790 (3) - ^ seems it should be finish to fit your pattern
03:45:308 (2) - finish
03:45:721 (3) - ^ on end
03:45:721 (3,4) - remove finish

[Normal]

01:06:411 (1,3) - same as 03:03:101 (3) - in Easy
01:25:446 (2,3) - blanket is pretty far off, should move 3 right
02:25:445 (6) - missing clap
02:41:997 (2) - ^
02:55:652 (3) - finish
03:24:825 - should add a note here for consistency with 03:17:998 (5,6,7) -
03:45:515 (2) - I think this note is overmapped for normal, should remove it

[Hard]

00:59:790 (4,1) - swap NC will make more sense with music
01:13:033 (1) - and 01:15:929 (3) - are still extended to blue tick, which it seems like you were shortening from Frostmourne's mod. You should do the same here
01:47:583 (1,2) - swap NC
01:59:377 (1) - same as before, end on red tick
02:07:652 (8,1) - swap NC
03:48:204 (1) - I would recommend ending like this, will fit music much better
SPOILER

[Teara's Insane]

00:13:446 - seems like you forgot to put claps in this section
00:33:308 (1) - finish on start
00:58:135 (7,1) - swap NC will make more sense with the music
00:59:790 (5,1) - ^
01:01:446 (2) - finish on start
01:04:549 (4) - finish on end
01:12:204 (4,5,6,7,8) - found it odd that you put the 1/4 over 1/2 in the music, and then a slider over the 1/4 part :p but up to you
02:07:446 (7) - I think having NC here instead of 02:08:066 (1) - would make more sense
02:14:273 (2) - finish on start
02:21:721 (4,5,6,7,8) - same as before
03:18:411 (5,6) - wait what why are these snapped on 1/3? doesn't make any sense o.o should be snapped to the blue tick like the rest of the map
03:23:377 (4) - finish
03:48:618 (1) - same as Hard, adding one more slider at 03:48:204 - would make sense

[Insane]

00:58:135 (8,1) - swap NC
01:12:204 (1,2,3) - same as I said in Teara's, there is 1/4 in the music at 01:12:618 - but only 1/2 at 01:12:204 - , should map more based on the music here
02:21:721 (1,2,3) - ^
03:48:618 (1) - same as Hard, adding one more slider at 03:48:204 - would make sense

hm bit unsure, and that wrong snapping in Teara's needs to be fixed for sure

call me back

Teara

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Teara 2014-06-11T05:34:33+00:00

captin1 wrote:
[Teara's Insane]
00:13:446 - seems like you forgot to put claps in this section
00:33:308 (1) - finish on start
00:58:135 (7,1) - swap NC will make more sense with the music
00:59:790 (5,1) - ^
01:01:446 (2) - finish on start
01:04:549 (4) - finish on end
01:12:204 (4,5,6,7,8) - found it odd that you put the 1/4 over 1/2 in the music, and then a slider over the 1/4 part :p but up to you ^^
02:07:446 (7) - I think having NC here instead of 02:08:066 (1) - would make more sense
02:14:273 (2) - finish on start
02:21:721 (4,5,6,7,8) - same as before
03:18:411 (5,6) - wait what why are these snapped on 1/3? doesn't make any sense o.o should be snapped to the blue tick like the rest of the map Oh Dear! That clearly is a mistake. Fixed.
03:23:377 (4) - finish
03:48:618 (1) - same as Hard, adding one more slider at 03:48:204 - would make sense

All done.

Thanks

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328,280,189928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,144,192514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,208,203377,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,136,203583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,120,206480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,288,206687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,96,206894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,112,214756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,80,214859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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332,260,217963,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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- Kevin

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- Kevin 2014-06-11T14:02:12+00:00

captin1 wrote:
[General]
Preview time is unsnapped, I think you want it at 02:22:342 - Fixed
[Easy]
00:46:549 - it seems you mixed up your claps on this section, they should be on ticks 2 and 4 like the section 00:33:308 - right before it. So put clap on head of 00:46:963 (1) - , not tail, clap on 00:47:790 (2) - and so on I thought I had already fixed it, *Fixed*
03:03:101 (3) - is this drum whistle on purpose? it doesn't sound right here Fixed, it was here from the old mapping forget to remove some
03:05:583 (1) - finish? Ok
03:09:721 (3,4) - same as 03:03:101 (3) - Ok
03:23:790 (3) - ^ seems it should be finish to fit your pattern Yeah it fits
03:45:308 (2) - finish Fixed
03:45:721 (3) - ^ on end Fixed
03:45:721 (3,4) - remove finish Fixed

[Normal]
01:06:411 (1,3) - same as 03:03:101 (3) - in Easy Okay
01:25:446 (2,3) - blanket is pretty far off, should move 3 right Fixed
02:25:445 (6) - missing clap Fixed
02:41:997 (2) - ^ Fixed
02:55:652 (3) - finish Fixed
03:24:825 - should add a note here for consistency with 03:17:998 (5,6,7) - Add
03:45:515 (2) - I think this note is overmapped for normal, should remove it Removed
[Hard]
00:59:790 (4,1) - swap NC will make more sense with music Ok
01:13:033 (1) - and 01:15:929 (3) - are still extended to blue tick, which it seems like you were shortening from Frostmourne's mod. You should do the same here Mistake
01:47:583 (1,2) - swap NC Ok
01:59:377 (1) - same as before, end on red tick Fixed
02:07:652 (8,1) - swap NC Ok
03:48:204 (1) - I would recommend ending like this, will fit music much better Ok then
SPOILER
[Insane]
00:58:135 (8,1) - swap NC Fixed
01:12:204 (1,2,3) - same as I said in Teara's, there is 1/4 in the music at 01:12:618 - but only 1/2 at 01:12:204 - , should map more based on the music here That part has no vocal so it's nice to make noise with the notes (all clickable points are following beats then no problem in my opinion)
02:21:721 (1,2,3) - ^
03:48:618 (1) - same as Hard, adding one more slider at 03:48:204 - would make sense Ok
hm bit unsure, and that wrong snapping in Teara's needs to be fixed for sure

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Teara 2014-06-11T16:02:49+00:00

Jajaja, I was late for work already, didn't have time to make everything nice and proper and trim .. =p

captin1

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captin1 2014-06-14T15:21:09+00:00

one small last thing, sorry
[Easy]

02:01:859 - green lines don't seem to be doing anything, you don't seem to have a slidertick hitsound. should remove them

- Kevin

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- Kevin 2014-06-14T16:13:23+00:00

Fixed

captin1 wrote:
one small last thing, sorry
[Easy]
02:01:859 - green lines don't seem to be doing anything, you don't seem to have a slidertick hitsound. should remove them

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captin1 2014-06-16T02:48:23+00:00

alright, looks good.

ranked!

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HabiHolic 2014-06-16T03:04:30+00:00

Gratz~

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Kyouren 2014-06-16T03:14:24+00:00

Gratzz!! -Kevin and Teara!!^^ for First Ranked Maps~

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