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Yamano Satoko - Doraemon no Uta

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Nepu
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Nepu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年2月16日 at 2:58:19

Artist: Yamano Satoko
Title: Doraemon no Uta
Source: Doraemon
Tags: Tsukuyomi baldrace Evil Twilight yf_bmp Autumn Accel world Sharlo 615915887
BPM: 120.65
Filesize: 6163kb
Play Time: 02:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. 615's Insane (4.95 stars, 381 notes)
  2. Easy (0.97 stars, 120 notes)
  3. G's Hard (4.69 stars, 320 notes)
  4. Insane Collab (4.92 stars, 375 notes)
  5. yf's Hard (4.67 stars, 299 notes)
  6. Yomi's Normal (3.23 stars, 207 notes)
Download: Yamano Satoko - Doraemon no Uta
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Plz redownload after 2014/2/2 for the new SB:)
Opening theme of the anime Doraemon
Easy by me
Normal by Tsukuyomi
Hard by yf_bmp
Hard+ by Evil_Twilight
Collab by me,Autumn,Accel_world
Insane+ by 615915887
Cute StoryBoard by Sharlo \OwO/
Hopefully you like it :3
Collab
00:00:568 - 01:08:196 - 67s me 100%
01:08:196 - 01:59:911 - 52s Autumn 100%
01:59:911 - 02:55:605 - 55s Accel_world 100%
Last edited by Nepu , edited 80 times in total.
Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,123 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal
[Music Player]
00:20:458 (1,2,3) - 有点歪不好看
00:56:261 (1,2) - 改成滑条 1结束在00:56:758
2结束在00:57:753
01:17:644 (x) - 加个circle
02:19:802 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个排列不太好看
02:50:135 (2) - 遮住了

[Childhood Destroyer]
00:10:513 (1,2) - 听着不舒服 建议这样
SPOILER
00:20:458 (1,2) - ^
01:03:720 (3) - 加个circle (clap?)
01:04:217 (4,5,6) - 这样
SPOILER
01:09:190 (2,3,4,5) - 为什么要重叠?
02:07:702 (1) - 取消nc
02:38:698 (3) - 结尾clap
02:52:124 (1) - 删除这个circle

[What the Flask]
00:12:502 (1) - 试试这样
SPOILER
01:59:248 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 排列重复的太多啦 建议3组就可以换了
02:14:167 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^

[Collab]
00:22:447 (5,6,7) - 不太好看
00:29:409 (3,4,5,6) - 建议每个之间偏移一点

祝早日rank~
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki


From your request

  1. Black——My personal suggestions.
  2. Bold——Highly recommended.
  3. Red——Unrankable, you must fix it.

[General]
  1. Missing Skin Files approachcircle.png
  2. Unused Image Files spinner-bottom.png spinner-glow.png spinner-middle.png spinner-middle2.png spinner-top.png
  3. 这皮肤的slider边缘看起来好奇怪，http://puu.sh/5PAGR.jpg

[Taiko Robot]
  1. 00:00:568 (1) - Unsnapped circle.

[Easy's Music Player]
  1. 00:26:431 (1,2,3) - 没包好
  2. 01:14:668 (2) - 离1感觉太近了，稍微往左上移动一点
  3. 02:50:646 (3,4) - 最后stack是来坑人的吗？

[Normal's Childhood Destroyer]
  1. 00:03:555 (3) - normal不要用两次以上折返的滑条，后面一样（01:01:739 (1,2) - 02:00:917 (3) - 02:02:409 (5) - 02:20:808 (3) -
  2. 00:21:458 (2) - 尾巴的clap听着很怪啊（后同01:18:149 (1) - 01:44:009 (1,2,3) - 01:47:987 (1,2,3) - 02:30:754 (2) - 00:39:360 (3) -
  3. 01:09:695 (3) - 01:10:690 (5) - clap
  4. 01:21:630 (5) - ^
  5. 01:28:095 (1) - finish
  6. 01:46:992 (1) - ^
  7. 01:50:971 (1) - ^
  8. 02:06:884 (4) - 突然缩了
  9. 02:52:138 (1) - 没音就不要加了

[Hard's What the Flask]
  1. combo color和其他diff太不协调了吧，复制下code吧
  2. 00:14:496 (1) - 当中和尾巴可以clap
  3. 01:17:652 (4) - 头上加个clap？
  4. 01:59:259 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 这段有点嘈-.-稍微加点梗？或者弄一点短滑条吧

    good diff

[Collab]
  1. change diff name to 'Collab Insane'?
  2. 00:03:556 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉不变方向比较好
  3. 00:04:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 试着每一组的间距逐渐增大，你这里还没hard间距大23333
  4. 00:16:485 (1,2,3) - stack对这首歌来说比较无聊，因为这歌比较欢快，后面也一样
  5. 00:25:602 (5,6,7) - 胆子大点啊，还没这个大00:41:350 (1,1) -
  6. 00:42:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 太保守
  7. 00:58:258 (5) - NC
  8. 00:59:252 (7) - 再加个finish
  9. 01:00:247 (1,2,3) - 这flow顺着反而无聊，每一个都ctrl+g
  10. 01:02:402 (5) - remove，然后6~10重新摆个梗
  11. 02:00:751 (3) - 位置重新摆下，现在看起来比较怪
  12. 02:06:884 (4) - ctrl+g
  13. 02:10:365 (2,3,4) - 位置移开点，太近了感觉
  14. 02:12:355 (2,3,4) - ^
  15. 02:19:814 - 这里加个note，02:17:825 (1) - 转盘结束提前
  16. 02:26:113 (8) - NC
  17. 02:35:727 - 这里加个note，02:33:738 (1) - 转盘结束提前
  18. 02:37:717 (1,1,1,1) - 依次ctrl+g
  19. 02:40:700 (3) - ctrl+g
  20. 02:45:673 (5) - NC
  21. 02:51:475 (3) - finish
  22. 话说你1,3clap，其他diff的2,4clap真没问题么？

最后祝您身体健康
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Nepu

[_Crystal] wrote:

[Music Player]
00:20:458 (1,2,3) - 有点歪不好看 K
00:56:261 (1,2) - 改成滑条 1结束在00:56:758 K K
2结束在00:57:753
01:17:644 (x) - 加个circle K
02:19:802 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个排列不太好看 K
02:50:135 (2) - 遮住了 K

[Collab]
00:22:447 (5,6,7) - 不太好看
00:29:409 (3,4,5,6) - 建议每个之间偏移一点 K

祝早日rank~
谢谢><
Accel World
Accel World

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:



[Collab]
  1. change diff name to 'Collab Insane'?
  2. 00:03:556 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉不变方向比较好
  3. 00:04:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 试着每一组的间距逐渐增大，你这里还没hard间距大23333
  4. 00:16:485 (1,2,3) - stack对这首歌来说比较无聊，因为这歌比较欢快，后面也一样
  5. 00:25:602 (5,6,7) - 胆子大点啊，还没这个大00:41:350 (1,1) -
  6. 00:42:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 太保守
  7. 00:58:258 (5) - NC
  8. 00:59:252 (7) - 再加个finish
  9. 01:00:247 (1,2,3) - 这flow顺着反而无聊，每一个都ctrl+g
  10. 01:02:402 (5) - remove，然后6~10重新摆个梗
  11. 02:00:751 (3) - 位置重新摆下，现在看起来比较怪 不能理解,我觉得很正常
  12. 02:06:884 (4) - ctrl+g ok
  13. 02:10:365 (2,3,4) - 位置移开点，太近了感觉 实在移不了,要超出边界
  14. 02:12:355 (2,3,4) - ^ 实在移不了,要超出边界
  15. 02:19:814 - 这里加个note，02:17:825 (1) - 转盘结束提前 ok
  16. 02:26:113 (8) - NC ok
  17. 02:35:727 - 这里加个note，02:33:738 (1) - 转盘结束提前 ok
  18. 02:37:717 (1,1,1,1) - 依次ctrl+g ok
  19. 02:40:700 (3) - ctrl+g 这里就算了吧....不变
  20. 02:45:673 (5) - NC ok
  21. 02:51:475 (3) - finish ok
  22. 话说你1,3clap，其他diff的2,4clap真没问题么？

最后祝您身体健康
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Nepu

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:



From your request

  1. Black——My personal suggestions.
  2. Bold——Highly recommended.
  3. Red——Unrankable, you must fix it.

[General]
  1. Missing Skin Files approachcircle.png Fixed
  2. Unused Image Files spinner-bottom.png spinner-glow.png spinner-middle.png spinner-middle2.png spinner-top.png 看情况- -
  3. 这皮肤的slider边缘看起来好奇怪，http://puu.sh/5PAGR.jpg 唔，，我觉得是蛮清晰的0.0

[Taiko Robot]
  1. 00:00:568 (1) - Unsnapped circle. Fixed

[Easy's Music Player]
  1. 00:26:431 (1,2,3) - 没包好 修
  2. 01:14:668 (2) - 离1感觉太近了，稍微往左上移动一点 干脆不包了
  3. 02:50:646 (3,4) - 最后stack是来坑人的吗？ 已修

[Collab]
  1. change diff name to 'Collab Insane'?No
  2. 00:03:556 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉不变方向比较好换了个- -
  3. 00:04:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 试着每一组的间距逐渐增大，你这里还没hard间距大23333嗯啊
  4. 00:16:485 (1,2,3) - stack对这首歌来说比较无聊，因为这歌比较欢快，后面也一样
  5. 00:25:602 (5,6,7) - 胆子大点啊，还没这个大00:41:350 (1,1) -
  6. 00:42:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 太保守
    这部分试着排列都变过了
  7. 00:58:258 (5) - NC o.o
  8. 00:59:252 (7) - 再加个finish OK
  9. 01:00:247 (1,2,3) - 这flow顺着反而无聊，每一个都ctrl+g 换了个
  10. 01:02:402 (5) - remove，然后6~10重新摆个梗 换了个
  11. 话说你1,3clap，其他diff的2,4clap真没问题么？已修

最后祝您身体健康 :o
Last edited by Nepu , edited 1 time in total.
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
先占位置

1/3不会摸 于是给星好了 等会附上 mod

Hard ：

00:48:312这段和后面类似的 我第一pc的时候就无意识在转盘 这段放转盘感觉好些

01:24:117 (1,2,3,4) - 这段总感觉不好 你看前面都是那些节奏 这边然后就好像慢了好多,感觉还是长滑条好

02:03:900 (1,2,3,4) - ^

02:01:745(8) 可以删掉 被坑了 删了反而顺了

02:03:735(15)^

02:11:691 (8) - ^

02:51:143 (4,5) - 做成和前面3滑条一样打起来的感觉比较顺 ，单点100有木有

Collab：
1/3不会玩= =和花名1/6一样不会玩↓ 给跪了
SPOILER

这diff好多地方坑= =都是近距离单点（也许是我不会玩的缘故。。。

这明显没叠好
SPOILER

还有 这图有SB还是啥 感觉note颜色和BG略相近 =HD。。我是不怕这种淡颜色的note的 因为我皮肤就是淡的，其他人不清楚
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
In-Game Request
除了normal外排列节奏问题不多 主要指出下音效

[General]
现有normal-hitclap.wav的违和感太严重..试试这个吧 http://puu.sh/5TBQF.wav (100%softwhistle+37.5%normal)
以下mod的clap都是以上述链接的音效为准 望参考

[Easy]
请注意General中的音效问题
00:02:561 (3) - finish>clap
00:07:036 (3) - ^
00:22:452 (3) - ^
00:30:409 (1) - ^
00:40:355 (1) - finish>whistle
00:42:841 (1) - 头clap
00:42:841 (1) - whistle>clap
00:48:312 (5) - sampleset-auto, finish>clap
00:50:798 (4) - finish>whistle
01:32:074 (1) - ^
01:24:117 (5) - finish>clap
01:34:560 (1) - clap
01:40:030 (6) - finish>clap
01:46:992 (1,1) - 可以的话音量稍小些
02:23:792 (1) - finish>whistle
02:32:246 (2) - 为何这么拉..

[Normal]
请注意General中的音效问题
00:10:517 (1,2) - 节奏违和
00:20:463 (1,2) - ^
00:39:360 (3) - ^
01:04:225 (1,2) - ^
01:18:149 (1) - ^
01:44:009 (1,2,3) - ^
01:47:987 (1,2,3) - ^
01:51:965 (1,2) - ^
02:07:879 (2) - ^
02:22:798 (3) - ^
02:50:646 (2) - ^
02:31:285 - ^ 建议折返去掉 在 02:31:583 下功夫
这些节奏不要认为是个性之类的..用在这些地方却很不适合


01:01:241 (3,1,2) - 漏音效?
01:09:695 (3,5) - ^
01:21:630 (5) - ^
02:00:751 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

00:25:933 - 很明显的鼓点 最好加上
00:35:879 - ^
00:47:317 (3) - 延长到白线
00:50:301 (3) - 可以再折返一下
01:57:436 - 从这里开始的空档建议填上
02:00:751 (2,3) - to hard for NM
02:52:138 (1) - 没必要overmap

[Hard]
请注意General中的音效问题
01:43:511 (4) - 这里改成note?从bgm分析的话note是更好些
02:49:154 (4) - finish>clap

这个hard很不错 对于我来说没什么可以挑了

[Insane]
Part1:
建议参考下hard的音效
00:44:334 (1) - 这里应该是很需梗的地方 删掉spinner加物件吧
00:49:307 (2,3,4) - 这样的overmap不适合
00:51:295 - 这里开始加note到break处

Part2:
请注意General中的音效问题
建议参考下hard的音效
00:59:750 (4) - 不要finish
01:15:663 (3) - 缺note

Part3:
请注意General中的音效问题
02:33:738 (1) - 加note再spinner
建议参考下hard的音效



嗯..这首是我曾经的坑啊..
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Nepu

moonlightleaf wrote:

先占位置

1/3不会摸 于是给星好了 等会附上 mod

Collab：
1/3不会玩= =和花名1/6一样不会玩↓ 给跪了
SPOILER

这diff好多地方坑= =都是近距离单点（也许是我不会玩的缘故。。。

这明显没叠好
SPOILER
我是想刻意做一个重叠的效果的0.0

还有 这图有SB还是啥 感觉note颜色和BG略相近 =HD。。我是不怕这种淡颜色的note的 因为我皮肤就是淡的，其他人不清楚
嗯，，我note颜色一般都是取和BG相近的0.0
SB要等彩虹啦~
wonders
610 posts
Joined December 2011
wonders
[Easy]
00:30:409 (184,272)
01:39:036 blanket

[Normal]
00:39:858 取消折返，换成circle
00:51:739 add circle

[Hard]
fine~

[Collab]
00:15:490 too far
00:16:485 too far
00:43:007 delete this circle
00:43:505 ^
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Nepu

yf_bmp wrote:

In-Game Request

[General]
现有normal-hitclap.wav的违和感太严重..试试这个吧 http://puu.sh/5TBQF.wav (100%softwhistle+37.5%normal)
以下mod的clap都是以上述链接的音效为准 望参考
非常赞的音效>w<十分感谢>x<

[Easy]
请注意General中的音效问题
00:02:561 (3) - finish>clap
00:07:036 (3) - ^
00:22:452 (3) - ^
00:30:409 (1) - ^
no>< 为何如此讨厌finish><
00:40:355 (1) - finish>whistle OK
00:42:841 (1) - 头clap OK
00:42:841 (1) - whistle>clap OK
00:48:312 (5) - sampleset-auto, finish>clap OK
00:50:798 (4) - finish>whistle no><
01:32:074 (1) - ^ OK
01:24:117 (5) - finish>clap no><
01:34:560 (1) - clap OK
01:40:030 (6) - finish>clap OK
01:46:992 (1,1) - 可以的话音量稍小些 修正了=w=
02:23:792 (1) - finish>whistle OK
02:32:246 (2) - 为何这么拉.. 修正了=w=
[Insane]
Part1:
建议参考下hard的音效
00:44:334 (1) - 这里应该是很需梗的地方 删掉spinner加物件吧 可
00:49:307 (2,3,4) - 这样的overmap不适合
重新调整了下排列~
00:51:295 - 这里开始加note到break处可

嗯..这首是我曾经的坑啊..
这歌真心蛮难做map的o.o

wonders wrote:

[Easy]
00:30:409 (184,272) ok
01:39:036 blanket 已修

[Collab]
00:15:490 too far
00:16:485 too far 已修
00:43:007 delete this circle
00:43:505 ^ 重新调整了下排列
Last edited by Nepu , edited 2 times in total.
Evil_Twilight
587 posts
Joined July 2010
Evil_Twilight
[box=[_Crystal:1337]00:12:502 (1) - 试试这样 X, 這裡不想放spin

01:59:248 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 排列重复的太多啦 建议3组就可以换了 O, fixed
02:14:167 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^ ^
[box=[Minakami Yuki:1337]combo color和其他diff太不协调了吧，复制下code吧
00:14:496 (1) - 当中和尾巴可以clap 我不是有加normal hitsound嗎o.o
01:17:652 (4) - 头上加个clap？ O
01:59:259 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 这段有点嘈-.-稍微加点梗？或者弄一点短滑条吧 O, fixed
moonlightleaf
00:48:312这段和后面类似的 我第一pc的时候就无意识在转盘 这段放转盘感觉好些 X, 我是覺得不用o3o

01:24:117 (1,2,3,4) - 这段总感觉不好 你看前面都是那些节奏 这边然后就好像慢了好多,感觉还是长滑条好 X, 因為要進複歌了，所以來點不一樣

02:03:900 (1,2,3,4) - ^

02:01:745(8) 可以删掉 被坑了 删了反而顺了 O, 這裡稍微改了一下

02:03:735(15)^ X, 雖然找不到15，不過這裡的節奏不都一樣嗎

02:11:691 (8) - ^ ^

02:51:143 (4,5) - 做成和前面3滑条一样打起来的感觉比较顺 ，单点100有木有 X, 這裡用slider就沒感覺了

yf_bmp
请注意General中的音效问题
01:43:511 (4) - 这里改成note?从bgm分析的话note是更好些 X
02:49:154 (4) - finish>clap X

这个hard很不错 对于我来说没什么可以挑了

thanks for modding
Backstep
1,007 posts
Joined September 2009
Backstep
Hi from my queue~

Overall

- Doraemon!! You have a lot difficulties and have a lot drain time, so I'm mod a few difficulties (from my rules) >w<

General

Change "Taiko Mechine" and "Taiko Robot" to Muzukashii and Oni coz it unrankable

Easy

Hitsound
00:12:507 (1) - This spinner remove finish then add whistle look better for me.
00:16:485 (G) - Add green timing with 30%
00:16:485 (1) - Add finish sound, then remove whistle from this note.
00:16:651 (G) - Add green timing with 50%
00:44:333 (1) - Add clap here.
02:32:246 (2) - Remove clap at start slider.
02:48:657 (3) - At end slider change clap to whistle look better.

Pattern
00:20:463 (1,2) - Move to 160,36
00:22:452 (3) - Move to 400,156 (If you do above suggestion.)

Normal

Hitsound
00:10:517 (1,2) - I feel weird about this hitsound, try previous rhythm please :/
00:16:485 (1) - Remove finish please.
00:20:463 (1,2) - Feel weird again try same previous rhythm please >.<
00:39:360 (3) - Again... use this pattern and add clap at end slider.
SPOILER
00:49:306 (2) - End slider should be at 00:50:135
01:09:695 (3,5) - Add clap.
01:18:149 (1) - Remove clap here.
01:21:630 (5) - clap.
01:44:009 (1,2,3) - Change rhythm please like this? >w<
SPOILER
01:47:987 (1,2,3) - Use same above suggestion.
02:02:409 (5) - Add clap at start slider.
02:22:798 (3) - Use this rhythm? and add clap at end slider.
SPOILER
02:23:792 (1) - Change finish to clap.
02:30:754 (2,3) - Try this? and add clap at repeat slider.
SPOILER
02:50:646 (2,3,1) - Use this look be better.
SPOILER

Pattern
Nothing to say...

Hard's G

Hitsound
Look fine all difficulty, but slider sound look noisy for me and volume so loud (I suggest reduce around 10-15%) :/

Pattern
Nice.

Collab

Really nice difficulty!, nothing to say

Good luck <3
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Nepu

Backstep wrote:

Hi from my queue~

Overall

- Doraemon!! You have a lot difficulties and have a lot drain time, so I'm mod a few difficulties (from my rules) >w< Thx anyway :3

General

Change "Taiko Mechine" and "Taiko Robot" to Muzukashii and Oni coz it unrankable
changed :3

Easy

Hitsound
00:12:507 (1) - This spinner remove finish then add whistle look better for me. OK
00:16:485 (G) - Add green timing with 30%
00:16:485 (1) - Add finish sound, then remove whistle from this note.
00:16:651 (G) - Add green timing with 50% OK~
00:44:333 (1) - Add clap here. no change._. remove all the clap like this
02:32:246 (2) - Remove clap at start slider. ok o.o
02:48:657 (3) - At end slider change clap to whistle look better. nice:3

Pattern
00:20:463 (1,2) - Move to 160,36
00:22:452 (3) - Move to 400,156 (If you do above suggestion.)
okay

Collab

Really nice difficulty!, nothing to say
glad you like it :D

Good luck <3
Thx for mod :3
Coro
2,394 posts
Joined September 2010
Coro
太鼓mod~
红色是一定要改

[Muzu's 8zs]
letterboxing和countdown要disable
00:42:841 (123) - d? 跟着音乐
00:47:483 (136) - 移到 00:47:649
01:34:560 (266) - d? 跟着音乐
01:39:201 (279) - 移到 01:39:367
01:39:865 (281) - 换乘小d
02:26:279 (413) - d? 跟着音乐
02:30:920 (426) - 移到 02:31:086
02:49:154 (482) - k? 跟着音乐

[Oni's 8zs]
letterboxing和countdown要disable
00:19:883 (126) - delete? 觉得这个有点overmapped了
02:41:778 (792,793) - delete? 这两个也是 :P
02:46:170 (816) - k?
02:49:154 (827) - k? 跟着音乐
02:51:143 (833) - k? 跟着音乐
Muzu > Oni 有很大的困难差异 :S 这个 Oni 可以说是 Inner Oni 那么难

多啦A梦~
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
I think there's a very serious problem in the mapset, I'm not sure though (I'm not an expert at Ranking Criteria):\
Here's the Problem
Contribution Ratio ( Percentage ):

Troogle : 4/3 ( 1 Map and Collab )
Tsukuyomi : 4/3 ( 1 Map and Collab )
Evil_Twilight : 4/3 ( 1 Map and Collab )
ts8zs : 2 ( 2 Maps )

The Ranking Criteria (Guideline) states :
No guest mapper should have more difficulties in the mapset than the creator, all modes together. For collaboration mapsets, the uploader should take part in all collab difficulties. The person who should upload the map is the one who contributed most to it.
Even though it is a guideline, I've seen maps getting locked/nuked temporarily until it is fixed

This might happen to your mapset

Please do change this quickly by mapping a kantan or futsuu in the mapset
Anyways

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

This is quite a "jumpy" map:
00:19:552 (123) - Remove | Having 2 triplets in a row makes it too smooth to have the "jumpy" feeling
00:33:393 (202) - k > K | Vocals on 00:33:890 (203,204) - are emphasized with finishes, I think 202 should have the same emphasis
00:39:858 - The break here seems to be quite weird, you can put in a simple pattern like this
00:48:312 (266) - d > D | More emphasis here since the music as a loud bass
01:31:576 - Fix this break also
02:23:295 - ^

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

Letterbox and countdown disable

Title Check

No Problems

Muzu :

00:49:969 (142) - Move 1/3 to the right

Can't find much problems in Muzu

Good Luck!
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~

[Easy's Player]
  1. HD-1, OD-1
  2. 01:10:193 (2,1) - avoid overlap
  3. 01:28:095 (1) - how about curved slider?
    SPOILER

    55,319,88095,6,0,P|46:271|63:224,2,100,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:28:593- whistle
  5. 01:29:090- ^
  6. 01:42:019 (2) - end at 01:43:014
  7. 02:11:360- whistle
  8. 02:32:246 (2,3) - for easy, a little confusing. I recommend to make other pattern
  9. 02:40:203 (2,3) - ^
[Normal's BBQ]
  1. 00:20:463 (1,2) - don't fit music
  2. 00:25:933- add a note
  3. 00:39:360 (3) - don't fit music
  4. 00:49:306 (2) - end at 00:50:135
  5. 01:04:225 (1,2) - don't fit music
  6. 01:18:149 (1) - ^
  7. 01:44:009 (1,2,3) - ^
  8. 01:47:987 (1,2,3) - ^
  9. 01:51:965 (1,2) - ^
  10. 02:00:751 (2,3) - DS is short
  11. 02:22:798 (3) - don't fit music
  12. 02:30:754 (2) - ^
  13. 02:46:668 (2,1) - how about making blanket?
  14. 02:50:646 (2) - don't fit music
  15. 02:52:138 (1) - I prefer to delete
[Hard's G]
  1. 02:45:010 (5,6) - I prefer to combine them into 1 slider
[Insane's Collab]
Troogle
  1. 00:03:555 (1,2,3,4) - it is better to increase DS
  2. 00:16:485 (1) - I prefer Ctrl+G
  3. 00:19:635 (4) - move to x:366 y:244 (stack correctly)
  4. 00:24:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - it is better to move symmetric position about 00:25:768 (1,2) -
    SPOILER

    172,124,24939,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    295,91,25105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    364,198,25270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    284,296,25436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    166,251,25602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 00:32:896 (3) - move to x:304 y:280 (stack correctly)
  6. 00:35:880 (4,1,2) - it is better to make parallel
  7. 00:36:377 (1) - I prefer Ctrl+G
  8. 00:44:168- add a note
  9. 01:00:247 (1) - I prefer Ctrl+G
  10. 01:02:568 (1,2,3) - increase DS
  11. 01:02:733 (2,3) - it is better to make parallel
  12. 01:06:215 (1) - end at 01:07:706- ?
Autumn
  1. 01:36:052 (1) - I prefer to move to x:256 y:75 for making regular triangle
    SPOILER
Accel_world
  1. 02:40:203 (2) - NC
...wherer is SB?
~Good Luck~
Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony
Hi! I'm here from my queue!

[Easy]
01:08:203 (1,2,1) - This pattern looks bad! I recommend you to re-map this part like this: http://puu.sh/5VWA2.jpg
02:29:760 (4) - I really don't like this slider shape, I recommend you this: http://puu.sh/5VWFU.jpg
02:33:738 (3) - Remove this circle and make this slider longer 02:32:246 (2) - Like this: http://puu.sh/5VWLo.jpg
02:41:695 (3) - ^
02:51:475 (4) - Remove this circle and do it like this: http://puu.sh/5VWOA.jpg

[Normal]

The complete diff. feels a bit bad timed. (I mean the flow is bad)
Some of the shapes are a bit boring. It will be better to do something with this: http://puu.sh/5W3uu.jpg to e.g this: http://puu.sh/5W4ee.jpg

[Hard]

I really can't find anything wrong here. This diff makes fun! :D

[Insane]

00:03:555 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern feels really bad! I recommend you this: http://puu.sh/5W4Cy.jpg
00:14:993 (1,2,3,4) - A bit boring pattern, try this: http://puu.sh/5W4KX.jpg , http://puu.sh/5W4LH.jpg

So far, very good diff! :)

That's all!

Good luck!
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~


[Insane's Collab]
Autumn
  1. 01:36:052 (1) - I prefer to move to x:256 y:75 for making regular triangle Fixed
    SPOILER
Thanks!
http://puu.sh/5WeO3.rar
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Nepu
RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy's Player]
  1. HD-1, OD-1 K
  2. 01:10:193 (2,1) - avoid overlap It's just a little bit /.\right?
  3. 01:28:095 (1) - how about curved slider? nicely worked thx a lot~ xD
    SPOILER

    55,319,88095,6,0,P|46:271|63:224,2,100,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:28:593- whistle
  5. 01:29:090- ^ K
  6. 01:42:019 (2) - end at 01:43:014 K
  7. 02:11:360- whistle K
  8. 02:32:246 (2,3) - for easy, a little confusing. I recommend to make other pattern yes D: I will think hard of it xD
  9. 02:40:203 (2,3) - ^
[Insane's Collab]
Troogle
  1. 00:03:555 (1,2,3,4) - it is better to increase DS
    Is it 0.0? changed anyway
  2. 00:16:485 (1) - I prefer Ctrl+G I think Ctrl+G make it worse :(
  3. 00:19:635 (4) - move to x:366 y:244 (stack correctly) I was using the Grid --Fixed it now
  4. 00:24:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - it is better to move symmetric position about 00:25:768 (1,2) - It's much nicer now :3
    SPOILER

    172,124,24939,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    295,91,25105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    364,198,25270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    284,296,25436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    166,251,25602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 00:32:896 (3) - move to x:304 y:280 (stack correctly) I was using the Grid --Fixed it now
  6. 00:35:880 (4,1,2) - it is better to make parallel :3
  7. 00:36:377 (1) - I prefer Ctrl+G was try to make a jumpy here :) no fix
  8. 00:44:168- add a note why QxQ
  9. 01:00:247 (1) - I prefer Ctrl+G K
  10. 01:02:568 (1,2,3) - increase DS QxQ no fix for now
  11. 01:02:733 (2,3) - it is better to make parallel K
  12. 01:06:215 (1) - end at 01:07:706- ? K


...wherer is SB? WIP sorry QxQ
~Good Luck~

iNickel

iNickel wrote:

Hi! I'm here from my queue!

[Easy]
01:08:203 (1,2,1) - This pattern looks bad! I recommend you to re-map this part like this: http://puu.sh/5VWA2.jpg
Sorry I want to make something special
02:29:760 (4) - I really don't like this slider shape, I recommend you this: http://puu.sh/5VWFU.jpg
Sorry I want to make something special
02:33:738 (3) - Remove this circle and make this slider longer 02:32:246 (2) - Like this: http://puu.sh/5VWLo.jpg
02:41:695 (3) - ^
Will I just want to strong the rythm……changed anyway
02:51:475 (4) - Remove this circle and do it like this: http://puu.sh/5VWOA.jpg
nope ><
[Insane]

00:03:555 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern feels really bad! I recommend you this: http://puu.sh/5W4Cy.jpg K
00:14:993 (1,2,3,4) - A bit boring pattern, try this: http://puu.sh/5W4KX.jpg , http://puu.sh/5W4LH.jpg >,<nope

So far, very good diff! :)

That's all!

Good luck!

thx a lot for your mods~~~ :3
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
most of this are suggestions

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:822 (36)- : k
  2. 00:16:485 (39)- : k
  3. 00:47:483 (136)- : remove, doesn't support anything
  4. 00:49:969 (142)- : move to 00:50:135
  5. 01:39:201 (279)- : remove
  6. 01:44:009 (291)- : D ? there's cymbal voice here
  7. 02:30:920 (426)- : move to 02:31:086 will be great
[Oni]
  1. solid mapset
goodluck =A=
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura
mutual req
草泥马我好想做个diff

[General]
这skin太有质感

[Easy]
00:08:528 (1,2,3,4) - blanket
00:46:323 (4) - 怎么看起来像老式滑调
00:58:258 (3,1) - 这间距坑爹
01:08:203 (1) - 泥垢--至少把顶端的描点拉对称吧喂
01:12:182 (1) - 太近了不好看

先看到这里吧【no KDS】，collab还没做完就不看惹
顺便求送GD
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
hi gougou~ from queue
[general]
kiai设置不合理,注意改一下
[Easy]
ar4?建议2或3
01:42:517 - 滑条上面结束kiai什么意思
00:15:988 - 建议加一个note
00:26:431 (1) - 尾向左下一点blanket
00:40:355 (1) - 没用的绿线可以删掉
01:24:117 (5) - 后面加breaktime
00:38:366 (3) - nc
00:46:323 (4) - nc
01:38:041 (4) - nc
01:46:992 (1,1) - 这一段感觉在偷懒o.o
02:09:868 (1,2,3) - 没blanket好 修一下
02:16:830 (3) - 后面感觉能加breaktime
02:23:792 (1) - 无用绿线删删删._.
02:29:760 (4) - 不建议easy里拉这种滑条
02:32:246 (2) - 后面加breaktime
02:41:860 - breaktime拉到这里挖
02:52:635 (1) - 绿线绿线 删

[Normal]
01:42:019 - kiai这里结束
00:10:517 (1,2) - 这跟的什么东西 违和 改一下
00:20:463 (1,2) - ^
00:39:360 (3) - ^
01:04:225 (1,2) - ^
01:18:149 (1) - ^
01:44:009 (1,2) - ^
01:47:987 (1,2) - ^
01:51:965 (1,2) - ^
02:52:138 (1) - delete
00:51:793 - 建议这个音不空
01:49:976 (3,1) - 有点overlap 移开
00:12:507 (1) - 建议长白线结束
02:52:635 (1) - 这转盘上这么多绿线能吃？
可以考虑slider tick rate+1然后在描点上加音效
烤肉zz
[hard]
建议找一个合适的音效,Normal的hitsound和默认的clap感觉有点吵
然后建议ar6
00:48:312 (1) - nc去掉.感觉没太大必要,而且还stack
然后这后面可以加一个breaktime
01:40:030 (1) - ^
02:01:745 (6) - 建议删掉,这里overmap没啥意义
02:03:735 (6) - ^真的想要这样吗o.o
02:31:749 (1) - 去nc后面加breaktime
02:39:706 (1) - ^ 还是按照mapper的想法来吧o.o
[collab]
00:50:301 - kiai这里结束
00:23:282 (6) - 前后ds保持一致美观些
00:27:923 (4,1) - 没blanket好
00:41:350 (1) - 前面一直跟vocal不如这里也跟vocal,而且跟hard难度里面的一样,不喜欢
00:47:317 (3,4) - blanket
01:11:685 (5) - 向右移动一点如何
01:45:501 (4) - 建议blanket
01:49:479 (4) - 有点overlap 向左移一点
02:06:719 (3,4) - 这里overmap有点违和
02:12:852 (3) - 尾上移一点blanket好
02:30:257 (2) - 尾左移blanket
02:38:214 (1,1,1) - 没必要nc
02:39:209 (1) - 没blanket好
02:41:860 (1) - 在02:43:187结束
感觉曲好怀念挖 :)
快rank
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura
soundeffect added
Ready for mod

yeah
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 02.A.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1004
PreviewTime: 36377
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11512,51295
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Doraemon no Uta
TitleUnicode:ドラえもんのうた
Artist:Satoko Yamano
ArtistUnicode:山野さと子
Creator:Troogle
Version:Insane's 615
Source:Doraemon
Tags:Tsukuyomi baldrace Evil Twilight ts8zs Autumn Accel world Sun Rainbow
BeatmapID:342228
BeatmapSetID:117857

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"images.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,52490,65464
2,120122,127129
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
572,497.293892402178,4,1,1,40,1,0
8528,-66.6666666666667,4,1,1,40,0,0
12507,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
24442,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
25768,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
36377,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
48312,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
49306,-200,4,1,1,50,0,0
50301,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
52290,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
76160,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
77486,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
88095,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
100030,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
102019,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
104009,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
127879,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
129205,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
139814,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
151749,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
153738,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
155727,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
159706,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
175619,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,77
Combo2 : 208,208,208
Combo3 : 77,157,255
Combo4 : 245,71,98
SliderBorder : 0,0,0

[HitObjects]
80,28,572,1,2,0:2:0:0:
140,88,737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,116,903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,172,1069,5,2,0:2:0:0:
360,224,1235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,1400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,256,1566,5,2,0:2:0:0:
128,320,1731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,348,1897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,336,2063,5,2,0:2:0:0:
356,268,2228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,2394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,167,2561,5,2,0:2:0:0:
165,85,2726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,6,2892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,6,3058,1,2,0:2:0:0:
352,88,3224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,167,3389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,260,3555,2,0,L|256:328,2,66.6666666666667,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,84,4053,1,2,0:2:0:0:
88,312,4550,5,2,0:2:0:0:
164,272,4716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,196,4881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,312,5047,5,2,0:2:0:0:
348,272,5213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,196,5378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,92,5544,5,2,0:2:0:0:
124,72,5710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,28,5876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,92,6042,5,2,0:2:0:0:
388,72,6208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,28,6374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,176,6539,6,0,P|188:208|176:240,1,66.6666666666667,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,312,6871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,176,7036,6,0,P|324:208|336:240,1,66.6666666666667,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,7368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,7534,5,2,0:2:0:0:
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56,68,119922,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,127879,12,8,129371,0:0:0:0:
256,376,129868,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,220,130199,2,0,L|188:232,1,66.6666666666667,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,130697,2,0,L|324:232,1,66.6666666666667
256,72,131194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,131360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,140,131857,6,0,P|112:208|68:256,1,133.333333333333
120,328,132354,2,0,P|188:308|256:328,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,348,132852,2,0,P|396:352|440:292,1,133.333333333333
464,216,133349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,136,133846,6,0,B|192:112|192:76|192:76|156:56|112:64,1,133.333333333333
288,192,134344,2,0,B|304:168|304:132|304:132|340:112|384:120,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,272,134841,2,0,B|136:296|136:332|136:332|100:352|56:344,1,133.333333333333
232,320,135338,2,0,B|248:296|248:260|248:260|284:240|328:248,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,176,135835,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,48,136167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,48,136333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,300,136664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,300,136830,2,0,L|256:232,2,66.6666666666667
80,300,137327,2,0,L|108:232,2,66.6666666666667,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,100,137825,6,0,P|216:40|280:16,1,133.333333333333,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,16,138322,2,0,P|420:39|444:100,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,188,138819,5,0,0:0:0:0:
356,304,138985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,172,139151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,268,139316,5,8,0:0:0:0:
184,384,139482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,252,139648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,116,139814,6,0,P|144:88|80:96,1,133.333333333333,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,116,140311,2,0,P|368:88|432:96,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,192,140808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,140974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,240,141140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,141306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,192,141803,6,0,L|56:316,1,133.333333333333
212,148,142300,2,0,L|281:34,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,240,142798,2,0,B|316:308|380:200|380:200|416:272|496:276,1,333.333333333333
256,192,143792,12,8,147273,0:0:0:0:
124,300,147770,6,0,P|196:320|256:304,1,133.333333333333,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,306,148268,2,0,P|212:252|200:184,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,187,148765,2,0,P|304:208|396:176,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,24,149594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,24,149760,6,0,B|244:36|200:24|200:24|160:32,1,133.333333333333
96,108,150257,2,0,P|120:176|128:240,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,232,150754,2,0,P|233:166|255:103,1,133.333333333333,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,100,151252,2,0,P|412:104|476:144,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,224,151749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,340,152246,5,2,0:2:0:0:
144,340,152578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,264,152743,2,0,B|244:208|312:192|312:192|380:128|280:100|280:100|268:60|236:52,1,333.333333333333,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,56,153738,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,224,154070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,224,154235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,192,154567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,192,154733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,356,155064,1,8,0:3:0:0:
304,360,155230,1,4,0:3:0:0:
384,328,155396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,264,155561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,176,155727,6,0,P|448:120|404:40,1,133.333333333333,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,51,156224,2,0,P|356:88|288:88,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,89,156722,2,0,P|304:160|284:220,1,133.333333333333
285,217,157219,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,332,157716,6,0,P|112:296|80:240,1,133.333333333333
176,88,158214,2,0,P|128:124|160:180,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,208,158711,2,0,B|304:168|360:268|464:224,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,80,159540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,80,159706,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,344,160203,5,2,0:2:0:0:
256,344,160534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,336,160700,2,0,B|184:264|256:256|256:256|340:284|400:276|400:276|424:216,1,333.333333333333,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,132,161695,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,161860,12,4,163684,0:0:0:0:
224,76,164181,6,0,P|188:136|180:204,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,76,164678,2,0,P|352:136|360:204,1,133.333333333333
360,196,165176,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,328,165507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,324,165673,5,4,0:0:0:0:
176,244,165839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,244,166005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,328,166170,2,0,P|356:272|352:200,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,244,166668,2,0,P|266:178|308:128,1,133.333333333333
384,88,167165,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,64,167496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,156,167662,6,0,L|92:296,1,133.333333333333,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,140,168160,2,0,L|236:280,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,180,168657,2,0,B|332:136|320:96|320:96|376:80,1,133.333333333333
452,56,169154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,312,169651,6,0,P|256:292|192:312,1,133.333333333333,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,280,170149,2,0,B|124:248|156:228|156:228|156:156,1,133.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,147,170646,2,0,P|313:175|248:183,1,133.333333333333
192,72,171143,6,0,P|256:92|320:72,1,133.333333333333,12|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,348,172635,22,0,B|184:336|236:340|236:340|152:308|152:276|152:276|120:256|180:232|180:232|72:164|72:80|168:4|212:-4|300:-4|344:4|440:84|440:172|336:232|336:232|392:260|356:276|356:276|360:312|276:340|276:340|336:336|384:352,1,1200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
神图 赶紧rank然后破千fav
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Nepu
615915887

615915887 wrote:

mutual req
草泥马我好想做个diff

[General]
这skin太有质感 hmm?

[Easy]
00:08:528 (1,2,3,4) - blanket 已修
00:46:323 (4) - 怎么看起来像老式滑调 已修
00:58:258 (3,1) - 这间距坑爹 感觉间隔时间足够长了
01:08:203 (1) - 泥垢--至少把顶端的描点拉对称吧喂 咦我觉得是对称的啊
01:12:182 (1) - 太近了不好看

先看到这里吧【no KDS】，collab还没做完就不看惹
顺便求送GD
GD和我的完全是两种风格，学习了/w\ 谢谢

ZZHBOY

ZZHBOY wrote:

hi gougou~ from queue
[general]
kiai设置不合理,注意改一下 好
[Easy]
ar4?建议2或3 已修
01:42:517 - 滑条上面结束kiai什么意思 已修
00:15:988 - 建议加一个note Nope
00:26:431 (1) - 尾向左下一点blanket 已修
00:40:355 (1) - 没用的绿线可以删掉 降奖分声音的
01:24:117 (5) - 后面加breaktime 太短了
00:38:366 (3) - nc 已修
00:46:323 (4) - nc 已修
01:38:041 (4) - nc 已修
01:46:992 (1,1) - 这一段感觉在偷懒o.o 囧/w\
02:09:868 (1,2,3) - 没blanket好 修一下 已修
02:16:830 (3) - 后面感觉能加breaktime 太短了
02:23:792 (1) - 无用绿线删删删._. 降奖分声音的
02:29:760 (4) - 不建议easy里拉这种滑条 看看别人
02:32:246 (2) - 后面加breaktime 太短了
02:41:860 - breaktime拉到这里挖 已修
02:52:635 (1) - 绿线绿线 删 降奖分声音的

[collab]
00:50:301 - kiai这里结束 已修
00:23:282 (6) - 前后ds保持一致美观些 不知道怎么改。。
00:27:923 (4,1) - 没blanket好 已修
00:41:350 (1) - 前面一直跟vocal不如这里也跟vocal,而且跟hard难度里面的一样,不喜欢 vocal的timing是不对的，25%听下
00:47:317 (3,4) - blanket 已修
感觉曲好怀念挖 :)
快rank
感谢mod~
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Lions' Modding Queue

Hard

00:39:195 (3,4) - swap places? circle before slider, better to place the slider on a white line, along with the solid beat behind it in the music
01:30:913 (3,4) - ^
01:45:998 (5) - NC here and remove NC at 01:46:992 (1) -
01:49:976 (5) - ^

Insane's 615

01:26:106 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap is weird, because the anti-jump (1) and (2) gives is out of place, and doesn't seem to fit into the song, along with the anti-jump at (3) and (4)
02:44:015 - add a note
02:51:143 (1) - possibly split this into 2 notes, and have a jump
02:52:635 (1) - the slider body joins near both ends. This makes it hard to discern if the slider body goes though each other. This is not good because then people do not know how to follow the slider. I don't think you can even rank that

Insane Collab

00:52:290 - make the break start at 00:52:290 - drag the line to it
01:02:733 (2,3) - make a jump between them
01:10:193 (1,2) - position it like this:
SPOILER
01:14:171 (5) - NC
01:15:000 (1) - remove NC
01:16:160 (4) - NC
01:18:150 (1,1,1) - this multiple NC is very random, because there is no follow up, I suggest using only 1 combo colour here
01:23:620 (1) - remove NC, NC at 01:24:117 (2) -
01:28:096 (1,2) - blanket better
01:38:041 (2) - NC here instead
02:29:760 (1,2) - blanket better by having 02:30:257 (2) - rotated more clockwise
02:37:717 (1,1,1,1,1) - again, why the NC spam
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Nepu
CoroQuetz

CoroQuetz wrote:

太鼓mod~
红色是一定要改

[Muzu's 8zs]
letterboxing和countdown要disable
00:42:841 (123) - d? 跟着音乐
00:47:483 (136) - 移到 00:47:649
01:34:560 (266) - d? 跟着音乐
01:39:201 (279) - 移到 01:39:367
01:39:865 (281) - 换乘小d
02:26:279 (413) - d? 跟着音乐
02:30:920 (426) - 移到 02:31:086
02:49:154 (482) - k? 跟着音乐

[Oni's 8zs]
letterboxing和countdown要disable
00:19:883 (126) - delete? 觉得这个有点overmapped了
02:41:778 (792,793) - delete? 这两个也是 :P
02:46:170 (816) - k?
02:49:154 (827) - k? 跟着音乐
02:51:143 (833) - k? 跟着音乐
Muzu > Oni 有很大的困难差异 :S 这个 Oni 可以说是 Inner Oni 那么难

多啦A梦~
lZenxl

lZenxl wrote:

I think there's a very serious problem in the mapset, I'm not sure though (I'm not an expert at Ranking Criteria):\
SPOILER
Contribution Ratio ( Percentage ):

Troogle : 4/3 ( 1 Map and Collab )
Tsukuyomi : 4/3 ( 1 Map and Collab )
Evil_Twilight : 4/3 ( 1 Map and Collab )
ts8zs : 2 ( 2 Maps )

The Ranking Criteria (Guideline) states :
No guest mapper should have more difficulties in the mapset than the creator, all modes together. For collaboration mapsets, the uploader should take part in all collab difficulties. The person who should upload the map is the one who contributed most to it.
Even though it is a guideline, I've seen maps getting locked/nuked temporarily until it is fixed

This might happen to your mapset

Please do change this quickly by mapping a kantan or futsuu in the mapset
Anyways

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

[Oni]Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

This is quite a "jumpy" map:
00:19:552 (123) - Remove | Having 2 triplets in a row makes it too smooth to have the "jumpy" feeling
00:33:393 (202) - k > K | Vocals on 00:33:890 (203,204) - are emphasized with finishes, I think 202 should have the same emphasis
00:39:858 - The break here seems to be quite weird, you can put in a simple pattern like this
00:48:312 (266) - d > D | More emphasis here since the music as a loud bass
01:31:576 - Fix this break also
02:23:295 - ^

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

Letterbox and countdown disable

Title Check

No Problems

Muzu :

00:49:969 (142) - Move 1/3 to the right

Can't find much problems in Muzu

Good Luck!
10nya

10nya wrote:

most of this are suggestions

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:822 (36)- : k
  2. 00:16:485 (39)- : k
  3. 00:47:483 (136)- : remove, doesn't support anything
  4. 00:49:969 (142)- : move to 00:50:135
  5. 01:39:201 (279)- : remove
  6. 01:44:009 (291)- : D ? there's cymbal voice here
  7. 02:30:920 (426)- : move to 02:31:086 will be great
[Oni]
  1. solid mapset
goodluck =A=

谢谢你们的mod><但是GD mapper决定不要他的diff了 :( :o
Thanks for your mods, unfortuntely the GD mapper decided to delete all his diff :( :o

neonat wrote:

Lions' Modding Queue

Insane Collab

00:52:290 - make the break start at 00:52:290 - drag the line to it Fixed xD
01:02:733 (2,3) - make a jump between them Fixed xD
Thx for mod :3
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
I started modding this and then I realised that this map isn't hybrid but ugh shyt that here I modded two diffs alr

Anyways, from Lion's modding queue desu

EASY

00:10:517 (3) - Move to x104 y76

00:14:993 (1) - Um... Actually beginners will have a hard time hitting this note because they spin crazy and won't find their cursor in time. I suggest shortening the spinner by a beat

00:42:841 (1) - ^ For this one probly shorten the slider by a beat and move forward. Either that or delete note

00:50:301 (3) - I feel a need to NC here

01:00:247 (1) - Spacing infringement.

01:30:084 (3) - NC

01:34:560 (1) - Same as 00:42:841 (1) make the slider shorter or eliminate note

02:40:203 (2) - Spacing here

Not much problems

NORMAL

01:46:992 (1,2) - Stack?

01:50:971 (1,2) - ^

Nothin

You have been (somewhat) modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
  3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
  1. Disable countdown, letterbox and widescreen support for all diffs.

[615]
1/3circle跳略多，太鬼畜，有点不适合歌曲，相对1/3滑条跳略少，有点失衡。NAM里看又一堆没用的绿线，其他难度就没多余的绿线。
  1. 00:02:394 (3,1) –这怎么不和前面一样也跳一下了？
  2. 00:03:058 (4,7) –这两个加nc?
  3. 00:12:507 (1) –这个起始点建议和00:08:528 (1) –的位置一样。
  4. 00:13:335 (6,1) –这俩间距为何突然减小了，和前面1到6比比。
  5. 00:13:501 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –没什么跳的必要，无意义的增加难度。
  6. 00:18:474 (1) –拉好看，对称？
  7. 00:25:436 (1,2,3,4) –太鬼畜，没跳的必要，这跳破坏了间距，已经不能很好的合曲，后面有些类似的不书了。
  8. 00:34:885 (2) –间距怎么就1.24了？后面不都是1.3吗？
  9. 00:43:173 –加circle?这有音。
  10. 00:49:306 (2) –加个NC，这突然减速我第一次打的时候就没看出=。=不要说用tick看什么的。
  11. 00:50:301 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) –这刻意在跳？看看三个重音00:50:301 (1,1,1) –间距反而是最低的三个。
  12. 01:06:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –都是这种间距的略无聊，这里没歌词是过门，建议用点小间距的或者1/3滑条。
  13. 01:27:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) –这弧度真奇葩。
  14. 02:27:770 (1,2,3) –我个人很不喜欢这梗，难看，在整个难度里特别突出。。看这个感觉还好点02:35:727 (1,2,3) –
  15. 02:47:662 (1,2,3) –等间距？
  16. 02:52:635 (1) –这个有点难看出滑条轨迹，在第二个红描点到底是往左上还是右上无法区分，最好换形状省的被BAT纠结。

[谷歌]
整个collab难度音效太轻根本听不见。
  1. 弧度略随机
  2. 00:06:042 (4) –这个弧度似乎太小，和00:05:047 (4) -00:07:037 (4) –比起来的话。
  3. 00:12:507 (1) –加个finish怎么样？
  4. 00:14:993 (1,2,3,4) –形状和间距都很猎奇，看起来不整洁。
  5. 00:19:469 (3,4,5,6) –突然平地起高山这么大间距干嘛=。=一点也不合曲。难度要有高低起伏跌宕不该难的地方就别刻意。在看看这里00:29:415 (3,4,5,6) -，没话书了
  6. 00:21:955 (4) –眼睛一看就看出这形状和00:20:961 (2) –不一样，如果是故意不一样也改掉，难看。
  7. 00:22:453 (5,6,7) –看起来也有点难看，要考虑间距还考虑blanket？我建议是00:23:282 (6) –叠到00:23:447 (7) –头上来。
  8. 00:28:420 (1,2) –看起来不一样，太明显了，这不一致很能吸引到注意的。
  9. 00:32:399 (2,2) –弧度上配合起来看不好看。
  10. 00:41:350 (1,1) –为什么要加这么多NC。
  11. 00:50:301 (1,1) –这可以跟跟乐器下些1/3滑条或者circle啊。而且00:51:627 -00:51:793 –有鼓音，可以突出一下。

[Autumn]
奥特木神mapper不得不服！
  1. 01:18:150 (1,1,1) –为什么加这么多NC，我觉得没必要啊。
  2. 01:35:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –有点overmap
  3. 01:58:099 (1) –转盘加clap

[Accel_world]
  1. 02:00:254 (2,3,4) –等间距为1.3，现在不等太明显了
  2. 02:00:917 (4,5) –对称并包好。
  3. 02:10:863 (3,4) -要么别blanket，要blanket就包好
  4. 02:12:852 (3,4) –^其实这个看起来比上面那个要明显。
  5. 02:33:738 (1) –这换成02:33:738 –note，然后转盘02:33:904 –起，会更好。就想你这02:41:695 (4) –一样
  6. 02:33:738 (1) –转盘加clap。
  7. 02:38:213 (1,1,1) –没必要搞nc spam，没任何意义。
  8. 02:46:668 (6,7) –等弧度？
  9. 02:49:652 (1,2,1,2) –包好或者别包顺flow
  10. 02:52:635 (1) –加圈在02:52:635 -，转盘起这02:52:801 –

[G神]
  1. 00:15:822 (2) –滑条尾加clap？有点空。
  2. 00:18:474 (1) –其实我建议你这分开放，这从头到尾都连着一起DS也没变略无聊啊。00:20:463 (1) –也是，每四个一组。其他地方类似，配合重音放点小跳。

[烤肉]
  1. 00:03:555 (3) –normal千万别多折返kick slider，坑死新手。上次用了连被两个BAT喷=。=
  2. 00:07:534 (3) -^，其他类似不说了。
  3. 00:26:431 (1) –漏Finish音效。
  4. 00:35:879 (4) –漏音效。
  5. 00:49:306 (2) –这snap到1/2上了啊喂。
  6. 00:47:317 (3,2) –碰一起了。

[Easy]
  1. 音效有点乱，吃不准加whistle和tick音的作用。
  2. 00:07:036 (3,1) –组合起来看着有些别扭，你自己检查下有没有做到复制粘贴再旋转180°吧
  3. 02:03:900 (1,2,3,4,1) –看起来不是正五边形？还有这02:05:392 (4,1) -包不起来太那个什么了吧。把光标停在02:05:061 –看收缩圈再看距离。
  4. 02:37:716 (1,2) –距离太近
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi,Troogle,In-game PM req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.只有615的難度有勾widescreen support，其他diff都沒勾，都勾上吧。
2.難度名故意顛倒?名字在前面吧。

[Easy's Player]

00:48:312 (2) - 加finish感覺不錯(不過音量要減小不然很吵)
00:50:798 (4) - 尾端的finish由於要break time了，所以建議前面綠線音量減小(10%~15%)，這邊蠻大聲聽起來怪怪。
01:40:030 (3) - 同00:48:312
01:42:019 (2) - 這個跟這邊 00:50:301 (3) 是同樣節奏呢，而且後面還少擺放，建議一致。
01:46:992 (1) - 兩個聽起來很吵，我覺得減掉前端的finish比較舒服和配合旋律。
01:50:971 (1) - ^
02:01:911 (3) - 看不要跟這個 00:18:474 (3) 節奏弄一樣。
02:13:846 (1) - ^ 00:30:409 (1) 。
02:31:749 (1) - 同00:48:312

[Normal's Yomi]

01:57:436 (4,5) - 節奏我覺得是這樣:
SPOILER
然後01:58:927 (6) - 這邊就加個折返試試。

[Hard's G] 01:42:019 (1) 這條線是重疊的，分別是S跟S:C1的音效，刪去S那條線?

沒什麼問題。

[Insane's 615] HP-1?

多餘的綠線:
00:24:442
00:25:768
00:48:312
00:52:290
01:16:160
01:17:486
01:40:030
01:44:009
02:07:879
02:09:205
02:31:749

00:05:544 (1,2,3) - 這兩組Ctrl+g試試，感覺不會拐手。
00:06:042 (1,2,3) - ^
00:07:534 (1,2,3,4) - 個人感覺應該是1~3保持同距，4可以開點。
00:14:496 (1) - Ctrl+g蠻順。
00:22:287 (5) - 照前面這樣聽，這個whistle是多出來的。(節奏跟01:12:182 (1) 一樣，但這後面就沒加。)
00:24:607 (2,2,2) - 全加有點吵，把這3個whistle刪掉比較適合節奏。
00:35:714 (5,7) - Remove whistle。
00:49:306 (2) - 變速要NC
01:06:380 (2,6) - Remove whistle。
01:27:266 (2,5) - ^
01:44:009 (1) - 感覺有點太大聲，降個10~15%?
01:59:922 (5) - 覺得這後面不應該break，因為這邊是主唱，imo.
02:35:064 (6,7) - 前面的節奏沒有用drum，這邊怎麼用drum了蠻奇怪。
02:51:143 (1) - 都不加finish感覺比較好。

[Insane's Collab]

00:43:670 (3) -
SPOILER
00:49:306 (1) - 試試ctrl+g?
01:15:663 (3) - 是不是少一個note +whistle?
02:09:868 (1,2,3) - 尾端靠到邊了(後面也是)，感覺不好看。
02:51:475 (3) - 覺得這個finish太大聲了還是減小一點音量吧。
02:41:695 (4) - 這個跟02:33:241 (3) 節奏是一樣的，建議擺一致。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

看了一下跟飛球沒得比呀
Accel World
Accel World

smallboat wrote:

Hi,Troogle,In-game PM req.

[Insane's Collab]

00:43:670 (3) -
SPOILER
00:49:306 (1) - 試試ctrl+g?
01:15:663 (3) - 是不是少一個note +whistle?
02:09:868 (1,2,3) - 尾端靠到邊了(後面也是)，感覺不好看。 都改了
02:51:475 (3) - 覺得這個finish太大聲了還是減小一點音量吧。ok
02:41:695 (4) - 這個跟02:33:241 (3) 節奏是一樣的，建議擺一致。 我思考了下,还是决定不动._。
这是Fycho的

[Accel_world]
  1. 02:00:254 (2,3,4) –等间距为1.3，现在不等太明显了 没看出哪里不对
  2. 02:00:917 (4,5) –对称并包好。强迫症不轻,fixed
  3. 02:10:863 (3,4) -要么别blanket，要blanket就包好 fixed
  4. 02:12:852 (3,4) –^其实这个看起来比上面那个要明显。fixed
  5. 02:33:738 (1) –这换成02:33:738 –note，然后转盘02:33:904 –起，会更好。就想你这02:41:695 (4) –一样 fixed
  6. 02:33:738 (1) –转盘加clap。ok
  7. 02:38:213 (1,1,1) –没必要搞nc spam，没任何意义。我错了哥哥
  8. 02:46:668 (6,7) –等弧度？ 没有特别的必要
  9. 02:49:652 (1,2,1,2) –包好或者别包顺flow 强迫症不轻,fixed
  10. 02:52:635 (1) –加圈在02:52:635 -，转盘起这02:52:801 – 感觉....意义不大

感谢mod :3
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura

Fycho wrote:

[615]
1/3circle跳略多，太鬼畜，有点不适合歌曲，相对1/3滑条跳略少，有点失衡。NAM里看又一堆没用的绿线，其他难度就没多余的绿线。
00:02:394 (3,1) –这怎么不和前面一样也跳一下了？ 再跳就没地方了
00:03:058 (4,7) –这两个加nc? 有道理
00:12:507 (1) –这个起始点建议和00:08:528 (1) –的位置一样。懒改
00:13:335 (6,1) –这俩间距为何突然减小了，和前面1到6比比。 好
00:13:501 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –没什么跳的必要，无意义的增加难度。 改了一下
00:18:474 (1) –拉好看，对称？ 好
00:25:436 (1,2,3,4) –太鬼畜，没跳的必要，这跳破坏了间距，已经不能很好的合曲，后面有些类似的不书了。 我觉得还好 但是我打不了
00:34:885 (2) –间距怎么就1.24了？后面不都是1.3吗？ 好
00:43:173 –加circle?这有音。 好
00:49:306 (2) –加个NC，这突然减速我第一次打的时候就没看出=。=不要说用tick看什么的。 好
00:50:301 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) –这刻意在跳？看看三个重音00:50:301 (1,1,1) –间距反而是最低的三个。 改了一下
01:06:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –都是这种间距的略无聊，这里没歌词是过门，建议用点小间距的或者1/3滑条。 改了个炒鸡难看的更梗
01:27:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) –这弧度真奇葩。 手拉别介意
02:27:770 (1,2,3) –我个人很不喜欢这梗，难看，在整个难度里特别突出。。看这个感觉还好点02:35:727 (1,2,3) – 抄collab的
02:47:662 (1,2,3) –等间距？ 改了下
02:52:635 (1) –这个有点难看出滑条轨迹，在第二个红描点到底是往左上还是右上无法区分，最好换形状省的被BAT纠结。这是艺术 还是改了下

smallboat wrote:

[Insane's 615] HP-1?

多餘的綠線:
00:24:442
00:25:768
00:48:312
00:52:290
01:16:160
01:17:486
01:40:030
01:44:009
02:07:879
02:09:205
02:31:749

00:05:544 (1,2,3) - 這兩組Ctrl+g試試，感覺不會拐手。有道理
00:06:042 (1,2,3) - ^ 好
00:07:534 (1,2,3,4) - 個人感覺應該是1~3保持同距，4可以開點。 渐开啊
00:14:496 (1) - Ctrl+g蠻順。 因为fycho的mod稍微改了下前面的
00:22:287 (5) - 照前面這樣聽，這個whistle是多出來的。(節奏跟01:12:182 (1) 一樣，但這後面就沒加。) 没whistle啊，其实是谷歌把whistle和鼓和在一起变成了clap
00:24:607 (2,2,2) - 全加有點吵，把這3個whistle刪掉比較適合節奏。 好
00:35:714 (5,7) - Remove whistle。 好
00:49:306 (2) - 變速要NC 好
01:06:380 (2,6) - Remove whistle。好
01:27:266 (2,5) - ^ 好
01:44:009 (1) - 感覺有點太大聲，降個10~15%? 弄成了40
01:59:922 (5) - 覺得這後面不應該break，因為這邊是主唱，imo. 懒做惹
02:35:064 (6,7) - 前面的節奏沒有用drum，這邊怎麼用drum了蠻奇怪。 神奇音效bybf
02:51:143 (1) - 都不加finish感覺比較好。我局的蛮好的

neonat wrote:

Insane's 615

01:26:106 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap is weird, because the anti-jump (1) and (2) gives is out of place, and doesn't seem to fit into the song, along with the anti-jump at (3) and (4) just a copy from sco
02:44:015 - add a note ok
02:51:143 (1) - possibly split this into 2 notes, and have a jump the rythm here is not normal,a slider can avoid missing the note
02:52:635 (1) - the slider body joins near both ends. This makes it hard to discern if the slider body goes though each other. This is not good because then people do not know how to follow the slider. I don't think you can even rank that changed to an uglyer one OAO
谢mod

@Troogle
osu file format v12

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324,340,152246,5,2,0:2:0:0:
144,340,152578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,328,155396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,264,155561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,344,160534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Evil_Twilight
587 posts
Joined July 2010
Evil_Twilight
RandomEffect
02:45:010 (5,6) - I prefer to combine them into 1 slider X

ZZHBOY
建议找一个合适的音效,Normal的hitsound和默认的clap感觉有点吵
然后建议ar6 X, 感覺ar6配這sv有點慢
00:48:312 (1) - nc去掉.感觉没太大必要,而且还stack
然后这后面可以加一个breaktime O, 不過berak就不加了
01:40:030 (1) - ^ 同上
02:01:745 (6) - 建议删掉,这里overmap没啥意义 X
02:03:735 (6) - ^真的想要这样吗o.o X
02:31:749 (1) - 去nc后面加breaktime
02:39:706 (1) - ^ 还是按照mapper的想法来吧o.o O

neonat
00:39:195 (3,4) - swap places? circle before slider, better to place the slider on a white line, along with the solid beat behind it in the music O
01:30:913 (3,4) - ^ O
01:45:998 (5) - NC here and remove NC at 01:46:992 (1) - X, why o.o?
01:49:976 (5) - ^ X

Fycho
00:15:822 (2) –滑条尾加clap？有点空。 O, 改成在2的頭和3加whistle了
00:18:474 (1) –其实我建议你这分开放，这从头到尾都连着一起DS也没变略无聊啊。00:20:463 (1) –也是，每四个一组。其他地方类似，配合重音放点小跳。 X, 這個問題我四暗刻了很久，但是就是這樣那樣所以還是不改了，你要知道我是真的思考很久

smallboat
01:42:019 (1) 這條線是重疊的，分別是S跟S:C1的音效，刪去S那條線? 有重疊的線嗎，我這裡看是沒有

沒什麼問題。

thanks for mod
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Nepu
yurunneram

yurunneram wrote:

I started modding this and then I realised that this map isn't hybrid but ugh shyt that here I modded two diffs alr

Anyways, from Lion's modding queue desu

EASY

00:10:517 (3) - Move to x104 y76 Fixed

00:14:993 (1) - Um... Actually beginners will have a hard time hitting this note because they spin crazy and won't find their cursor in time. I suggest shortening the spinner by a beat you are right ._. but I think the length(of the note) shouldn't be changed since they follow the music

00:42:841 (1) - ^ For this one probly shorten the slider by a beat and move forward. Either that or delete note you are right ._. but I think the length(of the note) shouldn't be changed since they follow the music

00:50:301 (3) - I feel a need to NC here Fixed

01:00:247 (1) - Spacing infringement. I think this part have enough time for people to react

01:30:084 (3) - NC Fixed

01:34:560 (1) - Same as 00:42:841 (1) make the slider shorter or eliminate note Same reason above ;w;

02:40:203 (2) - Spacing here Fixed

Not much problems

You have been (somewhat) modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Thx a lot anyway xD

Fycho

Fycho wrote:

[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
  3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
  1. Disable countdown, letterbox and widescreen support for all diffs. 修了

[谷歌]
整个collab难度音效太轻根本听不见。 我作图的时候是80%音效50%音乐的,,,修了但是我看了下collab和easy音效大小是一样的啊为何easy不挑，615音效声音比我还小
  1. 弧度略随机
  2. 00:06:042 (4) –这个弧度似乎太小，和00:05:047 (4) -00:07:037 (4) –比起来的话。都仔细的重摆过了
  3. 00:12:507 (1) –加个finish怎么样？ 修了
  4. 00:14:993 (1,2,3,4) –形状和间距都很猎奇，看起来不整洁。1和2是对角线，3和4是对角线，3指向4，no fix
  5. 00:19:469 (3,4,5,6) –突然平地起高山这么大间距干嘛=。=一点也不合曲。难度要有高低起伏跌宕不该难的地方就别刻意。在看看这里00:29:415 (3,4,5,6) -，没话书了 把后边改难了
  6. 00:21:955 (4) –眼睛一看就看出这形状和00:20:961 (2) –不一样，如果是故意不一样也改掉，难看。修了
  7. 00:22:453 (5,6,7) –看起来也有点难看，要考虑间距还考虑blanket？我建议是00:23:282 (6) –叠到00:23:447 (7) –头上来。OK
  8. 00:28:420 (1,2) –看起来不一样，太明显了，这不一致很能吸引到注意的。 修了
  9. 00:32:399 (2,2) –弧度上配合起来看不好看。 修了
  10. 00:41:350 (1,1) –为什么要加这么多NC。 修了
  11. 00:50:301 (1,1) –这可以跟跟乐器下些1/3滑条或者circle啊。而且00:51:627 -00:51:793 –有鼓音，可以突出一下。拆成了几个2/3的滑条

[Easy]
  1. 音效有点乱，吃不准加whistle和tick音的作用。whistle是为了和tick感觉一样下的
  2. 00:07:036 (3,1) –组合起来看着有些别扭，你自己检查下有没有做到复制粘贴再旋转180°吧 修了
  3. 02:03:900 (1,2,3,4,1) –看起来不是正五边形？还有这02:05:392 (4,1) -包不起来太那个什么了吧。把光标停在02:05:061 –看收缩圈再看距离。修了
  4. 02:37:716 (1,2) –距离太近 修了

感谢飞球的论文mod,辛苦了 xD

smallboat

smallboat wrote:

Hi,Troogle,In-game PM req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.只有615的難度有勾widescreen support，其他diff都沒勾，都勾上吧。 修了
2.難度名故意顛倒?名字在前面吧。 故意的

[Easy's Player]

00:48:312 (2) - 加finish感覺不錯(不過音量要減小不然很吵) 修了
00:50:798 (4) - 尾端的finish由於要break time了，所以建議前面綠線音量減小(10%~15%)，這邊蠻大聲聽起來怪怪。 修了，30%
01:40:030 (3) - 同00:48:312 实际上这些地方本来都是finish,嫌吵才换clap的
01:42:019 (2) - 這個跟這邊 00:50:301 (3) 是同樣節奏呢，而且後面還少擺放，建議一致。 想了半天还是没改。。。
01:46:992 (1) - 兩個聽起來很吵，我覺得減掉前端的finish比較舒服和配合旋律。
01:50:971 (1) - ^ 修了
02:01:911 (3) - 看不要跟這個 00:18:474 (3) 節奏弄一樣。不用了.w.
02:13:846 (1) - ^ 00:30:409 (1) 。不用了.w.
02:31:749 (1) - 同00:48:312 不用了.w.

[Insane's Collab]

00:43:670 (3) -
SPOILER
修了
00:49:306 (1) - 試試ctrl+g? OK

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

看了一下跟飛球沒得比呀

谢谢mod~很用心嗯,mod没啥比不比的,找到错就好xD
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MrUndeadLox
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MrUndeadLox
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