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Atsuki Watanabe - Dry Martini

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jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
Wow, I managed to not find anything wrong with Beginner and Normal
Mostly, these are suggestions.


LoogieStyle:
SPOILER
Really, this diff looks kinda stiff. It looks very limited to the spot where the combos are. And the curved sliders look ugly, IMO.
00:33:025 (5) - You can map this part if you want.
00:44:002 (4) - You could align it with 00:43:020 (1) -
00:55:061 (1) - You can also map this part and replace this slider with other elements.

Normal+:

SPOILER
Silence the slider ticks. Both 00:57:024 (1,1) - really sounds so off because of the slider tick hitsounds.


Expert:

SPOILER
00:43:020 (3,4) - Unintuitive spacing.
00:43:075 (7,8) - ^
00:57:024 (1,2) - ^

Though I think the map can still be made better, I'd still give it a star since I found minimal errors on the map, and the diffs are averagely good.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Beglinner
00:32:030 (2,1) - ... maybe a break time between these slider and beat...

Normal
It looks fine ^^

LoogieStyle
00:13:035 (4) - remove clap
00:39:039 (11) - new combo
01:14:042 (4) - no clap here

Normal+
00:59:042 (1) - a bit hard to catch the rhythm here... try to shrink it of a tick and move it a timing tick forward

Expert
00:59:028 (1) - move it to 00:59:042 (blue timing tick)

...I think that's enough, for this map...
I've seen Insane modes harder than this one, but spacing is well set on all modes ^^
Have your star :3
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Gens
I accepted... not so many suggestions. Sorry </3

jockeytiyan: Isn't it funny? Beginner and Normal were the difficulties I've remapped recently. I'd normally expect them to have more errors and stuff. :)
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
4,058 posts
Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
- General:
  • Second custom colour (blue) sometimes is really hard to see. I suggest making it a bit darker
- Beginner:
  • .Opinions:
    Good ^^
- Normal:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:57:24 (1) - maybe make it 1/4 longer? Seems to sound better that way
- Normal+:
  • .Opinions:
    Why not just call it "Hard"? xD
    .Suggestions:
    00:57:24 (1) - same as Normal
- Expert:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:58:47 - A beat here fits really well
- LoogieStyle:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:24:053 (6) - New combo? (because you have one in 01:16:87 (1) and it's the same pattern)
Great ^^
Have a star :P
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Gens

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General:
  • Second custom colour (blue) sometimes is really hard to see. I suggest making it a bit darker
Sorry, but I want to keep them consistent between ranked maps. :(

- Normal:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:57:24 (1) - maybe make it 1/4 longer? Seems to sound better that way
Not for me, at least.

- Normal+:
  • .Opinions:
    Why not just call it "Hard"? xD Oh, yes, I forgot to explain: I don't think it's really that Hard, also, the difficulty name "Hard" doesn't exist in the original games. What I can do is submit as "Advanced" though I'm not really sure (ack I'll need to update the background then). I'll wait for a second opinion.

    - Expert:
    [list:c542a].Suggestions:
    00:58:47 - A beat here fits really well
I don't think so.

- LoogieStyle:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:24:053 (6) - New combo? (because you have one in 01:16:87 (1) and it's the same pattern)
How did I missed this.
Thank you!
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
[Expert]
00:43:088 (8) - Spacing. It is hard to manage speed up and jump in the same time...

That's all I guess.... I think [Normal+] should be called [Hard] since it is hard enough and it gives players an idea how hard [Expert] would be like
Gens
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Gens
zzz fine I'll call it Hard
Just because you all told me. D=
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my my

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
No problems found

[Normal]
No problems found

[Loogiestyle]
00:09:026 (1) - Move the last slider point up by 1 grid, left by one grid, and move the slider right by 1 grid
01:01:060 (1) - ^
No problems found

[Hard]
No problems found

[Expert]
No problems found

A good beatmap with no problems as far as I can see. Have a well deserved star.
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Gens
Thanks!

By the way, someone needs to refresh the thumbnail, background has been updated a lot of times and it's a hell lot better now.
PhaseMetal
6 posts
Joined August 2008
PhaseMetal
The map is fun to play, and some of the slider combos are a blast. Great job!
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33

Normal :

00:29:166 (3); Extend by 1/4 beat and change the sound from clap to finish.
00:37:890 (3); ^
Eh. Star for you, Gens. Get this ranked already
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Gens
FuukoLover: But I like how it is right now. :(

Thanks for the star anyway!
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Lets see....

[LoogieStyle]

00:00:054 (1) - Note before the first offset.
01:03:051 (5) - Not snapped within the timeline.
01:05:028 (2) - ^
01:05:069 (4) - ^
01:07:019 (1) - ^
01:09:037 (1) - ^
01:09:092 (3) - ^
01:10:033 (1) - ^
01:12:010 (1) - ^
01:12:051 (3) - ^ (Make sure both points of the slider is resnapped.)
01:14:042 (4) - ^
01:16:019 (4) - ^


The rest of the map seems fine. The timing did feel odd at first, but its acually the flow of the map that makes it seem that way, not the timing itself (still a good idea to double check that though)
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Gens

JarJarJacob wrote:

Gens wrote:

I still don't understand why notes before the offset are unrankable
They aren't, remove the unnecessary offset.
AAAAAAA

Also, just a common "Resnap all notes" will do. I'll fix it in a bit. :P
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
beginner
00:57:038 (1,1) - move 1/4 back

Normal
sounds a bit weird, but i guess it's okay

LoogieStyle
looks good

Hard
looks good

Insane
00:43:088 (8) - uhh, doesn't play to well,not at all, space it

hmm, that's all, songs pretty catchy
*star
Gens
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Gens
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whymeman
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Joined November 2008
whymeman
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Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac
Gens is happy now that he doesn't have to waste any more kudosu stars.

A round of applause showers down.
ztrot
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Joined February 2008
ztrot
lovely
Gens
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Gens
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