madabau wrote:

Hi~
From my mod queue, sorry if it isn't really helpful...

[General]
-> If you can, change the the title "(TV Edit)" to "(TV Size)"no, this is the official song title
-> I think the BPM should be 144, the double of the current. (Because there should be some 1/8 beat)no, ranked version has 72 bpm and the intro clearly has 72 bpm in it
But I don't really good in timing, so you should confirm this with other people.

[Easy]
OD + 1no, this is easy, no need to
00:40:435 (5) - NCwhy? can't see a reason for this. The rhythm still uses the previous one
00:40:852 - Add a beat here (I think it's too blank) this is easy, no need to add a beat here. the silence is good too
00:41:685 - ^^
01:07:518 (4) - Move it to 01:07:727 and shorten it to 01:08:143
01:12:727 (2) - Extend it to 01:13:352
^If you do that, 01:13:352 (3) - Move it to 01:13:560 and shorten it to 01:13:977Changed this part ^

[Normal]
00:22:727 (2) - Extend it to 00:23:143did something else here
^If you do that, 00:23:352 (3) - Remove this
00:27:518 (3) - Move it to 00:27:310 ?
00:41:685 (6) - Add a beat
01:00:018 (3) - Extend it to 01:00:643
01:13:352 (3) - Extend it to 01:13:977
01:07:518 (5) - Move it to 01:07:310
01:21:268 (4,5) - Turn them into one sliderumm no to all above, doesn't really match with the song, and will break my rhythm

[Hard]
00:21:268 (4) - I don't really like this stacking, please move it elsewhere.the beat is still attach with the current vocal, so stacking is fit
00:56:893 (5,6) - Move them to 00:57:102 (5,6)
^if you do that 00:57:727 (6) - Remove the reverse and 00:56:893 - can add a beat here.
01:03:560 (5,6) - Move them to 01:03:768 (5,6)
^if you do that 01:04:393 (6) - Shorten it to 01:04:602 and 01:03:560 (5) - can add a beat here.
01:13:768 (5) - Turn it to a reverse slider?
01:17:102 (5) - Add a beat hereno to all of the rhythm chaning as I already mentioned on Normal, sorry

[With You]
For me, the jumps make me uncomfortable since this is a relaxing song. Consider decreasing the jumps and distances.
00:21:268 (6,7) - A too sudden jump for me. Please move it closer.deleted (6) to make the jump smaller
00:18:768 (1,2) - Makes me uncomfortable. Maybe you can make a better pattern?Not really a big problem and there are many ranked maps using this pattern, so no change
00:32:518 (2,3) - ^
01:16:477 (3) - Moves it upper to make the flow better.
00:41:060 (11,1) - The distance is a bit too far, please move it closer.uhh, is fine actually

Nice map, good luck!

_AI wrote:

From the modding queue:

[Easy]
I will skip this

[Normal]
~No problem

[Hard]
00:02:102 (1) - Remove NCthis is to keep consistency with all of the comos in the mapset, so no change
00:18:352 (7) - Add a noteit already is?
~Solid difficulty

[With you]
01:08:143 (1,1) - Rhythm is odd + the jump is too bigwill keep this for now since this follows the background music, and I like the rhythm :p

uh.... hope it helps ? o.o anyway here's a star >.o/ solid mapset Thanks for the mod Ai, even I did no change, but it helps ouo/

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 here's your mod

With You
first, maybe you need a higher difficulty setting, with HP7 and OD7, AR7 or 8 as you wish. After all you already have a Hard diff so I think this is supposed to be an Insaneokay fixed~
00:03:560 (4) - you may wanna avoid this overlap, considering that this rarely happened at other parts of your mapalso fixed, I was mapping this in the beginning, didn;t notice the rest is changed:p
00:15:227 (2) - as you're following vocal, I suggest that you replace this with a circle and start a slider at 00:15:435 - and remove 00:15:643 (1) - then the rhythm may be more intuitivefixed
00:16:268 (3,4) - also a bit too intense rhythm for this part, because you're hesitating between vocal and piano, and that throws player off, you used 00:16:268 (3) - to show that you're mapping to vocal, but you didn't start a slider at 00:16:893 (4) - to follow the "zu~" , and 00:17:102 (5) - would be really surprisingwoot, fixed by using long slider at Zu~
00:20:227 (5) - whistle head for vocal, or whistle at mid for piano, you should at least one I thinkuse one for the head
00:31:477 (7,8) - what are these 2 circles doing here? too weird to make the rhythm like this. you may try to start a 1/2 slider at 00:31:268 -fixed by using a 1/2 repeat here
00:37:518 (1) - a little weird small spacingwas aiming for an antijump, but oh well, fixed
00:38:352 (3,4) - I think you messed up the rhythm again, better choose only one from vocal and piano. you can a rhythm like http://puu.sh/4RkJi.jpg . In this way you can keep the piano sound and at least players don't need to hit anything at 00:38:768 - because when they think you're following vocal they would like to see sliders at long vocal tonefixed by changing the rhythm like yours with a bit differential
00:42:102 (1) - better turn down the volume for the single finish sound, too abruptfixed through all diff
00:44:185 (5,6,7,8) - better merge them into a pair of sliders, 4 circles are too intenseused 1/2 slider 2x
00:48:768 (1) - this is again confusing, who would know that you'll abandon the vocal at 00:48:560 - except yourself?changing the rhythm from the last part to make a similar with this one, so it will become more readable
00:55:435 (1) - also add a clap on headfixed
01:02:102 (1) - better use a big distance for this instead a small one, to emphasize the strong beat herekeeping this since I feel anti jump fits better
01:08:768 (1) - this is really hard throughout this diffalso keeping this since I saw many great slow maps use this pattern and I also like it so much:p
01:11:477 (7,1) - could avoid small overlapwelp fixed
01:12:727 (3) - why do you add more whistles like thisoops, removed
01:14:393 (1) - a bit hard, and the NC is confusing? cause this slider is coherent with 01:13:977 (6) - but not with 01:15:227 (2) - , and you used a small distance at 2, really not intuitivekeeping this since this is also similar with a part in the beginning kiai, changed a bit though
hmm, I think you raelly reconsider about the rhythm at kiai part, you almost spammed it with 1/2 beats all the way, consider to use some long sliders and use some gapsadded a few more 1/1 slider to a few part, but still, can't really find where I spammed this much u.u

Hard
00:01:685 (1) - too hard to know when to hit this, could just set a 1/4 reverse at 00:01:477 -fixed
00:08:352 (5) - also confusing, what does it mean to set a single circle at the mid of a word
00:15:018 (5) - ^^ fixed all kind of those wih 1/4 repeat, so stupid of me ugh
I don't understand why the rhythm is always the same from here 00:42:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:45:435 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:48:768 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:42:102 - same as that in Insane, and for other diffs
hitsound suggestions are quite the sameFixed~

Normal
00:01:685 (1,1) - suggest to avoid 1/2 stacks in Easy and Normal, it may be confusing for new players. Just simply split them upsplitted
00:08:352 (5,1) - the rhythm like this is ok in here as it's a Normal and almost consistent 1/2 is intuitive I think, but plz don't do this in Hard you should knowhard has same rhythm because it really fits with vocal, and I don't really want to make a complex hard ouo
00:50:852 (5) - whistle end?added
01:05:227 (1,2) - this kind of 1/4 stacks are ok, not like 1/2 stacksokie dokie~
01:22:102 (6) - hyw is this 20% volume, You're interesting to make every diff with different volume, plz make them consistent, check your Easy, Normal, Hard and Insane. Better make them all like what you've did in Easy. an ordinary volume finish and then turn down the volume of the spinneroops, fixed

Nothing need to say for Easy but more whistles like mentioned beforeFixed

That's all, good luck

Thanks for the mod Zero__Wind, it really helps

Fr33z3R wrote:

Hi :3hi~ :3

[General]
EGOIST <3
I'm modding up to Hard diffs only. Forgive me. >_<'s okay><
Set the Slider Tick Rate to 2. It works really well especially on chorus.fixed
[Easy]
00:02:102 (1) - Remove NC? Too early for that imo. :3welp, fixed throughout all diff, firstly because it emphasize a stanza but, w/e
[Normal]
00:02:102 (1) - Same with Easy. I don't know if others like this idea. I just don't feel like it. >_<^
00:56:685 (3) - Add Whistle. It would be nice if you could add some of those. haha no, decided not to insert whistles on kiai
01:10:018 (3) - ^Y
[Hard]
00:21:268 (4) - The circle here is barely visible. Suggest having it not stacked with 00:20:227 (3).plays fine I guess :v, the stacks is for connecting vocals/bg music
00:56:893 (5) - Whistle
01:03:560 (5) - ^
01:10:435 (5) - ^^ as stated on normal
[Conclusion]
Really nice map I love it. Love the song as well. Good luck! i hope this gets ranked.Yay! Thanks for the mod fr33z3r>v<

gideon5504 wrote:

Hi, from M4M queue :3

General:
~Volume suggestions apply to all diffs.

Easy:
~00:00:000 - I think 50% volume is too loud as you've used only 20% for most parts. I suggest to keep the volume consistent even if it was intentional as the intro is soft.
~00:01:685 (1) - This note doesn't follow any beat, remove it.
~00:28:768 - You could raise the volume here a bit to follow the volume increase in the music.
~00:27:102 (2,1) - Curve them pls, it's boring if there are straight sliders for such a slow song.
~01:01:060 (3) - This slider's timing is confusing to beginners.
~01:07:518 (4) - Why is this so quiet all of a sudden? Doesn't make sense to me as there is no effect to it. 0.o
~01:07:102 (3) - Remove clap. Sounds inconsistent.
~01:07:518 (4) - Add clap on both head and end, works fine.
~01:12:102 (1,2) - Remove claps.
~01:12:935 (2) - Add clap on slider head.

Normal:
~00:01:685 (1) - Again, this deosn't follow anything, pls remove.
~This diff is quite similar to easy diff, but u've added the 1/2 beats after a slider. I think you could try to make this a little more different or it'll feel the same playing both easy and normal.

Hard:
~00:08:768 (1) - DS problem.
~00:13:768 (3,4) - ^ Snapping them further away makes more sense.
~Fix DS behind 00:14:602 after change.
~00:32:102 (1) - Sudden stop. Extend to red tick, the slider follows too precisely and not leaving space for the fading sound.
~01:02:102 (1) - Unnecessary clap. Remove pls.
~01:08:768 (1) - ^
~01:12:102 (1) - ^
~01:15:435 (1) - ^
~01:18:768 (1) - ^ You could add a finish on head though. to keep consistent with the other sliders.

With You:
~00:08:143 (6) - NC here to emphasis change of pace.
~00:17:935 (9) - Move it down, it's almost touching the HP bar.
~01:08:143 (1) - If you want to slow this SV down, then snap the slider end to the blue tick for more time to react to 01:08:768 (1). Furthermore, snapping the slider there fits the music more.
~01:08:768 (1) - DS this properly after change.
~01:12:102 (1) - Remove clap.
Nice diff :3

Overall, it's a pretty neat map. Now try to focus on the volume control. Good luck!~ Fixed all volume suggestion, although the volume is on my liking, and that DS on hard is intentional and I guess it's fine~ Thanks for the mod gideon :3

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]

1. 00:11:893 (1,2) - I prefer to change for 1 slider: 00:11:893~00:12:727fix
2. 01:07:518 (4) - hitsound volume is too small. I can hardly hear the clap]intentional thoughout all diff since this is the lead in to the next kia
3. 01:15:435- remove clapno

[Normal]

1. 01:02:102- clap?
2. 01:08:143- ^
3. 01:08:768- ^no to all above since the claps are only used every 3rd white tick
   

[Hard]

1. 00:01:477 (1,2,3) - make DS 1.0xdoes it really matter? fix
2. 00:14:810 (5,1) - ^
3. 00:21:268 (4) - I prefer to deleteno, this is to keep the flow going
4. 01:08:143- clap?
5. 01:15:435- remove clap
6. 01:17:102- add a noteno this is intentional for the silence gap and for the next rhythm too
7. 01:18:768- remove clapalso no to all the clap above

[With You]

1. 01:12:727- this clap is unnatural. 01:12:935 is better (but need to remap)this is to keep the vocal and it will be awkward to insert a whistle

if you fix clap position, this map would be better, i think
sorry for my poor hit-sound suggetion (I'm weak in hitsound) then why do you mod the hitsound then--"
~Good Luck~thanks for your mod RandomEffect