Genshin wrote:

let's MOD:

General:
in tutte le difficoltà hai iniziato a mappare da 00:12:064 - , vai su quel tick bianco, fai f6 e seleziona "use current time", onde evitare successive rotture di scatole in mod future. (lo dico per esperienza) quello NON e' l'inizio della battuta

fix audio per TUTTE le difficolta'
da 00:12:064 - a 00:30:593 - : inherit point > volume 75%
da 00:30:887 - a 00:50:005 - : inherit point > volume 40%
da 00:59:418 (1) - a 01:17:065 (1) - : inherit point > volume 80%
da 01:27:652 (1) - a 01:45:300 (1) - : inherit point > volume 40% (o 35)
da 01:55:006 (1) - a 02:13:535 (1) - : inherit point > volume 80%
da 02:24:124 (1) - a 01:55:006 (1) - : inherit point > volume 20% E METTI SOFT SAMPLESET
da 02:34:712 (1) - a 03:18:830 (2) - : inherit point > volume 100% (tornando a normal sampleset)

lo faro'
[Rakuen's Normal+]
HP -1

00:28:535 (1,2,3) - a bit exceeding for a normal...even with +
else is okay

[Crazy]
HP6
OD7

00:14:124 (1) - leva nc fatto
00:16:918 (6) - leva nc fatto
00:17:065 (7) - nc
00:18:241 (1) - leva nc

00:31:183 (3) - finish qui (inizio slider)
00:35:888 (3) - ^
00:59:418 (1) - finish (inizio slider)
01:08:830 (1) - ^
01:26:477 (1) - fai finire lo spinner qui e aggiungi una nota con finish a 01:27:652 (1) - (sovrapposta al 2 attuale magari 01:28:094 (2) - )
01:32:359 (3) - finish (inizio slider)
01:55:741 (4) - finish (fine slider)
02:05:300 (1) - finish (inizio slider)
02:34:712 (1) - finish (inizio slider)
02:44:124 (1) - finish (inizio slider)

ganbatte! grazie <3

TheVileOne wrote:

Mod

General
Use offset 2967 and resnap all your notes, inheriteds, and preview times.
What is ∞ doing in the title? dunno, you should ask HitoshizukuP

Easy
Needs more hitsounds. Listening to the same dull thud after awhile gets boring. I will rate down maps that lack the necessary hitsounding to keep me interested in playing.

00:14:731 (3,4,5) - By turning grid snap off you can fix spacing differences like this. Spacing isn't divided evenly across the grid at certain angles. Grid snap off ensures that the spacing is perfect.
00:15:908 (5,1) - The alignment can and should be better here. In general it will look better if curved sliders or note curves make a seamless curve. It should look like the objects make one single arc. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/927458 now it looks much smoother
00:31:202 (1) - This shouldn't be the only clap in this section. It should go along with some form of consistent hitsound rhythm. Try adding a clap here as well 00:34:731 (5) - . That is a very basic pattern. you could make it more interesting by adding a clap every other hitcircle. Add clap, skip circle, and then add clap. You could make the pattern even more complex by adding whistles to the skipped over circles. You can choose how involved you want the hitsounds to be. the later parts seem to indicate that you do know how to hitsound correctly.
00:35:908 (1,2,3,4,5) - New some form of hitsounding as well. The previous approach to hitsounding could work, but there may be something even better. you could try adding a clap then skipping two circles, then adding a clap again. If you want to be real fancy you could add a whistle sound after each clap.
00:41:202 (2,3,4) - also very hitsoundable. I might want to go light on the hitsounding here. Maybe leave 4,5 unhitsounded!
00:44:143 (5,1) - Too close.
01:00:614 (2,3,4) - Make spacing exactly 0.80 here or the exact same spacing at least.
01:10:025 (3) - I'm not sure about this being a clap. It doesn't benefit the song at all. The previous object sounds better as a clap.
01:19:437 (3) - not sure if i like this forming a straight line with 2 or where you have it. I guess it's a matter of personal preference.
01:55:908 (1) - you start first kiai with a finish. Why is there not one here?
01:58:261 (3,4) - These were whistles in first kiai. Add whistles
Okay there are several hitsounding difference in second kiai. It should be the same hitsound patterns for both. go through and make sure the hitsounding is consistent.
02:24:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Technically needs very minimal hitsounds since it's mostly vocals. There are patterns that can be hitsounded here. I'll just leave it as it's possible. 02:24:143 (1,2) - this sound pattern continues and could be used for a hitsound pattern.
02:32:378 (2) - Add soft finish to the end.
02:35:908 (2,3,4,5) - I think hitsounds would spice this part up. More whistles would be nice for the entire kiai.
02:40:025 (1,2,3) - whistles on 1,3
02:41:790 (4) - although I feel this is bland without hitsounds, at this volume the sounds overpower the song when I add them. a finish on start would work.
02:42:967 (5,1) - whistle on these circles (start of 1).
02:43:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - The notes that bridge the gap are good hitsounding notes.
02:48:849 (1,2,3,4) - finish on 1, whistles on 2,4. also this curve look lumpy. Make a smooth transition?
02:53:555 (3) - Try having a new combo here to make the change of pace more identifiable.
It's pretty easy to identify places where hitsounds would go well here. Try to find rhythms and experiment a bit.
03:02:967 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I was on the fence about the previous version being difficult for the easiest difficulty. This is too many notes at this timing in a row for the easiest difficulty. I recommend removing some of the notes to make it simpler. i've made it way simpler

thank you for all the hitsound suggestions, i didn't follow them all, but they have been a precious guideline. Thank you again!

Crazy

00:18:681 (2,3,4,1) - A bit cluttered with the overlap, but the process to fix the overlap just creates a mess out of your patterns. It's probably not worth fixing. Let this just be a comment. Don't screw up your flow trying to fix this.
00:23:534 (1,2,3,4) - The randomness confuses me here. I can't play it that well in general though. I don't like this random spacing in maps and prefer symmetry. it doesn't need to be symmetrical, but the more consistent it appears the easier it will be to read. i think it feels very easy to play if spacing goes decreasing as the pattern leads to the successive one
00:26:769 (2,3,4) - Why a triple? wouldn't a slider make more sense? yes, i think you're probably right, i put it there "to make a try" and now it's still there, and i love it like a son. i'll probably get rid of it soon, but honestly it feels fun to play for me
00:28:240 (3,4) - I think I tolerate this pattern rather than actually like it. If you changed the curve slightly you can get a blanket here.
00:38:240 (1,2) - Why does this one start spaced differently? Although this pattern seems even less reliant on slider positioning. Maybe there is a way you could even out the spacing to make it more consistent. fixed. some of these spacings fucked up when i switched from CS 5 to 4
00:44:416 (2,3,4,5) - Looks out of place IMO. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/927644 <- Much better than a rectangle pattern. very nice idea
00:45:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pattern isn't cleanly made. The transition from the first shape into the second one doesn't form anything particularly interesting. The stack leniency messes with the spacing, and the second pattern's stack is 0.05 off being 0.90 snap like the other patterns.I suggest making a symmetry pattern of sorts with the first two patterns. I came up with this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/927660 Slight adjust to the slider shape on the right and repositioned the stack to better align with the slider end. Copied that pattern and flipped vertically and then horizontally. i agree
00:46:475 (1,2,3) - Slider adjust to make it similar to the other shapes. i think i got it with a ctrl H on the previous slider
01:00:446 (4) - I think it looks better if it were placed somewhere between the two sliders like around x 254, y 118 it would be
01:00:151 (3,1) - The slider angles are different. ._. oops
01:00:887 (2,3,4,5) - This is an unusual pattern, but it flows nicely. thank you!
01:06:475 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Confusing. Don't switch directions and spacing for the middle column. no fear ctrl g is here
01:16:475 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this. I would prefer not to jump and had hitsounds. hitsounded and switched 2 and 4. i might reverse this last change btw
01:28:534 (4) - Move 1 grid 3 unit up. moved to make spacing consistent
02:02:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pain to sightread, but okay. I would have had the first two object as a slider and had done a different pattern.
03:07:063 (4,5,6,7, 1)- feels weird to play. it has to
03:09:269 (2) - Properly stack on the slider end. i dont know how did you notice that....wp

Already been working on this for hours. I'm going to save the remaining difficulty for another day, so i can work on my own maps.

ignobeatmapskin wrote:

Hi~

General

Turn off grid snap for more consistent spacing.

Eazy

00:20:603 (5) - try to have a blanket of 00:19:426 (3) hard with distance snap
00:25:308 (4) - start the slider at the position of 00:22:956 (2) imo the overlap is more pretty i dont think i will do it because i like the next part and i would have to change if i do this, i'll think about it btw
00:30:014 (4) - have a 0.81x prev are you fucking kidding me?
00:35:897 (1) - better blanket hard with distance snap
00:37:661 (3) - ^
01:20:603 (4) - more smooth angle
01:26:485 (6) - Use similar angle with 01:27:661 (1) done
01:37:073 (1,2,3,4) - turn off drid snap for consistent spacing done
02:40:014 (1,2,3) - ^ done
02:48:838 (1,2,3,4) - ^ done
02:57:073 (1,2) - ^ done
03:00:603 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Normal+

Nice~

Crazy

00:14:132 (1) - change grid level to 4 and place red dots about the middle done
01:05:750 (3) - place at the position of start of 01:04:867 (4) i want 01:05:456 (1,2,3) to be as regular as possible
01:56:926 (5,3) - not pretty overlap. Overlap completely or place further. done, i placed (5) away from (3)
02:02:073 (3,4,5) - Use the same type of slider you make me laugh hard
02:05:897 (4) - place at the position of 02:04:720 (1) without any precize reason
02:10:897 (4) - Don't place between 1 and 2, but beyond 2? done, i might revert it
02:35:897 (1) - place at the position of 02:36:779 (4) u are sick
02:37:367 (3) - place start at the position of 02:37:956 (6) end done
02:40:897 (2) - blanket with 02:40:456 (5) they're not meant to be blanketed
03:06:779 (3) - blanket with 03:06:485 (1) done

Good Luck~

Flower wrote:

Mod as promised

[General]
Though you have a Normal+, I think you still need a Hard (or Hard+, or Normal-) to make the difficulty spread balanced.

[Crazy]
00:14:132 - add finish? done
00:17:367 - add clap, and remove clap on 00:17:514 - this makes pattern neat. done
00:21:191 - add whistle and remove clap? i think it's nicer like this
00:21:485 (4) - move to x:204 y:56 to let the 00:21:779 (1) - more readable done
00:23:544 (1,2,3,4) - strange and ugly jump. re-arrange the notes to make them more visible. i want to change them but i can't find anything that satisfies me more than this..i'll try many shapes later. I think i've solved it!
00:25:897 (1,2,3,4) - they are not symmetrical. move the notes to make them look cooler. i didn't notice that, thank you very much
00:26:779 (2,3,4) - move to x:260 y:210 and move 00:27:073 (5,6) - accordingly. this makes them look better. done
00:27:661 (1) - move it to y-axis and arrange the nods properly, so it lands right in the centre. simply perfect

SPOILER

00:28:103 (2,3,4) - move 2 to y-axis and stack 4 under 2. like this: awesome, i corrected 00:28:838 (1,2) too to make 2 overlap 4's tail

SPOILER

00:28:838 (1,2,3,4) - arrange the position to make them look neater. done ^

SPOILER

01:01:191 (3,4) - arrange 3's shape so 4 don't touch 3's start. (use ctrl+G when necessary) done

SPOILER

01:07:367 (3) - NC. it should look better. done
02:09:867 (6) - move 2 grids to right done
03:18:838 (2) - This slider in unrankable because it overlaps itself. Even you like this, please change to other patterns before a BAT check. ç_ç why it is so cool ç_ç stupid rules

[Eazy]
Nothing to say, but I don't recommend the repeating sliders like 00:17:073 (1) - , as beginners may not be able to deal with sliders that repeat 2 times. oh didn't know that..let's say this will be a double-repeat-sliders training map

Good luck~

Leorda wrote:

Yo~

[Eazy]
00:17:073 (1,2) - More than one repeating slider can be confusing for beginners because they don't know when it's end. Consider to decrease one repeating slider for each slider. And please follow this when some slider have a same issue as this ok i'm gonna try and find a solution EDIT: ok done
01:10:603 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody? It feels annoying, but oh well that was a mistake, and i didn't notice that because i have no sliderbody hitsounds
01:42:956 (1) - Why new combo? why not? changed btw
02:07:074 (4) - Same suggestion as 01:10:603 (4) done


[Rakuen's Normal+]
01:08:250 (5) - Shorten to white tick? Since your previous slider is following the vocal?
01:22:956 (1) - I think this spinner is follows the vocal of Miku, I guess.... Why not end this spinner to 01:27:073? Having end at red tick and follow the weird effect of music can be weird to heard
01:35:603 (3) - This slider can be make a blanket combo pattern perfectly by click the 2nd sliderpoint with Shift button, and make sure it perfectly blanket'd and stack the tail slider to previous tail slider for best result (?)
02:02:956 (6) - New combo for preventing of long combos
02:11:779 (1,2) - Swap new combo? Since the vocal part are changed?
03:17:073 (8) - New combo? Since the vocal part are changed?


[Crazy]
01:14:426 (3) - Reverse this slider to make a round flow. You current one is uncomfortable, IMO done, i like this one
01:56:632 (3,4) - Bad flow, due to random directions, IMO. Swap this placement to make better flow i know that it would flow better with (3) blanketed by (2), but i need them to go towards (5) and it's not a big deal. the most important thing is that it feels good to play


Good luck then~

Flower wrote:

Mod as promised

[General]
Though you have a Normal+, I think you still need a Hard (or Hard+, or Normal-) to make the difficulty spread balanced.

[Normal+]
very few hitsound is added. please consider adding more, especially claps. - Fixed.
00:59:426 (2) - this really breaks the flow. why not changing to 2 sliders? - Fixed.
01:06:485 (1) - the reverse arrow is a bit overlapped. consider about this. - Fixed.
02:11:779 (1) - ^ - Fixed.
02:34:720 (1) - same as 00:59:426 (2) - - Fixed.
03:02:367 (6) - ^ - Fixed.

Good luck~

gideon5504 wrote:

Here's ur free mod

General:
~

Rakuen's Normal+
~00:28:544 (1,2,3) - I dun recommend stacking the heads together in normal (even normal+ ) Cuz it's quite confusing if the player has no experience in hard maps yet. - I think just put Hard maybe? :3.
~01:37:073 (2) - Add finish on head. - Fixed.
~01:40:750 (4) - This comes suddenly and doesn't really fit the music.. That's why you shouldn't skip the downbeat here 01:40:603 . Why not just do something like this? http://puu.sh/44LYz.jpg - Keep at the moment.
~02:40:014 (3,4) - Same thing about stacking slider heads. - Will consider.
~02:43:544 (5) - This shape looks out of shape. I dun think the red dot is necessary. Keep at the moment.
~03:19:132 - Stack a note here after slider? Don't like maps with last hit of circle.

Good luck!~

Leorda wrote:

Yo~

[Rakuen's Normal+]
01:08:250 (5) - Shorten to white tick? Since your previous slider is following the vocal? - Fixed.
01:22:956 (1) - I think this spinner is follows the vocal of Miku, I guess.... Why not end this spinner to 01:27:073? Having end at red tick and follow the weird effect of music can be weird to heard - Fixed.
01:35:603 (3) - This slider can be make a blanket combo pattern perfectly by click the 2nd sliderpoint with Shift button, and make sure it perfectly blanket'd and stack the tail slider to previous tail slider for best result (?) - Fixed, didn't know we can stack perfectly with shift orz.
02:02:956 (6) - New combo for preventing of long combos - Fixed.
02:11:779 (1,2) - Swap new combo? Since the vocal part are changed? - Fixed.
03:17:073 (8) - New combo? Since the vocal part are changed? - Fixed.

Good luck then~

kelvinli wrote:

Ciao! M4M as promised

[General]
seems ok!

[Crazy]
Hp-1? i think it's ok, if i can finish this most people won't have problems
00:12:073 (1,2) - By the start most player can predict the distance between (2) and (3), however you may see the distance between (1) (2) and (3) are very similar! You might consider move (1) to a relatively higher spot good idea
00:17:514 (3,4) - Move them to the right so that (2) and (4) aren't overlapping! done
00:19:279 (4) - Put it like in the following for a better flow: if you followed this one, you might want to stack the coming (1) with (3), while remaining (2) unmoved. it's fine as it is, this change would ruin the whole parttern

SPOILER

00:24:426 (2,3,4) - they have minor overlapping issues. Don't be so obsessed with DS in this case, use 1.00x (or 0.90x) fixed. i've not used DS at all here btw
00:31:044 (1) - from this part onwards, for every 2nd/4th white line (also widely known as upbeat), use normal sampleset and soft for claps, if you don't know what I mean, see the following image i don't like it, but i'll consider this when i'll try with others hitsounds too

SPOILER

00:35:456 (1) - This NC is not needed
00:36:191 (4,5,6) - The similar overlapping issue! fixed again
00:37:808 (3,1) - this two, too fixed
01:01:632 (4) - instead of putting it behind (3) you could put it somewhere else like this for a better flow: nope

SPOILER

01:09:132 (2) - done

Pictures are better than words

01:09:720 (4) - if you accept the above suggestion, shape it like this:(if you don't it can still be applied) Changed, not like this one but it needed to be changed

SPOILER

01:16:485 (1,2,3,4) - make something inclined, straight lines tend to have worse flow than others :/ done, but i may reverse it
01:17:073 (1) - NC not needed? nope
01:32:367 (3,4,5,6) - this part is not bad, but I would like to see some curves. Keeping the last one straight is fine! i'll keep it like this unless i get some brilliant idea
01:35:014 (4,5,6,2,3,4) - same as before ^
01:41:044 (4,1) - stack them perfectly done
01:42:367 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for these 2, for better flow nope, that idea was brilliant, yet it wasn't mine
01:44:720 (3,4) - make blankets with previous sliders done
02:06:191 (5) - I would like to see some objects to emphasize the high-pitched vocals on the red ticks there's no need for hitsounds
02:11:779 (4,5) - since you used large jumps previously, you might want to space them further or they will break the flow i used ctrl+G on (4), and made some changes on the pattern before too
02:24:573 (2) - it can be easily misunderstood to be 1/4 maybe you're right, but i kinda love this part
02:26:779 (2) - farther? i moved 1 farther instead
02:28:250 (3) - move it down to prevent overlapping! done
02:40:603 (1) - Ctrl+G for flow no
02:41:191 (3) - ^ no
02:41:191 (3,1) - they are overlapping. Move the latter pattern downwards done and changed next pattern too
02:43:544 (1,2,3,4) - there are too much claps
02:44:132 (1) - changed but not this way

SPOILER

02:45:014 (5) - same, it is awkward that nothing is emphasizing the vocals on red ticks added a clap there
02:49:426 (4) -

SPOILER

02:49:720 (1) - in fact I did not catch why a stream is in here...
02:51:485 (5,6,7) - try to make them surrounding (2), they have nice flows done, but i feel i have to find something nicer

SPOILER

03:14:720 (1) - move it down preventing overlapping done




[Rakuen's Normal+]
00:19:132 (6,2) - stack them perfectly
00:21:485 (1,2) - Swap NCs?
00:22:367 (3) - it is touching the HP bar,which is redeemed unrankable. Simply move the entire patterns downwards.
00:32:073 (2) - try this rhythm?

SPOILER

00:44:132 (7,2) - No objects should be hidden under a slider. In fact, you may try this:

SPOILER

00:47:661 (1,2,3) - add a finish on all its heads?
00:57:073 (1,2,3) - try to prevent overlapping. Snap it with 0.80x
01:02:367 (2) - move it around so that it is not touching 01:01:191 (6) -
01:08:838 (1,2,3,4) - stack those perfectly
01:22:956 (1) - I don't think a spinner is needed here.
01:31:191 (3) - Objects near edges are hard to click. Change the direction of the blue pattern
01:33:544 (4,2) - again, stack perfectly
01:40:308 (3) - try this rhythm?

SPOILER

01:40:603 (4) - Don't really like this shape
02:35:897 (4) - again, try to refrain putting objects near edge.
03:13:250 (5) - I would use 3 circles
03:19:132 - add note?

[Eazy]
00:39:426 (5,1) - that can be confusing i'll keep it as it is
01:12:367 (6,1) - this pattern looks weird to me. make (6) a horizontal slider changed slightly, i didn't make it horizontal tho
02:08:838 (6) - ^ ^
03:06:485 (4) - since the previous 3 sliders repeated once only, one might also think it as an identical one. That can be confusing i agree, i changed it both here and another point of the map

I guess that's all.
If you have any problems concerning the mod, feel free to poke me in-game.Call for recheck if you want

Good Luck

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

HI! my modding queue reqs.

[General]

may change the color combo? such as pink (which is present in the BG) bright blue, dark blue. or turquoise i will think about this later, i think i will change bg

03:17:073 - finish kiai time and 03:19:132 start kiai time , 03:19:206 finish kiai time

[Easy]

HP Drain Rate -2 done

00:21:779 (1,2) - make them emphasize each other. http://puu.sh/478hO.jpg something like that. maybe you can do better

01:13:544 (1) - http://puu.sh/478l1.jpg so better? done

02:08:838 (6,1) - ^ done

02:43:544 (1) - remove new combo and 02:44:720 (2) - new combo done

01:05:308 (2) - x:340 y:215 done

01:25:308 (4) - finish done

02:44:132 (1) - ^ done

03:10:014 (5) - new combo and 03:11:191 (1) - remove new combo done

03:12:367 (3) - new combo done

03:18:544 (x) - add circle im not sure about this

[Rakuen's Normal+] rename, it HARD

00:28:544 (1,2,3) - I advise such difficulties as Normal and Easy to do strictly Distance Snap.

00:32:073 (2) - sounds bad... may do so http://puu.sh/47gdh.jpg

00:36:485 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/47ggM.jpg

00:41:779 (4,5) - make the same rhythm as here 00:40:603 (1,2,3) -

00:45:014 (1) - remove new combo and 00:45:308 (2) - new combo

00:57:073 (1,2,3) - spacing!

01:03:838 (1) - remove new combo and 01:04:132 (2) - new combo

01:13:250 (1) - remove new combo and 01:13:544 (2) - new combo

01:14:720 (4) - new combo or its http://puu.sh/47gyt.jpg

01:27:367 (1) - delete note. the distance between the spinner and the subject was more

02:00:308 (1) - remove new combo and 02:00:603 (2) - new combo

02:21:779 (1) - finish here 02:24:132 and 02:24:132 (1) - delete clider

02:48:544 (1) - remove new combo and 02:48:838 (2) - new combo

02:50:603 (1) - remove new combo and 02:51:485 (2) - new combo

03:07:367 (1) - remove new combo and 03:07:661 (2) - new combo

[Crazy]

http://puu.sh/47gVN.png more than three speeds Velocity. its unranked ... sort of there are ranked maps with way more slider velocities than this.. and does it matters that much if the map plays fine?

00:12:367 (2) - new combo it was nc before, i'm not changing this back and forth

00:17:514 (3,4) - swap them to be so http://puu.sh/47h45.jpg

00:18:691 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/47h5Q.jpg

00:19:720 (3) - put on top of 1 combo http://puu.sh/47h83.jpg looks like you are counter-modding another guy, it was overlapped but i was told to change it, im not turning back

00:20:014 (4,6) - ^ 4 combo

00:22:220 (2) - x:268 y:192 Please do not let these senseless jumps i changed the previous slider too

00:31:044 (1,2) - delete nope

00:58:250 (1) - start here 00:57:073 finish here 00:58:838 done and added a note when the spinner previously finished

01:45:308 (5) - may do so http://puu.sh/47hwb.jpg i've already thought about it, but this circle alone sounds good and feels good to play for me

02:10:014 (1,2) - Ctrl+G uhm i should have to change all the following pattern but i like this idea tbh

02:26:191 (4) - ^ it's meant to be like that

03:18:838 (2) - cool <3 thank you i love it so much too <3

I understand that you wanted to do this very difficult level, but you must admit, if I can not play it intuitively very annoying to be honest i meant to do something much easier, just full of jumps.. in fact the first version had OD-2 HP-1 and CS+1... btw it has been SS'd already D:

Good luck :3 thank you!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hi!
Sorry my modding might be bit rusty, just returned from vacation x.x

[General]

1. Kai time is a bit too long. Try ending the last one at 03:07:661.

[Easy]
01:15:897 (4) - NC done
01:20:603 (4) - ^ done
02:26:485 (4) - ^ done
02:41:779 (4) - ^
02:53:544 (1,2,3) - Try placing these object on the exact vertical axis for a better symmetry.
03:02:956 (1,2,3) - ^
03:12:367 (1) - Try rotating it and moving it like this: i can't do this because of DS, but you gave me a good idea and i moved this one 03:17:073 (1)
So that it goes in symmetry with 03:10:014 (1).

This diff looks almost perfect if you ask me! ^^

[Normal +]

1. Remove the + in this diff.

00:32:073 - 00:33:250 This rhythm sounds better:
http://puu.sh/47Uym/bf28f6352b.jpg - Starting on the 2nd hit circle.
00:36:485 - Remove this slider, and put 00:35:603 (1,2) here instead,so it looks like this:
- Minus the blue combo colour (sorry for that error >x<)
00:37:367 (1,2) - After these 2 objects are highlighted, select New combo,00:37:956 should be New combo instead, because this is the transition between the singers.
00:40:308 (5,1) - ^ Swap combos
00:41:779 (4) - ^
00:42:956 (6) - ^
00:46:485 (4) - ^
00:59:426 (2) - New combo, because the first object appearing in Kai time must always be NC!
01:22:956 (1) - Not sure if Spinner is appropriate here
01:43:838 (5) - NC
02:11:779 - Best to move the slider forward,and place a hit circle here instead like this:


Helps emphasize the long 'I in 'waKARANAI'
02:30:014 (5) - NC
03:09:720 (1,2,3) - Make these 3 objects look symmetrical if you can, like this for example:


Normal mode looks ok, but I'm not too sure about the rhythm...

[Crazy]
Insane mode I assume?
00:44:279 and 00:44:720 should have hit circles, since it feels sort of weird how there are gaps here when there's no pause in the music.
00:50:014 - Continue mapping this part, doesn't feel like Insane mode with so many breaks. yes i think i should map a break too..the problem is these breaks aren't that easy to map
01:45:308 - ^

Sorry I can't really mod Crazy mode, I'm not too good with Insane diffs x.x don't worry you helped

Hope this helps~!

1. 01:38:838 (4) - x:77 y:101. That makes 01:37:073 (1,2,3,4) - looks better

1. 00:25:897 (5) - move to x:159 y:26
2. 00:44:132 (7,2) - this overlap is not good
3. 01:12:808 (5) - move to the place where this slider-start can be more visible
4. 01:22:956 (1,1) - so hard. I suggest to move 01:27:367 (1) - near the center(x:256 y:192)
5. 02:28:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - how about regular pentagon?
   
   SPOILER

   

   112,292,148838,5,2,0:2:0:0:
   194,292,149132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   219,214,149426,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   151,167,149720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   87,214,150014,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   112,292,150308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   194,292,150603,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   219,214,150897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   151,167,151191,5,2,0:2:0:0:
   87,214,151485,2,0,P|87:126|167:94,1,180.000006866455,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 02:45:897 (5,1) - avoid overlap
7. 02:49:426 (3) - move to x:412 y:208

1. 02:13:544 (1) - fix up this awkward slider
2. 02:28:838 (1,5) - stack correctly
3. 03:09:573 (3,2) - ^

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]

1. 01:38:838 (4) - x:77 y:101. That makes 01:37:073 (1,2,3,4) - looks better done, made several other changes in that part to make it look cooler

[Rakuen's Normal+]

1. 00:25:897 (5) - move to x:159 y:26
2. 00:44:132 (7,2) - this overlap is not good
3. 01:12:808 (5) - move to the place where this slider-start can be more visible
4. 01:22:956 (1,1) - so hard. I suggest to move 01:27:367 (1) - near the center(x:256 y:192)
5. 02:28:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - how about regular pentagon?
   
   SPOILER

   

   112,292,148838,5,2,0:2:0:0:
   194,292,149132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   219,214,149426,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   151,167,149720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   87,214,150014,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   112,292,150308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   194,292,150603,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   219,214,150897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   151,167,151191,5,2,0:2:0:0:
   87,214,151485,2,0,P|87:126|167:94,1,180.000006866455,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 02:45:897 (5,1) - avoid overlap
7. 02:49:426 (3) - move to x:412 y:208

[Crazy]

1. 02:13:544 (1) - fix up this awkward slider im very bad at finding cooler slider shapes...if you have better ideas you can add the code
2. 02:28:838 (1,5) - stack correctly done
3. 03:09:573 (3,2) - ^ done

You intend to change BG? That would be better. yes i think i will, i just get headache in editor with a brighter one so i think i'll wait until i'm almost done
~Good Luck~

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Vocaloid names must never go in Artist or Source. Instead, use the composer of said song with "Vocaloid" as Artist, the Vocaloid name can go in the tags; more info: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/1767683

Asphyxia wrote:

Hiii (: Mod from my queue <3

Please respond to my suggestions!

Red = Unrankable

Blue = Highly recommended

Black (aka normal) = Just a suggestion

General things: I really don't like your combo colours, I feel like you should have more dark colours maybe? Imo yellow and green doesn't fit. i already answered to this, the combolors are the ones i use for my skin, i didn't change them because i will probably choose another background

[Eazy]
00:15:897 (5) - Slider's start 1 grid down, looks so much better. http://puu.sh/48QTf.jpg done
01:15:897 (1) - Stack properly with 01:13:544 (1) - ?' done, thank you for pointing this out i didn't notice
01:22:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this is a too long combo, I would suggest NC'ing somewhere. 01:25:897 (5) - Like here.
02:12:368 (1) - Stack with 02:10:015 (1) - properly? done
02:38:250 (5) - I personally don't like this sliders shape at all, maybe you could do something about it? reshaped, i hope it's better than before
Didn't find anything else, nice diff~

[Crazy]
Nothing about this, seems fun! Thank you

Ah sorry for my noob mod and GL with the mapset (: <3

kelvinli wrote:

pop in again for the following

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Vocaloid names must never go in Artist or Source. Instead, use the composer of said song with "Vocaloid" as Artist, the Vocaloid name can go in the tags; more info: p/1767683

you know what to do

no kudosu

kelvinli wrote:

Ciao! M4M as promised

[General]
seems ok!

[Rakuen's Normal+]
00:19:132 (6,2) - stack them perfectly Fixed, not sure it's perfect or not.
00:21:485 (1,2) - Swap NCs? Fixed.
00:22:367 (3) - it is touching the HP bar,which is redeemed unrankable. Simply move the entire patterns downwards. Fixed.
00:32:073 (2) - try this rhythm? Keep atm.

SPOILER

00:44:132 (7,2) - No objects should be hidden under a slider. In fact, you may try this: Fixed.

SPOILER

00:47:661 (1,2,3) - add a finish on all its heads? Fixed.
00:57:073 (1,2,3) - try to prevent overlapping. Snap it with 0.80x Fixed.
01:02:367 (2) - move it around so that it is not touching 01:01:191 (6) - Keep atm.
01:08:838 (1,2,3,4) - stack those perfectly Fixed, not sure it's perfect or not.
01:22:956 (1) - I don't think a spinner is needed here. Keep
01:31:191 (3) - Objects near edges are hard to click. Change the direction of the blue pattern Keep, it's still can be clicked
01:33:544 (4,2) - again, stack perfectly Fixed, not sure it's perfect or not.
01:40:308 (3) - try this rhythm? Keep atm.

SPOILER

01:40:603 (4) - Don't really like this shape I'll try to make a new shape
02:35:897 (4) - again, try to refrain putting objects near edge. Keep atm
03:13:250 (5) - I would use 3 circles Keep
03:19:132 - add note? No, I don't like maps with last circle hit :\

I guess that's all.
If you have any problems concerning the mod, feel free to poke me in-game.Call for recheck if you want

Good Luck

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

HI! my modding queue reqs.

[General]

may change the color combo? such as pink (which is present in the BG) bright blue, dark blue. or turquoise

03:17:073 - finish kiai time and 03:19:132 start kiai time , 03:19:206 finish kiai time

[Rakuen's Normal+] rename, it HARD

00:28:544 (1,2,3) - I advise such difficulties as Normal and Easy to do strictly Distance Snap. I'll try to request and make it to hard.

00:32:073 (2) - sounds bad... may do so http://puu.sh/47gdh.jpg Fixed.

00:36:485 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/47ggM.jpg Fixed.

00:41:779 (4,5) - make the same rhythm as here 00:40:603 (1,2,3) - Fixed.

00:45:014 (1) - remove new combo and 00:45:308 (2) - new combo Fixed.

00:57:073 (1,2,3) - spacing! No xD

01:03:838 (1) - remove new combo and 01:04:132 (2) - new combo Fixed.

01:13:250 (1) - remove new combo and 01:13:544 (2) - new combo Fixed.

01:14:720 (4) - new combo or its http://puu.sh/47gyt.jpg Fixed.

01:27:367 (1) - delete note. the distance between the spinner and the subject was more Fixed.

02:00:308 (1) - remove new combo and 02:00:603 (2) - new combo Fixed.

02:21:779 (1) - finish here 02:24:132 and 02:24:132 (1) - delete clider Fixed.

02:48:544 (1) - remove new combo and 02:48:838 (2) - new combo Fixed.

02:50:603 (1) - remove new combo and 02:51:485 (2) - new combo Fixed.

03:07:367 (1) - remove new combo and 03:07:661 (2) - new combo Fixed.

Good luck :3

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hi!
Sorry my modding might be bit rusty, just returned from vacation x.x

[General]

1. Kai time is a bit too long. Try ending the last one at 03:07:661.

[Normal +]

1. Remove the + in this diff.

00:32:073 - 00:33:250 This rhythm sounds better: Fixed.
http://puu.sh/47Uym/bf28f6352b.jpg - Starting on the 2nd hit circle. Fixed.
00:36:485 - Remove this slider, and put 00:35:603 (1,2) here instead,so it looks like this: Fixed.
- Minus the blue combo colour (sorry for that error >x<) Fixed.
00:37:367 (1,2) - After these 2 objects are highlighted, select New combo,00:37:956 should be New combo instead, because this is the transition between the singers. Fixed.
00:40:308 (5,1) - ^ Swap combos Fixed.
00:41:779 (4) - ^ Fixed.
00:42:956 (6) - ^ Fixed.
00:46:485 (4) - ^ Fixed.
00:59:426 (2) - New combo, because the first object appearing in Kai time must always be NC! Fixed.
01:22:956 (1) - Not sure if Spinner is appropriate here Fixed.
01:43:838 (5) - NC Fixed.
02:11:779 - Best to move the slider forward,and place a hit circle here instead like this: Fixed.


Helps emphasize the long 'I in 'waKARANAI' Fixed.
02:30:014 (5) - NC Fixed.
03:09:720 (1,2,3) - Make these 3 objects look symmetrical if you can, like this for example: Fixed.


Normal mode looks ok, but I'm not too sure about the rhythm...

Hope this helps~!

sjoy wrote:

Hi from my M4M queue
Easy:
00:20:603 (5) - add the fin or 00:15:897 (5) - delete the fin it has a coherence as it is now
01:27:367 add a note? i'll think about this, maybe i'll add later
02:51:191 (5) - NC? done
03:18:250 (2) - move to 256,64 just 03:17:073 (1) 'y=64 done

Crazy:
00:16:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - add whistle not clap seems better i agree
00:20:897 (2,3,4) - ^
00:35:014 (1,2,1,2) - I think they can be the same clour yes i think so too
00:35:823 (2) - delete it i think it flows good
00:38:176 (5) - ^ ^
00:41:044 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - it 's too hard to distinguish them
I suggest 00:41:044 (2,3) - and 00:41:485 (5,6) conbine into a 1/2 slider i actually love this pattern, and i think it is readable
00:44:279 add a note and 00:44:720 add a 1/1 slider okay i've thought of something like this http://puu.sh/4cbqs.jpg but i still like the old rhythm, i'll ask other opinions and decide later, but it's a good idea
00:47:661 (7) - NC
00:47:661 (7,8) - 910,12,34 conbine into a 1/2 slideri can't think of any fun shape to give them, and i like star patterns to be honest
00:52:809 (3) -00:53:103 (4) - 00:53:397 (6) - delete it it slows the flow too much
00:52:956 add a note beautiful
01:06:485 (1,2) - conbine into a 1/2 slider a slider would be much shorter than this jump
01:08:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add whistle not clap seems better yup
01:58:397 (2) - move 300,64 nope
02:04:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add whistle not clap seems better yup
02:57:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ yup
03:18:838 (2) - oh that's the same as the BIG MONEY i love this slider <3
GOOD LUCK

rEdo wrote:

sorry for that much of a delay x.x

[Easy]
02:43:544 (6,1) - I know what did you try to achieve here, but having a finish on (6)'s end sounds way better. fixed. i can't understand why i didn't put that finish on the beginning of the measure, my bad here

[Crazy]
wow, this is actually pretty good for your first map :­) thank you and thanks to all the modders who helped me
00:16:779 (5,1,2) - I'd increase the distance snap between those to like 1.5x. 1.5x right after that stream is too much imo, i increased it to 1.0x
01:26:485 (1) - I'd start it at 01:25:308 and end it at 1:27:367. done, i may revert this change btw
01:37:000 (1,2) - swap new combos. done
01:39:426 (1) - I'd add a warning speed-up storyboard here, or something. this plays pretty fine, but it can catch people off-guard. i had already tought about that, i've already made a timer for the hold slider in the end puu.sh/4cwlg.jpg (but i still don't know if i will actually implement it)
01:45:308 (1) - start the break at 01:46:485. i will 99% map this break, so it's not a big deal.. btw this break was well timed once, i must have fucked it up when i made a try to map it yesterday
02:44:132 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - if I were you, I'd delete that reverse arrow from (5), move it by 1/2 further and fill in the gaps with notes (click!). that's not a bad idea, but i don't know where to put those 2 notes, so im keeping it
02:53:544 (1) - I'd suggest slowing this slider down (use a 0.7x SV section here) and actually turning off kiai here, in order to turn it on at (2) again. done
03:03:838 (4) - similar as above. i can't, i would ruin that beautiful shape
03:07:956 (1) - new combo. yup
03:16:779 (1) - start it at 03:17:073­. changed, but i might revert this fix too


good luck~!

Pagno wrote:

02:53:544 (1) - I'd suggest slowing this slider down (use a 0.7x SV section here) and actually turning off kiai here, in order to turn it on at (2) again. done

rEdo wrote:

Pagno wrote:

02:53:544 (1) - I'd suggest slowing this slider down (use a 0.7x SV section here) and actually turning off kiai here, in order to turn it on at (2) again. done

forgot to mention - if you're going to use that, please set that kiai fountain in all the difficulties for consistency. as for Crazy diff, a new combo on (2) would work nice as well.

don't kd

Pagno wrote:

01:26:485 (1) - I'd start it at 01:25:308 and end it at 1:27:367. done, i may revert this change btw

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Rakuen's Normal+]

1. 00:25:897 (5) - move to x:159 y:26 Place changed after previous mod
2. 00:44:132 (7,2) - this overlap is not good Fixed. Place changed after previous mod
3. 01:12:808 (5) - move to the place where this slider-start can be more visible Place changed after previous mod
4. 01:22:956 (1,1) - so hard. I suggest to move 01:27:367 (1) - near the center(x:256 y:192) Fixed.
5. 02:28:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - how about regular pentagon? Place changed, I'll try to make a regular pentagon
   
   SPOILER

   

   112,292,148838,5,2,0:2:0:0:
   194,292,149132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   219,214,149426,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   151,167,149720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   87,214,150014,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   112,292,150308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   194,292,150603,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   219,214,150897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   151,167,151191,5,2,0:2:0:0:
   87,214,151485,2,0,P|87:126|167:94,1,180.000006866455,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 02:45:897 (5,1) - avoid overlap Fixed.
7. 02:49:426 (3) - move to x:412 y:208 Place changed after previous mod

You intend to change BG? That would be better.
~Good Luck~

Asphyxia wrote:

Hiii (: Mod from my queue <3

Please respond to my suggestions!

Red = Unrankable

Blue = Highly recommended

Black (aka normal) = Just a suggestion

General things: I really don't like your combo colours, I feel like you should have more dark colours maybe? Imo yellow and green doesn't fit.

Rakuen's Nomal+

I'd say -1 AR for sure and 100% volume on some parts?! Try reducing them atleast to ~80% Fixed.
00:17:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - You should try moving some of these objects more down if you get what I mean D: Fixed.
00:34:720 (5) - This slider is very ugly (atleast for me) How about trying to create a better shaped one? Tried to make one.
01:04:132 (2) - Slider's start 1 grid 1 up, and paste it then 01:04:720 (3) - and 01:05:897 (5) - Place changed after previous mod
01:06:485 (1) - Also slider's start 1 grid up, looks better (: Fixed.
02:39:426 (2) - Slider's center 1 grid down? Also paste it here 02:40:014 (3) - , 02:40:603 (4) - and 02:41:191 (5) - Place changed after previous mod
02:43:544 (5) - This slider has an ugly shape, try to create a bit more ''fun'' slider? Replaced with circles, no idea what slider to put yet.
03:19:132 - Add a note here. Added a slider.

Ah sorry for my noob mod and GL with the mapset (: <3

sjoy wrote:

Hi from my M4M queue

Normal+:
I think this diff can become a hard diff. Ok.
If it's a normal diff,it must observe snap divisor . Ok.
00:49:720 (1) - no need NC Fixed.
01:16:191 (5) - NC Fixed.
02:39:132 (1) - no need NC Fixed.
03:08:838 (3) - add the clap on the head? Keep.
03:10:603 (3) - ^ not end Fixed.

GOOD LUCK

rEdo wrote:

sorry for that much of a delay x.x

[Rakuen's Normal+]
rename it to Normal, Normal+ sounds pretty lame if you ask me.
00:33:544 (7) - new combo. Keep, combo follows the vocal
03:19:132 - add a note? Fixed.

good luck~!

Desperate-kun wrote:

Well, here comes my mod (from queue).

[Easy]

Can't find anything here. Excellent

[Crazy]

Hell, this diff is crazy hard. OD is too high in my opinion. Also, why not slider tick rate 2?? The song is 204 BPM, that means that there's ~70ms difference between ticks at 1/4 snap; od8 gives you a window of 30 ms to get 300, it's perfect here (a guy SS'd this song at first try, too). And i hate slider tick rate 2 because it makes it easier to sliderbreak on fast sliders, but i'll give it a try.
But well, here are the problems:
00:17:514 (3) - White tick in the middle of this slider needs to be mapped. Easiest way: Reverse Arrow. it's a syncopation, and the important is that the white tick there isn't the upbeat
00:18:691 (2,3) - 3 should come before 2. Currently, 2 doesn't fit, because ^ ^
00:35:750 (1,2,3) - Remove 1 and 2. wouldn't it sound like there is something missing?
00:41:044 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I hate you so much for this. But it's okay I guess. haha
01:32:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Confusing pattern. Build a pattern where the sliders don't change slider speed, so you can actually guess how it works. I've thought about doing that several times, although i think it's cool, i'll look for something even cooler!
01:40:603 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is really confusing aswell for some reason. I always think I have to do this slider from the right to the left i think it plays completely fine, it's on the same distance of 01:40:603 (1,2,3,4) , but it has half the speed of those jumps
Also, last slider is awesome :3 Thank you i love it so much too!

Well, you got a really nice mapset here. I think it would be better with another difficulty between normal and crazy, because this is a pretty high jump in difficulty. Good luck with your mapset (: You got my star of course ^^ <3 ty! btw yes, hard should be coming soon

TheGrimOfCrazy wrote:

Mapset:
This spread is way off.

Easy:

01:20:603 (1,2,3) - This doesn't look that nice. :c Good idea, i used a slider that goes back in time http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/962109. jk i made a nicer pattern here and obviously i copy pasted it on 02:26:485 (1,2,3) too

01:40:603 (1) - could use some work changed it

02:26:485 (1,2,3) - this pattern again :c done

02:45:308 (2) - could use some work again but it fits this time idk why it fits because it changes direction on each syllable of the lyrics, i'm keeping this one

This easy will be very helpful for a lot of new players it has everything they basically need to get started on. Personally I hate copypaste, but for a new player this will help them practice better.Overall good easy, not much to say on it. You could add some more urves on certain sliders though. Not everything needs to be straight. :c thank you btw i made many straight slider shape because im lazy

Normal:

AR should be 6 not 5 oh that was my fault, i probably changed it while correcting some metadata. done!

Crazy:

00:14:132 (1) - remove all these types of sliders. They really slow an insane player down, especially in a fast section. That's actually the goal of those sliders. i could have done that by just slowing down slider velocity, but i wanted it to be clearer so i made them like this

00:16:191 (6,1) - doesn't work together why?

00:16:779 (5,1) - doesn't work together why?

00:19:132 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read and not really fun to play changed

00:24:132 (1,2,3,4) - add some variety. Same with the easy not everything needs to be 1/2 and straight :c I totally agree

00:35:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no please k sorry

00:38:103 (4,5,1,2) - these patterns plus the blue one after. VARIETY I find this one very nice

00:41:044 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - not very readable it's not worthy of a jump section this part of the song is too soft
Influence sections of the song with higher spacing - thats what jumps are for. This does not fit.
-take this into consideration for all the jumps you have placed- make sure they fit, don't lie to yourself. I'll keep it because it's very fun to play

00:44:132 (1) - you could add some fun little thing here. The song calls for it. I'll explain you my idea briefly: hitsounds are percussions, my intention is to create an accompaniment. I would rarely follow vocals when playing the drums, expecially in this case

00:52:662 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - not worthy of jumps it's not even big jumps.. btw yes, i will think of a better shape, but keeping the distances

00:53:544 (1,2,3,4) - pattern real bad bro I love it bro ç_ç and I think it fits very good with the music

01:05:456 (1,2,3) - please check all your jumps for me this doesnt work also. I don't get why you hate jumps so much :C

01:11:632 (2,3) - bad pattern same as before

01:34:573 (1,2,3) - make sure you get all of these patterns chanfed Yes!

01:32:367 (3,4,5,6) - not good I agree, i'm changing it

Some parts in this map are extrmely overmapped and you have spots influenced that shouldnt beat and circles placed in wrong areas. a lot of your star patterns don't even fit as many of the circles dont even land on the spt you are trying to influence. Watchout for offbeat stuff. I'm going to stop the mod here. This could use a bit of a remap. Not the whole thing as some parts are unique and fun but you reused too many patterns and added jumps in wrong spots. Fix these and call me back for a recheck.
So far this insane is: ok it's not completely horrible but please make sure you are influencing the right stuff.
A lot of your notes are randomly placed and many of your 1/4 sliders do not work. Use other insanes as examples, they don't do this.
It is your first map and I'm not going to lie, it was better than mine and most peoples, ha but its still not something I feel is ranking material. You should continue practicing mapping, you'll get there at some point.

I think that the word "overmapping" is quite abused, as i already told you, my goal is to create a rhythm that sounds like what i would play at the drums. I agree that some patterns are very MEH and that's why i'm listening to each of you modders' suggestions to improve them as much as i can

So the Easy is nice.
The Normal needs a remap.
The Insane needs a fixer upper with it's jump placement but it's ok.

Forum PM for a recheck. Rechecks are only done when my modding queue is closed though.
Sephibro, feel free to pm me ingame for any questions, checks or small things on this mod or later. I'll be happy to help.

Oh and also like Charles said, gimmicky insanes are fine but pattern reusing and off jumps are not.
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