PinocchioP - Mushroom Mother [Osu|Taiko] · forum

YunoFanatic

Joined April 2013

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YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T05:10:49+00:00

Tsusuko wrote:
*pops in out of nowhere*

I'd like to make a Hard diff if you're looking for one. I really like this song.

*Sends an PM*

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

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YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T05:12:07+00:00

Ok! I have updated will be adding Tsusuko's Hard when ready!

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T07:35:36+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-07-12T07:01:16+00:00

Lily's mushroom
00:44:645 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? only a suggestion
01:39:644 (4) - moveto 268,188
mushroom mom
Didn't finished?
3.You must have more than 1 ranked map
>>>or more than 3 Pending&Graveyarded maps
Make more maps then you will realize how about this map:3

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

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YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T07:15:05+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
Lily's mushroom
00:44:645 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? only a suggestion
01:39:644 (4) - moveto 268,188
mushroom mom
Didn't finished?
3.You must have more than 1 ranked map
>>>or more than 3 Pending&Graveyarded maps
Make more maps then you will realize how about this map:3

.3. uguu

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2013-07-22T21:09:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Overwrite

218 posts

Joined December 2012

Overwrite 2013-07-12T07:15:25+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
Lily's mushroom
00:44:645 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? only a suggestion
01:39:644 (4) - moveto 268,188

Both fixed.

poop

osu file format v12

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Artist:Pinocchio-P
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cubelrti

61 posts

Joined February 2012

cubelrti 2013-07-12T08:37:21+00:00

Hi~
From Forum M4M PM

Red: Unrankedable Issues
Blue:You should Fix it
Green:Just suggestion

[General]
mushroommother.jpg is 1228x767, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768. Crop the original jpg into 1024x768 using photoshop or something else .
Mushroom Mother diff kiai conflict with other diff. Consider end the kiai #3 on 01:59:110 -
Sounds the downbeat of the song changed in the late part. Make all your diffs red timing sections same as LilyWhite's Mushroom diff .
(I think you need a little more timing help , but i cant

sorry for that)

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]
i like CS4 more than CS5 (as the map ranked recently)
00:13:932 (1) - a spinner than break ? i dont really like this but you can keep it.
00:32:503 (4,5,6) - 1/4 slider sounds not very well . change it to 1/2 slider and remove (6) plz.
01:42:055 (2,3) - nc every note , it will mention the player here has a short break.
01:22:859 - maybe insert a short break here?
nice map !

[Mushroom Mother]
00:23:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - wow so sexy here but how about reducing the spacing ? maybe a little too hard
00:29:467 (24) - it should be longer like below

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00:30:985 (3,4,5) - these 3/4 notes should begin at the red line , not the blue
00:34:824 (15) - 3/4 slider should never have such a big spacing , overclap it with the end of (14).
00:36:074 (20) - make this slider up 5 grid (maybe) , just like below

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00:41:699 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - start the stream here 00:41:788 - and end the stream here 00:43:574 - actually i don't like the stream like this , ask more modder to mod here.
00:46:610 - start a spinner here
00:47:860 - end the spinner here
00:50:717 (10) - end this slider at the long white line
00:57:324 (1) - no , nothing going to repeat on the blue line

start repeating at the white line (just reduce the length of the slider) end it here 00:58:932 -
01:17:146 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - here is so confusing . Try to remap this part follow the vocal .
01:59:021 - this green timing section should be earlier to 01:58:932 - .

[Medium Mushroom]
00:43:396 (1) - no , such a short spinner is too hard for beginners . Remember this is normal diff , replace it with a note or a slider .
01:30:003 (1) - ^
00:46:789 (1) - idk what about this one ... maybe change it to a long slider?
01:36:074 (1) - ^
00:55:182 (10,11) - it should like below

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01:43:753 (1) - ^

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i think this diff need more mod , it don't follow the rhythm correctly in many parts .

try to map more and get more experience.

[Small Mushroom]
Why 1.8x spacing in EASY DIFF

Change it to 1.0x
And i so sorry to tell you , this diff maybe need a remap

it dont follow the ranking criteria correctly.
Try to remap this diff and call me back when you finished.
00:36:074 (1,2,3) - these repeat sliders sounds confusing , change them .
00:53:932 (3,4,5,6) - such a big spacing is not allowed in easy diff. Change them.
01:05:360 (5,6,7,8) - ^

Thats all~
Good luck on the way.

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T09:56:18+00:00

Thanks for the mod~! ill be sincerly gonna work on it ! Updated and Remapped the easy diff! no i will not disturb you anymore for you have many things to do such as for your beatmap!

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-07-12T09:59:13+00:00

shoot your star back:3

Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2013-07-12T12:26:03+00:00

Hi

Can I make Guest diff?

and

[general]
remove mushroom mother on tags because it is used in title

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T12:55:38+00:00

Yes you can do a GD on my map just lemme know which one im kinda needing an Easy diff or Insane diff

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2013-07-13T00:36:30+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

putigame

25 posts

Joined March 2012

putigame 2013-07-12T13:00:10+00:00

Mushroom Mother

まずCircle Sizeは5よりは4のほうがいいと思います。あとARについても9は少し高すぎると思うので、7か8にすればいいと思います。
またeditを行うときにはDistance Snapをつけることをお勧めします。

ここからは譜面の配置についてです。
00:14:289~00:15:003　ここのスピナー。プレイしたときここにスピナーがあるのは少し不自然に感じたのでここのスピナーをなくすか、あるいはサークルやスライダーを配置してみてはどうでしょうか？
00:20:003~00:20:717　ここのスピナー。このスピナーも少し不自然に感じました。なので何か置くのであればサークルやスライダーを配置してみてはどうでしょうか？
00:20:896~00:22:949　ここのブレイクタイムは何か配置できる気がします。サークルやスライダーを配置してみてはどうでしょうか？
00:23:574~00:24:824　ここの①②③④のスライダー。①と②のスライダーの距離をもう少し離したほうがいいと思います。②と③のスライダー　③と④のスライダーも同様です。あと④のスライダーは④のサークルにしたほうがいいと思います。
00:25:896~00:26:432　ここの②の往復スライダー。最近のranked譜面を見ていると往復スライダーで１往復より多いスライダーはあまり見ない気がします。２つのスライダーにわけるか、スライダーの長さを長くして１往復のスライダーにするかどちらかにするほうがいいと思います。
00:27:324~00:27:503　ここの④のスライダー。ここからnew comboにするといいと思います。
00:29:378~00:29:646　ここの⑪のスライダー。このスライダーを叩いたときのヒットサウンドがまるで２連打を叩いたときのような音がします。なので修正したほうがいいと思います。
00:31:610~00:31:789　ここの④のスライダー。ここからnew comboにするといいと思います。
00:33:217　ここの⑧のサークル。ここからnew comboにするといいと思います。
00:41:789~00:41:967　ここの④のスライダー。ここからnew comboにするといいと思います。
00:41:789~00:42:682　ここの④⑤⑥のスライダー。④のスライダーだけ⑤⑥のスライダーと比べて少し下にずれています。なので④のスライダーを少し上にずらせば④⑤⑥のスライダーが横にきれいに並ぶと思います。
00:43:039~00:43:932　ここの⑦⑧⑨のスライダー。⑨のスライダーだけ⑦⑧のスライダーと比べて少し下にずれています。なので⑨のスライダーを少し上にずらせば⑦⑧⑨のスライダーが横にきれいに並ぶと思います。

Last edited by putigame 2013-07-12T13:20:03+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Asphyxia

osu! Alumni

1,986 posts

Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2013-07-12T13:16:02+00:00

irc mod~

my osu crashed so you can't see me mod the beginning~

big mushroom

SPOILER

15:40 Asphyxia: hmhmhhmh, osu crashed
15:41 Asphyxia: 00:54:646 (3) - but then comes this slider and it's totally different
15:43 Asphyxia: 00:57:324 (1) - make the reverse arrows hit white tick, now that they hit blue tick
15:43 Asphyxia: it sounds ugly
15:43 Asphyxia: I mean like this http://puu.sh/3B527.jpg
15:44 Asphyxia: 00:59:646 (2) - NC
15:44 Asphyxia: 01:00:360 (4) - make this slider straight like the others?
15:47 YunoFanatic: lol sorry for the iddle for a while i just took a bath xD
15:48 Asphyxia: did you get to read the mods I made after my osu crash
15:48 YunoFanatic: yes and im working on it pls seat for a while ill tell you
15:49 Asphyxia: tell me :-3
15:49 YunoFanatic: xD lol my brain
15:49 YunoFanatic: xD ill tell you when its done probably only 3 min
15:49 Asphyxia: I can mod the whole map
15:50 YunoFanatic: :OOO your not a lazy kid
15:50 Asphyxia: no
15:50 Asphyxia: and if I started to mod a map, I will mod it
15:50 Asphyxia: 01:00:360 (4) - make this slider like the others
15:51 Asphyxia: 00:59:646 (2,3) - like these
15:51 YunoFanatic: oh yes yes
15:51 Asphyxia: 01:02:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - randomly placed
15:52 YunoFanatic: lol random people say to me can i make a guest diff on this ? should i accept?
15:52 Asphyxia: 01:06:074 (2) - copy the first slider aka this 01:05:360 (1) -
15:52 Asphyxia: Erm, if you want to, I personally would not accept from random people
15:52 Asphyxia: since they can make horrible gd's
15:53 YunoFanatic: hmmpe simply i reviewed all gd's before the lilywhite's mushroom 3 people's including lly has requested a gd
15:53 YunoFanatic: gladly only lilywhite i accept
15:54 Asphyxia: ^^
15:54 Asphyxia: 01:05:360 (1) - copy this
15:54 Asphyxia: 01:06:074 (2) - paste here
15:54 YunoFanatic: ok
15:55 Asphyxia: would look like this
15:55 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/3B5o2.jpg
15:57 Asphyxia: 01:15:182 (5) -
15:57 Asphyxia: copy this
15:57 Asphyxia: 01:16:074 (6) - paste
15:57 Asphyxia: 01:17:146 (7) - NC
15:57 YunoFanatic: *faints* slow down xD im on it xD im a bit slow
15:58 Asphyxia: if you can't keep up with me, it doesn't matter that much because I will post this to the forum
15:58 Asphyxia: this log
15:58 Asphyxia: 01:19:646 (14) - NC
15:59 YunoFanatic: o yeah for your kd xD
15:59 Asphyxia: y
15:59 Asphyxia: 01:20:182 (15) - again, this looks fine
15:59 Asphyxia: 01:20:539 (16) - ugly since it has a different shape
16:01 Asphyxia: 01:27:860 (10) - NC?
16:02 Asphyxia: It's a bit hard to mod this if you keep going offline =(
16:02 YunoFanatic: no
16:02 YunoFanatic: my internet just crash btw i follew all of the mod
16:03 YunoFanatic: and it seems getting better =)
16:03 YunoFanatic: ok continuition
16:03 Asphyxia: 01:27:860 (10) - NC?
16:03 Asphyxia: you can decide
16:03 Asphyxia: 01:28:753 - missing a note?
16:03 YunoFanatic: done
16:04 Asphyxia: 01:33:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and these, like the music sounds jumpy, you can make them jump
16:04 Asphyxia: but yeah that was okay~
16:05 YunoFanatic: :OOO i made aslider that jumps the beat should i delete it\
16:05 YunoFanatic: ? since you say its okay?
16:05 Asphyxia: yes
16:05 Asphyxia: the part is okay
16:05 Asphyxia: no need to change anything
16:05 YunoFanatic: ok~! redone
16:06 Asphyxia: 01:38:753 (7) - NC & How about doing it like this? 01:38:753 (7) -
16:06 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/3B5In.jpg*
16:06 Asphyxia: there's the puush
16:07 Asphyxia: 01:40:896 (11) - NC
16:07 Asphyxia: 01:42:057 (2) - move this to the blue tick
16:08 Asphyxia: and remove the (3) circle?
16:08 Asphyxia: sounds better to me
16:09 Asphyxia: 01:47:860 (7) - do it like this http://puu.sh/3B5MX.jpg
16:09 Asphyxia: you don't need the two extra circles
16:09 YunoFanatic: done
16:09 YunoFanatic: yay were almost there!
16:10 Asphyxia: 01:45:896 (2) - make it curve?
16:10 Asphyxia: 01:49:646 (3) - make a bit smoother?
16:10 YunoFanatic: done
16:11 Asphyxia: 01:52:503 (3,4,5,6,7) - looks ugly for me
16:11 Asphyxia: 01:43:217 (8) - NC btw
16:11 Asphyxia: 01:54:646 (1) - honesly you could add a slider
16:12 Asphyxia: but I think it's okay
16:12 YunoFanatic: ohhh thanks!
16:12 Asphyxia: nothing more
16:12 YunoFanatic: :O ITS FINISH MOTHER OF GOD!
16:12 Asphyxia: overall: remember to use distance snap
16:12 Asphyxia: it's important
16:13 Asphyxia: going to post this to the forum
16:13 YunoFanatic: THANK YOU THANK YOU Very much for the help!
16:13 YunoFanatic: oh yeah
16:13 Asphyxia: I hope it helped ^^

YunoFanatic

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Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T13:25:25+00:00

Thanks for all your mod ive updated it

@putigame : yes i use distance snap but in various timing for insane only

@Asphyxia : thanks a million

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2013-07-13T06:17:07+00:00

I hate mushrooms

[General]

Try using different combo colors instead of varying shades of teal and blue, maybe a warmer toned color like red to match the background?
Also, the mp3 you used is a lot longer than the one you mapped, consider cutting it or fading it out or something

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]

00:31:074 (3,4,5) - consider using this rhythm instead to fit vocals:

SPOILER

00:32:503 (4,5) - imo, better to extend these sliders by 1/4, and move (5) to the next red tick, get rid of the next circle :/
00:34:110 (4) - consider using something else, sliders with more than one repeats are likely to trip people up D:
00:38:217 (6,7) - imo, better to extend these sliders by 1/4, and move (7) to the next white tick, get rid of the next circle
00:40:717 (6) - stack on tail of 00:39:824 (3)?
00:48:931 (3,4) - these 1/4 sliders man DDD: try this instead?

SPOILER

00:49:645 (1,2,3) - how about this rhythm to match vocals?

SPOILER

01:02:859 (3,6) - what about stacking 6 on 3's tail
01:05:717 (1) - clap on end instead of finish?
01:46:073 (1,3) - would look better if you dont overlap these imo

[Mushroom Mother]

Go add some hitsounds!
I think it'd be better to have only 1 spinner in the beginning

ALso a spinner and break, then another spinner then a small break play kinda weirdly D: just my opinion
Did you forget to new combo in the first kiai? D: the combos are really longggg
00:25:003 - try this setup? plays better for me imo and matches vocals better

SPOILER

00:27:324 (7,8,9) - such strong beats in the background should occur in the head of the sliders, not at the end

consider adding a circle, then moving all the sliders down 1/2 tick, like:

SPOILER

00:40:360 (2,3,4) - you may want to move these farther apart a bit so they're not overlapping D;
00:41:789 (5) - NC here?
00:44:646 (7) - NC here too?
00:45:717 (9,10) - move these farther apart so they don't overlap D:
00:48:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - saaaame, they look like a stream ):
00:51:610 (10) - NC
00:53:932 (16) - and here
01:15:182 (5,6) - sliders with moer than 1 repeat are likely to trip players up, consider adding circles instead? D:

Many of your sliders here play awkwardly here because they end on strong beats (many can be fixed by simply shifting them by 1/2 or so), and they look messily placed with overlaps. Please consider rearranging them so they look nicer! You could try making pretty shapes with the circles too, like triangles, or squares or something.

[Medium Mushroom]

Is this diff supposed to be Normal? D: If so, please make sure the distance between every object is constant, and open up AiMod (ctrl shift A) to learn where the distance is too close or far.
Go add some hitsounds!

00:33:574 (4) - again with the multiple repeating sliders )): they'll especially trip up beginners, who i assume this diff is catering to, also i won't mention them anymore

00:35:003 (5) - move to 00:35:360 and put a circle where it used to be? D:
00:51:074 (5) - NC here?
00:59:646 (1) - i think this is too soon after the spinner, maybe move it to 01:00:003 ? and reduce # of repeats
01:19:646 (6) - NC
01:49:289 (6) - NC
01:54:646 (13) - NC

Same comments as Mushroom Mother, weird overlaps and messily placed sliders and multiple repeating sliders ): Please consider changing these

[Small Mushroom]

Same comments as the previous two diffs!

[Tiny Mushroom]

Eh, it's not even done yet
looks fine so far

Goodluck on your map!

It needs quite a bit of work ):

Mira-san

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Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2013-07-13T06:26:16+00:00

Ohai.

General

Use distance snap. Some diffs are too messy.
USE 1/4 on OTHER DIFFS.

LilyWhite's Mushroom

I don't think this needs modding. lol :3

Mushroom Mother

Use distance snap on this diff. The diff has a lot of problems, mostly distance and timing.

00:29:378 - Match this with the vocals. Snap the starting point to the red tick.
00:34:735 - Do the same as this one ^
00:44:646 - New combo here.
00:51:610 - New combo here.
00:57:414 - Resnap this. This sounds wrong.
01:00:169 - New combo here.

vahn10's Tiny Mushroom

Fix the diff's name. It should be vahn10's Tiny Mushroom. (currently vahn10'sTiny Mushroom). Put a space.

Use distance snap on this one too, but if it already uses DS, then fix the position of some elements.

Use 1/4 beat snap divisor!

00:16:074 - Flip this slider vertically.
00:20:360 - Move this hitcircle.

Small Mushroom

Good enough. But use 1/4 beat snap divisor!

Medium Mushroom

Use 1/4 beat snap divisor!

00:42:146 - New combo here.
00:53:574 - New combo here.
01:51:789 - New combo here.

YunoFanatic

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Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-13T07:30:57+00:00

Thans for modding~!

Raose: I did it everything works smoothly

Mira-san: ahhha maraming salamat ha! sasusunud uli~!

Mira-san

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Mira-san 2013-07-13T07:38:41+00:00

YunoFanatic wrote:
Mira-san: ahhha maraming salamat ha! sasusunud uli~!

sige ^^

YunoFanatic

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YunoFanatic 2013-07-13T09:20:57+00:00

OK! now its clear Lilywhite's Diff is not an insane but an extra! case solved!

Overwrite

218 posts

Joined December 2012

Overwrite 2013-07-13T10:02:43+00:00

That's also why in a previous mod, I hesitated to change AR to 8. Because as it's an 'extra' by definition it might be challenging like some extras you can find here and there.
Also, I notice that it has been made drastically easier with some mods here and there... Although I don't mind if you see it as an insane rather than an extra, I'm not even sure myself. I mean, some ranked beatmaps have 2, even 3 insanes.

Sonnyc

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Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-07-13T11:21:59+00:00

vahn10's Tiny Mushroom:

-- Distances are a mess in the front. Hope you can make them mostly the same.

00:16:074 (2) - Distance.
00:36:074 (2) - NC?

Small Mushroom:

-- Distance is too far as a normal. Recommend a remap.

00:27:682 (1) - NC since this start in the red line.
00:28:485 (2) - Drag this start from 00:28:574.
01:00:003 (1) - I think you should add claps at all.
01:18:217 (1) - Reduce 1/2.
01:22:860 (1) - End at 01:24:646.

Medium Mushroom

01:23:574 (1) - End at 01:24:646.
01:36:074 (10) - NC?
01:45:717 (2) - ctrl+G
01:47:860 (4) - This note feels to far.

Mushroom Mother:

-- Recommend renaming to <Mother Mushroom> for consistency in all diffs
-- Delete the two spinners at the start. It feels weird imo

00:36:164 (5) - Drag 1/4 back.
00:38:217 (4,5) - These distance feels too far. Make them closer.
00:44:646 (7) - New combo. Also, making it straight will make sense as the following sliders.
00:49:646 (5) - New combo for the anti jump.
00:53:217 (6) - ^
00:57:414 (1,2,3,4,5) - Snapping is wrong here. Drag appropriately to be like this.

SPOILER

01:03:842 (5) - lol Delete this.
01:04:646 (7) - New combo
01:06:074 (1,2) - Switch New comboes, to be liek (2,1).
01:39:110 (8) - Adjust distance plz.
01:39:824 (10) - Is this 1/4 slider really needed? I only here a stream until 01:40:003.
01:42:057 (2) - Adjust distance
01:42:503 (4) - NC

LilyWhite's Mushroom:

00:34:110 (4) - Well, didn't actually expected 2 reverses, which is confusing.
00:48:931 (3,4) - Actually, the rhythm should be like this.

SPOILER

00:49:645 (1) - Reduce 1/4 and add a note in 00:50:002?
01:12:502 (1) - Delete Clap
01:14:645 (2) - ^ at the head.
01:41:073 (3,4,5) - Well, similar rhythm suggestion here too.

Sieg

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Joined February 2012

Sieg 2013-07-13T12:34:32+00:00

Hello

General:
Inconsistency in combo colors, it's not bad to have different cc on guest diffs but you need a good reason for this.
Inconsistency in tags, check [LilyWhite's Mushroom] diff tags.
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections, this is unrankable issue, all diifs must have same timing points.
remove useless red lines on [LilyWhite's Mushroom] and [vahn10's Tiny Mushroom] diffs

vahn10's Tiny Mushroom:
00:14:646 (1,2,3) - you should keep DS same on easy diff
00:20:360 (4,1) - now it seems like you placed notes random
00:33:217 (1) - also try to make such sliders more aesthetically pleasant, check this thred t/37194&start=0
00:36:074 (2) - such large break on song start makes no sense even on easy
00:48:217 (1) - this slider can be shaped better
00:51:074 (1,1) - such overlaps unsuitable for easy
01:03:931 (1,2) - ^
01:00:002 (1) - tbh, you should really read sliders guide and try to improve them in your diff, I won't mention this further.
ok this diff is not finished I guess.

Small Mushroom:
second easy I guess
same for DS try to keep same DS for easy diff
00:48:217 (1,2,3) - tbh I don't think such random placement was on purpose
00:53:574 (3) - try to avoid such many repeats sliders
01:18:217 (1,2) - spacing
01:22:860 (1) - NC here
01:44:646 (5,1) - don't use such overlaps on easy\normal
01:50:360 (3,4) - spacing, nc?

Medium Mushroom:
HP+1
00:38:217 (4) - this is plays boring, you shouldn't use such many repeats
01:25:360 (1) - too fast after spinner
01:41:789 (1,1) - ^
also I see again many random jumps

~~I'll continue later~~

Mother Mushroom:
00:23:574 (1,2,3,4) - this is completely out of rhythm, maybe put stream http://puu.sh/3Cv5P.jpg or 1/4 sliderjumps
00:26:610 (4) - NC because of jump, easier to read
00:27:324 (3,4,5) - better to copy\paste 00:27:324 (3) - and ctrl+< to make nicer patterns http://puu.sh/3CveA.jpg
00:31:610 (1,2,3,4) - this also seems like random patterns, of you want to make such style patterns make them flow at least http://puu.sh/3Cvln.jpg
we have a good guide on flows t/86329&start=0 you can improve a lot of patterns with this
00:38:574 (5,6) - this one ^
01:05:182 (4,1) - ^
00:52:682 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - makes no sense to music, because you change spacing a lot between 00:52:682 (3,4,5) - and 00:53:217 (1,2,3) - but in music there is no any changes
01:13:932 (1) - why this section in soft?
01:17:860 (3,1) - well, again about placement, maybe you should try to blank such ones http://puu.sh/3Cvw5.jpg
01:20:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flow is pretty broken
01:31:074 (6) - NC
01:38:753 (7) - ^
01:38:753 (7,8,9,10,11) - aaand this one, make flow here
01:43:217 (1,2,3,4) - as example you see, this one plays and flows so much better than ^
not bad but needs more work with flow, rhythm is good though

LilyWhite's Mushroom:
00:34:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think fist part as overmap is fine 00:34:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - but second 00:35:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not really fits anything, you can replace this with slider\s
00:38:217 (6,7) - space a little here and make a bigger jump on 00:38:574 (7,1) - because it fits so fine to lyrics and music
00:43:574 (6,7) - sexy blanket here http://puu.sh/3CvO7.jpg
00:49:199 (4) - completely out of rhythm and feels so random on play, there is no any sound\lyrics in music here
01:04:289 (5) - I think this will be for flow http://puu.sh/3CvTA.png
01:33:574 (1) - sliders with strong end :\ this so wrong here, you must let player play strong notes
01:01:074 (5,6) - think about using spacing like in streams 0.5x in such spots, this will helps to read great
01:28:217 (1,2) - ^
01:37:503 (1,2) - ^
01:41:164 (4,5) - ^
01:50:360 (1,2) - ^
01:56:074 (1,2) - ^
01:44:646 (1,2) - well you see what I'm talking about, now this seems random 0.5 1.5 1.1 I just
01:45:896 (4,1) - this jump is fine though
well, good diff we have here

Good Luck! :3

Last edited by Sieg 2013-07-14T08:05:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

YunoFanatic

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YunoFanatic 2013-07-13T13:03:55+00:00

uguuuu updated~!

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2013-07-22T21:20:28+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

YunoFanatic

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YunoFanatic 2013-07-13T13:40:35+00:00

There are added diff a hard one made by tsusuko..! and an taiko made by OnosakiHito!

OnosakiHito

osu!taiko Paragon

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OnosakiHito 2013-07-13T14:41:07+00:00

Thanks for accepting my diff.
Insane is quite good I guess. Star~

Overwrite

218 posts

Joined December 2012

Overwrite 2013-07-13T16:41:33+00:00

SOMEONE DELETED MY COOL INHERITED SECTIONS
OTNAY OODYGAY
Anyways
Code

Green is not a creative colour

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mushroom mother.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47503
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
SkinPreference:Default

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mushroom Mother
TitleUnicode:Mushroom Mother
Artist:Pinocchio-P
ArtistUnicode:Pinocchio-P
Creator:YunoFanatic
Version:LilyWhite's Mushroom
Source:
Tags:vocaloid mushroom mother lilywhite yunofanatic onosakiHito tsusuko
BeatmapID:271668
BeatmapSetID:102307

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"MushroomMother.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,14846,23896
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,55,251,187

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114021,-100,4,2,0,75,0,1
114378,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
118932,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 176,0,0
Combo2 : 2,200,190
Combo3 : 252,20,26
Combo4 : 64,128,128

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148,240,113753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,360,113932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,284,114110,2,0,L|288:272,4,20,2|2|2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,168,114467,2,0,L|236:84,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,114824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
436,116,115003,2,0,P|440:188|456:200,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,252,115360,2,0,P|448:264|408:252,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,284,115717,2,0,P|332:240|348:204,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,292,116074,6,0,P|296:344|356:352,1,120
400,324,116432,2,0,P|420:288|460:268,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,152,116789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,76,116967,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,128,117146,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,248,117324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,117503,12,4,118932,0:0:0:0:

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Kanari 2013-07-13T16:52:05+00:00

Helloo ~
You requested via forum pm ~

[General]
- Remove yunofanatic from the tags because its already in the creator section
- Add Hatsune Miku into the tags
- マッシュルームマザー Can be used as the title ~
- Make use of the hitsounds ;w;
- Put what the diffs are in the creators words (Example, Small Mushroom is easy, LilyWhite's Mushroom is insane)

[Small Mushroom]
- Set slider tick rate to 1
- Slider speed shouldn't change in an easy diff
- Spacing should be consistent as well
- Your spacing is much too large for an easy diff, try to just keep it below 1.3 at least
00:28:574 (4) - Spacing
00:29:289 (1) - Remove new combo
00:30:360 (7) - New combo
00:31:074 (2,3) - There shouldn't be any jumps in an easy diff, use ctrl + G (You will need to fix the spacing of the next few objects)
00:36:074 (5) - Spacing
00:37:860 (1) - Make (1) and (2) the same, try this

SPOILER

00:40:003 (3) - ? ~

SPOILER

00:48:217 (1,2,3) - How about this? (Move (2) to x:296 y:336 and move (3) to x:360 y:64) (Rearrange the next few objects to their correct spacing afterwards)

SPOILER

00:51:789 (5) - Too far, try ctrl + G and fix the spacing
00:52:860 (1) - Spacing
00:56:432 (6) - ? (Move to x:56 y:200, middle point at x:88 y:296 and last point at x:192 y:336

SPOILER

01:00:003 - 01:07:146 - I'll just show you a few pictures ~
01:00:003 (1,2) -

SPOILER

01:01:432 (2,3,4) -

SPOILER

01:04:289 (4,5,1) -

SPOILER

01:07:503 (2) - Fix the spacing afterwards
01:08:217 (1) - Extend the spinner to 01:11:789 ? (If you do this, delete the break afterwards, it's not needed anymore)
01:13:932 (1,2) - Make it like a mirror reflection

SPOILER

01:17:146 (3) - x:312 y:264
01:17:503 (4) - x:192 y:160
01:17:860 (5) - x:40 y: 12
Make it look like this ~

SPOILER

01:18:932 (6) - Slider here to 01:19:289, make it a straight line pointing to the right stack with (4)
01:19:646 (1,2) - Make it like this

SPOILER

01:37:503 (1) - Make (1) and (3) like a mirror reflection
01:41:432 (4) - x:200 y:128
01:45:717 (3,4) - Make it the same
01:48:932 (5) - New combo
01:51:074 (1) - Remove new combo
01:57:503 (1) - Extend to 01:59:646

[Medium Mushroom]
- HP Drain Rate +1
- Slider tick rate 1
- Slider speed shouldn't change for a normal difficulty either
- Same thing about the spacing
00:24:646 (1) - Make it reverse at 00:25:360
00:26:432 - Add a circle
00:30:182 (1) - Delete
00:30:360 - Add a circle
00:31:432 (3) - Move to 00:31:789
00:31:432 - You can add a circle here or make (2) reverse
00:36:074 (1,2) - Make it the same
00:40:003 (5) - Try another slider shape
00:50:807 (6) - Move one tick back and make it the slider last a tick longer
00:53:574 (3) - Remove a reverse and fill in the space
01:07:860 (1) - Move to 01:08:217 and extend to 01:11:789 (Delete the break afterwards)
01:20:896 (2) - Two ticks forward and remove a reverse
01:22:860 (1) - Move to 01:22:503
01:45:360 (2) - Just make a slider here and make it reverse once at 01:45:539
01:49:646 (1) - End at 01:50:003
01:53:932 (1) - Remove a reverse, fill in the space
01:57:503 (1) - Extend to 01:59:646

I showed and mentioned a few things about the placement and patterns you could use in the easy diff, so I won't repeat them again

[Tsusuko's Mushroom]
- Why different combo colors? Should be the same as the rest of the diffs
00:33:217 (9) - New combo
00:33:396 (1) - Remove new combo
00:41:789 (1) - Ctrl + G ?
00:45:182 (2) - ^
00:45:717 (3) - ^
01:43:217 (1) - Middle point one grid down
01:52:324 (2,3) - x:168 y:240 ?

Really nice diff =w=

[Mother Mushroom]
- Is this another hard diff? o3o
- HP Drain Rate +1
- Approach Rate -1
00:12:860 (1) - Move to 00:14:289
00:20:003 (1) - Extend to 00:21:074
00:25:717 (7) - Remove two reverses, fill in the space
00:36:164 (5) - Move a tick back and make the slider last a tick longer
00:36:967 (1) - Add a circle instead
00:37:146 - Slider here until 00:37:324
00:54:289 (2) - Slider end stack
00:55:717 (5,6) - Make nicer blanket
00:58:753 (12) - Too much reverses
01:02:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Come up with a nicer pattern/placement for this
01:04:646 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make it look like a flower

SPOILER

01:11:789 - Add a circle
01:13:217 - ^
01:12:146 - You can do something here, listen to the beat ~
01:15:182 (5) - Remove a reverse
01:17:860 (3) - One reverse is enough
01:29:467 (2,3) - Make a mirror reflection
01:51:789 (1,2) - Stack with 01:50:539 (6,7)

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]
00:35:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Fill it in with somethign different, stream probably isn't the best
00:52:503 (6) - Two grids down, one grid right
01:10:182 (3,4) - Lower this down a bit
01:11:789 (1,2,3,4,5) - Lower the volume
01:36:074 (1) - Move this two ticks back and end at the same place
01:47:146 (5) - Last point one grid left

To YunoFanatic, I'd like to say that you should make use of hitsounds and watch your spacing ;A;
Take a look at the examples of patterns and placements I gave in the easy diff and try to use more of them in your other difficulties
Try focusing on the flow of the objects as well
You can call me to mod it again if you would like, other wise, good luck! owo)/

creampuff

438 posts

Joined August 2012

creampuff 2013-07-13T17:17:19+00:00

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:
[Tsusuko's Mushroom]
- Why different combo colors? Should be the same as the rest of the diffs I changed them
00:33:217 (9) - New combo Ok
00:33:396 (1) - Remove new combo ^
00:41:789 (1) - Ctrl + G ? No
00:45:182 (2) - ^ I want all of them to start in the same position, so switching them would only ruin the pattern
00:45:717 (3) - ^ ^
01:43:217 (1) - Middle point one grid down Ok
01:52:324 (2,3) - x:168 y:240 ? Nope

Really nice diff =w= Thank you ^^

I took the liberty of changing some things (such as the title and combo colors) but everything else is for you to change, so I didn't change anything else. Anyway, update; http://puu.sh/3BZJr.osu

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2013-07-13T20:32:48+00:00

[Small Mushroom]
HP OD +1
Easy diff I think DistanceSnap Please to be equal to all.

[Medium Mushroom]
Check AIMOD ( Ctrl+Shift+A )

Normal diff too same as Easy I think DistanceSnap Please to be equal to all.

[Tsusuko's Mushroom]
01:09:468 (3) - Dangerous DistanceSnap add Nc
other place nothing to say! really nice map

[Mother Mushroom]
00:14:289 - make slider?

00:25:717 (7) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

00:26:789 (12) - ^

00:33:039 - add note
00:34:824 (6) - end point 00:35:182 - here.
00:35:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think Rhythm broken... try this.

164,160,35717,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,128,35807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,100,35896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,80,35985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,68,36074,2,0,P|296:68|348:112,1,139.200001168213

00:52:682 (3,4,5) - humm.. I think slider cover better.

01:43:039 - add note
01:45:896 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]
Nothing to say~

good luck Everyone

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-13T22:52:18+00:00

uguuu updated~!

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2013-07-22T21:22:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-07-14T02:04:39+00:00

This recheck sounds me more like a remod lol ~.

Well, let's go!

[Small Mushroom]
00:26:789 (2,3) - Do this → http://puu.sh/3CidQ.jpg
00:28:574 (4,5,1) - Do this → http://puu.sh/3CieP.jpg
00:31:074 (2,3,1) - Do this → http://puu.sh/3CifM.jpg
00:36:074 (5,1) - Do this → http://puu.sh/3Cik1.jpg
00:41:074 (4) - Move to x:368 y:152
00:48:217 (1,2,3) - Do like this → http://puu.sh/3Cink.jpg
00:51:074 (4,5) - Do this → http://puu.sh/3CisC.jpg
00:52:860 (1,2,3,4) - Do this → http://puu.sh/3CiuF.jpg
01:00:003 (1,2) - Do this → http://puu.sh/3CiBm.jpg
01:03:217 (3,4) - Do like this → http://puu.sh/3CiCz.jpg
01:06:432 (6,7) - Do this → http://puu.sh/3CiU3.jpg
etc...
I feel DS = 1.3 fits better to the SV, and it seems DS was disabled.
The better way of assure your map fits rhe Ranking Crietria (the standards we all try to meet in order to get maps Ranked) is enabling DS. It will make the mapping easier for you.

[Medium Mushroom]
Enable DS
set DS = 1.3
set SV = 1.20
00:24:646 (1) - Shorten to 00:26:074
00:40:003 (4) - Shorten to 00:41:432
In general, this diff needs improve note placement and rhythm construction.
etc...

[Mother Mushroom]
Enable DS
set DS = 1.6, feels better to the chosen SV.
In general, this diff needs improve note placement and rhythm construction.

[Tsttsuko's Mushroom]
* Nice diff.

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]
* Nice diff.

Checked all (except Taiko ones which I can't).

That's it.

Hope it be helpful.

And let's play more osu! standard, so your mind will open. Suggest trying Normal/Hard diffs from the most recent Ranked maps. Many ideas will born, so you will be able to catch and apply them (:

Att.

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-07-14T02:09:23+00:00

Rechecking

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
You have kiai inconsistencies in your own difficulties (Mother Mushroom is different from Medium/Small), please make them the same

[Small Mushroom]
There are still alot of distance snap violations in this diff; please do enable distance snap and clean up your placements a bit
00:27:503 (3) - NC
00:52:860 (1,2) - i would delete these two notes, they are off sync with the music and is very difficult to hit properly
01:05:360 (5) - NC here instead of 01:06:432 (1)
01:17:860 (6) - snap end to 01:18:753
01:42:860 (5) - NC here instead of 01:43:932 (1)
01:51:789 (4) - NC

[Medium Mushroom]
Still alot of spacing violations, please use distance snap and adjust accordingly
00:30:360 (8) - NC
00:37:146 (1) - take off NC
00:39:914 (4) - move to 00:40:003 (and adjust spinner accordingly)
00:50:717 (6) - i would snap end to the white line here, players will be confused since this slider ends on a irregular beat
00:54:467 (4) - NC
01:17:860 (6) - reduce a repeat and add a note at 01:18:932 would play alot better
01:28:217 (4) - NC here and take off NC at 01:30:360 (1)
01:45:360 (2) - snap end to 01:45:717
01:48:932 (7) - NC

[Tsusuko's Mushroom]
whoa new diff lets take a look...
why 81% volume? xD just use 80%
00:44:378 (8) - this note feels a bit overmapped
00:46:521 (1) - put a whistle on this
00:53:932 (1) - finish on start
01:09:110 (2,3,4) - this is extreamly hard to read at this AR, try stacking here (01:09:468 (3) on 01:09:110 (2), and place 01:09:646 (4) at where 01:09:468 (3) was)
01:32:324 (4,5) - plays better rhythm wise if you did the slider first and then the note (maybe stack it on the end of the slider)
01:43:217 (1) - finish on start

[Mother Mushroom]
00:14:289 (1) - try the trick Tsusuko did in his/her diff; plays alot better for me
00:26:610 (10) - NC
00:33:753 - add a note here
00:35:896 (7,8,9,10) - now that is very hard to read; move 00:35:896 (7,8,9) furthur away to indicate the right rhythm visually. also NC on 00:36:253 (10)
00:52:682 (3,4,5) - this is just incorrectly snapped; delete 00:52:860 (4) and snap 00:52:682 (3) to 00:52:771
00:53:753 - add note
00:57:324 (8) - NC
01:02:503 (8) - ^
01:18:753 - add note
01:22:503 (1) - feels better if you end it at 01:25:003
01:31:074 (6) - NC
01:40:182 (11) - ^
01:43:039 - add note

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]
00:40:717 (6) - stack on end of 00:39:824 (3)
01:22:324 (1) - the heavy rhythm is actually 01:22:503, i would just remove the repeat since it sounds a bit extra
01:41:789 (1,2,3) - make a jump here to better indicate the 3/4 rhythm
my only real concern is the soft whistle spam on 1/4s and 1/8 repeat sliders, they sound really annoying when you continually hear them; i would suggest to remove some of them

@YunoFanatic: The rhythm in your diffs have been cleaned up and makes a lot more sense now, but there are still two big issues surrounding your diffs:
1. Inconsistencies in spacing, this mostly concerns Small/Medium Mushroom as i have pointed out in them and Must be fixed in order for this mapset to be rankable
2. Lack of hitsounds. Hitsounds are a requirement for ranking and you don't seem to have any (hitnormals doesnt count), so its best if you can study your guest difficulties and apply their hitsounding patterns to your maps (if the guests allow you can actually use this to copy over hitsounds from their diffs)

As promised i will shoot a star since i've seen great improvements to this map. Good luck in ranking~

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-07-14T02:18:59+00:00

hi

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]The Mapset need at least two Taiko diff, a Muzukashii and a Oni

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]

00:27:503 (1) - you can make middle point up little bit and end point right little bit, because this slider is too curved and can't fit (blanket) 00:28:039 (2) -
00:28:574 (4) - Distance Snap, this note is too near to 00:28:217 (3) - this note
00:31:074 (3) - +whistle
00:59:646 (1) - this slider is good but the pattern is little ugly imo
01:00:717 (4) - why you add finish, it's too noisy
01:06:432 (4) - ^
01:41:164 (4,5) - too curved imo

[Mother Mushroom]

00:14:289 (1) - can you make this spinner's length like LilyWhite diff? it seem weird and nonsense
00:20:003 (1) - ^
00:23:574 (1,2,3,4) - are you sure you want put this? it's really weird
00:24:646 (5) - NC it
00:26:789 (11) - ^
00:29:467 (5) - end of the note is weird
00:31:610 (1) - this note is too near to 00:31:074 (8) -
00:35:896 (7) - NC
00:36:253 (10) - this note isn't 1/4, why you stack with this three note? 00:35:896 (7,8,9) -

this diff is really need more works...

[Tsusuko's Mushroom]
nice diff

[Ono's Oni]
Rename as Ono's Taiko Oni?

00:07:949 (1,1) - dk? it's fit better imo
00:11:610 - add a note, you can hear sound

GL~

Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2013-07-14T02:24:36+00:00

~~status: remapping Tiny Mushroom~~

Edit: Done

Last edited by Ayesha Altugle 2013-07-14T03:05:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-14T02:29:47+00:00

Uguu done hitsound of all my diff .3.

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2013-07-22T21:24:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

787B

769 posts

Joined November 2010

787B 2013-07-14T02:44:19+00:00

Hi.
Mod requested from my Modding Queue.
Wow! A lot of mods in such a few time, you gotta teach me how to do that

(jk).

General

Looks good.

Small Mushroom

There are several points here which I think are way too hard for an easy. Like seriously, you better avoid doing jumps here, it's not cool. Your default spacing for this diff is also pretty much above average, I wouldn't recommend using 1,8x spacing here. Basically, this is all you need to improve on the diff. Generally speaking, they are pretty much everywhere on the diff, though I will point the jumps I think are way too hard.

00:30:360 (1,2) - Biggest jump I've ever seen on an easy. No joke. Consider reducing the distance between them.

00:36:074 (5) - 00:36:074 (5) - NC, since the song changes (drums come up).

00:36:074 (5,1) - Better give them a bit more of space, overlap looks unnecessary.

00:37:860 (1,2) - Their shape could've been improved, it looks way too simple to me.
Example

00:50:003 (3,4) - Unnecessary jump here as well.

00:54:646 (5,6) - Consider making a better blanket here. The same applies for 01:01:432 (2,3) - .
Example
Notice I've used grid level 4 to do this.

01:07:503 (2) - Better not reduce the spacing here, it ruins the flow.

01:11:789 - Better add a break after this.

01:19:646 (1,2) - Overlap here is bad. Might want to place (2) somewhere else, or even rotate it. Or even better, you can do a blanket with them. It also makes to spin better the following spinner.
Example

01:43:932 (1,2) - I'm pretty sure you should've started this slider at 01:44:646 - , doesn't make sense to make a sudden change of white to red tick.

Medium Mushroom

00:24:646 (1) - Reverse arrow must be at 00:25:360 - , so reduce its length by two ticks. You'll probably want to make a blanket here too.
Example

00:30:360 (8) - NC right?

00:31:789 (11,12) - Unnecessary jump, better reduce the spacing.

00:39:914 (4) - I'm pretty sure this slider should start at 00:40:003 - and finish 00:41:432 - . You better fix this.
Example

00:50:717 (6) - This should end at 00:51:432 - .

00:54:646 (5) - You better replace this for a slider (to end at 00:55:003 - ), so it won't look like something's missing. You can also do the same with 01:01:789 (3) - , replacing it for a slider to end at 01:02:146 - .

01:04:646 (6,1) - Better move (1) somewhere since its overlapping with (6).

01:17:860 (6) - Two repeat arrows seems a bit excessive, try with only two arrows and add a circle at 01:18:932 - , it'll play better in my opinion.

01:45:360 (2) - This should end at 01:45:717 - .

01:48:932 (7) - Better add NC because of the vocals.

Tsusuko's Mushroom

00:32:146 (6) - Better not hide it since you made something like this before with it visible, at 00:26:432 (6) - to be specific. Consider also making it visible here for consistency.

00:37:503 (5,6) - Could've made a better blanket. Flow could also have been improved.
Example
[imghttp://puu.sh/3Ck0w.jpg][/img]

00:39:467 (3) - Ctrl+g works much better.

00:44:378 (8,9) - Also consider not hiding them for the same reason I said before. This also applies for 00:50:003 (6) - ,01:07:146 (6) - and 01:45:003 (6) -

00:45:182 (2) - Another place where ctrl+g would play better. You might want to do this also on 00:46:253 (4) - .

01:09:110 (2,3,4) - Better give them a different spacing since their respective times are not the same from each other. In short, move 01:09:468 (3,4) - somewhere else. This looks very consufusing to read.

Ono's Oni

00:20:003 (1) - I'm pretty sure you should make a triplet here, the vocals are way too clear to listen to leave it empty.

01:16:789 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Shouldn't this be all k?

Mother Mushroom

00:24:378 (4) - Consider deleting this slider and adding a reverse arrow on 00:24:110 (3) - , it doesn't really match up with the song to me.

00:24:646 (5) - NC because it begins the vocals section. Make sure to also add one at 00:30:182 (6) - and 00:36:074 (9) - .

00:29:467 (5) - Might want to extend this to 00:30:003 -

00:36:074 (9) - Delete this circle and move the slider at 00:36:164 (10) - to its position, it plays better with the song.

01:40:182 (11) - Might want to give a better spacing

LilyWhite's Mushroom

00:13:932 (1) -

00:27:503 (1,2) - Blanket could've been improved.
Example

00:42:682 - Better add a circle here, looks empty without anything.

00:49:557 (6,1) - Spacing.

01:36:074 (1) - Better put this to start at 01:35:896 - .

I think that's it, good luck there!

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2013-07-14T08:06:23+00:00

post just in case you missed that I finished mod p/2429624

pieguyn

2,020 posts

Joined May 2009

pieguyn 2013-07-14T08:10:18+00:00

hi from my queue

[General]

this timing is needed to fix downbeat
resnap all notes shouldn't be necessary, but good idea to try it just in case
easier taiko diff is needed
combo colors aren't consistent across all the diffs, choose one set of combo colors plz ~
try to start & end at the same times on all diffs plz

[Small Mushroom]
spacing is really weird and isn't consistent, go through and resnap all notes plz. also IMO 1.8x is pretty big for Easy diff..
there's some other problems (hitsounds, NCs), IMO just remove this diff and use [Tiny Mushroom] is fine, there's no need for 2 easys

[Medium Mushroom]

if this is supposed to be normal why are there less notes than in [Tiny Mushroom], I'd recommend filling in some missing beats and adding some 1/2s..
also do the hitsounds like in [Tiny Mushroom] plz
spacing is inconsistent, go through and respace all notes plz. 1.8 seems a bit big for normal diff so maybe reduce it a bit would be good
NCs are weird, it should mostly match new measures and new rhythms, put NC every 8 beats here or something seems fine

00:24:646 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/3CvdY.jpg try this rhythm instead, feels way more comfortable ~
00:39:914 (4) - http://puu.sh/3Cvfm.jpg do this instead plz, using 1/4s here just feels weird
00:50:717 (6) - extend it by 1/4
01:01:789 (3) - try 1/1 slider instead
01:17:860 (6) - split into 2 sliders plz, having a 1/1 with 2 repeats is a bit boring for normal diff imo
01:45:360 (2) - end it at 01:45:717 -

[Tiny Mushroom]
00:01:789 (2) - 3/4 slider in easy feels weird, just remove it or replace with 1 note sounds fine...
00:21:788 (3) - too far from (2), if you wanna center it maybe make a blanket pattern http://puu.sh/3CvxR.jpg
00:53:931 (1) - remove one repeat, more comfortable for easy diff imo
00:56:788 (1) - same as 00:53:931 (1) -
01:11:341 (1) - maybe start it 1/4 later is better
01:21:074 (1) - don't put hidden slider in easy diff plz, confusing for newbies, maybe try a symmetry pattern instead? http://puu.sh/3CvBD.jpg
01:22:502 (1) - http://puu.sh/3CvCD.jpg more comfortable for easy diff imo
01:33:216 (5) - 1/2 slider with 2 repeats like this is really confusing for newbies, maybe just try a 1/1 slider
01:36:073 (5) - how about removing it? more natural for easy diff and fits vocal, if not then just same as 01:33:216 (5) -

[Tsukuko's Mushroom]
normal sampleset doesn't seem to fit this song, try like in this part 01:25:360 ~ 01:31:253 - instead? (also a custom clap that's just normal-hitnormal would make it easier to do..)
01:09:468 (3) - really unexpected spacing for hard diff, maybe stack under (2) http://puu.sh/3CvJZ.jpg

[Mother Mushroom]
spacing is random again, respace all notes plz. it's good to use different spacing for jumps and other parts if it fits the song, but this spacing feels random, for example parts like this 01:38:217 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - >< ofc keep any notes you intended to be jumps
hitsounds and NCs feel weird again, try model it after [Tsukiko's Mushroom], [LilyWhite's Mushroom], or [Tiny Mushroom], it seemed fine there
00:25:717 (7) - this kind of slider is kind of unnatural to play, split into multiple sliders seems better
00:29:467 (5) - end 1/4 later
00:30:717 - add note here is more natural for insane diff, also at 00:31:432 -
00:36:164 (5) - start 1/4 earlier
00:41:074 (4) - maybe end it 1/2 later fits song better
00:44:110 - 00:44:289 - 00:44:467 - add notes here with jump would feel good ~
00:50:182 (4) - put a 1/2 repeat slider instead fits song better
00:57:146 - add note same idea as before
00:58:753 (12) - http://puu.sh/3CvXT.jpg
01:02:146 - add note
01:15:182 (5) - http://puu.sh/3Cw14.jpg
01:17:860 (3) - http://puu.sh/3Cw1S.jpg
01:31:789 (10,11) - http://puu.sh/3Cw3B.jpg feels more natural imo ~
01:55:896 (7) - http://puu.sh/3Cw6c.jpg

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]
AR +1?
00:41:789 ~ 00:44:289 - maybe try normal-hitnormal instead of soft-hitclap?
01:14:289 ~ 01:19:646 - try clap on just 2nd and 4th white line here
01:31:074 ~ 01:33:574 - same idea as before
01:39:646 (4) - sliders like this with 3 repeats are kind of confusing and unnatural to play, maybe try removing a repeat or making a 1/2 repeat slider instead (same for the other sliders, no need to go pointing out every one

)

guest diffs felt fine, but your diffs need some work on spacing, placements & hitsounds IMO. hope this helps until then ~ good luck

YunoFanatic

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YunoFanatic 2013-07-14T13:25:48+00:00

Uguu sorry for random spacing

.3. fixed~!

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2013-07-22T21:25:29+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Overwrite

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Overwrite 2013-07-14T14:26:23+00:00

Also, I forgot to say, I completely remapped my GD.
Less streamy and more jumpy now.

creampuff

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creampuff 2013-07-14T15:03:52+00:00

jonathanlfj

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Tsusuko's Mushroom]
whoa new diff lets take a look...
why 81% volume? xD just use 80% Yeeeeeah, forgot to change.
00:44:378 (8) - this note feels a bit overmapped Perhaps you're right. Changed
00:46:521 (1) - put a whistle on this You wouldn't be able to hear it too well, and I'd like for it to be silent anyway. So, no.
00:53:932 (1) - finish on start Sure
01:09:110 (2,3,4) - this is extreamly hard to read at this AR, try stacking here (01:09:468 (3) on 01:09:110 (2), and place 01:09:646 (4) at where 01:09:468 (3) was) Ok, that works better.
01:32:324 (4,5) - plays better rhythm wise if you did the slider first and then the note (maybe stack it on the end of the slider) It actually sounds rather off to me
01:43:217 (1) - finish on start Ok

Wolf

Wolf wrote:
Tsusuko's Mushroom
00:32:146 (6) - Better not hide it since you made something like this before with it visible, at 00:26:432 (6) - to be specific. Consider also making it visible here for consistency.
As far as consistency goes, there are other sliders such as this that appear later on (with the note stacked on the tail) and if I were to make the note visible for consistency would mean I would have to make all of the other ones visible. It's not exactly what I was going for, considering I wanted some to be stacked and others to be visible for the map to be a bit more diverse. I'm going to have to say no.
00:37:503 (5,6) - Could've made a better blanket. Flow could also have been improved. Ok
00:39:467 (3) - Ctrl+g works much better.
No
00:44:378 (8,9) - Also consider not hiding them for the same reason I said before. This also applies for 00:50:003 (6) - ,01:07:146 (6) - and 01:45:003 (6) -
The statement I made before about it also applies to this as well.
00:45:182 (2) - Another place where ctrl+g would play better. You might want to do this also on 00:46:253 (4) - .
As this was mentioned before, I decided to switch both of them now.
01:09:110 (2,3,4) - Better give them a different spacing since their respective times are not the same from each other. In short, move 01:09:468 (3,4) - somewhere else. This looks very consufusing to read.
Already fixed, as the previous mod suggested it

pieguy1372

pieguy1372 wrote:
[Tsukuko's Mushroom]
normal sampleset doesn't seem to fit this song, try like in this part 01:25:360 ~ 01:31:253 - instead? (also a custom clap that's just normal-hitnormal would make it easier to do..) I beg to differ, regarding the normal sampleset, but yes a custom clap would make it easier. I'll have to see about that.
01:09:468 (3) - really unexpected spacing for hard diff, maybe stack under (2) http://puu.sh/3CvJZ.jpg Already fixed

Update; http://puu.sh/3CGJs.osu

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