1. Hard (2,74 stars, 302 notes)
2. Lunatic (3,72 stars, 426 notes)
3. Normal (1,57 stars, 159 notes)

Satellite wrote:

hi~ Hey~
osu! need's more senya o.o/ Yeah \o/

Changes

[General]
I think. PreviewTime: 65269 is better? you're right
AudioLeadIn: 2500 is so long → change 2000 is better? okay
title Nureta Kami ni Furerareta Toki (Short Ver.) or (Cut Ver.)? this mp3 so not Full Ver. I knew i forgot something D: I added "(Short Ver.)

[Lunatic]
00:02:075 (1,2,3,4) - umm.. I like this. try it. Yeah, that's nice.

00:25:301 (1) - first point I think add Finish is fit Done
00:47:752 (3) - follow 00:47:559 (2) - here Okay

00:49:301 (4,5) - add whistle Okay~
01:05:559 (3) - add finish? Okay
01:20:075 (3) - ^ Okay

01:11:365 (5) - 01:23:752 (5) - last point add clap? 01:23:967 - here. Done
01:50:462 - add note and stack to 01:50:656 (1) - here? Done

02:13:301 (5) - 02:25:688 (5) - same 01:23:752 (5) - here Done
02:35:172 (6) - first point add finish? Okay
02:38:462 (1) - move x^84 y^20 Okay

[Hard]
00:22:204 - same Lunatic Oops, i forgot that
00:26:462 (1) - return point add finish? Okay
00:49:301 (3) - add whistle 00:49:301 - and 00:49:494 - here Okay
01:11:365 (1) - 01:23:752 (1) - last point add clap? same Lunatic Diff Okay
01:51:236 (3) - 00:49:301 (3) - ^ ^
02:13:301 (1) - 02:25:688 (1) - same 01:11:365 (1) - ^
02:07:494 (3) - 02:19:881 (2) - forget finish? Ooops~ added.

[Normal]
00:51:623 (6) - 01:53:559 (6) - last point add finish? Done~

really nice mapset Thank you!

good luck!! and star~

Thanks for the mod and star!

1. 00:28:591- add a note

1. 00:00:527 (2,3) - avoid overlap
2. 00:27:430 (2) - delete
3. 01:05:559 (3,4) - avoid overlap
4. 01:17:946 (2,3) - ^
5. 01:33:043- add crap
6. 01:53:559 (5) - change the slider-end from 01:53:946 to 01:54:139
7. 01:55:301 (2) - delete

1. 00:09:623 (3,4) - avoid overlap
2. 00:16:204 (7,1) - ^
3. 00:28:204 (8,1) - this jump is too difficult
4. 01:14:656 (8,9) - avoid overlap
5. 02:35:559 (7,1) - this jump is too difficult

RandomEffect wrote:

Hi~ Heya~

let me mod, please~

Changes

[Normal]

1. 00:28:591- add a note I don't think it fits so good.

[Hard]

1. 00:00:527 (2,3) - avoid overlap These kind of overlaps should be fine.
2. 00:27:430 (2) - delete Okay
3. 01:05:559 (3,4) - avoid overlap Same as i mentioned above
4. 01:17:946 (2,3) - ^ ^
5. 01:33:043- add crap Okay
6. 01:53:559 (5) - change the slider-end from 01:53:946 to 01:54:139 That doesn't fit so well.
7. 01:55:301 (2) - delete I'd like not to.

[Lunatic]

1. 00:09:623 (3,4) - avoid overlap Same as i mentioned above.
2. 00:16:204 (7,1) - ^ ^
3. 00:28:204 (8,1) - this jump is too difficult Should be better now
4. 01:14:656 (8,9) - avoid overlap Same as i mentioned above. These kind of overlaps should be fine.
5. 02:35:559 (7,1) - this jump is too difficult I think that one is fine.

All is sugession. almost good, I think

~Good Luck~

neonat wrote:

Some suggestions.

Changes

Lunatic

01:22:494 - add a note Alright
02:24:430 - ^ Okay

Normal

00:06:720 (1) - shorten to 00:07:301
00:08:269 (3) - ^ to 00:08:849
00:19:107 (1) - ^ to 00:19:688

No changes here. I'm following the piano in the backround~

Good Luck!

Verlaren wrote:

Yo. m4m from your queue

Changes

[General]
difficulty each of your map must begin and end at the same time. Fix it! Fixed

[Normal]
02:14:269 (2,3) - distance spacing error. Fixed
02:15:236 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:12:914 (1) - swap whistle on finish (slider's head) Done
00:19:107 (1) - remove clap from head and add finish, because sounds is really good. Okay
01:07:107 (3) - maybe move clap from tail on 01:08:269(4) ? I rather not.

[Hard]
00:12:527 (6) - swap whistle on finish I think it's okay how it is.
00:24:527 (2) - missed finish on tail. Of course remove clap from tail The clap fits better imo.
00:26:462 (1) - remove clap from repeat Okay
02:30:720 (2) - move on x:348 y:120 Done
02:35:752 (3) - move on one grid left for correct spacing Done

[Lunatic]
00:12:527 (1) - missed finish I don't think a finish fits here.
00:19:107 (1) - swap whistle on finish (slider's head) Done
01:42:720 (1) - ^ Done

That's all. Sorry for small mod, I hope thi can help you.

bigfrog wrote:

Hi hi from m4m :3
only my suggestions,i'm not realy a good mod

SPOILER

Normal
00:06:720(1) tail move to x:28 y:64 It is perfect the way it is now
00:09:817(5) try this Okay

00:20:656(3) tail move to x81 y:229 then head&tail surround 00:20:269(1) perfect o.o Done
00:48:527(3) one grid left Okay
00:57:043(5,6,7,1) will looks better i think I prefer the current one.

01:00:139(2) if you change then move it to correct place
02:10:591(5) one grid down It's equal to 02:10:203 (4) so i'd like to keep it

Hard
00:06:720(2) tail and 00:07:301 with correct distance I'd like to keep it the way it is.

00:10:978(1) x:372 y:240 Okay
00:15:623(6) one grid up Done
00:18:720(1,2) x:284 y:320 Done
00:56:849(2) one grid up Done
01:03:623(3) try to let this slide bend as 01:04:398(7) or opposite I think it's okay the way it is.
01:16:398(2) reverse not surround 01:17:172(3) perfect Fixed
01:28:010(1) distance?(0.5) try this Okay

01:30:914(2) one grid down Done
01:32:656(1) bend and surround 01:33:236(2) head I think i looks nicer the way it is.
01:58:204(1) not surround 01:57:817(3) tail perfect Fixed
02:10:204(4) wrong distance? (1.16x,1.16x) Fixed
02:19:494(1,2) (1) x:108 y:168 (2) x:12 y:228 I don't really get it ._.
02:20:462(3,1) if you change please fixed these to correct place
02:27:236(4) reverse change with (1.10x) distance? Done

02:29:946(1) reverse not stack 02:28:978(7) tail very well o.o Fixed
02:35:172(2) tail x:256 y:216 Done
02:35:752(3) x:336 y:252 Okay

Lunatic
00:02:075(1) tail try this Done

00:05:172(2) wrong distance?(1.07) replace? I think this is fine
00:22:978(9) not surround 00:23:752(1) perfect Fixed
01:04:494 add a circle? I don't think it really fits there.
01:09:236(4) one grid down Done
01:17:172(6) tail move to x:16 y:272 I'd like to keep it the way it is. I think it looks nicer.
01:22:494(2) delete? This notes follows the vocals. So i'd like to keep it.
01:28:010(1) change like this Okay

02:05:946(5,6) x:76 y:200 Done

02:24:430(2) delete? o.o Same as i mentioned above.
02:35:559(7) x:504 y:336 Okay

i like this song! ><
hope my mod can help you
good luck~!!

shoot Star!!

1. 00:01:688 (3) - I think the blanket would be a little better with 3 at x=260 y=168. (If you change this move the other sliders as well)
2. 00:05:946 (3) - Blanket a little bit better if moved at x=272 y=256.
3. 00:20:656 (3) - It should be 1/4 beat longer.
4. 01:29:559 (3) - Why not curving it a little for a blanket with 01:28:785 (2)?
5. 02:12:914 (3) - ^

1. 00:01:107 (3) - Move it's end point a little bit to the right to avoid the overlapping. You should have something like this:
   
2. 00:05:172 (2) - Why not curving it a little for a blanket?
3. 00:17:559 (2) - ^
4. 00:42:333 (1) - Move it to x=340 y=212 for a better blanket with 00:41:559 (3).
5. 00:45:430 (1,2) - Blanket not good.
6. 00:55:107 (1,2,3) - 1 is curved and 2 straight so why not doing 3 curved for the symmetry.
7. 01:05:559 (3,4) - Same as 00:01:107 (3).
8. 01:17:946 (2,3) - Here it's good XD
9. 01:32:656 (1) - Why not curving it a little for a blanket?
10. 02:31:881 (4) - CTRL+G?

1. 00:09:623 (3,4) - Same as in Hard.
2. 01:21:236 (7,8,1) - Maybe you could have done something like this for a better overlapping:
   
3. 01:50:462 (5) - Since you seem to follow the lyrics you should delete this note.
4. 02:10:591 (7,8,9) - You should move them to x=244 y=144 for a perfect parallelogram with 02:10:010 (4,5,6).
5. 02:27:236 (3) - Why not curving it a little for a blanket? (Yes i'm addicted to blankets XD) (You did it at 02:33:430 (1))

Setsurei wrote:

some suggestions, and all of them are positions - blankets especially
(I'm too noob for modding other stuffs "'º|¯|_)

Setsurei's Mod~

[Normal]
00:00:527 (2) - tail point x 164 y 120
00:02:075 (4) - copy from 00:00:527 (2) - , flip horizontally + reverse selection then drag the head point to x 348 y 128 Done
00:50:849 (5) - move to x 308 y 300 Okay
00:51:623 (6) - x 220 y 112 Done
01:08:268 (4) - x 272 y 176 ^
01:11:752 (1) - x 352 y 28, tail point x 352 y 128 Okay
01:12:333 (2) - x 356 y 180, tail point x 224 y 216 ^
02:22:978 (5) - tail point x 448 y 164 Done

[Hard]
00:05:946 (5) - center point x 156 y 248 Alright
00:20:269 (1) - tail point x 284 y 112 Done
00:22:010 (3) - tail point x 140 y 208 ^
00:24:527 (3) - center point x 256 y 128 This one seems to be fine.
00:28:204 (3) - tail point x 136 y 260 Done
00:54:333 (6) - center point x 228 y 172, tail point x 216 y 128 ^
01:04:398 (7) - center point x 312 y 296 ^
01:15:623 (1) - drag head point to x 136 y 76, tail point x 156 y 200, keep the center point at x 172 y 132 ^
01:26:462 (1) - x 408 y 260 ^
01:49:688 (3) - center point x 328 y 248, tail point x 248 y 268 ^
01:58:204 (1) - center point x 84 y 164 ^
02:08:656 (1) - center point x 272 y 152 ^
02:09:043 (2) - tail point x 348 y 192 ^
02:17:559 (1) - drag head point to x 328 y 68 Alright
02:19:881 (2) - tail point x 16 y 372 Okay
02:26:075 (2) - tail point x 284 y 36 ^
02:30:720 (2) - center point x 400 y 108 ^
02:35:172 (2) - tail point x 252 y 228 ^

[Lunatic]
00:09:623 (3) - center point x 192 y 96, tail point x 144 y 32 Done
00:22:978 (9) - center point x 288 y 136 ^
00:25:881 (2) - center point x 172 y 212 ^
00:27:817 (7) - tail point x 136 y 184 Okay
00:43:881 (3) - center point x 216 y 244, tail point x 216 y 184
00:44:269 (4) - center point x 88 y 304
00:44:656 (5) - center point x 100 y 176
^ ignore the 3 of my suggestions if you want to preserve the same shape of them (00:43:881 (3,4,5) - ) Since i prefer the current shape i'll keep it for now.
00:46:978 (1) - center point x 380 y 108 Done
01:14:656 (8) - center point x 296 y 108, tail point x 376 y 36 ^
02:08:269 (5) - tail point x 224 y 168 Alright

gogo senya \o/
good luck for ranked Smoothie!

rezoons wrote:

Feeling when i played the map:
Excellent, your map is absolutely perfect ^^. I give you a ~star~ with pleasure. Thank you!
The only thing i noticed is the lack of difficulty in the Hard diff. It's not really a flaw but maybe you could have done more small jump for example... I know. But it's just the way I map Hard's. I try to prevent jumps on them. However, I added a few on the Kiai sections.

rezoons Mod~

Mod:
[Normal]

1. 00:01:688 (3) - I think the blanket would be a little better with 3 at x=260 y=168. (If you change this move the other sliders as well) I think it's fine
2. 00:05:946 (3) - Blanket a little bit better if moved at x=272 y=256. Done
3. 00:20:656 (3) - It should be 1/4 beat longer. Woops. I don't know what happend there. Fixed
4. 01:29:559 (3) - Why not curving it a little for a blanket with 01:28:785 (2)? I prefer the straight slider here.
5. 02:12:914 (3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. 00:01:107 (3) - Move it's end point a little bit to the right to avoid the overlapping. You should have something like this: Done
   
2. 00:05:172 (2) - Why not curving it a little for a blanket? Same reason as i mentioned on "Normal"
3. 00:17:559 (2) - ^ ^
4. 00:42:333 (1) - Move it to x=340 y=212 for a better blanket with 00:41:559 (3). Okay
5. 00:45:430 (1,2) - Blanket not good. This one isn't supposed to be a blanket. :c
6. 00:55:107 (1,2,3) - 1 is curved and 2 straight so why not doing 3 curved for the symmetry. I've made 3 straight sliders instread. xP
7. 01:05:559 (3,4) - Same as 00:01:107 (3). Alright
8. 01:17:946 (2,3) - Here it's good XD Hum~
9. 01:32:656 (1) - Why not curving it a little for a blanket? Because i like these kind of patterns. :3
10. 02:31:881 (4) - CTRL+G? I rather not.

[Lunatic]

1. 00:09:623 (3,4) - Same as in Hard. Fixed
2. 01:21:236 (7,8,1) - Maybe you could have done something like this for a better overlapping: Done
   
3. 01:50:462 (5) - Since you seem to follow the lyrics you should delete this note. Done
4. 02:10:591 (7,8,9) - You should move them to x=244 y=144 for a perfect parallelogram with 02:10:010 (4,5,6). Alright
5. 02:27:236 (3) - Why not curving it a little for a blanket? (Yes i'm addicted to blankets XD) (You did it at 02:33:430 (1)) I want to keep this triangle pattern. :c 02:27:236 (3,4,5) -

Indeed, really excellent, i nearly find nothing .

Good luck for rank ^^

Heanday wrote:

Hi, from My Modding Queue

Changes

[Normal]

01:16:398 (2) - Follow the curve of the previous slider ? I'd like to keep it how it is.
01:44:269 (2) - x : 199 y 50 symetry Alright
02:30:720 (2,3) - What about use clap tick rate on these slider ? That sounds a bit weird imo.

That's all, nice one Thanks~

[Hard]

00:49:688 (4) - Ctrl G? Done
02:29:946 (1) - Hidden revers Fixed

[Lunatic]

00:28:881 (1) - What about finish this spinner like that ? 00:28:881 (1) - That's follow voice and sounds good i think :° ( suggestion ) I don't really get it. :c
00:23:752 (1,2) - Finish ? I prefer the claps.
00:26:849 (4) - Early slid finish ? Revoke clap Okay
00:28:591 (1,2) - this is not " finish " for me, sonds like a clap and the n°2 need a whistle I've added a clap on 00:28:591 (1) instead.
00:53:559 (3) - Early slider need a clap The whistle fits way better imo.
00:54:333 (3) - ^ ^
00:55:107 (3) - ^ ^
01:01:301 (8) - ^ ^
01:01:688 (9) - Finish ? I've added a finish on 01:02:462 (1) instead.
01:28:785 (2) - ^ It doesn't really fit imo.
01:29:559 (6) - Early slider too Same as above.
01:34:591 (6) - Whistle I don't really like that. :c
01:34:978 (1) - Early slid ^
01:35:365 (2) - ^
01:47:365 (7,8) - I think, you can add a circle between I'd rather not.

That's all, realy, good map, nice patern, funny to play, good job *-* Thanks!

Realy good map, funny to play, hope i helped you a lit ! Gl bye :3

Anroyz wrote:

my mod

SPOILER

clear all notes its the most shitmap ever seen :-)















no joke i like it :}

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

Changes

[Normal]
00:08:269 (3) - Same as 00:06:720 (1)? I'd like to keep it the way it is.
00:27:623 (3) - Stop it at 00:28:398? Sure.
01:22:591 (2) - Try to move it up Okay
01:32:656 (3) - Stop it at 01:33:430? Done
02:19:881 (1) - Same as 02:21:430 (3)? Okay
02:34:591 (3) - Stop it at 02:35:365? Sure
[Hard]
01:47:365 (1,2,3) - Reverse them. Do the opposite of 00:45:430 (1,2,3) I'd rather not.
02:19:881 (2) - Try to curve in the right because the slider is outside of the grid That shouldn't be that much of a problem.

Good Luck and star!

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

Hi, From my queue ~

[Hard]
00:24:527 (2) - Distance problem, so near from the previous note. This one should be fine.
02:00:914 (1) - remove NC, then add NC here 02:01:301 (3) - Okay

-----------------
Sorry if it's a short mod, Perfect map ! Have a star ~
Good Luck =)

Kiiwa wrote:

from #modreqs~

Hi~

Kiiwa's Mod

[General]

1. Hitsounds are pretty low in volume, maybe increase them? 01:42:720 - Especially here! Should be better now.
2. No Easy? Are you sure? :3 Yeah, i don't really think a easy is needed here.

[Lunatic]

1. 00:28:591 (1) - Better to remove clap. Alright
2. 00:43:881 - Add a whistle. Sure
3. 00:53:172 (1) - Add a finish. Okay
4. 01:05:172 - Finish doesn't suit here, try something else? Try to make it match 02:07:107 - too. I removed that finish.
5. 01:05:559 - You don't want whistles in this Kiai time? Nah, not really.
6. 01:36:430 - There is a sound here in the song, maybe add a note. Alright
7. 01:12:333 - Remove clap, 01:12:139 - Add clap. I'm trying to follow the vocals with the clap.
8. 01:31:881 (2) - Sounds way better as a 1/2 slider then a note instead. I'd like to keep it the way it is.
9. 02:33:817 (2) - Again, this would sound better as a 1/2. ^
10. 02:35:365 - This hitsound should be the same as 01:33:430 - Alright
11. 02:35:559 (7,1) - You should make this spacing smaller, maybe change (1) and (2) position for the following pattern? I don't think thats much of a problem.
12. 02:38:365 - Add a note, these is a sound in the song again. Alright

[Hard]

1. 00:25:301 (3) - Add new combo, 00:26:462 (1) - Remove new combo. Okay
2. 01:02:849 - Missed your clap. A clap here sounds a bit weird imo.
3. 01:05:172 (1) - Finish sounds strange here, change it to 01:05:559 - maybe? Alright
4. 01:10:978 (5,1) - Switch new combo on these two notes. I don't really see why. :c
5. 01:17:559 (1,2) - Again^ Alright
6. 02:07:107 (1,3) - Again, change the finish placement. Okay
7. 02:13:688 - Add a finish. Okay

[Normal]

1. 01:11:752 - Add finish here like other difficulties.
2. 01:24:139 - Add finish here like other difficulties.
3. 02:13:688 - Add finish here like other difficulties.
4. 02:26:075 - Add finish here like other difficulties.
   
   I added all the finishes here.

I thought it was pretty good
Good luck~

gideon5504 wrote:

gideon5504's Mod

Normal:
~Normal is fine for me.

Hard:
~00:00:333 - Try not to use triplets in the beginning with no beat to follow. Alright
~Dun really see anything else.

Lunatic:
~00:00:333 - Same thing with triplets. I think it's fine on this diff. These notes are actually following the vocals :c
~01:22:494 (2,3) - Place circle and slider slightly down closer to the head of slider 1. Okay
~02:24:430 (2,3) -^Same goes for what u've copied,now move it to the left instead of down. Alright

Doesn't seem much,but that was all I could find.(Sorry for not being so professional X.X) Good luck though!