shARPII wrote:

Salut! Mod pour ton topic M4M C'est parti!

[Easy]
01:10:765 - J'ai l'impression que ça fait un peu vide c'est dommage, ce que j'aurais fait c'est mettre :
01:10:324 (4)- Circle à la place du slider
01:10:765 - Un long slider (déplace peut être celui qui est à 01:12:529 et met autre chose à cet endroit (vu que la chanteuse tient la note avant et pas à ce moment là). J'ai modifié, mais je l'ai mis différemment, j'arrivais à rien avec un long slider
01:50:029 - J'accroche pas au spinner ici, met peut être autre chose à la place? Genre réduit le slider de 1/4, met un circle sur le beat et répète ça encore une fois et tu devrais arriver avec un circle au beat de fin du spinner. J'ai pas compris ce que tu voulais que je fasse, donc je laisse, dsl.

Le reste c'est impec.

[Normal]

01:13:632 (2) - Je trouve que ça s'enchaine un peu trop rapidement. Le spinner est vraiment nécessaire? Surtout que t'en colles encore un juste après. J'ai remappé cette partie
01:29:074 (3) - J'aurais mis le circle en dessous de la fin du slider (enfin ça c'est peut être perso ^^) C'est mieux ^^

Bon pour le reste c'est bien placé mais ce qui me dérange un peu plus c'est que j'ai pas l'impression que ça soit du niveau "normal" ^^
Beaucoup de cercles qui suivent la chanteuse (donc ça suit le rythme mais c'est un peu dur à chopper pour des nouveaux), des cercles peut être un peu trop dur à aller chercher pour ce niveau etc.. Pour moi, il y a beaucoup trop de cercles qui sont trop rapprochés dans le temps et il faudrait souvent retirer ceux qui sont au milieu (vu que t'es quand même à 4.18)
Ensuite le distance spacing à 1.2x je suis pas trop fan mais ça reste une histoire de goût ^^

Ex (pour les cercles qui seraient à enlever) :
00:14:515 (4)
01:11:868 (2)
01:34:809 (2)
01:35:691 (4)
01:54:221 (2)

Enfin bon, je pense que tu as compris le principe, je les ai pas tous pris ^^ J'ai fait le ménage, en effet, tout en gardant quand même le même esprit en placing et en gardant quelques passages un peu chauds, quand même.

[Hard]

00:44:625 (2) - Remove circle (celui là est discutable) Quand même enlevé
01:01:169 (5) - ^ Enlevé
01:07:235 (1) - Pas très fan du 2ème spinner balancé comme ça mais soit J'ai allongé le précédent Spinner
01:16:831 (2) - Remove circle
01:27:419 (5) - ^
01:27:860 (7) - ^ (je trouvais ça un peu too much)
01:32:272 (3) - ^
01:43:522 (3) - ^
01:46:500 (3, 4) - Mouai trouve autre chose ^^'

Tout a été supprimé/chagé

Des fois un peu trop collé et tu sais pas trop ce qu'il se passe (ce qui oblige à se retaper pas mal de fois la map pour comprendre pourquoi son combo s'est pété ^^') mais sinon la beatmap est bien et en général, et sa difficulté aussi (à part sur les passages que je t'ai donné où ça peut être discutable). Il est vrai que le peu de place accentue la difficulté, mais je n'ai pas pu décoller les notes des masses sans faire des spacings ahurissants :/

Beau boulot! Bonne chance pour la suite :3

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi tryed M4M i don't know if my mod will be usefull anyway i try
if i tape "(?)" it's because i'm not sure of something u.u
anyway the map was very good: good timing, godd graphic, so i didn't find lots of things.

[easy]

00:35:912 (1) - remove NC Done
00:37:235 (4) - add NC and remove next Done
01:44:294 (5) - add NC remove next Done
01:55:765 (3) - i think this should not touch 01:54:882 (1) - :/ I kept it

[Normal]

00:20:030 (3) - add NC here and remove here 00:21:794 (1) - Done
00:33:706 (3) - add NC (?) Kept it
00:47:824 (3) - NC Didn't change
01:05:029 (3) - NC remove next Done
01:14:294 - why ther's a brack time here? I don't know either xD
01:35:471 (1) - remove NC Done
01:51:353 (8) - NC remove next Done

[Hard]

00:14:515 (2) - maybe this is a bit confusing, i fail on it every time (maybe it's only me but i think it's better to change it :/ ) I keep it, but I'll change it if anyone else have trouble with it
00:27:529 (1) - remove NC add here 00:28:191 (4) - Done
00:40:765 (5) - NC remove next Done
00:44:625 (2) - move it on the blanket I didn't know what you meant, but i changed it to another place, btw
00:47:272 (1) - NC (?) Done
00:48:706 (1) - remove NC add next Done
00:58:191 (6) - NC remove here 00:59:294 (1) - (?) Done

Hope i was usefull someway

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey there ~
Mod from my Queues :3

Must be fix
It's only what I think

General

1. everything seem okay :3

[Easy]

1. 01:54:882 (1,3) - try to don't overlap these two notes
2. 01:57:088 (1,2) - 1 grid up]
   Fixed

[Normal]

1. seem fine for me

[Hard]

1. 01:08:779 (2,3) - I don't like the patter from this two slider. Try to make it better ><
2. 01:10:544 (1,2) - same as above
   Re-Shaped the Sliders

That's all what I have to say here >.<
sorry for my noobi Mod >o</
But good luck with rank :3

1. Un Slider Tick Rate de 2 me semble mieux.
2. 00:29:294 (4) - Finish?
3. 00:37:235 (1) - Essaye de le mettre au même endroit que 00:35:471 (3). C'est à dire x=188 et y=256.
4. 00:35:471 (3) - Peut-être NC? Les combo de cette longueur sont très rare en Easy. Généralement c'est pas plus de 4~5.
5. 00:45:177 (3) - Je verrais plus un Whistle qu'un Clap à la fin du slider.
6. 00:50:471 (1,2) - Là aussi, je trouve que ça sonne mieu Clap-Whistle que Clap-Clap.
7. 00:51:794 (4) - ^ (De plus tu n'utilises plus jamais Clap-Clap dans le reste de la chanson ni même dans les autres diff)
8. 01:03:265 (2,3,4,5) - Je pense que tu peux descendre tout ça de deux crans pour que ça ait le même axe de symétrie que le slider juste avant.
   
   
9. 01:10:324 (4) - Ce combo est trop long. NC ici ou à la note suivante.
10. 01:12:088 (7) - Essaye de bien le positionner sur la fin du slider.
11. 01:50:029 (1) - Tu as déjà beaucoup de spinner et celui n'a pas l'air indispensable pourquoi ne pas le remplacer par deux sliders (par exemple):
    
    
    (Ou alors un slider et une note si tu n'aime pas le slider de 1/2 beat de long)

1. 00:58:412 (1) - Un finish sonne pas mal.
2. 01:14:294 - Le vide est un peu bizzare. Met au moins un spinner si tu n'as pas envie de rajouter de note.
3. 01:42:088 (4) - Vu que tu suit grandement les paroles à ce moment là tu devrais plutôt déplacer la note 1/2 beat plus tôt.
4. 02:01:941 (1) - Je ne crois pas que le NC soit vraiment utile ici.

1. 00:27:309 (3) - Ce whistle ainsi que celui sur 00:27:971(6) et celui à la fin de 00:28:191 (1) sonnent bizzare. Tu devrais les espacer de façon régulière (généralement c'est tout les temps ou tout les deux temps).
2. 00:37:897 (1) - Tu peux retirer ce NC.
3. 00:52:015 - Je pense que tu peux mapper cette partie-là ou au pire mettre un deuxième spinner.
4. 00:57:088 (3) - Remonte le d'un cran pour qu'il soit avec la même ordonnée que la note précédente.
5. 01:19:368 (4) - Pas complètement symétrique.
6. 01:39:882 (4) - Essaye de le placer correctement au bout de 01:39:000 (2).
7. 01:57:309 (3) - Essaye de la placer correctement au bout de 01:56:206 (1).
8. 01:58:191 - Il devrait y avoir une note ici si on suit bien la musique.

1. 00:12:971 (3) - If you want it to be at the same high than 00:12:530 then move it 2 grid down.
2. 00:41:206 (5) - The note isn't exactly at the end of the slider.
3. 02:03:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The note seems randomly placed. Why not doing a pattern like a star-pattern with the last one at the center (for exemple):
   
   

rezoons wrote:

Salut ,

Tentative de M4M:

[Easy]

1. Un Slider Tick Rate de 2 me semble mieux. Modifié
2. 00:29:294 (4) - Finish? Modifié
3. 00:37:235 (1) - Essaye de le mettre au même endroit que 00:35:471 (3). C'est à dire x=188 et y=256. Modifié
4. 00:35:471 (3) - Peut-être NC? Les combo de cette longueur sont très rare en Easy. Généralement c'est pas plus de 4~5. Modifié
5. 00:45:177 (3) - Je verrais plus un Whistle qu'un Clap à la fin du slider. Modifié
6. 00:50:471 (1,2) - Là aussi, je trouve que ça sonne mieu Clap-Whistle que Clap-Clap. Modifié
7. 00:51:794 (4) - ^ (De plus tu n'utilises plus jamais Clap-Clap dans le reste de la chanson ni même dans les autres diff) Modifié
8. 01:03:265 (2,3,4,5) - Je pense que tu peux descendre tout ça de deux crans pour que ça ait le même axe de symétrie que le slider juste avant. Modifié (erreur de boulet en plus ^^')
   
   
9. 01:10:324 (4) - Ce combo est trop long. NC ici ou à la note suivante. Modifié (Il fallait bouger 01:10:324 (4) )
10. 01:12:088 (7) - Essaye de bien le positionner sur la fin du slider. Modifié
11. 01:50:029 (1) - Tu as déjà beaucoup de spinner et celui n'a pas l'air indispensable pourquoi ne pas le remplacer par deux sliders (par exemple): Modifié
    
    
    (Ou alors un slider et une note si tu n'aime pas le slider de 1/2 beat de long) Modifié

[Normal]

1. 00:58:412 (1) - Un finish sonne pas mal. Modifié
2. 01:14:294 - Le vide est un peu bizzare. Met au moins un spinner si tu n'as pas envie de rajouter de note. Modifié
3. 01:42:088 (4) - Vu que tu suit grandement les paroles à ce moment là tu devrais plutôt déplacer la note 1/2 beat plus tôt. Modifié
4. 02:01:941 (1) - Je ne crois pas que le NC soit vraiment utile ici. Modifié

[Hard]

1. 00:27:309 (3) - Ce whistle ainsi que celui sur 00:27:971(6) et celui à la fin de 00:28:191 (1) sonnent bizzare. Tu devrais les espacer de façon régulière (généralement c'est tout les temps ou tout les deux temps). Modifié
2. 00:37:897 (1) - Tu peux retirer ce NC. Modifié, il n'avait rien à faire là, je suis d'accord
3. 00:52:015 - Je pense que tu peux mapper cette partie-là ou au pire mettre un deuxième spinner. N'ayant rien à mapper, j'ai placé un spiner
4. 00:57:088 (3) - Remonte le d'un cran pour qu'il soit avec la même ordonnée que la note précédente. Modifié
5. 01:19:368 (4) - Pas complètement symétrique. Moche, mais symétrique ^^
6. 01:39:882 (4) - Essaye de le placer correctement au bout de 01:39:000 (2). Modifié
7. 01:57:309 (3) - Essaye de la placer correctement au bout de 01:56:206 (1). Impossible à superposer
8. 01:58:191 - Il devrait y avoir une note ici si on suit bien la musique. Modifié

[Ratsu's Insane]

1. 00:12:971 (3) - If you want it to be at the same high than 00:12:530 then move it 2 grid down.
2. 00:41:206 (5) - The note isn't exactly at the end of the slider.
3. 02:03:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The note seems randomly placed. Why not doing a pattern like a star-pattern with the last one at the center (for exemple):
   
   

Bonne chance avec ta map. Et vu que j'ai pas trouvé grand chose et que dans l'ensemble elle est géniale tu gagne une ~étoile~ .

rezoons wrote:

Salut ,

Tentative de M4M:


[Ratsu's Insane]

1. 00:12:971 (3) - If you want it to be at the same high than 00:12:530 then move it 2 grid down.Done
2. 00:41:206 (5) - The note isn't exactly at the end of the slider.Done
3. 02:03:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The note seems randomly placed. Why not doing a pattern like a star-pattern with the last one at the center (for exemple)Done:
   
   

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

M4M (im sorry for being stupid jkhkfjhkdfl)

General

add 'okamiratsu' in Tags

Ratsu's Insane

Nice ^^ your mapping skill improve a lot while i cry in the corner

00:41:647 (1) - remove nc
00:42:309 (4) - nc
01:02:382 (5) - ^
01:03:265 (1) - remove nc
01:45:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about making a beautiful formation rather than just a stack?

Hard

imo, the pattern is really hard to play because mostly you follow the vocal line and the accompanying sounds. I suggest you to follow the rhythm more.
and here's the (awful gkdsjgsd) replay, maybe this can help you more : http://puu.sh/2slww

AR +1
from 00:12:530 - to 00:26:206 - , the hitsound is too loud, how about reducing it into 50%-55%? Fixed
00:12:530 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about making them like this Fixed

(a little bit jumpy, but this is hard diff, so i think it's okay)
00:15:397 (1) - remove nc
00:17:603 (1) - ^
00:17:824 (2) - nc (big white line)
00:18:485 (1) - remove nc
00:19:588 (3) - nc (big white line)
00:20:912 (1) - remove nc
00:22:235 (1) - ^
00:29:294 (1) - ^
00:29:956 (3) - nc (vocal line)
00:31:059 (1) - remove nc
00:31:721 (3) - nc (vocal line)
00:32:162 (1) - remove nc
00:35:029 (1) - ^ All Fixed
00:34:588 (4,1) - i prefer stacking them Didn't change
00:35:471 (2) - nc (big white line) Fixed
00:37:235 (1) - up one grid Fixed
00:40:765 (1,2) - i don't like their position :V how about moving the 2nd reverse slider into another place? Fixed
00:47:272 (5) - doesn't match the song, imo. how about one circle here 00:47:382 - Fixed
01:33:044 (1) - remove nc Fixed
01:33:706 (2) - add nc Fixed
01:35:471 (2,3) - remove dem claps Fixed

You place many random hitsounds everywhere. You should make a pattern hitsounds so it won't sounded jumbled

Normal

same as hard diff, i suggest you to follow the rhythm more

00:33:706 (3) - nc Fixed
00:46:500 (1) - remove nc Fixed
00:47:824 (3) - nc (big white line) Fixed
00:48:265 (1) - remove nc Fixed
00:51:353 (6) - add clap at the end of the reverse slider (for pattern consistency) Fixed
01:08:118 (1) - remove nc Fixed
01:09:000 (2) - add nc (big white line) Fixed
01:39:662 (5) - exchange clap with whistle (pattern consistency)
01:53:117 (5) - nc (big white line) Fixed

Easy

00:40:765 (4) - nc (big white line) Fixed
00:49:147 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:50:471 (1) - remove nc Fixed
00:51:353 (3) - nc (big white line) Fixed
01:18:265 (1) - add clap at the slider's head & remove clap at slider's tail I didn't change it.
01:24:441 (3) - remove finish Fixed
01:24:882 (4) - add clap Fixed
01:25:765 (6) - remove clap Fixed

how about varying the slider's shape more (wavy, spiral,etc.), since the slider's are all either curve and straight.

i hope my mod will help

-Umi- wrote:

shalut shalut :3 here from #Friends

Easy

Général: Tu laisses bcp de trou de ce style 00:16:059 (5,1) - essaye de les combler, sauf si tu préfère comme ça :3, ensuite essaye de trouver un autre hitsounds pour le clap ou alors baisse plus le volume des hit, le clap se fait trop entendre '-' et ajoute 2 sliderslilde silencieux (Soft/normal, tu en trouvera facilement dans les autres dossier song) ça passera mieux je pense.
- 00:13:853 (3) - enleve ce finsih ça fait bizarre '-' un clap ou rien à la place ^^ Enlevé
- 00:29:294 (4) - si tu met un fisnish la met en un ici aussi 00:27:529 (2) - et 00:31:059 (2,4) - ou plus simple, t’enlève le finsih x) J'ai rajouté les finish
- 01:08:118 (1,2,4) - replace-les pour une blanket (je sais si tu connais le terme, quand ça s'emboite parfaitement ^^) parfaite Je ne peux pas faire de blanket si je veux respecter le spacing
- 01:40:324 (3) - ^ Corrigé

Normal

- HP +1, OD +1, AP +1 c'est une normal pas une deuxième easy :3
- 00:41:868 (3,1,2) - aligne-les
- 00:45:618 (4,6) - forme différentes, pas bon fais les meme
- 00:59:735 (3) - pack mieux la fin du slider avec 00:58:412 (1) -
- 01:02:382 (2) - monte le un peu pour la blanket
- 01:04:147 (4) - ^ vers la droite
- 01:05:029 (1,2,3,4) - je vois plus le truc comme ça https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758794
- 01:30:177 (1,2) - aligne les fins
- 01:42:309 - je mettrai bien une note la :3 Ca ferait trop à jouer pour une normal
- 01:52:676 (4,1) - superpose-les comme 01:51:353 (1,2) -ça le fera J'ai suivi l'advice de Verlaren, je ne stacke pas

Hard

- 00:16:941 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - avec un petit slider pour la fin ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758811 Ok
- 00:18:485 (1) - vertical du haut vers le bas
- 00:19:147 (2) - hoizontal
- 00:19:588 (1) - vertical du bas vers le haut :3 Je garde ces 3 là comme ils sont
- 00:57:529 (4,5) - alligne Je l'ai légèrement montée
- 01:02:382 (2,3) - ^ Je garde le placing actues
- 01:08:559 - jusqu'a 01:13:853 - j'adore cette part
- 01:14:294 (3,4) - aligne les non ? Fait
- 01:18:816 (2,3) - polonge le stream de 2 note ? Fait

Ratsu's Insane

- 00:35:030 (5,9) - same position ?
- 00:38:559 (7,8,1) - what about this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758833
- 00:40:324 (3) - move to 104,144
- 01:00:397 (7) - move to 238,146
- 01:02:382 (1,2) - align them ? or 01:02:382 (1,3) - them
- 01:19:588 (1) - Yeah good job ! <3
- 01:31:721 (5,6) - move to 404,108
I really like this diff :3

C'tout, j'espère que ça t'aidera hope it will help you too Okami :3, good luck pour la suite

Verlaren wrote:

From my queue.


Easy:
DR +1
AR +1 or +2
OD +1 Kept the current settings
00:26:647 (1) - add finish on slider's start. Sounds is really good.
00:42:529 (1) - slider must be ended on x:144 y:216
00:46:059 (1) - move clap from slider's end on 00:46:941(2) (slider's start)
01:35:471 (1) - add finish

Everything changed, except difficulty settings

Normal:
AR +2 or +1
01:28:412 (2,3) - unstack this patterns. Hidden notes is not recommended in normal diffs
01:51:353 (1,2) - unstack this

Done

Hard:
00:26:647 (1) - add finish on slider's start. Sounds is really good.
00:48:706 (4) - remove whistle from slider's body. and add one whistle on slider's start
01:01:279 (7) - move clap on downbeat - 01:01:500(8)
01:23:118 (1) - add finish on slider's start.
01:37:235 (1) - ^

Done

Ratsu's Insane:
00:38:559 (7) - move on x:481 y:212 and stack with 00:38:779(8)
00:51:353 (2) - this pattern is not beautiful. Make a clear pattern. For example - 00:55:324(3)
01:50:250 (9) - make a more symmetrical slider.

gl

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M from your quque
[General]
[Easy]
Placement
00:45:177(3) make blanket here?

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:12:530 here is strong part, so player will expect a note here.
Hit Sonud
00:27:529(2) delete finish since here is quiet.
00:29:294(4)^
00:31:059(2)... and more.
01:15:177(3) clap → finish at head
01:19:588(3)^
Everything modified
[Normal]
Placement
00:30:177(1,2,3,4) put like this? current seems a bit confused.

SPOILER

00:52:897(1,2,3,4,5) this 5 combos for newbie seem difficult
01:18:265(4) stacked on slider's end may be unexpectable for newbie. move away better
Hit Sonud
00:29:735(4) delete finish since here is quiet
00:31:500(4)^
00:34:588(3)^
00:36:794(5)^
00:43:853(5)^
00:50:529(5)^
01:18:265(4)^
01:18:706(1)^
Everything modified escept the Finish on the Spiner
[Hard]
Rhythm
00:16:941(2,3,4,5,6,7) just for Hard, it is too difficult I suppose. only 1 slider is fine I kept it like now

SPOILER

01:08:559(1,2,3,4,) it seems weird for me... you should follow muzic & vocal properly. so like this? I kept it like now

SPOILER

SPOILER

01:49:368 maybe add a note here I moved the Spinner

Hit Sonud
00:20:471(2) delete finish since there is no cymbal sound
00:24:662(5) ^
00:40:765(1) add finish at head
[Insane]
OD, HP -1 better since this map isn't much difficult.
Placement
overall boring. you can use more jumping, all notes with Distant snap seems so easy for Insane!
00:35:029(5,6,7,8,9) like this?

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:23:338(1,3,5) separete two notes better since you should follow the drum sound at slider tick. when I played, I thhought it was weird.

SPOILER

01:35:250(5) delete 1 reverse and add a note instead.
Hit Sonud
00:59:294(5) delete finish
01:32:824(8) delete finish at reverse

still needs more work. about hit-sound, listen carefully and put proper hit sounds. overall, i see over-added finishes. good luck & star~

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M from your quque
[General][Insane]
OD, HP -1 better since this map isn't much difficult. Done
Placement
overall boring. you can use more jumping, all notes with Distant snap seems so easy for Insane!
00:35:029(5,6,7,8,9) like this? Done

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:23:338(1,3,5) separete two notes better since you should follow the drum sound at slider tick. when I played, I thhought it was weird. No Change it follows the piano

SPOILER

01:35:250(5) delete 1 reverse and add a note instead. No change, goes with the girl rotating her arms
Hit Sonud
00:59:294(5) delete finish done
01:32:824(8) delete finish at reverse done

still needs more work. about hit-sound, listen carefully and put proper hit sounds. overall, i see over-added finishes. good luck & star~

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Updated your diff and I'm currently checking the hitsounds, they should be included in the next update ^^

Edit : Thanks, they sound pretty good ^^

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my requeue

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:23:339 (2) - d
2. 00:25:544 (11) - d
3. 00:38:338 (5) - d
4. 00:41:978 (7) - Delete
5. 01:22:235 (3) - d and 01:22:566 (6) - Delete
6. 01:29:294 (16) - k
7. 01:30:177 (1) - k
8. 01:46:500 (13,14,15) - kkk
9. 01:48:485 (4,5,6) - kkk , 01:48:816 (7) - Delete and 01:48:926 (8) - d
10. 01:49:919 (13) - Delete
11. 01:50:802 (17) - Delete

[ Oni]

1. 00:43:852 (10) - k
2. 02:05:360 (32) - k

1. Please use a higher quality video. The osu! ranking criteria allows 720p video! ( p/2876629 ) Consider https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ubklO1TFgmk

1. 00:12:530 (1,4) - Don't stack like this in Easy. Try placing Circle 1 ( 00:12:530 (1) - ) on e.g: x:160 y:192 instead.
2. 00:22:235 (1,4) - Same as 00:12:530 (1,4) -.
3. 00:47:824 - End slider 2 here and add another object on 00:48:265 -.
4. Nothing else stood out to me when I played this diff.

1. 00:45:618 (4,6,3) - Why do these slider ends have red vertices?
2. 00:52:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I found this part really hard to play.
3. 01:17:382 (3,4) - Avoid hiding circles in lower difficulties.

1. 00:44:735 (2) - Move this slider down a few units so it does not overlap the next objects.
2. 01:39:441 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Try giving these objects more spacing.

Project Railgun wrote:

Hi from your queue,

Wow, this has been pending for a while.

[General]

1. Please use a higher quality video. The osu! ranking criteria allows 720p video! ( p/2876629 ) Consider https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ubklO1TFgmk I would love to, but my PC wouldn't be powerful enough to map it, afterwards, and the beatmap is already too heavy, following the criterai

[Easy]

1. 00:12:530 (1,4) - Don't stack like this in Easy. Try placing Circle 1 ( 00:12:530 (1) - ) on e.g: x:160 y:192 instead. Fixed
2. 00:22:235 (1,4) - Same as 00:12:530 (1,4) -. Fixed
3. 00:47:824 - End slider 2 here and add another object on 00:48:265 -. Fixed
4. Nothing else stood out to me when I played this diff.

[Normal]

1. 00:45:618 (4,6,3) - Why do these slider ends have red vertices? Great question, fixed
2. 00:52:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I found this part really hard to play. Fixed
3. 01:17:382 (3,4) - Avoid hiding circles in lower difficulties. Fixed

[Ratsu]

1. 00:44:735 (2) - Move this slider down a few units so it does not overlap the next objects.
2. 01:39:441 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Try giving these objects more spacing.

Good luck~

[TimingPoints]
12558,441.176470588235,4,1,0,50,1,0
26675,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,0
83146,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
95499,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,0
97263,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
111381,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0

[TimingPoints]
12530,441.176470588235,4,1,0,50,1,0
26647,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,0
83118,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
95471,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,0
97235,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
111353,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0

Neku okazaki wrote:

Im not sure about the timing, can be this:

[TimingPoints]
12558,441.176470588235,4,1,0,50,1,0
26675,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,0
83146,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
95499,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,0
97263,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
111381,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0

Your current timing:

[TimingPoints]
12530,441.176470588235,4,1,0,50,1,0
26647,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,0
83118,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
95471,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,0
97235,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
111353,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0

Project Railgun wrote:

Hi from your queue,

[Ratsu]

1. 00:44:735 (2) - Move this slider down a few units so it does not overlap the next objects. Done
2. 01:39:441 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Try giving these objects more spacing.Done

Good luck~

Tess wrote:

Hi, from #grumpyhelp~

[General]
I think the correct title is Sanpei Yuuko - Dazzling World (M@STER VERSION) Fixed
Your audio preview times are different in the Easy, Normal, Hard, and Oni diffs.
The tags of Normal conflict with the tags on Easy. Fixed
Also, try using bookmarks. They're really helpful.


[Easy]
Noticed that your hitsounds were really inconsistent, I think you should pay attention to where you place claps/whistles/etc. to make sure that they make sense and are consistent with the song.

I have to commend you for actually having consistent spacing. Your aesthetics could use some work but you did something that a lot of mappers completely ignore.

00:23:587 (3,4) - Switch the hitsounds between these two for consistency Fixed
00:25:352 (2,3) - Fixed
00:24:910 (1,2,3) - This pattern is spaced 1.10x while everything else is 1.0 Fixed
00:32:852 (4,5) - Crashes don't fit here at all, try whistles instead Fixed
00:35:499 (1,2) - Switch hitsounds Fixed
00:36:381 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
00:37:263 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
00:38:146 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
00:46:087 (1) - Remove clap Fixed
00:46:969 (2) - Add clap on the sliderhead and fix this blanket Fixed
00:49:175 (1) - Remove whistles from sliderhead and add one to the return. The overlap with 00:48:293 (3) - also isn't very pretty Fixed
01:10:352 (4) - Stack this properly Fixed
01:14:763 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:15:205 (3) - Remove the clap on this slidertail Fixed
01:17:852 (6) - Remove clap Fixed
01:18:293 (1) - Add clap on sliderhead Fixed
01:24:469 (3,4,5,6) - You could fix this pattern, to make it look rounder, like this http://puu.sh/czHxJ.png Fixed
01:27:557 (2) - And then fix this stack afterwards of course Fixed
01:28:440 (3,4,5) - Round this pattern out like I mentioned above Fixed
01:40:352 (3) - This would play much more naturally if it were two circles Fixed


[Normal]
00:12:999 (1,2) - Why don't you move this back to 00:12:558 - and then make 00:12:999 (1) - into a 1/2 slider and place 00:13:660 (2) - here 00:12:999 - and fix the spacing, and then add a hitcircle here 00:13:660 - ? Then it would actually fit the music.
00:30:205 (1,2,3,4) - Your patterning suddenly changes here, even though you're in the middle of a musical sentence. It doesn't really make sense and kills the consistency (the patterns before it were pretty fun, and this makes it more boring)
00:33:734 (1,2,3) - This definitely kills the consistency, make this phrase more similar to the previous one! Also with the hitsounding - this section doesn't really need claps at all, and the crashes are a bit loud, you should lower the volume with green lines.
00:40:793 (1) - Why didn't you complete the star?
00:45:205 (3) - You discontinue the triples here, why? Always keep your patterning consistent within the same phrase
00:45:646 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Slider - Circle - Slider - Circle - Slider - Slider - Circle - Circle? Consistency would be S - C - S -C - S - C - S - C. That's how music works, it's repetitive. Your maps will have to be at least a bit repetitive, especially in terms of rhythm - if you want to spice things up, do so on the playfield, not in the timeline.
00:50:499 (6) - A triple doesn't really fit here
00:54:028 (3) - You placed the clap one white tick too early.
00:56:675 (4,5) - Doing slider - slider here is okay because the music changes, so the rhythm can change as well (keep in mind that sliders are HOLD notes and hit circles (as the name implies) are HIT notes. Short, snappy sounds should be accentuated with hit circles, while long, draggy sounds should be followed with sliders. Also, the slider shapes are important when it comes to matching the music, but this is something you'll have to feel out)
The section after this is pretty good.
01:23:146 (1,2,3,4) - Fix these stacks
01:42:999 (3) - Consistencyyyy
01:44:322 (1,2) - ^
01:47:852 (1,2) - This doesn't justify the previous pattern!
01:51:381 (1,2,3,4,1) - I get the square but (1) doesn't make much sense here
01:54:469 (3) - This is what I meant with my earlier statement. This is a HIT note, not a HOLD.
01:56:675 (1) - Stack it right with 01:55:352 (4) -
02:01:969 (4) - Move this slider a bit or it's completely unreadable

[Hard]
This is kind of difficult for a Hard, especially at CS5. But maybe that's just me. Same hitsound consistency issues are here as there are in the other diffs

00:19:175 (2) - Fix this stack
00:32:410 (3,4) - Make this into a 1/2 return slider

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Really tired so I'm cutting this short, I'll finish this mod tomorrow and you won't have to give me kd for it.