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MomoKuro-tei Ichimon - Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size) [Taiko|

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Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 2월 11일 월요일 at 오후 11:15:59

Artist: MomoKuro-tei Ichimon
Title: Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size)
Source: Joshiraku
Tags: tutuhaha Melophobia Saten Saten-san climbb65588 climbb ending
BPM: 160
Filesize: 15580kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Climbb's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 461 notes)
  2. Melo's Normal (4.2 stars, 116 notes)
  3. Rika (5 stars, 321 notes)
  4. Saten's Easy (2.41 stars, 94 notes)
  5. TuHard (4.99 stars, 274 notes)
Download: MomoKuro-tei Ichimon - Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size)
Download: MomoKuro-tei Ichimon - Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 39th Ranked beat map.

Joshiraku ending,hope you like enjoy <3

Rika(Insane) by me.

TuHard by tutuhaha.

Normal by Melophobia.

Easy by Saten.

Taiko by climbb65588.
Last edited by Kawayi Rika , edited 31 times in total.
Fumika
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Fumika
:3
climbb65588
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climbb65588
Taiko diff is done~

http://puu.sh/IYll
http://puu.sh/IYlo
Melophobia
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Melophobia
hitsound help~

log
00:16 Kawayi Rika: : yesterdays sleep
00:16 Kawayi Rika: : hitsound not show me ;w;
00:16 Melophobia: : what you mean..?
00:17 *Kawayi Rika is listening to (MomoKuro-tei Ichimon - Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/52506]
00:18 Kawayi Rika: : this map hitsound still no ;w;
00:18 Melophobia: : it was bad? ;w;
00:18 Kawayi Rika: : you added hitsound?
00:19 Melophobia: : did you try my hitsound pattern?
00:19 Kawayi Rika: : ok
00:19 Kawayi Rika: : give osu file ;w; let me try
00:19 Melophobia: : wait~
00:20 Kawayi Rika: : yep
00:24 Melophobia: : http://puu.sh/YGXa
00:25 Melophobia: : and try this clap =3= http://puu.sh/YGXB
00:25 Kawayi Rika: : OK DLING
00:28 Kawayi Rika: : oh sound better
00:28 Melophobia: : <3
00:28 Kawayi Rika: : but all 1/1?
00:28 Kawayi Rika: : clap?
00:28 Melophobia: : yes
00:28 Kawayi Rika: : oh
00:28 Kawayi Rika: : let me try haha
00:28 Melophobia: : if you think it's too loud, you can reduce the volume
00:29 Kawayi Rika: : yep ><
00:30 Kawayi Rika: : Arigato melo chan <3 let me try finish hitsoudn ><
00:44 Melophobia: : yes><
01:29 Melophobia: : rika~
01:29 Melophobia: : i have some suggestion
01:30 Kawayi Rika: : yep ><
01:30 Kawayi Rika: : hitsound done
01:31 Melophobia: : yea checking now
01:31 Kawayi Rika: : yep ><
01:31 Melophobia: : 00:34:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
01:31 Melophobia: : no need to add claps in this section~
01:32 Kawayi Rika: : no hitsound here?
01:32 Melophobia: : yes
01:32 Melophobia: : soft-hitnomal only is enough
01:33 Kawayi Rika: : ok
01:34 Melophobia: : 00:48:551 - move this green line to 00:49:489 - ?
01:34 Melophobia: : no instrumental from there :3
01:35 Kawayi Rika: : 30% volume is fine
01:35 Kawayi Rika: : that
01:36 Melophobia: : okay o.o
01:38 Melophobia: : 01:01:864 (3,4,5) - wrong rhythm here~ try this rhythm http://puu.sh/YHVs
01:40 Kawayi Rika: : yes
01:40 Kawayi Rika: : fixed
01:40 Melophobia: : 01:10:114 - finish here?
01:40 Kawayi Rika: : ok ><
01:41 Melophobia: : 01:15:739 (1,2,3) - remove claps here
01:41 Melophobia: : because no drum here><
01:41 Kawayi Rika: : 01:17:239 (1,2) -
01:41 Kawayi Rika: : same?
01:41 Melophobia: : yes
01:41 Kawayi Rika: : yep
01:41 Melophobia: : 01:21:739 (1,2,3) - and 01:23:239 (1,2) - too
01:42 Kawayi Rika: : ok
01:42 Melophobia: : 01:18:739 (5) - this one too
01:42 Kawayi Rika: : done
01:43 Melophobia: : 01:24:739 (3) - same here><
01:44 Kawayi Rika: : done
01:45 Melophobia: : that's all i guess :3
01:45 Melophobia: : everything else looks good~
01:45 Kawayi Rika: : >< arigato post and i kd ><
01:45 Melophobia: : sure~
BCI
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BCI
have this hard+ - http://puu.sh/YL99 jumpy map~ if you don't believe what the newbie can pass the map V
my osu level is 50 as you can see
if you don't accept my diff, add this in creator's words as bonus, please >w<

and what about add Momoiro Clover Z to the tags?
Kawayi Rika
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Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

have this hard+ - http://puu.sh/YL99 jumpy map~ if you don't believe what the newbie can pass the map V
my osu level is 50 as you can see
if you don't accept my diff, add this in creator's words as bonus, please >w<

and what about add Momoiro Clover Z to the tags?
Guest diff already full ~ sorry ~ :(
tutuhaha
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tutuhaha
http://puu.sh/ZR60
Hard搞完了
Easy的话我比较担心做出来后不知道怎么加音效....
所以你确定easy我来做么？
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika

tutuhaha wrote:

http://puu.sh/ZR60
Hard搞完了
Easy的话我比较担心做出来后不知道怎么加音效....
所以你确定easy我来做么？
谢了 那我再找找别人吧 :)
Saten
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Saten
(๑╹ω╹๑ )

http://puu.sh/10vaK
Melophobia
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Melophobia
(๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)

http://puu.sh/10wCt
sherrie__fay
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Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
mod req via PM o~o☆

[Saten's Easy]

  1. 00:04:676 (1) - i think there should be a finish but not a mute o-o
  2. 01:13:114 (5) - didn't stack with 01:10:864 (2) - o.o
[Melo's Normal]

  1. fine
[TuHard]

  1. 01:07:864 (3,4) - 换位置
  2. 01:08:239 (1,2) - 换位置
  3. 01:26:614 (6) - 最后一个note+NC怎么样
[Rika]

  1. 01:13:114 (5,6) - 换位置
Saten
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Saten
Rika, can you fix that stack for me? o.o
Lizellota
467 posts
Joined October 2011
Lizellota
Hi~ random check...and sorry poor mod >.>

[Rika]

00:03:176 (2) - delete this note, dont fit the music well
00:25:301 (6) - remove clap
00:26:051 (3) - move to x:132 y:296
00:32:801 (6) - delete this note?
01:26:614 (2) - maybe change to soft finish? o.o sounds nice for me~ or just remove clap

[TuHard]

00:27:176 (2) - move to 00:27:364 - ? and replace then
00:33:176 (2) - ^
00:25:489 (1) - finish
00:28:489 - ^
00:31:489 (1) - ^
00:35:989 - maybe add whistle?
00:36:364 - ^ 00:36:739 - ^ 00:37:114 - ^

good luck~ >w</ Others diffs fine for me~
LKs
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Joined August 2009
LKs
[general]

lead-in改成2000

[Rika]

00:08:614 (7) - 间距
00:12:739 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这大长slider接跳感觉没flow 至少把slider动一动 http://puu.sh/12bmJ
00:16:489 (1,2) - 这种别完全放水平 有点角度会好 http://puu.sh/12bnl
00:11:989 (1,2) - ^
00:15:739 (3,3,4,5,6,7) - 这种都是加点弧度
00:21:739 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 这里跟vocal更好
00:26:051 (3) - 可以clap？
00:30:364 (2) - 这种spacing有点蛋碎

别的难度还好
Nichiyouki
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Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki


Hi, Rika-chan

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

Saten's Easy

  1. 01:10:114 (1) - Add whistle in slider end? The rhythm of slider begin may not be the same as it.

Melo's Normal

  1. Good diff

TuHard

  1. 01:26:426 (4,5) - I try to compared to the rhythm of the music. I try to listen to the rhythm of song here. I don't hear any sound in rhythm of song here. And when I played it, I feel the uncomfortable here. I think that remove them be better.

Rika

  1. 00:26:051 (3) - Move to right 1 grid.
  2. 00:27:551 - Add circle in accordance with rhythm melody of the song?
  3. 01:20:239 (3) - Use clap instead of using finish be better.

That's all that I can find them. If my mod is worthless, don't kd for me.
Nice map, give a star ;)

Good luck~
Natsu
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Joined September 2012
Natsu
Well i try to mod it :D

General:

SPOILER
Tags
- Consider adding "Melo" to all of your tags

Melo normal:

SPOILER
00:02:989 (4,5) – I think this part should be like 00:01:489 (1,2,3) –
00:46:114 move it too x:256 y:188 look better imo and be in line with 00:44:989 (3)

TuHard:

SPOILER
00:56:989 I think slider follow better flow imo like this:


Rika:
SPOILER
00:42:739 I think slider should be better

I really try but map is almost perfec so have my sexy start :D
SuperMoutarde
257 posts
Joined November 2012
SuperMoutarde
Hi, from your modding queue m4m request, hope I can help enough so you mod my map!

[Saten's Easy]

01:20:239 (1,3,5) - maybe avoid stacking as it is easy diff?


[Melo's Normal]

No comment, good map


[TuHard]

00:11:989 (3,4,5) - The whole combo would look better if 00:11:989 (3) was not curved imo. Maybe try this placement? (or other fix):
SPOILER
184,116,11989,2,0,B|103:69,1,93,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
66,58,12270,1,0,0:0:0
28,70,12364,2,0,B|4:122,2,46.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:16:114 (4,1) - The flow of this could be better if 00:16:489 (1) was more lined up with the curve of 00:16:114 (4). I would move the center point of slider 00:16:114 (4) at 156,96 but many possible ways to fix this
00:28:489 (1) - curve this a bit with center point at 126,284?

I think you should change the combo pattern during kiai time to follow the music more:
SPOILER
00:52:489 (1) - remove NC
00:53:426 (3) - NC
00:53:989 (1) - remove NC
00:54:364 (1) - NC (or not, but I would)
00:56:614 (7) - NC
00:56:989 (1) - remove NC
00:58:114 (4) - NC
00:58:489 (1) - remove NC
00:59:614 (4) - NC
00:59:989 (1) - remove NC
01:02:614 (7) - NC
01:02:989 (1) - remove NC
01:04:114 (1) - ok, not here, this you should keep for aesthetic purposes ^^
01:05:614 (1) - NC
01:05:989 (1) - remove NC
01:07:114 (5) - NC
01:07:489 (1) - remove NC
... etc. It feels weird that the combos dont follow the voice more but it's only opinion
01:22:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would change the placement of these, as they are too near respectively from 01:20:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6) to not be stacked, so I would either stack or place further away.


[Rika]

00:28:489 (1,2) - look a bit odd, I would curve 00:28:489 (1) to homogenize
00:41:989 (1,2) - ^
00:34:489 (1) - maybe use same shape as 00:35:614 (6) or something close?
00:54:739 (3) - change the curve for best flow with 00:53:989 (1) :
SPOILER
256,132,54739,2,0,B|156:69|51:121,1,216,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:56:989 (1,6) - I would change one of these to homogenize with the other

I hope it will help and that you will take my map in your queue. GL with this, maps look great!
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
M4M Mod Hi Hi :)!

[Easy]

00:13:489 (1,3) - you're not doing a perfect blanket I recommend doing so
SPOILER

00:53:989 (2,2) - ^

SPOILER

00:44:989 (3,1) - While these are not stacked notes recommend moving the end of this slider 00:46:489 (1) - X:238 Y: 188
01:10:864 (2) - ^ move this note 01:13:114 (5) - a X: 136 Y: 248
00:46:489 (1) - I personally think that this is inconsistent slider you should do a little more for beautifull
00:51:364 (1) - This circle is covered by 00:46:489 (1) - this slider
01:01:489 (4) - You could make a nice slider more than just a circle that is a suggestion
01:05:989 (2) - This slider is a little ugly,could do it more beautiful
SPOILER

[Normal]

Good Diff :)

[Hard]
00:16:864 (2) - distance snap check please
00:18:739 (3) - This jump could be a little unexpected recommend playing here respect the snap distance
01:03:739 (3) - This slider is being covered by this 01:02:989 (1) - check please
01:06:364 (2,4) - ^
01:20:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I wonder why you did not use the same distance snap to maintain consistency in these patterns

[Rika]
00:03:176 (2) - deleted note, not necessary here, listen the song please
00:14:239 (1) - NC here
00:34:114 (5,1) - While these are not stacked notes recommend moving the end of this slider X:357 Y: 247
00:41:989 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1Rljl ^
01:25:114 (5) - NC
01:26:239 (1) - Remove NC no Spam please :<

I'm not sure but I think the red color is unranked check please nwn
Good Song Nice Map *·*! :)
Pokie
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Pokie

　General

  1. 將Title和Source改成日文, Source的Joshiraku移到Tags
    Artist: 桃黒亭一門
    Title: ニッポン笑顔百景
    Soure: じょしらく

　Saten's Easy

  1. Pretty nice for an Easy difficulty, just got two hitsound suggestion from my own opinion.
    01:18:739 (2) - (slider's head)
    01:23:239 (5) - (slider's tail)
    As drums are way stronger then previous parts, so keep these two notes with clap hitsounds?

　Melo's Ero

  1. めろめろえろえろえろえろだ！
    00:23:614 (2) - この4つ 00:23:989 (3,4,5,6) と比べるとなんか(2)をスライダーに変えようよーと思って
    SPOILER



    00:37:864 (2) - ここにNew combo入れた方がいいじゃないか
    01:17:989 (1) - こんなとこにスピンナーだと・・やり直して来い！

　TooHard

  1. 鬼畜AR7有點神奇
    00:29:801 (1,3) - 感覺既然打算全下白線clap, 這兩個位置漏了就十分獵奇…當然你可以加個sliderslide音效解決
    00:52:864 (2) - 碰到HP Bar了, 求下移

　Rika

  1. 唔, 感覺開AR8完全足夠…不如說開AR9反而太難打了 xD
    00:13:864 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 有點過度偷懶了… 比起排列更像是用來下節奏的note, 建議remap一下這個地方!
    00:26:051 (3,4,5) - 這spacing不能吐槽更多, 建議把(3,4)改回1.00
    00:42:364 (2) - 既然前面下過類似的梗, 但節奏又不同的話…建議不要重複使用 (指00:28:489 (1,2) - 的1/4和這裡的1/2)
    SPOILER


差不多就這樣子...? m4m的話似乎已經晚了, 那麼加油吧 XDD
Last edited by Pokie , edited 1 time in total.
MineC24
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Joined May 2010
MineC24
M4M~~

Saten's Easy
00:53:989 (2,3,4) - 슬라이더의 리버스를 한번 제거 하고 그 후에 노트를 두면 좋을 것 같아요.
예시 : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/580293
00:59:989 (2,3) - 이 슬라이더를 통합시키는것도 좋은 방법일 것 같아요..

Melo's Normal
01:12:364 (2) - 노트로 하는게 더 좋아보여요.
01:20:989 (1,3) - 노트로 하는게 좋아보여요
예시 : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/580301
01:23:989 (1) - whistle 사운드 추가

TuHard
00:54:926 (4) - 1/4 박자로 하는게 왠지 좋아보여요..
01:01:489 (1,2,3) - 디스턴스 1.5로 노트들을 다 떨어뜨리는게 좋아보여요
예시 : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/580305

Rika
00:23:426 (5,6) - 이 사이에 노트 하나를 추가하면 비트가 더 좋아질 것 같아요.
01:12:739 (3,4,5,6) - 배치를 조금 다르게 하면 좋을 것 같아요.
01:22:489 (1,2,1,2) - 이것도 조금 전에 나오는 것처럼 전부 노트로 하는게 좋아 보여요.
Darksonic
Global Moderator
2,794 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Hai Rika, m4m here for your queue.

Saten's Easy:

00:15:364 (2): What about moving this to x:60 y:192 so it will be stacked with 00:13:114 (4) - ?, and also if you wanna keep that blanket with the next slider, you can try this.
00:31:114 (1): Remove NC and add it on next note?
00:46:489 (1): I know with this you tried to stack the tall with 00:44:989, but that spacing change on an Easy diff definitely it's not good, you should try to find a way to change that slider form a bit so spacing can be consistent.
01:05:614 (1): If you wanna keep symmetry, you should move this to x:483 y:195. (CTRL+H to 01:01:489 (4) -, that way you will see it)
01:10:114 (2,1): Same thing here with spacing, try to move this in a different way so spacing can be 1,0x. (idk if that's intentional or not, but doesn't seems too good)
01:13:114 (5): 1 grid to the right? so it will be stacked perfectly with 01:10:864 (2) -
01:18:739 (2,3): 0,96x spacing seems bad, you should move last point of (2) to x:208 y:72, this way if you use symmetry with the next slider, spacing will be 1,00x instead.

Melo's Normal:

00:32:239 (3): This is touching HP bar, consider moving it.
00:45:364 (4): Flows better imo if you move this slider like this
00:55:489 (3): Move to x:257 y:284 so it will be perfectly stacked with tall of 00:53:239 (4) - ?

TuHard:

00:23:989 (1,2,1,2): Spacing here is too extreme for a Hard diff, consider reduce it.
00:26:989 (1,2): Make a 1/2 slider here instead?, I think fits better with music.
00:32:989 (1,2): ^
00:35:989 (1,2,3): Try to make spacing consistent here. I tried something that probably can fit better. (I tried to equal spacing as better as possible and stacked (3) with 00:34:489 (1,2) -) Here is the code:

SPOILER
200,289,35989,6,0,B|114:368,1,93
148,204,36364,2,0,B|32:204,1,93
176,120,36739,2,0,B|96:34,1,93

00:38:614 (6): Move to x:384 y:324?, because I feel a jump here doesn't fit at all, and it would feel better with the next note.
01:00:739 (3): Use same slider you used in 00:59:989 (1,2) -, seems better. (I mean copy, then CTRL+J and CTRL+H)
01:13:114 (6): Like this ?, flows better.

Rika:

00:21:739 (5,6,7,8): This rhythm sounds a looooot better.
00:42:364 (2): Tall of this slider is not well stacked with the previous one.
01:13:864 (2): What about CTRL+G here for a better flow?
01:25:489 (7): Tall of this slider is not well stacked with 01:24:364 (2) -
01:26:614 (2): This note seems a bit randomly placed, maybe make CTRL+H of (1) ? (That means moving it to x:76 y:108)

That's it for me, good luck Rika <3
popner
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Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ M4M.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Offset感觉稍快了一点，我觉得1497(+8 on current)好一些。

[Saten's Easy]
00:09:739 (1) - 00:13:489 (1) - you use once repeat and twice repeat at the same time, this may cause difficulty to new player. So remove once repeat from 00:09:739 (1) or change it into two sliders? You'd better to use only one kind of repeat slider in such a lowest diff.
00:46:489 (1) - this slider is too long..I expect it to be end at 00:49:489. Also, new vocal start at 00:50:989, so putting a slider end here(especially end of an extremely long slider) makes no sense.
00:56:989 (2,3) - the song becomes light here, so maybe you can use a long slider to present this? Just like:
SPOILER
00:58:114 (4,5) - to be consistent with the rhythm and pattern you used here: 00:56:614 (1,2), you need to exchange (4) (5) (especially if you change the stuffs above: 00:56:989 (2,3)). Like this:
SPOILER
It is so because they are in similar position in the song.

[Melo's Normal]
Nothing to say about this diff, but I feel that the design is a little simple. Maybe you can use more long slider to make the rhythm more interesting, but it is up to you.

[TuHard]
我觉得这难度可以AR+1改成Insane..
00:01:864 (2,3,4) - nazi - 没对齐
00:41:239 (4,5,6,1) - 感觉在Hard里用这种梗有些难了。。特别是只有AR7
01:02:989 (1,3) - 01:06:364 (2,4) - 现在AR7下这种overlap就觉得影响美观了
01:07:489 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - 这种二连一组的跳，真的不是Insane?
01:26:426 (4,5,6) - ^ 2.5x 的跳+原地三连

[Rika]
试了一下AR8感觉没有什么读图问题，可以考虑用AR8。毕竟只有1个Insane，如果看不了AR9就只能去打Hard了。

00:07:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段的节奏打起来有点违和。这一段的vocal节奏非常有特点，所以我觉得跟vocal会比较有意思。全跟vocal的话节奏是这样的：
SPOILER
觉得偏难的话可以把一部分连打换成kick slider。
如果要改的话，因为这里改动比较大，具体怎么改还是要自己决定。
00:20:239 (5,6) - 小建议：因为前面“shu rin”用的是一个slider(00:19:489 (1))， 后面这个“gu rin”语调一样，也用slider比较好，因此这里可以交换一下slider和note，也就是这样：
SPOILER
00:21:739 (5,6,7,8) - 类似的节奏问题，不管是跟鼓还是跟vocal，这里的三连往后移到红线开始都比较好：
SPOILER
00:22:489 (1) - ^ 类似，三连移到后面的的红线上开始感觉好一些。
00:26:051 (3) - 考虑在这里加个clap？打的时候感觉这个note没有什么打击感
00:27:551 (3) - 这里的那个乐器声感觉用个note来跟一下比较好，具体加note或者是放个slider都可以。
00:35:426 (5) - 前后改成相同的间距？因为三连后面跟单点本身就有难度，中间再加个大跳的话比较容易断。
后面的Kiai段没什么问题，但感觉节奏不如前面这段密了。。可以加一些像这样的三连 00:51:551 (3,4,5) 00:52:676 (2,3,4) 来填一下节奏，产生倾泻而出的感觉= =
01:02:614 (8) - 可以考虑用1/6?

音效没什么建议。。现在这样就挺带感。

That's all I can find. GL~
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Kawayi Rika
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Natsu

Natsu wrote:

Well i try to mod it :D

General:

Tags
- Consider adding "Melo" to all of your tags :arrow: it's unneeded.

Rika:
00:42:739 I think slider should be better :arrow: i don't think so.

I really try but map is almost perfec so have my sexy start :D
SuperMoutarde

SuperMoutarde wrote:

Hi, from your modding queue m4m request, hope I can help enough so you mod my map!

[Rika]

00:28:489 (1,2) - look a bit odd, I would curve 00:28:489 (1) to homogenize :arrow: ok.
00:41:989 (1,2) - ^ :arrow: looks fine imo.
00:34:489 (1) - maybe use same shape as 00:35:614 (6) or something close? :arrow: nope,it's symmetry with 00:33:364 (2) - .
00:54:739 (3) - change the curve for best flow with 00:53:989 (1) : :arrow: same reason as above.
SPOILER
256,132,54739,2,0,B|156:69|51:121,1,216,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:56:989 (1,6) - I would change one of these to homogenize with the other :arrow: changed to curved slider.

I hope it will help and that you will take my map in your queue. GL with this, maps look great!
Gero

Gero wrote:

M4M Mod Hi Hi :)!

[Rika]
00:03:176 (2) - deleted note, not necessary here, listen the song please :arrow: nope,sound still fine.
00:14:239 (1) - NC here :arrow: nope,no need to here.
00:34:114 (5,1) - While these are not stacked notes recommend moving the end of this slider X:357 Y: 247 :arrow: i guess it's fine now.
00:41:989 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1Rljl ^ :arrow: ^
01:25:114 (5) - NC :arrow: nope.
01:26:239 (1) - Remove NC no Spam please :< :arrow: where's spam..

I'm not sure but I think the red color is unranked check please nwn
Good Song Nice Map *·*! :)
Pokie

Pokie wrote:

　General

  1. 將Title和Source改成日文, Source的Joshiraku移到Tags
    Artist: 桃黒亭一門
    Title: ニッポン笑顔百景
    Soure: じょしらく :arrow: source 就不用换了,tittle 和 artist 换了.

　Rika

  1. 唔, 感覺開AR8完全足夠…不如說開AR9反而太難打了 xD :arrow: 为了好读.
    00:13:864 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 有點過度偷懶了… 比起排列更像是用來下節奏的note, 建議remap一下這個地方! :arrow: 弄了下，，不知道好不好.
    00:26:051 (3,4,5) - 這spacing不能吐槽更多, 建議把(3,4)改回1.00 :arrow: 改了.

    00:42:364 (2) - 既然前面下過類似的梗, 但節奏又不同的話…建議不要重複使用 (指00:28:489 (1,2) - 的1/4和這裡的1/2) :arrow: 这应该没事..
    [/spoilerbox]


差不多就這樣子...? m4m的話似乎已經晚了, 那麼加油吧 XDD
jaehn215

jaehn215 wrote:

00:23:426 (5,6) - 이 사이에 노트 하나를 추가하면 비트가 더 좋아질 것 같아요. :arrow: 그렇네요.
01:12:739 (3,4,5,6) - 배치를 조금 다르게 하면 좋을 것 같아요. :arrow: 위치 바꿈.
01:22:489 (1,2,1,2) - 이것도 조금 전에 나오는 것처럼 전부 노트로 하는게 좋아 보여요. :arrow: 중복되기 시러서요.
Darksonic

Darksonic wrote:

Hai Rika, m4m here for your queue.

Rika:

00:21:739 (5,6,7,8): This rhythm sounds a looooot better. :arrow: nope,it's sound fine imo.
00:42:364 (2): Tall of this slider is not well stacked with the previous one. :arrow: fixed.
01:13:864 (2): What about CTRL+G here for a better flow? :arrow: don't want jump to here.
01:25:489 (7): Tall of this slider is not well stacked with 01:24:364 (2) - :arrow: i see :3 fixed.
01:26:614 (2): This note seems a bit randomly placed, maybe make CTRL+H of (1) ? (That means moving it to x:76 y:108) :arrow: i just make 1/1 jump to here :3

That's it for me, good luck Rika <3
popner

popner wrote:

Hi ~ M4M.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Offset感觉稍快了一点，我觉得1497(+8 on current)好一些。 :arrow: 我觉得这个没事..

[Rika]
试了一下AR8感觉没有什么读图问题，可以考虑用AR8。毕竟只有1个Insane，如果看不了AR9就只能去打Hard了。 :arrow: 鬼畜多，没事.

00:07:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段的节奏打起来有点违和。这一段的vocal节奏非常有特点，所以我觉得跟vocal会比较有意思。全跟vocal的话节奏是这样的：
SPOILER
觉得偏难的话可以把一部分连打换成kick slider。
如果要改的话，因为这里改动比较大，具体怎么改还是要自己决定。 :arrow: 不想跟vocal了,还得重改.
00:20:239 (5,6) - 小建议：因为前面“shu rin”用的是一个slider(00:19:489 (1))， 后面这个“gu rin”语调一样，也用slider比较好，因此这里可以交换一下slider和note，也就是这样： :arrow: 这个我故意的.
SPOILER
00:21:739 (5,6,7,8) - 类似的节奏问题，不管是跟鼓还是跟vocal，这里的三连往后移到红线开始都比较好： :arrow: 嗯,这个好改了.
SPOILER
00:22:489 (1) - ^ 类似，三连移到后面的的红线上开始感觉好一些。 :arrow: ^
00:26:051 (3) - 考虑在这里加个clap？打的时候感觉这个note没有什么打击感 :arrow: 好.
00:27:551 (3) - 这里的那个乐器声感觉用个note来跟一下比较好，具体加note或者是放个slider都可以。 :arrow: 加了circle.
00:35:426 (5) - 前后改成相同的间距？因为三连后面跟单点本身就有难度，中间再加个大跳的话比较容易断。 :arrow: 这个应该没事,找人test过.
后面的Kiai段没什么问题，但感觉节奏不如前面这段密了。。可以加一些像这样的三连 00:51:551 (3,4,5) 00:52:676 (2,3,4) 来填一下节奏，产生倾泻而出的感觉= =
01:02:614 (8) - 可以考虑用1/6? :arrow: 觉的1/4 足够..

音效没什么建议。。现在这样就挺带感。

That's all I can find. GL~

Thanks for mod guys ~ :)
tutuhaha
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FIX some, Thank you！
osu file format v11

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spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
[cbb's Taiko]
  1. 00:02:614 (5) - Umm... sound don is better (it's same timbre as 00:01:489 (1,6) - )

  2. 00:31:489 (181) - consider to add finish at here? (I think 00:29:989 (169,175,181) - it's a integral pattern, so make this suggestion for you.)

  3. 01:20:051 (179,180,181,182) - 恩...現在這樣給我的感覺是可以 但是不是最好 可以看到168~182之間是個完整的pattern 可是在最後個dd位置有兩個音色是可以突出的 如果用這樣(Ddddkdddkdddkdd)的方式就沒辦法突出那兩個音色 如果改成 Ddddkdddkddkkdd這種方式感覺會好點

  4. 01:25:770 - (optional) I think add note here can make this pattern more fun.
solid mapset, good luck~:3
Firce777
Elite Mapper
530 posts
Joined February 2010
Firce777
附上不負責任的lazy mod _(:3/_)_
[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
看到這mapper就先尿一半
00:03:364 (7) - 感覺這好像沒有必要，考慮拿掉?
00:23:426 (136,137,138,139,140) - 換成xoxxo? 感覺比較合
00:50:989 (2) - 加上kiai time，到01:14:989 (156) - 為止?

給神mapper跪了
climbb65588
435 posts
Joined August 2008
climbb65588

spboxer3 wrote:

[cbb's Taiko]
  1. 00:02:614 (5) - Umm... sound don is better (it's same timbre as 00:01:489 (1,6) - )

    Fixed

  2. 00:31:489 (181) - consider to add finish at here? (I think 00:29:989 (169,175,181) - it's a integral pattern, so make this suggestion for you.)

    Fixed
  3. 01:20:051 (179,180,181,182) - 恩...現在這樣給我的感覺是可以 但是不是最好 可以看到168~182之間是個完整的pattern 可是在最後個dd位置有兩個音色是可以突出的 如果用這樣(Ddddkdddkdddkdd)的方式就沒辦法突出那兩個音色 如果改成 Ddddkdddkddkkdd這種方式感覺會好點

    由於 180 中音樂有低音鼓的存在，因此我認為 d 比較好 ...
  4. 01:25:770 - (optional) I think add note here can make this pattern more fun.
fixed

solid mapset, good luck~:3

Firce777 wrote:

附上不負責任的lazy mod _(:3/_)_
[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
看到這mapper就先尿一半
00:03:364 (7) - 感覺這好像沒有必要，考慮拿掉?

考慮到背景音樂，因此有note較為好

00:23:426 (136,137,138,139,140) - 換成xoxxo? 感覺比較合

Fixed

00:50:989 (2) - 加上kiai time，到01:14:989 (156) - 為止?
Fixed
給神mapper跪了
http://puu.sh/1YmpL
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~~ mod for request~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
  1. Suggest +500ms (total 1000ms) to audio lead-in
[Rika]
  1. 00:10:301 (7,8,1,2) - i'd like to move triplet to downbeat since the beat of music here is irregular. And also , if you agree with me, move (1) to stack with 00:10:676 (2) -
  2. 00:29:801 (6,1) - combine to a 1/1 slider for vocal?
  3. 00:32:895 (7) - i'd like to remove it since the triplet here is uncomfortable
  4. 00:50:989 (1) - for here to 01:14:989 - , add normal whistle to each 1st / 3rd white-tick (downbeats) and the following red-ticks.
  5. 00:53:801 (8) - too close to prev note, compare with current, i'd like to select stack
  6. 01:08:426 - add a triplet here?
  7. 01:15:926 (2) - ctrl+j for symmetrical?
  8. 01:24:364 (2,3) - the beats here is weird...how about this one?
[TuHard]
  1. 00:02:989 (1,2) - 建议先note再slider
  2. 00:20:614 (6) - 这里slider感觉不如中间留空拍，也就是放2个间距为1/1的note并且叠在一起
  3. 00:25:395 (3) - 同样感觉没什么必要 ……
  4. 00:43:114 (5,6) - slider也许更好点？
  5. 00:47:989 (1) - 感觉finish有些过重了……whistle应该就刚好
  6. 00:50:989 - kiai段的whistle建议同rika
  7. 01:23:989 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏建议也同rika
[Melo's Normal]
  1. 00:50:989 - same suggest as Rika, add normal-whistle from here
[Saten's Easy]
  1. 00:25:114 (2) - end slider at downbeat is weird here. suggest to remove this slider, add a repeat to 00:24:364 (1) - and then a note at 00:25:489 - with NC
  2. 00:31:114 (1) - ^, similar issue
  3. 00:49:489 - i suppose it is a better tick to end your slider
  4. 00:59:989 (2) - move prev NC to here
that's all from, give me a call when you're ready~
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
Sorry but I don't think normal whistles fit well with this difficulty due to lack of notes. :< thanks for mod!
Saten
Global Moderator
3,864 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten

Scorpiour wrote:

[Saten's Easy]
  1. 00:25:114 (2) - end slider at downbeat is weird here. suggest to remove this slider, add a repeat to 00:24:364 (1) - and then a note at 00:25:489 - with NC I find nothing wrong with this really. I've ended many sliders on downbeats
  2. 00:31:114 (1) - ^, similar issue same as above
  3. 00:49:489 - i suppose it is a better tick to end your slider I find it better like this. It's much easier to follow the flow
  4. 00:59:989 (2) - move prev NC to here alright
thanks

http://puu.sh/20Axh
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
[TuHard]
  1. 00:02:989 (1,2) - 建议先note再slider
  2. 00:20:614 (6) - 这里slider感觉不如中间留空拍，也就是放2个间距为1/1的note并且叠在一起这个算了
  3. 00:25:395 (3) - 同样感觉没什么必要 ……
  4. 00:43:114 (5,6) - slider也许更好点？
  5. 00:47:989 (1) - 感觉finish有些过重了……whistle应该就刚好
  6. 00:50:989 - kiai段的whistle建议同rika 这个也算了
  7. 01:23:989 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏建议也同rika

其他的FIX
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 50520
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ニッポン笑顔百景 (TV Size)
Artist:MomoKuro-tei Ichimon
ArtistUnicode:桃黒亭一門
Creator:Kawayi Rika
Version:TuHard
Source:Joshiraku
Tags:tutuhaha Melophobia Saten Saten-san climbb65588 climbb ending
BeatmapID:175220
BeatmapSetID:52506

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.86
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
Video,0,"Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size).avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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1489,375,4,2,1,70,1,0
4582,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
7114,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
7207,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
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50426,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
50989,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
86614,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


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Combo2 : 115,14,205
Combo3 : 27,160,103
Combo4 : 133,20,85

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Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
Scorpiour

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod for request~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
  1. Suggest +500ms (total 1000ms) to audio lead-in :arrow: ok.
[Rika]
  1. 00:10:301 (7,8,1,2) - i'd like to move triplet to downbeat since the beat of music here is irregular. And also , if you agree with me, move (1) to stack with 00:10:676 (2) - :arrow: ok,should much better.
  2. 00:29:801 (6,1) - combine to a 1/1 slider for vocal? :arrow: hmm,i want keep 1/2 to here T.T
  3. 00:32:895 (7) - i'd like to remove it since the triplet here is uncomfortable :arrow: ok.
  4. 00:50:989 (1) - for here to 01:14:989 - , add normal whistle to each 1st / 3rd white-tick (downbeats) and the following red-ticks.
    :arrow: hmm,sound fits with song,but noisy to me x.x
  5. 00:53:801 (8) - too close to prev note, compare with current, i'd like to select stack :arrow: sorry,i want keep symmetrical.
  6. 01:08:426 - add a triplet here? :arrow: ok.
  7. 01:15:926 (2) - ctrl+j for symmetrical? :arrow: current looks fine IMO.
  8. 01:24:364 (2,3) - the beats here is weird...how about this one? :arrow: yeah,nice.
that's all from, give me a call when you're ready~

Thanks for mod and Update all diff ~ ;)
Scorpiour
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Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
~General~

Use the same kiai on all the difficulties.

~Saten's Easy~

AR -1 is better.

~TuHard~

AR -1 is better.

Nothing else, nice map.
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