ReySHeL wrote:

hi Fumika~!
can i make a taiko maps? >w<

Fumika wrote:

ReySHeL wrote:

hi Fumika~!
can i make a taiko maps? >w<

Sorry, I'm not taking any kind of guest diff request for this map

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

Wanna make guest diff

onegai

1. Tag OreShura (俺修羅). It's the abbreviation of this anime
2. Audio Lead-In 2300 perhaps? 2000 is a bit low imo, even that's suit for Hard/Insane

1. 00:06:385 (1,2,3) - I'll recommend you to change rhythm like this. "Yeah" for a note, then two 1/1 sliders for the vocals start at 00:06:748 - , end at 00:07:112 - (same thing for second 1/1). That's much better to fit vocals Q.Q
   
2. 00:12:203 (1) - This slider should be separate to 2 parts. Because 00:11:476 - ~ 00:12:203 - is a sentence, 00:12:566 - ~ 00:13:657 - is another sentence. Two sentence shouldn't be connect, that's weird ;w; change to two notes or something else you want.
3. 00:20:566 - 00:20:930 - Really noisy part, consider to reduce the volume about 30%~40% here owq
4. 00:40:203 (1,1) - Don't know why you NC here, they're just unnecessary in a ordinary part o.o
5. 00:45:294 (1) - why not Normal Sampleset here? Just like others lol and why you don't add clap at the end
6. 01:03:112 - There should be something here since "yeah" is an individual vocal, so make 01:02:748 (2) - 1/1 shorter (end at 01:03:112 - ) and add a note at the downbeat is a way to fix that.
   Another reason is 01:03:476 - ~ 01:03:839 - is another sentence, should connect with previous sentence ;w;
7. 01:11:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Something again. This would be fit with vocals more because the same reason of above :V (And don't forget to add a note at 01:16:930 - if you change something like this)
   
8. 01:19:839 (2,1) - It's better if you can add a reserve at (2), and remove a reserve from (1) then move (1) to the downbeat. 01:19:839 - ~ 01:20:566 - is a vocal that reallllly connect!
9. 01:23:294 - b-but why 55% only? D: here should be more beat-sound, so change to 65% (even 70%) maybe? lol
10. 01:26:021 (1) - by looking other diffs, you should add whistle at the begin to keep consistent ~

1. 00:06:385 (1,2,3) - Something like Easy diff again D: This would be very fit, trust me QwQ
   
2. 00:14:930 (2) - why there's nothing at 00:14:748 - ? This vocal should be mapped OAO maybe move (2) 1/2 earlier then add a reserve on that
3. 00:20:566 - Reduce volume again owo
4. 00:31:294 (4) - You should NC here since that BGM is so individual :V also swap 00:32:566 (1,2) - 's NC!
5. 00:38:385 (5) - Look at your NC rule, you should NC here actually
6. 00:52:566 (4) - nazi a bit but can you move it up a bit? Like x:96, y:224 to make a triangle with (2,3) lol
7. 01:03:112 (1,2) - Swap there NC would be follow the vocals more
8. 01:08:930 (1) - 2 reserves are kinda odd to me ;w; suggest you to do like this, that would be fit vocals & not boring (?) Copy (4) to make symmetrical slider (6) -w-
   
   
9. 01:18:385 (2,3,4,1) - Well, 01:18:748 - ~ 01:19:112 - should be connect, 01:19:476 - ~ 01:19:839 - should be connect too, but you separate them ;w;;;;; whyyyyyyyyy anyway try this rhythm
   
   change the first slider to a note, then move the following three sliders 1/1 faster, add a note at the last downbeat :3

1. 00:07:657 (3) - This should be curve like (2) imo, that's ugly if you compared them ;w;
2. 01:08:203 (6) - ^ (with (5))
3. 00:20:566 - same thing here, reduce the volume lol
4. 00:24:748 (5) - A bit nazi but you should remake this slider with rotate (6) for 180°, that would be more flow :3 Or you can rotate this for -8° if you're lazy to copy/paste
5. 00:29:112 (10,1) - Well slider first then note please, that would be fit with vocals more :V!
6. 00:31:294 (6) - NC would be great here since that BGM ;w; also you did that at Insane even I dunno if you're serious or not there orz
7. 00:43:112 (6) - ^
8. 01:23:839 (4) - ^ not BGM actually here lol
9. 00:36:385 (2) - forget whistle? www you should add it
10. 01:10:203 (5,6,7,8) - Current rhythm is not realllly fit with vocal a bit, it's great but I think you can do like this oAo
    
    Just make the finish sound at the long-sliderhead ~
11. 01:25:657 (8) - Do you forget clap here :<? If yes, add it to make it consistent lol
    

1. 00:08:748 (6) - If you want, I'll suggest you to use 1.5x DS for that jump. Would be regular between (5,6,7,8) a bit
2. 00:13:294 (1,1,2,1) - lol messy NC! Oh you ww
3. 00:20:566 - Reduce volume again owo
4. 00:32:839 (1) - Hard to read this since 00:32:476 (5,6) - is a stream too, and the DS is bigger than here lol consider remove this note and make it like a 1/2 part
5. 01:10:385 (6,1) - Something like hard again :V delete (6) then add a note at that white tick, move (1) 1/2 faster
   example is here!
   
   hi

   
6. 01:14:748 (6,1) - make a jump like 01:13:839 (3,4) - (2.0x DS) here?
7. 01:26:385 (1,2,3,4) - w-what why slider first then note appears? D: that's not same with 01:26:021 (1,2,3) - , you should change them to note first then slider, that would be more readable for players ;w;;;

Quilt wrote:

Easy
nothing to say~

Normal
01:08:930 (1) - remove 1 reverce and add note 01:10:021 Done

Hard
00:29:112 (10) - move to 00:29:294 (1) - head? Nope

00:39:476 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/572496 like this? Nope, It's weird ;w;

00:47:839 (2) - delete note? Nope, sounds whistle.

Insane
00:47:839 (3) - delete note? Nope, Same as Hard

that's all
perfect map lol ganbare!

Betsuto wrote:

From PM ' ')/

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:14:748 (2) - เลื่อนจุดปลายสไลด์ลง 1 ช่อง (น่าจะดูดีขึ้นนิดนึง)
00:26:021 (7) - เลื่อนจุดปลายสไลด์ขึ้น 1 ช่อง น่าจะดี
00:27:476 (4) - เลื่อนจุดสไลด์จุดกลาง ขยับ ซ้าย 1 บน 1 น่าจะดีขึ้น
00:30:748 (7) - เลื่อยนปลายสไลด์ไปทางขวา 1 ช่อง บน 1 ช่อง
00:31:294 (1) - เลื่อนจุดสไลด์จุดกลางขึ้น 1 ช่อง
00:32:203 (4) - เอาแบบนี้น่าจะดีกว่า เพราะว่าโน๊ตมันระยะไกลเกิน (ถ้าเทียบกับโน๊ตอื่น ๆ)
http://puu.sh/1OQN5
01:01:839 (2) - เลื่อนจุดสไลด์จุดกลางไปทางขวา 1 ช่อง
01:02:203 (3) - เลื่อนจุดสไลด์จุดกลางไปทางซ้าย 1 ช่อง
01:03:839 (2) - เลื่อนสไลด์ไปทางขวาซัก 2 ช่อง
01:04:566 (4) - เลื่อนจุดสไลด์จุดกลางไปทางขวา 1 ช่อง
01:04:930 (5) - เลื่อนจุดสไลด์จุดกลางไปทางซ้าย 1 ช่อง
01:05:294 (6) - เลื่อนขึ้น 1 ช่อง
01:07:839 (5) - ขยับจุดปลายสไลด์ขึ้น 1 ช่อง
01:08:203 (6 , 7) - ขยับไปทางขวา 1 ช่อง
01:10:021 (4) - ขยับไปทางซ้าย 1 ช่อง

แก้บางจุดนะ

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:07:657 (3) - ขยับจุดสไลด์จุดกลางขค่น 1 ช่อง
00:23:476 (2) - ขยับจุดปลายสไลด์ลง 1 ช่อง
00:36:930 (3) - ขยับจุดปลายสไลด์ขึ้น 2 ช่อง
00:39:476 (5) - ลด Reverse ให้เหลือแค่ครั้งเดียว แล้วไปเพิ่มโน๊ตแทนดีกว่า
00:48:748 (5) - ขยับจุดปลายสไลด์ไปทางซ้าย 1 ช่อง
01:19:476 (7) - ขยับจุดกลางสไลด์ ไปทางซ้าย 1 ช่อง
ลบ Time Section ที่ไม่ใช่ออกให้หมด น่าจะเรียบร้อยกว่านี้

แก้บางจุดเช่นเดียวกัน

[Normal]

SPOILER

01:08:930 (1) - น่าจะเปลี่ยนเป็น โน๊ต แล้วสไลด์ + Reverse 1 ครั้ง
ไม่ก็ สไลด์ + Reverse 1 ครั้ง แล้ว โน๊ต ดีกว่า สไลด์ + Reverse 2 ครั้ง
ลบ Time Section ที่ไม่ใช่ออกให้หมด น่าจะเรียบร้อยกว่านี้
นอกนั้น ก็ OK หมดละ

แก้บางจุดเช่นเดียวกัน

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:07:112 (2) - เลื่อนจุดตรงกลางสไลด์ กับจุดปลายสไลด์ไปทางซ้าย อย่างละ 1 ช่อง
00:40:203 (1) - ลบ NC ดีกว่าไหม ? = =
ลบ Time Section ที่ไม่ใช่ออกให้หมด น่าจะเรียบร้อยกว่านี้

เก่งมากพี่เนท = =)b
(อยากให้มี Skin ด้วย น่าจะโคตรเพอร์เฟ็คต์แมพ)

แก้บางจุดเช่นเดียวกัน แต่ Timing ไม่แก้ ขี้เกียจ lol

- N a n a k a - wrote:

Friend Request~<3

Insane

00:13:476 (1) - ลบ NC? Nope, มันเริ่มโดดใหม่ ทำให้งงได้นะถ้าไม่ NC
01:04:930 (5) - เลือนจุดปลายไซล์ไปทางซ้าย 1 ช่อง Done
01:23:839 (1) - เลือนจุดปลายสไลด์ลง 1 ช่อง Done

Hard

00:14:385 (1) - เลือ่นจุดปลายไปทางซ้าย 1 ช่อง Done
01:20:203 (9) - เลื่อนจุดปลายสไลด์ลงไปขวาล่างอย่างล่ะ 1 ช่อง Done
00:11:112 (5) - เลื่อนสไลด์ลงมาที่ x 168 y 208 แล้วเอาจุดกลางสไลด์ขึ้นไป 1 ช่อง Nope, ไม่อาวววว

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

Wanna make guest diff

onegai

I hate you Fumika -3-

haha5957 wrote:

haha5957 request??

[Insane]

00:25:657 (7) - Ctrl+G? jump doesnt fit here imo Nope
01:14:748 (1) - NC? Done
01:26:385 (1,2,3,4) - circle first slider later please, this was too confusing for me Done

[Hard]
01:10:385 (6,1,2) - http://puu.sh/1OTxu Nope ;w;

:>

Bless wrote:

Hi Fumika o3o/

[Insane]
00:32:476 (5,6) - i suggest reduce DS with 00:32:203 (4), hard to read. if you really want do this, try raise 00:32:566 (6,1,2) DS up Nope
00:57:657 (1) - use Sampleset Auto at slider tail Done
01:26:021 (1,2,3) - make it same as 01:26:385 (1,2,3) - better imo Done
[Hard]
00:44:021 (10) - add a repeat and reduce DS with 00:44:566 (1) - ? No, It's so weird lol
00:57:657 (1) - use Sampleset Auto at slider tail Done
01:11:930 (10) - add repeat and reduce DS with 01:12:203 (1) - Nah, spacing is too long, Nope ;w;
01:21:839 (2,1) - put it at x:432,y:236 Nope
[Normal]
00:14:930 (2) - put it at 00:14:748 and add repeat then ctrl+g, put 00:14:385 (1) - at x76,y164, don't forget add hitsounds Done
[Easy]
00:51:112 (3,1,2,3,1) - maybe this part is too hard for easy, try use more sliders Done

Good luck :3

Flask wrote:

/me sells Fumika

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]

1. Tag OreShura (俺修羅). It's the abbreviation of this anime Done
2. Audio Lead-In 2300 perhaps? 2000 is a bit low imo, even that's suit for Hard/Insane

Done

[ Easy]

1. 00:06:385 (1,2,3) - I'll recommend you to change rhythm like this. "Yeah" for a note, then two 1/1 sliders for the vocals start at 00:06:748 - , end at 00:07:112 - (same thing for second 1/1). That's much better to fit vocals Q.Q awww, Nope ;w;
   
2. 00:12:203 (1) - This slider should be separate to 2 parts. Because 00:11:476 - ~ 00:12:203 - is a sentence, 00:12:566 - ~ 00:13:657 - is another sentence. Two sentence shouldn't be connect, that's weird ;w; change to two notes or something else you want. Nope
3. 00:20:566 - 00:20:930 - Really noisy part, consider to reduce the volume about 30%~40% here owo that enough
4. 00:40:203 (1,1) - Don't know why you NC here, they're just unnecessary in a ordinary part o.o Done !
5. 00:45:294 (1) - why not Normal Sampleset here? Just like others lol and why you don't add clap at the end Done
6. 01:03:112 - There should be something here since "yeah" is an individual vocal, so make 01:02:748 (2) - 1/1 shorter (end at 01:03:112 - ) and add a note at the downbeat is a way to fix that.
   Another reason is 01:03:476 - ~ 01:03:839 - is another sentence, should connect with previous sentence ;w; Done
7. 01:11:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Something again. This would be fit with vocals more because the same reason of above :V (And don't forget to add a note at 01:16:930 - if you change something like this) Nope
   
8. 01:19:839 (2,1) - It's better if you can add a reserve at (2), and remove a reserve from (1) then move (1) to the downbeat. 01:19:839 - ~ 01:20:566 - is a vocal that reallllly connect! Done?!
9. 01:23:294 - b-but why 55% only? D: here should be more beat-sound, so change to 65% (even 70%) maybe? lol enough loud lol
10. 01:26:021 (1) - by looking other diffs, you should add whistle at the begin to keep consistent ~ Done

[ Normal]

1. 00:06:385 (1,2,3) - Something like Easy diff again D: This would be very fit, trust me QwQ aaaahhhhhh, that's fine DDDD:
   
2. 00:14:930 (2) - why there's nothing at 00:14:748 - ? This vocal should be mapped OAO maybe move (2) 1/2 earlier then add a reserve on that Done
3. 00:20:566 - Reduce volume again owo Nope
4. 00:31:294 (4) - You should NC here since that BGM is so individual :V also swap 00:32:566 (1,2) - 's NC! Done
5. 00:38:385 (5) - Look at your NC rule, you should NC here actually Done
6. 00:52:566 (4) - nazi a bit but can you move it up a bit? Like x:96, y:224 to make a triangle with (2,3) lol nah, no need lol
7. 01:03:112 (1,2) - Swap there NC would be follow the vocals more Done
8. 01:08:930 (1) - 2 reserves are kinda odd to me ;w; suggest you to do like this, that would be fit vocals & not boring (?) Copy (4) to make symmetrical slider (6) -w- Done
   
   
9. 01:18:385 (2,3,4,1) - Well, 01:18:748 - ~ 01:19:112 - should be connect, 01:19:476 - ~ 01:19:839 - should be connect too, but you separate them ;w;;;;; whyyyyyyyyy anyway try this rhythm
   
   change the first slider to a note, then move the following three sliders 1/1 faster, add a note at the last downbeat :3

[ Hard]

1. 00:07:657 (3) - This should be curve like (2) imo, that's ugly if you compared them ;w; Nope
2. 01:08:203 (6) - ^ (with (5)) ^
3. 00:20:566 - same thing here, reduce the volume lol nope
4. 00:24:748 (5) - A bit nazi but you should remake this slider with rotate (6) for 180°, that would be more flow :3 Or you can rotate this for -8° if you're lazy to copy/paste Done
5. 00:29:112 (10,1) - Well slider first then note please, that would be fit with vocals more :V! Nope
6. 00:31:294 (6) - NC would be great here since that BGM ;w; also you did that at Insane even I dunno if you're serious or not there orz Done
7. 00:43:112 (6) - ^ Done
8. 01:23:839 (4) - ^ not BGM actually here lol Done
9. 00:36:385 (2) - forget whistle? www you should add it Done
10. 01:10:203 (5,6,7,8) - Current rhythm is not realllly fit with vocal a bit, it's great but I think you can do like this oAo Nope
    
    Just make the finish sound at the long-sliderhead ~
11. 01:25:657 (8) - Do you forget clap here :<? If yes, add it to make it consistent lol Done
    

[ Insane]

1. 00:08:748 (6) - If you want, I'll suggest you to use 1.5x DS for that jump. Would be regular between (5,6,7,8) a bit Nope, It's fine
2. 00:13:294 (1,1,2,1) - lol messy NC! Oh you ww ww
3. 00:20:566 - Reduce volume again owo Nope
4. 00:32:839 (1) - Hard to read this since 00:32:476 (5,6) - is a stream too, and the DS is bigger than here lol consider remove this note and make it like a 1/2 part Hard make challenge player lol
5. 01:10:385 (6,1) - Something like hard again :V delete (6) then add a note at that white tick, move (1) 1/2 faster
   example is here! Nooooooooooooo
   
   hi

   
6. 01:14:748 (6,1) - make a jump like 01:13:839 (3,4) - (2.0x DS) here? Nah, Nope
7. 01:26:385 (1,2,3,4) - w-what why slider first then note appears? D: that's not same with 01:26:021 (1,2,3) - , you should change them to note first then slider, that would be more readable for players ;w;;; Done

good luck Fubaka (?

B2IN wrote:

Hi ~ Fumika :3
from in game

i can't find problem in this map XD. then i'll give some suggestion.
[Easy]
00:44:385 (T) - i think that 'volume 50' is not necessary. Done
[Normal]
01:14:021 (4) - should follow vocal same as 01:02:385 (6) . Done
01:25:839 (2,3) - you should change like this much better imo. Nope


that's all. hard and insane diff is really nice. gl Fumika ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Fumika ~

Mod for Moe Power >w< >w< !



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. 00:15:476 - #1 kiai time end to here is much better. but I think it's fine because after my kiai is silenced xD

[Insane]

1. 00:59:839 (2) - Add new combo to here,it's fits with vocal and looks better. Done

[Hard]

1. 01:21:476 (1) - Remove short new combo,no need to here. Done
2. 01:21:112 (2,1,2) - How about like this parttern,i guess will be flow better. Done
   
   SPOILER

   
   Here is code :
   

   192,236,81112,2,0,P|200:200|196:156,1,73.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   296,140,81476,2,0,P|308:172|312:216,1,73.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   396,152,81839,2,0,P|404:116|400:76,2,73.5,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

[Normal]

1. OD+1 is better. Done
2. 00:45:112 - Change to a 1/2 slider to here,sound much better,like this. Done
   

[Easy]

1. HP,OD+1 is better. Done
2. 00:28:566 (3) - Change to a 3/2 repeat slider + a circle,it's follow with lyrics. Done
3. 00:35:839 (1) - ^ Done
4. 00:43:021 (1) - Start on 00:43:112,blue tick a bit fast for beginner,but last spiiner is fine,because too long. Done
5. 00:59:203 (1) - Same as above. Done

OK ~ That's all ~ Nice job always ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

terametis wrote:

SPOILER

Sekai-nyan wrote:

orz i was late ;w; sorry`

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Looks much better now ~

Enjoy your moe <3



EDIT : After fixed some hitsound ~ rebubbled ~

SPOILER

Insane : 00:20:748 (2) - Add a whistle on the end.

Normal : 00:31:294 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.

01:08:930 (5) - Add a clap.

Fumika wrote:

terametis wrote:

SPOILER

Aleks719 wrote:

irc mod

08:19 Aleks719: set offset -527
08:19 Aleks719: ins : 00:32:203 (4,5,6) - it should be like that?
08:20 Aleks719: idk, that stack jump doesn't feel good
08:21 Fumika: okay, 0.5
08:22 Fumika: wait- use 0.9 instead
08:30 Aleks719: od5 hp5 in hard <<
08:30 Aleks719: +1 for both
08:31 Aleks719: hp2, od4 in normal?
08:31 Aleks719: wtf? why no consistent
08:32 Aleks719: stats hp4 ar5 od4 are good for normal
08:32 Fumika: done
08:33 Fumika: and I need to fix offset too ?
08:34 Aleks719: well, better to do it now i think
08:34 Fumika: ok
08:34 Aleks719: + snap sections etc
08:37 Fumika: done
08:42 Aleks719: easy unsnapped as hell
08:43 Fumika: done !
08:46 Aleks719: ar+1 in normal
08:48 Fumika: Done
08:48 Aleks719: 00:51:109 (3,1) - personally, i don't like this pattern in Easy
08:48 Aleks719: 1/2
08:48 Aleks719: and note after slider
08:49 Fumika: http://puu.sh/1PYEu okay ?
08:50 Aleks719: yes
08:50 Fumika: upload ?
08:50 Aleks719: yes
08:52 Fumika: done!

Ranke-e-e-e-e-ed!

terametis wrote:

SPOILER

YeahhhhhhhhhhhYeahhhhhhhhhhh