1. Agate's Normal (2.1 stars, 158 notes)
2. Hard (4.71 stars, 361 notes)

dete_lynn wrote:

hard的，我新手，讲错别打

00:03:273 - 是不是可以加个may need a note here 本来这里是两个3拍的1/4, 因为感觉slider结尾加两个1/4拍的不是那么好打, 所以这里就留空了 EDIT: 还是加了个note
00:06:418 -
00:07:265 - 喔喔喔开始了异形滑条mutant sliders 还好吧...
00:12:345 - 对这种我最不拿手了(shrug)
00:26:257 - 短滑条和圈在一起我经常看不清difficult to see short sliders next to notes :/ 多打图就看清了
00:31:095 - 好老的梗的赶脚maybe too old 我就是个老mapper\:D/
00:35:692 - 还是看不清can't see clearly
01:08:353 - 这两个没有那么异形了稍微舒服点not so mutant like the former ones
01:14:644 - 可能需要换色may need new combo here 为什么?
01:15:369 - 同上same as above
01:29:402 - 同看不清can't see clearly ag
01:31:700 - 总觉得放错节拍了要不干脆改了或者去掉feel like a wrong place 背景乐确实这里是有个3/4拍的
01:36:176 - 需要换色may need nc why
01:37:386 - 同上same as above
01:45:128 - 同上
01:54:321 - 这梗不错学到了I'll steal your idea lol
02:41:740 - 换色比较好may need nc why

hoLysoup wrote:

蔡依林

you should probably rename the song back to Wu Niang, and not translate it to english.
remember with your perfume map? lol, this time should be okay, the ablum cover is write "Dacing diva"


oh and remove Cpop? the genre will be set to chinese pop when it's ranked anyway You can use this to search it in-game but not only in the forum. in-game it wouldn't be with a "Chinese" tag

Wiinter wrote:

Yay, C-pop! ♥

[Skin]
the "center" of the spinner isn't in the center of the image, so while it's rotating it keeps on moving.. this is hard to explain, it's better if you just take a look at it. if you want help on fixing that feel free to ask me :> fixed
if I were you I'd use custom files that match the rest of the skin better for spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-clear, but it's fine if you keep those /o/

[General]
the combo colours should be the same in both diffs (I'd use the ones in Agate in both diffs, but that's up to you)
set the AudioLeadIn in [Agate] to 1985 It starts late, no need to add a audio lead-in
use the same kiai in both diffs? :> keep it for now

[Hard]
00:03:273 (2) - add a note here? k

good luck :>

Wiinter wrote:

Yay, C-pop! ♥
[Agate]
01:11:982 (5) - super nazi but fix the slider shape to make it fit the previous slider's end. just but the red anchor a bit higher to make it like this http://puu.sh/1xr0l. I also think this slider sounds better finishing at 01:12:950 fixed
00:54:684 - make this break like the one in [Hard] fixed
02:48:757 (1) - use distance snap? snap no big

Sonnyc wrote:

Hello~

I don't think Audio-lead in inconsistency fix is necessary in this case, right?

Agate:

00:25:531 (5) - This should be NC, due to the patterns afterwards fix
00:35:208 (3) - A Sudden volume reduction wants and NC imo.. fix
00:55:047 - I don't think you need to push the brak time a little back
02:04:724 (1) - Imo, starting the spinner at 02:04:240 will be better, following the "ahh" instead of lyrics. fix
02:35:208 (1) - Unlike 02:33:273 (1), this rhythm doesn't fits the song. Make this slider end at 02:35:692
02:59:402 (4) - I usually don't point out offscreens, but I think this can be fixed by making the curve down

~

HelloSCV wrote:

From your queue
M4M request~~

Agate
01:15:853 (4) - maybe add note here?
02:16:337 (3) - make symetically? -nazi
02:53:595 (1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/1FrnS ( flows better imo )
02:59:402 (4) - touch HP bar :p fix

Kaburagi Kotetsu wrote:

Hi~ m4m

[Agate]

00:13:918 (4) - x:160 y:196

00:14:886 (6) - x:420 y:300
　
00:19:240 (1) - Circle, Clap

02:56:499 (1) - x:384 y:328

02:59:402 (4) - touch Hp bar... fix

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi, I'm trying to get a m4m from your queue, I hope my mod is useful

[b]Agate

HelloSCV wrote:

SPOILER

AIBat
Missing Skin Files
spinner-background.png I used jpg

Inconsistency in combo colours GD could have a different combo colour
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn 2 diff start from different point

Hard
00:26:740 (3,4) - ctrl + G? ( only timing pattern ) 00:26:257 (1,2) - like this here is for symmetry
00:46:821 (1) - use 0.22x DS like previous notes? 1 grid up
01:32:789 (4) - add whistle? seems no much difference
01:48:273 (5) - NC here no jump here
02:26:499 (3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/1Fri2 - nazi( looks better with 02:28:192 (1) - this too ) k
02:59:402 (3) - 1 grid up
02:59:886 (4) - 1 grid right

If my mod can't help you ( except AIBat ) please ignore this~
Nice song and interesting slider shape haha
will ranked soon my guess, good luck!

Sonnyc wrote:

Hello~

I don't think Audio-lead in inconsistency fix is necessary in this case, right? yea

Hard:

00:07:023 (3) - I suggest you to delete this note. The rhythm was quite hard to catch, and I don't think there is actually a beat here in the song reasonable, but I think end at blue tick and start at blue tick 2 beat later seems a little hard to hit, 1 beat space suppose to be a rhythm which easier to catch
00:34:966 (1,2) - a nazi suggestion to make the distance 0.07x k
00:47:547 (3,4) - Strong suggestion for a ctrl+G, the current one is too confusing to be readable it's symmetry, I think it should not be that hard to read
00:53:111 (2) - Delete clap at the start k
01:29:160 (1,2) - Uhh, similar nazi k
01:33:999 (3,4) - Similar Ctrl+G suggestion
01:41:741 (3,4) - ^
02:43:434 (4) - Delete Whistle at the end k

Good~~ also lol'ed at the Slider dots~

Kaburagi Kotetsu wrote:

Hi~ m4m

[Hard]

00:05:692 (4) - Ctrl + G no

01:32:789 (4) - Whistle seems no need

01:48:757 (6) - Clap why here?

Star!

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi, I'm trying to get a m4m from your queue, I hope my mod is useful

Hard

00:02:305 (1,2,3) - No. This rhythm is much better imo no, thanks

00:05:692 (4) - Ctrl + g? It looks better but the flow is broken... I let you choose it would make here hard to hit
00:11:015 (4,5) - Swap these notes... Put 4 where 5 is and 5 where 4 is k
00:16:579 (1,2) - These sliders start on a red line... So weird I don't think so
00:26:740 (3,4) - Maybe ctrl+g no, it's for symmetry
00:27:224 (1) - This starts on a red line...
00:34:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this strange stacking is intentional, if it isn't stack them stack would make them not in a line
00:39:563 - Add a note why here
01:03:515 (4,5) - Same as before, swap these notes k
01:09:079 (2,1) - I don't know... Maybe you can improve this blanket they should be fine
01:11:257 (5,6) - They start on a red line... It sounds a bit weird
01:31:821 - Add a note why here
02:17:547 (3,4,5) - 4 can be blanketted a bit better k
02:37:628 - Add a note with clap but no vocal here, I'm following vocal
02:53:111 - ^

Star, lol.
I hope my modding is useful and you mod my map, I posted it in the queue, bye!

1. Why are your combo colors different? o.o

1. 00:48:757 (5,1) - OMG dat slider! o.o I love it and all, but I'm a bit bothered with the next overlapping circle afterwards. Not really a necessary fix to be honest, but I suggest readjusting this slider in a way so that this slider and the next hit circle is not overlapping with other.
2. 01:07:144 (1,2) - Hmm.. Blanklet this maybe? :/
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:34:724 (2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5) - Is this intentional? This pattern is not perfectly symmetical.
4. 02:48:273 (2,1) - Very creative and all but dat spacing is large.

1. 00:37:386 (5,1) - Oh Oh! o.o Not perfectly stacked here.
2. 02:44:886: You forgot to insert a Kiai Section here. (Just like in Pink Agate's Difficulty)

BeatofIke wrote:

Ni Hao Breeze! Mod 4 Mod Request maybe? :I

[General]

1. Why are your combo colors different? o.o one diff is GD

[Hard]

1. 00:37:386 (5,1) - Oh Oh! o.o Not perfectly stacked here. I do this on purpose
2. 02:44:886: You forgot to insert a Kiai Section here. (Just like in Pink Agate's Difficulty) no I didn't

Otherwise good map overall. I like the music very much!
Good Luck woth your map!

TMAstraf wrote:

Insane:
00:44:886 - 00:46:337 Maybe more distance of the Circles they are anti-jumps
01:33:515 Must near to Circle 1 here's for symmetry

Thats all =)

B2IN wrote:

Hi~ Breeze :3

[General]
nice

[Hard]
00:29:402 (2,3,4) - try this ~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/553933 and re-space next note. But they are not symmetry

that's all.XDD really nice map ! GL~ star

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi ~ breeze

m4m

[Hard]

00:12:587 (2,3,4,5) -> http://puu.sh/1IR0C change? It would make it unsymmetrical

01:31:821 -> http://puu.sh/1IR2Q change? I can't see the pic :/


Good map

BeatofIke wrote:

Ni Hao Breeze! Mod 4 Mod Request maybe? :I

[General]

1. Why are your combo colors different? o.o

[Agate]

1. 00:48:757 (5,1) - OMG dat slider! o.o I love it and all, but I'm a bit bothered with the next overlapping circle afterwards. Not really a necessary fix to be honest, but I suggest readjusting this slider in a way so that this slider and the next hit circle is not overlapping with other. fix
2. 01:07:144 (1,2) - Hmm.. Blanklet this maybe? :/
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:34:724 (2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5) - Is this intentional? This pattern is not perfectly symmetical.
4. 02:48:273 (2,1) - Very creative and all but dat spacing is large.

fix

B2IN wrote:

Hi~ Breeze :3

[General]
nice
[Agate]
->you should make more slider to neatly.
00:19:724 - there seems to need a downbeat.

SPOILER

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00:21:660 - if follow my opinion, should add note here.
02:04:240 (1) - i think that this is too long spin. therefore end till 02:11:499 and add note in 02:11:982 ? add finish in circle note. just suggestion.
02:31:337 (3) - should make this neatly. move to 2nd point x256 y356 / 3rd point x392 y284

Faust wrote:

Hi.

Agate:

So yes, I suppose it's easy to infer. Except Agate is still a rather vague/ambigious difficulty name, even if common sense dictates that this is the Easy/Normal difficulty..

In any case, it seems you have an extra spacing in the tags after 'C-Pop'. That makes for an inconsistency, no matter how small (or silly)

Other than that, I noticed the countdown was kept for this ? I can think that it's exclusive to this difficulty being beginner level, so I guess it sits right.

Hard:

Well-hitsounded and adjusted map. Initially, I thought you would have put a couple of spaced jumps for that "dance" context, but you worked your way around that with your own rhythm.
Actually, mapping this song with the seasoned 'symmetry' approach works pretty well. For one, the left-right movements have that sort of liberal feel to them that pairs well enough with the song.

And I also thought the precise usage of the kiai solely for the start of the chorus was a pretty good move.

Pretty happy with this diff.

Do what needs to be done and I'll get back to this. No need to give kd.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

Remake the file spinner-background.jpg to spinner-background.png. k

Use the same Audio Lead-In on both difficulties. Normal start 00:08:111 so I think audio lead-in is needless

Use the same Colours on both difficulties. k

Use the same Kiai Time on both difficulties. there is a GD so I think different KIAI should be fine

~Agate's Normal~

AR is too high for the easiest difficulty, reduce it by 1 or 2 ticks.

00:41:982 (1) - This single combo looks ugly.
01:36:176 (1) - ^

I fixed this for Agate, of course have got his permission

~Hard~

HP Drain and OD +1 is better imo. k

00:46:821 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this anti-jump. Hmm, I feel it fits music
00:54:079 (4) - Snap this break like Normal. k
01:33:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pretty confusing pattern.
01:41:015 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Hmm they are symmetrical, should not be that hard to read
02:29:644 (1) - This new combo is not necessary. changed

Have to pop for now, sorry.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Breeze ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Use chinese artist and tittle : 蔡依林 - 舞娘

added

[Hard]

1. 00:15:369 - Forgot add clap to here? yay, added
2. 00:32:789 (5,7) - You'd better to make the circle here symmetrical. sure
3. 02:09:805 (3,5) - Same as above. fixed
4. 01:04:240 (7) - Move 1 grid right,01:02:547 (2) - symmetrical. k
5. 02:37:869 (2) - Move 1 grid down,02:37:144 (1) - symmetrical.

k

OK ~ That's all ~ Nice chinese song and map ~

Call be back ~