1. Easy (0.92 stars, 76 notes)
2. Hard (4.33 stars, 166 notes)
3. Normal (3.04 stars, 123 notes)

• General
  ● Resize BG image 1024*724 -> 1024*768, for example:
  
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  ● Remove .osb file when unused :3

• Easy
  >Settings
  ● Good
  >Mapping
  ● 01:05:369 (5) - add note on x:313 y:269?
  ● 01:14:258 (5) - ^ on x:180 y:156?
  >Hitsounds
  ● 00:45:924 (5) - remove whistle, add finish?
  ● 00:54:813 (5) - ^
  ● 01:03:702 (4) - ^
  ● 01:12:591 (4) - ^
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  I think it's a good easy diff's

• Normal
  >Settings
  ● Good
  >Mapping
  ● 00:05:924 (3) - grid snap off and move on x:401 y:316, distance looks more accuracy :3
  ● 00:07:591 (4) - if you change ^ move on x:339 y:237 1.00 distance =)
  ● 00:16:480 (4) - move on x:187 y:347 again distance (I'm so nazy xD)
  ● 00:33:424 (2) - x:126 y:35, distance 1.01
  ● 00:58:980 (2) - x:460 y:216
  ● 01:01:202 (5) - x:366 y:101
  >Hitsounds
  ● 00:22:591 (3) - maybe add here custom clap? :3
  ● 00:45:924 (5) - remove whistle, add finish? as in easy
  ● 00:54:813 (5) - ^
  ● 01:03:702 (4) - ^
  ● 01:12:591 (4) - ^
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  Hmm...very good

• Hard
  
  >Settings
  ● HP DR +1?
  >Mapping
  ● 00:29:258 (2) - move on x:299 y:152
  ● 00:30:369 (3) - if you change ^ move on x:98 y:356 (distance 1.0)
  ● 00:35:554 (7,8,9) - maybe need to use a smaller distance (0,6?)
  ● 00:50:369 (1) - x:304 y:304 (1.0)
  ● 01:08:146 (1) - x:323 y:139
  >Hitsounds
  ● as in Easy :3
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  I like this diff's

Awesome music and map. Good luck

1. 00:01:480 (1) - ...soft slidertick with 40% vol. fits better maybe? idk >_<
2. 00:12:591 (1) - A whistle on slider's end to make it blend better with the song won't hurt imo (:
3. 00:14:813 (2) - (optional) If you listen to the song carefully, there's this howling-like sound, so I think applying a gradual volume increase for the slidertick here (40% -> 50% -> 60%) sounds good~
4. 00:20:369 (5,6) - Hmm, I prefer to create a symmetry here - because (5) isn't new combo-ed a symmetry formation like this makes more sense to players I think:
   
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5. 00:33:702 (2,3) - Uhm, try to move this a bit further to the upper-right regardless of the spacing? (compare with 00:28:146 (4,5)'s distance - this (2,3) almost overlaps)
6. 00:43:702 (3,4,5) - (optional) Minor stuff, but perhaps curve (3) more (and more symmetrical as well) to balance (5)'s curve? xD
   

   160,88,43702,2,0,B|216:117|280:88,1,120,2|2
   319,71,45369,1,0
   368,72,45924,2,0,B|416:128|384:192,1,120,2|2

7. 01:03:146 (3) - Put in ~x:147 :270 instead? It'll give more balance to (3,4,5) imo...
8. 01:17:035 (1) - Again, another gradual volume increase (50 -> 55 -> 60) would work well here I believe, your call though~
9. 01:23:702 (3) - This slider's angle is sharper than most of your sliders, I recommend to curve it using two waypoints to get the desired effect though:
   
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10. 01:42:960 (1) - Apply a gradual volume decrease to this spinner, as the music fades-out here?

1. 00:01:480 (1) - Uhm, I'd rather use this for the opening so (3) will carry the flow from your previous (1) :
   
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2. 00:08:146 (1,2) - The rhythm here orz... I'd make (1) as a 1/1 slider, and continued with a note on 00:09:258 ._.
3. 00:12:313 (6) - Whistle here to fit the instrument? It won't hurt (:
4. 00:23:146 (4,1) - Minor stuff, but perhaps try this? (especially to make your (4) better)
   

   148,325,23146,2,0,B|165:306|191:297,1,50,0|2
   237,284,23702,6,0,B|285:268|341:284,1,100,6|0

5. 00:36:480 (5) - Straight slider works best here imo~ (just delete the waypoint orz)
6. 00:41:480 (1) - (optional) Use normal slidertick (with lowered volume) here? Really, I think the sliderticks can be emphasized here~
7. 00:50:369 (1) - Same as above
8. 00:58:702 (1,2,3) - ...uhm, is this intentional? (you can simply make an arc like this without spacing change though...)
   
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9. 01:15:924 (6) - Minor stuf, but perhaps try to move the waypoint to ~x:225 y:40 to balance (5)'s curve?
10. 01:17:035 (1,2,3) - Same as Easy, about gradual volume increase
11. 01:31:480 (3) - (optional) Put (3) more to the upper-right and adjust like this perhaps? I think it's better to make (1's end,2,3) as an arc:
    
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12. 01:42:960 (1) - Same as Easy about the spinner's volume dynamics...

1. 00:03:146 (3) - ...use 25% on slider's end instead, to make it more distinguishable?
2. 00:07:961 (x) - Would be nice if you mapped the 1/6 here orz
3. 00:21:480 (7) - ...new combo here? (yep, the song progresses here)
4. 00:25:924 (6) - Move to ~x:337 y:335 to get more flow from (5)? (the next (7) isn't hard to adjust though)
5. 00:34:535 (4) - This note is closer to (3) compared with (5), but it's not hard to catch though :3
6. 00:53:702 (5) - Uhm, imo the slider here doesn't flow as great as it supposed to be... Two circles look brilliant with your next slider though (:
   
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7. 00:57:869 (6,7) - (optional) Try to apply a triangle here with (5), so it'll be more parallel with (8,9)?
   

   219,15,57869,1,0
   237,92,58146,1,0

8. 00:59:258 (1) - Slider wave flows greater to your next (2) imo, really (:
9. 01:10:369 (4,5,6) - (optional) Try this arrangement for a more continuous flow? (I rotated (4) slightly and added more curve to it, and put (5) lower than (4)'s end)
   
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10. 01:17:035 (1,2,3) - Same suggestion with previous diffs about gradual volume increase~
11. 01:19:258 (6) - Wouldn't it be better if this slider is placed in ~x:358 y:356 to fully make (3,4,5,6) an arc? More or less, the flow will be like this:
    
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12. 01:20:924 (9) - If you followed previous suggestion, you do not have to change this note's position (:
13. 01:31:480 (3,4) - I recommend to move it a bit upper regardless of the spacing to avoid overlap with (2)'s path xD
14. 01:42:960 (1) - Same as previous diffs about spinner volume dynamics~

1. Lead-inを1000msに設定
   0msの今の設定はEasyで曲開始時に既に最初のnoteが僅かに見えている状態になっており、これが設定として悪く思えました

1. NCのパターンについて
   00:32:591 (1) - 00:37:035 (1) - これらのnoteとそれ以前の前半のパート、01:17:035 - 以降のパートでNCのパターンが異なっています
   私はこれを大きな問題とは思いませんが、一番簡単な難易度ということもあり、強拍2つ毎にNCを挟むパターンで統一をし、一貫性をもたせた方が良いように思えました
   もし強拍2つ毎に設定を行うならば以下のすべての箇所にNCを入れてください
   なお、注意点として以下のNCは主にパターンから来ているものなので、
   noteの配置を基準にNCを使用している場合、それが譜面にとって悪い影響をもたらす可能性があります
   
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   00:08:146 (4) -
   00:18:146 (4) -
   00:28:146 (4) -
   00:45:924 (5) -
   00:54:813 (5) -
   01:03:702 (4) -
   01:12:591 (4) -

1. 00:09:535 (3,4,5) - この箇所の流れは綺麗ですが、(4,5)のスライダーの角度（と流れ）が好きではありません
   (4,5)の対となっているスライダーの位置にズレが生じており、見た目が悪く思えました
   
   
   00:12:313 (6,1) の位置調節が必要になりますが、画像のように綺麗に整えてみてはどうでしょう
2. 00:45:924 (6) - NC追加
   ここにNCが無いことでパターンが崩れ、またこの部分のコンボ数がかなり多くなってしまっています
3. 00:54:813 (5) - ^
4. 00:56:202 (6) - かなり細かいところですが、00:56:202 (6,7)の細かく見た時の流れが(6)のカーブが少しだけ合っていないように思いました
   
   
   節を上に持ってくるほうが最も良い流れとなるように思えました
   ただ正直好みの範囲なので修正はしなくても構いません
5. 01:25:924 (2) - 音量を50-55-60とそれぞれ上げ、ターンにFinishを追加
   01:17:591 (2) と 01:17:035 - 01:17:591 - 01:18:146 のパターンを考えると音量の変化をここで付けるべきです
   ただFinishだけは好みの問題があるので変更を保留にしても構いません
   単に私はあった方が好きというだけの理由です

1. fine

1. Clear!

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 01:41:542 (3) - AIBAT indicates the end of the slider isn't correctly snapped, please comfirm it can fix it.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:12:591 (1) - I think you can add a whistle at the end of the slider to follow your whistle pattern!
   2. 00:21:480 (1) - I would change the end of the slider to normal hitsound if I were you because of the drum sound.

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 01:41:542 (4) - Same as Easy.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:04:813 (2) - The rhythm problem here. Listen to the music, there is 1/3, not 1/4, thus, please end the slider in 1/3, that means to end it at 00:05:554 - , not 00:05:646 - . In either way, you can use a 1/3 reverse slider at 00:04:813 -
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:22:591 (3) - I would change this to normal hitsound if I were you because of the drum sound.
   2. 00:57:035 (3) - How about removing the normal hitsound here and then change it to soft-finish hitsound sound to follow the cymbals behind the instrument? You may turn it back to normal hitsounds at 00:57:869 - .

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 01:41:542 (6) - Same as easy.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:22:591 (3) - I would change the beginning of the slider to normal hitsound if I were you because of the drum sound.
   2. 00:57:035 (5) - How about removing the normal hitsound at the end of the slider and then change it to soft-finish hitsound sound to follow the cymbals behind the instrument? You may turn it back to normal hitsounds at 00:57:869 - .

kanpakyin wrote:

Sorry, I can't rebubble because of timing change.

Muya wrote:

we should map more nekomata song.