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mjw5150
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年11月4日 at 22:01:15

Artist: Hashimoto Miyuki
Title: Fairly Life
Source: FairlyLife
Tags: HOOKSOFT
BPM: 234
Filesize: 5252kb
Play Time: 03:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.39 stars, 162 notes)
  2. Hard (4.99 stars, 360 notes)
  3. Insane (4.9 stars, 552 notes)
  4. Normal (3.7 stars, 192 notes)
Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Fairly Life
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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橋本みゆき- Fairly Life
「FairlyLife」OP
lorvd
>:(
AIR315
Slider help~

http://puu.sh/Hpnq
Topic Starter
mjw5150
thx :)
Melophobia
Hi~

[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.599999999999999 - actually it shouldnt be fixed, but i'd suggest you to fix this, otherwise many modders will complain about this again~
00:16:828 (1,2,3) - looks random
00:54:776 (2) - add a repeat like what you did at 01:46:059 (2) - ? sounds much better to me
01:23:494 (2) - i prefer something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419465
01:54:264 (2) - finish at the end instead of whistle? more fitting music imo
01:58:366 (3) - add whistle here and remove it from the previous note to follow hi-hat?
02:37:340 (2) - same as 00:54:776 (2) -
02:45:546 (2) - ^
02:54:135 - whistle sounds better here

[Normal]
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 - same as Easy
00:32:212 (4) - change this into a slider? empty of 4 beats isnt that great imo
00:42:982 (1) - since BPM is really fast. this slider is too soon after a spinner for a Normal diff. and it's not that important here.so better to remove it.
01:38:879 (1) - bad overlapping imo. maybe something like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419481
01:39:905 (3) - ^ same
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419482
01:58:366 (3) - add whistle to follow hi-hat?
01:59:392 (1) - add clap here like Easy diff.
02:22:725 (3) - remove this note and start the next spinner from here? fits music better and spinner length will be longer so much easier to pass it o_o
02:38:110 - add finish instead of clap for consistency with other diffs
02:40:417 (1) - copy paste from (3)? looks better imo
02:54:135 - whistle is more fitting here
03:02:982 (1) - add finish here like other diffs


[Hard]
00:54:776 (3) - whistle sounds better here
01:33:879 - i'd add a clap here if possible ;_; feels empty here
01:59:392 (1) - same as Normal
02:54:135 - finish is too much, whistle is enough here
03:05:033 (5) - this combo is too long compared with others, so newcombo here


[Insane]
considering setting of Hard diff, HD-1 would be more suitable for this diff imo
00:54:776 (5) - whistle sounds better
01:19:776 (6) - maybe clap here?
02:54:135 (7) - whistle would be nice here
02:58:879 (1,3,5,7) - maybe rearrange them like this? flow will be more natural imo
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419513

not much to say, good job! starred since i like the song~ :D
good luck!
Topic Starter
mjw5150

Melophobia wrote:

Hi~

[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.599999999999999 - actually it shouldnt be fixed, but i'd suggest you to fix this, otherwise many modders will complain about this again~
00:16:828 (1,2,3) - looks random
00:54:776 (2) - add a repeat like what you did at 01:46:059 (2) - ? sounds much better to me
01:23:494 (2) - i prefer something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419465
01:54:264 (2) - finish at the end instead of whistle? more fitting music imo
01:58:366 (3) - add whistle here and remove it from the previous note to follow hi-hat?
02:37:340 (2) - same as 00:54:776 (2) -
02:45:546 (2) - ^
02:54:135 - whistle sounds better here

[Normal]
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 - same as Easy
00:32:212 (4) - change this into a slider? empty of 4 beats isnt that great imo
00:42:982 (1) - since BPM is really fast. this slider is too soon after a spinner for a Normal diff. and it's not that important here.so better to remove it.
01:38:879 (1) - bad overlapping imo. maybe something like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419481
01:39:905 (3) - ^ same
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419482
01:58:366 (3) - add whistle to follow hi-hat?
01:59:392 (1) - add clap here like Easy diff.
02:22:725 (3) - remove this note and start the next spinner from here? fits music better and spinner length will be longer so much easier to pass it o_o
02:38:110 - add finish instead of clap for consistency with other diffs
02:40:417 (1) - copy paste from (3)? looks better imo
02:54:135 - whistle is more fitting here
03:02:982 (1) - add finish here like other diffs


[Hard]
00:54:776 (3) - whistle sounds better here
01:33:879 - i'd add a clap here if possible ;_; feels empty here
01:59:392 (1) - same as Normal
02:54:135 - finish is too much, whistle is enough here
03:05:033 (5) - this combo is too long compared with others, so newcombo here


[Insane]
considering setting of Hard diff, HD-1 would be more suitable for this diff imo
00:54:776 (5) - whistle sounds better
01:19:776 (6) - maybe clap here?
02:54:135 (7) - whistle would be nice here
02:58:879 (1,3,5,7) - maybe rearrange them like this? flow will be more natural imo
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419513

not much to say, good job! starred since i like the song~ :D
good luck!
most fixe
thx for modding and star~ :)
wantuole
[General]
没问题
(=easy nor的slider有点略快(完全没法改的说)
hard 比insane还高0.09星,(玩起来hard更简单是没错)
[easy]
00:41:443 (4) - nor whistle 声音60%左右
00:46:571 (2) - 两个finish好怪 去一个
00:54:776 (2) - ^
[Nor]
00:46:571 (2,1) - 三个finish了... 这样的梗没问题?
01:54:264 (2,1) - 应该相同的音效? 音效无能
03:01:956 (2,1) - =w= 4个finish了
[hard]
00:21:443 (2) - ctrl+r
01:29:648 (1) - 拉点弧度
01:55:674 (2) - 在x:276 y:212 k看起来会好点
01:57:725 (2) - ^
03:04:392 (4) - ^
[Insane]
没问题
mod来说我还太年轻 还是不mod这个难度了

就这些,祝你好运
Topic Starter
mjw5150

wantuole wrote:

[General]
没问题
(=easy nor的slider有点略快(完全没法改的说)
hard 比insane还高0.09星,(玩起来hard更简单是没错)
[easy]
00:41:443 (4) - nor whistle 声音60%左右
00:46:571 (2) - 两个finish好怪 去一个
00:54:776 (2) - ^
[Nor]
00:46:571 (2,1) - 三个finish了... 这样的梗没问题?
01:54:264 (2,1) - 应该相同的音效? 音效无能
03:01:956 (2,1) - =w= 4个finish了
[hard]
00:21:443 (2) - ctrl+r
01:29:648 (1) - 拉点弧度
01:55:674 (2) - 在x:276 y:212 k看起来会好点
01:57:725 (2) - ^
03:04:392 (4) - ^
[Insane]
没问题
mod来说我还太年轻 还是不mod这个难度了

就这些,祝你好运
fixed some
感谢mod =w=
Konei
Mod request from my Queue~


[General]

* Tags to add: "visual novel eroge gal galgame"
* Your Hard has a higher Star rate than your Insane, that's pretty bad for the diff spread. Consider changing some things up


[Easy]

* Beat snap divisor can be 1/2
* You should look at your whistle rhythm again. I can't see if you use every second or every third white tick whistles :/ It's quite confusing here
00:28:110 (1) - removing NC here and add it at 00:29:135 makes more sense if you listen to the vocals and look at the pattern
00:30:161 (1) - if you followed above remove NC here
01:38:366 (2) - move this some grids up for being alligned with 1
01:59:392 (1) - remove clap from this Spinner, it sounds unfitting here
02:42:469 (1) - allgin with 4

Pretty nice rhythm, but I see some things which could just be a bit neater. You'll get them all by getting more mods for sure.


[Normal]

* There are a few Spacing misstakes. Catch them up with AImod
00:41:443 (1) - This Spinner is too short for a normal diff
01:24:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern looks untidy, because of the slider being spaced so irregulary. Something like http://puu.sh/17Pzz should be better. But just try placing 6 another way.
01:28:623 (2,3,4) - according to the vocals here should be a long Slider beginning on 2 and ending on 4.


Sorry for being lazy~ Song is too long =.=

Good luck~
Topic Starter
mjw5150

Konei wrote:

Mod request from my Queue~


[General]

* Tags to add: "visual novel eroge gal galgame" sorry,i don't like to add those thing in tags :(
* Your Hard has a higher Star rate than your Insane, that's pretty bad for the diff spread. Consider changing some things up

[Easy]

* Beat snap divisor can be 1/2
* You should look at your whistle rhythm again. I can't see if you use every second or every third white tick whistles :/ It's quite confusing here
00:28:110 (1) - removing NC here and add it at 00:29:135 makes more sense if you listen to the vocals and look at the pattern
00:30:161 (1) - if you followed above remove NC here
01:38:366 (2) - move this some grids up for being alligned with 1
01:59:392 (1) - remove clap from this Spinner, it sounds unfitting here
02:42:469 (1) - allgin with 4

Pretty nice rhythm, but I see some things which could just be a bit neater. You'll get them all by getting more mods for sure.


[Normal]

* There are a few Spacing misstakes. Catch them up with AImod
00:41:443 (1) - This Spinner is too short for a normal diff
01:24:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern looks untidy, because of the slider being spaced so irregulary. Something like http://puu.sh/17Pzz should be better. But just try placing 6 another way.
01:28:623 (2,3,4) - according to the vocals here should be a long Slider beginning on 2 and ending on 4.


Sorry for being lazy~ Song is too long =.=

Good luck~
fixed some
thx for your suggestion :)
Nichiyouki


Hi, mjw5150

My mod from your request (Sorry for the long wait.)

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Add "opening" in tags, because this is opening song of FairlyLife.
  2. Remove .osb file. It isn't necessary.

Easy

  1. 00:17:853 (2) - Make a shape is similar to (1)?

Normal

  1. HP +1 (4)
  2. AR +1 (5), because AR 4 is too cluttered.
  3. 00:36:315 (3,1) - Avoid overlapping of them be better.
  4. 00:41:443 (1) - Period of rotation of the spinner's too short for Normal diff. I think that use slider.
  5. 00:52:469 - Add circle. To suit the rhythm of song even more.
  6. 01:40:930 (1) - Same as 00:41:443 (1)
  7. 02:22:982 (1) - ^
  8. 02:32:212 (1) - ^
  9. 03:00:930 (1) - Make is curve slider be better.

Hard

  1. Good diff

Insane

  1. 00:33:751 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:368 y:272, and move (4) to stack with 00:32:853 (4).
  2. 01:42:469 (1,2,3,4) - Move (1) to right 2 grids and up 1 grid, move (2) to replace (3), move (3) to replace (4), and move (4) to stack with slider begin of (1) would be better?
  3. 02:58:266 (4) - Add NC?

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
mjw5150

nich95 wrote:



Hi, mjw5150

My mod from your request (Sorry for the long wait.)

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Add "opening" in tags, because this is opening song of FairlyLife.
  2. Remove .osb file. It isn't necessary.

Easy

  1. 00:17:853 (2) - Make a shape is similar to (1)?

Normal

  1. HP +1 (4)
  2. AR +1 (5), because AR 4 is too cluttered.
  3. 00:36:315 (3,1) - Avoid overlapping of them be better.
  4. 00:41:443 (1) - Period of rotation of the spinner's too short for Normal diff. I think that use slider.
  5. 00:52:469 - Add circle. To suit the rhythm of song even more.
  6. 01:40:930 (1) - Same as 00:41:443 (1)
  7. 02:22:982 (1) - ^
  8. 02:32:212 (1) - ^
  9. 03:00:930 (1) - Make is curve slider be better.

Hard

  1. Good diff

Insane

  1. 00:33:751 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:368 y:272, and move (4) to stack with 00:32:853 (4).
  2. 01:42:469 (1,2,3,4) - Move (1) to right 2 grids and up 1 grid, move (2) to replace (3), move (3) to replace (4), and move (4) to stack with slider begin of (1) would be better?
  3. 02:58:266 (4) - Add NC?

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
most fixed,thx a lot :D
KayeSara
[Insane]
  1. 00:39:516 (6,1) - 略太急了,应该说没这个节奏
  2. 00:55:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 来个anti-jump,也就是把00:56:029 (2,4,6) - 去掉,然后间距改成0.3X,下示例图
  3. 02:18:466 (2,4) - 这两个note感觉玩起来不太舒服,可以不要的
  4. 02:37:751 (1) - remove NC
[Hard]
  1. 00:44:468 (7,8,1) - 感觉flow这样舒服些 (7和9都复制的第六个)
  2. 01:44:972 (6) - 可以复制一个01:44:468 (5) - 然后ctrl+h一个
  3. 02:08:165 (2,3,4) - 矮油,直接贴图啦(1,2间距我弄的是0.3,不过这样改了后面的4,5就要改改了,黏在一起了)
[Normal]
  1. 看了半天没问题啊

[Easy]
  1. 没问题啊
Topic Starter
mjw5150

KayeSara wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:39:516 (6,1) - 略太急了,应该说没这个节奏
  2. 00:55:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 来个anti-jump,也就是把00:56:029 (2,4,6) - 去掉,然后间距改成0.3X,下示例图
  3. 02:18:466 (2,4) - 这两个note感觉玩起来不太舒服,可以不要的
  4. 02:37:751 (1) - remove NC
[Hard]
  1. 00:44:468 (7,8,1) - 感觉flow这样舒服些 (7和9都复制的第六个)
  2. 01:44:972 (6) - 可以复制一个01:44:468 (5) - 然后ctrl+h一个
  3. 02:08:165 (2,3,4) - 矮油,直接贴图啦(1,2间距我弄的是0.3,不过这样改了后面的4,5就要改改了,黏在一起了)
[Normal]
  1. 看了半天没问题啊

[Easy]
  1. 没问题啊
恩 基本都改了 谢了 :)
Kuroneko-sHerald
[Easy]
02:22:725 (5) - Maybe move to 02:22:853 - ? (same end)
02:59:648 (2) - I suggest to remove this beat (no fix spacing needed) because is unexpected, probably because the previous slider series.

[Normal]
00:36:059 (2) - Remove? If yes, I suggest also to rotate 90° clockwise 00:36:315 (2) - and to fix spacing like the image:

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate -1 and Overall Difficulty -1 or Overall Difficulty -2 since it's Hard I think.
02:53:110 (2) - I think that you should space this or at least to make it close to 02:52:725 (1) -

Sorry for late and poor mod :(
Topic Starter
mjw5150

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Easy]
02:22:725 (5) - Maybe move to 02:22:853 - ? (same end) no
02:59:648 (2) - I suggest to remove this beat (no fix spacing needed) because is unexpected, probably because the previous slider series. fixed

[Normal]
00:36:059 (2) - Remove? If yes, I suggest also to rotate 90° clockwise 00:36:315 (2) - and to fix spacing like the image:
no

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate -1 and Overall Difficulty -1 or Overall Difficulty -2 since it's Hard I think. no,sorry cause the bpm is so high :(
02:53:110 (2) - I think that you should space this or at least to make it close to 02:52:725 (1) - no,i want to make a jump here,so..

Sorry for late and poor mod :(
thx :)
Kuifich
Easy
fine

Normal
02:29:392 - Add a Note

Hard
looks fine

Insane
00:24:264 - Clap at the end of slider
00:27:341 - ^
00:33:238 - finish
00:52:469 - clap
01:49:007 - Add a Note

that's all
really like this song :)
Topic Starter
mjw5150

Kuifich wrote:

Easy
fine

Normal
02:29:392 - Add a Note

Hard
looks fine

Insane
00:24:264 - Clap at the end of slider
00:27:341 - ^
00:33:238 - finish
00:52:469 - clap
01:49:007 - Add a Note

that's all
really like this song :)
fixed some and thx www
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ mjw5150 ~ :)

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Inconsistent Artist/TitleUnicode,pls check osu file and fix.

[Hard]


  1. 02:36:700 (2,3) - Change slider first on rhythm,sound much better.
  2. 02:45:417 (2) - Remove this clap,sound better to me.
  3. 02:56:187 (4) - Move 2 grid up,make no touch stuff.

[Normal]


  1. Some point add clap,sound much better to me.
    SPOILER
    00:52:212 -
    00:53:238 -
    01:51:700 -
    01:52:725 -
    02:42:982 -
    02:44:007 -
    02:51:187 -
    02:52:212 -
  2. 01:42:982 (5) - Add new combo and Remove 01:45:033 (1).
  3. 03:00:674 - Add a circle(add clap).

That's all ~ Nice flow map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Topic Starter
mjw5150

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ mjw5150 ~ :)

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Inconsistent Artist/TitleUnicode,pls check osu file and fix.

[Hard]


  1. 02:36:700 (2,3) - Change slider first on rhythm,sound much better.
  2. 02:45:417 (2) - Remove this clap,sound better to me.sorry,i think it's ok here,no changed :(
  3. 02:56:187 (4) - Move 2 grid up,make no touch stuff.

[Normal]


  1. Some point add clap,sound much better to me.
    SPOILER
    00:52:212 -
    00:53:238 -
    01:51:700 -
    01:52:725 -
    02:42:982 -
    02:44:007 -
    02:51:187 -
    02:52:212 -
  2. 01:42:982 (5) - Add new combo and Remove 01:45:033 (1).
  3. 03:00:674 - Add a circle(add clap).

That's all ~ Nice flow map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
all fixed
thx so much :)
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Good job ~

Here you go :3


Andrea
Wow, that's pretty fast, but fun! Nothing to say, everything looks good here.

Ranked~
DarkRingSystem
you banned in 毛站.
huve fun no thx.
Topic Starter
mjw5150

DarkRingSystem wrote:

you banned in 毛站.
huve fun no thx.
you no this way(馆长
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