1. that BG.. I don't think it's acceptable image

1. 00:08:695 (4) - pretty weird rhythm, extend it to the next white tick and add a circle at 00:09:842 - ?
2. 00:12:517 (1) - spinner here doesn't make sense imo, can you find some other ways, or at least extend it to 00:14:810 - please
3. 00:56:084 - follow vocal, mind adding 2 3/2 sliders with a arrow?
4. 01:03:345 (2) - weird rhythm, try adding a circle at 01:03:345 - first or at least extend it to 01:04:109 -
5. 01:14:045 (1,2) - remove NC for 1, NC for 2 for new kiai?
6. 01:25:128 (4,1) - i can't understand why you did it here

1. 00:35:829 (2) - follow elec and vocal, start it from 00:35:638 - ?
2. 01:01:052 (3) - you could add a 1/2 slider from 01:00:861 - , it feels a bit empty now
3. 01:13:854 - i'd add a circle at 01:13:854 - , but up to you

1. 00:14:619 (6) - why don't you stack its body on 5's tail?
2. 00:24:937 (5,6) - 5 still flows to 6, replace with a slider?
3. 00:49:014 (5) - too sharp.. imo, 1.8x would be ok for this diff
4. 00:49:587 (7,8) - same as 00:24:937 (5,6) -, a slider to left side?
5. 00:51:307 (4) - same as 00:14:619 (6) -, my pussh doesn't work now ._. sorry for no image
6. 00:54:364 (5) - ^, i mean, move it to (360,76)
7. 01:05:256 (6) - NC
8. 01:27:230 (3,4) - it has bad angle to play imo, ctrl+g?

1. I'm tired with infinite copying style, but it's good enough imo

Star Stream wrote:

[General]

1. that BG.. I don't think it's acceptable image This is an ecchi anime, so it's hard to find something different

[Normal]

1. 00:35:829 (2) - follow elec and vocal, start it from 00:35:638 - ? Nah, sounds bad imo.
2. 01:01:052 (3) - you could add a 1/2 slider from 01:00:861 - , it feels a bit empty now Ok.
3. 01:13:854 - i'd add a circle at 01:13:854 - , but up to you Sure.

[Insane]

1. I'm tired with infinite copying style, but it's good enough imo

Star Stream wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:14:619 (6) - why don't you stack its body on 5's tail? Because it would break the flow
2. 00:24:937 (5,6) - 5 still flows to 6, replace with a slider? No, a note is better imo
3. 00:49:014 (5) - too sharp.. imo, 1.8x would be ok for this diff okay
4. 00:49:587 (7,8) - same as 00:24:937 (5,6) -, a slider to left side Made this in my way
5. 00:51:307 (4) - same as 00:14:619 (6) -, my pussh doesn't work now ._. sorry for no image Same as 00:14:619 (6) -
6. 00:54:364 (5) - ^, i mean, move it to (360,76) na
7. 01:05:256 (6) - NC okay
8. 01:27:230 (3,4) - it has bad angle to play imo, ctrl+g? sure o:

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Change AudioLeadIn to 2000,better with start. Done.
2. 01:13:663 - change all diff #1 kiai time end to here pls. Ok.

[Insane]

1. 00:02:007 (2) - Don't change SV to here,looks 1/1 symmetry slider really confused. Changed.
2. 00:24:937 (7) - Add new combo,looks better. Nah, there is a NC on the next note, so it would seems a little bad for me.
3. 01:27:421 (4) - Remove whistle,sound better to me. Fits nice for me.

[Normal]

1. OD+1. Ok.
2. 00:43:472 - Remove whistle,sound better to me. If I remove Whistle it would break the consistency, so I'll keep it.

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Fixed some stuff Thanks Rika for modding :3

http://puu.sh/1gmpR

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Sekai's Easy]

1. 00:07:549 ~ 00:12:135 - SC:2 claps sound really too low volume,pls up to 90% or change other.
2. 00:12:517 (1) - Should change rhythm,like this(00:11:944 - 00:12:708 - Add clap).
   
3. 00:40:415 - Why use NC:2 to here? No, Because i used different slidertick
4. 00:43:472 - ^ ^
5. 00:41:179 - Add a circle and clap.
6. 00:49:969 - Add finish sound better.
7. 00:50:351 ~ 00:57:421 - Don't use NC:2 to here,change SC:1 pls.
8. 01:14:045 (6) - Remove this circle. No, Because i think it's fits there. And i dont think it's hard to read.
9. 01:25:128 (4) - Should change rhythm,like this(Add finish in start,end point).
   
10. 01:25:893 (1) - Start on 01:26:084.

That's all ~ Nice song and map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

• 
  
  Excuse me Bruno, but is not the BG some NSFW?
  Just saying, I suggest to you change it for another BG less "Exotic".

Mercurial wrote:

Perdoná Bruno, pero el BG no es demaciado sugerente?

Digo nomás, estaría bueno cambiarlo por otro.

Translation:

• 
  
  Excuse me Bruno, but is not the BG some NSFW?
  Just saying, I suggest to you change it for another BG less "Exotic".

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Verdi's Hard]

1. OD-1. ok
2. 00:22:262 (1) - I guess change 2 circle on next slider head is better to here. I prefer how it is
3. 00:35:830 (4) - this should move to 00:35:638,follow with lyrics. ok
4. 00:36:975 - Add a circle,sound better to here. No thanks
5. 01:25:893 (4,5) - Too huge spacing,try reduce some. really? I don't think so
6. 01:26:466 (5,1,2,3) - Remove whistle,sound better to me. But not for me
7. 01:27:421 (4) - Remove whistle and Add finish.

no