LunarSakuya wrote:

Normal
00:10:988 (2) - Whistle ? Nah, there are 3 whistles before this note, so I think it wouldn't sound very good.
00:43:472 (5) - Put the finish at the end instead There is a cymbal sound in the beginning, so I think Finish fits better there.
00:54:173 (3) - Finish at end? Ok.
00:56:084 (1,2) - Finishes at the beginnings Ok.
01:24:746 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move this pattern towards the top so the notes aren't concentrated at the bottom http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456456 Ok.

Insane
00:04:109 (5) - Whistle Oops, added.
00:12:517 (1) - Delete NC..unless it's for the big spacing? Yep, it's for spacing.
00:33:345 (2) - Ctrl + G, for some flow, idk what do you think? xD Seems better for me like I did.
00:50:924 (4) - Finish at end, hear bg music Ok.
00:54:364 (4) - Finish at beginning Ok.
00:53:791 (1) - Delete NC Ok.
01:19:778 (1,2,3,4,1) - i guess make a neater pentagon? xD http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456485 Ok.
Nice patterns! Thank you!

LunarSakuya wrote:

Verdi's Hard
00:14:619 (6) - move down a bit http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456462 I don't like how that looks
00:23:791 (1) - delete NC, NC on 00:23:982 (2) - No
00:43:090 (6) - Delete finish at end, bit overwhelming imo sure
00:49:969 (8) - Stack this on 00:50:351 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456470 no

1. blue circle 00:55:702 (3)
2. orange circles 00:56:084 (1) and 00:56:657 (2)
3. red circles 00:57:612 (1) and 00:58:186 (2)
4. yellow circle 00:59:141 (1)

1. 01:05:256 (3) - ends one red tick late at 01:05:829
2. circles 01:06:211 (4) and 01:06:593 (5)

1. circles 01:10:606 (1) and 01:10:988 (2)
   slider 01:11:370 (3) ending 01:11:752 to cover the "de~" vocal
   circle 01:12:135 (4) and 01:12:708 (5)
   slider 01:13:090 (6) (move the one originally at 01:13:281

tetsutaro wrote:

[General]:idea: The video is a little bit distracting, with the attractive winged girls flying all around at the chorus. (No it's fine, no need to remove it)
Hard forces using the default skin. Change that to apply to all maps or not to apply to any map at all. orz, I don't know how this happened, fixed.
(Normal and Insane) The envelope and symmetry... is just awesome. No wonder your maps get ranked so fast. :3

[Normal]
00:35:829 (2) - change to circle here. I think two sounds fits better than one here, so this little slider it's ok.
01:13:090 (3) - end one red tick earlier then Why? o.o
01:14:045 (1) - start at 01:13:663 ending in the same place. Doesn't fit for me.
01:22:835 (1,2,3) - I think it's better if the two circles comes first then the returning slider. I'm not sure what you mean here.
01:25:893 (3) - change to circle There are two sounds in the music, so this slider fits.

[Insane]
00:02:007 (2) - Is this rankable? I know this is Insane and you did this to keep symmetry, but it is very confusing. It's rankable.
00:06:020 (3) - add circle in here There aren't a sound or anything here, so I won't.

Darksonic wrote:

01:22:835 (1,2,3) - I think it's better if the two circles comes first then the returning slider. I'm not sure what you mean here.

tetsutaro wrote:

[Hard]
00:01:625 (1,2,3) - I am nagging about the spacing between these three for that reason is the new combo in 00:01:625 -
00:07:931 (2,3) - change to 00:07:740 (2) and 00:08:122 (3) and 00:08:504 (4) to match the vocal na, the rhythm is fine there
00:09:651 (3) - add this circle in. It's Hard and after the soft intro there should be more 1/2 clusters. na
00:57:612 (1,2,3) - With the yellow combo on the left, move this combo to the right. Looks bad for me, no thanks
01:01:147 (1) - end at 01:01:816 and then add a circle in at 01:02:198 (1) No, the spinner is fine
01:25:319 (1,2,3,4) - More nagging about spacing Same as 00:01:625 (1,2,3) -
01:26:466 (5) - Put this around at the centre of the playfield, so no
01:26:848 (1,2,3,4) - can span a square/rhombus around it. Now it looks like this map is leaned on the left But I like that pattern ):

• the first heavy beat is at 00:01:052. so you should set offset to 1052 ms.

• 00:08:695 (4) - this slider should end at 00:09:459 imo.
  00:12:517 (1) - it's natural for me if you move this spinner 1/2 later.
  00:36:211 (2,3) - hmm...I think these sliders doesn't follow the accent of music well. how about replace them with 1/1 sliders?
  SPOILER

  
  00:48:058 (2,3,4) - the rhythm is good, but the flow isn't kind for newbie player imo because the directions of cursor and slider are different. how about this placement?
  SPOILER

  
  00:52:644 (4) - rotate 45 degree to clockwise? almost same reason as above.
  01:03:345 (2) - it's natural for me if this slider end at 01:03:727.
  01:08:313 (2) - how about improve the form of this slider and blanket (1) better like this?
  SPOILER

  
  if you like it, please use this code.

  256,254,68313,2,0,B|313:248|329:192|329:192|375:154,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

• 01:13:854 (4) - add note? I think it will be easier to follow the rhythm if you put note here because the interval from previous note becomes 1/1.
  if you do this, how about put circle here and stack 01:14:045 (1) with this circle.

• 00:02:389 (3,1) - this jump is hard to read since the distances between 00:01:625 (1,2,3) are so short.
  I wonder why you didn't use same distance as 00:04:682 (2,3,4,5,1).
  00:07:931 (2,3,2,3) - I can understand that you wanted to follow drums, but for example, at 00:07:740, there are really strong sound in the song.
  you shouldn't ignore the sound of them because you followed vocal sound in previous section. how about replace these notes with 1/2 slider like as 00:10:797 (2,3) ?
  00:20:351 - add note since there is strong sound.
  00:36:402 (1,2) - this jump is hard to read because the distance is almost same as between 00:35:065 (2,3). shorten the distance please.
  00:49:014 (5) - cover with HP bar. move to a bit below.
  01:01:147 (1) - auto play shows 3000 bonus score, so this spinner is actually rankable, but I think it's too short for Hard.
  and also you put notes just before/after this spinner, it makes this spinner more harder. please consider to replace with other notes.
  01:05:065 - add note. there is strong sound in the song.

• 00:02:383 - snap to 00:02:389
  00:37:166 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think this stream doesn't match with the music well. there are strong sound at 00:37:358, but to make stream around there, the note isn't emphasized. how about this rhythm? it will follow the music well imo.
  SPOILER

  
  01:07:549 (1) - the reverse arrow of this slider can't be seen well. how about do ctrl+G to this note?
  SPOILER

  
  01:14:810 (2,3) - I can understand that you want to make (3) symmetry with (1), but this jump is unnatural for me. sure, it isn't so large and playable, but like as 01:01:434 (1,2,3,4), you keep distance snap to about 1.5x. so how about unify the distance with it?

h-728 wrote:

[General]

• the first heavy beat is at 00:01:052. so you should set offset to 1052 ms. The first note is in 00:00:288 so I think that's not necessary.

[Normal]

• 01:13:854 (4) - add note? I think it will be easier to follow the rhythm if you put note here because the interval from previous note becomes 1/1.
  if you do this, how about put circle here and stack 01:14:045 (1) with this circle. A note here wouldn't follow any rhythm, so I won't.

[Insane]

• 00:02:383 - snap to 00:02:389 Fixed.
  00:37:166 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think this stream doesn't match with the music well. there are strong sound at 00:37:358, but to make stream around there, the note isn't emphasized. how about this rhythm? it will follow the music well imo. Nah, it's almost the same rhythm that I did, so no changes.
  SPOILER

  
  01:07:549 (1) - the reverse arrow of this slider can't be seen well. how about do ctrl+G to this note? Ok.
  SPOILER

  
  01:14:810 (2,3) - I can understand that you want to make (3) symmetry with (1), but this jump is unnatural for me. sure, it isn't so large and playable, but like as 01:01:434 (1,2,3,4), you keep distance snap to about 1.5x. so how about unify the distance with it? Remember that is an Insane diff, so if you see some random jumps or something, is not a problem at all.

tetsutaro wrote:

I mean it was
①ーー⇨ーーＯ　　②　　③

I like it better if this is changed into
①　　②　　③ーー⇨ーーＯ

But still it is just a suggestion.

h-728 wrote:

[Verdi's Hard]

• 00:02:389 (3,1) - this jump is hard to read since the distances between 00:01:625 (1,2,3) are so short.
  I wonder why you didn't use same distance as 00:04:682 (2,3,4,5,1). Spacing changed
  00:07:931 (2,3,2,3) - I can understand that you wanted to follow drums, but for example, at 00:07:740, there are really strong sound in the song.
  you shouldn't ignore the sound of them because you followed vocal sound in previous section. how about replace these notes with 1/2 slider like as 00:10:797 (2,3) ? Na, i prefer notes there
  00:20:351 - add note since there is strong sound. ok
  00:36:402 (1,2) - this jump is hard to read because the distance is almost same as between 00:35:065 (2,3). shorten the distance please.
  00:49:014 (5) - cover with HP bar. move to a bit below. It doesn't http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/460169
  01:01:147 (1) - auto play shows 3000 bonus score, so this spinner is actually rankable, but I think it's too short for Hard. If another mod point this, I'll change it.
  01:05:065 - add note. there is strong sound in the song. ok

1. that BG.. I don't think it's acceptable image

1. 00:08:695 (4) - pretty weird rhythm, extend it to the next white tick and add a circle at 00:09:842 - ?
2. 00:12:517 (1) - spinner here doesn't make sense imo, can you find some other ways, or at least extend it to 00:14:810 - please
3. 00:56:084 - follow vocal, mind adding 2 3/2 sliders with a arrow?
4. 01:03:345 (2) - weird rhythm, try adding a circle at 01:03:345 - first or at least extend it to 01:04:109 -
5. 01:14:045 (1,2) - remove NC for 1, NC for 2 for new kiai?
6. 01:25:128 (4,1) - i can't understand why you did it here

1. 00:35:829 (2) - follow elec and vocal, start it from 00:35:638 - ?
2. 01:01:052 (3) - you could add a 1/2 slider from 01:00:861 - , it feels a bit empty now
3. 01:13:854 - i'd add a circle at 01:13:854 - , but up to you

1. 00:14:619 (6) - why don't you stack its body on 5's tail?
2. 00:24:937 (5,6) - 5 still flows to 6, replace with a slider?
3. 00:49:014 (5) - too sharp.. imo, 1.8x would be ok for this diff
4. 00:49:587 (7,8) - same as 00:24:937 (5,6) -, a slider to left side?
5. 00:51:307 (4) - same as 00:14:619 (6) -, my pussh doesn't work now ._. sorry for no image
6. 00:54:364 (5) - ^, i mean, move it to (360,76)
7. 01:05:256 (6) - NC
8. 01:27:230 (3,4) - it has bad angle to play imo, ctrl+g?

1. I'm tired with infinite copying style, but it's good enough imo

Star Stream wrote:

[General]

1. that BG.. I don't think it's acceptable image This is an ecchi anime, so it's hard to find something different

[Normal]

1. 00:35:829 (2) - follow elec and vocal, start it from 00:35:638 - ? Nah, sounds bad imo.
2. 01:01:052 (3) - you could add a 1/2 slider from 01:00:861 - , it feels a bit empty now Ok.
3. 01:13:854 - i'd add a circle at 01:13:854 - , but up to you Sure.

[Insane]

1. I'm tired with infinite copying style, but it's good enough imo

Star Stream wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:14:619 (6) - why don't you stack its body on 5's tail? Because it would break the flow
2. 00:24:937 (5,6) - 5 still flows to 6, replace with a slider? No, a note is better imo
3. 00:49:014 (5) - too sharp.. imo, 1.8x would be ok for this diff okay
4. 00:49:587 (7,8) - same as 00:24:937 (5,6) -, a slider to left side Made this in my way
5. 00:51:307 (4) - same as 00:14:619 (6) -, my pussh doesn't work now ._. sorry for no image Same as 00:14:619 (6) -
6. 00:54:364 (5) - ^, i mean, move it to (360,76) na
7. 01:05:256 (6) - NC okay
8. 01:27:230 (3,4) - it has bad angle to play imo, ctrl+g? sure o:

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Change AudioLeadIn to 2000,better with start. Done.
2. 01:13:663 - change all diff #1 kiai time end to here pls. Ok.

[Insane]

1. 00:02:007 (2) - Don't change SV to here,looks 1/1 symmetry slider really confused. Changed.
2. 00:24:937 (7) - Add new combo,looks better. Nah, there is a NC on the next note, so it would seems a little bad for me.
3. 01:27:421 (4) - Remove whistle,sound better to me. Fits nice for me.

[Normal]

1. OD+1. Ok.
2. 00:43:472 - Remove whistle,sound better to me. If I remove Whistle it would break the consistency, so I'll keep it.

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Fixed some stuff Thanks Rika for modding :3

http://puu.sh/1gmpR

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Sekai's Easy]

1. 00:07:549 ~ 00:12:135 - SC:2 claps sound really too low volume,pls up to 90% or change other.
2. 00:12:517 (1) - Should change rhythm,like this(00:11:944 - 00:12:708 - Add clap).
   
3. 00:40:415 - Why use NC:2 to here? No, Because i used different slidertick
4. 00:43:472 - ^ ^
5. 00:41:179 - Add a circle and clap.
6. 00:49:969 - Add finish sound better.
7. 00:50:351 ~ 00:57:421 - Don't use NC:2 to here,change SC:1 pls.
8. 01:14:045 (6) - Remove this circle. No, Because i think it's fits there. And i dont think it's hard to read.
9. 01:25:128 (4) - Should change rhythm,like this(Add finish in start,end point).
   
10. 01:25:893 (1) - Start on 01:26:084.

That's all ~ Nice song and map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

• 
  
  Excuse me Bruno, but is not the BG some NSFW?
  Just saying, I suggest to you change it for another BG less "Exotic".

Mercurial wrote:

Perdoná Bruno, pero el BG no es demaciado sugerente?

Digo nomás, estaría bueno cambiarlo por otro.

Translation:

• 
  
  Excuse me Bruno, but is not the BG some NSFW?
  Just saying, I suggest to you change it for another BG less "Exotic".

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Verdi's Hard]

1. OD-1. ok
2. 00:22:262 (1) - I guess change 2 circle on next slider head is better to here. I prefer how it is
3. 00:35:830 (4) - this should move to 00:35:638,follow with lyrics. ok
4. 00:36:975 - Add a circle,sound better to here. No thanks
5. 01:25:893 (4,5) - Too huge spacing,try reduce some. really? I don't think so
6. 01:26:466 (5,1,2,3) - Remove whistle,sound better to me. But not for me
7. 01:27:421 (4) - Remove whistle and Add finish.

no