FictionJunction - Parallel Hearts (TV-Size) · forum

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2012-08-11T13:48:46+00:00

老大~~Request from In-Game PM

[General]

mp3超過 192kb/s了
不加Video?

[Skin]

你少了approachcircle.png! 雖然好像也不需要吧- -

[Yasora]

00:30:025 (1) - Why here's a clap?
00:41:662 (1) - ^
01:05:298 (1) - finish?
01:15:480 (1) - Is this the same with (2) but just opposite? If not, make them just opposite.

[L18]

01:05:298 (1) - finish?
01:16:934 (1) - ^
我無體投地了lol

[BakaCI]

01:05:298 - finish?
01:11:116 (1) - finish
01:16:934 - ^
01:24:207 (1) - I'd like to do like this > http://puu.sh/QHrP (the second tick move up 1 gird)

[老大]

00:34:025 (1) - 第三個錨點可以往下一格 (nazi)
01:05:298 (1) - finish?
01:16:934 (1) - ^

[最後]
因為我聽著最後這段kiai 感覺finish少了點lol (不過這樣很好聽了), 所以自己下了一下, 有點略吵但我覺得不錯, 你參考看看? (可無視沒關係lol)

finish

有些已經加了
00:59:480 (1) -
01:05:298 (1) -
01:06:753 (1) -
01:08:207 (1) -
01:09:662 (1,2,3,4,1) -
01:15:480 (1) -
01:16:934 (1) -
01:18:389 (1) -
01:19:844 (1) -
01:21:298 (1,3,1) -
多出來的都只是建議啦.-.

好圖一只!射星!

/me runs because bad mod

BCI

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

BCI 2012-08-11T16:33:51+00:00

http://puu.sh/QJr9

pyransc

44 posts

Joined March 2012

pyransc 2012-08-14T17:38:58+00:00

[Star's Normal]

00:59:480 (1) - use finish on first circle ?
01:00:934 (3) - use finish on first circle ?

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Yasora 2012-08-15T08:27:06+00:00

Flask wrote:
[Yasora]
00:30:025 (1) - Why here's a clap? because drum sound
00:41:662 (1) - ^ ^
01:05:298 (1) - finish? nope too loud
01:15:480 (1) - Is this the same with (2) but just opposite? If not, make them just opposite. fixed a bit

thanks~

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winber1

4,520 posts

Joined February 2010

winber1 2012-08-16T01:39:29+00:00

It looks long, but it's just a lot of suggestions :3

[General]

Apparently the bitrate is 320kb/s, when it should be 192kb/s

[Boss's Heart]

00:01:298 (2) - I like following the drums, so perhaps you could add a finish to the beginning of this slider, and reduce the volume of only the beginning of the slider to ~50% (cuz 80% is too loud if you add a finish )
00:12:207 (4) - imo, a new combo would fit, since it's the start of the guitar slide and a new phrase, and you gave it a new spacing.
00:24:934 - hitsounds are kinda loud here imo.
00:30:207 (7,1) - maybe it's just me, but I kinda like the flow better if the spacing was a little bit bigger (to accomadate for the jump between combo 6 and 7). Secondly, having the curve of the slider follow the movement of your cursor (if you imagine you were playing) also flows better imo. For this particular pattern, I find that having flow is more preferable rather than making shapes. http://puu.sh/VG2V This is just my opinion tho.
00:42:571 - why no note here?

01:09:298 (6,7) - okay, this just bothers me some reason. the new combo should start here, but your pattern makes that feel all weird. Perhaps you could do something like this http://puu.sh/VGhF , http://puu.sh/VGhS , http://puu.sh/VGi6 , http://puu.sh/VGiv
Here's the code:

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01:20:389 (2) - well it doesn't really matter, but you could follow the vocals :S instead of skipping 01:20:571 - Though it's not a big deal.
01:22:753 (1) - add whistle?

[BakaCI's]

00:01:298 (2) - same as Boss's Heart. Add finish and make volume 50% for only the beginning of the slider?
00:07:116 (1,2,3) - I would much rather use a repeat slider to be honest. It also makes it easier to read.
00:10:025 (1) - ummm... make it so that the slider "faces" or "points" to combo 5? http://puu.sh/VGLu (adjust the later sliders as well)
00:12:207 (1) - I would rather you have this note have a lower SV than 1. imo, it looks better, it just makes more sense to do it like that. you could use 0.68x, 0.76x, 0.84x, 0.92x, 1.00x
00:15:844 (1,2,3) - this is awkward. you're much better off just following the melody. playing notes inbetween the melody like this just doesn't make sense imo.
00:18:934 (1,2,3) - make into a more equilateral triangle?
00:21:298 (5) - up 2 grids and left 1 grid? makes the triangle more symmetric and looks better imo.
00:22:389 (2) - if you are going to use a repeat slider like combo 1, you should delete this note and rearrange spacing http://puu.sh/VIT3
00:44:025 - continue the flow, add a note here. the break does not make sense
00:51:480 (3,4) - pointless jump imo. If this were a jumpy map, I wouldn't care, but you've been using almost perfect spacing so far and the music does not suggest anything, so it's kinda unexpected.
01:07:844 (5) - new combo? and remove combo from next note

I don't like the fact you don't map the vocals quite a few times >_> (e.g. 00:26:025 (5) - skips some of the vocals, 00:28:934 (4) - same thing, etc.) but whatever.

[L18's Heart]

00:14:025 (3,1) - with this stacking, and this approach rate, it looks as if it's 1/2 tick apart imo. you could add a note in between, or unstack it.
01:23:480 (3,4) - wow, this just sounds really awkward to me some reason http://puu.sh/VJab idk but i just like the sound of that better.

So the beginning is definitely not a normal diff... you really should remap 00:12:934 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - so that it's easier. it just doesn't make sense how easy the kiai time is compared to that

[Yasora's Heart]

00:18:571 (1,2) - imo it would be easier for the beginner to read, and a good way to get back into the song from the long spinner by turning this hitcircle and slider into one repeat slider.
00:21:844 - add note
00:22:571 (2,1) - i would turn these two notes into a slider, for the beginner's sake of being able to read it more easily... but i guess it's up to you (taking the suggestion will obviously require remapping)
00:26:753 - add note
00:47:480 - add note with new combo and remove combo from next note
00:56:207 - add note

I would really add those notes i mentioned. It would flow better as well as make the patterns easier to read imo. And saying it's too hard is a horrible excuse. I honestly see no reason to leave those places blank. You should really take them into consideration

Hope this helps :3

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2012-08-16T03:24:02+00:00

winber1 wrote:
[L18's Heart]
00:14:025 (3,1) - with this stacking, and this approach rate, it looks as if it's 1/2 tick apart imo. you could add a note in between, or unstack it. because i remap so~
01:23:480 (3,4) - wow, this just sounds really awkward to me some reason http://puu.sh/VJab idk but i just like the sound of that better. k~
So the beginning is definitely not a normal diff... you really should remap 00:12:934 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - so that it's easier. it just doesn't make sense how easy the kiai time is compared to that k, in fact ... i have remaped this diff 2 times lol!

bo s s ~

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Last edited by Loneight 2012-08-20T17:56:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

bossandy

osu! Alumni

1,665 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

bossandy 2012-08-16T15:05:36+00:00

Almost fix!!! thanks everyone!!!!

AdRon Zh3Ro

902 posts

Joined August 2009

AdRon Zh3Ro 2012-08-17T04:58:36+00:00

I'm tired so i'll just say this for now:

http://puu.sh/WerJ

Seems better then the current.

Last edited by AdRon Zh3Ro 2012-08-17T17:39:29+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2012-08-17T10:23:57+00:00

winber1 wrote:
It looks long, but it's just a lot of suggestions :3

[BakaCI's]
00:01:298 (2) - same as Boss's Heart. Add finish and make volume 50% for only the beginning of the slider? whistle
00:07:116 (1,2,3) - I would much rather use a repeat slider to be honest. It also makes it easier to read. moved a bit. don't want slider, sorry
00:10:025 (1) - ummm... make it so that the slider "faces" or "points" to combo 5? http://puu.sh/VGLu (adjust the later sliders as well) my pattern is blanket slider and stack. i keep it, sorry
00:12:207 (1) - I would rather you have this note have a lower SV than 1. imo, it looks better, it just makes more sense to do it like that. you could use 0.68x, 0.76x, 0.84x, 0.92x, 1.00x actually your SV change is too small. no need to change it because players won't notice it, imo. sorry
00:15:844 (1,2,3) - this is awkward. you're much better off just following the melody. playing notes inbetween the melody like this just doesn't make sense imo. it's fine, i tested it with some friends and it sounds good
00:18:934 (1,2,3) - make into a more equilateral triangle? whoops~
00:21:298 (5) - up 2 grids and left 1 grid? makes the triangle more symmetric and looks better imo. not really, i think. sorry
00:22:389 (2) - if you are going to use a repeat slider like combo 1, you should delete this note and rearrange spacing http://puu.sh/VIT3 ~
00:44:025 - continue the flow, add a note here. the break does not make sense ~
00:51:480 (3,4) - pointless jump imo. If this were a jumpy map, I wouldn't care, but you've been using almost perfect spacing so far and the music does not suggest anything, so it's kinda unexpected.
01:07:844 (5) - new combo? and remove combo from next note
I don't like the fact you don't map the vocals quite a few times >_> (e.g. 00:26:025 (5) - skips some of the vocals, 00:28:934 (4) - same thing, etc.) but whatever. vocals? nah, i think it fits with vocals and music good enough

Hope this helps :3

hai-hai

osu file format v9

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24,128,81116,1,0
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492,208,82389,1,8
480,284,82571,1,0
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276,120,85298,2,0,B|308:68,4,38.5
256,192,85844,12,0,88207

thank you

AdRon Zh3Ro

902 posts

Joined August 2009

AdRon Zh3Ro 2012-08-17T17:57:21+00:00

[Overall]
If you do use my new timing, resnap all Inherited points aswell.

[Boss's]
00:54:205 (2) - Keep everything perfectly clear in the editor, i alredy mentioned this in other posts. It may not affect much in gameplay, but it DOES affect in editor mode, it's annoying and can be avoided easily. http://puu.sh/Weth

[CI's]
00:10:753 (1,1,1,1) These new combos hardly make any sense. Remove all the 3 following new combos.
00:30:480 (2) Non-sense, remove.
00:53:662 (1,2) Non-sense repeaters that doesn't follow anything in the actual song.
00:55:116 http://puu.sh/WeAp This combo seems way too clustered. You can make it more clear, since it does have a sping right after.

Almost all the triplets don't fit with the song in the way you mapped them.

[L18's]
00:14:389 (1) You can remove this new-combo.

[Yasora]
Extending almost all combos would looks better. New combo way too repeteadly seems kinda awful.

Alltur

530 posts

Joined July 2012

Alltur 2012-08-17T18:13:19+00:00

From the queue..

Sorry for the delay XP..
My modding is not good.. sorry

Yeah! FictionJunction!
Love the song and the map. Definitely going to play this when ranked! XD

[General]
Clear.

[Yasora's heart - easy?]
Clear.

[L18's heart - normal?]
00:15:298 (2,3,4) - Make them as curved slider since the following combo has same rhythmic pattern, similar to this? Link

[BakaCi's - hard?]
~~00:18:934 (1,2,3) - nazi. better triangle if possible?~~
01:04:571 (3) - make the slider look like (1) if possible?
01:19:480 (3,1,2) - nazi. stack better?

[Boss's heart - insane?]
I can't mod insane diff.. sorry T__T;
00:02:571 - add note here? [even though Japanese here saying bokurawa, the vocal is more bokura-wa]
00:49:298 (1,3) - slider-end of slider 1 perfectly fit into the track of slider 3?

Good luck with mapping and ranking

Double-Starred!

BCI

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

BCI 2012-08-17T22:05:04+00:00

winber1 wrote:
It looks long, but it's just a lot of suggestions :3
[BakaCI's]
00:51:480 (3,4) - pointless jump imo. If this were a jumpy map, I wouldn't care, but you've been using almost perfect spacing so far and the music does not suggest anything, so it's kinda unexpected. perfect spacing - -Bakari-'s style, also i don't remap my part and i like this jump and tested it (i have 49 lvl) plays good.
01:07:844 (5) - new combo? and remove combo from next note lol no

Akashi_S wrote:
[BakaCi's - hard?] in creator's words boss say about GDs so not needed to rename
01:04:571 (3) - make the slider look like (1) if possible? current looks good
01:19:480 (3,1,2) - nazi. stack better? do my best, if someone gives me a code i'll fix that

AdRon Zh3Ro wrote:
[CI's]
00:10:753 (1,1,1,1) These new combos hardly make any sense. Remove all the 3 following new combos. make sense because change slider speed
00:53:662 (1,2) Non-sense repeaters that doesn't follow anything in the actual song. i like the current way ><
00:55:116 http://puu.sh/WeAp This combo seems way too clustered. You can make it more clear, since it does have a sping right after. this isn' clustered and no problems in playing, so no change

sorry to all I have atm ill humor and bag feeling D:

JudgeTheDude

595 posts

Joined September 2011

JudgeTheDude 2012-08-17T23:55:40+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue

[Yasora]
00:20:753 (2) - I would have started it at 00:20:571
00:38:753 (1,2) - 2 is not aligned with 1's center 1(y:276), 2(y:280)
00:59:480 (1) - Center point isn't in the middle of the Slider
01:12:571 (1) - Same here
01:24:934 (4) - Why a curved Slider ?

[L18]
No probs

[Bakari/Cherry]
00:14:025 (5,1) - Little overlap

[Boss]
I didn't mod it 'cause I can't mod insane, sorry

That's all.
Good luck ^^

Megurine Luka

2,580 posts

Joined November 2010

Megurine Luka 2012-08-18T02:44:13+00:00

之前没注意comboburst是bug的，今天看你图的时候发现了然后稍微改了下，可能需要你重新full submit了不好意思=v=

文件名不需要变嗯o.o

bossandy

osu! Alumni

1,665 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

bossandy 2012-08-18T09:12:09+00:00

Thanks everyone , Fixed almost of them!!!!

Phish_old

154 posts

Joined January 2011

Phish_old 2012-08-18T11:25:33+00:00

you requested a mod in my modding queue :3
oh and btw, i'm rather new in modding, like i said in the queue, and if you read my rules you know that i want a reply on my mod where you say what changed and what did not. this really helps me to improve my modding and i can see if everything was understandable (my english is poor also ;_;)
sooo...
overally i found no real issues anyways, so these are mostly suggestions!

General
> Folder is ok, pic has perfect sizes, .mp3 192 bit, silenced sliderslide hitsounds have 0kb ... everything fine ;_;
> the yellow combocolours are very similar, i didn't even notice they where 2 different at first. maybe find another colour or put a little bit more red to the darker yellow, it would turn orange then... just a suggestion

[Yasora's Heart]
00:29:668 (3,1) - for the whole following part you always nc'd this slider, but i think they belong together, would fit better to the vocals..
00:32:940 (1) - clap at the sliderstart? you did a clap on 00:30:031 (1) - also, and it would sound great with a little bit more claps (i like the custom hitsounds btw)
00:35:850 (1) - ^
00:38:759 (1) - ^
00:44:577 (1) - ^
00:56:213 - add note?
01:24:213 (2,3,4) - in my opinion this totally does not harmonize with the vocals, and you mapped everything ON-vocals in this diff. so why dont you just mirror 01:22:759 (1) - this slider (copy paste and turn 180°) and put him on 01:24:031 - this location. (you have to be honest, this fits better to the vocals

)
nice diff, i like how you handicraftet those sliders together (example: 00:07:122 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is great fun to play!)

[L18's Heart]
> actually i think this diff needs a higher approach rate! 00:59:486 (1,2,3,4) - this part is irritating with such a low AR, i suggest AR+1/+2
00:07:486 - i don't understand this inherting sections here, i think they don't belong to your diff? im right?

00:33:304 (1) - clap on the reverse arrow?
00:34:759 (2) - ^
00:37:668 (3) - ^
found nothing really, nice diff!

[BakaCI's Heart]
00:55:122 (1,3) - please don't do this. imagine you would like to rank this with hidden ;_; the sliderburst totally covers (3) you should also test your map always with the normal skin to see overlappings / covered hitobjects
01:00:213 (2) - add clap on the sliderend?
this diff is sooo keeewl srsly, i like the playflow and style, so fun to play :3 totally worth a star ~*

[Boss' Heart]
00:07:122 (2) - 1tinygrid down for the sake of spacing
00:46:213 (1,5) - this circles hitburst covers the other one completely, and when (1) appears, you can't see (5) under him, cause they are too far away from each other in timeline, so they dont stack. but if you go F4 Song Setup -> Advanced and put Stack Leniency to 10, this 2 Circles would stack and (1) would appear "on top" of (5). this little change makes a lot hidden players life easier

01:22:031 (3,4,5,6,1) - ..wtf o,o hard to read
01:24:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - could you find a better shape for this stream? looks messy

also great diff!

i hope the mod was helpful :3 good luck with rank!

BCI

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

BCI 2012-08-18T11:46:03+00:00

http://puu.sh/Wtgx

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Yasora 2012-08-18T14:28:18+00:00

SPOILER

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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Parallel Hearts (TV Size)
Artist:FictionJunction
Creator:bossandy
Version:Yasora's Heart
Source:Pandora Hearts
Tags:-Bakari- Black_Cherry_Ita BCI Collab Collaboration opening l1106188 Yasora

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Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2012-08-20T09:43:32+00:00

Hi boss

[General]
* Your diff name makes players are hard to tell which is hard or normal diff. Consider to change your diff name into a difficulty name (e.g. "L18's Normal", "Insane")

[Skinning]
* You need an approachcircle.png for completing set of hitbursts

[L18's Heart]
* AR +1? Your current approach rate are bit slow

00:47:850 (1,2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slow to read)

[BakaCI's Heart]
00:10:031 (1,1,1,1) - Is this combo necessary? If necessary, tell me why
00:51:486 (3,4) - These jump are pretty not fit to the song, change the pattern?
01:04:577 (3) - Move 4th sliderpoint to 1 grid up for fix the blanket combo (nazi)
01:15:486 (1,2) - These jump are pretty not fit to the song, change the pattern?

[Boss' Heart]
00:30:031 (6) - New combo for jump pattern?

Best luck of you!

BCI

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

BCI 2012-08-20T10:13:18+00:00

Leorda wrote:
[BakaCI's Heart]
00:10:031 (1,1,1,1) - Is this combo necessary? If necessary, tell me why change slider speeds
00:51:486 (3,4) - These jump are pretty not fit to the song, change the pattern? my style - random jumps, sorry D%
01:04:577 (3) - Move 4th sliderpoint to 1 grid up for fix the blanket combo (nazi) yeap
01:15:486 (1,2) - These jump are pretty not fit to the song, change the pattern? lol no again, same reason ><

http://puu.sh/X49v

bossandy

osu! Alumni

1,665 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

bossandy 2012-08-20T13:12:02+00:00

Dick wrote:
you requested a mod in my modding queue :3
oh and btw, i'm rather new in modding, like i said in the queue, and if you read my rules you know that i want a reply on my mod where you say what changed and what did not. this really helps me to improve my modding and i can see if everything was understandable (my english is poor also ;_;)
sooo...
overally i found no real issues anyways, so these are mostly suggestions!

General
> Folder is ok, pic has perfect sizes, .mp3 192 bit, silenced sliderslide hitsounds have 0kb ... everything fine ;_; ^_^
> the yellow combocolours are very similar, i didn't even notice they where 2 different at first. maybe find another colour or put a little bit more red to the darker yellow, it would turn orange then... just a suggestion Nice , I didn't notice that , I change it a bit :3

[Boss' Heart]
00:07:122 (2) - 1tinygrid down for the sake of spacing sure :3
00:46:213 (1,5) - this circles hitburst covers the other one completely, and when (1) appears, you can't see (5) under him, cause they are too far away from each other in timeline, so they dont stack. but if you go F4 Song Setup -> Advanced and put Stack Leniency to 10, this 2 Circles would stack and (1) would appear "on top" of (5). this little change makes a lot hidden players life easier I think it's fine because I can see them :3
01:22:031 (3,4,5,6,1) - ..wtf o,o hard to read My Insane always easier than most insane difficulties , I want make something like Insane , so .... keep them now , sorry I don't want to change this
01:24:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - could you find a better shape for this stream? looks messy Okay , I make a better stream now xD
also great diff! thanks~

i hope the mod was helpful :3 good luck with rank! It was helpful

Thanks for mod~

Leorda wrote:
Hi boss Hi Leo

[General]
* Your diff name makes players are hard to tell which is hard or normal diff. Consider to change your diff name into a difficulty name (e.g. "L18's Normal", "Insane") Okay~

[Skinning]
* You need an approachcircle.png for completing set of hitbursts I will ask Luka to make it if she can make QQ

[Boss' Heart]
00:30:031 (6) - New combo for jump pattern? I want keep my Combo pattern , and I think it's fine because the change is not very big ^^

Best luck of you! Thanks Leo~

Licnect

Elite Mapper

367 posts

Joined May 2010

Licnect 2012-08-20T13:54:46+00:00

玩過後的感想建議

L11的難度從 01:16:940 - 01:19:486 節奏斷掉
用Slidertick用他節奏不要斷
01:25:668 這裡加Note and+finish spin延後比較好

Yasora的難度 00:04:213 這slider可以延到00:05:304 比較順
01:25:668 這裡加Note and+finish spin延後比較好

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Yasora 2012-08-20T15:45:54+00:00

~~english please?~~

ok translated by below me ~

Last edited by Yasora 2012-08-20T18:21:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2012-08-20T18:06:21+00:00

老大拿去...

SPOILER

osu file format v9

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 58934
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
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Artist:FictionJunction
Creator:bossandy
Version:L18's Normal
Source:Pandora Hearts
Tags:-Bakari- Black_Cherry_Ita BCI Collab Collaboration opening l1106188 Yasora

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.3
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suzutsukikanade

653 posts

Joined July 2011

suzutsukikanade 2012-08-21T02:40:57+00:00

Sorry for late!

Forum-PM request!

[General]

Missing Skin Files: approachcircle.png

[Yasora's Easy]

00:12:577: Nothing important but, add a note here instead of finish? Listening to the music carefully you can hear a sound here.
Just a suggestion here, Like this diff.

[L18's Normal]

00:04:940 (1): Remove whistle?
00:02:395 (3): ^
00:03:850 (2): ^
00:05:668 (1): ^ in slider start
00:09:668 (3): Remove whistle
00:12:940 (1): Whistle in repeat
00:16:031 (3): Whistle in slider start

[BakaCI's Hard]

00:02:759 (4): Whistle in start?
00:53:696 (1,2): Can't hear anything in music like this, try this rhythm?

SPOILER

Insane is amazing nothing to point

Map looks good nothing important to point, but suggest fix General.

Good Luck in ranking!

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

Joined December 2010

Chewin 2012-08-21T21:12:33+00:00

Hi bossandy, mod request from my modding queue.

[General]
You should add the approachcircle.png to complete the hitcircle skin set
Why to use negative offset? It's ok but 1304 would be better

[Yasora's Easy]
00:07:122 (1,2) - I would make the slider 00:07:122 (1) more curved to improve the blanket with 00:08:213 (2), it is ugly to me in playmode. You could use this code:

SPOILER

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308,284,8213,1,0

00:08:577 (1) - This slider is a bit overlapped with 00:07:122 (1) and it breaks the flow. To avoid the overlap with the previous (1) slider and to improve the blanket with it use this code:

SPOILER

284,200,8577,6,0,B|256:140|288:80|360:40|416:96,1,216,2|0
480,104,9668,1,0

Pretty nice

[L18's Normal]
01:22:759 (1) - I don't like how this rhythm follows the music. What about to use a rhythm like this instead?

Nice

[BakaCI's Hard]
I would increase the SV till 1.60/1.70
00:55:668 (2,3,4,1) - This pattern is enough confusing to play :\
00:58:031 (1) - Reduce this spinner by 1/1 and add a circle on 00:59:486 and 00:59:668. This rhythm fits much better the music and since this is the hard of your mapset every player would think rhythm is so:

01:18:031 (4) - CTRL + R flows better imho ;3

[Insane]
00:15:668 (1,2) - I would CTRL + R the slider 00:15:668 (1) to create a jump and overlapping the 00:16:213 (2) with 00:15:486 (5) to keep a symmetry and to make an other jump with 00:16:395 (3): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/409620
00:18:395 I would add a circle here, still overlapping it with 00:16:213 (2)
I love the flow of this map ♥

That's all, good luck with your rank :3

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Yasora 2012-08-22T01:34:31+00:00

thanks all 'w'
http://puu.sh/XAYJ

Sekai

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

Sekai 2012-08-22T09:29:05+00:00

Bossandy o.o why you wont add a video to this?

bossandy

osu! Alumni

1,665 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

bossandy 2012-08-22T10:36:38+00:00

-Sekai- wrote:
Bossandy o.o why you wont add a video to this?

I really don't like to add video >_<

but if someone give me video and give some good reason
I may add it then

bossandy

osu! Alumni

1,665 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

bossandy 2012-08-22T12:31:11+00:00

suzutsukikanade wrote:
Sorry for late!

Forum-PM request!

[General]

Missing Skin Files: approachcircle.png

Insane is amazing nothing to point Ya! \:D/

Map looks good nothing important to point, but suggest fix General.

Good Luck in ranking! Thanks for mod ~

Chewin wrote:
Hi bossandy, mod request from my modding queue.

[General]
You should add the approachcircle.png to complete the hitcircle skin set
Why to use negative offset? It's ok but 1304 would be better Objects before first red timing point is not good , and I think it's fine

[Insane]
00:15:668 (1,2) - I would CTRL + R the slider 00:15:668 (1) to create a jump and overlapping the 00:16:213 (2) with 00:15:486 (5) to keep a symmetry and to make an other jump with 00:16:395 (3): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/409620 Fix this Nice suggestion
00:18:395 I would add a circle here, still overlapping it with 00:16:213 (2) I don't want , sorry>_<
I love the flow of this map ♥ Thanks~

That's all, good luck with your rank :3 \:D/

suzutsukikanade

653 posts

Joined July 2011

suzutsukikanade 2012-08-22T23:58:18+00:00

Oh forgot to mention this in my mod

I have a video with medium quality, if you want to use in your map...go ahead
http://puu.sh/XSxS

ignore it...

Beren

962 posts

Joined September 2009

Beren 2012-08-23T17:58:10+00:00

/

[Yasora's Easy]
00:02:759 (2) - add finish

[L18's Normal]
N用变速萌大奶o.o? 作为normal来说太难了
00:02:753 (1) - 删whistle加finish
00:44:934 (1) - 为什么中间音量5%结尾又40%了
00:56:571 (1) - ^

[BakaCI's Hard]
remove useless green line
00:01:304 (2) - remove whistle add finish
00:04:213 (1) - add finish
00:10:031 (1) - ^
00:10:759 (1) - ^
00:11:486 (1) - ^
00:12:213 (1) - ^
00:15:304 (3) - end at 00:15:486
00:15:850 (1) - move to 00:15:668
00:16:213 (2) - add note
00:16:395 (2) - move to 00:16:213
00:16:577 (3) - move to 00:16:395
00:16:940 (4) - add note
00:18:031 (4) - remove note
00:18:213 (5) - add nc
00:26:031 (5) - cut down one turn end at 00:26:577
00:30:486 (2) - remove note

[Insane]
00:02:759 (4) - 开头finish
00:04:213 (1) - ^
00:10:031 (1,3) - ^
00:12:213 (1,2,3,4) - 尝试用加速的slider?
00:12:759 (5) - 如果改了上面那条就顺便删了这个note
00:17:304 (1) - 前面相同节奏的地方都跳了这里没跳感觉怪怪的o.o
00:19:577 (7) - 加note 这里和后面是连起来的
00:23:122 (1) - 这个反向跳手感不是很好
00:24:577 (7) - 改成slider 结束在红线
00:26:940 (8) - 在前面加note 或者删掉这个note
01:11:668 (2) - 尝试跳?

good luck

Tony

1,510 posts

Joined July 2010

Tony 2012-08-24T05:58:02+00:00

Hi. I'm here because of your M4M queue :3

[General]
Different offset in L18's Normal. (it's -6ms from the rest of the diffs)
L18's Normal has different combo colors from the rest of the diffs. Fix this!

[Yasora's Easy]
00:08:577 (1) - 1 grid left, and 1 grid up. Looks better this way~
00:11:486 (2) - 1 grid left. same reason

00:46:213 (3) - maybe try this instead http://puu.sh/Y5Hj . The current rhythm sounds kinda dull.

[L18's Normal]
AR is way too high. Try reducing it by -1 or -2
00:16:753 (4) - maybe try something like this. http://puu.sh/YhwK
00:23:116 (1) - move this slider a bit down, to be in the middle of the slider (3) and (4) like here http://puu.sh/YhxG
00:53:116 (6) - really ugly positioning. maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/Yhzb
00:56:025 (5) - maybe try to curve this, like (4)

[BakaCI's Normal]
5 Different SV's. I think that's unrankable~
01:18:395 (1) - 1 grid right would look better

[Insane]
HP+1
01:18:031 (3) - rotate this 9 degrees clockwise. It would look better http://puu.sh/YhHr

nothing else to point out. really nice song and mapset~ good luck moe moe boss ♥

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2012-08-24T10:59:41+00:00

SV changes here fits with vocals. it's fine, imo

nazi fixes

osu file format v9

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Artist:FictionJunction
Creator:bossandy
Version:BakaCI's Hard
Source:Pandora Hearts
Tags:-Bakari- Black_Cherry_Ita BCI Collab Collaboration opening l1106188 Yasora

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Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2012-08-25T02:01:12+00:00

I think i am late , there ~

SPOILER

osu file format v9

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Creator:bossandy
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Tags:-Bakari- Black_Cherry_Ita BCI Collab Collaboration opening l1106188 Yasora

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grumd

1,790 posts

Joined October 2010

grumd 2012-08-26T12:27:25+00:00

— Overall
You have to add "approachcircle.png" to your set.
Timing is different in Normal, kiai and red lines are 6ms off. Anyway, check what AIBat says, there is inconsistency in almost everything, combos, kiai, timing...
Also I suggest you to change sliderball's rotating speed. I mean, make every frame rotating for a halfly decreased angle. Current one is a bit plending and looks like a rolling brain lolol

Insane

— Mapping

00:32:577 (1,2,3,4) - Is this increasing spacing intended?
00:49:304 (1) - This one is too close to the next slider head. Stacking it with slider body and making a triangle at once would make a very good pattern.
00:56:577 (1,2,3,4) - It could be nice to change the shapes so they will fit each other. Here's the code for the first slider, try it if you like the shape:
SPOILER
```
408,96,56577,6,0,B|441:96|464:118|464:152,1,89,0|0
```

Hard

— Mapping

00:22:577 (2) - This was the place where I misread. I thought that it is 1/2 because you used jumps right before it, at 00:21:122 (4,5,1) -. Get rid of that jumps because their spacing is almost like here, it is pretty confusing.
00:52:759 (2) - Pretty bad encircling. It must be closer to the previous slider.
00:55:668 (2) - Bad encircling as well. (later you have much problems with it so just recheck all your map and try to make encirclings better)
01:25:668 - Delete one repeat and add a note here, will be played better.

Normal

— Overall
This is the only diff which uses tick rate 2. Change it to 1 for consistency.

Easy

— Overall
This diff is technically fine, but consider reworking your encirclings/blankets. They are very unaccurate here, looks bad.

Last edited by grumd 2012-08-26T17:20:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

BCI

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

BCI 2012-08-26T15:04:15+00:00

бака-бака грумд, и я, и бакари знаем русский :3
http://puu.sh/Z0zg i guess all fixed

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Yasora 2012-08-26T15:12:06+00:00

SPOILER

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Artist:FictionJunction
Creator:bossandy
Version:Yasora's Easy
Source:Pandora Hearts
Tags:-Bakari- Black_Cherry_Ita BCI Collab Collaboration opening l1106188 Yasora

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grumd

1,790 posts

Joined October 2010

grumd 2012-08-26T15:19:13+00:00

@Yasora: use BBCode <code></code> (change <> to []) when sharing .osu file.

@BCI: я не смотрел, кто гостевой маппер

Strawberry

osu! Alumni

1,536 posts

Joined October 2010

Strawberry 2012-09-02T00:33:46+00:00

[Yasora]
00:11:486 (2) - i feel like there should be added a repeat to follow the lyric and BGM better.
00:12:940 - so then you can put a finish on the tail of the (2) if you followed above, and move the spinner 1/2 after
00:47:849 (1) - make me feel a bit uncomfortable, idk. maybe you can try to extend the slider 1/2 tick, sounds better. as for hitsound, i suggest that adding a custom slidertick(same as clap) hitsound on 00:48:213 - and remove the clap which on the end of slider.
00:50:759 (3) - same as above.
00:53:668 (1,3) - bend them to make a little arc?

[L18]
00:05:668 (1) - add a whistle on the tail?
00:12:940 (1,1) - make them more symmetrical
00:14:395 - ~00:19:304 - the soft finish in 80% volume is really noisy, try decreasing them to 60% (like Easy's setting？
00:24:031 (2) - idk why you silence the tail, however there still have drum from bgm so it seems odd now
00:44:940 (1) - i feel this spinner is out of bgm, maybe you can try to shorten it to make the end on 00:46:395 -
00:47:122 - if you followed above, add something here :>
00:50:759 - finish? idk
01:05:304 (1) - remove the whistle on the repeat, now sounds excess
01:06:759 (2) - also remove the whistle on the head if you changed above :3
01:11:122 (1,2) - same as above
01:16:940 (1,2) - ^^^
01:25:304 - i think the clap from soft-custom 1 is more fit this beat

[Bakabakari and Cherry~]
00:14:395 - ~00:16:940 - and 00:20:213 - ~00:22:759 - same as normal, i feel finishs in 60%~70 is enough..anyway

very clear, pretty diff, you god

[boss my idol]
00:05:668 (3) - same as Normal
00:07:122 (1) - add a whistle on the repeat?
00:26:577 (7) - change to a 1/2 slider? you can just put it vertical...however i feel there 00:26:759 - have a bass from bgm so you know..strange..
01:01:304 (3,4,5,6) - depends on you however it's better imo--> http://puu.sh/119eA
01:19:031 - add a boss

well done

my boss saimoewwww ★

bossandy

osu! Alumni

1,665 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

bossandy 2012-09-02T13:17:40+00:00

Strawberry wrote:
[boss my idol]
00:05:668 (3) - same as Normal It's fine imo~
00:07:122 (1) - add a whistle on the repeat? Same~
00:26:577 (7) - change to a 1/2 slider? you can just put it vertical...however i feel there 00:26:759 - have a bass from bgm so you know..strange.. Changed!! , but use my own way :33
01:01:304 (3,4,5,6) - depends on you however it's better imo--> http://puu.sh/119eA okok!! sounds greats!!
01:19:031 - add a boss Added a Strawberry:3

well done Handsome Berry

my boss saimoewwww ★ I love you :3

Thanks~

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Yasora 2012-09-02T14:31:03+00:00

haue~ thanks

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Tags:-Bakari- Black_Cherry_Ita BCI Collab Collaboration opening l1106188 Yasora

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Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2012-09-03T03:29:56+00:00

Fix mostly~
thank you for modding ~

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BL-Daisuki

33 posts

Joined December 2011

BL-Daisuki 2012-09-06T02:30:18+00:00

Hi! You requested for mod in my queue...but really can't find nothing wrong here...
You're a great mapper

Here a star~

Good Luck in ranking

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2012-09-07T18:21:54+00:00

Hi, sorry for the delay~

Yasora's Easy

00:18:577 (1) - Symmetry

L18's normal

00:00:940 (1) - Delete Whistle
00:23:122 (1) - Sliding up will be better
00:32:213 (4) - ^
00:59:486 (1) - Add Finish

BakaCI's Hard

00:09:304 (4) - Delete Whistle
00:10:031 (1,1,1,1) - Not sure about these bunch of new combos, but I prefer deleting NCs
00:21:486 (1) - 1 Grid right

Insane

00:56:577 (5) - New combo

Good Luck~

Star because this is one of the songs I know! (from osu)

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,795 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2012-09-13T16:42:02+00:00

Hey!

[Yasora's Easy]

00:19:668 (2) - What do you think about creating a down-sided curve on this slider and putting it like I did here? Imho,by doing that the flow here will get better.
SPOILER
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I fixed the position of the following hitobjects too
00:18:577 (2) - Since this nte follows a spinner,I suggest you to add a new combo,because of a bug it isn't set,if you see
00:27:122 (3) - What do you think on using the whistle at the beginning of the slider instead of the end? Even if it isn't really consistent,I think as now it fits better with the singer's pitch getting higher here.
00:41:668 (1) - Using a clap in a whistle-based pattern does actually sound strange... remove it?
01:05:304 - Here I would use this kind of rhythm instead of the 1/1 slider here:

Other than varying the rhythm in a different way,this fits pretty good here!
01:16:940 - Same as above
Good map,even though I'd say this needs a bit of work rhythm-wise:you have repeated the same kind of rhythm in nearly all the parts of the map,and this begins to get a bit boring.

[L18's Normal]

00:24:577 - Hmm...What about adding a note here to end properly the phrase?
00:36:213 (1) - Add a whistle here? It fits pretty good :3
01:03:850 (3) - I have to say,this looks kind of unaesthetic... What do you think instead of this setting?
SPOILER
```
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```

[BakaCI's Hard]

00:15:850 (1) - Well,the whistle at the beginning here doesn't fit really good... I suggest you to instead delete it
00:44:940 (3) - CTRL+R here? This will flow better because of the more appealing "climbing" and it will create too a nice little jump with 00:45:486 (4) -,that flows good too!
01:04:577 (3,1) - The transiction here with this 2 sliders will create a pretty strange press and hold rhythm,that doesen't fit that good here. My suggestion? Move 01:06:213 (4) - at 01:05:122 - and move the rest of the sliders 1/2 later.
01:18:031 (4) - Again,CTRL+R here?
This impressed me. Pretty good work!

[Insane]

00:03:850 (5) - Move this at x:256 y:376? It's really a little thing,but I think this down-sided arc/triangle-shaped pattern fits better than the actual setting.
00:26:759 (7,1) - Well,I didn't expect this jump,simply because the song didn't ask to. I would instead do a jump with 00:26:940 (1,2) -,that imho fits better actually. Bit this could be only me,fix just if you want :3
00:49:849 (3) - CTRL+R? Just like in the Hard diff,I find this "climbing" to be more appealing by doing this.
00:56:577 (5) - Add a new combo here? It fits pretty good,and it delineates a new pattern too!
Awesome <3

Well,that's all. Remember to take these just as a bunch of suggestions,since the map as now is really good!

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Yasora 2012-09-14T06:46:41+00:00

~

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Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2012-09-20T12:25:03+00:00

(戳

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bossandy

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Topic Starter

bossandy 2012-10-04T12:48:51+00:00

Everythings has been updates! Thanks for mods!!

Bass

1,846 posts

Joined January 2009

Bass 2012-10-06T17:21:40+00:00

[General]

Please use slider tick 2 on all difficulties for consistency.

[Yasora's Easy]

Fine.

[Normal]

That velocity kinda seems too fast for me. That's all

[BakaCI's Hard]

00:55:122 (1,2,3,4,1) - yeah this pattern looks ugly and that jump is unintuitive, try making something more creative.

This difficulty is more like Hard+ and I didn't except in kiai I would find any of 1/4s. Sometimes it feels like it's not hard.

[Insane]

01:22:031 (3,4,5,6,1) - I really got confused when playing it, plays kinda awkward but that might be just me

That's all. Map got trough many mods I think it's rather ready for ranking. Good luck!

BCI

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

BCI 2012-10-07T15:43:58+00:00

Bass wrote:
[BakaCI's Hard]
00:55:122 (1,2,3,4,1) - yeah this pattern looks ugly and that jump is unintuitive, try making something more creative. okay.jpg i do my best
This difficulty is more like Hard+ and I didn't except in kiai I would find any of 1/4s. Sometimes it feels like it's not hard. sorry about that, me try to do a better one next time ;w;

thank you nyasha~ >w< http://puu.sh/1ckBz

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Fumika 2012-10-07T15:58:59+00:00

~~I got -165~~

BPM : 165
offset : 150 , 12925

riffy

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

riffy 2013-05-27T09:20:00+00:00

If you still care about this map, update creator's word. Because Black_Cherry_Ita has changed her username to BCI

popner

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Joined March 2011

popner 2014-08-20T09:17:40+00:00

Hello, old request.

[Yasora's Easy]
00:28:939 (3,4) - use a blanket here? 00:28:212 (2,3) - is already a blanket.
00:41:667 (3) - pay attention on clap uses. Single clap like this isn't creating feeling of tempo, so use them properly or get rid of all of them.

[L18's Normal]
00:11:485 (2) - volume from 60 -> 65 -> 70 is better than 60 -> 70 here. The current is too distinct.
00:19:667 (4) - where is the claps?
00:22:576 (4) - clap on end?
00:24:030 (2) - clap on end? Check all claps like these.
01:04:576 (4) - change to a repeat slider, like 01:03:121 (2) - ? The rhythm will be consistent.

[BakaCI's Hard]
00:05:667 (3) - the shape is really weird. You should use the approach circle of previous slider to help you draw the slider.

SPOILER

00:08:576 (4,5) - (3) and (5) are too close. To avoid this, you can rotate (3,4) a little (slider head as the center of rotation), and the stack won't be destroyed.
00:53:667 (1,2) - the rhythm plays weird. You'd better to follow the original beats.
01:00:212 (2) - on slider end, whistle -> clap.
01:19:485 (3,1,2) - please stack the slider ends properly.

[Insane]
AR+0.5? for those jumps and complex patterns.
00:01:303 (2) - you'd better to use the shape of 00:02:758 (4) - here. That will be more consistent.
00:39:121 (3) - somewhere like this flows better:

SPOILER

00:42:758 (3,5) - not stack properly
00:44:939 (1) - a wavy slider seems better and arresting here, like:

SPOILER

00:54:758 (3) - comparing with 00:56:576 (1,2,3,4) - the slider is too much curved.
01:08:212 (1) - this shape can be improved:

SPOILER

01:21:303 (1,2) - same as 00:54:758 (3). They are too much bent and not perform well as blankets.

bossandy

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Topic Starter

bossandy 2014-09-23T13:03:00+00:00

popner wrote:
Hello, old request.

[Insane]
AR+0.5? for those jumps and complex patterns. ok
00:01:303 (2) - you'd better to use the shape of 00:02:758 (4) - here. That will be more consistent. You are right!
00:39:121 (3) - somewhere like this flows better: Of course~
SPOILER
00:42:758 (3,5) - not stack properly Better now
00:44:939 (1) - a wavy slider seems better and arresting here, like: Ok , I made it!
SPOILER
00:54:758 (3) - comparing with 00:56:576 (1,2,3,4) - the slider is too much curved. Changed the slider~
01:08:212 (1) - this shape can be improved: It's not so waved imo too , Changed!
SPOILER
01:21:303 (1,2) - same as 00:54:758 (3). They are too much bent and not perform well as blankets. ok

Thanks for modding , I didn't notice your mod for a long time... Sorry

Uploaded! Waiting for other diffs~

Edit for Easy change , Since Yasora didn't online for a long time and no coming to fix the mod , so I help her to change! I accept remoce the single clap there , about the blanket , I think it's fine~

Last edited by bossandy 2014-09-26T11:41:17+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Loneight

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Loneight 2014-09-23T13:29:25+00:00

popner wrote:
Hello, old request. hi

[L18's Normal]
00:11:485 (2) - volume from 60 -> 65 -> 70 is better than 60 -> 70 here. The current is too distinct. sure
00:19:667 (4) - where is the claps? seems I should increase the volume
00:22:576 (4) - clap on end?
00:24:030 (2) - clap on end? Check all claps like these.
01:04:576 (4) - change to a repeat slider, like 01:03:121 (2) - ? The rhythm will be consistent. sure!

Thanks for modding! popner :3

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riffy

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riffy 2014-09-23T15:05:54+00:00

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Title:Parallel Hearts (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:
Artist:FictionJunction
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:bossandy
Version:BakaCI's Hard
Source:Pandora Hearts
Tags:-Bakari- Black_Cherry_Ita BCI Collab Collaboration opening l1106188 Yasora
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Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2014-10-11T13:49:29+00:00

老大我來啦

[General]

Title應該是(TV-Size) 中間要有短槓 (這個最近抓得很嚴 >_> 以前的(TV Size)現在大概都會被挑)
Tag別忘了Loneight
E/N/H的title/artist unicode都是空白的這個要手動加一下
不確定Source是Pandora Hears還是PandoraHearts ... wiki是沒有空格的但是中文wiki那邊又有空格...雖然其他rank版本都沒有空格不過都是過去式了還是要在確認一下 (不然可以直接改成パンドラハーツ然後有空格沒空格都加進tag比較保險)

[Insane]

00:14:394 - ~ 00:24:576 - 我覺得這邊就可以開始跟鼓點下clap了 (基本的24clap, 有些不是24clap的地方也有鼓點) 用whistle跟感覺太輕了不太適合
00:18:394 - 這裡感覺可以再補一顆note跟鼓點
01:15:485 (1,2,3) - 超nazi但這裡spacing沒有一致可以再調一下
01:19:485 (3,4) - 這裡調成跟01:19:121 (1,2) - 的spacing一樣吧?

[BakaCI's Hard]

00:01:303 - This point should be emphasized by a finish hitsound imo, it's loud enough, and whistle might be too short for that
00:04:212 - Add a whistle here since you added one at 00:02:758 - ? Also there's a whistle-like sound in the music
00:05:667 - ^
00:07:121 - Pretty sure you need a whistle here. If you agree with me, better to remove the whistle from 00:06:758 -, which makes the pattern here noisy.
00:15:303 (3,1,2,3) - The rhythm here is kinda messy imo, it doesn't really follow the music. Change something like the following picture might be a great idea.
00:17:849 (3) - Add finish here, you know why
00:22:212 - I'd prefer a finish than a clap here, sounds more fit-with-the-song.
00:54:758 (2) - clapclalpclpalcpalpcalp
00:55:667 (2,3) - This blanket can be improved I think, perhaps you can re-do the slider by using the new slider system (this one is the old one I think)
01:05:121 (1,2,3,4) - The rhythm here is weird, those sliderheads should be placed on the white ticks, not red ticks. That would make it sounds better, and the players can follow the rhythm much easier I think. You can simply move 01:06:212 (4) - to 01:05:121 -, and move those three sliders 1/2 forwards.
01:25:667 - Perhaps a soft-finish at the last note would be cool
We need !summon BCI

[L18's Normal]

00:06:394 - 這whistle聽起來略怪
00:33:849 - / 00:35:303 - 這兩個clap超詭異你前面類似的沒加啊
00:42:030 - 應該不用whistle了吧
01:28:212 - 這裡改成S的線 N用5%還是有聲音

[Yasora's Easy]

00:29:667 - I saw you add whistles at every first/third white ticks during this part, so I think you should add a whistle here too to keep the consistency thing works

沒什麼好說的挑挑音效nazi而已
Call me back!

bossandy

osu! Alumni

1,665 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

bossandy 2014-10-11T14:38:53+00:00

Flask wrote:
老大我來啦

[General]
Title應該是(TV-Size) 中間要有短槓 (這個最近抓得很嚴 >_> 以前的(TV Size)現在大概都會被挑)
Tag別忘了Loneight 加咧!
E/N/H的title/artist unicode都是空白的這個要手動加一下好
不確定Source是Pandora Hears還是PandoraHearts ... wiki是沒有空格的但是中文wiki那邊又有空格...雖然其他rank版本都沒有空格不過都是過去式了還是要在確認一下 (不然可以直接改成パンドラハーツ然後有空格沒空格都加進tag比較保險) 就用跟你掛號裡寫的方式一樣瞜~
[Insane]
00:14:394 - ~ 00:24:576 - 我覺得這邊就可以開始跟鼓點下clap了 (基本的24clap, 有些不是24clap的地方也有鼓點) 用whistle跟感覺太輕了不太適合ok!
00:18:394 - 這裡感覺可以再補一顆note跟鼓點 加了~
01:15:485 (1,2,3) - 超nazi但這裡spacing沒有一致可以再調一下 好的喔
01:19:485 (3,4) - 這裡調成跟01:19:121 (1,2) - 的spacing一樣吧?诶诶诶怎麼會變這樣改回來了!
[Yasora's Easy]
00:29:667 - I saw you add whistles at every first/third white ticks during this part, so I think you should add a whistle here too to keep the consistency thing works Changed for her since she is offline for a long time and no reply
沒什麼好說的挑挑音效nazi而已
Call me back!

Thanks for modding! Waiting for other mappers' reply~

Edit : Fixed all of L18's mod since he is buzy with school stuff ~

Last edited by bossandy 2014-10-12T13:17:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2014-10-12T09:50:45+00:00

Not mentioned = fixed.

Flask wrote:
[BakaCI's Hard]
00:15:303 (3,1,2,3) - The rhythm here is kinda messy imo, it doesn't really follow the music. Change something like the following picture might be a great idea. I got the idea, but I think that the pattern works just fine as it emphasizes that whistle-or-whatever sound in the red tick 00:15:303 -
00:55:667 (2,3) - This blanket can be improved I think, perhaps you can re-do the slider by using the new slider system (this one is the old one I think) I'd rather keep them this way. For some reason, they seem to flow better and look more natural here.
01:05:121 (1,2,3,4) - The rhythm here is weird, those sliderheads should be placed on the white ticks, not red ticks. That would make it sounds better, and the players can follow the rhythm much easier I think. You can simply move 01:06:212 (4) - to 01:05:121 -, and move those three sliders 1/2 forwards. agree + I've transfromed the pattern a bit. It still fits with our old styles, so I think it should be okay.

We need !summon BCI PLEASE COME BACK AND MAP MORE OF THOSE AWESOME DIFFS

Thanks a lot!

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Flask

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Flask 2014-10-17T14:59:24+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
BCI PLEASE COME BACK AND MAP MORE OF THOSE AWESOME DIFFS

PLEASE

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-18T05:52:16+00:00

I've been trying to get to really old bubbles but you're mapping a song I actually like so uhhh

Insane:
00:59:849 (3,4,5) - This doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Why is (4) so close to (3), and why does it not flow to (5)?

Hard:
00:10:758 (1,1,1) - REmove NC
00:51:667 (4) - WOAH HELLO STYLE CHANGE

The style is a little bit inconsistent

Easy:
00:18:576 (1) - TECHNICALLY this is unrankable but I can always ask a QAT about it if you wanna keep it.

I'll check metadata and file data and stuff like that after fixes

bossandy

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bossandy 2014-10-18T10:51:22+00:00

CDFA wrote:
I've been trying to get to really old bubbles but you're mapping a song I actually like so uhhh

Insane:
00:59:849 (3,4,5) - This doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Why is (4) so close to (3), and why does it not flow to (5)?
I tried to make the flow better~ 01:00:030 (4,5,6,7,1) - is a pentagon!~ xD

Easy:
00:18:576 (1) - TECHNICALLY this is unrankable but I can always ask a QAT about it if you wanna keep it. I think it's fine to keep it as it , so can you help me to keep it (Yasora is offline now sadly )

I'll check metadata and file data and stuff like that after fixes

Fixed on Insane , waiting for bakari~ Uploaded!~

Edit：Everything updated!!!~

Last edited by bossandy 2014-10-18T12:12:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

riffy

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riffy 2014-10-18T11:32:40+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Hard:
00:10:758 (1,1,1) - REmove NC Nope, keeping it to stress SV changes
00:51:667 (4) - WOAH HELLO STYLE CHANGE HAI

The style is a little bit inconsistent well, it's an old collab, I can't do anything about it now /w\

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-18T17:50:51+00:00

Talked with Garven and Shiro about the spinner in easy, and they said "yeah its fine whatever lol"

BOOOKUUU

NOAAAWWWWAA

NI NAAAA

WA TA SHI U WO YUUU KAA RII NOO

bossandy

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bossandy 2014-10-19T02:32:54+00:00

Ohya Thanks~

Flask

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Flask 2014-10-19T02:44:08+00:00