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FictionJunction - Parallel Hearts (TV-Size)

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bossandy
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bossandy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年10月18日 at 下午 08:10:31

Artist: FictionJunction
Title: Parallel Hearts (TV-Size)
Source: パンドラハーツ
Tags: -Bakari- Black_Cherry_Ita BCI Collab Collaboration opening l1106188 Loneight Yasora PandoraHearts Pandora Hearts
BPM: 165
Filesize: 11694kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. BakaCI's Hard (3.03 stars, 211 notes)
  2. Insane (4.06 stars, 290 notes)
  3. L18's Normal (1.78 stars, 101 notes)
  4. Yasora's Easy (1.49 stars, 97 notes)
Download: FictionJunction - Parallel Hearts (TV-Size)
Download: FictionJunction - Parallel Hearts (TV-Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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:!: Ranked ! :!:
The song from "パンドラハーツ"
~ ENJOY ~
Mp3 file from this
　
Yasora's Easy 100% by Yasora
　
L18's Normal 100% by l1106188
　
BakaCI's Hard 100% by -Bakari- & BCI
　
Insane 100% by me
Skin 100% by Megurine Luka Awesome Skin!!!
　
Special Thanks!
  1. -Bakari-
  2. BCI
  3. l1106188
  4. Yasora
  5. Megurine Luka
　
Thanks for mod!
  1. BCI
  2. Tsukasa
  3. kurohana
  4. selova
  5. pyransc
  6. winber1
  7. AdRon Zh3Ro
  8. Akashi_S
  9. JudgeTheDude
  10. Dick
  11. Leorda
  12. Licnect
  13. suzutsukikanade
  14. Chewin
  15. Tony
  16. Beren
  17. grumd
  18. Strawberry!! xDD
  19. Sonnyc
  20. -kevincela-
  21. popner
  22. Flask Bubbled!
  23. CDFA
Last edited by bossandy , edited 44 times in total.
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
I want make easy 'w' can I?
bossandy
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Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
bossandy

Yasora wrote:

I want make easy 'w' can I?
sure! Yasora chan ^_^

and thanks
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
here
don't forget about tag 'w'
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
瞎了 老大 ...
結果我無聊重做 發現更可怕了 loool
重做之後的在我眼裡 我無可挑剔 ...>~<
順便路過坐板凳星

重做之後的normal
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BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
hey boss, we're finished :3 thank you for your permission to make a collab ;^;
info about the parts V
begin - 00:46:389 - -Bakari-
00:46:389 - end - me
check the tags, there must be my nickname and "collab collaboration" just copypasta tags from this diff => http://puu.sh/PMA1
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riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
and btw, boss and BCI are able to edit my part anytime.

STOP BEING TOO MOE! \>.</ I Cant' even read this thread. It's too moe.
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
bossandy
Ya!! Finally! Move to Pending!
Ready for mods :3
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
lol you asked me for mod in IRC, and why not?

[General]
i reupload map 2 times and all diffs needs to upload, collab totally not upload (i delete the map before upload) and Yasora's diff called "Easy" (also this diff have different tags) - full-submit please DD:
you need for an approachcircle.png for completing skin (take it from template lol)
this must be fixed lol
also i made mini collab sb (here) you may ignore this suggest|ask peoples like sherrie__fay for the sb

[Yasora]
HP+1, AR +1-2 (as you like) and OD +1 for good consistency with normal.
00:07:116 (1) - red point 1 grid up, next point 1 grid right, and next 1 right and 1 down, all - 4 grid lvl. imo, looks better
00:10:025 (1) - red point 1 grid down for same reason as in ^
00:24:015 (1,2) - RNC (1) and NC (2)? on (2) in music begin new.. eh.. part. you understand me, I hope.
00:26:025 (1) - RNC only if you do ^
00:46:025 (3,1) - smf like this? http://puu.sh/PRLe current sliders are confusing for beginners and for pros which will play diff with HD+DT+FL+HR.
if you do this, add NC on 00:46:753 (4) as you do in your current pattern.
01:22:753 (1) - y u no end slider on next whit tick? i don't see any reasons for the red tick.

[l18]
AR-1, current is a bit fast for a Normal.
00:05:662 (3) - NC for your combo pattern? (1,2,1,2 - 1 at big white tick) or RNC in 00:02:753 (1) -
00:53:662 (1) - grey point on a x:436 y:216? looks pretty nice to me.
please teach me how to map perfect normals T^T

[BakaCI]
-Moeri- so pro <3 but BCI so dniwe /runs
also more that 3 slider speeds /D:\

[Boss]
00:53:662 (3) - NC? in this part of music your pattern - NC every big white tick
00:33:298 (1,2) - nazi here \o\ move (2) to x:60 y:304 then move last point in (1) to 1 grid up. much better, isn't it? of course not
00:38:207 (6) - this form D: change it to smf like this http://puu.sh/PS6S
00:47:116 (6) - NC? i personally hate combo over10, i think you understand me if you play in tag coop
00:49:298 (1) - off grid snap and move last point like this http://puu.sh/PS9G
00:51:298 (2) - i think you must change this form to another (check the box) because overlap like http://puu.sh/PSfo isn't so moe

96,28,51298,2,0,B|68:64|76:120|104:144|104:144|152:184,1,178
00:55:116 (4) - there will be more garmonically if you add NC here (two square patterns with NC - current pattern includes only one square with NC)
01:08:753 (2) - delete this note? more funny for play, also folloving the vocal|melody not changed.

lol good luck
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
fixed some
also, please remove "Yasora-chan" from the tags 8''D
that's not necessary orz since if just write "yasora" you can search it too--

thank you~
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
@ BCI
it's reasonable here. :3/
Tsukasa
471 posts
Joined June 2011
Tsukasa
Hiya boss~ >w<

So here's the mod you wanted

Yasora's Heart:

00:08:207 (2) - Isn't the note a little bit too near 00:07:116 (1) ? It would probably be better if you adjust it 1 grid to the left
01:00:934 (1) - Remove the whistle sound on the beginning. This is the typical style of hitsounding Clap None Clap None but it's probably better if you follow this imo. It would also follow the sounds with the gaps Clap No note Clap so you won't have too much inconsistency
^ It would also be the same concept for the succeeding parts. And i'm too lazy to point all of them out ;w;
01:24:934 (4) - Try removing the whistle on the start of the slider, and add a clap sound on the end

L18's Hard:

01:24:517 (5) - Use the clap sound instead of the normal hitsound. Since you used the clap sound for the previous part

BakaCI's Heart:

00:28:934 (4) - Move the red point down by 1 or 2 ticks. It looks better imo nazi orz
00:44:934 (3) - Move the middle point 1 grid up and the 2nd to the last point 1 grid up
00:59:844 (1) - Add a clap on the beginning
01:00:207 (2) - Remove the clap on the beginning

Boss' Heart:

00:18:389 - If its possible, add a note here at the top middle of the 2 sliders with a clap sound like this

Well that's about what I can only find for now...
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

[l18]
AR-1, current is a bit fast for a Normal. :arrow: k~
00:05:662 (3) - NC for your combo pattern? (1,2,1,2 - 1 at big white tick) or RNC in 00:02:753 (1) - :arrow: oh! i forget add
00:53:662 (1) - grey point on a x:436 y:216? looks pretty nice to me. :arrow: no , thanks >w<
please teach me how to map perfect normals T^T :arrow: really ?! lol , i think this normal isn't perfect (run
Thank you for modding ~

Tsukasa wrote:

Hiya boss~ >w<

L18's Hard:

01:24:517 (5) - Use the clap sound instead of the normal hitsound. Since you used the clap sound for the previous part :arrow: k~
Thank you for modding ~

老大這裡~~ http://puu.sh/Q2up
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana
Thank your for request \(^^)/

General

Different Kiai-Times, please fix that
The mp3-file has 320 kBit/s, this isn't allowed. It must not be higher than 192 kBit/s.

L18's Heart

00:59:480 (1) - finish at the beginning

BakaCI's Heart

00:47:844 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:19:480 (3,1,2) - stack correctly

Boss' Heart

00:20:753 (4) - The sliderslide is hidden >.<

Good luck ^^
V E
187 posts
Joined March 2011
V E
hi, req from mod queue

[general]
MP3 bitrate is 320 kbps, while the max is 192 kbps
Kiai time must be same :)

[Yasora Heart's]
00:18:207 - maybe you add circle note or make slider to 00:18:571 and remove (1)+finish on slider tail
00:46:025 (3,1) - maybe it a bit hard to easy :P, maybe if you want like this, +clap on slider tail, or you can add slider length to white tick
SPOILER

[L18's Heart]
AR = 5 maybe?
00:59:480 (1) - maybe add finish on the head, coz it after spinner and start of kiai

[BakaCi's Heart]
i thinks it's fine

[Boss' heart]
00:12:934 (1,2,3,4) - use this to give the same spacing and good position imo
SPOILER
{hit object}
300,304,12934,5,4
180,216,13116,1,0
192,364,13298,1,2
260,232,13480,2,0,B|268:152|188:120|140:144,1,178,4|0

yeah it's good,,
good luck getting ranked XD
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
My part fixed.
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: FictionJunction - Parallel Hearts (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 58934
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 84934
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Parallel Hearts (TV Size)
Artist:FictionJunction
Creator:bossandy
Version:BakaCI's Heart
Source:Pandora Hearts
Tags:-Bakari- Black_Cherry_Ita BCI Collab Collaboration opening l1106188 Yasora Yasora-chan

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.54
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
fixed some X''D
@boss-chan: don't forget about tags orz--

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Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,466 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
老大~~Request from In-Game PM

[General]
  1. mp3超過 192kb/s了 :o
  2. 不加Video?
[Skin]
  1. 你少了approachcircle.png! 雖然好像也不需要吧- -
[Yasora]
  1. 00:30:025 (1) - Why here's a clap?
  2. 00:41:662 (1) - ^
  3. 01:05:298 (1) - finish?
  4. 01:15:480 (1) - Is this the same with (2) but just opposite? If not, make them just opposite.
[L18]
  1. 01:05:298 (1) - finish?
  2. 01:16:934 (1) - ^
    我無體投地了lol
[BakaCI]
  1. 01:05:298 - finish?
  2. 01:11:116 (1) - finish
  3. 01:16:934 - ^
  4. 01:24:207 (1) - I'd like to do like this > http://puu.sh/QHrP (the second tick move up 1 gird)
[老大]
  1. 00:34:025 (1) - 第三個錨點可以往下一格 (nazi)
  2. 01:05:298 (1) - finish?
  3. 01:16:934 (1) - ^
[最後]
因為我聽著最後這段kiai 感覺finish少了點lol (不過這樣很好聽了), 所以自己下了一下, 有點略吵但我覺得不錯, 你參考看看? (可無視沒關係lol)
finish
有些已經加了
00:59:480 (1) -
01:05:298 (1) -
01:06:753 (1) -
01:08:207 (1) -
01:09:662 (1,2,3,4,1) -
01:15:480 (1) -
01:16:934 (1) -
01:18:389 (1) -
01:19:844 (1) -
01:21:298 (1,3,1) -
多出來的都只是建議啦.-.


好圖一只!射星!

/me runs because bad mod
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
http://puu.sh/QJr9
pyransc
44 posts
Joined March 2012
pyransc
[Star's Normal]

00:59:480 (1) - use finish on first circle ?
01:00:934 (3) - use finish on first circle ?
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora

Flask wrote:

[Yasora]
  1. 00:30:025 (1) - Why here's a clap? because drum sound
  2. 00:41:662 (1) - ^ ^
  3. 01:05:298 (1) - finish? nope too loud
  4. 01:15:480 (1) - Is this the same with (2) but just opposite? If not, make them just opposite. fixed a bit
thanks~
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winber1
4,520 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
It looks long, but it's just a lot of suggestions :3

[General]

  1. Apparently the bitrate is 320kb/s, when it should be 192kb/s
[Boss's Heart]
  1. 00:01:298 (2) - I like following the drums, so perhaps you could add a finish to the beginning of this slider, and reduce the volume of only the beginning of the slider to ~50% (cuz 80% is too loud if you add a finish :x)
  2. 00:12:207 (4) - imo, a new combo would fit, since it's the start of the guitar slide and a new phrase, and you gave it a new spacing.
  3. 00:24:934 - hitsounds are kinda loud here imo.
  4. 00:30:207 (7,1) - maybe it's just me, but I kinda like the flow better if the spacing was a little bit bigger (to accomadate for the jump between combo 6 and 7). Secondly, having the curve of the slider follow the movement of your cursor (if you imagine you were playing) also flows better imo. For this particular pattern, I find that having flow is more preferable rather than making shapes. http://puu.sh/VG2V This is just my opinion tho.
  5. 00:42:571 - why no note here? :x
  6. 01:09:298 (6,7) - okay, this just bothers me some reason. the new combo should start here, but your pattern makes that feel all weird. Perhaps you could do something like this http://puu.sh/VGhF , http://puu.sh/VGhS , http://puu.sh/VGi6 , http://puu.sh/VGiv
    Here's the code:
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  7. 01:20:389 (2) - well it doesn't really matter, but you could follow the vocals :S instead of skipping 01:20:571 - Though it's not a big deal.
  8. 01:22:753 (1) - add whistle?
[BakaCI's]
  1. 00:01:298 (2) - same as Boss's Heart. Add finish and make volume 50% for only the beginning of the slider?
  2. 00:07:116 (1,2,3) - I would much rather use a repeat slider to be honest. It also makes it easier to read.
  3. 00:10:025 (1) - ummm... make it so that the slider "faces" or "points" to combo 5? http://puu.sh/VGLu (adjust the later sliders as well)
  4. 00:12:207 (1) - I would rather you have this note have a lower SV than 1. imo, it looks better, it just makes more sense to do it like that. you could use 0.68x, 0.76x, 0.84x, 0.92x, 1.00x
  5. 00:15:844 (1,2,3) - this is awkward. you're much better off just following the melody. playing notes inbetween the melody like this just doesn't make sense imo.
  6. 00:18:934 (1,2,3) - make into a more equilateral triangle?
  7. 00:21:298 (5) - up 2 grids and left 1 grid? makes the triangle more symmetric and looks better imo.
  8. 00:22:389 (2) - if you are going to use a repeat slider like combo 1, you should delete this note and rearrange spacing http://puu.sh/VIT3
  9. 00:44:025 - continue the flow, add a note here. the break does not make sense
  10. 00:51:480 (3,4) - pointless jump imo. If this were a jumpy map, I wouldn't care, but you've been using almost perfect spacing so far and the music does not suggest anything, so it's kinda unexpected.
  11. 01:07:844 (5) - new combo? and remove combo from next note
I don't like the fact you don't map the vocals quite a few times >_> (e.g. 00:26:025 (5) - skips some of the vocals, 00:28:934 (4) - same thing, etc.) but whatever.

[L18's Heart]
  1. 00:14:025 (3,1) - with this stacking, and this approach rate, it looks as if it's 1/2 tick apart imo. you could add a note in between, or unstack it.
  2. 01:23:480 (3,4) - wow, this just sounds really awkward to me some reason http://puu.sh/VJab idk but i just like the sound of that better.
So the beginning is definitely not a normal diff... you really should remap 00:12:934 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - so that it's easier. it just doesn't make sense how easy the kiai time is compared to that

[Yasora's Heart]
  1. 00:18:571 (1,2) - imo it would be easier for the beginner to read, and a good way to get back into the song from the long spinner by turning this hitcircle and slider into one repeat slider.
  2. 00:21:844 - add note
  3. 00:22:571 (2,1) - i would turn these two notes into a slider, for the beginner's sake of being able to read it more easily... but i guess it's up to you (taking the suggestion will obviously require remapping)
  4. 00:26:753 - add note
  5. 00:47:480 - add note with new combo and remove combo from next note
  6. 00:56:207 - add note
I would really add those notes i mentioned. It would flow better as well as make the patterns easier to read imo. And saying it's too hard is a horrible excuse. I honestly see no reason to leave those places blank. You should really take them into consideration

Hope this helps :3
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight

winber1 wrote:

[L18's Heart]
  1. 00:14:025 (3,1) - with this stacking, and this approach rate, it looks as if it's 1/2 tick apart imo. you could add a note in between, or unstack it. :arrow: because i remap so~
  2. 01:23:480 (3,4) - wow, this just sounds really awkward to me some reason http://puu.sh/VJab idk but i just like the sound of that better. :arrow: k~
So the beginning is definitely not a normal diff... you really should remap 00:12:934 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - so that it's easier. it just doesn't make sense how easy the kiai time is compared to that :arrow: k, in fact ... i have remaped this diff 2 times lol!
bo s s ~
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bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
bossandy
Almost fix!!! thanks everyone!!!!
AdRon Zh3Ro
902 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
I'm tired so i'll just say this for now:

http://puu.sh/WerJ

Seems better then the current.
Last edited by AdRon Zh3Ro , edited 1 time in total.
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy

winber1 wrote:

It looks long, but it's just a lot of suggestions :3

[BakaCI's]
  1. 00:01:298 (2) - same as Boss's Heart. Add finish and make volume 50% for only the beginning of the slider? whistle
  2. 00:07:116 (1,2,3) - I would much rather use a repeat slider to be honest. It also makes it easier to read. moved a bit. don't want slider, sorry
  3. 00:10:025 (1) - ummm... make it so that the slider "faces" or "points" to combo 5? http://puu.sh/VGLu (adjust the later sliders as well) my pattern is blanket slider and stack. i keep it, sorry
  4. 00:12:207 (1) - I would rather you have this note have a lower SV than 1. imo, it looks better, it just makes more sense to do it like that. you could use 0.68x, 0.76x, 0.84x, 0.92x, 1.00x actually your SV change is too small. no need to change it because players won't notice it, imo. sorry
  5. 00:15:844 (1,2,3) - this is awkward. you're much better off just following the melody. playing notes inbetween the melody like this just doesn't make sense imo. it's fine, i tested it with some friends and it sounds good
  6. 00:18:934 (1,2,3) - make into a more equilateral triangle? whoops~
  7. 00:21:298 (5) - up 2 grids and left 1 grid? makes the triangle more symmetric and looks better imo. not really, i think. sorry
  8. 00:22:389 (2) - if you are going to use a repeat slider like combo 1, you should delete this note and rearrange spacing http://puu.sh/VIT3 ~
  9. 00:44:025 - continue the flow, add a note here. the break does not make sense ~
  10. 00:51:480 (3,4) - pointless jump imo. If this were a jumpy map, I wouldn't care, but you've been using almost perfect spacing so far and the music does not suggest anything, so it's kinda unexpected.
  11. 01:07:844 (5) - new combo? and remove combo from next note
I don't like the fact you don't map the vocals quite a few times >_> (e.g. 00:26:025 (5) - skips some of the vocals, 00:28:934 (4) - same thing, etc.) but whatever. vocals? nah, i think it fits with vocals and music good enough ;)

Hope this helps :3
hai-hai
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thank you
AdRon Zh3Ro
902 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
[Overall]
If you do use my new timing, resnap all Inherited points aswell.

[Boss's]
00:54:205 (2) - Keep everything perfectly clear in the editor, i alredy mentioned this in other posts. It may not affect much in gameplay, but it DOES affect in editor mode, it's annoying and can be avoided easily. http://puu.sh/Weth

[CI's]
00:10:753 (1,1,1,1) These new combos hardly make any sense. Remove all the 3 following new combos.
00:30:480 (2) Non-sense, remove.
00:53:662 (1,2) Non-sense repeaters that doesn't follow anything in the actual song.
00:55:116 http://puu.sh/WeAp This combo seems way too clustered. You can make it more clear, since it does have a sping right after.

Almost all the triplets don't fit with the song in the way you mapped them.

[L18's]
00:14:389 (1) You can remove this new-combo.

[Yasora]
Extending almost all combos would looks better. New combo way too repeteadly seems kinda awful.
Alltur
530 posts
Joined July 2012
Alltur
From the queue..

Sorry for the delay XP..
My modding is not good.. sorry :(
Yeah! FictionJunction!
Love the song and the map. Definitely going to play this when ranked! XD

[General]
Clear.

[Yasora's heart - easy?]
Clear.

[L18's heart - normal?]
00:15:298 (2,3,4) - Make them as curved slider since the following combo has same rhythmic pattern, similar to this? Link

[BakaCi's - hard?]
00:18:934 (1,2,3) - nazi. better triangle if possible?
01:04:571 (3) - make the slider look like (1) if possible?
01:19:480 (3,1,2) - nazi. stack better?

[Boss's heart - insane?]
I can't mod insane diff.. sorry T__T;
00:02:571 - add note here? [even though Japanese here saying bokurawa, the vocal is more bokura-wa]
00:49:298 (1,3) - slider-end of slider 1 perfectly fit into the track of slider 3?

Good luck with mapping and ranking :)

Double-Starred! :D
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI

winber1 wrote:

It looks long, but it's just a lot of suggestions :3
[BakaCI's]
  1. 00:51:480 (3,4) - pointless jump imo. If this were a jumpy map, I wouldn't care, but you've been using almost perfect spacing so far and the music does not suggest anything, so it's kinda unexpected. perfect spacing - -Bakari-'s style, also i don't remap my part and i like this jump and tested it (i have 49 lvl) plays good.
  2. 01:07:844 (5) - new combo? and remove combo from next note lol no

Akashi_S wrote:

[BakaCi's - hard?] in creator's words boss say about GDs so not needed to rename
01:04:571 (3) - make the slider look like (1) if possible? current looks good
01:19:480 (3,1,2) - nazi. stack better? do my best, if someone gives me a code i'll fix that

AdRon Zh3Ro wrote:

[CI's]
00:10:753 (1,1,1,1) These new combos hardly make any sense. Remove all the 3 following new combos. make sense because change slider speed
00:53:662 (1,2) Non-sense repeaters that doesn't follow anything in the actual song. i like the current way ><
00:55:116 http://puu.sh/WeAp This combo seems way too clustered. You can make it more clear, since it does have a sping right after. this isn' clustered and no problems in playing, so no change
sorry to all I have atm ill humor and bag feeling D:
JudgeTheDude
595 posts
Joined September 2011
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my modding queue

[Yasora]
00:20:753 (2) - I would have started it at 00:20:571
00:38:753 (1,2) - 2 is not aligned with 1's center 1(y:276), 2(y:280)
00:59:480 (1) - Center point isn't in the middle of the Slider
01:12:571 (1) - Same here
01:24:934 (4) - Why a curved Slider ?

[L18]
No probs

[Bakari/Cherry]
00:14:025 (5,1) - Little overlap

[Boss]
I didn't mod it 'cause I can't mod insane, sorry

That's all.
Good luck ^^
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
之前没注意comboburst是bug的，今天看你图的时候发现了然后稍微改了下，可能需要你重新full submit了不好意思=v=



文件名不需要变嗯o.o
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
bossandy
Thanks everyone , Fixed almost of them!!!!
Phish_old
154 posts
Joined January 2011
Phish_old
you requested a mod in my modding queue :3
oh and btw, i'm rather new in modding, like i said in the queue, and if you read my rules you know that i want a reply on my mod where you say what changed and what did not. this really helps me to improve my modding and i can see if everything was understandable (my english is poor also ;_;)
sooo...
overally i found no real issues anyways, so these are mostly suggestions!

General
> Folder is ok, pic has perfect sizes, .mp3 192 bit, silenced sliderslide hitsounds have 0kb ... everything fine ;_;
> the yellow combocolours are very similar, i didn't even notice they where 2 different at first. maybe find another colour or put a little bit more red to the darker yellow, it would turn orange then... just a suggestion :)

[Yasora's Heart]
00:29:668 (3,1) - for the whole following part you always nc'd this slider, but i think they belong together, would fit better to the vocals..
00:32:940 (1) - clap at the sliderstart? you did a clap on 00:30:031 (1) - also, and it would sound great with a little bit more claps (i like the custom hitsounds btw)
00:35:850 (1) - ^
00:38:759 (1) - ^
00:44:577 (1) - ^
00:56:213 - add note?
01:24:213 (2,3,4) - in my opinion this totally does not harmonize with the vocals, and you mapped everything ON-vocals in this diff. so why dont you just mirror 01:22:759 (1) - this slider (copy paste and turn 180°) and put him on 01:24:031 - this location. (you have to be honest, this fits better to the vocals :) )
nice diff, i like how you handicraftet those sliders together (example: 00:07:122 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is great fun to play!)

[L18's Heart]
> actually i think this diff needs a higher approach rate! 00:59:486 (1,2,3,4) - this part is irritating with such a low AR, i suggest AR+1/+2
00:07:486 - i don't understand this inherting sections here, i think they don't belong to your diff? im right? :)
00:33:304 (1) - clap on the reverse arrow?
00:34:759 (2) - ^
00:37:668 (3) - ^
found nothing really, nice diff!

[BakaCI's Heart]
00:55:122 (1,3) - please don't do this. imagine you would like to rank this with hidden ;_; the sliderburst totally covers (3) you should also test your map always with the normal skin to see overlappings / covered hitobjects
01:00:213 (2) - add clap on the sliderend?
this diff is sooo keeewl srsly, i like the playflow and style, so fun to play :3 totally worth a star ~*

[Boss' Heart]
00:07:122 (2) - 1tinygrid down for the sake of spacing
00:46:213 (1,5) - this circles hitburst covers the other one completely, and when (1) appears, you can't see (5) under him, cause they are too far away from each other in timeline, so they dont stack. but if you go F4 Song Setup -> Advanced and put Stack Leniency to 10, this 2 Circles would stack and (1) would appear "on top" of (5). this little change makes a lot hidden players life easier :)
01:22:031 (3,4,5,6,1) - ..wtf o,o hard to read
01:24:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - could you find a better shape for this stream? looks messy :)
also great diff!

i hope the mod was helpful :3 good luck with rank!
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
http://puu.sh/Wtgx
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 58934
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Parallel Hearts (TV Size)
Artist:FictionJunction
Creator:bossandy
Version:Yasora's Heart
Source:Pandora Hearts
Tags:-Bakari- Black_Cherry_Ita BCI Collab Collaboration opening l1106188 Yasora

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.08
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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[Colours]
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Combo2 : 205,185,39
Combo3 : 163,29,14
Combo4 : 26,132,50
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi boss


[General]
* Your diff name makes players are hard to tell which is hard or normal diff. Consider to change your diff name into a difficulty name (e.g. "L18's Normal", "Insane")


[Skinning]
* You need an approachcircle.png for completing set of hitbursts


[L18's Heart]
* AR +1? Your current approach rate are bit slow

00:47:850 (1,2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slow to read)


[BakaCI's Heart]
00:10:031 (1,1,1,1) - Is this combo necessary? If necessary, tell me why
00:51:486 (3,4) - These jump are pretty not fit to the song, change the pattern?
01:04:577 (3) - Move 4th sliderpoint to 1 grid up for fix the blanket combo (nazi)
01:15:486 (1,2) - These jump are pretty not fit to the song, change the pattern?


[Boss' Heart]
00:30:031 (6) - New combo for jump pattern?


Best luck of you!
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI

Leorda wrote:

[BakaCI's Heart]
00:10:031 (1,1,1,1) - Is this combo necessary? If necessary, tell me why change slider speeds
00:51:486 (3,4) - These jump are pretty not fit to the song, change the pattern? my style - random jumps, sorry D%
01:04:577 (3) - Move 4th sliderpoint to 1 grid up for fix the blanket combo (nazi) yeap
01:15:486 (1,2) - These jump are pretty not fit to the song, change the pattern? lol no again, same reason ><
http://puu.sh/X49v
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
bossandy

Dick wrote:

you requested a mod in my modding queue :3
oh and btw, i'm rather new in modding, like i said in the queue, and if you read my rules you know that i want a reply on my mod where you say what changed and what did not. this really helps me to improve my modding and i can see if everything was understandable (my english is poor also ;_;)
sooo...
overally i found no real issues anyways, so these are mostly suggestions!

General
> Folder is ok, pic has perfect sizes, .mp3 192 bit, silenced sliderslide hitsounds have 0kb ... everything fine ;_; ^_^
> the yellow combocolours are very similar, i didn't even notice they where 2 different at first. maybe find another colour or put a little bit more red to the darker yellow, it would turn orange then... just a suggestion :) Nice , I didn't notice that , I change it a bit :3

[Boss' Heart]
00:07:122 (2) - 1tinygrid down for the sake of spacing sure :3
00:46:213 (1,5) - this circles hitburst covers the other one completely, and when (1) appears, you can't see (5) under him, cause they are too far away from each other in timeline, so they dont stack. but if you go F4 Song Setup -> Advanced and put Stack Leniency to 10, this 2 Circles would stack and (1) would appear "on top" of (5). this little change makes a lot hidden players life easier :) I think it's fine because I can see them :3
01:22:031 (3,4,5,6,1) - ..wtf o,o hard to read My Insane always easier than most insane difficulties , I want make something like Insane , so .... keep them now , sorry I don't want to change this :(
01:24:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - could you find a better shape for this stream? looks messy :) Okay , I make a better stream now xD
also great diff! thanks~

i hope the mod was helpful :3 good luck with rank! It was helpful 8-)
Thanks for mod~

Leorda wrote:

Hi boss Hi Leo


[General]
* Your diff name makes players are hard to tell which is hard or normal diff. Consider to change your diff name into a difficulty name (e.g. "L18's Normal", "Insane") Okay~


[Skinning]
* You need an approachcircle.png for completing set of hitbursts I will ask Luka to make it if she can make QQ


[Boss' Heart]
00:30:031 (6) - New combo for jump pattern? I want keep my Combo pattern , and I think it's fine because the change is not very big ^^


Best luck of you! Thanks Leo~
Licnect
Elite Mapper
367 posts
Joined May 2010
Licnect
玩過後的感想建議

L11的難度從 01:16:940 - 01:19:486 節奏斷掉
用Slidertick用他節奏不要斷
01:25:668 這裡加Note and+finish spin延後 比較好

Yasora的難度 00:04:213 這slider可以延到00:05:304 比較順
01:25:668 這裡加Note and+finish spin延後 比較好
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
english please?

ok translated by below me ~
Last edited by Yasora , edited 1 time in total.
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
老大拿去...

SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: FictionJunction - Parallel Hearts (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 58934
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Parallel Hearts (TV Size)
Artist:FictionJunction
Creator:bossandy
Version:L18's Normal
Source:Pandora Hearts
Tags:-Bakari- Black_Cherry_Ita BCI Collab Collaboration opening l1106188 Yasora

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,0
Combo2 : 205,185,39
Combo3 : 163,29,14
Combo4 : 26,132,50
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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suzutsukikanade
653 posts
Joined July 2011
suzutsukikanade
Sorry for late!

Forum-PM request!

[General]

Missing Skin Files: approachcircle.png

[Yasora's Easy]

00:12:577: Nothing important but, add a note here instead of finish? Listening to the music carefully you can hear a sound here.
Just a suggestion here, Like this diff.

[L18's Normal]

00:04:940 (1): Remove whistle?
00:02:395 (3): ^
00:03:850 (2): ^
00:05:668 (1): ^ in slider start
00:09:668 (3): Remove whistle
00:12:940 (1): Whistle in repeat
00:16:031 (3): Whistle in slider start

[BakaCI's Hard]

00:02:759 (4): Whistle in start?
00:53:696 (1,2): Can't hear anything in music like this, try this rhythm?
SPOILER

Insane is amazing nothing to point ;)

Map looks good nothing important to point, but suggest fix General.

Good Luck in ranking!
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Hi bossandy, mod request from my modding queue.

[General]
You should add the approachcircle.png to complete the hitcircle skin set
Why to use negative offset? It's ok but 1304 would be better

[Yasora's Easy]
00:07:122 (1,2) - I would make the slider 00:07:122 (1) more curved to improve the blanket with 00:08:213 (2), it is ugly to me in playmode. You could use this code:
SPOILER

364,160,7122,6,0,B|364:220|364:220|408:256|408:336|344:360,1,216,2|0
308,284,8213,1,0
00:08:577 (1) - This slider is a bit overlapped with 00:07:122 (1) and it breaks the flow. To avoid the overlap with the previous (1) slider and to improve the blanket with it use this code:
SPOILER

284,200,8577,6,0,B|256:140|288:80|360:40|416:96,1,216,2|0
480,104,9668,1,0
Pretty nice

[L18's Normal]
01:22:759 (1) - I don't like how this rhythm follows the music. What about to use a rhythm like this instead?

Nice

[BakaCI's Hard]
I would increase the SV till 1.60/1.70
00:55:668 (2,3,4,1) - This pattern is enough confusing to play :\
00:58:031 (1) - Reduce this spinner by 1/1 and add a circle on 00:59:486 and 00:59:668. This rhythm fits much better the music and since this is the hard of your mapset every player would think rhythm is so:

01:18:031 (4) - CTRL + R flows better imho ;3

[Insane]
00:15:668 (1,2) - I would CTRL + R the slider 00:15:668 (1) to create a jump and overlapping the 00:16:213 (2) with 00:15:486 (5) to keep a symmetry and to make an other jump with 00:16:395 (3): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/409620
00:18:395 I would add a circle here, still overlapping it with 00:16:213 (2)
I love the flow of this map ♥

That's all, good luck with your rank :3
Yasora
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Yasora
thanks all 'w'
http://puu.sh/XAYJ
Sekai
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Joined February 2011
Sekai
Bossandy o.o why you wont add a video to this?
bossandy
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
bossandy

-Sekai- wrote:

Bossandy o.o why you wont add a video to this?
I really don't like to add video >_<

but if someone give me video and give some good reason
I may add it then
bossandy
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
bossandy

suzutsukikanade wrote:

Sorry for late!

Forum-PM request!

[General]

Missing Skin Files: approachcircle.png

Insane is amazing nothing to point ;) Ya! \:D/

Map looks good nothing important to point, but suggest fix General.

Good Luck in ranking! Thanks for mod ~

Chewin wrote:

Hi bossandy, mod request from my modding queue.

[General]
You should add the approachcircle.png to complete the hitcircle skin set
Why to use negative offset? It's ok but 1304 would be better Objects before first red timing point is not good , and I think it's fine

[Insane]
00:15:668 (1,2) - I would CTRL + R the slider 00:15:668 (1) to create a jump and overlapping the 00:16:213 (2) with 00:15:486 (5) to keep a symmetry and to make an other jump with 00:16:395 (3): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/409620 Fix this :D Nice suggestion
00:18:395 I would add a circle here, still overlapping it with 00:16:213 (2) I don't want , sorry>_<
I love the flow of this map ♥ Thanks~

That's all, good luck with your rank :3 \:D/
suzutsukikanade
653 posts
Joined July 2011
suzutsukikanade
Oh forgot to mention this in my mod

I have a video with medium quality, if you want to use in your map...go ahead
http://puu.sh/XSxS

ignore it...
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
:idea:/


[Yasora's Easy]
00:02:759 (2) - add finish


[L18's Normal]
N用变速萌大奶o.o? 作为normal来说太难了
00:02:753 (1) - 删whistle加finish
00:44:934 (1) - 为什么中间音量5%结尾又40%了
00:56:571 (1) - ^


[BakaCI's Hard]
remove useless green line
00:01:304 (2) - remove whistle add finish
00:04:213 (1) - add finish
00:10:031 (1) - ^
00:10:759 (1) - ^
00:11:486 (1) - ^
00:12:213 (1) - ^
00:15:304 (3) - end at 00:15:486
00:15:850 (1) - move to 00:15:668
00:16:213 (2) - add note
00:16:395 (2) - move to 00:16:213
00:16:577 (3) - move to 00:16:395
00:16:940 (4) - add note
00:18:031 (4) - remove note
00:18:213 (5) - add nc
00:26:031 (5) - cut down one turn end at 00:26:577
00:30:486 (2) - remove note


[Insane]
00:02:759 (4) - 开头finish
00:04:213 (1) - ^
00:10:031 (1,3) - ^
00:12:213 (1,2,3,4) - 尝试用加速的slider?
00:12:759 (5) - 如果改了上面那条 就顺便删了这个note
00:17:304 (1) - 前面相同节奏的地方都跳了 这里没跳感觉怪怪的o.o
00:19:577 (7) - 加note 这里和后面是连起来的
00:23:122 (1) - 这个反向跳手感不是很好
00:24:577 (7) - 改成slider 结束在红线
00:26:940 (8) - 在前面加note 或者删掉这个note
01:11:668 (2) - 尝试跳?

good luck
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
Hi. I'm here because of your M4M queue :3

[General]
Different offset in L18's Normal. (it's -6ms from the rest of the diffs)
L18's Normal has different combo colors from the rest of the diffs. Fix this!


[Yasora's Easy]
00:08:577 (1) - 1 grid left, and 1 grid up. Looks better this way~
00:11:486 (2) - 1 grid left. same reason :P
00:46:213 (3) - maybe try this instead http://puu.sh/Y5Hj . The current rhythm sounds kinda dull.

[L18's Normal]
AR is way too high. Try reducing it by -1 or -2
00:16:753 (4) - maybe try something like this. http://puu.sh/YhwK
00:23:116 (1) - move this slider a bit down, to be in the middle of the slider (3) and (4) like here http://puu.sh/YhxG
00:53:116 (6) - really ugly positioning. maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/Yhzb
00:56:025 (5) - maybe try to curve this, like (4)

[BakaCI's Normal]
5 Different SV's. I think that's unrankable~
01:18:395 (1) - 1 grid right would look better

[Insane]
HP+1
01:18:031 (3) - rotate this 9 degrees clockwise. It would look better http://puu.sh/YhHr

nothing else to point out. really nice song and mapset~ good luck moe moe boss ♥
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