1. Cristian's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 813 notes)
2. Easy (2.26 stars, 151 notes)
3. Hard (4.91 stars, 345 notes)
4. Lissette's Insane (5 stars, 434 notes)
5. Normal (3.39 stars, 186 notes)

My First Ranked Beatmap

eLtigreXXx wrote:

holai request from HydeSama & tigreXXx's Loli-nyan modding queue ~ ~

general

bien las dificultades tienen que ser iguales
tienen que empesar i terminar en el mismo sitio
tambien los descansos

kai time 1 empiezo 00:28:239 y fin 00:40:102
kai time 2 empiezo 00:41:585 y fin 00:53:447
kai time 3 empiezo 01:52:762 y fin 02:04:624
si quieres mantener eso tiene que estar en todas las dificultades y

varios inherited points estan fuera de lugar D: vuelve a travarlos es
en todas las dificultades

utiliza AImod (control+shift+A) te puede ayudar mucho en el espaciado
el nombre del fondo tiene que ser BG
en tag considera agregar "kratozfreak"
yo te sugiero que continúes la canción asta 02:52:450


hard
slider Tick Rate tiene que ser 1
00:29:536 (4) nuevo combo
00:32:502 (4) ^
00:35:653 (7) ^
00:43:067 (7) ^
00:44:180 (6) ^
00:45:292 (4) ^
00:50:482 (7) ^
00:56:413 (8) ^
01:38:860 (9) ^
01:53:874 (4) ^
01:16:802 siento que es mejor si quitas el descanso y continúes esa
parte así como en la normal i easy

normal
slider Tick 1
00:51:882 (6) nuevo combo
01:11:242 (4) ^
01:13:837 (5) ^
01:56:098 (6) ^

Easy
slider Tick 1
00:26:015 remueve el nuevo combo

pero va bien

1. Songfolder - mp3Length - You need to cut a song. ( about 02:16:861~end )
   
   this is the Rule

   You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. This doesn't count intro time, and thus only applies if more than 20% of the outro is unmapped. If you only plan to map a portion of your song, then including the full mp3 is a waste of file space. Many mp3 editing tools like this exist which make fading and cutting a song simple. However, if you have a legitimate reason for keeping your full mp3 (e.g. a storyboard after the map ends), then that is fine.
2. Songfolder - You have two osb.file. Nightcore - (xincrin32).osb - This does not have a meaning. It is better to remove it.
3. Song Setup - Tags - add kratozfreak , agussdg in all diff ( maybe hard,insane diff is guest diff? name of the guest has to put it )
4. Song Setup - combo colors - You should unify all diff. (They are similar in color using a diff of all. It is recommended that you use a color with a consistency) ↓code ( easy,normal used )
   
   SPOILER

   Combo1 : 128,255,0
   Combo2 : 255,255,0
   Combo3 : 255,128,64
   Combo4 : 128,255,255

5. Song Setup - Storyboarding - Enable countdown - Do you want this? You must unify all diff if you want it. or Please uncheck if you do not want it ( Now setting:easy,normal...checked. hard,insane...not checked )
6. Song Setup - audio Lead-in - Easy,Normal diff 3000ms is too long imo. change to 3000→2000ms. my suggestion
7. KIAI TIME - 00:41:585~00:53:447 - It looks like do not need.

1. Slider tick rate 3 o.o? I watch this for the first time. maybe unrankable ?
2. Since the map does not seem to have completed yet, so sorry, can not be mod

agussdg wrote:

no sabes lo que me paso >.< rebaje el map porque cambiaste el sb creo y perdi mis avances D: desp te paso para actualizar cuando lo rehaga

[Yue] wrote:

Animo Xin!! ya quiero ver este mapa rankeado x3

da lo mejor de ti n.n

1. Agrega lo siguiente a los tags :
   
   lissette agussdg
   
   - Son necesarios porque colaboraron con 2 guest diffs No kd y Espera mi Mod completo !!

[Te][Amo] wrote:

1. Agrega lo siguiente a los tags :
   
   lissette agussdg
   
   - Son necesarios porque colaboraron con 2 guest diffs No kd y Espera mi Mod completo !!

*

espiritur00 wrote:

No la modee pero ahi te lanze una estrella xD

Verdisphena wrote:

General

La resolucion de BGAGUSSDG.jpeg, BGLISSETTE.jpeg debe ser 1024 x 768
Tienes 2 BG de taiko en la carpeta el mapa, y solo usas uno, elimina el otro
Tienes varios kiais que estan desordenados en cada diff, se supone que todos los kias tienen que estar en el mismo lugar, en todas las diffs (menos en la de taiko)

Lissette's Insane
AR +1

00:26:941 (2,4) - Ctrl + R ?
01:13:466 (5,6) - No creo que esto sea rankeable
01:19:397 (5) - NC
01:22:363 (5) - ^
02:09:447 (6) - ^
02:15:378 (6) - ^
02:27:797 (1) - Quita ese NC

AB Style
No me gustan los whistles del comienzo, no siguen nada

00:40:287 (1) - Finaliza este slider en 00:41:214 -
02:02:771 (11,12,13) - Por que esos 1/8?, no siguen nada, mejor remplazarlos por otra cosa

Hard
Por que aqui no se ve el bg?

00:52:706 - ~ 00:53:447 - Mappea algo aqui
02:39:104 (7) - Esta nota toca la HP BAR

Normal

00:16:376 (1) - welp, este slider no es simetrico, si no sabes hacer sliders complejos te recomiendo no hacer cosas muy complejas
... no me gusto esta diff

Easy

02:46:518 (1,2) - Sliders feos, lo mismo que el normal


Bueno, este mapa necesita ayuda, no puse muchas cosas, solo las mas importantes, pero aun asi necesita ayuda. Podrias probar mas con los hitsounds y no repetir siempre el clap.
Suerte

1. 00:18:230 (9) - d
2. 00:21:195 (21) - d
3. 00:21:381 (22) - k
4. 00:21:566 (23) - Erase this note.
5. 00:23:605 (30) - d
6. 00:23:976 (32) - k
7. 00:24:161 (33) - d
8. 00:24:346 (34) - d
9. 00:24:532 (35) - k
10. 00:30:834 (70) - k
11. 00:32:131 (77) - d
12. 00:36:024 (102) - d
13. 00:39:916 (126) - d
14. 00:40:102 (127) - D
15. 00:48:535 (x) - Add a note (''k'').
16. 01:15:134 (291) - d
17. 01:16:432 (298) - D
18. 01:22:734 (337) - k
19. 01:53:503 (491) - d
20. 02:11:949 (x) - Add a note (''k'').
21. 02:35:397 (705) - d
22. 02:39:846 (732) - D
23. Crei ver unos Copy-paste por alli? o3o

winber1 wrote:

Lissette's

00:18:971 (1) - doesn't seem to be necessary there is a sort of chimey background, but nothing major happens here imo to provoke a new combo. (same goes for all the other times you use this type of new combo, but I guess that's just me) meh nvm. it seems to work fine, and you are seemingly consistent with it, so yea.
00:23:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - meh make symmetrical?
00:29:536 (6) - may work better to do something like this http://puu.sh/MTTb (where combo 6 has a new combo and is stacked on top of 00:30:463 (5) -) it just seems to fit better since this is where the vocals begin
00:32:502 (4) - ^? similar idea
00:46:033 (4) - new combo (for the echo?)
00:51:965 (4) - ^
01:06:978 - why no note here D:
01:09:944 - ^
02:41:885 (5) - similar to 00:29:536 (6) -
02:51:708 (6) - center it...? some reason it seems like a new combo would fit, but idk, up to you

AB Style

00:16:376 (1,2,3) - this really doesn't make sense to me if you are going to do this 00:19:342 (1,2,3) - I would rather they either be a different shapped pattern, or you make the spacing the same. (probably a good solution would be to make 00:17:674 (4,5,6,7) - those notes have the same spacing as 00:19:342 (1,2,3) - , or just change the spacing of the whole combo 00:16:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - )
00:22:307 (1,2,3) - move back 1/2 tick and add a note at 00:22:493 -
00:31:390 (2,3,4) - note straight
00:39:360 (7) - i'd add a new combo here. fits the stream more imo.
00:40:287 (1) - end on 00:41:214 -
00:43:994 (7,8,9) - not straight
01:53:132 (5,6,7) - consider how you made your patterns before, this just looks weird.
01:58:137 (6) - works better and is more readable imo if you removed two repeats and added a note at 01:58:508 -
01:59:064 (9) - new combo
01:59:991 (1) - remove combo
02:01:473 (9) - new combo
02:00:361 (7,8) - doesn't work very imo. the note at 02:00:547 - needs to be mapped, but that's just me
02:02:771 (6,7,8) - a little hard to read due to the fact these sliders are all the same length on the screen but different length in rhythm. I would also add a new combo on 02:02:771 (6) -
02:03:976 (1) - end at 02:04:624 -
02:05:369 (2) - end on the red tick
02:07:779 (10) - new combo
02:10:559 (5) - ^
02:12:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - you haven't really used jumps this big before, it's a little sudden (also it's not symmetrical D:)
02:28:724 (1,2,3) - move back 1/2 tick and add a note at 02:28:910 -
02:34:285 (9) - for consistency purposes, you should add a new combo here and remove the combo at 02:34:470 (1) - (or change the other place)
02:39:846 (7,1) - not the best use of a jump imo. I would move them closer

Hard

00:18:415 (5,6) - too many extra notes here imo :/
00:25:087 (8,9,1,3) - move to the center
00:31:575 (2,3,4) - small spacing discrepancy
00:33:429 (8) - move this note down a bit to make the spacing correct.
00:33:985 (1) - remove combo
00:44:365 (9) - new combo and remove combo at 00:44:550 (1) -
00:45:662 (2) - new combo (anti-spacing may be the best for this diff 1) because you immediately leave the new spacing, 2) slow AR 3) you've used consistent spacing pretty much through the song. It may be a little hard for not as experienced players to read this.)
01:27:553 (7) - lol so low
01:55:357 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:58:508 - add note
02:11:301 (3,4) - space further apart
02:38:733 (6,7) - spacing
02:39:475 (1) - remove combo for consistency purposes


Normal

--there seems to be a little difficulty gap between hard and normal

00:36:395 (4,1) - it's a small spacing discrepancy but in normal/easy diffs i just like it better if you were more exact with spacing
01:26:070 (5) - new combo
01:34:226 (5,1) - may be a little deceiving. newer players often panic on these long rhythmically stacked notes and play them too fast. Not a big problem if you keep it tho since it's a Normal diff.
02:06:852 (4,5,6) - spacing
02:20:383 (3,4,5) - this rhythm may be a little hard to read and unexpected... maybe use sliders. http://puu.sh/MUn9 <--just a really quickly done pattern that may work better
02:24:647 (3,4) - spacing

Easy

meh sorry getting tired lol just gonna really quickly look at this.

01:31:260 (4,5) - spacing
01:34:226 (6) - new combo
02:48:001 (2,3) - avoid stacking like this in easy

the mod for diff took legitamately 30 seconds just to quickly browse through so sorry. I usually don't mod that many anways when the map is this long. I usually stop at the 10 minute mark (as in 10 minute draining time, which would have been at the Normal difficulty approximately)

And sorry for taking so long for getting you this mod.

Hope this helps a bit. meh i might have some stupid things in there as I was kinda not paying as much attention as I could have probably.

ezek wrote:

De mi modding queue.

Se ve bien para mi, te dejare 2 estrellas!

kikones34 wrote:

No quiero ser un maníaco de la ortografía, pero las dos únicas frases de la SB tienen errores

01:30:333 Tu sentiràs el meu amor
01:36:079 La melodia del meu cor

Anyway, buen trabajo !

Lissette wrote:

http://puu.sh/MWr1

My fixes, thanks for modding guys~

• 
  00:23:790 (3) - add whistle to the end of slider? like in 00:19:342 (1,2,3,4) and 00:16:376 (1,2,3,4)
  00:33:429 (5,1) - this spacing do a troubles for me
  00:39:360 (3) - remove finish from the begin and repeat?
  01:14:207 (5) - nc?
  01:32:743 (1) - nc and remove nc from 01:34:226 (2) - ?
  02:51:708 (6) - nc and remove it from 02:52:450 (1) - ?

• 
  00:16:376 (1) - do it more pretty
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:19:342 (1) - maybe you can do it like this?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:06:793 (3) - do it symmetrical, please
  01:26:070 (1,2) - delete whistles from the tales of this sliders

• 
  00:39:360 (5) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:50:482 (1,1) - no-symmetrical sliders in this symmetrical part looks bad
  00:51:965 (3) - nc?
  01:11:983 (2,3) - like in 00:50:482 (1,1)
  01:27:924 (8,9,10) - check spacing here
  01:57:025 (6) - nc?
  02:24:832 (4) - delete this beat?

• 
  00:39:360 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - i think that this sream needn`t here, cuz it is overmap
  01:25:885 (12) - nc?
  02:00:361 (4) - delete whistle from the tale?
  02:02:771 (11,12,13) - 1\6 sliders o_O

• 
  00:18:971 (6) - nc?
  00:21:937 (6) - ^
  00:24:902 (6) - ^
  00:27:868 (6) - ^
  02:25:388 (7) - ^
  02:36:880 (1) - it touches HP Bar

tiper wrote:

[Easy]

• 
  00:23:790 (3) - add whistle to the end of slider? like in 00:19:342 (1,2,3,4) and 00:16:376 (1,2,3,4)
  00:33:429 (5,1) - this spacing do a troubles for me
  00:39:360 (3) - remove finish from the begin and repeat?
  01:14:207 (5) - nc?
  01:32:743 (1) - nc and remove nc from 01:34:226 (2) - ?
  02:51:708 (6) - nc and remove it from 02:52:450 (1) - ?

[Normal]

• 
  00:16:376 (1) - do it more pretty
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:19:342 (1) - maybe you can do it like this?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:06:793 (3) - do it symmetrical, please
  01:26:070 (1,2) - delete whistles from the tales of this sliders

[Hard]

• 
  00:39:360 (5) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:50:482 (1,1) - no-symmetrical sliders in this symmetrical part looks bad
  00:51:965 (3) - nc?
  01:11:983 (2,3) - like in 00:50:482 (1,1)
  01:27:924 (8,9,10) - check spacing here
  01:57:025 (6) - nc?
  02:24:832 (4) - delete this beat?

[AB]

• 
  00:39:360 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - i think that this sream needn`t here, cuz it is overmap
  01:25:885 (12) - nc?
  02:00:361 (4) - delete whistle from the tale?
  02:02:771 (11,12,13) - 1\6 sliders o_O

[Lissette]

• 
  00:18:971 (6) - nc?
  00:21:937 (6) - ^
  00:24:902 (6) - ^
  00:27:868 (6) - ^
  02:25:388 (7) - ^
  02:36:880 (1) - it touches HP Bar

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from my mod Q.

• If you use circle skin add sliderborder aftercolors in file .osu http://puu.sh/x2Oe
• In skin you should add file sliderfollowcircle.png for slider skin
• all BGs should be 1024x768
• will be better if on all diff's will be identikal kiai times

AB Style

00:22:122 - http://puu.sh/NBO5 sounds better
00:25:088 - start spinner here
00:39:360 - NC
00:40:287 - better remove this spinner not sound here ot end on white tick
00:48:257(4) - make more symmetric http://puu.sh/NBPX
00:52:984 - add note
01:46:367 - remove unused green line

Hard

01:20:324 - better remove this note, will be sounds good
01:59:434(1,2,3) - correct spacing plz ;w;
02:24:276 - 1 grid up for symmetry with slider 2

Normal

00:56:413 - remove unused green line
01:32:002 - http://puu.sh/NC2V i t' will be sounds better and betterfollow the music
02:04:624 - remove unused green line

Good luck~~

Guy wrote:

request via in-game
you can ignore my suggestion


　

Lissette's Insane

　●　00:17:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - all note 1grid left? (You make it even with the center line)
　
　Good.

　

AB Style

　
　●　00:22:307 (1,2,3) - It doesn't not match song. move 00:22:122 all note?
　●　00:19:527 (2) - remove note? or change slider biginning 00:19:342 , end 00:19:712.
　●　00:21:381 (9) - remove note, and 00:21:566 (10) move 00:21:381.
　●　00:24:161 (10) - move 00:24:346. and slider end is 00:24:532.
　●　00:24:161 - If you use the suggestion mentioned above, add note here.
　●　00:30:463 (1) - remove NC
　●　00:31:390 (2) - NC
　●　00:35:282 (4) - more curve.↓

SPOILER

　●　00:39:360 (1) - NC?
　●　00:40:287 (1) - spinner end is 00:41:214.
　●　00:57:803 - what this green line? lol　 remove it.
　●　01:03:056 - ^
　●　01:05:032 - SV:x1.00 and resnap green line.
　●　01:05:564 - remove green line.
　●　01:07:720 (1) - remove NC
　●　01:08:461 (3) - NC
　●　01:10:871 (1) - remove NC
　●　01:11:056 (2) - NC
　●　01:19:768 (1) - remove NC
　●　01:19:953 (2) - NC
　●　01:26:070 (13) - ^
　●　01:27:553 (1) - remove NC
　●　01:29:036 - remove green line.
　●　01:46:372 - ^
　●　02:07:964 (11) - NC
　●　02:08:891 (1) - remove NC

　

Hard

　●　00:28:054 - remove green line.
　●　00:56:413 - move 00:53:447.
　●　01:20:510 (2) - spacing
　●　02:03:142 (3) - 1grid right
　●　02:25:017 (1) - spacing..
　●　02:32:061 (2) - ^

That's all~
GL

OtakuRock95 wrote:

Hola Xin-kun!
Aquí Esta Mi Mod!

Esto es en la easy:


　●　01:15:605 (3) Este slider arreglalo un poco http://puu.sh/NLFv OK
　●　00:26:756 (4) Lo mismo solo dale forma http://puu.sh/NLMg OK
　●　00:24:104 (4) porque no subes un poco este circle es solo una sugerencia vale. http://puu.sh/NLQg NO
　● 02:20:568 (2) Agrega Aquí un circle quedaría bien http://puu.sh/NM08 NO
　●　02:07:964 (1) Dale forma a tus sliders http://puu.sh/NM9u OK
　
-Una pequeña sugerencia en los Hitsounds combinalos y no uses mucho el aplauso.

Todo Lo Demas Lo Veo Muy Bien :3!

Exelente Mapa , Te Deseo Mucha Suerte! ~
Pronto Estara RANKEADO Ya Lo Veraz

ikari_kyon wrote:

sdfasdfasf bueno

[Easy]

1. 00:26:756 (4) - me encantaria que el inicio del slider tuviera un soundset normal, va muy bien con el bajo de la cancion, vuelve al soft soundset para que el slider no suene muy raro, ah no espera tienes el slider body silenciado, tons no hay mucho lio
2. 00:28:239 (1) - mas adelante usas casi todos los sliders de 1/1, tal vez acortar este y agregarle un repeat
3. 00:33:429 (5) - el finish marca una seccion de vocales, lo se, pero no estas usando finish en notas similares mas adelante, usalas mas frecuentemente o simplemente quita este finish para que no quede tan fuera de lugar
4. 01:29:036 - perv e.e
5. 01:53:874 (2,3,4) - la formacion simetrica esta muy bien, pero los espacios vacios que quedan se sienten muy mal, rellenalos con algunos sliders, se que haras una linda formacion
6. 02:10:559 (4) - no slider? suena muy solitario
7. 02:46:518 (1) - clap al final?
8. 02:48:743 (3) - spacing error

[Normal]

1. 01:17:173 (1) - ahm stackea el final de este slider al inicio de 01:15:320 (3)?
2. 01:14:207 (1) - porque cambiaste a x1,0 de spacing o:?
3. 01:18:285 (2) - error de spacing
4. 01:19:768 (4) - ahora x0,9 de spacing x:
5. 01:35:709 (2,3) - creo que los finales de estos sliders suenan mejor sin hitsounds, queda mas limpio
6. 02:47:259 (2) - queda un poco chueco comparado al anterior, revisa la direccion que tiene

[Taiko]

1. 00:33:244 (85,86,87,88,89,90) - creo que el 4 - 2 no se ajusta muy bien aca, no me suena que acompañe a nada y no es una buena opcion de variacion de ritmo en esta parte, tal vez solo borrar 00:33:336 (86) - para dejar 2 dobles aqui y alla, o mover 00:33:522 (88) - al siguiente tick rojo para dos triplets

y no hay mucho que decir, no me gusta mucho la manera en que estan los katsu, debido a mi estilo de juego (color por mano) la mano con la que tapeo los katsu siempre se mueve igual y meh

[Hard]

x; bg

1. 00:42:326 (3) - tal vez hacer una copia de 00:41:585 (1), la curva no se ve demasiado bien con el arco de arriba
2. 00:53:077 (2) - hmm, tal vez un 40%~ de volumen? no esta tan lindo el 1/4 aca y cambiar el timeline soft a normal en 00:53:447 y un finish al final soporta esta parte
3. 01:11:983 (2,3) - bajalos 1 grid para que no se topen con 01:11:242 (1)
4. 01:53:503 (5) - no finish, el exceso en esta parte no suena muy bien
5. 01:58:693 (3) - ~ obviamente las canciones naicor tienen estas partes en las que puedes empezar un patron de claps :s

[ABwut]

1. 00:14:801 - revisa que las timelines verdes esten snapeadas correctamente y no puedo entender el porque del speed up :s
2. 00:22:307 (1,2,3) - el 1/4 deberia estar en el anterior vocal o.o porque esta aqui?
3. 00:39:360 (7) - nuevo combo? queda muy largo esto x:
4. 01:55:913 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - se que los naicor tienen streams aleatorios, pero esto es demasiado x.x
5. 01:57:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ↑~
6. 02:00:361 (4) - el whistle en el cuerpo del slider suena ahm, no tan bien, me agradaria que no usaras whistles aqui
7. 02:02:771 (11,12,13) - de nuevo, no entiendo el porque del 1/8, ademas (11) deberi empezar en 02:02:956, suena mucho mejor, agrega una nota donde este comenzaba y quita un repeat a 02:03:698 (13), creo que podras sentir la diferencia
8. 02:11:857 (9) - whistles~ =w=
9. 02:28:539 - comienza el stream con los vocales porfavor, es mas razonable que el actual, 02:34:470 (1,2,3) - asi

[Lissete]

1. 02:03:142 (4) - ahm, tal vez bajar el volumen del inicio del slider a 40%~ el finish esta un poco alto

1. Song filder - BG.jpg - File size is too big(2.25MB) Please reduce it. http://puu.sh/OfTt
2. Song folder - soft-sliderslide.wav - file size 0byte. this is unrankable. you are using normal-sliderslide.wax(44byte) so copy this, and please change the name
3. Song folder - spinnerskin - It is necessary to prepare a set. ( need: spinner-clear.png and spinner-spin.png and spinner-osu.png ) If you do not have a material, please add the default
4. Song Setup - colors - Why does only hard diff have sliderborder color? Also added to the other diff or remove this
5. Song Setup - Tags - Please make all it the same. (It is also the difference of the order.)
   maybe Lissette's Insane tags - Kurisuchianu Lissette Agussdg⇒ change to agussdg lissette Kurisuchianu
6. KIAI TIME - 00:41:585~00:52:706 - I think this is not necessary. I suggest addition instead: 01:05:310~01:16:432. and 01:17:173~01:29:036.

1. AR,OD +1 balance between the normal diff
2. 01:31:260 (4) - add NC and 01:32:743 (1) - remove NC and 01:34:226 (2) - add NC
3. 01:55:727 (5) - add NC i think too log NC in easy x.x
4. 02:01:659 (5) - ^
5. 02:10:559 (4) - add clap instead to whistle
6. 02:14:637 (3,1) - spacing too close. better to use DS1.0x
7. 02:22:793 (3) - add NC and 02:24:276 (1) - remove NC
8. 02:32:061 (1,2,3,4,1) - better to using the same DS
9. 02:37:992 (2,3) - remove whistle to repeat of the slider. I think If you want to use the whistle, and you should put in more constant. I thought it will come suddenly whistle, and I do not need
10. 02:41:328 (3,4) - spacing too close. better to use DS1.0x
11. 02:45:036 (4,1) - ^ far
12. 02:48:743 (3,4) - spacing too close. For beginners, this is very confusing. plz use DS1.0x
13. 02:49:484 (4) - add NC and 02:51:708 (1) - remove NC
    
    rhythm is good. However, I think that it is slightly difficult for easy x.x DS probably is too wide. I thought that 0.8 was enough

1. Slider velocity same as easydiff It is still acceptable. but DS is narrower than easydiff.(easy:1.0x, normal:0.9x) This is not recommended
   I recommend to up more than 1.0 slider velocity (1.1 or 1.2)
2. OD -1 (and HD-1) balance between the easy diff
3. 00:16:376 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. (It is easy to have)
4. 00:28:239 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
5. 00:50:482 (2) - remove whistle to repeat of the slider
6. 01:23:104 (1) - remove whistle to end of the slider
7. 01:42:382 - http://puu.sh/OoGS this break time start move to 01:41:084. ( same as other diff )
8. 01:55:727 (5) - add NC
9. 02:02:585 (1) - i think too short spinner in normal. It is recommended that you change to something
10. 02:04:624 - 3rd kiai end here ( same as easy,hard diff )
11. 02:04:999 - Overlapping red and greenline. plz remove green line.
12. 02:17:047~ - remove this break time. is unnecessary because it is too short
13. 02:21:310 (4,1) - dose not match a little. my suggest: http://puu.sh/OoQI
14. 02:37:621 (4) - add NC
15. 02:43:552 (5) - ^
16. 02:49:484 (5) - ^
17. 02:50:410 (1) - spinner start 02:50:967. and 02:50:596 - add note. is better
    
    DS is a little bad. 0.9x and 1.0x have been mixed. it is better aligned~

1. 00:16:376 (1) - remove NC i think no need NC
2. 00:19:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - In the same way as here (00:16:191 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) -. 00:22:122 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ) Try to match the vocal? for ex: http://puu.sh/OP6R
3. 00:22:122 (8) - Placement of the NC, look is not good add NC here and 00:25:273 (1) - remove NC is better
4. 00:25:087 (8) - ^ add NC and 00:25:273 (1) - remove NC
5. 00:33:985 (9) - ^ add NC and 00:34:170 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:39:175(x) - Because there is a vocal here, 00:39:360 (5) people might mistake the timing this. so i suggest: http://puu.sh/OPeR
7. 00:44:550 (2,1) - I think that DS is close
8. 00:50:111 (6) - add NC and 00:50:482 (1) - remove Nc and 00:51:779 (3) - add NC and 00:51:965 (1) - add NC
9. 00:53:077 (2) - Does not match rhythm. try like this: http://puu.sh/OPiX
10. 01:22:919 (6) - add NC and 01:23:104 (1) - remove NC
11. 01:27:553 (7) - add NC ?
12. 01:31:631 (5) - change to repeat slider? vocal follow
13. 01:32:928 (6) - add NC and 01:33:114 (1) - remove NC
14. 02:02:956(x) - i want to put note here x.x
15. 02:06:111 (7) - add NC and 02:06:296 (1) - remove NC
16. 02:31:504 (9) - add NC and 02:31:690 (1) - remove NC
17. 02:34:470 (6) - add NC and 02:34:655 (1) - remove NC
18. 02:46:333 (6) - add NC and 02:46:889 (1) - remove NC
19. 02:49:299 (5) - add NC and 02:49:484 (1) - remove NC
    
    to put NC have sense of incongruity You do not need to necessarily put it to downbeat(1/1 long white line ).
    It is necessary to sometimes match it with a song and rhythm

1. 00:16:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think too close DS. 00:19:342~ Difference between the DS of from here is very confusing.
2. 00:27:961 - green line. KIAI TIME start - I can hardly recommend that you put it on a blue line. 00:28:239 - You should move here
3. 00:30:463 (1) - remove NC and 00:31:390 (2) - add NC ( same as 00:36:395 (9). and also fit the vocal )
4. 00:38:341 - green line. KIAI TIME end - same as 00:27:961. 00:40:102 - You should move here
5. 00:38:619 (5) - add NC
6. 00:40:287 (1) - I cannot recommend the too short spinner. and I think that this does not match. If you want to use the spinner, suggest1: start 00:40:194, end 00:41:214. suggest2: start 00:40:194, end 00:41:585.
7. 00:41:585 (1) - add NC
8. 01:03:457 (1) - spinner start 01:02:901 is better ?
9. 01:26:070 (13) - add NC and 01:27:553 (1) - remove NC and 01:28:480 (5) - add NC ( same as 02:49:484 (1) ~ )
10. 02:02:771 (11) - ^
11. 02:04:995 (1) - You must put it on a red line. this slider move to 02:04:999.
12. 02:51:894 (7) - add NC
    
    your random whistle is very sudden I recommend that you put it constantly if you want to put a whistle. or otherwise, I think that it is not necessary to put the whistle.

1. 01:15:505 (5) - add NC and 01:15:690 (1) - remove NC. jump point here. It is easy to play the one that you put here and also matches rhythm.
2. 01:35:709 (6) - remove whistle to start of the slider. I think there is no need to increase the sound. melody is approximately constant =x=
3. 01:36:450 (1) - ^
4. 01:37:192 (3) - ^
5. 01:37:933 (1) - ^
6. 02:04:995 (3) - Unsnapped slider. plz move to 02:04:999
7. 02:10:559 (10) - add NC and 02:10:930 (1) - remove NC. this rhythm seems to have put the NC according to the vocal to me .
8. 02:51:801 (1) - too short spinner. 1000score at AutoPlay. this is unrankable x.x;

athiota33 wrote:

M4M
I'm lazy to write,so I'm using screenshot for some mod on general >< sorry!

[General]

SPOILER

The difference of slider velocity between Easy and Normal are to similar >< Increase normal slider velocity to 1.2?
Try to avoid changing slider velocity multiplier on Easy and Normal diff
Maybe add kuri on tags?

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:23:420 (2,3,4) - Make the placement like this? http://puu.sh/QPpL
00:39:360 (3) - Remove finish in the begining and add clap in the repeat?
01:17:173 (1) - Remove finish in the end. It's to noisy ><
01:20:139 (1) - Remove finish in the begining and the end? to make the hitsound same like 01:23:104 (1,2)
02:47:631 (2,3) - Make the rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/QPDu To make consistent with others and it's more easy ><
02:50:596 (1) - Move the spinner to 02:50:967 to make it easier? don't forget to shorten it

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:17:859 (3) - Make this slider like 00:16:376 (1) and Ctrl+ H and then Ctrl+J? It looks nice I think ><
00:41:585 (1,3) - Change the placement? Because (1)'s slider end is overlap (3)'s slider body
00:44:180 (4) - Move abit down like this http://puu.sh/QPJu ? to make more flow I think.
00:51:223 (2) - Stack to with 00:49:740 (4)?
01:24:958 (3,4) - Make it like this http://puu.sh/QPRz? To make more clean.
01:32:743 (4) - NC? because the combo is to long.
01:40:899 - Change the slider velocity multipler to 1.00x It's not neccesary to change it to 0.5x because after this timing there's a break.
01:52:391 (1) - Move the slider to 01:52:762 ,remove 1 repeat, and make it longer. It sounds more good
01:54:244 (3) - Remove finish in the begining? It's to noisy.
01:59:434 (2) - ^
02:00:176 (3) - Put finish in the begining and remove in the repeat. Sounds more good imo
02:17:603 (1,3) - Same as 00:41:585 (1,3)
02:20:198 (4) - Same as 00:44:180 (4)
02:26:129 (1) - I think this spinner should start at 02:26:315

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:26:385 (5) - Make it like this? http://puu.sh/QQ6q
00:37:136 (1) - Remove NC?-w-
00:53:262 (3) - Add finish in the end.

[AB Style]

SPOILER

00:40:287 (1) - Lengthen spinner to 00:41:214?
00:52:706 (3) - Remove wisthle? sounds weird
00:53:077 (6) - Add whistle in the begining?
02:25:388 (1) - It think whistle fits better than clap.
Nice diff~

[Kuri's Taiko]

SPOILER

01:04:569 (227) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Although I'm taiko player,but I still can't mod taiko ;_; But I think this taiko is good~ I like it

[Lissete's Insane]

SPOILER

02:04:995 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Nice diff~

That's it.
Good luck~

1. Inconsistency in Tags
2. soft-sliderslide.wav is only 0 bytes large. Please use the blank.wav which is 44 bytes large
3. BGAGUSSDG.jpg, 294149-1920x1200.jpg is nearly unrankable/unsuitable image

1. 00:44:180 (1) - you made pretty many 2/1 breaks on this diff, so delete this and add a circle at the end?
2. 01:09:759 (4) - 1grid up to be centered
3. 01:19:397 (4) - 1grid right? 2 is on x:60
4. 01:20:139 (1) - 1grid right to be centered
5. 02:04:999 (1) - pretty confusing, maybe add a circle at 02:04:624 -

1. 00:44:550 (1) - 1grid down to be parallel with 4 (now i won't pick something like this.. there're so many so now i don't even know if they're intented)
2. 01:25:699 (4) - looks not so good, put elsewhere or stack on 2
3. 02:04:999 (1) - i'm 90% sure most of players will miss this note, at least keep your distance
4. 02:49:113 (4) - same as 01:25:699 (4) -

1. 00:37:136 (1) - remove NC

1. 01:04:569 (227) - Unsnapped slider (end)

1. 00:40:287 (1) - extend to 00:41:214 -
2. 02:02:771 (11,12,13) - no 1/8
3. 02:04:995 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end)
   i recommend to remap/delete this diff

1. 02:04:995 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end)

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[General]

1. Inconsistency in Tags
2. soft-sliderslide.wav is only 0 bytes large. Please use the blank.wav which is 44 bytes large
3. BGAGUSSDG.jpg, 294149-1920x1200.jpg is nearly unrankable/unsuitable image

[Easy]

1. 00:44:180 (1) - you made pretty many 2/1 breaks on this diff, so delete this and add a circle at the end?
2. 01:09:759 (4) - 1grid up to be centered
3. 01:19:397 (4) - 1grid right? 2 is on x:60
4. 01:20:139 (1) - 1grid right to be centered
5. 02:04:999 (1) - pretty confusing, maybe add a circle at 02:04:624 -

[Normal]

1. 00:44:550 (1) - 1grid down to be parallel with 4 (now i won't pick something like this.. there're so many so now i don't even know if they're intented)
2. 01:25:699 (4) - looks not so good, put elsewhere or stack on 2
3. 02:04:999 (1) - i'm 90% sure most of players will miss this note, at least keep your distance
4. 02:49:113 (4) - same as 01:25:699 (4) -

[Hard]

1. 00:37:136 (1) - remove NC

[Taiko]

1. 01:04:569 (227) - Unsnapped slider (end)

[AB]

1. 00:40:287 (1) - extend to 00:41:214 -
2. 02:02:771 (11,12,13) - no 1/8
3. 02:04:995 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end)
   i recommend to remap/delete this diff

[Lissete]

1. 02:04:995 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end)

Find more and more modders especially nazi modders
I can't say it's 'not bad' now
Good luck with rank

shojimeguro wrote:

Easy
i think it was PERFECT!

Normal
00:01:726 - start here and put soft sound effect
01:02:471 - put spinnner
01:50:865 - and here
the beats seems all in place anyway

since it was > 2 minutes than i only mod 2 diff as written in my modding queue
that's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap wil be ranked soon!!!

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

El mod esta finalizado (en su gran mayoria) en el post que te hice en la pagina previa! Mucha Suerte! :3

Barney Stinson wrote:

THAT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FULL OF SALT. OH C'MON THAT, LESS SALT! OH NOT! I REMOVED SUGAR FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK


Easy
00:43:809 (3,1) - Fix spacing


Normal
02:39:475 (3) - overlap to 1 or move somewhere else


I'm tired. I didn't notice so many bad errors, I just noticed not very good slider forms. If u want u can call me tomorrow to healp

1. Unused file: bgagussdg.jpg. Please remove it from your song folder.

1. The drainrate is 4 at the moment, which is too hard for an easy difficulty. I suggest lowering it by 2.

Tarantino wrote:

[General]

1. Unused file: bgagussdg.jpg. Please remove it from your song folder.

[Lissette's Insane]

02:09:076 (5) - Add new combo.
02:15:008 (5) - ^
02:35:953 (1) - Remove new combo...
02:36:138 (7) - ...and then add a new combo here.


[Hard]

00:36:765 (7) - Put this note here for better spacing.
01:09:573 (5) - Add new combo.
02:32:987 (5) - ^


[Normal]

02:03:142 (5) - Incorrect spacing. This slider is too close to note (4). I suggest moving it upwards... maybe here?


[Easy]

1. The drainrate is 4 at the moment, which is too hard for an easy difficulty. I suggest lowering it by 2.

00:46:033 (4) - Incorrect spacing. Move this slider further away from (3) with 1.0x spacing.

OtakuRock95 wrote:

Hola Xin Bueno Aqui Esta El Mod De La HARD!

~O3O~ Calenta calenta!! (8)!

HARD:

00:19:343 (1) - slider mas bonito porfavor http://puu.sh/ZOKO
00:25:644 (4) - ^ http://puu.sh/ZONM
00:34:912 (3) - Igualmente como lo antes mencionado http://puu.sh/ZOQn
00:35:653 (5) - ^ http://puu.sh/ZOSj
00:44:550 (3) - Te parece si lo haces un poco mas estetico al igual que este 00:45:292 http://puu.sh/ZOVS
00:47:887 (4) - ^ http://puu.sh/ZOXz
01:05:310 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/ZOZD
01:26:070 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/ZP27
02:28:724 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/ZP4N
02:49:484 (3) - hazlo un poco mas estetico http://puu.sh/ZP7z

Bueno Eso Es Todo Lo Que Pude Encontrar Lo Demas Perfecto Te Deseo Mucha Suerte ;D!

SI El MOD NO FUE UTIL PARA USTED NO DE KD!

SPOILER

Modea Mis Maps Porfavor ! Si No Es Mucha Molestia

2NE1 - Scream (Short ver.)
Groove Coverage - Poison (Nightcore Mix)

eLtigreXXx wrote:

easy

00:16:376 (1) buen ps esto es para que se mire simetrico el punto blanco de al final creo es sliderpoint x160 y96
y este mismo slider muevelo a x128 y:112

00:17:859 (2) x324 y292
00:18:230 (3) x400 y224
00:18:600 (4) x272 y292
esto para que este un poco mas ordenado el el 4 no se salga de la rejilla
lla despues corrijes la distancia que se ba ajenerar de 00:19:342 (1) i las que le sigen
00:41:585 (1) el ultimo sliderpoint muevelo a x476 y296 siento que asi se mira mas bonito
01:06:793 (4) mejora la forma y ps no se si este bien que se salga de la rreja aunque sesupone de que no se tiene que salir
01:31:260 (1,3) as estos dos identicos c::
00:46:033 (4) arregla la distancia
02:30:207 (2,3) ^

normal
00:22:307 (1) este eslider aslo curvo identico a este 00:20:825 (3) http://puu.sh/ZP2Y
00:23:049 (2,3,4) esto se mira un poco mal que tal a 00:22:307 (1,2,3) lo pones asi http://puu.sh/ZP5r y 00:24:161 (4) asi http://puu.sh/ZP6o
esliders simetricos i bonitos
un slider mal echo trae muchos problemas :c

• • Nada encontrado

• - 00:28:239 (1) - No quiero fijarme mucho en los sliders pero deberias eliminar un punto de ahi ya que se ve muy feo en mi opinion
  - 01:32:372 (4) - Esta nota deberia ir aca 01:32:002, ya que sonaria bien y seguiria la cancion perfectamente
  - 01:33:484 (x) - Tambien añade una nota aqui ya que suena un poco silenciosa esta parte
  - 01:57:210 (3) - Remueve el finish ya que se oye mal
  - 02:50:596 (1) - Me gustaria que este spinner empezara aqui en 02:50:967 y termine en 02:52:450, sigue bien la musica

• - 01:34:967 (3) - Añade aqui un new combo para seguir tu patron?

• - 00:50:482 (3,4) - Podrias stackear estos slider algo como asi en mi opinion
  - 01:10:871 (5) - Prefiero que esta note le pusieras un clap y que remuevas los claps de 7 y 8 en 01:11:056
  - 02:13:896 (3) - La misma sugerencia anterior del stack
  - 02:34:285 (5) - Tambien lo mismo de los claps

• -- Bien hecho

MoodyRPG wrote:

100

General

• • Nada encontrado

Easy

• - 00:28:239 (1) - No quiero fijarme mucho en los sliders pero deberias eliminar un punto de ahi ya que se ve muy feo en mi opinion
  - 01:32:372 (4) - Esta nota deberia ir aca 01:32:002, ya que sonaria bien y seguiria la cancion perfectamente
  - 01:33:484 (x) - Tambien añade una nota aqui ya que suena un poco silenciosa esta parte
  - 01:57:210 (3) - Remueve el finish ya que se oye mal
  - 02:50:596 (1) - Me gustaria que este spinner empezara aqui en 02:50:967 y termine en 02:52:450, sigue bien la musica

Normal

• - 01:34:967 (3) - Añade aqui un new combo para seguir tu patron?

Hard

• - 00:50:482 (3,4) - Podrias stackear estos slider algo como asi en mi opinion
  - 01:10:871 (5) - Prefiero que esta note le pusieras un clap y que remuevas los claps de 7 y 8 en 01:11:056
  - 02:13:896 (3) - La misma sugerencia anterior del stack
  - 02:34:285 (5) - Tambien lo mismo de los claps

Lissette's Insane

• -- Bien hecho

El mapeo no esta nada mal en mi opinion, acerca de los sliders para mi esta bien solamente trata de fluirlos mas

Solamente puedo decir buena suerte

jonathanlfj wrote:

Mod requested
Just wondering what language is this?

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
use a silent soft-sliderslide.wav too? sounds very loud during the intro

[Easy]
00:41:585 (1) - add finish to slider head
00:50:482 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make these look the same?

SPOILER

01:14:207 (1) - center this
01:37:933 (1) - use a normal finish here
02:01:659 (1) - stack this on the position of 01:59:434 (2)
02:21:310 (2) - make this parallel with 02:19:827 (1)
02:30:207 (2,3,4) - make it a better triangle formation

[Normal]
00:23:420 (3) - make it blanket 00:23:049 (2)
00:41:585 (1) - add finish to slider head
01:32:743 (1) - whistle on slider head
01:37:933 (1) - normal finish
01:53:503 (3) - plays better if you curve the slider the other way
02:03:142 (5) - center this
02:23:164 (1) - add whistle to slider tail

[Hard]
00:23:049 (4) - make this more symmetrical
00:38:248 (5) - one grid left
01:05:866 (4) - take off the clap?
01:38:304 (1) - use normal finish
01:54:244 (1) - take finish off slider end
01:58:693 (1) - ^
02:03:142 (4) - finish sounds really bad...either use whistle or just nothing (and a gradual volume increase technique would work great here)
02:25:017 (4) - the emphasis of vocal on the red line may cause players to hit this too early. either add a note at 02:24:832 (4) or make it into a slider
02:39:104 (7) - make this in a straight line with 02:38:363 (5,6)

[Insane]
00:39:731 (2) - place this horizontally with 00:39:731 (2)
01:19:397 (5) - 2 grids left and 1 grid up looks better
02:03:142 (4) - use whistle instead of finish
02:07:964 (2) - lower this by on grid, and the square formation should then be straight up instead of slightly tilted
02:36:880 (1) - this note is touching the hp bar, which in most cases are discouraged by XATs. try to remake this pattern and lower this
02:50:596 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - this star can look better

SPOILER

Very nice mapset! Hope to see this ranked soon ^_^

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Third kiai ends differently in each difficulty. Pick one ending method for all difficulties.
You need an easier taiko difficulty. A single oni is no longer allowed.


Easy

00:38:629 (3) - End with finish?
01:09:757 (4) - Could be in a more interesting place. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/426656 If you choose to keep your pattern consider straightening the repeat slider.
01:18:666 (2,3,4) - Spacing should be equal.
01:55:727 (1,2,3) - Try to make spacing equal. such as using 0.98 snap.
02:04:995 (1,2,3,1) - Make spacing more consistent.
02:21:306 (2) - Add whistle?
02:30:203 (2,3) - 1.0 please.

Normal

00:20:083 (2,3) - Use 1.0?
00:30:463 (4) - Move down 1 unit to center it between the surrounding sliders.
00:39:731 (5) - Add finish to end. (Perhaps more it more to the right too. It doesn't look right in its current position).
01:36:079 (3,4,5) - Make spacing equal?
01:52:391 (1) - Add finish to end.
02:10:930 (1,2,3) - Spacing should be equal
02:12:413 (3,4,5) - ^
02:24:276 (3,4,5) - Going backwards like that is kind of unusual. Consider doing this instead. http://puu.sh/13euY
02:33:173 (3) - Nazi- Center the middle point?

Hard

01:11:056 (6,7,8) - Move to x 100 y 125? I think it's better that way.
01:34:597 (5,1) - Use 1.0?
01:54:059 (5) - Too close to the slider track of 4 IMO.
02:23:905 (3) - Doesn't match all the other sliders.
02:34:470 (1,2,3) - Same as 1:11.
02:39:475 (8,9) - 1.0?

Insane

00:28:610 (4) - Small, but perhaps reducing the curve slightly would be better.
00:33:429 (6) - This curve is a lot more acute than 00:30:463 (6) - , but the pattern should be similar with similar curves.
00:37:877 (3,4) - Reduce the curves?
01:10:871 (4) - Curve in the other direction so you don't have two sliders curving in the same direction?
01:23:846 (4) - It would be better if this was symmetrical.
02:04:995 (3) - Unsnapped slider end
02:26:315 (2,3,1) - Stacking improperly. You can fix by moving 3,1 to x 81 y 162

Taiko

01:04:569 (227) - End is unsnapped.

Lissette wrote:

My fixes, I don't have time now to respond everyone, but thanks for modding!

http://puu.sh/14A0j

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Na-na-nyan-nya-nyaaaa nya-nya-nya-nya-nya-nya :3
Love this song :3

• only in Normal, Kiai Time isn't separated at 01:17:173.

• 
  OD -1. this diff has a lot of circles. so high OD makes us so difficult to get SS.
  01:06:978 - is there a reason not to put note here? I hear the strong sound enough to put note here.
  01:09:944 - ^
  02:51:801 (1) - actually this spinner is rankable, but I don't like it. looking around your diff, we can find easily that it isn't so difficult Insane.
  but only this spinner, it's too short and difficult. this gap of difficulty makes me feeling unnatural.
  then, how about remove 02:51:708 (6) and put the spinner to 02:51:708?

• 00:26:571 (1) - I really feel strange to the timing of this spinner because the strongest sound is at 00:26:756 but you ignored it.
  how about the rhythm like this to follow the song better?
  SPOILER

  
  (remove 00:28:239 (1), move the spinner 1/2 later and adjust the length, then add a circle at 00:26:571.)
  00:29:722 (5,6) - I wonder why you didn't add whistle to (6). consider to add one. also, it's natural for me to remove the whistle from (5) (start and end) and add whistle to the body of the slider.
  if you do this, please consider about the other section like as 00:32:687 (5,6,7), too.
  00:32:687 (5) - you should improve the form of sliders especially like this one. it doesn't look pretty. make them more symmetrical.
  00:32:131 - why you didn't put note here though you put note at 00:29:166? you should add note here.
  00:35:653 (5) - I think this slider doesn't fit to this section because it ignores the sound of 00:35:839 and 00:36:209. I want you to pick up the sounds of those with any notes.
  00:50:482 (3) - you should be more attention to the form of slider or the placement. in this case, approach circle will help you...
  SPOILER

  
  01:38:304 (1) - it's better to start from 01:38:026
  02:16:305 - hmm..why don't you make it same as 00:52:891 (7)?
  02:25:573 (1) - this spinner should be started from 02:25:758.

• 00:44:550 (1,2) - the flow of cursor is not so kind. this is Normal, so you should make it more easier.
  what I want to tell you is that, it becomes more kind flow if you put (2) on the extension of (1) like this.
  SPOILER

  
  consider about this whole of this diff.
  00:49:555 - I mentioned about this in many times in Hard, so you may understand what I want to say.
  01:53:503 (3,4,5) - in Normal, 1/2 rhythm is regarded as a difficult section. so you should make the flow more easier.

• why don't you add clapsound to the slidertick? make the hitsounds more constancy.
  rhythm seems good. but I really want to mention about the form of sliders.
  for example, 00:19:342 (1) should blanket 00:21:195 (2) better, but it doesn't.
  again I recommend you to use approach circle to improve your sliders.

Sonnyc wrote:

Hello~ Random Mod :p

General:
-- Instead of adding a timeline on the first note, what about setting in on the Red line?
-- Just asking : Why haven't you set the preview point at 01:05:310?

Easy:

01:09:759 (1) - Finish here sounds a bit loud. Replace to Whistle
01:11:242 (3) - NC
01:34:597 (2) - Delete whistle, and add it to the end of (1)
02:13:896 (1,2) - Add Clap at the end
02:18:344 (2) - Delete Whistle
02:22:422 (3) - ^
02:36:509 (3) - Clap--Whistle to follow your pattern
02:48:001 (1) - Delete NC
02:49:484 (6) - NC

Normal :
-- For consistency, Drag your break time to 01:04:105 and 01:51:186
-- As h-728 mentioned, check the kiai time


00:41:585 (1) - Delete Finish at the end
00:53:077, 00:53:447 - Add a note to make the break times all the same
01:05:310 (1) - Add Finish at the Start
01:17:173 (1) - ^
01:16:061 (3) - Delete Finish at the end
01:19:953 (5) - Distance check! Maybe 1 Grid left
01:23:104 (1) - Delete Finish
02:16:861 (4) - NC
02:17:603 (1) - Delete NC
02:28:724 (1) - Add Finish at the Start
02:40:587 (1) - ^

Hard:

00:16:747 (4) - Delete Whistle
00:18:971 (5) - ^
00:17:674 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle-None-Whistle-None-Whistle-Whistle will sound good
00:20:083 (2) - Delete Whistle
00:20:639 (3,4,5) - Make here also sound like 00:17:674 (1,2,3,4)
00:34:541 (1) - Delete NC?
00:47:516 (3) - Delete Finish
00:52:891 (8,9,10) - Making a line will look good
01:11:798 (5) - Make a jump also this note. Jumping only (6) looks weird
01:16:432 (10) - Delete Finish
01:17:173 (1) - Add Finish at the Start
01:05:310 (3) - ^
01:21:807 (2,3,4) - Just looks like a weird spacing. Consider a fixed distance
01:22:919 (7) - Delete Finish at the end
02:03:142 (4) - Use Finish only at 02:03:142, 02:03:512, 02:03:883
02:16:305 (9) - Delete this note, it will be hard to expect this part
02:17:417 (2) - 1 Grid up?
02:24:276 (6) - Symmetry
02:39:846 (6) - Delete Finish
02:40:587 (3) - Add Finish at the Start
02:49:855 (4,5,6,7) - Make better star.. idk pulling 02:49:855 (4,6,7) these 1 Grid up might help

Lissette's Insane:

00:23:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a perfect symmetry.. Maybe this wasn't a symmetric shape afterall?
00:53:355 (10) - Delete this note, no rythm here
02:37:065 (2,3) - Switch places?

That's all! Good luck

GoldenWolf wrote:

irc mod

01:13 XinCrin: Hi! Golden Wolf you can makeme a IRC mod or recheck IRC?
01:15 GoldenWolf: why not, a quick recheck
01:16 XinCrin: you a redownload my map?
01:16 XinCrin: added a new SB and removed skin and diff AB
01:17 GoldenWolf: yup
01:18 XinCrin:
01:18 GoldenWolf: Nothing to say for this diff :3
01:22 GoldenWolf: 00:21:195 (7,8,9) - I don't know if this overlap is ok in a hard diff
01:22 GoldenWolf: Circles are hidden with hitbursts
01:22 GoldenWolf: Consider moving them ?
01:23 XinCrin: wait me
01:23 XinCrin: ok DONE
01:24 GoldenWolf: 00:43:809 (9) - Same here, this circle is hidden by the hitburst of the previous slider
01:24 XinCrin: Done
01:24 GoldenWolf: it can be confusing for less experienced player
01:24 GoldenWolf:
01:25 GoldenWolf: 00:49:555 (10,11) - same here
01:25 XinCrin: o.o ok
01:25 XinCrin: same done
01:25 GoldenWolf: 01:10:315 (10,11) - again here
01:26 XinCrin: xD sorry for the error
01:27 GoldenWolf: 01:19:768 (10) - I don't know about this one, it's covered by the hitburst of the previous slider but I didn't had problem to read
01:27 GoldenWolf: move it or not, it's your choice
01:28 XinCrin: ok Done
01:31 GoldenWolf: 01:52:391 (1,2) - huge spacing here D: Maybe reduce it a bit ?
01:32 XinCrin: done
01:32 XinCrin:
01:33 GoldenWolf: 02:33:914 (3,4,5) - why the spacing suddenly increase here ?
01:33 XinCrin: yeah
01:33 GoldenWolf: 02:30:948 (5,6,7) - same here
01:33 XinCrin: is a bad the spacing?
01:34 GoldenWolf: Not really, but I don't see why it's 1.2x here, maybe juste keep 1.0x ?
01:35 XinCrin: I put the same spacing, if someone else tells me I'll do
01:35 GoldenWolf: ok
01:35 GoldenWolf: 02:36:046 (7,1) - this scared me D:
01:36 XinCrin: I did not realize
01:36 XinCrin: is a very ugly
01:36 XinCrin: ok i changed
01:37 GoldenWolf: k, that's all for hard diff
01:38 XinCrin: thanks golden
01:38 XinCrin: you can pos this ircmod?
01:38 GoldenWolf: yup :3
01:38 XinCrin:

~

tutuhaha wrote:

[Easy]
00:25:273 (1) - make this slider more straight
00:28:980 (3) - move this to X132 Y248 then move 4 to x176 y180,look more better
01:18:656 (4) - just add whistle at the end
01:36:450 (4) - delete whistle at the begin
02:07:223 (5) - add clap at the end
02:13:896 (1) - add whistle
02:16:861 (3) - NC begin there then cancel this NC 02:17:603 (1) -
02:19:827 (1) - change finish to the whistle, more soft listen better
02:21:310 (2,3) - too close
02:40:402 - Unused green line section, please remove it

[Nroaml]
00:17:859 (3) - remove this finish then add whistle at the end
00:22:307 (1) - change that finish to the whistle
00:39:731 (5) - add finish at the end
00:53:447 (4) - add finish
01:29:036 (1) - change that whistle to the finish
01:52:391 (1) - add finish at the end
02:06:482 (3,4) - too far

[Hard]
00:19:342 (1) - remove finish add whistle
00:21:566 (9) - remove this note
00:26:571 - add note
00:30:463 (9) - add nc
00:39:916 - add note
00:48:999 (7,8,9,10,11) - try to make those note look like a straight line
00:48:999 (7) - add nc
00:51:038 - add note
00:51:965 (7) - add nc
01:10:500 (11) - remove this note
01:10:686 - ^ than add note at there
01:52:391 (1,2) - maybe to far
01:56:283 (2) - remove this clap
02:01:659 (6) - add nc
02:06:296 (6) - remove this note
02:19:827 (8) - add nc and remove finish to change the whistle
02:21:310 (9) - remove finish change whistle
02:28:539 - 02:39:846 I think this part was too hard than first part of this diff, you need regulate to make it more average
02:50:967 (1) - sprinner begin there

[Insane]
00:19:156 (6) - move this note to there and remove whistle will be more better
00:21:751 (5) - ^
00:45:848 - add note?
00:51:779 - ^
00:52:706 (6) - add nc
02:16:120 (9) - ^
02:30:948 (5) - ^
02:42:811 (6) - ^
02:45:777 (6) - ^

<3~

-Pikachu- wrote:

Bueno... Random Mod pedido por IRC, pero no tengo mucho que moddear D:

Mod

Easy:

Todo el map muy divertido, y no hay partes que confundan, muy bueno.

00:27:127 Siento que falta un circle aquí y con Whistle si es posible D:
00:51:594 También añade una con clap
00:53:077 ^
01:12:354 ^
01:21:251 (3) Siento que esta demás pero no digo que la quites
01:32:743 Un Circle mas? Y con Whistle
01:52:762 (1) Clap? No digo que lo añadas, queda bien, pero es que siempre que escucho una canción con Nightcore mix siento que debería tener varios claps xD
01:54:615 (1) ^
01:58:322 (3) ^
01:59:434 (2) Whistle?
02:00:917 (4) ^
02:13:896 (1) Quita el clap?
02:15:008 Añade un Circle con Clap?
02:15:378 (3) Cambia el Clap por Whistle?

Normal:

00:18:971 Añade un Circle con Whistle?
00:30:463 (4) Porque no lo cambias por un Slider que empiece desde este punto y termine en 00:30:834 con un Clap?
00:33:429 (4) ^
00:44:365 (6) Siento que esta demás D:
00:45:848 (3) ^
00:53:077 Añade una con Whistle?
01:11:056 (5) Siento que esta demás D:
01:22:734 Añade un Circle?
01:24:773 (4) Siento que esta demás D:
01:27:182 Añade un Circle? Y con Clap o3o
01:54:059 Siento que falta una aquí :c
01:57:025 ^ (Bueno, se que justo aquí hay un Slider, Porque no mejor lo hace y que tenga un Reverse así:
02:04:624 Añade un Circle aquí?
02:43:367 ^
02:46:148 ^
02:49:113 ^

Hard:

00:26:385 Añade un Circle?
01:14:763 Me parece bien un Circle aquí, aunque con ese Jump no lo creo :X
01:26:626 ^
01:27:368 (6) Ponlo en el medio de los 2 Sliders?
01:56:283 (2) Siento que esta demás xD
02:08:520 (4) No me gusta el Stack de esta D:
02:38:177 Siento que falta un Circle =v=
02:42:997 (9) Siento que esta demás Dx
02:45:962 (7) ^

Insane:

00:42:882 Siento que falta un Circle aquí c:
00:48:813 ^
01:40:899 (1) Porque no lo ponen en el centro?
02:06:296 Siento que falta un Circle aquí
02:12:227 ^
02:16:769 ^
02:50:040 No se si valla bien con un Circle mas aquí, me gusta como esta o3o pero es para que siga el ritmo

No modeo Taiko, lo siento ;_;

Gracias por modear y Bueno juego xD

Bueno, todo esto son solo sugerencias, ya verás que a la final mi Mod es malo xD y también overmapping xDDD como te lo dije en IRC.

Me gusto todo el map set

Si tuviera Kudos te daría ;_;

Ya la veo rankeada dentro de poco

Suerte!

Ah, como extra:

Jugando en Insane xD

eLtigreXXx wrote:

[Easy ]
00:19:342 (1) que este cubriendo bien a esta 00:21:195 (2) algo asi http://puu.sh/1bo0R
00:21:566 (3) x:308 y:236 para que este simetrica con 00:19:342 (1)
00:35:653 (4) 1 grid asia abajo
00:40:102 (1) nose aqui seme ase que estaria bien que sonara un finish
00:47:516 (1) whistle en el reverse
00:47:516 (1) ^whistle
00:50:482 (1,2) finish al principio de esos dos i nose si seria mejor un whistle al final de esos dos

[norma]l
01:32:743 (1) wistle
01:33:855 (2) wistle en el reverse
01:34:967 (1) quitas el wistle de aqui
01:34:967 (1) finis quitar el whistle
01:35:338 (2) whislte al final
01:36:079 (3) remueve el wistle
01:37:192 (5) lo agregas aqui

[hard]
02:19:827 (1) nuevo combo ?

son solo sujerencias