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Sphazer - ACCESS

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Mercurial
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Mercurial
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 15 de julio de 2015 at 08:56:21 p.m.

Artist: Sphazer
Title: ACCESS
Source: DJMAX TECHNIKA
Tags: S4 League Pentavision Fenya Darksonic iMercurial KIMYS
BPM: 135
Filesize: 3678kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Amateur (1,72 stars, 133 notes)
  2. eSper (3,59 stars, 275 notes)
  3. Pro (3 stars, 230 notes)
  4. Rookie (1,32 stars, 120 notes)
Download: Sphazer - ACCESS
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Show me your S4 LEAGUE!

Rookie by Fenya
eSper by Darksonic





Kinda.-
Last edited by Mercurial , edited 37 times in total.
Aurele
Global Moderator
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Joined January 2011
Aurele
Istillprefermine
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
YoustillpreferwhatIwant
Aurele
Global Moderator
7,514 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
wtf.
DaxMasterix
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
1,562 posts
Joined February 2010
DaxMasterix
i like potatoes
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
No, you don't.
DaxMasterix
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
1,562 posts
Joined February 2010
DaxMasterix
:c yes, I like
OKAY- Start ta modding

General:

  1. Creo que el Source es ''DJMAX TECHNIKA..'' y lo de ''S4 League'' puede ir en Tags..
  2. Ademas de las Diff que esperas busca tambien un Taiko owo
  3. Agrega ''KIMYS'' a los Tags. (Visualized)
  4. No se si querras ocupar Uno de estos BG's.
Amateur: dat name
  1. 00:00:111 (1) - Finish al Principio del Slider.
  2. 00:15:222 (2) - Se que este Slider esta Bien terminado.. Pero toma en cuenta que seran ''Normal'' ''Amateur'' Players lo que Jugaran esto. Te recomiendo que lo Alargues hasta el White Tick. Ademas te sirve para poner el Clap
  3. 00:17:888 (1,2) - No sea Flojo. Copia tu ''soft-hitclap.wav'' con un nombre de ''soft-slidertick2.wav''. Luego hacer los Respectivos Timing Points para no perder el ritmo de los Hitsounds.
  4. 00:21:444 (1) - Lo mismo que en 00:15:222 (2)
  5. 00:24:999 (1,2) - Lo mismo que en 00:17:888 (1,2)
  6. 00:28:999 (1) - Add a Clap.
  7. 00:29:444 (2) - Remove the Clap.
  8. 00:29:888 (3) - Add a Clap.
  9. 00:32:110 (1,2) - Lo mismo que en 00:17:888 (1,2) y 00:24:999 (1,2)
  10. 00:35:666 (1,2) - Cuidado. Los ''Blue Ticks'' Son peligrosos en Normales Amateurs..
  11. 00:39:222 (1) - Lo mismo que 00:15:222 (2) y 00:21:444 (1)
Pro: No es el mejor name para la diff.. u know
  1. CS +1
  2. OD +1
  3. 00:00:111 (1) - Add a Finish.
  4. 00:01:888 (1,2,3) - Ese salto es un poco.. ''Exagerado''? .. Ademas lo pusiste al Principio..
  5. 00:07:222 (1) - Por qué no mejor lo mueves al mismo lugar que 00:05:888 (2) ... What? Distance Snap?.. Que importa.. Se ve mas Bonito. Ademas.. si quieres despues puedes mover el 00:07:444 (2) Al centro y listo~
  6. 00:43:444 (1,2,3,4) - Haz un triangulo men... Asi es.. Borra esa (4) que nada tiene que hacer allí.
  7. 00:50:555 (3,4,5,6) - ^ Ahora borra el (6) Obviously.. orz Ademas de NC en el (3) Como lo hiciste en 00:46:999 (1) .. Eyup
  8. 00:54:110 (2) - Aqui lo mismo sobre el NC
  9. 01:03:666 (5) - Prefiero 2 Circles.
Nada más que decir.. Llamame Cuando tengas el Mapset Completo.. Talvez haga un Remod~ ^^.. Tienes una Star tambien. Espero que lo rankees! :)
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial

DaxMasterix wrote:

Pro: No es el mejor name para la diff.. u know
HAHAHAHA, las dificultades son dependiendo de los niveles en el S4.

Nada más que decir.. Llamame Cuando tengas el Mapset Completo.. Talvez haga un Remod~ ^^.. Tienes una Star tambien. Espero que lo rankees! :)
Dale, gracias :3
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
star and mod,lol!


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[general]

  1. the music file's bit rate should under 192 kbs

[Amateur]

  1. OD-1 and HR-1 ?!
  2. I think rating should under 3.24 ?!

  3. 00:03:666 (1) - touch 00:01:888 (1) - a bit
  4. 00:09:888 (2) - let it on x:225 y:348 ? will more symmetrical
  5. 00:55:888 (4) - re this ?
  6. 01:02:110 (3) - i think use whistle at the end will be more better
  7. 01:32:555 (1,5) - let (1) on x:364 y:228 and (5) on x:148 y:228 ?! will more symmetrical

[Pro]

  1. 00:01:888 (1,2) - I think this jump too sudden ...
  2. 00:07:222 (1) - covered by 00:05:888 (2) - ?
  3. 00:07:888 (3) - not symmetrical
  4. 00:14:999 (3,4) - distance too small , easy to cause players to press too fast
  5. 01:21:888 (1) - the rotation arrow be cover by 01:21:222 (4,5) - ...
good luck~
and sorry to my poor English
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial

l1106188 wrote:

[general]

  1. the music file's bit rate should under 192 kbs
Thanks man, I have no notice of this.

l1106188 wrote:

[Amateur]

[*]I think rating should under 3.24 ?!
I'm waiting for 2 guest diffs.
ProjectNymph
32 posts
Joined May 2011
ProjectNymph
Uhm~ Nothing to mod for me.
Very nice song + beatmap
Star from me :3
Yoru-hide
68 posts
Joined April 2011
Yoru-hide
Hi! from Yoru-SAN's mod queue~
General:

Use Grid level 4. Maybe Approach Rate 8 in Pro ? Circle Size 4?

Pro:

00:20:542 (3) - delete note, sounds strange.

01:11:431 (2) - add note.
01:30:986 (2) - ^

Amateur:

01:03:097 (4) - add note?

Nice map ! Good Luck!
hibarirailwayz
446 posts
Joined June 2011
hibarirailwayz
from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
I suggest you make under 3 star difficulty.I think "Amateur" is difficult saying the easiest difficulty.
[Amateur]
00:35:764 (1,2,3,4,5) - difficult for normal?
01:36:875 (1,2,3) - I think it is rapidly changing;Drum→Piano. I think you should continue catching drum
01:39:764 (1) - fade out (volume down with Inherited Points) like this↓
SPOILER

[Pro]
00:07:320 (1) - 1 grid down.(leave before circle's Silhouette)
00:44:875 (4) - delete(not match the sound. maybe you cought sound is very little)
01:39:764 (1) - fade out

Good luck!!
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
I suggest you make under 3 star difficulty.I think "Amateur" is difficult saying the easiest difficulty.
If read what I said above...

btw, thank you.
Wreath
435 posts
Joined February 2012
Wreath


hi, iMercurial :oops:

[General]
  1. set a preview point
  2. make a new difficulty (star 3.0 lower) or fix Amateur diff
[Pro]
  1. OD+1. i think better is this
  2. 00:44:875 (4) - i think its doesn't music well, remove note or change to this http://puu.sh/JTOK
[Amateur]
  1. 00:02:653 (2) - remove note, its hard to play for beginners
  2. 00:11:542 (2) - ^
  3. 00:15:986 (3,1) - its hard to play for beginners, i hope change this pattern
  4. 00:34:653 (2) - remove note, its hard to play for beginners
  5. 01:16:653 (4,5,6) - its hard to play for beginners, i hope change this pattern
  6. 01:32:431 (5,1) - ^
sry for short modding :?
good luck :oops:
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
Claro, lo tienes en Pending... Es como obvio que te reclamaran por una diff Easy e_e
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Te amo porque sos una tonta <3
Pagliaccio
247 posts
Joined October 2011
Pagliaccio
Hi, from Pagliaccio's lazy modding queue~

SPOILER
That's only my vision of some places in this song, so you can ignore it ;)

[General]
offset +11 imo in both diffs

[Amateur]
i found 1.0 and 1.2 distance spacing is looking well, so, mabye you try it

00:12:653 - http://puu.sh/K5CX is better imo

00:21:542 - http://puu.sh/K5ED

00:35:764 - imo these parts with single beats looks a little better with spacing>0,8

00:57:097 (1,2,3,4) - bad flow imo; here's the better version (srry for my drawing madskillz %)) http://puu.sh/K5Ns

01:13:097 (3,4,5,1,2) - http://puu.sh/K5RJ

01:25:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/K5TK is better pattern for this part; you can place it something like this http://puu.sh/K5Um simillar symmetric pattern is ok for this diff i mean

01:36:875 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/K5Xe

[Pro]

00:01:986 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/K5Zl

00:15:097 (3,4) - this place is bad readable for me and look something weird; mabye you try don't overlap the sliders?

00:19:764 (1,4) - http://puu.sh/K63e a little better blanket isn't it?

00:21:986 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/K63S

00:35:764 (1,2,3) - the placement of 3rd beat confused me; imo it's better to put it on the end of second slider

00:39:320 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/K67C that's an example of bad flowing, man :( http://puu.sh/K69k is little better, but still may be a problems with reading the patterns like this

01:01:986 (3) - move it to the x:360 y:208

01:25:986 (2) - http://puu.sh/K6cj

01:36:875 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/K6en

Ok, that's all. Hope I helped you. Good luck~
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
Easy 3:

Alli esta la diff y el custom que te dije~
Puedes cambiar cualquier cosa, ahí tu ves :3 (El nombre también, ni idea que nombre ponerle, so :3!)

Mecostohacerlo(?
KokoroStudiox3
1,272 posts
Joined April 2011
KokoroStudiox3
Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

color 2 y 3 no son mui similares ?
talves si remplasas por este o uno parecido
http://puu.sh/KbSU

[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,0,0
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 0,0,128

[Amateur]
00:36:986 (4) - Move to {x:264 y:320}.
00:37:320 (5) - Move to {x:344 y:300}.
00:39:986 (2) - Move to {x:156 y:284}.
00:40:542 (3) - Move to {x:264 y:208}.
00:41:097 (1) - Move to {x:312 y:80}.

[Rookie]
00:00:209 (1) - Move to {x:128 y:64}.
00:12:653 - Add a spinner from here until 00:14:431.
00:14:432 (1) - Remove this circle.
00:15:320 - Add a slider from here until 00:16:208, with a whistle on the end.
00:15:321 (3) - Remove this slider.
00:23:320 - Add a circle at {x:360 y:136}.
00:26:875 - Add a circle at {x:352 y:288}.
00:27:320 - Add a spinner from here until 00:28:653.
00:28:654 (1) - Remove this slider.
00:29:097 - Add a circle at {x:248 y:48}, with a NC.
00:41:097 - Add a circle at {x:136 y:104}.
01:17:987 (1) - Remove NC.
01:19:098 (2) - Add NC.

[pro]
00:07:320 (1) Move to {x:256 y:96}.
00:07:542 (2) Move to {x:256 y:192}.

bueno es todo espero sea de alluda :)
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya

eLtigreXXx wrote:

[Rookie]
00:00:209 (1) - Move to {x:128 y:64}. Nop
00:12:653 - Add a spinner from here until 00:14:431. Nop
00:14:432 (1) - Remove this circle. Nop
00:15:320 - Add a slider from here until 00:16:208, with a whistle on the end. Nop
00:15:321 (3) - Remove this slider. Nop
00:23:320 - Add a circle at {x:360 y:136}.Nop
00:26:875 - Add a circle at {x:352 y:288}. Oke http://puu.sh/KfgJ
00:27:320 - Add a spinner from here until 00:28:653. Nop
00:28:654 (1) - Remove this slider. Nop
00:29:097 - Add a circle at {x:248 y:48}, with a NC. Nop
00:41:097 - Add a circle at {x:136 y:104}. Oke http://puu.sh/Kfh4
01:17:987 (1) - Remove NC. Nop
01:19:098 (2) - Add NC. Nop

bueno es todo espero sea de alluda :)
Es "Ayuda" y no "alluda" n.nU
Gracias n.n

Amor, como son solo dos cambios, podrías hacerlos tu? :3
Los que dicen "oke", te dejo la imagen n.n
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Ok, acá te dejo mi diff 100% terminada.
Reisen Udongein
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
1,073 posts
Joined January 2010
Reisen Udongein
hello mercury~ from my queue :3

[General]
How about Change source to 'DJMAX' and put 'Technika' on the tags ;3?

how about replace combo colour 1 and 2 (or 1 and 3) since Continuous Two Blue colours can be seemed to no change there.

set preview time to 85542?

Nice Drum sounds *_* i like it

[Pro]
OD + 3 HP + 1 for normal hard diff setting

00:06:208 - add circle here with default soft-whistle like you did 00:02:653 ? it sounds nice
00:12:653 (1) - shorten this spinner to 00:13:986 here for players can ready for next note?
00:17:986 (1,2,3,4) - delete claps as you did after 00:26:875 (1) this spinner?
00:21:542 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:25:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:26:875 (1) - shorten this spinner to 00:28:208 here for players can ready for next note?

also , i highly suggest that add some default soft-whistles like this to no hitsounds parts.

for example http://puu.sh/KjxL <- if you want to change like this, you need to hitsound regularly. ('w' means add default soft-whistle. sorry for bad english.. can't explain better)

00:35:764 (1) - add finish on the head
00:43:542 (1,2) - add whistle
00:46:431 (2) - delete finish , add whistle
00:47:541 (3,4,5,6) - add whistle
00:48:430 (6) - delete finish
00:49:986 (2) - ^
00:50:653 (3,4) - add whistle
00:53:320 (1) - add whistle on the head , tail , delete Finish
00:54:208 (2,3,4,5) - add whistle , delete finish on 5
01:36:875 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - add default soft-whistle here?
01:39:764 (1) - gradually lower volume?

[Amateur]

add some soft whistles on no hitsounds parts too!

00:06:208 - add circle here with default soft-whistle like you did 00:02:653 ? it sounds nice]
00:12:653 (1) - shorten this spinner to 00:13:986 here for players can ready for next note?
00:26:875 (1) - shorten this spinner to 00:28:208 here for players can ready for next note?
00:42:875 (1) to 00:55:986 (4) same with 'Pro' diff's mod above~
00:57:764 (2,3) - add whistle
01:00:431 (1) - delete finish , add whisltes on the head and tail
01:01:320 (2,3) - add whistles on the head and tail , delete finish on 3
01:04:208 (2) - delete finish , add whistle here
01:04:875 (3,4) - add whistle
01:07:542 (1) - delete finish , add whistke on the head and tail
01:08:431 (2,3) - add whistle on the head and tail
01:11:764 (1) - delete this since this diff is for players who can't afford to click this after short spinner?
01:23:764 (1) - make this slider's end to 01:25:542 and add finish , delete clap?
01:25:986 (1) - and delete this?
01:36:875 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - add default soft-whistle here?

that's all. good luck~ :D
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Hi iMercurial, mod request from my modding queue :3

[General]
Offset 214 is better to me.

[Rookie]
00:06:432 (3) - What about to reduce it by 1/2 adding a circle on 00:07:097?

00:12:653 I would add a circle with a finish 20/30% volume here, it sounds perfectly
01:17:987 (1) - Finish on this slider's tail?

[Amateur]
00:15:320 (2) - Mh what about to use this rhythm instead? I don't think use 1/4 snap divisor here is a good idea >w<

00:25:097 (1,2) - Oh, If you listen carefully the music here you could use 2 NORMAL whistles with 50% volume on these 2 repeats (On the blue ticks). The sound is awesome
00:29:097 (1) - Don't you think this circle is too soon after the spinner for this diff? I highly suggest you to remove it also because you placed it too far from the center and for beginners is really hard to hit it after have spinned
00:39:320 (1,3) - Same above about whistles on blue ticks?
00:43:542 (2) - Why don't you overlap this slider with 00:41:097 (1)?
01:25:542 (1) - Same above, this circle is too soon after the spinner

[Pro]
00:05:986 (2) - Overlap with 00:07:320 (1)
00:06:875 (4) - Following above, 1 grid down
00:08:653 (5) - Still overlap here
00:26:875 (1) - You should reduce this spinner by 1/2.
00:29:431 (4) - Remove this circle, or you should to add one on 00:30:320 and it isn't a good idea.
00:32:986 (4) - ^
01:01:986 (3) - 1 grid left to improve the blanket with the slider <w<
01:13:542 (2) - Overlap with 01:12:431 (4)
01:18:431 (1) - Finish?

That's all!
Good luck with rank then >w<
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya

Chewin wrote:

[Rookie]
00:06:432 (3) - What about to reduce it by 1/2 adding a circle on 00:07:097? Nop

00:12:653 I would add a circle with a finish 20/30% volume here, it sounds perfectly Oke
01:17:987 (1) - Finish on this slider's tail? Oke
Thanks :3

Por cierto eze, no hagas lo de arriba xDD
Ya lo hice xD
Tonto <3
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]
[Mod Request]
Hai hai omg S4League <3333

[Rookie]
Hot. No mods :3

[Amateur]
00:46:208 - Add circle? If yes fix the new combo's ofc

[Pro]
00:44:875 - Delete this, not needed XD
01:25:431 (9) - Add circle at X:384 Y:240

[eSper]
01:07:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Try this o: the code for it if you want to try is below - http://puu.sh/KpQU
SPOILER
180,240,69764,1,0
256,240,70431,1,0
256,204,70542,1,0
256,168,70653,1,0
256,128,70764,1,0
256,92,70875,1,0
256,56,70986,1,0
256,56,71097,1,0
256,56,71208,1,0
256,56,71320,6,0,B|176:96|176:96|176:186,1,180,6|8

[Comments]
Pro Map. Pro Song. I Love S4L. I give a Star. Good luck <3333 :3
Realdarky
33 posts
Joined November 2011
Realdarky
Hi from my lazy queue :)


General:

No suggestions atm

Rookie:

Mapping is fine, but i would fix star priority to 2 Stars so that its rly doneable for beginners.

Amateur:

01:17:320 (5,6) - insert clap sound and a finish at 01:17:986 (7) - this sounds better.
01:21:320 - insert a slider from there till there 01:21:764 - (in this part of map its relativly easy tried to bring some difficulty)
01:23:542 - spinner should start here

Pro:

00:08:875 (6) - delete this note
01:00:431 (4) - insert a slider there till there 01:00:542 - start the new combo with this slider.

eSper

i just can play this diff halfway so i just wont give a mod to this.


Sorry for short "mod" this map was great mapped and modded before i came ;)

Lg Realdarky
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,804 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Hi.

Let's mod this.

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>Rookie
  1. 00:06:432 (3,1) - Wouldn't the 1/2 here be confusing (at least for the new players)? Maybe change it to a circle and a 1/1 slider with a 1/1 gap, in that order? (There's a few cases like this, btw; feel free to do things by your own way, though.)
  2. 00:15:321 (3) - Make this a 2/1 slider instead of a 3/2 one? I can't really see any reason to make this 3/2 beats long and the 3/2 gap between this and 00:16:654 (4) feels so empty. Also, I'm sure enough there's no S:C2 hitsounds inside the mapset, but you're using the S:C2 sampleset here. Are you sure there are no missing hitsounds?
  3. 00:18:432 (2,3) - I can't feel any audio difference when I tried to listen to these notes with and without Whistles. Are you sure this is what you want?
  4. 00:21:987 (2,3) - ^ (There's a few cases like this later on the diff, so look at them by yourself.)
>Amateur
  1. 00:02:653 (2) - The Whistle here feels so out of place. Remove?
  2. 00:11:542 (2) - ^
  3. 01:17:320 (5) - ^
  4. 01:32:431 (5) - ^
>Pro
  1. 00:09:986 (3) - NC? Extreme spacing changes in the same combo are hard to read. This should help.
  2. 00:11:764 (3) - ^
  3. 00:36:653 (4) - ^
  4. 00:40:208 (4) - ^
>eSper
  1. 00:30:431 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe make some variations by replacing some circles with kick sliders? Yeah, you've done this already before on the diff, but an all-circles formation is boring, IMO.
  2. 00:33:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
  3. 00:37:542 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
Okay... Maybe just that.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
asdf e_e
Solo quita los dos timing point de 00:15:320 y 00:15:986 ~
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
oh...just a star. good luck!
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hi~ La canción me trajo memorias, extraño S4, pero bueno~

Solo son recomendaciones, mi humilde opinion x3

[Pro]

Jumps @_@ Muy buenos x3

00:44:875 (4) - Recomendaría quitar este circulo, no hay algo en la música que indique que debe estar ahí
00:51:986 (6) - ^

[Amateur]

00:55:986 (4) - ^ (En este caso, slider)

Edit: Recién me di cuenta de mas dificultades owo

[Rookie]

( 1 ) 00:06:432 (3) - Alargar slider hasta 00:07:321 - y borrar 00:07:321 (1) - o acortar en 00:06:875 -
00:10:876 (1,2,3,4,5) - Que formen un pentágono regular, 00:10:876 (1) - queda fijo, como aqui http://puu.sh/KwQk
00:22:432 (3) - Igual caso que en ( 1 ) es recomendable que este slider termine en una barra blanca, si se acorta, añade circulo en 00:23:320 -
00:25:987 (2) - ^
00:40:209 (3) - ^


Suerte~ x3
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Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[eSper]
01:07:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Try this o: the code for it if you want to try is below - http://puu.sh/KpQU I think streams here are not necessary.
SPOILER
180,240,69764,1,0
256,240,70431,1,0
256,204,70542,1,0
256,168,70653,1,0
256,128,70764,1,0
256,92,70875,1,0
256,56,70986,1,0
256,56,71097,1,0
256,56,71208,1,0
256,56,71320,6,0,B|176:96|176:96|176:186,1,180,6|8

Hinsvar wrote:

>eSper
  1. 00:30:431 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe make some variations by replacing some circles with kick sliders? Yeah, you've done this already before on the diff, but an all-circles formation is boring, IMO. Yeah, maybe is boring, but is fun to play imo, so no changes on this.
  2. 00:33:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ ^
  3. 00:37:542 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
No changes, but thanks for modding!
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
No changes for me, gracias igual.
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya

DakeDekaane wrote:

[Rookie]

( 1 ) 00:06:432 (3) - Alargar slider hasta 00:07:321 - y borrar 00:07:321 (1) - o acortar en 00:06:875 - Nop
00:10:876 (1,2,3,4,5) - Que formen un pentágono regular, 00:10:876 (1) - queda fijo, como aqui http://puu.sh/KwQk Oke
00:22:432 (3) - Igual caso que en ( 1 ) es recomendable que este slider termine en una barra blanca, si se acorta, añade circulo en 00:23:320 - Nop
00:25:987 (2) - ^ Nop
00:40:209 (3) - ^ Nop


Suerte~ x3
Gracias~

Rookie~
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
Hola! :) Aqui esta el mod que me pediste, aunque rompiste la regla 4.Estas perdonado por que hoy estreno el queue.
Rookie
00:38:432 (5) - Tiene grids fuera del grid level.
01:20:431 (4) - Mueve el grid de enmedio hacia abajo por un grid y despues hacia la izquierda por un grid, creo que asi tiene mejor aspecto.
01:37:764 (3) - Que te parece asi?:
SPOILER

Amateur
00:03:764 (1) - Que tal asi?:
SPOILER

Pro
01:01:320 (2) - Se ve demasiado extraño, cambialo por otro.
01:07:542 (1) - Talvez quitarle el new combo y agregarselo a 01:08:431 (3)

eSper
00:17:986 (1) - Estaria mejor simetrico.
00:50:653 (1,2,3) - Talvez deberias de separarlos a larga distancia.
01:08:431 (2,3,4) - ^
Buena suerte con el map! :)
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Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
No changes, wating for my guest diff people. :3
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic

ezek wrote:

eSper
00:17:986 (1) - Estaria mejor simetrico. Esta hecho así intencionalmente.
00:50:653 (1,2,3) - Talvez deberias de separarlos a larga distancia. Me gusta mas así, a veces quedan bien notas con poco espacio como esas.
01:08:431 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
No hay cambios, pero gracias por modear.
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
Fixed All :3
Gracias~

Rookie~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Yo! Desu!


[Rookie desu!]
* AR +1?
* Since this from Fenya, it should be "Fenya's Rookie" inside the diff name

01:18:875 - Add note here, otherwise beginner will click the next object with early/late timed
01:28:208 - ^


[Amateur desu!!]
00:14:875 (1,2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, could be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read this)
00:29:542 (2) - ^
00:39:320 (1,3) - Why there is a normal-hitwhistle in this diff?
01:21:542 (6) - Move to X:260 and Y:160 to make a diamond pattern looks prettier (Nazi)


[Pro desu!!!]
00:20:542 (3) - Why whistle?
00:44:875 (4) - Remove this note? Since this note is doesn't following piano?
00:51:986 (6) - ^
01:39:764 (1) - You forgot to silence this spinner


[eSper desu!!!!]
* Since this from Darksonic, it should be "Darksonic's eSper" inside the diff name

00:04:431 (2,3) - Not stack correctly with head slider (look at test mode while seeing this pattern)


Desu!
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hi:3 from My queue.

[General]
●fine


[Rookie]
●00:12:653 - volume up to 40% ? very small >.<
●01:17:098 (4) - add New combo
●01:17:987 (1) - remove New combo
●01:19:098 (2) - add New combo.This note is on the red line.If you follow my suggestions, many player would prevent miss.
●01:37:764 (3) - add whistle.i think there should be whistle sounds here , follow the piano.

[Amateur]
●00:06:431 (2) - add whistle(default S) on the slider's reverse.like this pattern 00:01:986 (1,2,3) -
●00:25:431 - volume down to 50% ?
●00:26:320 - same,here
●00:32:208 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end ?i think need some hitsound here.
●00:36:097 (2,4) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
and, i think need some hitsound here. add whistle(default N) at blue line? like this part 00:39:320 (1,2,3) -
●00:49:764 - add note. follow the piano
●01:36:875 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.


[Pro]
●00:04:431 (2) - add whistle(default S).like this pattern 00:01:986 (1,2,3) -
●00:15:653 (4) - spacing too close (0.67x) it is better to use DS0.8x
●00:14:764 (2) - add clap on the slider's end ? put applause with constant rhythm better imo
●00:15:653 (4) - same,here
●00:17:097 (3) - move to x:168 .it'd look better if it was symmetrical.

[eSper]
●00:00:209 (1) - slider's end on the 00:01:097 (3) -
●00:42:653 (1) - add whistle.follow the piano
●00:46:208 (1) - same,here
●00:51:986 (1) - remove whistle.it doesn't follow the music well.


good luck ~ ^^
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Thanks Leorda, desu!

Thanks alacat.
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya

Leorda wrote:

[Rookie desu!]
* AR +1? oke
* Since this from Fenya, it should be "Fenya's Rookie" inside the diff name

01:18:875 - Add note here, otherwise beginner will click the next object with early/late timed Nop :c
01:28:208 - ^ Nop :c

alacat wrote:

[Rookie]
●00:12:653 - volume up to 40% ? very small >.< Oke
●01:17:098 (4) - add New combo Oke
●01:17:987 (1) - remove New combo Oke
●01:19:098 (2) - add New combo.This note is on the red line.If you follow my suggestions, many player would prevent miss. Oke
●01:37:764 (3) - add whistle.i think there should be whistle sounds here , follow the piano. Nop
Thanks :3
Rookie~
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic

Leorda wrote:

[eSper desu!!!!]
00:04:431 (2,3) - Not stack correctly with head slider (look at test mode while seeing this pattern) Oops, my mistake, fixed.

alacat wrote:

[eSper]
●00:00:209 (1) - slider's end on the 00:01:097 (3) - I almost don't see any difference, but well, I moved like you did.
●00:42:653 (1) - add whistle.follow the piano I don't like how it sounds here.
●00:46:208 (1) - same,here ^
●00:51:986 (1) - remove whistle.it doesn't follow the music well. No, because it will break the consistency.
Thanks for modding!
Lizellota
467 posts
Joined October 2011
Lizellota
Hi ~ from my queue ~

[eSper]

00:06:208 (2) - x:440 y:164
00:30:208 (4) - umm..x:168 y:124?
00:45:320 - remove whistle
00:46:431 (2) - add whistle o.o
00:48:875 - remove whistle
00:52:431 - ^
01:15:986 - add whistle
01:23:097 - ^
01:35:542 - ^

[Pro]

00:51:986 (6) - remove this note

[Amateur]

Nice~

[Rookie]

Nice~

Good luck ~ sorry, i'm noob ._.
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic

KersiTyan wrote:

[eSper]

00:06:208 (2) - x:440 y:164 Ok.
00:30:208 (4) - umm..x:168 y:124? Nah.
00:45:320 - remove whistle No.
00:46:431 (2) - add whistle o.o ^
00:48:875 - remove whistle ^
00:52:431 - ^ ^
01:15:986 - add whistle Yeah, it sounds good.
01:23:097 - ^ ^
01:35:542 - ^ ^
Thank you.
Gyuunyu
215 posts
Joined April 2011
Gyuunyu

Hello!

Here is my mod from Palinus - Gyuunyu Duo Modding Queue

[General]

Looks Ok!

[eSper]

00:58:875 (1,2,3) - make it like this ?
SPOILER
01:03:097 (2,3,4) - like this ?
SPOILER

[Pro]

00:35:764 (1,2) - feels weird with that spacing make the closer
00:36:653 (4,5) - ^
00:36:653 (4,5) - ^
00:36:653 (4,5) - ^

[Amateur]

Very nice!

[Rookie]

Very nice!

I hope this helped even tho it's a very tiny mod >.<

Good luck and hope i will see this ranked soon ! ~
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Thanks :)
jamxx
501 posts
Joined November 2010
jamxx
General
combo color 2 is too dark to me.

Rookie
00:24:208 add a note
00:26:875 (3) - move to x:357 y:290
00:31:320 add a note
00:34:875 ^

Pro
Circle size 4 is better
00:07:986 (3) - this slider is hidden by 00:07:542 (2) - .move?
01:23:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is beautiful but too simple.add slider?


eSper
00:12:653 (6) - finish
00:26:875 (7) - ^

I can't find things to pick. Maybe because this beatmap is just great...
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic

Gyuunyu wrote:

[eSper]

00:58:875 (1,2,3) - make it like this ? I don't like how it sounds.
SPOILER
01:03:097 (2,3,4) - like this ? ^
SPOILER

jamxx wrote:

eSper
00:12:653 (6) - finish The music in this part doesn't sounds like to add a Finish.
00:26:875 (7) - ^ ^
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya

jamxx wrote:


Rookie
00:24:208 add a note Nop
00:26:875 (3) - move to x:357 y:290 oke
00:31:320 add a note Nop
00:34:875 ^ Nop
Puedes hacerlo tu, ya que es solo eso?
Gracias n.n
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728

Thank you for request

[Rookie]
  • 00:43:543 (2,3,4) - replace with slider because you put circles continually on red ticks, and it's hard for newbie to follow the rhythm imo.
    00:47:098 (2,3) - ^
    00:50:654 (2,3,4) - ^
    00:54:209 (2,3) - ^
    00:57:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as above, how about this rhythm?
    SPOILER
    and I hope you to fix the rhythm after part(~01:11:320)
    01:19:097 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^
    01:36:209 (1,2,3,4) - ^
overall I think the rhythm you use isn't kind for newbie player
I have nothing to say to placement.

[eSper]
  • 00:37:875 (3,4) - nazi. it will get better flow if you do Ctrl+R
    00:41:097 - add note because you put note at 00:26:875 (7). or it's alright to delete 00:26:875 (7).
    00:41:097 (1) - if you accept above, this spinner should be started at 00:41:208.
    00:42:653 (1,2) - nazi. move to other place not to cover with hitburst of spinner. it doesn't look clear.
    00:44:875 (4) - is there any accent here in the song? I don't think so. how about reduce the volume?
    00:48:875 (5) - ^
    00:51:986 (1,2) - ^
that's all. good luck
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Nagisawa
I'm sorry T.T

General
http://puu.sh/LFa8
why every diff twice?

[Rokie]
SPOILER
00:12:653 - delete green line in timing

Amateur
SPOILER
00:02:653 (2) - remove whistle
00:11:542 (2) - ^
00:54:208 (2,3,4) - whistle in each slider start

Pro
no problem

Esper
good

good luck with your map for ranking!! ^__^
Alltur
530 posts
Joined July 2012
Alltur
From the queue..

Nice map. I already starred this long time ago XD
All modding is suggestion..
Sorry if I wasn't any help XP I'm a newbie still..

[General]
The combo color 2 and color 3 is both blue-ish, maybe change so that it can stand out from others?
Hmm.. the outro after the last spinner, it seems too long?

[Rookie]
Clear
01:40:653 - Why there are green lines on the last spinner in this level only?

[Amateur]
Clear

[Pro]
00:44:875 (4) and 00:51:986 (6) - Hmm.. I think it's better without this note even though there's same pattern of making square with four notes..
01:19:320 (5,6,1,2) - Maybe they are not perfectly overlapped.. I think it would be neat and perfect when they overlap completely but the difference is minimal, so no worries.. just an idea

[eSper]
01:11:320 (1,2) - just a suggestion. How about the tail of slider 1 and head of slider 2 lines up vertically?
01:15:320 (3) - I didn't see that coming there. The background is kind of dark so the approaching circle is not standing out, so player may miss the circle there; the approach rate is fast since it's insane level meaning, more than half of the time, the approach circle is invisible because of the slider behind.

Good luck! :D
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic

h-728 wrote:

[eSper]
  • 00:37:875 (3,4) - nazi. it will get better flow if you do Ctrl+R Sorry but I prefer it as it is.
    00:41:097 - add note because you put note at 00:26:875 (7). or it's alright to delete 00:26:875 (7). Added.
    00:41:097 (1) - if you accept above, this spinner should be started at 00:41:208. Done.
    00:42:653 (1,2) - nazi. move to other place not to cover with hitburst of spinner. it doesn't look clear. Ok.
    00:44:875 (4) - is there any accent here in the song? I don't think so. how about reduce the volume? Ok, reduced to 30%.
    00:48:875 (5) - ^ ^
    00:51:986 (1,2) - ^ ^

Akashi_S wrote:

[eSper]
01:11:320 (1,2) - just a suggestion. How about the tail of slider 1 and head of slider 2 lines up vertically? I prefer to keep that as it is, i'm not breaking the spacing this way.
01:15:320 (3) - I didn't see that coming there. The background is kind of dark so the approaching circle is not standing out, so player may miss the circle there; the approach rate is fast since it's insane level meaning, more than half of the time, the approach circle is invisible because of the slider behind. Maybe you're right, but the note is well placed, so maybe I can try to ask to change Combo Colours.
Thanks for modding!
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya

h-728 wrote:

[Rookie]
  • 00:43:543 (2,3,4) - replace with slider because you put circles continually on red ticks, and it's hard for newbie to follow the rhythm imo. oke
    00:47:098 (2,3) - ^ oke
    00:50:654 (2,3,4) - ^ oke
    00:54:209 (2,3) - ^ oke
    00:57:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as above, how about this rhythm? oke
    SPOILER

    and I hope you to fix the rhythm after part(~01:11:320)
    01:19:097 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^
    01:36:209 (1,2,3,4) - ^
overall I think the rhythm you use isn't kind for newbie player
I have nothing to say to placement.

Nagisawa wrote:

[Rokie]
SPOILER
00:12:653 - delete green line in timing Why?

Akashi_S wrote:

[Rookie]
Clear
01:40:653 - Why there are green lines on the last spinner in this level only? That is a problem? o3o
Thanks~
This~
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
From my birthday queue
This seems to have a lot of mods already...I will try my best

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable stuff

[General]
Rename some of the image files you use as bg? Maybe like s4-league-1, s4-league-2 etc.
Recommend making the tick rates consistent across all difficulties

[Rookie]
00:39:765 (2) - add clap to match with 00:25:098 (1)
00:42:876 (1) - make this a slider starting at 00:42:653
00:57:098 (1) - ^ at 00:56:875
01:39:764 (1) - extend this spinner to 01:43:431 to match the music

[Amateur]
00:36:431 (3) - 2 grids right and 2 grids up to come in line with 00:35:764 (1)
00:42:653 (1) - add a note? (Or make it into a slider to replace the next note)
00:49:764 (1) - ^
00:56:875 (1) - ^
01:20:208 (3) - 01:21:542 (6) - looks kinda bad...make it like this?
SPOILER
01:39:764 (1) - same as Rookie

[Pro]
00:20:542 (3) - remove whisle?
01:39:764 (1) - same as Rookie

[eSper]
00:20:875 (6) - 00:21:320 (10) - 2 grids right and 2 grids down to make it in the center of screen? Doesn't affect distance snap
00:26:875 (7) - add finish?
00:36:653 (3) - make it look like this?
SPOILER
00:57:097 (2) - these kind of blanket sliders look better with two adjusting nodes, so if you would try to make it look better, and maybe adjust other ones after this accordingly e.g.
SPOILER
01:39:764 (1) - same as Rookie

Very good mapset and really trippy music! Good luck on ranking this~~
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Bruno, antes de actualizar tu diff, por favor, tirá update al map, me pasaste la dificultad con mi nombre anterior.

Gracias.
Roxas
osu! Alumni
1,354 posts
Joined August 2011
Roxas
Hi Mercurial from modding queue o/

[General]

In easy the volume in final spinner is graduate and in the other diffs is not graduated

[Rookie]

Hp drain -1, U can't put hp drain like Amateur D:
Why hitclaps are alternated? Make them wqual for all the map

00:33:098 (2) - Ugly.. Maybe like the screenshot?
SPOILER
128,240,33098,2,0,B|172:272|220:256|244:232|256:192,1,160,0|0

[Amateur]

If U don't want to put Hp drain -1 in Rookie, put Hp+1 in Amateur

[Pro]

OD+1

00:04:431 (2) - Softwhistle like 00:02:653 (2) - ?

[eSper]

00:06:431 (3) - Put it like the screenshot
SPOILER
444,76,6431,2,0,B|364:80|344:152|344:152|296:152,1,180,0|8
00:15:320 (3) - Move the 2nd point to x:384 y:96
00:30:208 (4) - Move to x:172 y:116

Gj I like the map :D
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic

Mercurial wrote:

Bruno, antes de actualizar tu diff, por favor, tirá update al map, me pasaste la dificultad con mi nombre anterior.

Gracias.
Nunca me recordaste que lo tenia que volver a bajar...

RoxasGrylls94 wrote:

[eSper]

00:06:431 (3) - Put it like the screenshot Ok.
SPOILER
444,76,6431,2,0,B|364:80|344:152|344:152|296:152,1,180,0|8
00:15:320 (3) - Move the 2nd point to x:384 y:96 Ok.
00:30:208 (4) - Move to x:172 y:116 No, because that would break the spacing consistency.

jonathanlfj wrote:

[eSper]
00:20:875 (6) - 00:21:320 (10) - 2 grids right and 2 grids down to make it in the center of screen? Doesn't affect distance snap Not necessary imo.
00:26:875 (7) - add finish? No.
00:36:653 (3) - make it look like this? That would break spacing consistency.
SPOILER
00:57:097 (2) - these kind of blanket sliders look better with two adjusting nodes, so if you would try to make it look better, and maybe adjust other ones after this accordingly e.g. Ok.
SPOILER
01:39:764 (1) - same as Rookie This is not changed in other diffs, so I won't change it here.
Thanks for modding.
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
Lo siento, pero abandono el proyecto... Puedes eliminar la diff como puedes arreglarla tu, realmente lo siento por ser una persona que comienza algo y luego lo deja. Deberias haberlo sabido
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quiz-chan_DELETED
quiz-chan_DELETED
[General]
'I would rename the BGs.
Not much to mod. Good luck getting this one ranked.

[Difficulties]
Flawless <3

[Style]
Awesome <3
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