Kanna wrote:

Ah no problem!
Thanks anyway~

arien666 wrote:

[Drafura's CtB Insane]
00:06:424 (11,1) - Swap new combo Not apllying for now, (irc discution) gonna post on rule/guideline thread to see what to do about that.
00:08:990 (5) - As the melody changes from this note, why don't you add hyperdash on 00:08:830 (4) :3? Cause i'm a baka, fix'd
00:11:558 (11,1) - Swap new combo Not apllying for now, (irc discution) gonna post on rule/guideline thread to see what to do about that.
00:13:162 - Delete this break manually Fix'd
00:19:258 (19,1) - [Suggestion] Like 00:08:990 (5), why don't you add hyperdash on former note :3? If do, swap new combo too :3 Same sad reason xD Fix'd, but didn't swapped combo.
00:21:825 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:23:429 - Also, delete this break manually Fix'd
00:44:445 (8,9,10) - As [Platter], this tech would be broken if user didn't catch first red note ;_; But I don't know about other ways about this orz I don't reject it, since your not the first one mentionning this pattern. I'll try to find something good for this part.
01:29:846 (7,8) - This distance seems like hyperdash-able distance but hard to catch them with normal speed orz, make little farther? Fix'd
01:56:751 - [Suggestion] Move this green line into 01:56:758 :3? Hmmmm, going to talk about that in rules/guideline thread, since you can't hit a note after the timing section it's certainly a good idea to stack all timing section to the right tick for audio changes.



Sorry for late modding ;___; Thank you for modding *.*

arien666 wrote:

[General]


[Extra]
00:13:001 (2,3,4,5) - ??? What's these sliders? just several 1/8 sliders, with 1/4 breaks linking them
00:24:071 (3) - Seriously, moving that distance within 41ms would be very hard. Why don't you reduce 1 return? I think it's ok, as you can see in the pic the last repeat of the slider directs to the note so the movement will be guided (Make end point on 00:24:311 :3)

1. 01:30:167 (2) - Ajoute un clap sur le reverse, tu en as ajouté un à chaque fois sauf là, ça fait zarb..
2. 01:35:301 (2) - ^
3. 01:51:664 (1,2) - Change pas si soudainement de rythme, ça peut surprendre le joueur. Dans les easy faut toujours garder un rythme constant pour cette raison, donc vire un reverse sur chacun de ces sliders.

1. 01:28:884 (4) - You should consider adding a new combo there, for consistency with 01:34:017 (1) and because it's quite needed.
   

1. 00:12:680 (7,8) - J'aime pas la façon dont ces 2 cercle reviennent à un endroit qui vient juste d'être mappé. Ca les cache sous des hitbursts ce qui n'est pas super joli et beaucoup moins lisible. Ca va beaucoup mieux de les placer comme ça pour moi :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:686 (4) - Je vois pas pourquoi tu fais un triple ici, du moins je sais, ça suit quelque chose dans la musique, mais ce que je trouve étrange c'est que au autres endroits similaires tels que 00:15:969 ou encore 00:16:611 tu n'as pas mis de triples. Je vois donc pas il devrait y en avoir un ici.
3. 01:47:172 (3,4,5,6) - J'aime pas vraiment ce pattern, les cercles sont tout compressés ce qui ne va pas avec les patterns précédent qui sont assez aérés. Là ça fait bizarr.e :/
4. 01:48:455 (3,4,5,6,2) - ^

1. 00:08:348 (1,2,3) - Un aussi grand jump ne va pas bien pour une partie si calme, réduit le.
2. 00:08:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
3. 00:12:841 (1) - Remonte le un peu au dessus, je le trouve trop loins de la précédente note.
4. 00:37:225 (1,2,3) - Le triple ne devrait pas ce trouver là mais à 00:37:466.
5. 00:48:375 - Tu devrais continuer à avoir un triple comme précédemment sinon c'est comme si quelque chose manquait. Sinon j'aime pas ce changement de spacing avec 00:47:814 (2,3,4,5,6,7), ça ne me semble pas approprié du tout. De plus pourquoi avoir un changement spacing ici et pas ailleurs, si tu en met un ici, il doit y avoir la même chose aux endroit similaire sinon ça n'a pas de sens, bien entendu ce spacing est une mauvaise idée donc utilise le même spacing qu'aux endroits identique.
6. 01:07:386 (3,4,5,6,7) - Pourquoi tu mets ce pattern sous le précédent ? C'est nul et moche.
7. 01:15:728 jusqu'à 01:25:996 - Non, pourquoi soudainement un spacing immense sur une partie à peu près calme ? De un c'est pas très logique et de deux ça va pas du tout ...
8. 01:51:664 jusqu'à 01:54:231 - ... euh, je sais pas quoi dire à part que ça se joue terriblement mal, que c'est ridiculement difficile à jouer, correspond pas du tout avec le reste de la map et que c'est horriblement laid..
9. 01:54:552 (5,1) - Bon j'vais pas te faire un dessin, mais 1/4 jump sur du 187 BPM, lolno.
10. 01:55:515 (1) - Ce spinner est beaucoup trop petit, même 700 ms quoi ... la taille minimum c'est 750 ms sinon c'est trop surprenant et injouable.

1. 00:10:595 (4) - Why does this slider ends on a blue tick which follows nothing when there is a piano note at 00:10:755 that should be followed ?
2. 01:34:258 (8,1) - Don't use 1/4 jumps please, that's just ridiculous ...
3. 01:34:900 (8,1) - ^
4. 01:35:542 (8,1) - ^
5. 01:55:675 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^

1. 00:48:135 (2) - J'aime pas cet hyperdash, ça va pas avec ce qu'il y a avant de un mais je sais pas, je trouve pas non plus qu'il ai lieu d'être. Tu devrais p'tet suivre le même schéma que précédemment.
2. 01:49:258 (1,2,3,4) - Ce pattern casse le flow je trouve, ce serait pas mieux de faire un truc du genre à la place ? :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:56:638 (12) - Pour mettre plus l'accent sur la fin, je te propose de plutôt transformer ce slider en deux cercle avec un assez grand jump entre eux.

1. 01:51:664 (1,2) - Short multiple repeat sliders like these are extremely hard to read for beginner players. The reason they are is because the second repeat has to be guessed. Since these are the only double repeats in the map, these are unexpected. Change them into single sliders.

1. Because of how you new comboed the map, there are spots where there are huge drain sections like from 00:55:354 to 01:36:183 (40 seconds long of insane drain). You should either go through the map and have more consistent new combos or drop the HP drain by 1.
2. 00:55:033 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - A spaced out stream followed by compressed 1/2 is extremely, EXTREMELY hard to read (and unnecessarily so). For this section, space 1/2 out so the objects are either fully stacked or not touching each other at all.
3. 01:37:385 (1) - This slider is unsnapped by 2 ms, just move it around on the timeline to fix it.
4. 01:51:664 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is overkill. It's way harder than the rest of the difficulty. Make it all closer together.
5. 01:55:515 (1) - End this spinner at 01:56:477 instead. Where it stops now sounds awkward, and makes the spinner really short.

• 
  Since I can't evaluate this difficulty myself because I'm not an insane uber pro, I got an insane uber pro, fartownik, to help me out.
  Italicized things are suggestions by fartownik. Otherwise it's by me.

1. 00:13:001 (2,3,4,5) - Overmapped.
2. 00:23:750 (2,3) - Overmapped. Overmapped, plays okay.
3. 00:26:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really harsh.
4. 00:28:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really harsh.
5. 00:32:092 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These jumps are also really harsh.
6. 01:34:258 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
7. 01:34:900 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
8. 01:35:542 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
9. 01:36:184 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
   For those stream jumps, try replacing each (7,8) with a slider at (7) instead. Sliders make stream jumps easier.
   I'd prefer if you just make them closer so it's a regular long stream.
10. 01:55:995 (2,1) - This jump is too big.

Kurai wrote:

[Hyper]

[*]00:14:686 (4) - Je vois pas pourquoi tu fais un triple ici, du moins je sais, ça suit quelque chose dans la musique, mais ce que je trouve étrange c'est que au autres endroits similaires tels que 00:15:969 ou encore 00:16:611 tu n'as pas mis de triples. Je vois donc pas il devrait y en avoir un ici.

Kurai wrote:

[Extra]

1. 00:10:595 (4) - Why does this slider ends on a blue tick which follows nothing when there is a piano note at 00:10:755 that should be followed ? fixed
2. 01:34:258 (8,1) - Don't use 1/4 jumps please, that's just ridiculous ... yes I think so. fixed by charles' suggestion
3. 01:34:900 (8,1) - ^
4. 01:35:542 (8,1) - ^
5. 01:55:675 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ see my reply below (charles's mod)

[/list]

Charles445 wrote:

Extra

• 
  Since I can't evaluate this difficulty myself because I'm not an insane uber pro, I got an insane uber pro, fartownik, to help me out.
  Italicized things are suggestions by fartownik. Otherwise it's by me.

1. 00:13:001 (2,3,4,5) - Overmapped. changed to 1/4 sliders
2. 00:23:750 (2,3) - Overmapped. Overmapped, plays okay. 1/8 isn't overmapped here, keep
3. 00:26:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really harsh. if all people against this, I will change, but I still wanna see is it a necessary to make the change
4. 00:28:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really harsh.
5. 00:32:092 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These jumps are also really harsh. this one is much easier imo
6. 01:34:258 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake. fixed
7. 01:34:900 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
8. 01:35:542 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
9. 01:36:184 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake. keep the circle here, since the jump is no that large
   For those stream jumps, try replacing each (7,8) with a slider at (7) instead. Sliders make stream jumps easier.
   I'd prefer if you just make them closer so it's a regular long stream.
10. 01:55:995 (2,1) - This jump is too big.decreased the spacing

1. Added 31's Taiko. Thanks Mapper 31!
2. Mod for Standard applied with Quilt's permission
3. Hyper updated
4. Extra updated

Kanna wrote:

Weew getting 2 BATs at the same time was an unexpected thing . Anyway, applied almost everything for my difficulties. I hope map is better now. Thanks for your mods guys!

Sallad4ever wrote:

I agree with the harsh jump mentioned by Charles on the Extra diff, while they are playable it's more of a tedious jumps rather than a fun one. I really suggest to consider to decrease the jump or if it's possible, use another pattern. While your at it, maybe decrease the distance of 01:56:477 (1) too? cause after the 1/4 jump it's quite harsh for the player to aim at the close spaced stream

1. Extra updated
2. Used 1 tick slider on Another difficulty

Kurai wrote:

[Drafura's CtB Platter]

1. 00:48:135 (2) - J'aime pas cet hyperdash, ça va pas avec ce qu'il y a avant de un mais je sais pas, je trouve pas non plus qu'il ai lieu d'être. Tu devrais p'tet suivre le même schéma que précédemment. Fix'd
2. 01:49:258 (1,2,3,4) - Ce pattern casse le flow je trouve, ce serait pas mieux de faire un truc du genre à la place ? :
   
   SPOILER

   
   Fix'd (avec une position un peu différente, plus sexy je trouve, mais dans le même ordre d'idée)
3. 01:56:638 (12) - Pour mettre plus l'accent sur la fin, je te propose de plutôt transformer ce slider en deux cercle avec un assez grand jump entre eux. Ok mais j'ai gardé un slider pour pas casser la gueule du pattern (slider 2x)

1. Platter updated

1. Added to tags: Mapper_31
2. Removed Letterbox during breaks in Taiko for Mapper 31

1. Changed Combos Colours on your advises
2. Modified the slider part in Another difficulty

Charles445 wrote:

LKs,

00:13:001 (2,3,4,5) - This is overmapping. Instead of having those repeats during a completely silent part, try putting a spinner there. It may sound odd at first but it actually plays really well. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/351159 Also, it'll be the only spinner in the map. (it's good to have at least one) A spinner? OK I never thought a spinner here but it seems good

01:36:183 (8,1) - This ending to that giant stream totally kills it. Those slider stream jumps were fun, but this was not. This is the only thing I really hate in this diff. If you really want a jump make the 7,8 a slider. I made note8 ovelaps on note1 and adjusted the spacing.

1. Fixed files names
2. HP-1 on Another

1. 01:35:301 - Don't use a 0.50x timing section, this way the stream is overlapped by previous 1/2 notes which is very confusing and hard to read.
   
   SPOILER

   

Kanna wrote:

when he doesn't want apply something, he doesn't reply to the mod.

thelewa wrote:

Fuck yes a map by Kanna, and the Another kicks ass! This definitely deserves a 10!

... wait it has an LKs diff, instant 1