Envi wrote:

I come here from t/85346
now let see...

249's Easy

1. 00:01:097 (1,2) - instead of make the (2) position like that, i think it would be better if you make it symmetrical with (1), can be done by copy paste the (1) and then flip it horizontally :3, but if you do this, automatically you should fix the next slider after this two too. no. i want this to be a straight path. if it's near the middle of the song, the i'd make this symmetrical. but since this is the introduction, i'm gonna keep it.
2. 00:12:891 (3) - i think this kind of position are not really friendly with the player when playing it, If it was me, i think i'll just make that (3) on the lower side (under the 00:11:908 (2) - ) instead placing it on the right side of (2).
   It would be like this:
   
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   then the flow would look weird if i put (3) below (2).
3. 00:20:753 (3,4,5) - make this a zigzag pattern instead of straight pattern? seems a bit monotonous here no because the straight pattern represents the introduction.
4. 00:34:512 (2,3,1) - Same as above, i think the flow between that three notes/slider are not very friendly to play by the newbies, consider move the 00:35:987 (3,1) - into the right maybe? Something like this can works too:
   
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   no but i did something else similar to what you said.
5. 00:38:935 (3) - I think it's not really necessary to put this notes here, besides it will form a 1/8 beats on that part, it was also the only pattern on the whole pattern that using the 1/8 beats, so i think remove this notes will be ok.
   Also if you really wanna make it, i think it would be good if you starting to use that 1/8 beat pattern from 00:22:719 (6,1) - instead, since they're also have similar song line. i thought i fixed this i swear. fixed again >.<
6. 00:52:694 (2) - this slider are a bit more curved when i'm see it, compared with 00:54:168 (3) - , I think this can be fixed by make the slider curve on (2) same with (3), and vice versa if you wanna d it reverse.
   Make it an anchor pattern would be good too, like this:
   
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   no then that'd ruin the blanket for (4). i don't want these 2 sliders to be the same.
7. 00:55:643 (4) - stack this with 00:52:203 (1) - , I the flow from 00:54:168 (3,4) - seems too sharp and really hard for the newbies to play imo ^
8. 00:55:643 (4) - as for this, i recommend to move position into the 00:55:643 (4) - position before i'm ask you to stack it with (1), and then rotate it a bit to right. Since it can fix the flow between 00:58:100 (2,3) - , it was also able to forming an arc pattern on 00:58:100 (2,3,1,2)
   
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   hmm i guess this will work. after all (2) is stacked on (4).
9. 01:24:144 - put the notes here? I think it would be weird if you just make this part spaced out while after that part, you make quite long 1/4 beat pattern no i need to give some time for beginners to get ready after the spinner.
10. 01:33:480 (3) - make this slider with the same curve as 01:31:515 (1) - , way more better and it can makes the pattern more consistant i thought i did this. fixed.
11. 01:44:783 (2) - move this down a bit. i see the 01:43:308 (1) - repeat slider and 01:44:783 (2) - slider are too near from each other no but i moved it between the slider to make a blanket.
12. 02:02:964 (1) - move this down, although the flow on 02:02:473 (6,1) - is nice, but it was bad on 02:02:964 (1,2) - .
    
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    sorry no i don't want to ruin my flower pattern.
13. 02:04:439 (2,3,4,5,6) - fix this pentagon pattern, doesn't seems like pentagon at all (seems flatted) tbh idk how to fix it.
14. 02:08:861 (2,3,4,5) - makes the zigzag pattern here? no the flow would look weird if i do this. i want this to be a smooth path to the next combo.
15. 02:20:163 (2) - move this notes into upper part from 2 slider instead of downpart, x352 y60 is fine hmm alright i guess this'll work.

I think that's all.
From my viewpoint, i saw that many part on this mapset are still able to be improved, take this into some consideration from me to make this mapset better(also for the next work of yours)^^
Good luck~

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~
General

1. Kiai must be the same in each diff, check it
   nope look at this and this. if you notice the GDs, 1 has the kiai burst while the other has no kiai at all.

249's Easy00:44:340 (1,1,1) - add finishes there i added the finishes on the spinner but not on the circle. i find it unfitting to the song.01:08:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - move them like this:

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the only difference i see is the slider. fixed.01:36:920 (2) - stack it with (4) oh wow it does. fixed.01:40:360 (2,3,4) - i suggest you remove it and add a slider, it will be better for the rythm no i don't want to ruin the shape i'm forming.01:47:240 (1) - 6-7 grids right fixed this on the other mod.02:16:232 (2,3,4,5) - try this:

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hmm alright. it makes a nice border for (1).02:22:620 (1,1,1) - finishes same as 00:44:340.

Makar8000 wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]

1. 00:12:399 (4,1) - The flow isnt very good here... I would suggest horizontally flipping the sliders and everything after it but that'd be kinda complicated to fix..
   - Fixed

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]
[*]00:31:564 (2) - Ctrl+R?
- Fixed[/list]

Weezy wrote:

Baka Pop's Insane
Can't have slider and slider tick both silent, unrankable...
- It's not, as long as not all ticks are silent

Envi wrote:

DJPop's Insane

1. Is it just me or i feel that the custom hitclap sound here are really weird here? It's still pretty match with the song beats though, just, i'm expecting to hear a snare drum voice rather than muted-like voice (i don't know what kind of voice type here xD) for the hitclap here :3
   - Added new clap file :3
2. Also, when i try it, i saw that you make some pattern in this dif without any note while i think it was supposed to be a note there since the vocal it's still goes/the bgm doesn't have any slowdown/pause feel like:
   00:18:296 -
   00:19:033 -
   00:22:227 -
   00:23:210 -
   00:26:160 -
   I think for the rest, you're already know it by yourself, just take this into consideration :3.
   since this diff are insane, i think you don't need to hold back to make the diff seems easier because you're not adding the notes that i mention above.
   - No changes here because I like what they are. If you listen to the song carefully, you'll know why I made rhythm like that :3

Vass_Bass wrote:

DJPop's Insane

1. 00:36:232 (6) - whistle?
   - Added
2. 00:39:918 (5) - ^
   - Added
3. 01:49:205 (1) - finish there seems odd
   - Obvious cymbal through my left ear

Musty wrote:

Moe Sekai >///<

[249's Easy]

1. 01:03:996 (1) - This New Combo is useless imo. no it's not useless. the lyrics change from here so that's why i made this note a NC.
2. 02:17:215 (3) - Did you missed the Clap? nope this is intentional.my clap rhythm changes because since the kiai is coming up, i want the claps to be slow at 1st, and then when the kiai reaches, it'll go back to its original clap pattern.

Not really much things to say hahahahaha.

Can't find anything else in other difficulty this mapset is too fine for be modded, DON'T NEED ANY CHANGE SEKAI SENSEI RANK IT NAO >///< ( inb4unoob unomod ulazy ufckingbastard :'( )

Starry wrote:

HiHi~

[249's Easy]

00:06:994 (4) - Maybe you should make this curved? Just to be consistent on slider shapes in that combo. i made this a straight slider mainly because of the tone of the piano. if it was a 2/1 slider i would make this a curved slider but since it's a 1/1, i think it'd be better if it was a straight slider.
00:40:409 (1) - Maybe its just me. But I think this would look nicer if you curved it more. no it looks nice enough. there are people that are telling me that my curved sliders should be nicer, i always say no to them because i'm not focusing on how nice the curved slider looks but on how smooth it flows to the next note.
00:56:134 (1) - Shorten this slider a bit so it ends back one white tick. then that would ruin the flow in vocals. i don't want to overuse the 1/1 lines just for that.
00:58:100 (2) - If you fixed the above you should move this back 1 tick and make the slider longer. Just saying because this follows the rhythm better.
01:15:790 (5) - Remove this note? no because if you remove it, you'll clearly hear the sound of the cymbals.
01:50:188 (2) - ^ no i wanna continue the rhythm. if i remove it it'd be a boring wait for players.
01:47:240 (1) - If you do the above you can make this slider longer.
02:08:861 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/xvQc no i want this to be a smooth flow to the slider. this one however is that you have to move down from (4,5) and then across to (1) and that doesn't flow that smooth to my expectations.

Nice~

Starry wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]
01:08:910 (3,4,5) - Maybe replace with this slider note? 01:07:928 (1) -
- X
02:06:404 (3) - Shouldn't this slider be facing the other direction? o-o
- Fixed

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]

1. 00:09:697 - Add whistle.
   - Doesn't consistent with previous part
2. 00:20:753 - Add whistle and Remove 00:21:245.
   - Removed all whistles
3. 00:24:684 (1) - Same as above.
   - Doesn't sound right for me
   
   Fixed some whistles and volume in other parts too

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ -Sekai- ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

[249's Easy]

1. Change same kiai time? no i wanna try something different instead.
2. AR+1 much better play. i disagree. since this is a slow song, AR3 would look too fast for beginners to keep up.

That's all ~ Nice song ~

Good luck with rank ~