1. Hard (4.74 stars, 490 notes)
2. Lunatic (5 stars, 746 notes)
3. Normal (2.97 stars, 254 notes)

1. Enable letterbox during breaks?
2. 02:16:491 Mh.. Is the .mp3 damaged or is it the original song in this way? o.o It seems damaged, it sounds so bad...

1. 00:46:491 (1) - nazi mod, but improve this blanket using this code:
   

   404,140,46491,6,0,B|444:196|412:256,2,120,4|0|2

2. 00:49:509 (1) - Start and end it with finishes
3. 00:50:453 (2,1) - No, this is a bit hard for beginner players, since this is your easiest map. Fix it in this way, adding a finish at the end of 00:50:453 (2), it's much better:
   
4. 00:51:962 (5) - Add new combo
5. 00:53:094 (1) - Remove nc
6. 01:49:887 (1) - Start with finish
7. 01:52:906 (1) - ^
8. 01:58:943 (1) - ^

1. 01:37:811 (1) - 20% volume is better :3
2. 02:07:434 (1) - Remove new combo?
3. Awesome map *-*

1. 00:48:943 (1) - I have tried to play the map and this is the only problem I found. This slider is weird and it's easier to get 100 than 300 when you play it for the first time. Remove this 1,50x and fix the slider:
   

Chewin wrote:

Hai, from my queue ~

General

1. Enable letterbox during breaks? oh , I hate letterbox during breaks :p , no change orz
2. 02:16:491 Mh.. Is the .mp3 damaged or is it the original song in this way? o.o It seems damaged, it sounds so bad... Ah really bad , Thanks for point out ! , I will full-upload new mp3

Hard

1. 01:37:811 (1) - 20% volume is better :3 \:D/ yeah, It's better :3
2. 02:07:434 (1) - Remove new combo? ok
3. Awesome map *-* Thank you >.<''

Lunatic

1. 00:48:943 (1) - I have tried to play the map and this is the only problem I found. This slider is weird and it's easier to get 100 than 300 when you play it for the first time. Remove this 1,50x and fix the slider: oh , I worried at the first time I finished mapping but I sent it to 249 or fanzhen to test it , they didn't face a problem from this slider(they didn't notice that slider has new velocity LOL and it sounds same as 02:15:924 (1) - ) , I think I would like to keep it for consistence , sorry = =''
   

Nothing to say, awesome mapset, star ~

EDIT : just listened from http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lvlEKFQ-MKA. It sounds same as this mp3 . So I think it isn't a problem now \:D/

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there

Hard:

00:28:344 (1) - add whistle on start? added
00:31:363 (1) - ^ added
00:34:382 (3) - add whistle? sure (I didn't add all of these sound = ='')
02:54:759 (1) - add NC? oh sorry , It will frequently of new combo over it should be.
04:07:590 (1) - too close to (4) oh my mistake = ='' fixed~

Insane:

02:04:948 (7) - add NC fixed
02:05:514 (1) - remove NC fixed
04:03:439 (2,3) - maybe try it like this? http://puu.sh/whmj It's fine but thx for suggestion \:D/

nice map =w=

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

nazi-modder here :3

[General]
clear

[Normal]
OD -1 / AR -1
i don't think that its ok to use slow section here

00:26:458 (1) - big white line = whistle? yes
00:27:212 (2) - reverse arrow - whistle no
00:33:627 (3) - new combo? I would new (5) instead but I think it's fine :3 , no change
00:43:061 (4) - x348 y64 eh -_- ? x352 isn't that bad ''orz , also I will ruin stacking from 00:44:948 (1) -
00:46:080 (4) - x448 y280 It won't balance with (1) = =''
00:53:439 (1) - end point - 1 grid right It won't perfectly curve with 4 and make it more closer with 2
01:24:948 (4) - http://puu.sh/wPNr Thanks for suggestion here , but I couldn't add finish if I did like that
03:04:193 (1) - make symmetrical? ~_~ I don't like symmetrical much (It looks boring sometime, many ranked map had it -*-

[Lunatic]
seems pretty clear for me :3 good job YEAH ! Thanks \:D/

[Hard]
00:48:156 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/wPOX Move a bit xD
02:29:665 (2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/wPQg thx :3 but It's ok Dx (It won't be symmetrical with 02:30:986 (2) -
02:37:401 (5) - end point - 1 grid up won't be stacking with 02:35:703 (1) - ._.
03:08:910 (2) - don't like this pattern because looks like there's hidden reverse arrow ;_; orz
03:08:910 (2,5) - stack properly It won't be complete stacking with 03:08:344 (1) - instead o..o''
03:13:627 (4) - x320 y188 okay~


~~~~~~~~~

looks fine, good luck \:D/

• [General]

1. Just some BG suggestion :3
   
   BG

   
   
   [Normal]
2. 01:14:759 (2,3) - Turn these sliders into something like this? If you do, fix the spacing of the following notes.
   
   pic

   
   
   [Hard]
3. 04:02:495 (1) - Try making this look more nice, something like this:
   
   pic

   
   
   [Lunatic]
4. 00:31:929 (2,3,4) - The spacing between these notes are not that good, try fixing them, and I came up to this: (my point is that you get what I mean)
   
   pic

   

That's all!~ Sorry I wasn't able to point out that many things since your map is too good OAO
Good luck anyway!~

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello!~ Here's my mod~ Sorry for being quite late >< (a request from my queue)

• [General]

1. Just some BG suggestion :3 Thx :3 but I see some songs in this game had this bg in a map already also my current bg is too moe
   
   BG

   
   
   [Normal]
2. 01:14:759 (2,3) - Turn these sliders into something like this? If you do, fix the spacing of the following notes. It's off imo- -''
   
   pic

   
   
   [Hard]
3. 04:02:495 (1) - Try making this look more nice, something like this: Fixed, my bad -..- , I'm such a noob slider art ~
   
   pic

   
   
   [Lunatic]
4. 00:31:929 (2,3,4) - The spacing between these notes are not that good, try fixing them, and I came up to this: (my point is that you get what I mean) It will be harder to see (4) because (1) covers it
   
   pic

   

That's all!~ Sorry I wasn't able to point out that many things since your map is too good OAO
Good luck anyway!~

1. all diff last spinner gradually cut down on the volume

1. Hmm,I cant hear hitsound should be volume up?
2. 00:47:024 - how about this? I use spacing1.5http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326726
3. 00:51:929 (1,2,3) - I suggestion use spacing 2.0? maybe players enjoy 2.0
4. 02:41:741 (1) - spinner end silence?
5. 03:16:646 (6) - New combo
6. 03:45:325 (4) - Hmm duesnt fit song this note? should be remove this note

1. 00:08:910 (1,2) - move to 00:08:722? if you change add note with 00:09:476
2. 01:35:325 (3) - slider looks bad http://puu.sh/x2Zj

1. looks fine

1. 00:10:420 (2,3) - there is 1/4 in music, so place 1/4 repeat slider here?
2. 00:12:684 (1,2) - I don't think this triplet fits the song, it kinda slows down, 1/1 here instead of a jump would be better to play.
3. 00:31:175 (1) - move third sliderpoint to (128,160) and 4th sliderpoint (120,124), the blanket looks better in this way.
4. 00:32:495 (3) - It should be in the center of two sliders?
5. 00:33:439 (6) - remove this, may be better to play.
6. 00:48:910 (1) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot536.jpg change to this shape? it fits music imo, and can reduce the awkwardness for speedup.
7. 01:10:703 (5) - add note
8. 02:15:891 (1) - nice!!
9. 02:04:948 (1,2) - slider 1/4repeat + note? I think this slider doesn't fit very much
10. 02:39:288 (4) - move 2 grids up for better blanket and feeling of the jump
11. 03:14:948 (4) - move up 2 grid ._.
12. 03:41:741 (2) - I suggest a slow down here like this: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot538.jpg (75% speed). I think it fits the song pretty well~
13. 03:42:495 (1,2,3) - this triangle is not accurate

1. 00:01:741 (2) - this blanket doesn't look good ._.
2. 00:07:024 (5) - move 1/2 earlier please
3. 03:01:741 (2) - move 2nd slider point 1 grid down ._.
4. 04:12:684 (1) - why nc._. nc at (4) green?

1. 00:10:042 (2,3,4) - ._. this can be confusing to beginners!!
2. other than that I think this diff is fine ^^

1. 00:10:042 (2,3,4) - no, not fit at all with music, you should use rhythm like this
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:33:627 (3) - NC
3. 00:44:948 (1) - remove this useless NC
4. 00:51:929 (3) - NC
5. 01:52:873 (4) - you may wnat to NC here
6. 04:19:288 (1) - spinner end point 04:26:835 -

1. 00:50:420 (1) - centering bewteen 00:49:476 (1,2) - will be more looks good
2. 02:17:024 (1) - to follow the vocal, shorten it to 02:17:401 - and add a circle at end? likt his 02:18:533 (4) -
3. 03:01:552 (1,3) - switch NC? due to downbeat and it's not fit now imo
4. 03:44:005 (3) - i don't like this touching HP bar note.. move down (and left)?
5. 04:19:288 (1) - same as Normal

1. 00:32:684 (4) - to keep your combo rhythm, NC here?
2. 00:39:288 (1,2) - ctrl+r
3. 00:39:854 (1,2) - ^ will have more good mood
4. 00:55:514 (1) - i think 3/4 is really not fit with music.. fix it or not, up to you
5. 00:56:835 (5) - ^
6. 01:00:986 (1,2,3) - not good jump imo, you can make it more beautiful and exciting, copy paste from 01:00:420 (2,3,4) - and scale x2 and stack 1 on 2? like this. if you follow this, of course you should arrange 01:01:741 (1,2) -
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:01:741 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 2 2 3 is not fit imo, try 3 4 or 3 2 2? will be better to understand the rhythm
8. 01:09:665 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - how about make star or pentagon shape?
9. 01:10:608 (4,1,2,3) - it's good now, but i think this rhythm will be best for you. you can start 3 from 2 and add 1 arrow as well
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:11:741 - whistle?
11. 01:49:854 (1,2,3) - not fit imo, i'd start slider from 01:49:854 - to 01:50:231 - and add a circle at 01:50:420 - for its slow mood part
12. 02:27:212 (5,1) - for the confusing 3/4 rhythm, i'd use rhythm like this
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 03:11:175 (1,2) - useless NC and not fit for 1, why didn't you started combo from 03:11:363 (2) -
14. 03:20:137 (2) - distance 2.0x or 2.1x? a bit confusing but up to you
15. 03:51:175 (1,2,3,4) - how about make star or pentagon shape with the 5 beats?
16. 04:19:288 (1) - same as Normal

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[General]
Fine

[Normal]

1. 00:10:042 (2,3,4) - no, not fit at all with music, you should use rhythm like this fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:33:627 (3) - NC
3. 00:44:948 (1) - remove this useless NC
4. 00:51:929 (3) - NC
5. 01:52:873 (4) - you may wnat to NC here added
6. 04:19:288 (1) - spinner end point 04:26:835 - okay~

[Hard]

1. 00:50:420 (1) - centering bewteen 00:49:476 (1,2) - will be more looks good I follow these 00:51:363 (2,3) - , try to curve same as these
2. 02:17:024 (1) - to follow the vocal, shorten it to 02:17:401 - and add a circle at end? likt his 02:18:533 (4) - no , thank you :3
3. 03:01:552 (1,3) - switch NC? due to downbeat and it's not fit now imo okay
4. 03:44:005 (3) - i don't like this touching HP bar note.. move down (and left)? It's fine
5. 04:19:288 (1) - same as Normal

[Lunatic]

1. 00:32:684 (4) - to keep your combo rhythm, NC here? keep by position and vocal :3
2. 00:39:288 (1,2) - ctrl+r
3. 00:39:854 (1,2) - ^ will have more good mood
4. 00:55:514 (1) - i think 3/4 is really not fit with music.. fix it or not, up to you
5. 00:56:835 (5) - ^ fixed only here by using 1/2 slider~
6. 01:00:986 (1,2,3) - not good jump imo, you can make it more beautiful and exciting, copy paste from 01:00:420 (2,3,4) - and scale x2 and stack 1 on 2? like this. if you follow this, of course you should arrange 01:01:741 (1,2) - I'm the one who don't like to make a jump like other people -..-'' so no change, thanks :3
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:01:741 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 2 2 3 is not fit imo, try 3 4 or 3 2 2? will be better to understand the rhythm oh sry , I think 2 2 3 is really good for this >.<'' thx for suggestion
8. 01:09:665 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - how about make star or pentagon shape? It's boring
9. 01:10:608 (4,1,2,3) - it's good now, but i think this rhythm will be best for you. you can start 3 from 2 and add 1 arrow as well
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:11:741 - whistle? okay
11. 01:49:854 (1,2,3) - not fit imo, i'd start slider from 01:49:854 - to 01:50:231 - and add a circle at 01:50:420 - for its slow mood part I tried this before , but it has a sound at blue tick 01:49:948 (2) - , This is the best for playing in my opinion
12. 02:27:212 (5,1) - for the confusing 3/4 rhythm, i'd use rhythm like this I try to move 02:27:873 (1) - far from 02:27:212 (5) - much to not get missed from this slider, so I think it's fine imo
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 03:11:175 (1,2) - useless NC and not fit for 1, why didn't you started combo from 03:11:363 (2) - I new combo according to changing of distance such as like these :3 01:24:005 (1,2) - 03:45:514 (1,2) - 04:09:288 (1,2) -
14. 03:20:137 (2) - distance 2.0x or 2.1x? a bit confusing but up to you em' I think this distance I can't see how different while playing unless I have to look at it in edit mode - -
15. 03:51:175 (1,2,3,4) - how about make star or pentagon shape with the 5 beats? I like this repeat jump more than pentagon or hexagon or something else orz sorry =_=''
16. 04:19:288 (1) - same as Normal

Really Good Map and Song
Good luck with rank~

Mixagji wrote:

:D

[Lunatic]
00:31:929(2,3,4) - felt too close. plz spacing same as 00:28:344(1,2,3) - I want it be overlapped :p , I think it's ok >w<
00:33:627(7,1) - swap NC. I think music changes in here. use (1) cuz the piano sound thx :3
01:07:212(1) - stack on (2)slider head. (3,1)'s jump is fiter to music than (1,2)'s imo Interesting !!! xD , fixed
02:16:458(1,2,3,4,5) - hmm i think these are wrong rhythm..i think. try like this ? your rhythm is a good one too but I think it's hard to place a note = =''

SPOILER

02:17:778 - i want note here. if you not change above suggestion. It's hard to add here orz , if I added it , I would have to add jump here which doesn't fit with the music :''o
04:19:854 - probably misstake xp ? change startpoint to 04:19:288 apparently xD


[Hard]
01:51:363(6) - NC ? okay
03:17:024(7) - NC and 03:17:401 - remove new NC , 03:19:665 - NC
03:48:722(5,1) - swap NC


[Normal]
04:18:533(4) - change sliderend to 04:18:910 and start spin 04:19:288 - good idea \:D/ , changed



I don't have enough mod skill. so you can feel free to ignore xp
I am glad if it is helpful to you xD

anyway good song and map.
good luck!

W h i t e wrote:

From my modding queue

Normal

00:05:703 (4) - : symmetry is good ;w;b (suggestion)

02:33:250 (5) - : Delete NC

02:33:627 (1) - : add NC

Hard

01:53:627 (2) - : Spacing is different my bad , fixed

03:10:420 (5) - : Stuck Please fixed

Lunatic

00:49:288 (2) - : NC bcuz 00:48:910 (1) - is x2... I think it's fine

Oh... Good map T.T Very Good... Good luck

1. Add NAGI and Youka to tags?
   
   Youtube

   
2. Offset : 1178 (+3) sounds better to me, It's up to you xD

1. OD-1?
2. 01:21:741 (3) - I think this Normal is a bit Hard , so I hope you can move this note to 01:21:929 , Make beginner read this difficult easily ( I know you follow the vocal , so it's up to you xD 0
3. 01:27:401 (2,3) - Change like this rhythm sounds better to me
   
4. 01:33:627 (3) - Hmm... I think you can remove repeat and add two circles 01:34:759 and 01:35:137 , I think add a finish 01:34:759 is Necessary ( Slider is okay too xDD )
5. 01:55:891 (1) - This isn't follow the music , the correct rhythm is this , thet are not 1/6 , But I think change to a slider start at 01:55:891 and end at 01:56:458 is the best way to change to, because it is normal
6. 02:17:401 (1) - Remove whistle start , just leave clap here , I think whistle isn't needed here
7. 02:21:552 (4) - Remove the repeat and extend to 02:21:929 sounds better to me and fits the vocal more
8. 02:32:495 (4) - Same as 02:17:401 (1)
9. 02:38:533 (1) - Remove clap arrow sounds better to me
10. 02:41:175 (1) - Start at 02:40:986 to follow the vocal?
11. 03:27:212 (1) - Add finish and reduce the volume? , I think there is a finish here.
12. 03:39:854 (4,1) - Big suggetion to change these circles to a slider , because 03:39:854 (4) - is on red tick , but 03:40:420 (1) - is on white , change to a slider perhaps make beginner read this easily
13. 04:17:967 (3,4,5) - A bit hard for beginner , miss combo in the end may make players angry >_< ( like me , especially a long song ) so change like this rhythm is better xD
    

1. 00:12:684 (3) - Remove two repeats , there is nothing 00:12:967 ~ 00:13:250 ( If you agree , don't forget to fix the spacing )
2. 03:21:929 (4) - Delete this note sounds better
3. 03:27:967 (1) - Same as Normal
4. 04:18:722 (2) - change to three circles? sounds better
5. Wow! This diff is awesome for me , Nice work Jeep!!~

1. 00:39:288 (1,2) - Ctrl+R is more fun when play , If you fix this please Ctrl+R 00:39:854 (1,2) xDD
2. 00:59:665 (4,1) - This flow isn't good for me >_< try to make them more smooth?
3. 01:24:005 (1) - Remove NC here , and Add NC 01:24:193 (2),final Remove NC 01:24:382 (10
4. 01:25:703 (1) - Remove finish start , Finish here isn't necessary
5. 02:12:307 (1,2) - They are not stack correct , wow... Nazi!! xDD
6. 03:01:175 (2,3) - Jump here looks strange for me
7. 03:27:967 (1) - Same as Normal
8. 04:18:722 (3) - Same as Hard
9. Awesome diff too!!! I like your jump xDD

• • Tags: Add "Mountain of Faith TH10 NAGI☆".

• • Approach Rate: 4
  • 00:04:193 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:44:948 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:46:080 (5) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:46:835 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:51:929 (4) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:53:439 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 01:48:344 (1) - Delete this slider.
  • 01:57:401 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 02:07:590 (4) - Delete this slider. Add a circle at 02:07:590 (white tick) and add another circle at 02:07:967 (white tick). Add a "New Combo" on the second circle. Remove "New Combo" on the next slider (02:08:344).
  • 02:10:986 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 02:12:684 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 02:14:193 (2) - Add "New Combo".
  • 02:15:891 (1) - Remove "New Combo". End this slider at 02:16:269 (white tick). Add a circle at 02:17:024 (white tick).
  • 03:55:230 (x) - End kiai here.
  • 04:19:288 (1) - End this spinner at 04:26:458 (white tick).

• • 01:00:797 (4) - Add a slider repetition. Add a circle at 01:01:363 (red tick) and move the spinner 1/2 later. End the spinner at 01:02:873 (red tick).
  • 02:04:382 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 02:04:759 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 03:55:230 (x) - End kiai here.
  • 04:19:288 (1) - End this spinner at 04:26:458 (white tick).

• • 03:55:230 (x) - End kiai here.
  • 04:19:288 (1) - End this spinner at 04:26:458 (white tick).

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Frostmourne ~ Hi~

[Lunatic]

1. 01:10:608 (4) - Add new combo and Remove 01:10:797 (1).

Sorry , I want to keep it cuz I new combo depends on changing the distance :3

[Hard]

1. 00:06:269 (4) - Move to 00:06:458,sound much better.Well, it's better ~ Fixed

That's all ~ Very cool map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Netsukawa wrote:

สิบวันจะเเรงค์ละพี่จิ๊บ ไวขิง

Go Go ranked /o/

Frostmourne wrote:

also Boss , I owe you many stars = ='' , really thank you

CDFA wrote:

1. 00:27:219 (2) - I can't really hear what you are following here. my idea: remove 1 repeat then move it 1/2 later.
   After that select 00:28:351 (1) - and move this 1/2 back. OR move 00:27:219 (2) - 1/2 back without removing a repeat. but let 00:28:351 (1) - end 1/2 earlier
2. 00:27:408 (2) - Add a note here? and let the next spinner start 1/2 later
3. 00:39:672 (3) - Move this slider 1/2 back?
4. 00:41:936 (3) - Remove repeat and extend the slider by 1/2, then move 00:43:068 (4) - 1/2 back
5. 00:57:031 (2) - Move this slider 1/2 back? and maybe add a note here: 00:57:597 - ?
6. 00:58:540 (1) - Make the slider start 1/2 earlier? then move this 00:59:295 (2) - 1/2 back and move this whole slider 00:59:672 (3) - 1/2 back and let 01:00:804 (4) - start 1/2 earlier
7. 01:07:597 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 back, then move 01:08:729 (2) - 1/2 back and then move 01:09:106 (3) - 1/2 back. make the slider 1/2 longer or add another note on 01:09:483 -
8. 01:10:049 - add a note?
9. tricky one; remove 01:14:012 (1) - then move 01:13:257 (4) - 1/2 later and make it 1/2 longer and then add a note on 01:13:257 - and add a note on 01:14:389 -
10. 01:19:672 (1) - move this 1/2 back and 01:20:804 (2) - too
11. 01:35:521 (2) - move this 1/2 back and let the spinner appear 1/2 earlier
12. 01:51:936 - add a note? and move 01:52:502 (3) - 1/2 back?
13. 01:55:898 (1) - This sounds a bit weird with the other parts. but maybe keep it\
14. 02:15:898 (2) - remove the repeat and make it 1/2 shorter. make 02:17:408 (1) - start 1/1 earlier and make it end 1/2 earlier, add a new note on 02:18:163 -
15. 02:18:540 (3) - Remove repeat, add a new note on 02:19:094 - or extend the slider to this
16. 02:19:483 - add a note here and move 02:20:049 (4) - 1/2 later then remove 1 repeat of 02:21:559 (4) - and move it 1/2 later
17. 02:26:087 (4) - move this 1/2 back?
18. 02:27:597 (1) - I wouldnt recommend starting the second part of the chorus with a spinner :\
19. 02:31:936 - make it like: http://puu.sh/EWjN
20. 03:01:936 (1) - start this 1/1 later?
21. 03:04:200 (1) - start this 1/1 later as well (sounds better and move spinner recovery time)
22. 03:43:068 - again an awkward way to start.. the final chorus?!
23. 03:46:087 (1) - move this 1/2 back, then let 03:47:219 (2) - start 1/2 earlier

happy30 wrote:

[General]
Maybe change the audio lead-in to 1500 or 2000 to have a bit more preparation time changed to 1500

[Normal]
I feel that there are opportunities left to make the rhythm of the map match the rhythm of the song more.
I'd like to point out those.

1. 00:27:219 (2) - I can't really hear what you are following here. my idea: remove 1 repeat then move it 1/2 later.
   After that select 00:28:351 (1) - and move this 1/2 back. OR move 00:27:219 (2) - 1/2 back without removing a repeat. but let 00:28:351 (1) - end 1/2 earlier I choose to fix the first one :3 and fixed new combo system once again
   and changed about note at 00:34:389 (3,4) - to fit the vocal better ~
2. 00:27:408 (2) - Add a note here? and let the next spinner start 1/2 later oops sorry , I can't see spinner here -.-''
3. 00:39:672 (3) - Move this slider 1/2 back? it feels more comfortable to follow on the drum here imo = = so, I will leave it here
4. 00:41:936 (3) - Remove repeat and extend the slider by 1/2, then move 00:43:068 (4) - 1/2 back fixed
5. 00:57:031 (2) - Move this slider 1/2 back? and maybe add a note here: 00:57:597 - ? fixed
6. 00:58:540 (1) - Make the slider start 1/2 earlier? then move this 00:59:295 (2) - 1/2 back and move this whole slider 00:59:672 (3) - 1/2 back and let 01:00:804 (4) - start 1/2 earlier I fixed by extending (1) 1/2 so it will end at the same position then I don't change because I want to keep this to follow the drum sound instead of vocal but I shorten 00:59:672 (3) - to 00:59:861 so it will end at finish sound.
7. 01:07:597 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 back, then move 01:08:729 (2) - 1/2 back and then move 01:09:106 (3) - 1/2 back. make the slider 1/2 longer or add another note on 01:09:483 - fixed in my way , I surely follow on the vocal for now :3
8. 01:10:049 - add a note? I try to give a time to relax , I will leave it at here~
9. tricky one; remove 01:14:012 (1) - then move 01:13:257 (4) - 1/2 later and make it 1/2 longer and then add a note on 01:13:257 - and add a note on 01:14:389 - I think it follows the vocal very well and easy to hit it imo = = , leave it here so.
10. 01:19:672 (1) - move this 1/2 back and 01:20:804 (2) - too fixed
11. 01:35:521 (2) - move this 1/2 back and let the spinner appear 1/2 earlier fixed
12. 01:51:936 - add a note? and move 01:52:502 (3) - 1/2 back? I added it and also moved it too , but I removed next (1) and make slider to follow the vocal instead.
13. 01:55:898 (1) - This sounds a bit weird with the other parts. but maybe keep it\ I think it's ok to keep it even it sounds weird but it's good for playing though :3
14. 02:15:898 (2) - remove the repeat and make it 1/2 shorter. make 02:17:408 (1) - start 1/1 earlier and make it end 1/2 earlier, add a new note on 02:18:163 - fixed
15. 02:18:540 (3) - Remove repeat, add a new note on 02:19:094 - or extend the slider to this remove repeat and extend to 02:19:106
16. 02:19:483 - add a note here and move 02:20:049 (4) - 1/2 later then remove 1 repeat of 02:21:559 (4) - and move it 1/2 later emm' after I set many things , there seem to be confusion for me xD , leave it to you to see it once :3
17. 02:26:087 (4) - move this 1/2 back? changed to slider and moved it accordingly
18. 02:27:597 (1) - I wouldnt recommend starting the second part of the chorus with a spinner :\ already mapped it
19. 02:31:936 - make it like: http://puu.sh/EWjN fixed but changed (1),(2) to slider instead cuz it's easier to hit them for this easiest diff \:D/
20. 03:01:936 (1) - start this 1/1 later? okay~~~
21. 03:04:200 (1) - start this 1/1 later as well (sounds better and move spinner recovery time) fixed
22. 03:43:068 - again an awkward way to start.. the final chorus?!
23. 03:46:087 (1) - move this 1/2 back, then let 03:47:219 (2) - start 1/2 earlier fixed

Raise OD by 1? I think this current OD is ok :3

[Hard]
02:34:766 (1,2,3) - This felt a bit weird since you don't use larger spacing elsewhere in the map
02:41:370 (1) - Start this 1/2 later?
03:41:370 (1) - this 1/2 later as well? (same as normal)

Raise OD by 1 or 2
fixed all and raised OD by 1 (6)

Verdisphena wrote:

Quilt wrote:

gogo Ranked >w<//

Chewin wrote:

Hi :3 Random recheck map ~ hi :3

[Normal]
00:41:936 (3) - Reducing this slider by 1/2 and adding a circle on the red tick here: 00:42:502 would fit much better because it follows the vocal. Don't forget to use whistle on the new circle if you decide to follow this suggestion ;3 eh, it would be harder =.=? , I don't want to make it harder more than this T-T
00:50:804 (3) - You should to use finish on this slider's head for consistency my bad ._.aaaaaaa
01:06:087 (3) - The same of the first point. I highly suggest you to follow them especially because you decided to map followint the vocal sound ~ ok, this part it looks easier than the first one ?? , fixed ''' (the first one is hard to play for me with mouse only ww)
01:08:917 (3) - ^ It won't be symmetry with next note and look not beautiful DxDxDx''
01:13:634 (4) - Finish here would be perfect in my opinion sounds fine *.* , finish may ruin kawaii voice from Maika <3<3
01:56:842 (2) - x:184 y:188 is better nazi !!! , omg , I want to let this gradually flow down from previous so it's Okay =.= !
02:19:861 (5) - You should to use NC here to keep the consistency with the previous kiai time kk
02:29:106 (1) - Same of the first point wanna make it equal to 02:30:615 (3) - ~~~~~~~
02:38:540 (1) - Finish here is better than clap both is the best xDxD
03:09:295 (2) - Finish on this slider's end? voice doesn't sound too long to combine with my lovely long finish so I think it's fine o..o
03:17:785 (1) - Remember that you are mapping following the vocal. This rhythm is better, and you could add a finish hitsound on the 1/2 slider's end too: I'm moody ww, sometimes I want to place it as rhythm and better game play, actually I don't want to map follow vocal much o_o'

04:06:842 (4) - Move to x:448 y:96 to improve the blanket with 04:06:465 (3) fixed

[Hard]
01:10:238 (1) - Remove NC and add it on 01:10:615 (3) for consistency with the next part 02:23:068 (1) fixed
02:03:823 (1) - Useless New Combo. Remove it Chewin, you are so mean ! , I think it's ok to follow the vocal (the new combo I used actually follows the vocal very well , don't you think so :3:3:3:3?
02:34:766 (1) - Remove NC and use it on 02:35:144 (3) always for consistency emm for consitency , okay = =
Lovely map >w< ww , for DT playing only !!

[Lunatic]
00:44:766 (1) - Remove NC
00:47:597 (1) - ^
01:32:880 (6) - New combo?
all of those new combo , I think it's fine thanks for checking hehe
Awesome >w< hope so \:D/

If you want to follow some of my suggestions do it after a BAT has popped it for rank, I don't want you pop the bubble for this mod >w<
Good luck with rank ;3

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