Mixagji wrote:

:D

[Lunatic]
00:31:929(2,3,4) - felt too close. plz spacing same as 00:28:344(1,2,3) - I want it be overlapped :p , I think it's ok >w<
00:33:627(7,1) - swap NC. I think music changes in here. use (1) cuz the piano sound thx :3
01:07:212(1) - stack on (2)slider head. (3,1)'s jump is fiter to music than (1,2)'s imo Interesting !!! xD , fixed
02:16:458(1,2,3,4,5) - hmm i think these are wrong rhythm..i think. try like this ? your rhythm is a good one too but I think it's hard to place a note = =''

SPOILER

02:17:778 - i want note here. if you not change above suggestion. It's hard to add here orz , if I added it , I would have to add jump here which doesn't fit with the music :''o
04:19:854 - probably misstake xp ? change startpoint to 04:19:288 apparently xD


[Hard]
01:51:363(6) - NC ? okay
03:17:024(7) - NC and 03:17:401 - remove new NC , 03:19:665 - NC
03:48:722(5,1) - swap NC


[Normal]
04:18:533(4) - change sliderend to 04:18:910 and start spin 04:19:288 - good idea \:D/ , changed



I don't have enough mod skill. so you can feel free to ignore xp
I am glad if it is helpful to you xD

anyway good song and map.
good luck!

W h i t e wrote:

From my modding queue

Normal

00:05:703 (4) - : symmetry is good ;w;b (suggestion)

02:33:250 (5) - : Delete NC

02:33:627 (1) - : add NC

Hard

01:53:627 (2) - : Spacing is different my bad , fixed

03:10:420 (5) - : Stuck Please fixed

Lunatic

00:49:288 (2) - : NC bcuz 00:48:910 (1) - is x2... I think it's fine

Oh... Good map T.T Very Good... Good luck

1. Add NAGI and Youka to tags?
   
   Youtube

   
2. Offset : 1178 (+3) sounds better to me, It's up to you xD

1. OD-1?
2. 01:21:741 (3) - I think this Normal is a bit Hard , so I hope you can move this note to 01:21:929 , Make beginner read this difficult easily ( I know you follow the vocal , so it's up to you xD 0
3. 01:27:401 (2,3) - Change like this rhythm sounds better to me
   
4. 01:33:627 (3) - Hmm... I think you can remove repeat and add two circles 01:34:759 and 01:35:137 , I think add a finish 01:34:759 is Necessary ( Slider is okay too xDD )
5. 01:55:891 (1) - This isn't follow the music , the correct rhythm is this , thet are not 1/6 , But I think change to a slider start at 01:55:891 and end at 01:56:458 is the best way to change to, because it is normal
6. 02:17:401 (1) - Remove whistle start , just leave clap here , I think whistle isn't needed here
7. 02:21:552 (4) - Remove the repeat and extend to 02:21:929 sounds better to me and fits the vocal more
8. 02:32:495 (4) - Same as 02:17:401 (1)
9. 02:38:533 (1) - Remove clap arrow sounds better to me
10. 02:41:175 (1) - Start at 02:40:986 to follow the vocal?
11. 03:27:212 (1) - Add finish and reduce the volume? , I think there is a finish here.
12. 03:39:854 (4,1) - Big suggetion to change these circles to a slider , because 03:39:854 (4) - is on red tick , but 03:40:420 (1) - is on white , change to a slider perhaps make beginner read this easily
13. 04:17:967 (3,4,5) - A bit hard for beginner , miss combo in the end may make players angry >_< ( like me , especially a long song ) so change like this rhythm is better xD
    

1. 00:12:684 (3) - Remove two repeats , there is nothing 00:12:967 ~ 00:13:250 ( If you agree , don't forget to fix the spacing )
2. 03:21:929 (4) - Delete this note sounds better
3. 03:27:967 (1) - Same as Normal
4. 04:18:722 (2) - change to three circles? sounds better
5. Wow! This diff is awesome for me , Nice work Jeep!!~

1. 00:39:288 (1,2) - Ctrl+R is more fun when play , If you fix this please Ctrl+R 00:39:854 (1,2) xDD
2. 00:59:665 (4,1) - This flow isn't good for me >_< try to make them more smooth?
3. 01:24:005 (1) - Remove NC here , and Add NC 01:24:193 (2),final Remove NC 01:24:382 (10
4. 01:25:703 (1) - Remove finish start , Finish here isn't necessary
5. 02:12:307 (1,2) - They are not stack correct , wow... Nazi!! xDD
6. 03:01:175 (2,3) - Jump here looks strange for me
7. 03:27:967 (1) - Same as Normal
8. 04:18:722 (3) - Same as Hard
9. Awesome diff too!!! I like your jump xDD

• • Tags: Add "Mountain of Faith TH10 NAGI☆".

• • Approach Rate: 4
  • 00:04:193 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:44:948 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:46:080 (5) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:46:835 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:51:929 (4) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:53:439 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 01:48:344 (1) - Delete this slider.
  • 01:57:401 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 02:07:590 (4) - Delete this slider. Add a circle at 02:07:590 (white tick) and add another circle at 02:07:967 (white tick). Add a "New Combo" on the second circle. Remove "New Combo" on the next slider (02:08:344).
  • 02:10:986 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 02:12:684 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 02:14:193 (2) - Add "New Combo".
  • 02:15:891 (1) - Remove "New Combo". End this slider at 02:16:269 (white tick). Add a circle at 02:17:024 (white tick).
  • 03:55:230 (x) - End kiai here.
  • 04:19:288 (1) - End this spinner at 04:26:458 (white tick).

• • 01:00:797 (4) - Add a slider repetition. Add a circle at 01:01:363 (red tick) and move the spinner 1/2 later. End the spinner at 01:02:873 (red tick).
  • 02:04:382 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 02:04:759 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 03:55:230 (x) - End kiai here.
  • 04:19:288 (1) - End this spinner at 04:26:458 (white tick).

• • 03:55:230 (x) - End kiai here.
  • 04:19:288 (1) - End this spinner at 04:26:458 (white tick).

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Frostmourne ~ Hi~

[Lunatic]

1. 01:10:608 (4) - Add new combo and Remove 01:10:797 (1).

Sorry , I want to keep it cuz I new combo depends on changing the distance :3

[Hard]

1. 00:06:269 (4) - Move to 00:06:458,sound much better.Well, it's better ~ Fixed

That's all ~ Very cool map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Netsukawa wrote:

สิบวันจะเเรงค์ละพี่จิ๊บ ไวขิง

Go Go ranked /o/

Frostmourne wrote:

also Boss , I owe you many stars = ='' , really thank you

CDFA wrote:

1. 00:27:219 (2) - I can't really hear what you are following here. my idea: remove 1 repeat then move it 1/2 later.
   After that select 00:28:351 (1) - and move this 1/2 back. OR move 00:27:219 (2) - 1/2 back without removing a repeat. but let 00:28:351 (1) - end 1/2 earlier
2. 00:27:408 (2) - Add a note here? and let the next spinner start 1/2 later
3. 00:39:672 (3) - Move this slider 1/2 back?
4. 00:41:936 (3) - Remove repeat and extend the slider by 1/2, then move 00:43:068 (4) - 1/2 back
5. 00:57:031 (2) - Move this slider 1/2 back? and maybe add a note here: 00:57:597 - ?
6. 00:58:540 (1) - Make the slider start 1/2 earlier? then move this 00:59:295 (2) - 1/2 back and move this whole slider 00:59:672 (3) - 1/2 back and let 01:00:804 (4) - start 1/2 earlier
7. 01:07:597 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 back, then move 01:08:729 (2) - 1/2 back and then move 01:09:106 (3) - 1/2 back. make the slider 1/2 longer or add another note on 01:09:483 -
8. 01:10:049 - add a note?
9. tricky one; remove 01:14:012 (1) - then move 01:13:257 (4) - 1/2 later and make it 1/2 longer and then add a note on 01:13:257 - and add a note on 01:14:389 -
10. 01:19:672 (1) - move this 1/2 back and 01:20:804 (2) - too
11. 01:35:521 (2) - move this 1/2 back and let the spinner appear 1/2 earlier
12. 01:51:936 - add a note? and move 01:52:502 (3) - 1/2 back?
13. 01:55:898 (1) - This sounds a bit weird with the other parts. but maybe keep it\
14. 02:15:898 (2) - remove the repeat and make it 1/2 shorter. make 02:17:408 (1) - start 1/1 earlier and make it end 1/2 earlier, add a new note on 02:18:163 -
15. 02:18:540 (3) - Remove repeat, add a new note on 02:19:094 - or extend the slider to this
16. 02:19:483 - add a note here and move 02:20:049 (4) - 1/2 later then remove 1 repeat of 02:21:559 (4) - and move it 1/2 later
17. 02:26:087 (4) - move this 1/2 back?
18. 02:27:597 (1) - I wouldnt recommend starting the second part of the chorus with a spinner :\
19. 02:31:936 - make it like: http://puu.sh/EWjN
20. 03:01:936 (1) - start this 1/1 later?
21. 03:04:200 (1) - start this 1/1 later as well (sounds better and move spinner recovery time)
22. 03:43:068 - again an awkward way to start.. the final chorus?!
23. 03:46:087 (1) - move this 1/2 back, then let 03:47:219 (2) - start 1/2 earlier

happy30 wrote:

[General]
Maybe change the audio lead-in to 1500 or 2000 to have a bit more preparation time changed to 1500

[Normal]
I feel that there are opportunities left to make the rhythm of the map match the rhythm of the song more.
I'd like to point out those.

1. 00:27:219 (2) - I can't really hear what you are following here. my idea: remove 1 repeat then move it 1/2 later.
   After that select 00:28:351 (1) - and move this 1/2 back. OR move 00:27:219 (2) - 1/2 back without removing a repeat. but let 00:28:351 (1) - end 1/2 earlier I choose to fix the first one :3 and fixed new combo system once again
   and changed about note at 00:34:389 (3,4) - to fit the vocal better ~
2. 00:27:408 (2) - Add a note here? and let the next spinner start 1/2 later oops sorry , I can't see spinner here -.-''
3. 00:39:672 (3) - Move this slider 1/2 back? it feels more comfortable to follow on the drum here imo = = so, I will leave it here
4. 00:41:936 (3) - Remove repeat and extend the slider by 1/2, then move 00:43:068 (4) - 1/2 back fixed
5. 00:57:031 (2) - Move this slider 1/2 back? and maybe add a note here: 00:57:597 - ? fixed
6. 00:58:540 (1) - Make the slider start 1/2 earlier? then move this 00:59:295 (2) - 1/2 back and move this whole slider 00:59:672 (3) - 1/2 back and let 01:00:804 (4) - start 1/2 earlier I fixed by extending (1) 1/2 so it will end at the same position then I don't change because I want to keep this to follow the drum sound instead of vocal but I shorten 00:59:672 (3) - to 00:59:861 so it will end at finish sound.
7. 01:07:597 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 back, then move 01:08:729 (2) - 1/2 back and then move 01:09:106 (3) - 1/2 back. make the slider 1/2 longer or add another note on 01:09:483 - fixed in my way , I surely follow on the vocal for now :3
8. 01:10:049 - add a note? I try to give a time to relax , I will leave it at here~
9. tricky one; remove 01:14:012 (1) - then move 01:13:257 (4) - 1/2 later and make it 1/2 longer and then add a note on 01:13:257 - and add a note on 01:14:389 - I think it follows the vocal very well and easy to hit it imo = = , leave it here so.
10. 01:19:672 (1) - move this 1/2 back and 01:20:804 (2) - too fixed
11. 01:35:521 (2) - move this 1/2 back and let the spinner appear 1/2 earlier fixed
12. 01:51:936 - add a note? and move 01:52:502 (3) - 1/2 back? I added it and also moved it too , but I removed next (1) and make slider to follow the vocal instead.
13. 01:55:898 (1) - This sounds a bit weird with the other parts. but maybe keep it\ I think it's ok to keep it even it sounds weird but it's good for playing though :3
14. 02:15:898 (2) - remove the repeat and make it 1/2 shorter. make 02:17:408 (1) - start 1/1 earlier and make it end 1/2 earlier, add a new note on 02:18:163 - fixed
15. 02:18:540 (3) - Remove repeat, add a new note on 02:19:094 - or extend the slider to this remove repeat and extend to 02:19:106
16. 02:19:483 - add a note here and move 02:20:049 (4) - 1/2 later then remove 1 repeat of 02:21:559 (4) - and move it 1/2 later emm' after I set many things , there seem to be confusion for me xD , leave it to you to see it once :3
17. 02:26:087 (4) - move this 1/2 back? changed to slider and moved it accordingly
18. 02:27:597 (1) - I wouldnt recommend starting the second part of the chorus with a spinner :\ already mapped it
19. 02:31:936 - make it like: http://puu.sh/EWjN fixed but changed (1),(2) to slider instead cuz it's easier to hit them for this easiest diff \:D/
20. 03:01:936 (1) - start this 1/1 later? okay~~~
21. 03:04:200 (1) - start this 1/1 later as well (sounds better and move spinner recovery time) fixed
22. 03:43:068 - again an awkward way to start.. the final chorus?!
23. 03:46:087 (1) - move this 1/2 back, then let 03:47:219 (2) - start 1/2 earlier fixed

Raise OD by 1? I think this current OD is ok :3

[Hard]
02:34:766 (1,2,3) - This felt a bit weird since you don't use larger spacing elsewhere in the map
02:41:370 (1) - Start this 1/2 later?
03:41:370 (1) - this 1/2 later as well? (same as normal)

Raise OD by 1 or 2
fixed all and raised OD by 1 (6)