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Lady GaGa - Brown Eyes

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Ylinestra44
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 29. Mai 2012 at 01:45:07

Artist: Lady Gaga
Title: Brown Eyes
Tags: The Fame
BPM: 125,01
Filesize: 4172kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,67 stars, 227 notes)
  2. Hard (4,37 stars, 381 notes)
  3. Normal (3,05 stars, 304 notes)
Download: Lady Gaga - Brown Eyes
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Guess it's just a silly song about you,
And how I lost you,
And your brown eyes.

Special thanks to Loctav for the bg.
HellDawn
General

The correct capitalisation is Lady Gaga, not GaGa. If you don't believe me, do a quick google search for her.
In your map, in 'Source' you wrote 'The Fame Monster' , but in you wrote just 'The Fame'

Easy

02:59:666 - clap
03:22:226 - remove new combo ( 03:23:186 - remove combo*)

Normal

00:03:026 - new combo
01:08:786 (4,5,6) - 1 grid up
01:17:906 - it would be better if slider move to (256x244)
02:18:386 - finish
03:00:626 - ^
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

HellDawn wrote:

General

The correct capitalisation is Lady Gaga, not GaGa. If you don't believe me, do a quick google search for her. Okay, I've seen both here in Osu, so I chose (the wrong) one
In your map, in 'Source' you wrote 'The Fame Monster' , but in you wrote just 'The Fame' I didn't write anything in 'Source'

Easy

02:59:666 - clap Done
03:22:226 - remove new combo ( 03:23:186 - remove combo*) Done

Normal

00:03:026 - new combo Done
01:08:786 (4,5,6) - 1 grid up Disaggree - would destroy symmetry
01:17:906 - it would be better if slider move to (256x244) ^
02:18:386 - finish Done
03:00:626 - ^ ^
Tony
I LOVE THIS SONG <3333
ririco
helped find the right timing =w= via irc~

Log
21:26 <Ylinestra44> : Hi~
21:26 <-Sekai-> : hi o.o
21:27 <Ylinestra44> : Can I ask you to check some timing?
21:27 <-Sekai-> : :3
21:27 <-Sekai-> : sure
21:27 <Ylinestra44> : :3
21:27 *Ylinestra44 is editing (Lady Gaga - Brown Eyes)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/47821]
21:28 <Ylinestra44> : I'm pretty sure about BPM, but I have more problems with Offset =/
21:28 <-Sekai-> : oh another lady gaga
21:28 <-Sekai-> : =3=
21:28 <Ylinestra44> : It's a calm song
21:29 <-Sekai-> : ohhh
21:30 <-Sekai-> : your the one who always makes diffs for Akemi =w=
21:30 <Ylinestra44> : Yeah :3
21:30 <Ylinestra44> : But on the newest song I won't.
21:30 <-Sekai-> : :o
21:30 <-Sekai-> : why?
21:30 <Ylinestra44> : I listened to it, and I don't feel like mapping it.
21:30 <Ylinestra44> : And now I revived my Lady Gaga here
21:31 <-Sekai-> : oh :o
21:31 <-Sekai-> : why there is notes before the timing?
21:31 <-Sekai-> : o.o
21:31 <Ylinestra44> : You mean before the Offset?
21:31 <-Sekai-> : yes
21:32 <Ylinestra44> : Well, I think they kinda fit, and the song already begins there, the offset is just later
21:32 <-Sekai-> : i think it's multi offsets
21:36 <-Sekai-> : hmm~
22:14 <Ylinestra44> : Sorry, I was afk, my Mom just came >.<
22:14 <-Sekai-> : i was away too xD
22:15 <Ylinestra44> : Multi Offsets? Why?
22:15 <-Sekai-> : hmm~ idk
22:15 <-Sekai-> : it's seems that way but
22:15 <-Sekai-> : use this 146
22:15 <-Sekai-> : it's seems fine to me
22:16 <-Sekai-> : if you did that remember to fix the notes and sliders
22:18 <Ylinestra44> : I don't need to fix anything
22:18 <Ylinestra44> : That was a beat of the previous Offset
22:18 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:18 <-Sekai-> : oh
22:19 <-Sekai-> : so you agree with that offset?
22:19 <Ylinestra44> : Well yeah
22:19 <-Sekai-> : then good :3
HellDawn
Hi again !

Hard

Overal difficulty -1
00:47:426- this slider need whistle all
00:51:506- ^

Still your source the fame, change to fame monster :D
And also your sliders ugly, this link help you t/37194
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

HellDawn wrote:

Hi again !

Hard

Overal difficulty -1 Changed
00:47:426- this slider need whistle all Done
00:51:506- ^ Done

Still your source the fame, change to fame monster :D "The Fame" is in Tag, not source. And no, I won't change, because the album's name is "The Fame", not "The Fame Monster"
tiper
Hard

add a beat between them:
00:32:786 (6,7) -
00:33:746 (8,9) -
00:40:946 (6,7) -

01:37:106 (6) - add two beats before, i think, this looks better(not clap)

01:49:106 (1,2) - try to change these sliders on four beats
Akemi_Homura
Here is my newbie modding~ :3
you can ignore this ><

[General]

There are two .osb file in a folder. delete one please~ :3

[Easy]

01:11:186(1) - finish
03:12:146(1) - finish~
03:17:906(1) - remove finish~

[Normal]

01:57:266(2) - this more playable imo o.o http://puu.sh/vaHU
02:11:666(2) ~ 02:12:626(6) - make this curve~ http://puu.sh/vaKs
02:15:506(2) ~ 02:16:466(6) - ^
02:33:746(1) - finish~
02:36:146(1) - finish
03:19:826(2) - finish~


[Hard]

01:22:706(1) - set the volume 30~40%. 50% is too loud.:P (All diff)
01:57:266(2) - this is more playable~ http://puu.sh/v3SF
02:19:106(2) ~ 02:20:066(6) - arrange notes like this :3 http://puu.sh/vaCZ
02:33:746(3) - finish
02:37:586(1) - set the volume 30~40%. (All diff)
03:00:626(1) - finish

GL to your map~ Yli~ :3
GamerX4life
Ich versuch mich mal im Modden :)

[Easy]
  1. 00:34:706 repeat den Slider nochmal und entferne (1) (und new Combo bei 00:36:146 )
  2. 01:33:266 so fänd ichs besser: http://puu.sh/vchi
  3. 01:48:146 lösch den Slider add note und mach nen slider auf 01:48:626 - (so: http://puu.sh/vck2 )
  4. 02:29:426 das find ich passender: http://puu.sh/vcjn
  5. 03:08:306 repeat den Slider und lösch den eigendlich folgenden circle
  6. 03:10:226 same
[Normal]
  1. Hässlicher Slider :( hier probier mal den: (und pass Spacing an)
    392,104,7826,2,0,B|421:132|436:172|434:214|415:250,1,160
    hier mal nen Bild: http://puu.sh/vczG
  2. Das gleiche:
    331,177,9746,2,0,B|302:147|262:132|220:134|184:153,1,160
  3. 00:13:106 ich würde hier eher noch nen Circle setzen und dann auf 00:13:586 den Slider setzen (das betont dann diese 2 "Kicks")
  4. 01:30:386 (1) kannst ja wieder den Slider vom Anfang nehmen
  5. 02:53:906 (2,3,4,5,6) etwas runder machen:
    424,128,173906,1,8
    456,152,174146,1,0
    472,192,174386,1,0
    456,232,174626,1,0
    424,256,174866,1,0
  6. 02:57:746 same
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:786 (1) benutz für sowas mehr Wegpunkte
  2. 00:55:826 der Geschwindigkeitswechsel passt gut - benutz ich auch immer gern :)
  3. der Rest ist gut
Die Map gefällt mir :)
Viel Glück!
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Here is my newbie modding~ :3
you can ignore this ><

[General]

There are two .osb file in a folder. delete one please~ :3 Done

[Easy]

01:11:186(1) - finish Done
03:12:146(1) - finish~ Done
03:17:906(1) - remove finish~ Done

[Normal]

01:57:266(2) - this more playable imo o.o http://puu.sh/vaHU Changed it
02:11:666(2) ~ 02:12:626(6) - make this curve~ http://puu.sh/vaKs Done, and fixed spacing
02:15:506(2) ~ 02:16:466(6) - ^ ^
02:33:746(1) - finish~ Done
02:36:146(1) - finish Done
03:19:826(2) - finish~ Done

[Hard]

01:22:706(1) - set the volume 30~40%. 50% is too loud.:P (All diff) Changed that~ sounds better
01:57:266(2) - this is more playable~ http://puu.sh/v3SF Changed
02:19:106(2) ~ 02:20:066(6) - arrange notes like this :3 http://puu.sh/vaCZ Done
02:33:746(3) - finish Done
02:37:586(1) - set the volume 30~40%. (All diff) Changed this, too
03:00:626(1) - finish Done

GL to your map~ Yli~ :3 Thanks :3

GamerX4life wrote:

Ich versuch mich mal im Modden :)

[Easy]
  1. 00:34:706 repeat den Slider nochmal und entferne (1) (und new Combo bei 00:36:146 ) Geändert
  2. 01:33:266 so fänd ichs besser: http://puu.sh/vchi Auch geändert
  3. 01:48:146 lösch den Slider add note und mach nen slider auf 01:48:626 - (so: http://puu.sh/vck2 ) Ne, das verhaut sonst die Symmetrie, und so unpassend find ich es momentan auch nicht
  4. 02:29:426 das find ich passender: http://puu.sh/vcjn So ziemlich das gleiche wie eins vorher
  5. 03:08:306 repeat den Slider und lösch den eigendlich folgenden circle Bin ich nicht mit einverstanden
  6. 03:10:226 same same
[Normal]
  1. Hässlicher Slider :( hier probier mal den: (und pass Spacing an)
    392,104,7826,2,0,B|421:132|436:172|434:214|415:250,1,160
    hier mal nen Bild: http://puu.sh/vczG Über die Slider hab ich schon mal was gehört xD Die sehen so aus, weil sie mit dem Circle danach einen "perfekten" Bogen bilden --> Keine Änderung
  2. Das gleiche:
    331,177,9746,2,0,B|302:147|262:132|220:134|184:153,1,160
    Hier das selbe
  3. 00:13:106 ich würde hier eher noch nen Circle setzen und dann auf 00:13:586 den Slider setzen (das betont dann diese 2 "Kicks") Der Slider ist für den längeren Ton des Klaviers, deswegen keine Änderung
  4. 01:30:386 (1) kannst ja wieder den Slider vom Anfang nehmen Selbe Sache wie am Anfang
  5. 02:53:906 (2,3,4,5,6) etwas runder machen:
    424,128,173906,1,8
    456,152,174146,1,0
    472,192,174386,1,0
    456,232,174626,1,0
    424,256,174866,1,0
    Geändert
  6. 02:57:746 same same
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:786 (1) benutz für sowas mehr Wegpunkte Hm, ich find ihn so, wie er ist, in Ordnung
  2. 00:55:826 der Geschwindigkeitswechsel passt gut - benutz ich auch immer gern :) Yaiy
  3. der Rest ist gut
Die Map gefällt mir :)
Viel Glück! Danke :)
Thank you for your mods, Akemi and Gamer!
spboxer3

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. I'm not sure. but I think this offset have a kinda late. I suggest to use 142.

Easy



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:37:582 (4) - use clap and remove finish? I think it's too noise for this way. also I don't think it's appropriate for this way.
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:31:822 (1) - why do you used NC for this way? It isn't a paragraph or confuse pattern. so I suggest you should remove this NC and add NC at 01:34:222 (3) - (if you change this. you must remove NC at 01:35:662 (1) - . )
  2. 02:07:822 (1,1) - too far spacing for the center in easiest diff. It's too hard for new player.

Normal



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:37:586 (5) - clap at slider head and remove finish? I think it's too noise for this way. also I don't think it's appropriate for this way. (same as Easy diff)
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
02:05:666 (2) - Umm... I think it's not a correct rhythm~ 02:05:986 - (reverse). 02:06:306 - (slider end). <- It's correct rhythm form my heard. but it's 1/12 rhythm :/
  1. 03:22:706 (3,4,5) - make it parallel. It's looks like a bit off.
  2. 00:15:506 (1,5) - [arc issue] It's awkward slider~you can make the layout better~


Hard



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:37:586 (5) - clap at slider head and remove finish? I think it's too noise for this way. also I don't think it's appropriate for this way. (same as Easy diff)
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 02:01:826 (2,3,4) - [suggest] let them along the same line?
  2. 02:58:226 (4,5) - It's looks awkward slider arc because it's not coincidence arc to 02:58:226 (4) - slider end.

red is unrankable issue. bule is recommended to fix. Black is just suggestion.

that's all
good luck ~:P
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod.

spboxer3 wrote:

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. I'm not sure. but I think this offset have a kinda late. I suggest to use 142. Fixed

Easy



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:37:582 (4) - use clap and remove finish? I think it's too noise for this way. also I don't think it's appropriate for this way. Disaggree
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:31:822 (1) - why do you used NC for this way? It isn't a paragraph or confuse pattern. so I suggest you should remove this NC and add NC at 01:34:222 (3) - (if you change this. you must remove NC at 01:35:662 (1) - . ) Changed it
  2. 02:07:822 (1,1) - too far spacing for the center in easiest diff. It's too hard for new player. Fixed

Normal



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:37:586 (5) - clap at slider head and remove finish? I think it's too noise for this way. also I don't think it's appropriate for this way. (same as Easy diff) Same here
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
02:05:666 (2) - Umm... I think it's not a correct rhythm~ 02:05:986 - (reverse). 02:06:306 - (slider end). <- It's correct rhythm form my heard. but it's 1/12 rhythm :/ So it seems I gotta live with that~
  1. 03:22:706 (3,4,5) - make it parallel. It's looks like a bit off. Fixed
  2. 00:15:506 (1,5) - [arc issue] It's awkward slider~you can make the layout better~ Nope, I want them that way

Hard



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:37:586 (5) - clap at slider head and remove finish? I think it's too noise for this way. also I don't think it's appropriate for this way. (same as Easy diff) same here
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 02:01:826 (2,3,4) - [suggest] let them along the same line? Changed
  2. 02:58:226 (4,5) - It's looks awkward slider arc because it's not coincidence arc to 02:58:226 (4) - slider end. Changed that

red is unrankable issue. bule is recommended to fix. Black is just suggestion.

that's all
good luck ~:P Thanks :)
jossieP
hello

[General]

  1. At difference with spboxer I think the offset is currently early D: I setted it to 150 and got 0 ms late on test play but then my noob test play goes to 17 ms late on first kiai and 24 ms early on second one, so I asumed that its a bpm problem and yes I seted the bpm at 62,505 (as analyzer-kun suggest also) and it was just perfect. The reason of annoying with timing are this notes on [Hard] diff 00:09:026 (2,3,4) - they are definitely off at current timing (related to piano sound). And you also you just changed the offset on [Easy] >v< please check the suggest first, Im not sure if you are according to me about the timing
    timing suggest
    BPM: 62,505
    Offset: 150

[Hard]

  1. 00:17:426 (5) - hmm this shouldnt be on the same x axis of 00:15:506 (1)? move it a grid right for don it, ctrl+j for check it corretly
  2. 00:25:106 (6) - I think that just a whistle will fits better with that random guitar accord, or maybe just no hitsounding this circle will enhance moar the guitar, this suggest aply for incoming and simmilar patterns
  3. 00:35:546 (2) - maybe snap this note on next white tick, current yellow tick fits to the voice but next "whip" effect is moar noticable and at 100% play looks like the "t" from stay is starting on the white tick, and of course shorten the slider to fit on red tick
  4. 00:38:546 (3) - use a finish on start of this slide, I know you are following the guitar but the previous finish pattern feels end a bit suddenly, and a finish here will make it moar soft and also gives more sense to 00:37:586 (5)
  5. 00:51:506 (4) - no whistle on slider body, dont fits to anything on the song
  6. 00:55:826 (1) - I personally sugest and I hope you make it, dont use finish here, it hurt my ears >_< the song has a pretty high and weird sound
  7. 00:57:026 (2,3,4) - maybe add a lower volume section for this circles maybe ~30% volume to enhance the background battery, please listen to it, maybe also aply to next and simmilar parts of the song, if you are not lazy of course =v=
  8. 01:10:466 ~ why dont add some notes for the battery too?
  9. 01:41:906 (3) - end this slider at 01:42:386? (red tick) follow the song here sounds a bit better, vocals are irregular currently, and it breaks a bit your flow since is very simple and relaxing
  10. 02:06:266 (3) - move to next red tick?
  11. 03:32:306 (1) - add finish to 2nd repeat and end of slider, you used finishes on 03:31:346 (3,4) - for follow the guitar, although is not so noticable on pointed slider the guitar still there and maybe you want to follow it
  12. 03:34:226 (2) - ↑
  13. 03:43:826 (5) - clap at start of slider, looks like you had missed it
  14. 03:45:746 (2) - finish on start of slider, the vocals makes the clap sounds a bit weird and the finish marks better this slider
  15. 03:54:386 (1) - 6 secs spinner :lol:

[Normal]

↑ sorry forgot to change my copy paste xD
  1. 00:38:546 (2) - the same finish suggest D:
  2. 00:55:826 (2) - no finish at start please :cry:
  3. 01:01:586 (6) - surprising 2 repeats slider¿? o.o
  4. 01:30:386 (1) - weird slider >v< you was making pretty nice sliders, just put the control point on the middle like
  5. 02:53:906 (2,3,4,5,6) - I noticed it just here, you have many circles like this, maybe too much for a [Normal] well you have an [Easy] its ok I think
  6. 03:15:986 (1) - avoit that start and end of slider touch each other? maybe
  7. 03:36:626 (5) - the clap at start of slider dont fit at all, the vocal here suggest that the start of this slider must be witouth clap, plus the end of this and the start of 03:38:066 (6), emphase with the battery very nice

[Easy]

  1. 00:31:342 (2) - whitle at start of slider? this slider feels very empty
    and no moar important stuff on this diff, simple rhythm as I like [Easy] diffs
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

ikari_kyon wrote:

hello

[General]

  1. At difference with spboxer I think the offset is currently early D: I setted it to 150 and got 0 ms late on test play but then my noob test play goes to 17 ms late on first kiai and 24 ms early on second one, so I asumed that its a bpm problem and yes I seted the bpm at 62,505 (as analyzer-kun suggest also) and it was just perfect. The reason of annoying with timing are this notes on [Hard] diff 00:09:026 (2,3,4) - they are definitely off at current timing (related to piano sound). And you also you just changed the offset on [Easy] >v< please check the suggest first, Im not sure if you are according to me about the timing
    timing suggest
    BPM: 62,505
    Offset: 150
    Changed the timing and resnapped all notes/sections

[Hard]

  1. 00:17:426 (5) - hmm this shouldnt be on the same x axis of 00:15:506 (1)? move it a grid right for don it, ctrl+j for check it corretly Fixed
  2. 00:25:106 (6) - I think that just a whistle will fits better with that random guitar accord, or maybe just no hitsounding this circle will enhance moar the guitar, this suggest aply for incoming and simmilar patterns Fixed on this and all coming patterns
  3. 00:35:546 (2) - maybe snap this note on next white tick, current yellow tick fits to the voice but next "whip" effect is moar noticable and at 100% play looks like the "t" from stay is starting on the white tick, and of course shorten the slider to fit on red tick Changed
  4. 00:38:546 (3) - use a finish on start of this slide, I know you are following the guitar but the previous finish pattern feels end a bit suddenly, and a finish here will make it moar soft and also gives more sense to 00:37:586 (5) Done
  5. 00:51:506 (4) - no whistle on slider body, dont fits to anything on the song Removed
  6. 00:55:826 (1) - I personally sugest and I hope you make it, dont use finish here, it hurt my ears >_< the song has a pretty high and weird sound Removed finish
  7. 00:57:026 (2,3,4) - maybe add a lower volume section for this circles maybe ~30% volume to enhance the background battery, please listen to it, maybe also aply to next and simmilar parts of the song, if you are not lazy of course =v= Put a 30%-volume-section here and all similar parts on hard and normal
  8. 01:10:466 ~ why dont add some notes for the battery too? I keep this 1/1-"hole" during all Kiais
  9. 01:41:906 (3) - end this slider at 01:42:386? (red tick) follow the song here sounds a bit better, vocals are irregular currently, and it breaks a bit your flow since is very simple and relaxing Changed
  10. 02:06:266 (3) - move to next red tick? Changed
  11. 03:32:306 (1) - add finish to 2nd repeat and end of slider, you used finishes on 03:31:346 (3,4) - for follow the guitar, although is not so noticable on pointed slider the guitar still there and maybe you want to follow it Done
  12. 03:34:226 (2) - ↑ same
  13. 03:43:826 (5) - clap at start of slider, looks like you had missed it Yeah, missed that
  14. 03:45:746 (2) - finish on start of slider, the vocals makes the clap sounds a bit weird and the finish marks better this slider Done
  15. 03:54:386 (1) - 6 secs spinner :lol:

[General]

Don't you mean [Normal]? xD
  1. 00:38:546 (2) - the same finish suggest D: Done here, too (and similar patterns)
  2. 00:55:826 (2) - no finish at start please :cry: Removed
  3. 01:01:586 (6) - surprising 2 repeats slider¿? o.o Removed second repeat and placed a note instead
  4. 01:30:386 (1) - weird slider >v< you was making pretty nice sliders, just put the control point on the middle like Not again >.< Those slider "build" with the following note a perfect symmetric arc --> no changes
  5. 02:53:906 (2,3,4,5,6) - I noticed it just here, you have many circles like this, maybe too much for a [Normal] well you have an [Easy] its ok I think
  6. 03:15:986 (1) - avoit that start and end of slider touch each other? maybe Fixed
  7. 03:36:626 (5) - the clap at start of slider dont fit at all, the vocal here suggest that the start of this slider must be witouth clap, plus the end of this and the start of 03:38:066 (6), emphase with the battery very nice Changed

[Easy]

  1. 00:31:342 (2) - whitle at start of slider? this slider feels very empty Done
    and no moar important stuff on this diff, simple rhythm as I like [Easy] diffs
riffy
yo~

[General]
03:54:372 (1) - unsnapped for all diffs

[Easy]
00:01:110 (2,1) - use x0.99 distance here!
00:19:828 (2) - this slider can confuse beginners! they can't see reverse arrov and they can think that this is kust circle!
01:03:504 (1) - maybe this? / should be fixed for same symmetrical
01:41:902 (1) - not symmetrical or it's just me?
03:02:536 (1) - x133 y212

circles are so close placed! it kinda scare for beginners but it's ok.

[Normal]
00:16:708 (2) - maybe make slider / or circle at 00:16:948
00:37:588 (5) - just make (5) better covr (4) fix it
00:55:826 (2) - id i'm not mistaken ithink that new combo MUST be placed in kiai start point
02:01:820 (3) - dixtance x0.93 o.o too close
03:15:974 (1) - a bit not symmetrical in end points

[Hard]
01:13:104 (7) - somehow i expected to see new combo here
02:12:620 (7) - new combo
02:27:978 (7) - ^
02:54:856 (7) - ^
lol
actually i can't find anything but these new combo fixes, sorry ;_;
03:53:892 (4) - and move it 1-2 grids down~

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brownstar!
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod =)

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

[General]
03:54:372 (1) - unsnapped for all diffs Not for me O.o

[Easy]
00:01:110 (2,1) - use x0.99 distance here! You meant one circle later, but that is not possible to fix with Grid Snap~
00:19:828 (2) - this slider can confuse beginners! they can't see reverse arrov and they can think that this is kust circle! Left it, as it is (for the moment)
01:03:504 (1) - maybe this? / should be fixed for same symmetrical Done
01:41:902 (1) - not symmetrical or it's just me? Oh yes, fixed it
03:02:536 (1) - x133 y212 Disaggree

circles are so close placed! it kinda scare for beginners but it's ok.

[Normal]
00:16:708 (2) - maybe make slider / or circle at 00:16:948 Disaggree
00:37:588 (5) - just make (5) better covr (4) fix it Fixed
00:55:826 (2) - id i'm not mistaken ithink that new combo MUST be placed in kiai start point Put NC
02:01:820 (3) - dixtance x0.93 o.o too close Woops, fixed
03:15:974 (1) - a bit not symmetrical in end points ~Not able to fix

[Hard]
01:13:104 (7) - somehow i expected to see new combo here Done
02:12:620 (7) - new combo Done
02:27:978 (7) - ^ ^
02:54:856 (7) - ^ ^
lol
actually i can't find anything but these new combo fixes, sorry ;_;
03:53:892 (4) - and move it 1-2 grids down~ Disaggree, would destroy symmetry

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brownstar!Thanks! :3
Tony
Everything was everything till timing... :D

me, with a little help from TicClick, found the right timing.
BPM: 125.01
Offset: 135
U need to change all the SV and tick rate (and green sections :D). Now the kiai sections look pretty because of the BPM (flashy lights fit well with notes)
The previous offset was obviously late.
I'll fully mod it later. Just remind me :D
TicClick
Confirmed. Also, doubling the BPM will solve some metronome things (for example, first kiai's beginning will be on downbeat, as it should be due to logic).
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
...
Fixed.
Tony
kay. so you reminded me.
all suggestions though.

[General]
800x600 bg. meh. Though it's cute
http://www.free-hdwallpapers.com/wallpa ... 227025.jpg

[Hard]

Hitsounds:
00:07:814 (1) - missed a clap on the end.
00:09:734 (5) - ^
00:25:093 (6) - I think finish would sound awesome on that guitar. If u like it add it in all diffs, everytime u hear it in the song (like you did here 00:51:490 (4) - )
00:55:811 (1) - missed a finish on start
01:12:129 (3) - missed a clap
01:39:967 (6) - missed a whistle. (or add finish because of the guitar :D )
01:47:647 (5) - ^
01:51:487 (4) - ^
01:42:607 (4) - missed a whistle on end. (or add finish because of the guitar :D )
I could continue...There's no need too because now you can find them by yourself. I hope you got my ideas. :)

Combo Arrangement:
00:19:333 (9) - add new combo, and remove the new combo on the next slider. Like you did here 00:11:655 (1) -
00:42:371 (2) - new combo here instead
00:50:051 (2) - ^
00:55:811 (1) - imo there's no need to have new combo here. delete it?
01:31:567 (1) - ^
02:10:685 (1) - ^
01:51:967 (1) - remove new combo and add on next note
02:54:841 (1) - remove new combo here or add new combo here 03:02:521 (1) -
03:17:879 (5) - add new combo here

Overall looks great and plays well. Good job :3

[Normal]

Hitsounds:
same things about finish on guitar.
00:37:573 (5) - add clap on start.
00:55:811 (1) - add finish at start.
03:52:917 (6) - add a whistle here.

Combo Arrangement:
00:55:811 (1) - imo there's no need to have a new combo here. delete it?

Nothing much to point. It's good :3

[Easy]
/me complaining about dat SV and Distance. meh. It's a slow song.

Hitsounds:
I have no suggestions

Combo Arrangement:
00:36:133 (1) - imo there's no need to have a new combo here. delete it?

Good luck~ LOVE YOU LADY GAGA~
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod =)

Tony wrote:

kay. so you reminded me. :P
all suggestions though.

[General]
800x600 bg. meh. Though it's cute
http://www.free-hdwallpapers.com/wallpa ... 227025.jpg
Thanks for the effort, but I prefer my bg. There the "focus" is more on the brown eyes, and well, that's what the song is about.

[Hard]

Hitsounds:
00:07:814 (1) - missed a clap on the end. Added
00:09:734 (5) - ^ ^
00:25:093 (6) - I think finish would sound awesome on that guitar. If u like it add it in all diffs, everytime u hear it in the song (like you did here 00:51:490 (4) - ) I think the finish is a bit too noisy at that parts, so I'll keep the whistle
00:55:811 (1) - missed a finish on start Done
01:12:129 (3) - missed a clap Added
01:39:967 (6) - missed a whistle. (or add finish because of the guitar :D ) Added whistle
01:47:647 (5) - ^ ^
01:51:487 (4) - ^ ^
01:42:607 (4) - missed a whistle on end. (or add finish because of the guitar :D ) ^
I could continue...There's no need too because now you can find them by yourself. I hope you got my ideas. :) Yeah, got it :3

Combo Arrangement:
00:19:333 (9) - add new combo, and remove the new combo on the next slider. Like you did here 00:11:655 (1) - Done
00:42:371 (2) - new combo here instead Done
00:50:051 (2) - ^ ^
00:55:811 (1) - imo there's no need to have new combo here. delete it? I was told to place a NC at start of Kiai, so I'll leave it
01:31:567 (1) - ^ Removed
02:10:685 (1) - ^ Same as before
01:51:967 (1) - remove new combo and add on next note Done
02:54:841 (1) - remove new combo here or add new combo here 03:02:521 (1) - Added the NC
03:17:879 (5) - add new combo here Done

Overall looks great and plays well. Good job :3

[Normal]

Hitsounds:
same things about finish on guitar. Aggree
00:37:573 (5) - add clap on start. Done
00:55:811 (1) - add finish at start. Done
03:52:917 (6) - add a whistle here. Done

Combo Arrangement:
00:55:811 (1) - imo there's no need to have a new combo here. delete it? Same as in [Hard]

Nothing much to point. It's good :3

[Easy]
/me complaining about dat SV and Distance. meh. It's a slow song.

Hitsounds:
I have no suggestions

Combo Arrangement:
00:36:133 (1) - imo there's no need to have a new combo here. delete it? Deleted

Good luck~ LOVE YOU LADY GAGA~
Jebok_old
Hi! Oh I love going back into the storage of famous singers now and seeing all those lovely songs compared to the ones they make now...

  • General
    00:55:810 is more suitable for a preview point as the one you chose is quite near to the ending, so the song finishes fast, and then it goes again anyways :/

    Easy
    I think you should do spacing x1.5 (toggle with alt + mouse wheel) as it doesn't look too good when all of the notes overlap wih each other. x1.5 is quite easy to catch anyway as the bpm is so slow, so it should be fine!

    Normal
    Very a like as for Easy, in Normal circles with 1/2 far away from each other overlap so I think you should rise the distance snap higher so that they don't. Then you can use it to your advantage,- for example you can have one note snapped with the slider 1/2 afterwards but then place circle 1/2 after distance snapped.
    00:07:814 (1,3) - Those two sliders are a bit unsymmetrical. I think they should end of the same Y as they started, so making a perfect C shape.
    00:09:014 (2,4) - Snap with the end of the slider before it.
    00:14:533 (5) - Make into the same shape as (2) and (3).
    00:16:693 (2,4) - Snap with the end of the slider before it.
    00:55:570 (1) - This note makes it a bit overmapped in this part, I suggest removing it.
    00:59:410 (1) - ^. Put a note at 00:59:170 placing it x:296 and y:192 instead?
    01:15:009 - New combo, its a tall white tick and they are 50% more likely to be new combo than other ticks :P
    01:15:968 - No new combo
    01:17:888 - New combo. Also, make the slider be in the middle lane so x:256 and y:244
    03:09:719 (1,2,3) - Instead of doing this, why not Copy the previous 1,2,3 and then flick it horizontally..? And then starting the next combo from the middle.

    Hard
    Again the spacing should be risen by about 0.4 so that circles and slider 1/2 after each other don't overlap.
    00:43:091 (2) - y:72, distance snap after.
    00:55:570 (1) - Remove note
    02:10:444 (1) - ^
    02:29:883 (1) - Its overlapping previous slider so doesn't look nice, fix pls?
    02:32:762 (1) - ^
    02:33:722 (3) - ^ You have so much space to use but you do this :?
    03:04:440 (1) - ^
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod.

Jebok wrote:

Hi! Oh I love going back into the storage of famous singers now and seeing all those lovely songs compared to the ones they make now...

  • General
    00:55:810 is more suitable for a preview point as the one you chose is quite near to the ending, so the song finishes fast, and then it goes again anyways :/ It seems to be better, but with that preview point you can't hear her singing "Brown Eyes" at all. That's why I chose the preview point that "late"

    Easy
    I think you should do spacing x1.5 (toggle with alt + mouse wheel) as it doesn't look too good when all of the notes overlap wih each other. x1.5 is quite easy to catch anyway as the bpm is so slow, so it should be fine! Too lazy to redo the whole diff, and it's a slow, calming song, so I don't see a reason to put bigger distance here

    Normal
    Very a like as for Easy, in Normal circles with 1/2 far away from each other overlap so I think you should rise the distance snap higher so that they don't. Then you can use it to your advantage,- for example you can have one note snapped with the slider 1/2 afterwards but then place circle 1/2 after distance snapped. Same about this
    00:07:814 (1,3) - Those two sliders are a bit unsymmetrical. I think they should end of the same Y as they started, so making a perfect C shape. No, they shouldn't. With the following notes they build the symmetric arc
    00:09:014 (2,4) - Snap with the end of the slider before it. Disaggree
    00:14:533 (5) - Make into the same shape as (2) and (3). Done
    00:16:693 (2,4) - Snap with the end of the slider before it. Same
    00:55:570 (1) - This note makes it a bit overmapped in this part, I suggest removing it. It's for the "If", so disaggree
    00:59:410 (1) - ^. Put a note at 00:59:170 placing it x:296 and y:192 instead? ^
    01:15:009 - New combo, its a tall white tick and they are 50% more likely to be new combo than other ticks :P I think it fits the way it is
    01:15:968 - No new combo
    01:17:888 - New combo. Also, make the slider be in the middle lane so x:256 and y:244 Then it won't be vertical symmetric, and that is what it's supposed to be
    03:09:719 (1,2,3) - Instead of doing this, why not Copy the previous 1,2,3 and then flick it horizontally..? And then starting the next combo from the middle. It is the previous (1,2,3), just rotated by 120°

    Hard
    Again the spacing should be risen by about 0.4 so that circles and slider 1/2 after each other don't overlap. Again the same~
    00:43:091 (2) - y:72, distance snap after. Disaggree
    00:55:570 (1) - Remove note No
    02:10:444 (1) - ^ ^
    02:29:883 (1) - Its overlapping previous slider so doesn't look nice, fix pls? I like that kind of overlap --> No changes
    02:32:762 (1) - ^ ^
    02:33:722 (3) - ^ You have so much space to use but you do this :? Same as above
    03:04:440 (1) - ^ ^
Barney Stinson
AYO DUDE SOMEONE ASKED BARNEY'S HELP HUASHAUSHASUHAUASHUASHUASHAS

Normal:
00:05:895 (1,2,3) - Not suitable stack
00:07:815 (1,3) - When I saw these ones my face looked like http://puu.sh/vEgJ I know u can do em in a decent way
00:22:693 (1,2,3) - Not suitable following this kind of rhythm on a normal
00:30:373 (1,2,3) - ^
00:45:971 (1,2) - ^
00:55:571 (1) - Remove this note or at least remove NC on (2)
00:55:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - An easy player would get crazy with such pattern. Remove (2) and (4)
00:59:651 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same
01:08:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:11:645 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:15:485 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:18:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:23:403 (2,3,4,5) - ^
FOR ALL THOSE PATTERNS U CAN CHOOSE TO REMOVE NOTES I SAID BEFORE OR FOLLOW A RHYTHM LIKE THIS 02:26:043 (1,2,3) -
Apply same suggestions to all patterns like that, please
03:42:837 (6) - For a better flow Copy Pasta (4) and ctrl+h it

Hard:
00:55:811 (1) - remove nc



Nothing more. Dude, you map in a so easy way noone can't find corrections worthy to be mentioned. You can pay more attention on forming slider, since some of them are badly formed. For the rest keep going, this could be an awesome map. From now I can only say good luck
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

Barney Stinson wrote:

AYO DUDE SOMEONE ASKED BARNEY'S HELP HUASHAUSHASUHAUASHUASHUASHAS

Normal:
00:05:895 (1,2,3) - Not suitable stack Disaggree
00:07:815 (1,3) - When I saw these ones my face looked like http://puu.sh/vEgJ I know u can do em in a decent way I want them that way.
00:22:693 (1,2,3) - Not suitable following this kind of rhythm on a normal
00:30:373 (1,2,3) - ^
00:45:971 (1,2) - ^
00:55:571 (1) - Remove this note or at least remove NC on (2) Neither not. I was told to put NC on the begin of Kiai
00:55:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - An easy player would get crazy with such pattern. Remove (2) and (4)
00:59:651 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same
01:08:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:11:645 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:15:485 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:18:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:23:403 (2,3,4,5) - ^
FOR ALL THOSE PATTERNS U CAN CHOOSE TO REMOVE NOTES I SAID BEFORE OR FOLLOW A RHYTHM LIKE THIS 02:26:043 (1,2,3) -
Apply same suggestions to all patterns like that, please
03:42:837 (6) - For a better flow Copy Pasta (4) and ctrl+h it Disaggree
For all the things about the rhythm: This is a [Normal], the Distance itself is pretty low, and imo this is okay

Hard:
00:55:811 (1) - remove nc Same as in [Normal]



Nothing more. Dude, you map in a so easy way noone can't find corrections worthy to be mentioned. You can pay more attention on forming slider, since some of them are badly formed. For the rest keep going, this could be an awesome map. From now I can only say good luck
SuperMIC
Thank you SO SO SO much for putting a Lady Gaga song on my queue. I love Lady Gaga. :3

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[General]

I'm confused as to why you're using S:C1 (hitsounds). There aren't even any customs in it. You can switch 'em all to just Soft?

[Easy]

Oh boy... I'm not sure. This Easy is a bit TOO Easy. The distance spacing is way way WAAY to short and the SV is way too slow. The other problem is that the slow SV will make pretty much all of your sliders' starts and ends touch. I'd suggest turning the SV up and re-spacing all notes, but that's basically a remap... oh well, even if you don't redo the SV, PLEASE increase distance spacing. You want to challenge Easy players even a little bit. :P

00:23:653 (2) - Don't let start and end of a slider touch. Looks ugly and causes some problems... (sometimes)
00:31:333 (2) - ^
01:20:769 (5) - Whistle?
01:21:248 (1) - Slide back two ticks on the timeline and extend back to the long white tick? Just so players have more reaction time.
02:35:643 (4) - Whistle?

[Normal]

00:03:015 (1) - RNC
00:03:975 (2) - NC
00:55:811 (1) - RNC
01:20:769 (6) - Whistle?
03:46:677 (3) - Finish?

[Hard]

00:55:811 (1) - RNC
01:20:769 (6) - Whistle?
02:03:965 (6) - Doesn't sound good. If you want to keep the repeating slider, it sounds a lot cleaner and awesome in 1/3. :O Of course, re-space everything after that, or move it and (7) closer to the next hitobjects.


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My God, that was awesome. It was a really clean map. (Except for those Easy issues. :3) Have a star!

GL
jabberwockey
Hi from my queue~
Lady gaga <333

Okay here we go


[Easy]

The notes are kind of arranged messily during the beginning of this song.Consider arranged them a little more neatly?

01:47:621 (1) - Remove NC
03:30:382 (3) - Add NC
03:31:252 (1) - Remove NC
03:53:424 (2) - Try this:
03:55:304 - Start the spinner here

[Normal]

01:17:868 (4) - Add NC
03:55:304 - Start the spinner here

[Hard]

This Hard is more like your Normal but mapped differently....maybe try more interesting and harder patterns? :?

01:35:621 (3) - Sounds better if you extend this slider upto 01:36:631
03:15:440 - Might want to add something here
03:55:304 - Start the spinner here


Nice song and map \:D/ Good luck!
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mods =)

SuperMICrophone wrote:

Thank you SO SO SO much for putting a Lady Gaga song on my queue. I love Lady Gaga. :3

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[General]

I'm confused as to why you're using S:C1 (hitsounds). There aren't even any customs in it. You can switch 'em all to just Soft? Because of the silenced sliderslide I use S:C1

[Easy]

Oh boy... I'm not sure. This Easy is a bit TOO Easy. The distance spacing is way way WAAY to short and the SV is way too slow. The other problem is that the slow SV will make pretty much all of your sliders' starts and ends touch. I'd suggest turning the SV up and re-spacing all notes, but that's basically a remap... oh well, even if you don't redo the SV, PLEASE increase distance spacing. You want to challenge Easy players even a little bit. :P I will keep it this way, until a MAT or BAT complains about it ( I hope they won't D: )

00:23:653 (2) - Don't let start and end of a slider touch. Looks ugly and causes some problems... (sometimes) Disaggree
00:31:333 (2) - ^ ^
01:20:769 (5) - Whistle? Done
01:21:248 (1) - Slide back two ticks on the timeline and extend back to the long white tick? Just so players have more reaction time. Disaggree
02:35:643 (4) - Whistle? Done

[Normal]

00:03:015 (1) - RNC Disaggree
00:03:975 (2) - NC Disaggree
00:55:811 (1) - RNC Disaggree
01:20:769 (6) - Whistle? Done
03:46:677 (3) - Finish? Done

[Hard]

00:55:811 (1) - RNC Disaggree
01:20:769 (6) - Whistle? Done
02:03:965 (6) - Doesn't sound good. If you want to keep the repeating slider, it sounds a lot cleaner and awesome in 1/3. :O Of course, re-space everything after that, or move it and (7) closer to the next hitobjects.

Fixed
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My God, that was awesome. It was a really clean map. (Except for those Easy issues. :3) Have a star!

GL

Shoily wrote:

Hi from my queue~
Lady gaga <333

Okay here we go


[Easy]

The notes are kind of arranged messily during the beginning of this song.Consider arranged them a little more neatly?

01:47:621 (1) - Remove NC Disaggree
03:30:382 (3) - Add NC Disaggree
03:31:252 (1) - Remove NC Disaggree
03:53:424 (2) - Try this: Disaggree
03:55:304 - Start the spinner here Disaggree

[Normal]

01:17:868 (4) - Add NC Done
03:55:304 - Start the spinner here Disaggree

[Hard]

This Hard is more like your Normal but mapped differently....maybe try more interesting and harder patterns? :? You mean something like jumps? Nah, don't want them in this map
01:35:621 (3) - Sounds better if you extend this slider upto 01:36:631 Disaggree
03:15:440 - Might want to add something here I keep this "hole" in every Kiai
03:55:304 - Start the spinner here Disaggree


Nice song and map \:D/ Good luck!
Tenshi-nyan
Sorry, not gonna mod this - I f***in hate Lady Gaga.
Kyshiro
As requested by PM :3

Easy:

  • 00:22:213 (3) - Touching the hp bar
    00:23:653 (2) - Looks fine, no problem at all, but next time try to keep the waypoints a bit more clear?
    00:50:051 (1) - Can't help but think this curve looks a bit awkward on the inside, maybe try making it a bit wider?
    00:51:491 (2) - ^
    00:55:811 (1,3) - ^
    01:03:489 (1) - Center the middle waypoint, looks better imo.
    01:05:409 (3) - If you did ^ then copy it and CTRL+H
    01:57:245 (2) - Looks a bit weird
    02:18:363 (1,3) - Copy 1 and paste at (3) and press CTRL+< to flip it, this way it looks fits the combo better(Notes which come after this might need to be a little bit adjusted)

    03:15:959 (1,3) - Same here, the center would look better if stretched a tiny little bit
    03:21:719 (3) - (nazi) 1 grid down using tiny grid
Normal:

  • 00:07:815 (1,3) - These sliders look a bit bad
    00:11:655 (1,2,3,4,5) - This combo can look way nicer, Try to make it look a bit as if it goes in a perfect circle?(Select them all and you'll see what I mean)(If you change anything keep note of the spacing, also for the following notes)
    00:15:493 (1) - Also doesn't look really nice, you should consider using 2 waypoints in the middle of it, this can make it look much nicer(Make sure the end point stays in the center of the circle too)
    02:00:125 (6,1,2,3) - Same as before, this can be made into a perfect half circle, would look better
    02:55:321 (7,1) - These sliders look a bit messy, try stretching them a bit?
    02:59:161 (7) - ^
    03:18:839 (2) - Center the waypoint
    03:33:237 (2,4) - ^

Hard:

  • 00:30:853 (3) - Center the middle waypoint
    00:55:811 (1) - remove NC
    01:17:889 (1,2) - Center the waypoints(Fix 1, copy to the other one)
    02:03:965 (6,7) - This doesn't really fit in my opinion, http://puu.sh/vQLs This fits better I think.
    02:16:445 (7,8,9) - This would play better if you took the way up after (7), like this:http://puu.sh/vQMg
    02:33:723 (3) - Center this middle point
    03:09:719 (1) - NC
    03:11:639 (1) - NC
    03:12:119 (1) - Remove NC
If you have any questions contact me in game.

Goodluck! :3
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod =)

Kyshiro wrote:

As requested by PM :3

Easy:

  • 00:22:213 (3) - Touching the hp bar Fixed
    00:23:653 (2) - Looks fine, no problem at all, but next time try to keep the waypoints a bit more clear? Okay x3
    00:50:051 (1) - Can't help but think this curve looks a bit awkward on the inside, maybe try making it a bit wider? Done
    00:51:491 (2) - ^ ^
    00:55:811 (1,3) - ^ No changes
    01:03:489 (1) - Center the middle waypoint, looks better imo. Done
    01:05:409 (3) - If you did ^ then copy it and CTRL+H Done
    01:57:245 (2) - Looks a bit weird No changes
    02:18:363 (1,3) - Copy 1 and paste at (3) and press CTRL+< to flip it, this way it looks fits the combo better(Notes which come after this might need to be a little bit adjusted) Done

    03:15:959 (1,3) - Same here, the center would look better if stretched a tiny little bit Disaggree
    03:21:719 (3) - (nazi) 1 grid down using tiny grid Done
Normal:

  • 00:07:815 (1,3) - These sliders look a bit bad I won't explain it anymore..
    00:11:655 (1,2,3,4,5) - This combo can look way nicer, Try to make it look a bit as if it goes in a perfect circle?(Select them all and you'll see what I mean)(If you change anything keep note of the spacing, also for the following notes) Tried, but not sure, whether it worked
    00:15:493 (1) - Also doesn't look really nice, you should consider using 2 waypoints in the middle of it, this can make it look much nicer(Make sure the end point stays in the center of the circle too) Disaggree
    02:00:125 (6,1,2,3) - Same as before, this can be made into a perfect half circle, would look better Same as before
    02:55:321 (7,1) - These sliders look a bit messy, try stretching them a bit? Disaggree
    02:59:161 (7) - ^ ^
    03:18:839 (2) - Center the waypoint Done
    03:33:237 (2,4) - ^ ^

Hard:

  • 00:30:853 (3) - Center the middle waypoint Done
    00:55:811 (1) - remove NC Disaggree
    01:17:889 (1,2) - Center the waypoints(Fix 1, copy to the other one) Done
    02:03:965 (6,7) - This doesn't really fit in my opinion, http://puu.sh/vQLs This fits better I think. Fixed
    02:16:445 (7,8,9) - This would play better if you took the way up after (7), like this:http://puu.sh/vQMg Changed and fixed Distance afterwards
    02:33:723 (3) - Center this middle point Done
    03:09:719 (1) - NC Done
    03:11:639 (1) - NC Done
    03:12:119 (1) - Remove NC Done
If you have any questions contact me in game.

Goodluck! :3
Doodley

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Sorry, not gonna mod this - I f***in hate Lady Gaga.
What a valuable post. Besides, this song is nothing like the rest of her music and is actually quite relaxing.

Hello. As per my queue.

General
Make sure your beats and sliders fall on the beat or offbeat, and not just what it sounds like the lyrics fall on. There's no point to it.
00:00:135 (Timing Section) - Volume 25%
00:07:814 - New Timing Section, Soft, Volume 35%
I don't know everyone's fetish with grey combo colors is, because they look terrible. Make it a light brown or white, please.

Hard
00:00:135 (1) - Whistle hitsound.
00:02:054 (1) - ^
00:03:974 (1) - ^
00:05:894 (1) - ^
00:42:371 (1) - Shorten to red tick. (00:42:611) Trust me on this one, okay? An MAT will tell you the same thing.
02:03:965 (6, 7) - Remove these. Replace with...
^ 02:03:965 - New note.
^ 02:04:205 - New note. Either that, or a slider starting and ending at said times. Ending on a tick that doesn't exist in 1/4 doesn't make sense when it note falls fine on a red tick.
02:10:684 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:24:598 (3) - Ugly slider. Try this:

^ 03:26:518 - Flip this slider vertically (only if you do the above suggestion of course)

Normal
00:55:810 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:05:884 (2) - Shorten to white tick, remove repeat.
^ 02:06:364 - New note.

Easy
No problems.

I like it. Have a star.
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod =)

stickmeister wrote:

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Sorry, not gonna mod this - I f***in hate Lady Gaga.
What a valuable post. Besides, this song is nothing like the rest of her music and is actually quite relaxing.

Hello. As per my queue.

General
Make sure your beats and sliders fall on the beat or offbeat, and not just what it sounds like the lyrics fall on. There's no point to it.
00:00:135 (Timing Section) - Volume 25% Put here the 35%
00:07:814 - New Timing Section, Soft, Volume 35% And here the 50% as before
I don't know everyone's fetish with grey combo colors is, because they look terrible. Make it a light brown or white, please. Changed

Hard
00:00:135 (1) - Whistle hitsound. Done
00:02:054 (1) - ^ ^
00:03:974 (1) - ^ ^
00:05:894 (1) - ^ ^
00:42:371 (1) - Shorten to red tick. (00:42:611) Trust me on this one, okay? An MAT will tell you the same thing. Not that I don't trust you, but I am kinda lazy, and as long as no MATs or BATs complain about it, I won't change it
02:03:965 (6, 7) - Remove these. Replace with... These notes were already replaced by previous mod~
^ 02:03:965 - New note.
^ 02:04:205 - New note. Either that, or a slider starting and ending at said times. Ending on a tick that doesn't exist in 1/4 doesn't make sense when it note falls fine on a red tick.
02:10:684 (1) - Remove new combo. Nooo
03:24:598 (3) - Ugly slider. Try this:
Fixed
^ 03:26:518 - Flip this slider vertically (only if you do the above suggestion of course) Done

Normal
00:55:810 (1) - Remove new combo. Nooo
02:05:884 (2) - Shorten to white tick, remove repeat. Disaggree
^ 02:06:364 - New note. Disaggree

Easy
No problems.

I like it. Have a star. Thanks :3
Shohei Ohtani
Overall:
I don't like where your preview point is D:. It'd probably sound better in the generic 1st chorus position :>.

Hard:
01:34:207 (1,3) - I know this is going for a pattern, but it'd probably be better to have these slider symmetrical~

Normal:
00:07:815 (1) - Not very moe D:
00:09:735 (3) - ^
01:09:729 (7) - Add clap?
01:30:367 (1) - Not very moe D:

Easy:
02:34:203 (3) - A bit nazi, but unsymmetrical~

Nice. Starred~
Flask
Request From Mod queue ~
wow Lady GaGa <3

General
Preview Time : 55810 (the beginning of KIAI TIME)
If you don't need a SB , delete OSB

Easy
02:26:523 (1) - why there is a finish ? remove it .

Normal
00:22:963 (1) - you may do the distance spacing again . do like this
00:55:811 (1) - remove nc
01:08:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is too hard to Normal diff , use some sliders to instead of them
01:49:567 (2) - up 1 gird (gird level4)
01:50:046 (3) - ^
02:11:645 (2,3,4,5,6) - same problem on 01:08:289 (2,3,4,5,6) -
02:15:485 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:52:921 (1,7,1,7) - do like this
02:53:881 (2,3,4,5,6) - Uhh
02:57:721 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:20:759 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:51:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Hard
fine LAZY ME


that's all :D !
Cygnus
  • Easy
  1. Approach Rate +1/+2

  2. 01:51:966 (1) - Remove new combo.

  3. 01:56:765 (1) - ^. New combo on the next note.

  4. Not really sure about your new combos. There's too many of them.

  • Normal
  1. 03:25:318 (8) - One grid right.

  • Insane
  1. Seems fine.

  • Comment
  1. The sliders are so slow. ><. Sorry for the nazi modding, i don't really see any.
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mods =)

CDFA wrote:

Overall:
I don't like where your preview point is D:. It'd probably sound better in the generic 1st chorus position :>. Fixed

Hard:
01:34:207 (1,3) - I know this is going for a pattern, but it'd probably be better to have these slider symmetrical~ Changed

Normal:
00:07:815 (1) - Not very moe D: Feels like a déjà-vu, again and again --> I won't explain it anymore
00:09:735 (3) - ^ ^
01:09:729 (7) - Add clap? Disaggree
01:30:367 (1) - Not very moe D: As before

Easy:
02:34:203 (3) - A bit nazi, but unsymmetrical~ Fixed

Nice. Starred~ Thanks =)

Flask wrote:

Request From Mod queue ~
wow Lady GaGa <3

General
Preview Time : 55810 (the beginning of KIAI TIME) Fixed
If you don't need a SB , delete OSB Deleted

Easy
02:26:523 (1) - why there is a finish ? remove it. Removed

Normal
00:22:963 (1) - you may do the distance spacing again . do like this
Fixed
00:55:811 (1) - remove nc Disaggree
01:08:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is too hard to Normal diff , use some sliders to instead of them Disaggree here, too
01:49:567 (2) - up 1 gird (gird level4) Fixed
01:50:046 (3) - ^ ^
02:11:645 (2,3,4,5,6) - same problem on 01:08:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same answer here
02:15:485 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
02:52:921 (1,7,1,7) - do like this
Disaggree
02:53:881 (2,3,4,5,6) - Uhh ~
02:57:721 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
03:20:759 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
03:51:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

Hard
fine LAZY ME


that's all :D !

Philippines wrote:

  • Easy
  1. Approach Rate +1/+2 Disaggree, it is a slow song

  2. 01:51:966 (1) - Remove new combo. Disaggree

  3. 01:56:765 (1) - ^. New combo on the next note. Done

  4. Not really sure about your new combos. There's too many of them.

  • Normal
  1. 03:25:318 (8) - One grid right. Fixed

  • Insane It is [Hard] but okay :D
  1. Seems fine.

  • Comment
  1. The sliders are so slow. ><. Sorry for the nazi modding, i don't really see any. Slow song --> slow sliders
HellDawn

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Sorry, not gonna mod this - I f***in hate Lady Gaga.
I will kill you -.-
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

HellDawn wrote:

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Sorry, not gonna mod this - I f***in hate Lady Gaga.
I will kill you -.-
"Discuss" that with Tenshi-nyan, but not here please.
Thanks.
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
There is nothing unrankable and in fact a lot of good things about your map but it has a lot of passages where there is simply one hit per beat and I think it could benefit from perhaps having a few sliders in those places that repeat on the red ticks aswell

[Normal]
00:25:093 (5) - if you could fit the curve of the slider to the circle of 6 that'd be great
00:27:013 (1) - ^ to match
00:42:131 (1,2,3) - this bit plays awkwardly
00:50:051 (2,3,4) - ^ you might want to change the sliders to hitcircles? it doesn't fit the tone as well but it emphasizes to the players that the rhythm is a bit wonky
01:19:329 (2) - center the slider around 1
01:45:727 (2) - fit to 3
:) This one is even better than Easy

[Hard]
00:11:655 (1) - fit to 2
00:26:533 (9) - the positioning on this feels like it should be farther to the right to make a curve going the opposite direction with 8 and 1
00:33:252 (7,8,9,1) - ...square? QQ

Overall very nice map, the slider art in particular is exquisite. Your Easy gets a bit monotonous at points but otherwise this is definitely very close to ranking.
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod =)

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
There is nothing unrankable and in fact a lot of good things about your map but it has a lot of passages where there is simply one hit per beat and I think it could benefit from perhaps having a few sliders in those places that repeat on the red ticks aswell. I am so lazy and don't feel like making "big" changes anymore~

[Normal]
00:25:093 (5) - if you could fit the curve of the slider to the circle of 6 that'd be great Fixed
00:27:013 (1) - ^ to match Fixed
00:42:131 (1,2,3) - this bit plays awkwardly Lenghtened (2) to the white tick
00:50:051 (2,3,4) - ^ you might want to change the sliders to hitcircles? it doesn't fit the tone as well but it emphasizes to the players that the rhythm is a bit wonky Disaggree here, I don't want/like circles on blue ticks in a [Normal]
01:19:329 (2) - center the slider around 1 Fixed
01:45:727 (2) - fit to 3 Fixed
:) This one is even better than Easy

[Hard]
00:11:655 (1) - fit to 2 Fixed
00:26:533 (9) - the positioning on this feels like it should be farther to the right to make a curve going the opposite direction with 8 and 1 Hm, no. (7,8,9) are (4,5,6) with Ctrl + H and Ctrl + J
00:33:252 (7,8,9,1) - ...square? QQ Fixed

Overall very nice map, the slider art in particular is exquisite. Your Easy gets a bit monotonous at points but otherwise this is definitely very close to ranking. It makes me so happy hearing this from an osu! Alumni :3
HelloSCV
Gneral
in start and end of KiAi time, you must make a note or slider or spinner
01:10:929 -> 01:10:209 Fixing KiAi time
02:25:803 -> 02:25:083 ^
03:15:719 -> 03:14:999 ^
03:54:356 (1) - that spin is so long how about reducing it?

Easy
03:46:677 (1) - delete NC

Normal

02:20:283 (5) - Add Finish sound on the front of slider
02:54:841 (6) - How about add Finish sound?

Hard

01:20:769 (6) - How about changing pattern like this? http://puu.sh/wTv6 It looks better I think
02:16:445 (1) - NC
I think breaking time is pretty long how about reduce it?
02:53:881 (3,4,5) - If you make a note straight way fix it.
03:05:161 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about this pattern? http://puu.sh/wTwi
03:13:079 (1) - NC
03:13:079 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks better http://puu.sh/wTwA
03:15:719 -> 03:14:999 Fixing KiAi time or 03:15:479 (6,7) - adding notes

Lovely song I'll shoot a star Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

HelloSCV wrote:

Gneral
in start and end of KiAi time, you must make a note or slider or spinner Not necessarely, no
01:10:929 -> 01:10:209 Fixing KiAi time Disaggree
02:25:803 -> 02:25:083 ^ ^
03:15:719 -> 03:14:999 ^ ^
03:54:356 (1) - that spin is so long how about reducing it? Nope

Easy
03:46:677 (1) - delete NC Done

Normal

02:20:283 (5) - Add Finish sound on the front of slider Disaggre
02:54:841 (6) - How about add Finish sound? Disaggre

Hard

01:20:769 (6) - How about changing pattern like this? http://puu.sh/wTv6 It looks better I think Done
02:16:445 (1) - NC Disaggre
I think breaking time is pretty long how about reduce it? Nope
02:53:881 (3,4,5) - If you make a note straight way fix it. Fixed
03:05:161 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about this pattern? http://puu.sh/wTwi Done
03:13:079 (1) - NC Disaggree
03:13:079 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks better http://puu.sh/wTwA Changed
03:15:719 -> 03:14:999 Fixing KiAi time or 03:15:479 (6,7) - adding notes Disaggre

Lovely song I'll shoot a star Good luck :) Thanks :3
Kei
Hello! :D

  • General
  1. I like a lot the background! I just wanted to say that. The map's folder is very clean.
  • [Easy]
  1. I can't hear the clap sample. It sounds just like the music itself I guess.
  2. 00:11:175 (4,1,2,1,2,3) - I personally don't like very much this kind of rhythm patterns for easiest difficulties. I suggest you to try something like you did at 00:23:173 (1,2,1,2,3). That was great. More long sliders is more easy and suitable imo. It's a very slow song so I guess it is ok.

    That's all I have to say about this diff. Good samples, good rhythm and patterns. You can add more samples.. like soft whistles. That would be nice.
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:55:811 (1) - I get the sense of this nc but.. it feels and looks.. weird and.. a bit unnecesary. I think that it would be better if you remove it.
  2. 02:10:685 (1) - This slider is too far away from the center of the spinner for a Normal difficulty. You should move it more closer to there, and be sure that it doesn't overlap with the spinner-osu.

    A bit challenging Normal diff just because of those slow streams, but it looks nice. Very pretty symmetry!
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:45:971 (7) - The new combo should be here instead of being in the next slider, because the singer starts singing here at (7), don't you think? :D
  2. 00:55:811 (1) - Just the same as I told you about the normal diff. I get the purpose of this nc but it feels and looks a bit unnecesary. Perhaps remove it?
  3. 00:59:411 (8) - Nc here instead of being at the next slider? it's to follow the vocals, for the same reason as I told you already at the start of the mod.
  4. 02:06:124 - A note here would follow perfectly the vocals.
  5. 02:10:685 (1) - Again, the same as I told you about this nc. I suggest you to remove it.
  6. 02:32:523 (8) - Againnn nc here instead of being at the next slider? because she starts singing here, not at the next slider.
  7. 03:04:201 (4) - ^?
  8. 03:22:199 (6) - ^? (instead of being at that slider). If you do this you should add a nc to 03:26:039 (4), and after that, remove nc at 03:28:439 (1).

    Good diff too!~
Pretty good mapset. good luck!
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

Kei wrote:

Hello! :D

  • General
  1. I like a lot the background! I just wanted to say that. The map's folder is very clean.
  • [Easy]
  1. I can't hear the clap sample. It sounds just like the music itself I guess.
  2. 00:11:175 (4,1,2,1,2,3) - I personally don't like very much this kind of rhythm patterns for easiest difficulties. I suggest you to try something like you did at 00:23:173 (1,2,1,2,3). That was great. More long sliders is more easy and suitable imo. It's a very slow song so I guess it is ok. No changes~

    That's all I have to say about this diff. Good samples, good rhythm and patterns. You can add more samples.. like soft whistles. That would be nice.
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:55:811 (1) - I get the sense of this nc but.. it feels and looks.. weird and.. a bit unnecesary. I think that it would be better if you remove it. Okay, finally after you are about the fifth person saying this, I removed the NC
  2. 02:10:685 (1) - This slider is too far away from the center of the spinner for a Normal difficulty. You should move it more closer to there, and be sure that it doesn't overlap with the spinner-osu. Left it for the moment. If more complain about it, I'll change

    A bit challenging Normal diff just because of those slow streams, but it looks nice. Very pretty symmetry!
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:45:971 (7) - The new combo should be here instead of being in the next slider, because the singer starts singing here at (7), don't you think? :D But the next word is more emphasized, so no changes
  2. 00:55:811 (1) - Just the same as I told you about the normal diff. I get the purpose of this nc but it feels and looks a bit unnecesary. Perhaps remove it? Done
  3. 00:59:411 (8) - Nc here instead of being at the next slider? it's to follow the vocals, for the same reason as I told you already at the start of the mod. Same here as before
  4. 02:06:124 - A note here would follow perfectly the vocals. Done
  5. 02:10:685 (1) - Again, the same as I told you about this nc. I suggest you to remove it.
  6. 02:32:523 (8) - Againnn nc here instead of being at the next slider? because she starts singing here, not at the next slider.
  7. 03:04:201 (4) - ^?
  8. 03:22:199 (6) - ^? (instead of being at that slider). If you do this you should add a nc to 03:26:039 (4), and after that, remove nc at 03:28:439 (1). Same with the rest of the NC suggestions

    Good diff too!~
Pretty good mapset. good luck! Thanks :3
mancuso_JM_
Ok! Time to mod your map as I promised in-game ;)

[General:]

- I always prefer to see at least 3 Combo Colours. Looks better at the hour to play the map in my opinion, looking your BG I think that fit fine like a light yellow, try with this code:
Combo3 : 255,255,191
- When you use 50% in hitsounds, they sound a bit low, try to increase this sections at least in 10%

[Easy:]

Settings:
--> I think that you have to increase the Approach Rate by 1 Tick, it's also low and looking your Slider Velocity I think that plays better with AR3 (AR+1)

00:19:813 (2): At the beginning of this Slider you should add a Whistle, sounds a sound that need an emphatisize in the music, if you don't have any hitsounds this part sounds empty. The double whistle fit fine too (with previous 1), so add it please
00:34:692 (1): In my opinion sounds kinda empty without any kind of Hitsounds. Following your other patterns and because fit better with music, you should add a Whistle at the beginning of this Slider
00:59:650 (1): Same as above, sounds really fine if you add a Whistle at Slider beginning
01:16:928 (2): To enforce the Instrumental, you should add a Whistle in this note, in my opinion is really needed

Wow, this difficulty looks very fine and it's too relaxing to play :)

[Normal:]

Settings:
--> Well, In this case I think that the AR doesn't fit at all having a Slow Slider Velocity and in this case I think that the difference is a bit notorial. Try to decrease it by 1 Tick (AR-1)

00:19:813 (2): Same as Normal diff.
02:03:965 (5): Following the Vocal, this slider should ends 1/4 forward (Blue Tick, 02:04:325). Fit better in my opinion
02:52:921 (1): To be sincere this Slider doesn't look fine to play, the shape is bad. Looks better if you do a shape like the screenshoot, and the Copy/paste it to the places where you use the bad shape (For example: 02:55:320 - 02:56:760 and 02:59:160)
02:53:641 (x): Following the Instrumental, you should add a note here
03:24:118 (4): The Kiai ended and the rhythm change, so, try to add a New Combo in this note
03:33:237 (2): You are missing a Whistle at the beginning of this Slider. The music sounds kind a whistle so is better if you add it one
03:44:277 (7): She start to sing again on here and here she said something to ''eyes get some'' I think that this must be a unify. So, try to add a New Combo in this note and Remove it on the next (1)
03:52:916 (1): Following the instrumental, I'm that the Slider Tick Rate in this Slider doesn't work enough in this case, because in the middle sounds a bit high and It's need an emphatisize. Try to do a 1/1 Slider (starts here and finish on 03:53:396) and then add a note in 03:53:876 (Try this formation with the Slider and the note if you want to mantain the Symetry)

[Hard:]

00:15:493 (1): Well, this is not one of the best Shapes that I saw in a map, I think that it can better. Try this one, is very easy to do (And then Copy/Paste to do the same shape in (5))
00:38:531 (3): This Finish at the beginning of this Slider is totally inconsistent in this patterns out of Kiais (Where you never used to Finish), inclusive comparing with the other difficulties. Try to remove it and keep only the Whistle
00:47:411 (4): Something Similar happens on here, you never used a Whistle on any Sliderbody. Remove it please to mantain consistency
01:36:607 (x): This Stop (looking the Space between (2) and (3)) in the timeline is really unnecesary, and I know that here fit perfectly a note. Try to add one to mantain the flow in the map
01:51:966 (5): This Repetition in this Slider doesn't fit at all, you don't need to do a unify since the Start the Vocal where you add a Repeat. Fit better with music if you delete the Repetition and add 2 notes. The first one in 01:53:405 and the Second one in 01:53:885, also add a New Combo on the first note (to emphatisize the Start of the vocal) and remove it from 01:54:365

Well you don't use all of the elements in the song to make a perfect song, I know that it's a Relaxing Hard but in my opinion you could exploit all the elements to do this map. Anyways it's Ok, is just a personal thing, nothing major to point out

And That's All. Second Uruguayan mod in the day lol
In general it's a nice map and preety good to go. So, you deserve it my Kudos Star :)
Best of Luck on getting this map ranked, Yli ;)
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod, mancuso :3

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Ok! Time to mod your map as I promised in-game ;)

[General:]

- I always prefer to see at least 3 Combo Colours. Looks better at the hour to play the map in my opinion, looking your BG I think that fit fine like a light yellow, try with this code:
Combo3 : 255,255,191
Done
- When you use 50% in hitsounds, they sound a bit low, try to increase this sections at least in 10% Changed

[Easy:]

Settings:
--> I think that you have to increase the Approach Rate by 1 Tick, it's also low and looking your Slider Velocity I think that plays better with AR3 (AR+1) Done

00:19:813 (2): At the beginning of this Slider you should add a Whistle, sounds a sound that need an emphatisize in the music, if you don't have any hitsounds this part sounds empty. The double whistle fit fine too (with previous 1), so add it please I often forgot that whistle, dunno why. Either way, added
00:34:692 (1): In my opinion sounds kinda empty without any kind of Hitsounds. Following your other patterns and because fit better with music, you should add a Whistle at the beginning of this Slider Done
00:59:650 (1): Same as above, sounds really fine if you add a Whistle at Slider beginning Done
01:16:928 (2): To enforce the Instrumental, you should add a Whistle in this note, in my opinion is really needed Done

Wow, this difficulty looks very fine and it's too relaxing to play :)

[Normal:]

Settings:
--> Well, In this case I think that the AR doesn't fit at all having a Slow Slider Velocity and in this case I think that the difference is a bit notorial. Try to decrease it by 1 Tick (AR-1) Done

00:19:813 (2): Same as Normal diff. You mean Easy, but done
02:03:965 (5): Following the Vocal, this slider should ends 1/4 forward (Blue Tick, 02:04:325). Fit better in my opinion Done
02:52:921 (1): To be sincere this Slider doesn't look fine to play, the shape is bad. Looks better if you do a shape like the screenshoot, and the Copy/paste it to the places where you use the bad shape (For example: 02:55:320 - 02:56:760 and 02:59:160)
Changed
02:53:641 (x): Following the Instrumental, you should add a note here Done
03:24:118 (4): The Kiai ended and the rhythm change, so, try to add a New Combo in this note Done
03:33:237 (2): You are missing a Whistle at the beginning of this Slider. The music sounds kind a whistle so is better if you add it one Done
03:44:277 (7): She start to sing again on here and here she said something to ''eyes get some'' I think that this must be a unify. So, try to add a New Combo in this note and Remove it on the next (1) Done
03:52:916 (1): Following the instrumental, I'm that the Slider Tick Rate in this Slider doesn't work enough in this case, because in the middle sounds a bit high and It's need an emphatisize. Try to do a 1/1 Slider (starts here and finish on 03:53:396) and then add a note in 03:53:876 (Try this formation with the Slider and the note if you want to mantain the Symetry)
Changed

[Hard:]

00:15:493 (1): Well, this is not one of the best Shapes that I saw in a map, I think that it can better. Try this one, is very easy to do (And then Copy/Paste to do the same shape in (5))
I know, that shape sucked xD Changed
00:38:531 (3): This Finish at the beginning of this Slider is totally inconsistent in this patterns out of Kiais (Where you never used to Finish), inclusive comparing with the other difficulties. Try to remove it and keep only the Whistle Removed
00:47:411 (4): Something Similar happens on here, you never used a Whistle on any Sliderbody. Remove it please to mantain consistency Removed. Dunno why it was there
01:36:607 (x): This Stop (looking the Space between (2) and (3)) in the timeline is really unnecesary, and I know that here fit perfectly a note. Try to add one to mantain the flow in the map Placed a note
01:51:966 (5): This Repetition in this Slider doesn't fit at all, you don't need to do a unify since the Start the Vocal where you add a Repeat. Fit better with music if you delete the Repetition and add 2 notes. The first one in 01:53:405 and the Second one in 01:53:885, also add a New Combo on the first note (to emphatisize the Start of the vocal) and remove it from 01:54:365 Done and Done

Well you don't use all of the elements in the song to make a perfect song, I know that it's a Relaxing Hard but in my opinion you could exploit all the elements to do this map. Anyways it's Ok, is just a personal thing, nothing major to point out

And That's All. Second Uruguayan mod in the day lol
In general it's a nice map and preety good to go. So, you deserve it my Kudos Star :)
Best of Luck on getting this map ranked, Yli ;)
Thanks :3
Yuzeyun
Here is the mod you've been waiting for, Melysstyle !

[General]

Offset 129 (-6)
BG is fine (Ratio-wise, so I will leave it.)
MP3 is too.
Put 125,00 BPM ? I feel like this song is more 62,5 but oh well

[Easy]
Though this map is easy enough for me, as the song is not really 125 BPM but more 62.5, I felt like the 1/1s @125 went 1/2 @62,5. I don't know if you really want it played as a 125 BPM song or stick more to the song's real speed. If you want the second choice, you have to delete a lot of notes on the upbeat - All would be very heartbreaking since this Easy plays well - but if you want to keep it as it is, then keep it as it is.

The rest of the mod though

IMO, the AR should be put at 3, that's all.
Easy does not have the same Combo Colors as Normal and Hard !! Please fix this.

[Normal]
00:03:975 (1) - Second control point @ (272,108)
00:30:853 (3) - Second CP @ (300,120)
00:46:931 (3) - Regunar note instead ? It feels pretty hard for a normal

00:50:051 (2,3) - Delete (3) and add 2 repeats for (2).
If you applied this ^
00:51:491 (3) - (152,272)
00:57:011 (3) - Delete it ?
01:00:851 (3) - ^
01:04:449 (3,4,5) - Oh lol it'd be a paradox but change this to 5 circles ? As you did this for 01:08:289 (2,3,4,5,6)

01:30:367 (1) - Second CP @ (232,88)
01:49:087 (1,2) - One single slider with 2 more repeats ? This is a bit risky since you'll have to change. Another solution would be using 4 circles.
01:56:765 (1,2) - 1 circle and 1 slider instead ? The first slider seems to be slightly overmapped.
02:11:885 (3) - Delete ?
02:15:725 (3) - ^
02:19:563 (2) - ^
02:23:403 (2) - ^
02:34:683 (2,3,4) - 5 circles instead ?
02:52:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete (2,3,4), add 1 repeat to (1)
02:56:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ The same thing, delete (2,3) and add 1 repeat to (1)
03:01:801 (2) - Delete ?
03:05:641 (2) - ^
03:17:159 (2) - ^
03:18:599 (1) - ^ and NC to 03:18:839 (2)

[Hard]
00:07:814 (1) -
00:09:734 (5) - As it's the same, use Ctrl+J+H
00:16:693 (2) @(400,184)
00:16:933 (3) @(444,224)
00:17:173 (4) @(400,264)
00:17:413 (5) @(344,284)
^Imo, these would look better.
00:55:810 (2,3,4,5,6) - Moving (3,4,5,6) to these points (In order) : (284,304) - (360,300) - (420,256) - (444,184) looks way better.
01:00:371 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ but with (2-7) and at (152,228) - (76,236) - (24,180) - (36,104) - (100,64) - (172,92)
01:03:489 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spread it out better with the 2 above suggestions
01:11:649 (3,4,5,6,1) - Try to make a pentagonal pattern ?

Imo, this map deserves a small taiko diff, and overall it's good if we don't take in count the speed problem.
spboxer3

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. why don't you unify your combo colors?

Easy



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:53:885 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - It's immature pattern. Actually, it's rankable pattern. but I really think it's low quality pattern. (about arc)
    03:34:197 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - round and round \:D/

Normal




  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:30:367 (1) - [arc issue] the slider arc is awkward for me. suggest to use this pattern↓
    after

    168,156,90367,6,0,B|184:124|244:80|312:132,1,160,2|8

Hard



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. looks all fine.
it's looks immature pattern for "Easy" diff It's Snake style :<
try to find other modder to mod EASY diff.
call me back when you think EASY it's a high quality diff.

Don't give me KD
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

_Gezo_ wrote:

Here is the mod you've been waiting for, Melysstyle !

[General]

Offset 129 (-6)
BG is fine (Ratio-wise, so I will leave it.)
MP3 is too.
Put 125,00 BPM ? I feel like this song is more 62,5 but oh well That's my opinion as well, but I was told to do 125,01~

[Easy]
Though this map is easy enough for me, as the song is not really 125 BPM but more 62.5, I felt like the 1/1s @125 went 1/2 @62,5. I don't know if you really want it played as a 125 BPM song or stick more to the song's real speed. If you want the second choice, you have to delete a lot of notes on the upbeat - All would be very heartbreaking since this Easy plays well - but if you want to keep it as it is, then keep it as it is.
Kept as is it

The rest of the mod though

IMO, the AR should be put at 3, that's all. It is already AR3, as mentioned by mancuso
Easy does not have the same Combo Colors as Normal and Hard !! Please fix this. Fixed

[Normal]
00:03:975 (1) - Second control point @ (272,108) ???
00:30:853 (3) - Second CP @ (300,120) Done
00:46:931 (3) - Regunar note instead ? It feels pretty hard for a normal Disaggree

00:50:051 (2,3) - Delete (3) and add 2 repeats for (2). Disaggree
If you applied this ^
00:51:491 (3) - (152,272)
00:57:011 (3) - Delete it ? No
01:00:851 (3) - ^ ^
01:04:449 (3,4,5) - Oh lol it'd be a paradox but change this to 5 circles ? As you did this for 01:08:289 (2,3,4,5,6) Hm, no

01:30:367 (1) - Second CP @ (232,88) Done
01:49:087 (1,2) - One single slider with 2 more repeats ? This is a bit risky since you'll have to change. Another solution would be using 4 circles. Disaggree
01:56:765 (1,2) - 1 circle and 1 slider instead ? The first slider seems to be slightly overmapped. It fits the vocal~
02:11:885 (3) - Delete ? Disaggree
02:15:725 (3) - ^ ^
02:19:563 (2) - ^ ^
02:23:403 (2) - ^ ^
02:34:683 (2,3,4) - 5 circles instead ? Disaggree
02:52:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete (2,3,4), add 1 repeat to (1) Disaggree
02:56:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ The same thing, delete (2,3) and add 1 repeat to (1) Disaggree
03:01:801 (2) - Delete ? No
03:05:641 (2) - ^ ^
03:17:159 (2) - ^ ^
03:18:599 (1) - ^ and NC to 03:18:839 (2) Disaggree

[Hard]
00:07:814 (1) -
00:09:734 (5) - As it's the same, use Ctrl+J+H I did that already
00:16:693 (2) @(400,184) Done
00:16:933 (3) @(444,224) Done
00:17:173 (4) @(400,264) Done
00:17:413 (5) @(344,284) Done
^Imo, these would look better.
00:55:810 (2,3,4,5,6) - Moving (3,4,5,6) to these points (In order) : (284,304) - (360,300) - (420,256) - (444,184) looks way better. Done
01:00:371 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ but with (2-7) and at (152,228) - (76,236) - (24,180) - (36,104) - (100,64) - (172,92) Done, but kept the slider at the same place
01:03:489 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spread it out better with the 2 above suggestions Fixed
01:11:649 (3,4,5,6,1) - Try to make a pentagonal pattern ? Disaggree

Imo, this map deserves a small taiko diff, and overall it's good if we don't take in count the speed problem. I don't want any GDs on my maps, so no Taiko

spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. why don't you unify your combo colors? I just forgot that >.<

Easy



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:53:885 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - It's immature pattern. Actually, it's rankable pattern. but I really think it's low quality pattern. (about arc) Changed
    03:34:197 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - round and round \:D/

Normal




  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:30:367 (1) - [arc issue] the slider arc is awkward for me. suggest to use this pattern↓ It already got a bit changed by the previous mod. Let's see how that looks
    after

    168,156,90367,6,0,B|184:124|244:80|312:132,1,160,2|8

Hard



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. looks all fine.
it's looks immature pattern for "Easy" diff It's Snake style :<
try to find other modder to mod EASY diff.
call me back when you think EASY it's a high quality diff.

Don't give me KD
Loneight
Request from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

  1. i think SV can raise some , try to increase distance , don't connect together will better , because it is 1/1

  2. 00:09:735 (3) - NC ?
  3. 00:17:413 (3) - If you follow the overhead suggestion, this also NC ~
  4. 00:36:613 (3) - NC , or no NC , because you seem to let there become a star shape .
  5. 01:11:169 (1) - re finish at end

[Normal]

  1. 03:00:601 (1) - 2nd point on x:332 y:108 , 3rd point on x:352 y:68 . (i think look better)

[Hard]

  1. fine~
good song & good luck~
and sorry to my poor English
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod

l1106188 wrote:

Request from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

  1. i think SV can raise some , try to increase distance , don't connect together will better , because it is 1/1 Then I have to redo the whole diff. And additional it's a slow song, and slow SV is okay, I think
  2. 00:09:735 (3) - NC ? Disaggree
  3. 00:17:413 (3) - If you follow the overhead suggestion, this also NC ~ Disaggree
  4. 00:36:613 (3) - NC , or no NC , because you seem to let there become a star shape . No NC
  5. 01:11:169 (1) - re finish at end Done

[Normal]

  1. 03:00:601 (1) - 2nd point on x:332 y:108 , 3rd point on x:352 y:68 . (i think look better) Disaggree, I prefer it as it is

[Hard]

  1. fine~
good song & good luck~
and sorry to my poor English
Ryu_old
From mod queue~ :3

[Easy]

gogogogogoooood :>

[Normal]
00:19:813 - 00:20:293 - slider
00:46:211 - 00:46:931 - slider
02:02:525 - 02:03:245 - slider
02:03:485 - circle
02:12:844 - move to 02:12:604
02:14:044 - circle
02:14:284 - ^
02:55:320 - move to 02:54:841
02:55:800 - circle
02:56:520 - ^

[Hard]
AR - 6

Good luck baka ! ;>
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
@Ryu: Disaggree with all the pattern changes, and AR7 in [Hard] is fine, I think.
So at all: No changes.
spboxer3
[general]
"The Fame" is the album name. so you should add in source. not in the tag.

[Normal]
00:09:735 (3,4) - move to x344 y172. reason: make this pattern parallel.

well~call me back when you fixed it.

please don't make the snake pattern next time :<
Low

spboxer3 wrote:

"The Fame" is the album name. so you should add in source. not in the tag.
This is incorrect. Album name should be in the tags.
spboxer3
fine~
Joy your bubble
good luck~
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks a lot *-*
Watch out BAT's, I'm coming xD
Kei
Congrats :3
Yasora
oh bubbled :o

good luck on get rank~
Andrea
Seems fine to my eyes.

Ranked~
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Awww my god <333
Thanks!!!!
Akemi_Homura
gratz~~~! ><
spboxer3
yep~ congratz~
it's my first bubble to Ranked :P
Tony
It's noooo surpriseeee that I gooot loooooost, In your browwwn eyes ♥ Grats! :3
I love you [the one with brown eyes]
Reiji-RJ
Wow, gratz!
Sorry for haven't modded this D:
Girlz_old
OHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE GREEN EYES
HellDawn
YAY
Meowcenaries
lady gaga! grats
Tony

Girlz wrote:

OHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE GREEN EYES
OMG I HAVE GREEN EYES :3 ♥
GamerX4life
GLÜCKWUNSCH zur 2. Ranked Map!
DarkDunskin
Aaaaaaalter vom Noobie zum Speedranker, was soll das denn XDD
Naja, gut gemacht würde ich dann ma sagen~
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

Tony wrote:

Girlz wrote:

OHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE GREEN EYES
OMG I HAVE GREEN EYES :3 ♥
1. No Off-Topic here
2. I have green eyes, too
3. You hate your green eyes.

DarkDunskin wrote:

Aaaaaaalter vom Noobie zum Speedranker, was soll das denn XDD
Naja, gut gemacht würde ich dann ma sagen~
Tjahaha, harte Arbeit^^ Und danke :3
mancuso_JM_
YAY!!!!!!!!!!! Congratz Yli!! :D
Mercurial
Congratz man... You got talent :)
ShadowSoul
Gratz <3
Kei
Awesome :3
Tony

Ylinestra44 wrote:

1. No Off-Topic here
2. I have green eyes, too
3. You hate your green eyes.
It's not of-ftopic. the song is about brown eyes. I don't hate my green eyes anymore, since someone loves them ♥
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

Tony wrote:

Ylinestra44 wrote:

1. No Off-Topic here
2. I have green eyes, too
3. You hate your green eyes.
It's not of-ftopic. the song is about brown eyes. I don't hate my green eyes anymore, since someone loves them ♥
This is my thread. When I say it is Off-topic, then it is Off-topic.
blissfulyoshi
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