Jebok wrote:

Hi! Oh I love going back into the storage of famous singers now and seeing all those lovely songs compared to the ones they make now...

• General
  00:55:810 is more suitable for a preview point as the one you chose is quite near to the ending, so the song finishes fast, and then it goes again anyways :/ It seems to be better, but with that preview point you can't hear her singing "Brown Eyes" at all. That's why I chose the preview point that "late"
  
  Easy
  I think you should do spacing x1.5 (toggle with alt + mouse wheel) as it doesn't look too good when all of the notes overlap wih each other. x1.5 is quite easy to catch anyway as the bpm is so slow, so it should be fine! Too lazy to redo the whole diff, and it's a slow, calming song, so I don't see a reason to put bigger distance here
  
  Normal
  Very a like as for Easy, in Normal circles with 1/2 far away from each other overlap so I think you should rise the distance snap higher so that they don't. Then you can use it to your advantage,- for example you can have one note snapped with the slider 1/2 afterwards but then place circle 1/2 after distance snapped. Same about this
  00:07:814 (1,3) - Those two sliders are a bit unsymmetrical. I think they should end of the same Y as they started, so making a perfect C shape. No, they shouldn't. With the following notes they build the symmetric arc
  00:09:014 (2,4) - Snap with the end of the slider before it. Disaggree
  00:14:533 (5) - Make into the same shape as (2) and (3). Done
  00:16:693 (2,4) - Snap with the end of the slider before it. Same
  00:55:570 (1) - This note makes it a bit overmapped in this part, I suggest removing it. It's for the "If", so disaggree
  00:59:410 (1) - ^. Put a note at 00:59:170 placing it x:296 and y:192 instead? ^
  01:15:009 - New combo, its a tall white tick and they are 50% more likely to be new combo than other ticks I think it fits the way it is
  01:15:968 - No new combo
  01:17:888 - New combo. Also, make the slider be in the middle lane so x:256 and y:244 Then it won't be vertical symmetric, and that is what it's supposed to be
  03:09:719 (1,2,3) - Instead of doing this, why not Copy the previous 1,2,3 and then flick it horizontally..? And then starting the next combo from the middle. It is the previous (1,2,3), just rotated by 120°
  
  Hard
  Again the spacing should be risen by about 0.4 so that circles and slider 1/2 after each other don't overlap. Again the same~
  00:43:091 (2) - y:72, distance snap after. Disaggree
  00:55:570 (1) - Remove note No
  02:10:444 (1) - ^ ^
  02:29:883 (1) - Its overlapping previous slider so doesn't look nice, fix pls? I like that kind of overlap --> No changes
  02:32:762 (1) - ^ ^
  02:33:722 (3) - ^ You have so much space to use but you do this Same as above
  03:04:440 (1) - ^ ^

Barney Stinson wrote:

AYO DUDE SOMEONE ASKED BARNEY'S HELP HUASHAUSHASUHAUASHUASHUASHAS

Normal:
00:05:895 (1,2,3) - Not suitable stack Disaggree
00:07:815 (1,3) - When I saw these ones my face looked like http://puu.sh/vEgJ I know u can do em in a decent way I want them that way.
00:22:693 (1,2,3) - Not suitable following this kind of rhythm on a normal
00:30:373 (1,2,3) - ^
00:45:971 (1,2) - ^
00:55:571 (1) - Remove this note or at least remove NC on (2) Neither not. I was told to put NC on the begin of Kiai
00:55:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - An easy player would get crazy with such pattern. Remove (2) and (4)
00:59:651 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same
01:08:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:11:645 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:15:485 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:18:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:23:403 (2,3,4,5) - ^
FOR ALL THOSE PATTERNS U CAN CHOOSE TO REMOVE NOTES I SAID BEFORE OR FOLLOW A RHYTHM LIKE THIS 02:26:043 (1,2,3) -
Apply same suggestions to all patterns like that, please
03:42:837 (6) - For a better flow Copy Pasta (4) and ctrl+h it Disaggree
For all the things about the rhythm: This is a [Normal], the Distance itself is pretty low, and imo this is okay

Hard:
00:55:811 (1) - remove nc Same as in [Normal]



Nothing more. Dude, you map in a so easy way noone can't find corrections worthy to be mentioned. You can pay more attention on forming slider, since some of them are badly formed. For the rest keep going, this could be an awesome map. From now I can only say good luck

SuperMICrophone wrote:

Thank you SO SO SO much for putting a Lady Gaga song on my queue. I love Lady Gaga. :3

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[General]

I'm confused as to why you're using S:C1 (hitsounds). There aren't even any customs in it. You can switch 'em all to just Soft? Because of the silenced sliderslide I use S:C1

[Easy]

Oh boy... I'm not sure. This Easy is a bit TOO Easy. The distance spacing is way way WAAY to short and the SV is way too slow. The other problem is that the slow SV will make pretty much all of your sliders' starts and ends touch. I'd suggest turning the SV up and re-spacing all notes, but that's basically a remap... oh well, even if you don't redo the SV, PLEASE increase distance spacing. You want to challenge Easy players even a little bit. I will keep it this way, until a MAT or BAT complains about it ( I hope they won't D: )

00:23:653 (2) - Don't let start and end of a slider touch. Looks ugly and causes some problems... (sometimes) Disaggree
00:31:333 (2) - ^ ^
01:20:769 (5) - Whistle? Done
01:21:248 (1) - Slide back two ticks on the timeline and extend back to the long white tick? Just so players have more reaction time. Disaggree
02:35:643 (4) - Whistle? Done

[Normal]

00:03:015 (1) - RNC Disaggree
00:03:975 (2) - NC Disaggree
00:55:811 (1) - RNC Disaggree
01:20:769 (6) - Whistle? Done
03:46:677 (3) - Finish? Done

[Hard]

00:55:811 (1) - RNC Disaggree
01:20:769 (6) - Whistle? Done
02:03:965 (6) - Doesn't sound good. If you want to keep the repeating slider, it sounds a lot cleaner and awesome in 1/3. :O Of course, re-space everything after that, or move it and (7) closer to the next hitobjects.

SPOILER

Fixed
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My God, that was awesome. It was a really clean map. (Except for those Easy issues. :3) Have a star!

GL

Shoily wrote:

Hi from my queue~
Lady gaga <333

Okay here we go


[Easy]

The notes are kind of arranged messily during the beginning of this song.Consider arranged them a little more neatly?

01:47:621 (1) - Remove NC Disaggree
03:30:382 (3) - Add NC Disaggree
03:31:252 (1) - Remove NC Disaggree
03:53:424 (2) - Try this: Disaggree
03:55:304 - Start the spinner here Disaggree

[Normal]

01:17:868 (4) - Add NC Done
03:55:304 - Start the spinner here Disaggree

[Hard]

This Hard is more like your Normal but mapped differently....maybe try more interesting and harder patterns? You mean something like jumps? Nah, don't want them in this map
01:35:621 (3) - Sounds better if you extend this slider upto 01:36:631 Disaggree
03:15:440 - Might want to add something here I keep this "hole" in every Kiai
03:55:304 - Start the spinner here Disaggree


Nice song and map \:D/ Good luck!

• 
  00:22:213 (3) - Touching the hp bar
  00:23:653 (2) - Looks fine, no problem at all, but next time try to keep the waypoints a bit more clear?
  00:50:051 (1) - Can't help but think this curve looks a bit awkward on the inside, maybe try making it a bit wider?
  00:51:491 (2) - ^
  00:55:811 (1,3) - ^
  01:03:489 (1) - Center the middle waypoint, looks better imo.
  01:05:409 (3) - If you did ^ then copy it and CTRL+H
  01:57:245 (2) - Looks a bit weird
  02:18:363 (1,3) - Copy 1 and paste at (3) and press CTRL+< to flip it, this way it looks fits the combo better(Notes which come after this might need to be a little bit adjusted)
  
  03:15:959 (1,3) - Same here, the center would look better if stretched a tiny little bit
  03:21:719 (3) - (nazi) 1 grid down using tiny grid

• 
  00:07:815 (1,3) - These sliders look a bit bad
  00:11:655 (1,2,3,4,5) - This combo can look way nicer, Try to make it look a bit as if it goes in a perfect circle?(Select them all and you'll see what I mean)(If you change anything keep note of the spacing, also for the following notes)
  00:15:493 (1) - Also doesn't look really nice, you should consider using 2 waypoints in the middle of it, this can make it look much nicer(Make sure the end point stays in the center of the circle too)
  02:00:125 (6,1,2,3) - Same as before, this can be made into a perfect half circle, would look better
  02:55:321 (7,1) - These sliders look a bit messy, try stretching them a bit?
  02:59:161 (7) - ^
  03:18:839 (2) - Center the waypoint
  03:33:237 (2,4) - ^

• 
  00:30:853 (3) - Center the middle waypoint
  00:55:811 (1) - remove NC
  01:17:889 (1,2) - Center the waypoints(Fix 1, copy to the other one)
  02:03:965 (6,7) - This doesn't really fit in my opinion, http://puu.sh/vQLs This fits better I think.
  02:16:445 (7,8,9) - This would play better if you took the way up after (7), like this:http://puu.sh/vQMg
  02:33:723 (3) - Center this middle point
  03:09:719 (1) - NC
  03:11:639 (1) - NC
  03:12:119 (1) - Remove NC

Kyshiro wrote:

As requested by PM :3

Easy:

• 
  00:22:213 (3) - Touching the hp bar Fixed
  00:23:653 (2) - Looks fine, no problem at all, but next time try to keep the waypoints a bit more clear? Okay x3
  00:50:051 (1) - Can't help but think this curve looks a bit awkward on the inside, maybe try making it a bit wider? Done
  00:51:491 (2) - ^ ^
  00:55:811 (1,3) - ^ No changes
  01:03:489 (1) - Center the middle waypoint, looks better imo. Done
  01:05:409 (3) - If you did ^ then copy it and CTRL+H Done
  01:57:245 (2) - Looks a bit weird No changes
  02:18:363 (1,3) - Copy 1 and paste at (3) and press CTRL+< to flip it, this way it looks fits the combo better(Notes which come after this might need to be a little bit adjusted) Done
  
  03:15:959 (1,3) - Same here, the center would look better if stretched a tiny little bit Disaggree
  03:21:719 (3) - (nazi) 1 grid down using tiny grid Done

Normal:

• 
  00:07:815 (1,3) - These sliders look a bit bad I won't explain it anymore..
  00:11:655 (1,2,3,4,5) - This combo can look way nicer, Try to make it look a bit as if it goes in a perfect circle?(Select them all and you'll see what I mean)(If you change anything keep note of the spacing, also for the following notes) Tried, but not sure, whether it worked
  00:15:493 (1) - Also doesn't look really nice, you should consider using 2 waypoints in the middle of it, this can make it look much nicer(Make sure the end point stays in the center of the circle too) Disaggree
  02:00:125 (6,1,2,3) - Same as before, this can be made into a perfect half circle, would look better Same as before
  02:55:321 (7,1) - These sliders look a bit messy, try stretching them a bit? Disaggree
  02:59:161 (7) - ^ ^
  03:18:839 (2) - Center the waypoint Done
  03:33:237 (2,4) - ^ ^

Hard:

• 
  00:30:853 (3) - Center the middle waypoint Done
  00:55:811 (1) - remove NC Disaggree
  01:17:889 (1,2) - Center the waypoints(Fix 1, copy to the other one) Done
  02:03:965 (6,7) - This doesn't really fit in my opinion, http://puu.sh/vQLs This fits better I think. Fixed
  02:16:445 (7,8,9) - This would play better if you took the way up after (7), like this:http://puu.sh/vQMg Changed and fixed Distance afterwards
  02:33:723 (3) - Center this middle point Done
  03:09:719 (1) - NC Done
  03:11:639 (1) - NC Done
  03:12:119 (1) - Remove NC Done

If you have any questions contact me in game.

Goodluck! :3

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Sorry, not gonna mod this - I f***in hate Lady Gaga.

stickmeister wrote:

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Sorry, not gonna mod this - I f***in hate Lady Gaga.

What a valuable post. Besides, this song is nothing like the rest of her music and is actually quite relaxing.

Hello. As per my queue.

General
Make sure your beats and sliders fall on the beat or offbeat, and not just what it sounds like the lyrics fall on. There's no point to it.
00:00:135 (Timing Section) - Volume 25% Put here the 35%
00:07:814 - New Timing Section, Soft, Volume 35% And here the 50% as before
I don't know everyone's fetish with grey combo colors is, because they look terrible. Make it a light brown or white, please. Changed

Hard
00:00:135 (1) - Whistle hitsound. Done
00:02:054 (1) - ^ ^
00:03:974 (1) - ^ ^
00:05:894 (1) - ^ ^
00:42:371 (1) - Shorten to red tick. (00:42:611) Trust me on this one, okay? An MAT will tell you the same thing. Not that I don't trust you, but I am kinda lazy, and as long as no MATs or BATs complain about it, I won't change it
02:03:965 (6, 7) - Remove these. Replace with... These notes were already replaced by previous mod~
^ 02:03:965 - New note.
^ 02:04:205 - New note. Either that, or a slider starting and ending at said times. Ending on a tick that doesn't exist in 1/4 doesn't make sense when it note falls fine on a red tick.
02:10:684 (1) - Remove new combo. Nooo
03:24:598 (3) - Ugly slider. Try this:
Fixed
^ 03:26:518 - Flip this slider vertically (only if you do the above suggestion of course) Done

Normal
00:55:810 (1) - Remove new combo. Nooo
02:05:884 (2) - Shorten to white tick, remove repeat. Disaggree
^ 02:06:364 - New note. Disaggree

Easy
No problems.

I like it. Have a star. Thanks :3

CDFA wrote:

Overall:
I don't like where your preview point is D:. It'd probably sound better in the generic 1st chorus position :>. Fixed

Hard:
01:34:207 (1,3) - I know this is going for a pattern, but it'd probably be better to have these slider symmetrical~ Changed

Normal:
00:07:815 (1) - Not very moe D: Feels like a déjà-vu, again and again --> I won't explain it anymore
00:09:735 (3) - ^ ^
01:09:729 (7) - Add clap? Disaggree
01:30:367 (1) - Not very moe D: As before

Easy:
02:34:203 (3) - A bit nazi, but unsymmetrical~ Fixed

Nice. Starred~ Thanks =)

Flask wrote:

Request From Mod queue ~
wow Lady GaGa <3

General
Preview Time : 55810 (the beginning of KIAI TIME) Fixed
If you don't need a SB , delete OSB Deleted

Easy
02:26:523 (1) - why there is a finish ? remove it. Removed

Normal
00:22:963 (1) - you may do the distance spacing again . do like this

Fixed
00:55:811 (1) - remove nc Disaggree
01:08:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is too hard to Normal diff , use some sliders to instead of them Disaggree here, too
01:49:567 (2) - up 1 gird (gird level4) Fixed
01:50:046 (3) - ^ ^
02:11:645 (2,3,4,5,6) - same problem on 01:08:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same answer here
02:15:485 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
02:52:921 (1,7,1,7) - do like this

Disaggree
02:53:881 (2,3,4,5,6) - Uhh ~
02:57:721 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
03:20:759 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
03:51:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

Hard
fine LAZY ME


that's all !

Philippines wrote:

• Easy

1. Approach Rate +1/+2 Disaggree, it is a slow song
   
   
2. 01:51:966 (1) - Remove new combo. Disaggree
   
   
3. 01:56:765 (1) - ^. New combo on the next note. Done
   
   
4. Not really sure about your new combos. There's too many of them.

• Normal

1. 03:25:318 (8) - One grid right. Fixed

• Insane It is [Hard] but okay

1. Seems fine.

• Comment

1. The sliders are so slow. ><. Sorry for the nazi modding, i don't really see any. Slow song --> slow sliders

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Sorry, not gonna mod this - I f***in hate Lady Gaga.

HellDawn wrote:

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Sorry, not gonna mod this - I f***in hate Lady Gaga.

I will kill you -.-

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
There is nothing unrankable and in fact a lot of good things about your map but it has a lot of passages where there is simply one hit per beat and I think it could benefit from perhaps having a few sliders in those places that repeat on the red ticks aswell. I am so lazy and don't feel like making "big" changes anymore~

[Normal]
00:25:093 (5) - if you could fit the curve of the slider to the circle of 6 that'd be great Fixed
00:27:013 (1) - ^ to match Fixed
00:42:131 (1,2,3) - this bit plays awkwardly Lenghtened (2) to the white tick
00:50:051 (2,3,4) - ^ you might want to change the sliders to hitcircles? it doesn't fit the tone as well but it emphasizes to the players that the rhythm is a bit wonky Disaggree here, I don't want/like circles on blue ticks in a [Normal]
01:19:329 (2) - center the slider around 1 Fixed
01:45:727 (2) - fit to 3 Fixed
This one is even better than Easy

[Hard]
00:11:655 (1) - fit to 2 Fixed
00:26:533 (9) - the positioning on this feels like it should be farther to the right to make a curve going the opposite direction with 8 and 1 Hm, no. (7,8,9) are (4,5,6) with Ctrl + H and Ctrl + J
00:33:252 (7,8,9,1) - ...square? QQ Fixed

Overall very nice map, the slider art in particular is exquisite. Your Easy gets a bit monotonous at points but otherwise this is definitely very close to ranking. It makes me so happy hearing this from an osu! Alumni :3

HelloSCV wrote:

Gneral
in start and end of KiAi time, you must make a note or slider or spinner Not necessarely, no
01:10:929 -> 01:10:209 Fixing KiAi time Disaggree
02:25:803 -> 02:25:083 ^ ^
03:15:719 -> 03:14:999 ^ ^
03:54:356 (1) - that spin is so long how about reducing it? Nope

Easy
03:46:677 (1) - delete NC Done

Normal

02:20:283 (5) - Add Finish sound on the front of slider Disaggre
02:54:841 (6) - How about add Finish sound? Disaggre

Hard

01:20:769 (6) - How about changing pattern like this? http://puu.sh/wTv6 It looks better I think Done
02:16:445 (1) - NC Disaggre
I think breaking time is pretty long how about reduce it? Nope
02:53:881 (3,4,5) - If you make a note straight way fix it. Fixed
03:05:161 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about this pattern? http://puu.sh/wTwi Done
03:13:079 (1) - NC Disaggree
03:13:079 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks better http://puu.sh/wTwA Changed
03:15:719 -> 03:14:999 Fixing KiAi time or 03:15:479 (6,7) - adding notes Disaggre

Lovely song I'll shoot a star Good luck Thanks :3

• General

1. I like a lot the background! I just wanted to say that. The map's folder is very clean.

• [Easy]

1. I can't hear the clap sample. It sounds just like the music itself I guess.
   
2. 00:11:175 (4,1,2,1,2,3) - I personally don't like very much this kind of rhythm patterns for easiest difficulties. I suggest you to try something like you did at 00:23:173 (1,2,1,2,3). That was great. More long sliders is more easy and suitable imo. It's a very slow song so I guess it is ok.
   
   That's all I have to say about this diff. Good samples, good rhythm and patterns. You can add more samples.. like soft whistles. That would be nice.

• [Normal]

1. 00:55:811 (1) - I get the sense of this nc but.. it feels and looks.. weird and.. a bit unnecesary. I think that it would be better if you remove it.
2. 02:10:685 (1) - This slider is too far away from the center of the spinner for a Normal difficulty. You should move it more closer to there, and be sure that it doesn't overlap with the spinner-osu.
   
   A bit challenging Normal diff just because of those slow streams, but it looks nice. Very pretty symmetry!

• [Hard]

1. 00:45:971 (7) - The new combo should be here instead of being in the next slider, because the singer starts singing here at (7), don't you think?
2. 00:55:811 (1) - Just the same as I told you about the normal diff. I get the purpose of this nc but it feels and looks a bit unnecesary. Perhaps remove it?
3. 00:59:411 (8) - Nc here instead of being at the next slider? it's to follow the vocals, for the same reason as I told you already at the start of the mod.
4. 02:06:124 - A note here would follow perfectly the vocals.
5. 02:10:685 (1) - Again, the same as I told you about this nc. I suggest you to remove it.
6. 02:32:523 (8) - Againnn nc here instead of being at the next slider? because she starts singing here, not at the next slider.
7. 03:04:201 (4) - ^?
8. 03:22:199 (6) - ^? (instead of being at that slider). If you do this you should add a nc to 03:26:039 (4), and after that, remove nc at 03:28:439 (1).
   
   Good diff too!~

Kei wrote:

Hello!

• General

1. I like a lot the background! I just wanted to say that. The map's folder is very clean.

• [Easy]

1. I can't hear the clap sample. It sounds just like the music itself I guess.
   
2. 00:11:175 (4,1,2,1,2,3) - I personally don't like very much this kind of rhythm patterns for easiest difficulties. I suggest you to try something like you did at 00:23:173 (1,2,1,2,3). That was great. More long sliders is more easy and suitable imo. It's a very slow song so I guess it is ok. No changes~
   
   That's all I have to say about this diff. Good samples, good rhythm and patterns. You can add more samples.. like soft whistles. That would be nice.

• [Normal]

1. 00:55:811 (1) - I get the sense of this nc but.. it feels and looks.. weird and.. a bit unnecesary. I think that it would be better if you remove it. Okay, finally after you are about the fifth person saying this, I removed the NC
2. 02:10:685 (1) - This slider is too far away from the center of the spinner for a Normal difficulty. You should move it more closer to there, and be sure that it doesn't overlap with the spinner-osu. Left it for the moment. If more complain about it, I'll change
   
   A bit challenging Normal diff just because of those slow streams, but it looks nice. Very pretty symmetry!

• [Hard]

1. 00:45:971 (7) - The new combo should be here instead of being in the next slider, because the singer starts singing here at (7), don't you think? But the next word is more emphasized, so no changes
2. 00:55:811 (1) - Just the same as I told you about the normal diff. I get the purpose of this nc but it feels and looks a bit unnecesary. Perhaps remove it? Done
3. 00:59:411 (8) - Nc here instead of being at the next slider? it's to follow the vocals, for the same reason as I told you already at the start of the mod. Same here as before
4. 02:06:124 - A note here would follow perfectly the vocals. Done
5. 02:10:685 (1) - Again, the same as I told you about this nc. I suggest you to remove it.
6. 02:32:523 (8) - Againnn nc here instead of being at the next slider? because she starts singing here, not at the next slider.
7. 03:04:201 (4) - ^?
8. 03:22:199 (6) - ^? (instead of being at that slider). If you do this you should add a nc to 03:26:039 (4), and after that, remove nc at 03:28:439 (1). Same with the rest of the NC suggestions
   
   Good diff too!~

Pretty good mapset. good luck! Thanks :3

Ok! Time to mod your map as I promised in-game

Combo3 : 255,255,191

Wow, this difficulty looks very fine and it's too relaxing to play

SPOILER

SPOILER

SPOILER

And That's All. Second Uruguayan mod in the day lol
In general it's a nice map and preety good to go. So, you deserve it my Kudos Star
Best of Luck on getting this map ranked, Yli

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Ok! Time to mod your map as I promised in-game

[General:]

- I always prefer to see at least 3 Combo Colours. Looks better at the hour to play the map in my opinion, looking your BG I think that fit fine like a light yellow, try with this code:

Combo3 : 255,255,191

Done
- When you use 50% in hitsounds, they sound a bit low, try to increase this sections at least in 10% Changed

[Easy:]

Settings:
--> I think that you have to increase the Approach Rate by 1 Tick, it's also low and looking your Slider Velocity I think that plays better with AR3 (AR+1) Done

00:19:813 (2): At the beginning of this Slider you should add a Whistle, sounds a sound that need an emphatisize in the music, if you don't have any hitsounds this part sounds empty. The double whistle fit fine too (with previous 1), so add it please I often forgot that whistle, dunno why. Either way, added
00:34:692 (1): In my opinion sounds kinda empty without any kind of Hitsounds. Following your other patterns and because fit better with music, you should add a Whistle at the beginning of this Slider Done
00:59:650 (1): Same as above, sounds really fine if you add a Whistle at Slider beginning Done
01:16:928 (2): To enforce the Instrumental, you should add a Whistle in this note, in my opinion is really needed Done

Wow, this difficulty looks very fine and it's too relaxing to play

[Normal:]

Settings:
--> Well, In this case I think that the AR doesn't fit at all having a Slow Slider Velocity and in this case I think that the difference is a bit notorial. Try to decrease it by 1 Tick (AR-1) Done

00:19:813 (2): Same as Normal diff. You mean Easy, but done
02:03:965 (5): Following the Vocal, this slider should ends 1/4 forward (Blue Tick, 02:04:325). Fit better in my opinion Done
02:52:921 (1): To be sincere this Slider doesn't look fine to play, the shape is bad. Looks better if you do a shape like the screenshoot, and the Copy/paste it to the places where you use the bad shape (For example: 02:55:320 - 02:56:760 and 02:59:160)

SPOILER

Changed
02:53:641 (x): Following the Instrumental, you should add a note here Done
03:24:118 (4): The Kiai ended and the rhythm change, so, try to add a New Combo in this note Done
03:33:237 (2): You are missing a Whistle at the beginning of this Slider. The music sounds kind a whistle so is better if you add it one Done
03:44:277 (7): She start to sing again on here and here she said something to ''eyes get some'' I think that this must be a unify. So, try to add a New Combo in this note and Remove it on the next (1) Done
03:52:916 (1): Following the instrumental, I'm that the Slider Tick Rate in this Slider doesn't work enough in this case, because in the middle sounds a bit high and It's need an emphatisize. Try to do a 1/1 Slider (starts here and finish on 03:53:396) and then add a note in 03:53:876 (Try this formation with the Slider and the note if you want to mantain the Symetry)

SPOILER

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[Hard:]

00:15:493 (1): Well, this is not one of the best Shapes that I saw in a map, I think that it can better. Try this one, is very easy to do (And then Copy/Paste to do the same shape in (5))

SPOILER

I know, that shape sucked xD Changed
00:38:531 (3): This Finish at the beginning of this Slider is totally inconsistent in this patterns out of Kiais (Where you never used to Finish), inclusive comparing with the other difficulties. Try to remove it and keep only the Whistle Removed
00:47:411 (4): Something Similar happens on here, you never used a Whistle on any Sliderbody. Remove it please to mantain consistency Removed. Dunno why it was there
01:36:607 (x): This Stop (looking the Space between (2) and (3)) in the timeline is really unnecesary, and I know that here fit perfectly a note. Try to add one to mantain the flow in the map Placed a note
01:51:966 (5): This Repetition in this Slider doesn't fit at all, you don't need to do a unify since the Start the Vocal where you add a Repeat. Fit better with music if you delete the Repetition and add 2 notes. The first one in 01:53:405 and the Second one in 01:53:885, also add a New Combo on the first note (to emphatisize the Start of the vocal) and remove it from 01:54:365 Done and Done

Well you don't use all of the elements in the song to make a perfect song, I know that it's a Relaxing Hard but in my opinion you could exploit all the elements to do this map. Anyways it's Ok, is just a personal thing, nothing major to point out

And That's All. Second Uruguayan mod in the day lol
In general it's a nice map and preety good to go. So, you deserve it my Kudos Star
Best of Luck on getting this map ranked, Yli Thanks :3

_Gezo_ wrote:

Here is the mod you've been waiting for, Melysstyle !

[General]

Offset 129 (-6)
BG is fine (Ratio-wise, so I will leave it.)
MP3 is too.
Put 125,00 BPM ? I feel like this song is more 62,5 but oh well That's my opinion as well, but I was told to do 125,01~

[Easy]
Though this map is easy enough for me, as the song is not really 125 BPM but more 62.5, I felt like the 1/1s @125 went 1/2 @62,5. I don't know if you really want it played as a 125 BPM song or stick more to the song's real speed. If you want the second choice, you have to delete a lot of notes on the upbeat - All would be very heartbreaking since this Easy plays well - but if you want to keep it as it is, then keep it as it is.
Kept as is it

The rest of the mod though

IMO, the AR should be put at 3, that's all. It is already AR3, as mentioned by mancuso
Easy does not have the same Combo Colors as Normal and Hard !! Please fix this. Fixed

[Normal]
00:03:975 (1) - Second control point @ (272,108) ???
00:30:853 (3) - Second CP @ (300,120) Done
00:46:931 (3) - Regunar note instead ? It feels pretty hard for a normal Disaggree

00:50:051 (2,3) - Delete (3) and add 2 repeats for (2). Disaggree
If you applied this ^
00:51:491 (3) - (152,272)
00:57:011 (3) - Delete it ? No
01:00:851 (3) - ^ ^
01:04:449 (3,4,5) - Oh lol it'd be a paradox but change this to 5 circles ? As you did this for 01:08:289 (2,3,4,5,6) Hm, no

01:30:367 (1) - Second CP @ (232,88) Done
01:49:087 (1,2) - One single slider with 2 more repeats ? This is a bit risky since you'll have to change. Another solution would be using 4 circles. Disaggree
01:56:765 (1,2) - 1 circle and 1 slider instead ? The first slider seems to be slightly overmapped. It fits the vocal~
02:11:885 (3) - Delete ? Disaggree
02:15:725 (3) - ^ ^
02:19:563 (2) - ^ ^
02:23:403 (2) - ^ ^
02:34:683 (2,3,4) - 5 circles instead ? Disaggree
02:52:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete (2,3,4), add 1 repeat to (1) Disaggree
02:56:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ The same thing, delete (2,3) and add 1 repeat to (1) Disaggree
03:01:801 (2) - Delete ? No
03:05:641 (2) - ^ ^
03:17:159 (2) - ^ ^
03:18:599 (1) - ^ and NC to 03:18:839 (2) Disaggree

[Hard]
00:07:814 (1) -
00:09:734 (5) - As it's the same, use Ctrl+J+H I did that already
00:16:693 (2) @(400,184) Done
00:16:933 (3) @(444,224) Done
00:17:173 (4) @(400,264) Done
00:17:413 (5) @(344,284) Done
^Imo, these would look better.
00:55:810 (2,3,4,5,6) - Moving (3,4,5,6) to these points (In order) : (284,304) - (360,300) - (420,256) - (444,184) looks way better. Done
01:00:371 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ but with (2-7) and at (152,228) - (76,236) - (24,180) - (36,104) - (100,64) - (172,92) Done, but kept the slider at the same place
01:03:489 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spread it out better with the 2 above suggestions Fixed
01:11:649 (3,4,5,6,1) - Try to make a pentagonal pattern ? Disaggree

Imo, this map deserves a small taiko diff, and overall it's good if we don't take in count the speed problem. I don't want any GDs on my maps, so no Taiko

spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

:idea: general

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  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. why don't you unify your combo colors? I just forgot that >.<

Easy

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  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 01:53:885 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - It's immature pattern. Actually, it's rankable pattern. but I really think it's low quality pattern. (about arc) Changed
   03:34:197 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - round and round \:D/

Normal

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  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 01:30:367 (1) - [arc issue] the slider arc is awkward for me. suggest to use this pattern↓ It already got a bit changed by the previous mod. Let's see how that looks
   
   before

   
   after

   
   

   168,156,90367,6,0,B|184:124|244:80|312:132,1,160,2|8

Hard

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  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. looks all fine.

it's looks immature pattern for "Easy" diff It's Snake style :<
try to find other modder to mod EASY diff.
call me back when you think EASY it's a high quality diff.

Don't give me KD

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  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. i think SV can raise some , try to increase distance , don't connect together will better , because it is 1/1
   
   
2. 00:09:735 (3) - NC ?
3. 00:17:413 (3) - If you follow the overhead suggestion, this also NC ~
4. 00:36:613 (3) - NC , or no NC , because you seem to let there become a star shape .
5. 01:11:169 (1) - re finish at end

[Normal]

1. 03:00:601 (1) - 2nd point on x:332 y:108 , 3rd point on x:352 y:68 . (i think look better)

[Hard]

1. fine~

l1106188 wrote:

Request from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. i think SV can raise some , try to increase distance , don't connect together will better , because it is 1/1 Then I have to redo the whole diff. And additional it's a slow song, and slow SV is okay, I think
   
2. 00:09:735 (3) - NC ? Disaggree
3. 00:17:413 (3) - If you follow the overhead suggestion, this also NC ~ Disaggree
4. 00:36:613 (3) - NC , or no NC , because you seem to let there become a star shape . No NC
5. 01:11:169 (1) - re finish at end Done

[Normal]

1. 03:00:601 (1) - 2nd point on x:332 y:108 , 3rd point on x:352 y:68 . (i think look better) Disaggree, I prefer it as it is

[Hard]

1. fine~

good song & good luck~
and sorry to my poor English

spboxer3 wrote:

"The Fame" is the album name. so you should add in source. not in the tag.

Girlz wrote:

OHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE GREEN EYES

Tony wrote:

Girlz wrote:

OHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE GREEN EYES

OMG I HAVE GREEN EYES :3 ♥

DarkDunskin wrote:

Aaaaaaalter vom Noobie zum Speedranker, was soll das denn XDD
Naja, gut gemacht würde ich dann ma sagen~

Ylinestra44 wrote:

1. No Off-Topic here
2. I have green eyes, too
3. You hate your green eyes.

Tony wrote:

Ylinestra44 wrote:

1. No Off-Topic here
2. I have green eyes, too
3. You hate your green eyes.

It's not of-ftopic. the song is about brown eyes. I don't hate my green eyes anymore, since someone loves them ♥