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ryuu
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Topic Starter
ryuu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 22 мая 2012 г. at 15:51:00

Artist: Pomplamoose
Title: Another Day
Tags: rockleejkooo 3 new songs woot!
BPM: 124
Filesize: 4610kb
Play Time: 02:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. I Am Yours (3,35 stars, 159 notes)
  2. You Are Mine (4,84 stars, 341 notes)
Download: Pomplamoose - Another Day
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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rock wrote:

ryuu wrote:

ryuu & rock wrote:

So It's Alright ~

♥
с днём рождения, мой милый рок ;www;
не переживай, пожалуйста, что ты уже взрослый. (или ты не переживал?
о.о)
и оставайся таким же милым.
и люби себя, пожалуйста.
ну а я. я. что я. я люблю тебя же ♥

теперь ждём лета ~
this map is a gift my beloved rock on his birthday.
when he saw it the first time, he said "give me rank :3". i answered "give me a normal with the name "i am yours" :3". he said "okay :3".
and that's what happened.

p.s. thank you for your love, vadim.
Last edited by ryuu , edited 68 times in total.
rockleejkooo
329 posts
Joined June 2010
rockleejkooo
я люблю тебя, няшик ;_______________; i am yours!!!
grumd
1,790 posts
Joined October 2010
grumd
Поздравляю, рок!
Карта просто охуенна ;w;
rockleejkooo
329 posts
Joined June 2010
rockleejkooo
Привет, любимая :3

[General]
• битрейт 198 :с 192 надо

[You Are Mine]
• видимо, ты меняла оффсет и забыла кое-что. сделай реснап всех нот, а после этого немного удлини этот слайдер
00:00:268 (1) - он немного не доведен до тика.
• Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
- 00:11:739
- 00:27:244
- 00:34:865
- 01:53:615
- 02:08:615
вот эти зеленые линии стоят не на тиках, нужно их немного подвинуть

edit: на самом деле, подвинуть нужно все линии :с переведи указатель на тот тик, где якобы стоит линия, жми ф6 и
"use current time". и так для каждого тика

после исправлений:
• 00:45:026 (3) - слайдер перекрывает предыдущий, надо бы стэкнуть :о
• 00:48:170 (3) - вроде как треугольник не ровный, на 2 тика вверх поднять с учетом снапа
• 00:57:847 (6) - стоит не ровно под слайдером. нужно убрать грид снап и сделать снап дивизор 0
• 01:05:831 (1) - думаю, нужно слайдер закончить на белом тике.
• 01:08:734 (8,10) - на конец (8) и (10) висл. там в музыке колокольчики выделяются
• 01:16:234 (9) - ^ на начало и конец
• 01:33:412 (3,4) - вроде как не ровно, немножко поднять бы
• 01:57:122 (3) - начиная отсюда, вроде как вислы забыла :о

вроде все. большинство пунктов - просто предложения. надеюсь, помог чем-то :3
I am yours ♥
Hitomi May
362 posts
Joined September 2009
Hitomi May
Оу, я такая свинья, даже не поздравила ._.

[I Am Yours]
00:08:251 (1) - это нормал, так что по снапу бы) У тебя там есть ещё моменты как вот эти 00:13:331 (2,3) Но такое ещё можно вроде
00:15:751 (1) - делто твоё конечно, но мне кажется было бы лучше так :о
SPOILER
00:19:863 (x) - не хватает как то
00:27:122 (4) - конец, вроде тут нет клапа в песне
00:29:783 (4) - середина, и тут
00:33:170 (2) - может лучше сместить куда-нибудь левее? Просто у тебя объекты не так быстро пропадают
SPOILER
00:35:589 (x) - просится :о
00:38:492 (6) - снап опять же.. Речекни его везде, изи дифа как никак. И мне кажется было бы лучше, если передвинуть его на 00:38:734
00:43:573 (5) - тоже хотелось бы её слышать
00:44:541 (1) - спиннер немножко не в тему
00:47:686 (2) - немного кривовато я зануда
00:59:783 (2) - влево бы немного подвинуть его
02:07:525 (1) - продли его на один

[You Are Mine]
Смотрится немного рандомно..
И Проверь на этой дифе нк.. У тебя длинные комбо получаются
00:00:752 (2) - просто отзеркаль предыдущий)
00:05:106 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - может сделать это всё завязанным на симметрии?
01:26:397 (1,2,3) - о, вот эти вот треугольнички няшные :3

Крутые хитсанды *-*
Очень милая песня
Рюша и Рок няши :3


02:06:316 (7) - не надо так близко, отодвинь
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
sorry for long time but now i am a litter bit busy ;_;........I will try to mod this map quickly............
and I think you need find someone come to check this timing
maybe you can post in there↓
t/13795&start=0
then some nice modder will help you to check your timing ^ ^~
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ I see you post in My Queue. It is English song, so I'm not going to mod it but I will do the timing.

Just suggestions:

[Timing]

bpm 124
offset -932

Don't forget to resnap all notes after change this.

GL~
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ryuu
aaaaaaaaaaw. thank u, popner ~
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010


Hello :)

[I Am Yours]

OD-1 fit a easiest diff.
00:17:938 () - Weird rhythm. followed it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/294604
00:22:535 (3,4) - you must use a normal distance in your easiest diff
00:25:680 (3) - I don't suggest to add a slider which reply 3-times
00:36:326 (3) - normal distance pls

[You Are Mine]

02:11:890 (1,2) - Add a ARROW SB?? I don't know~ haha

That all :)
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ryuu
thank u, ert ~
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
можно попробую помодить?
я тут мимо проходил, и решил попробовать помочь.
правда жаль, что я не очень умею модить :|

[General]
скрин с AiBAt
цвета?
Я в этом не шарю, но кажется вполне красиво смотрятся. :3
Colours
Combo1 : 230,210,40
Combo2 : 255,255,102
Combo3 : 159,159,255
Combo4 : 232,168,203

[I Am Yours]
00:00:277 (1,1) - тут нк? странно? зачем туткомбо?
00:06:567 (3,1) - стакнуть слайдеры?
00:26:406 (4,5) - не пересекать слайдеры?
00:37:535 (5,6,7) - их так много! я запутался ><
00:38:503 (7,2) - а их можно аккуратнее стакнуть
02:04:390 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - много новых комбо. я запутался :O


[You Are Mine]

00:07:051 (7) - нк сюда?
00:16:971 (5) - х244 у200
00:15:277 (8) - сделать его симметричным относительно центра?
00:17:455 (6,7) - сделать слайдер как-бы обводящщим серкл. так лучше?
00:23:503 (1) - оверджамп? вроде не вписывается тут
00:25:197 (6) - новое комбо
00:29:551 (4,5,6) - может так?
00:32:213 (3) - отзеркалить по вертикали, а еще пусть оба серкла как-бы обводят (1) :3
00:38:987 (1) - пусть будет симметричен относительно центра
00:45:035 (3) - странные они ><
00:58:584 (8,9) - превратить их в один слайдер?
01:01:487 (6,7) - пусть слайдер обводит серкл. так лучше. :3
01:04:390 (7) - новое комбо
01:08:261 (7) - ^
01:14:793 (6) - новое комбо
01:15:277 (7) - пусть обводит (6) поаккуратнее
01:16:245 (9) - сделать ободку красивее
01:22:293 (9) - слишком близко к (8) и может новое комбо?
01:42:616 (6) - новое комбо
01:50:842 (7) - новое комбо
02:02:213 (8) - ^

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Удачи.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Звезда!

/me старался помочь, может хоть что-то пригодится
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ryuu
спасибо, бакари ~
-Hyde
472 posts
Joined March 2011
-Hyde
General
Add more "hitsounds" the map to make it more entertaining.

I Am Yours
00:08:261 - The slider start here: 00:08:745 and ends here: 00:09:713
Only with a "reverse arrow" http://puu.sh/qFnw
<-- 00:08:261 - Add a note
00:18:664 - Remove the slider and put a note here: 00:18:906
00:41:648 (3,4) - I think this is "unrankable" for difficulty "Normal", try something else.
00:48:664 - NC
01:27:374 - ^
01:49:390 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Attempts to do otherwise. You can put sliders longer.
02:01:245 - Add a "Break Time"
02:06:326 (1,1,1) - Try something else, don't be lazy.

You Are Mine
00:09:955 (5) - That this slider starts in: 00:10:197 and end in: 00:10:438
00:09:955 - Add a note here
00:13:100 - I think it sounds good if you do this ~ Remove the note and add a slider to "reverse arrow" that ends with: 00:13:584
00:57:858 (6) - Remove the note
00:57:132 - That this slider starts in: 00:57:374 and end in: 00:57:616
00:57:858 - Add a note here
00:58:826 - Remove the note
01:10:922 - ^
01:12:132 - Eliminates the slider and then add a note
01:12:374 - Add a slider to end in: 01:12:616
01:12:858 ​​- Add a note there
01:23:503 - Remove the note
<-- 01:22:293 - The end slider start here: 01:22:535 and ends here: 01:23:503
<-- <-- 01:22:172 - Add a note and another here: 01:22:293 ~ is a stream http://puu.sh/qFdd
01:42:374 - Remove the note
01:53:019 - Do not joint with the other slider
02:04:148 (1) - Removes the "New combo"
02:04:390 - New combo
02:05:842 - Remove the slider and instead add a note
02:06:084 - Add a note
02:06:326 - Removes this slider and instead add a note
02:06:567 - Add a slider to "NC" ends here: 02:06:809
02:07:051 - Remove the note and the slider away.
<-- 02:07:051 - Add a slider to end in: 02:07:293
02:07:535 - Add a note
02:07:777 - ^

All you got is what "I" would do if my map is not necessary to make changes as the mean. Thank you.
OH! And my english is bad x: Sorry >.<
Good Luck!!
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ryuu
thank u, hyde-sama :3
rockleejkooo
329 posts
Joined June 2010
rockleejkooo
thx, hydesama

Download: 1.rar
-Hyde
472 posts
Joined March 2011
-Hyde
Don't worry :3
Good luck ~

Edit: Difficulty "I am yours": 02:01:245 - Insert Break Time
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,733 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
Hi :)

I Am Yours
00:05:600 (2,3) - spacing error here.
00:13:342 (2,3) - personally, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298122 better way to get better flow from (1).
00:15:277 (5,1) - spacing error here.
00:37:535 (1) - new combo here , according to 00:31:971 (1,2,3,4) - , It's better to not count them over 6 or 7 , hp drain 5 isn't that easy for beginner.
00:39:713 (1,2,3) - distance between (1) and (2) isn't same as (2) and (3) , so change it.
I suggest here : (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298129 (2)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298132 if you don't understand , you can ask me in-game if you choose to fix it :D.
00:43:826 (5,1) - I choose to insert break here If I were you.
01:19:874 (3) - ahh , feel awkward of this note, move to x:268 y:132.
01:21:568 (5) - this too x:304 y:252
01:50:842 (3) - why ended it at blue line ? , short it to 01:51:084 also the vocal end at this point.
01:52:293 (3,1) - insert break.
02:01:003 (3,1) - ^
02:11:890 (1) - really beautiful :D.



You Are Mine
decrease its AR to 7 please =_=a , 8 doesn't fit to this song well.
00:14:309 (1) - new combo here please, sound changed and you changed its way of jumping.
00:27:132 (1) - just in my opinion but shaping this slider to be the wave fits to this voice here. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298152 (also you did it at 00:34:874 (1) - )
00:33:422 (5) - nazi* left 1 grid for complete stacking from 00:32:213 (3) - .
00:44:068 (1) - nazi* right 1 grid same above reason.
00:45:035 (3) - so then , ctrl+< 1 time and stack it at 00:44:068 (1) - 's position.
00:46:487 (6,1) - sudden jump here , consider to reduce its distance.
01:23:503 (2) - nazi* left 1 grid for complete stacking.
01:24:229 (4,6) - It's overlapped by (4) , looks not good. please move (6) a bit.
01:39:955 (7) - it's kinda trouble to read here, new combo here ? different color can relieve this issue.
01:44:551 (1) - you can shape it better I know :3.

ok , Good luck !
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ryuu
thank u, frostmourne :3
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
Hi, from the mod queue.

[General]
Are you sure that the offset is right? I usually put it with a normal number instead of a negative one, explain that later.
The BPM's good.
Start a Kiai mode in 00:55:197 and end it in 01:01:971, same for 01:18:422 to 01:25:438 (I dunno if it's allowed to end a Kiai mode in a red tick), 01:33:906 to 01:46:003, 01:49:390 to 02:11:890 (probably). I hear a possible Kiai mode in thos parts... of course, that's only a suggestion.

[I Am Yours]
Slider tick in 2 maybe. Thins song sounds like it should be followed by constant beats.
There are 20 spacing issues, open the AImod from the file menu to find them... considering this to be Easy or normal.
00:43:826 Maybe, just maybe, this slider should end in 00:44:551
00:46:729 end it with a finisher maybe...
00:48:664 ^
01:25:438 ^
01:27:374 ^
02:08:503 I actually hear the vocal ending in 02:08:866 instead of 02:08:745.

[You Are Mine]
In the beggining you should add more hit sounds when I hear a finger snap, like a clap or a custom sound.
00:47:213 Finisher?
00:49:148 ^
00:53:503 I think that spinner should end with a normal sound instead of soft, there's a drum sound near it.
01:25:922 Finisher?
01:27:858 ^
01:32:213 Same reason as 00:53:503
I don't see anything else.
________________________

The thing about this is that I kinda suck at this :P, bt anyway, I really hope that it was helpful.
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ryuu
thanks, crok ~

about offset. i don't know how to correctly put it. so i trust the people who check it.
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
It kinda seems that you ignored what I said about the Kiai mode. It's not allowed to start the Kiai mode on the places you putted, you can only start the Kiai mode on the big white ticks, meaning, in the place where I told you to put up the Kiai modes. Keep the last one... I like it :P. I know I said suggestion, but that meant if you wanted to add a Kiai mode or not...
Sorry if I'm being harsh, but that's what the rules say.
JauiPlaY
1,292 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
Hello~
Some suggestions:

[General]
No source?
Even the easiest diff has 3.33 stars. I'm afraid you have to add a easier diff if you're going to rank this one.

[I Am Yours]
By using AIMod you could find there're lots of spacing issues. You should fix them all.
00:00:761 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:567 (3) - Add claps to the reverse arrow and the end.
00:29:793 (4) - ^
00:41:648 (3,4) - ^
01:02:455 (1) - Add finish to the end.
01:16:124 - Useless timing point.
01:42:132 - Add clap.
01:43:100 - ^
01:59:793 (2) - Add clap to the end.
02:05:358 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:08:503 (1) - ^
02:11:890 (1,1) - No sure about these 2 sliders. They sound weird, timing off, and have same colors in different combos.
Probably unrankable. I highly suggest you should ask some MATs/BATs about them.

[You Are Mine]
00:41:406 (1,2,3,4) - Weird spacing. You don't have to turn the spacing down when you turn down the slider velocity.
01:05:842 (1,2,3) - ^
01:36:809 (1,2,3) - ^
01:51:084 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:06:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:11:890 (1,1) - Same as the former diff, you know what I'm going to say.
02:11:890 - 2 timing points here. Delete 1 of them.

That's all. Good luck~
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ryuu
thank u, jauiplay >w<
kawaii_uguu
kawaii_uguu
mod 4 mod4mod queue inc :D

General:
You really sure about not getting another easier difficulty? I think there are some guidelines(not rules) which say that a map should have a difficulty below 3.0 and one above. Let us hold to those guidelines?


I Am Yours:
00:00:761 (1) - Remove NC. Two (1) following are not allowed. (Well, that's what I've been told by a MAT once)
00:40:680 (2) - Ad a clap at the end.
00:42:616 (4) - Clat at the beginning.
00:50:600 (1,2) - Add a finish on each of its endings.
01:29:309 (1,2) - ^
02:06:084 (3) - That's too hard. Even for a Normal imo. No beginner will hit it.

You Are Mine:
00:52:535 (1,2,3) - Do not agree with anti-jump there. The prev formation [00:51:568 (1,2,3) - ] was already spreading the spacing a bit from the first formation [00:50:600 (1,2,3) - ]. So making it into jumps would be more fun to play.
01:31:245 (1,2,3) - Pretty much the same with the things said above. Don't throw anti jumps like that into the map.


Cute map, nice message ^.^
If I had a star I'd shoot it.
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
Their my own suggestions

[You Are mine]

00:28:826 (2) - Spacing?
00:45:761 (4) - ^
02:06:326 (1) - ^

Thank you and good luck.
Agnes
osu! Alumni
1,153 posts
Joined July 2009
Agnes
Hello, I'm busting through windows and whatnot, modding all sorts of maps.
Thank ya for requestin'. \:D/

[General]
  1. Cute song. x3
  2. soft-slidertick.wav is 0 bytes. Use blank.wav, since it's at least 44 bytes.
[I Am Yours]

00:20:116 (3) - (Suggestion) Move center anchor to x: 328, y: 249? (Or something closer to make it symmetrical.)
Should look like this:
00:29:793 (4) - Adjust this slider?
What I fixed up:
00:55:197 (1) - ^
What I fixed up:
(I'm sure you'll get the jist of all of my other slider fixes after the three screenshots. xp
01:18:422 (1) - ^

[You Are Mine]

00:53:503 (1) - (Suggestion) I think a note would be able to replace this spinner, as well as a brief break.
02:11:890 (1,1) - I love these sliders, but the fact that the slider start and end nearly overlap each other makes things look very iffy.

Hope this mod becomes of some use to you. Good luck!
rockleejkooo
329 posts
Joined June 2010
rockleejkooo
thank u all, nyan :3

Download: Pomplamoose - Another Day ([Ryuu]) [I Am Yours].rar
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
I Am Yours

00:13:584 - fix the spacing here

00:53:019~00:53:624 - reduce volume to 30%

01:31:729~01:32:455 - ^

You Are Mine

00:27:253 - this timing is useless so you need to del it

00:50:600~00:51:084 (1,2,3) - use 1.3x distance spacing (suggestions)

01:10:922 (3) - x:328 y:280

01:18:422 (4) - add whistle at the beginning
01:19:390 (7) - ^

01:44:551 (1,2,3,4) - you don't have to turn the spacing down

good luck~
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ryuu
thanks :3
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Cygnus
  • GUIDELINES
  1. When the text is color RED, it is unrankable.
  2. When the text is color BLACK, it's just a suggestion.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL
SPOILER
  1. Why is the BG upside-down?

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXI AM YOURS
SPOILER
  1. 00:15:277 (5) - How bout make this slider a blanket for the previous one?

  2. 00:38:019 (2) - Weird slider. Try cloning the other one instead.

  3. 01:02:455 (1) - I think it's better to clone the previous slider too. Oh and Remove new combo. Add new combo on the next note.

  4. 01:06:567 (7) - Unstack and make it like those little cute stacks you made.

  5. 02:11:890 (1,2) - About the SB. Try to make a lil arrow too for users who would use hard rock for this diff.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXYOU ARE MINE
SPOILER
  1. 00:08:745 (2) - Remove the red point at the 3rd point of this slider.

  2. 01:02:213 (1) - Remove new combo. Add new combo on the next note.

  • END OF PHILIPPINES'S MOD ~
  1. Before anything else, If you have any questions, don't be shy to ask me.
  2. If you need assistance, mapping techniques, you can count on me.
  3. I would be glad if you try to mod my map as well: KIMONO PRINCESS
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ryuu

Philippines wrote:

Why is the BG upside-down?
lol. art was so right from the start. the artist painted it in such a way.

also thanks for mod :3
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
Second Pomplamoose song I've modded today. What a coincidence! From my queue.

[General]

-- "3 New Songs Woot!" is the name of the album. Throw that into the tags.
-- The offset is off. I'm not good with timing, so find someone who is to help you.
-- Make the tick rate consistent on I am Yours.

[I Am Yours]

00:00:761 (1) - Remove the new combo here. It's silly.
01:11:164 (2) - Stack this on the end of the slider, not the beginning.
01:36:809 (4) - Instead of putting the slider-point at the beginning of the slider, put it towards the middle like this.
02:06:084 (3) - Use distance snap. Something like this is hard to read for players of intermediate experience.
02:11:890 (1,1) - Ugly overlap.

[You Are Mine]

00:57:132 (5) - Remove the whistle from the start of this slider.
01:42:374 (0) - Add a note here to keep the flow going.

Really nice map.
ryuu
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ryuu
thanks, jacob :3
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ [Ryuu] ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[You Are Mine]


  1. 00:57:878 (6) - Try perfect stack.
  2. 02:08:765 (7) - ^

[I Am Yours]


  1. 00:28:604 (2,3) - This spaing confused play with beginner.

That's all ~

Good luck with rank ~
ryuu
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ryuu
thank u, rika ~
Ayu
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Ayu
Ohey, saw this beatmap when I looked on your profile. (since you're [Ryuu] and Ryu & [Ryu] are friends of me. xD)

Anyway, thought I would mod this map, cool song~

[I Am Yours]
00:24:249 (1) - I think an arc would be nice here >w<
00:36:346 (3) - put this one on top of (4)'s start
00:39:854 (1,2) - make a nicer pattern with 2 sliders
00:59:814 (2) - make it overlap with (1)'s slider end
01:04:168 (3) - make it overlap with (2)'s slider end
01:06:588 (7) - make it overlap with (1)'s slider start
01:19:894 (3) - make it overlap with (2)'s slider end
01:21:588 (5) - make it overlap with (4)'s slider end
01:36:830 (4) - arc would be nice here http://puu.sh/s6bd
Couldn't find anything else here except for more notes that should be overlapped with slider end/start, but I didn't mention them all because then it would even fill the mod up with more "make it overlap" XD

[You Are Mine]
00:15:781 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:37:798 (3) - I think this slider could be better
Couldn't find anything else here.

Great beatmap \o/
erm,, is a guest diff still possbile? :c
ryuu
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ryuu

Ayu wrote:

Ohey, saw this beatmap when I looked on your profile. (since you're [Ryuu] and Ryu & [Ryu] are friends of me. xD)
lol.

Ayu wrote:

erm,, is a guest diff still possbile? :c
sorry. but this beatmap for rock. and he make GD.
as you can see, the name of the difficulties has special meaning.
so no. no more GD.

aaaaaaaaaaand thanks for mod, ayu :3
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
Привет, [Ryuu].
М4М.

[General]
Ничего~

[I Am Yours]
00:00:298 (1,2) - Может, сделать эти два слайдера чуть тише?
00:06:588 (3) - клап на реверс?
00:14:330 (4) - клап на конец?
00:43:846 - не уверен насчет этого брейка. Я говорил до этого с Бимом, и он сказал мне, что лучше не делать брейки на 1-2 секунды. Хотя, может тут это оправдано.
00:59:088 (1) - свисток на начало слайдера?
00:59:814 (2) - ^ на реверс?
01:01:507 (5) - И тут свисток? Вместе с клапом.

[You Are Mine]
Много джампов по всей карте. Стиль такой, думаю, но в моментах, как 00:11:427 (9,1) - кажется немного не подходящим. Просто мысли вслух, ничего, выглядит вполне ок.
Проблемы с нк, как мне кажется, вот например 01:14:088 (3,4,5,1) -
00:00:298 (1,2) - Опять, чуть тише?
Может либо это 00:46:749 (1,2,3) - чуть прижать, либо это 00:48:685 (1,2,3) - чуть растянуть по спейсингу, чтобы они отличались друг от друга? А, я, кажется, понял идею, так что не надо.
00:59:088 (1) - свисток на конец?
01:00:539 (3) - ^ (но тут сомневаюсь)
01:01:507 (6) - ^ на начало?
01:11:185 (4) - Свисток?
01:13:120 (10) - ^
01:31:265 (1,2,3) - Тут
01:31:265 (1,2,3) - Может, продолжишь дальше? Как пример: http://puu.sh/s7pH

Замечательная карта. Даю звезду.
ryuu
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ryuu
нян. спасибо, чика :3
Shino
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Shino
Yup. Your SB modder is here.
I checked your SB, but it was so good quality, so I decided to do a standard mod instead.
*This isn't nazi, but a suggestion. Of course you can just ignore all things.

[I am yours]
00:38:523 (3) - move 2nd point to (204,72)
00:44:572 - I will place another slider (like number 5) if I was you
01:31:265 (3) - move last point to (448,232)
01:36:830 (4) - move 2nd point to (208,16)
01:59:814 (2) - How about this: 356,124,119814,2,0,B|308:144|264:120|256:76,2,120,0|8|0
02:01:023 (3) - move to (364,136) if you did ^

[You are mine]
00:01:507 (2) - move 2nd point to (184,296)
00:34:894 (1) - move 2nd point to (160,308) / 3rd point to (144,232)
01:52:314 (5) - move 3rd point to (124,176)

That's all! Good luck :)
ps. I loved the heart sliders ><
ryuu
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ryuu

Shino wrote:

ps. I loved the heart sliders ><
nyan ~

thanks, shino :3
bossandy
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bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from my queue~
    　
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
    　
    [General]
    　
  4. I think you can use this BG , because people who in the BG is upside down
    BG
    　
    [I Am Yours]
    　
  5. 00:41:668 (3) - Add a NC here because this parttern is a bit long xDD
  6. 00:52:556 (3,4) - Stack notes isn't a good idea on the easiest diff >_<
  7. 00:59:814 (2) - Spacing?
    　
    [You Are Mine]
    　
  8. 00:06:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Put to other place plz , this is too ugly >_<
  9. 00:52:556 (1,2) - Ctrl+R to make the spacing the same
  10. 00:55:217 (1) - Add a finish start
    　
    　　--------------------------------------------------------
I love this kinds of the song xDD and your map looks great on me
Good Luck :3
ryuu
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ryuu
thanks, bossandy ~
Ayu
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Ayu

May only be me, but ok. Had it after updating.
rockleejkooo
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rockleejkooo
redownload it, Ayu :3
Leorda
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Leorda
Helllo

[I Am Yours]
00:44:572 (2,1) - Add an object between this object, it feels empty if you keep this
01:25:217 - Add note for following bass?
02:07:798 (2) - Extend it to red tick? Like others?


[You Are Mine]
00:06:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'm pretty not sure if this overlapped by hitbursts and it makes unreadable for players who play this. You should test it yourself
01:11:910 (6) - New combo for your combo pattern?
01:34:410 (3,4) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, so it's hard to read for players during gameplay


Auto stars? lol
ryuu
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ryuu
thank u, leorda.
all fixed.
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[Hard(?)]
00:19:773 (4) - a bit misleading for me, the apparent spacing multiple is smaller because the next slider is slowered. You can consider placing it around (136,296).
00:51:104 (3,3,3) - finishes match the song's momentum somehow
00:20:136 (5) - suggested to NC here to notify the slider speed change.
00:29:088 (3,5) - stack properly
01:29:814 (3,3,3) - same as 0:51

[Normal(?)]
01:12:394 (4) - it's suggested to move it somewhere else because the 300 signs from (2) may cover the repeat arrow of (4)
01:59:088 (4,1,2) - they are covered each other a bit and separating them will be nice.
02:15:298 (1) - ^, even the arrow is covered... place it somewhere like (344,188) would be better

Considering you have quite a lot of 1/2 beats in normal and this song is not really long, you may consider adding an easier diff, but the current one is fine too.
rockleejkooo
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rockleejkooo

wmfchris wrote:

[Normal(?)]
01:12:394 (4) - it's suggested to move it somewhere else because the 300 signs from (2) may cover the repeat arrow of (4)
- i tried it with default skin and assured that hitburst disappears before approach circle touches the slider so i left it how it is
01:59:088 (4,1,2) - they are covered each other a bit and separating them will be nice.
done... i suppose :о
02:15:298 (1) - ^, even the arrow is covered... place it somewhere like (344,188) would be better
okay
thank you, wmf~
waiting for ryuu
ryuu
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ryuu

wmfchris wrote:

Considering you have quite a lot of 1/2 beats in normal and this song is not really long, you may consider adding an easier diff, but the current one is fine too.
easy diff would be extra.
two people - two diffs.
for the third just don't have names.

all fixed.
thank u.
SapphireGhost
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SapphireGhost
Here we go.

[Storyboard]
- Change "shows it's face" to "shows its face". Remember that "it's" means "it is".
- Change "too much too drink" to "too much to drink".

[You Are Mine]
02:11:910 (1,1) - Heart sliders are great, first of all. However, I think you can do these without having the start and end overlap. It could be confusing, especially with HR or DT mods. This could be helpful, I make hearts in this way so they're more readable. You can use Rotate (ctrl+shift+r) to set the angle you want afterwards. Lastly, the second heart slider doesn't seem to match up with the vocals perfectly.

[I Am Yours]
- Consider raising the Approach Rate slightly? There are many objects at once and it's a bit messy currently.
01:11:185 (2,3,4) - It'd be great if you could move this pattern so there's no chance of the hitburst from (2) blocking the repeat arrow of (4). I know wmf already said this, but I agree with him and it doesn't hurt to be safe.
02:11:910 (1,1) - Heart slider stuff applies here too.

About adding an Easy difficulty... I don't know. I think it'd be good for the mapset if you could somehow make the difficulty names work. Lastly, I'd still rather rank this than bubble this, seeing how you have two MAT mods, aah. Just PM me after fixes.
Breeze
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Breeze
[I Am Yours]

  1. 00:13:362 (2,3) - Why not perfectly stack them? Well I saw you use this kind of stack many times, looked fine
  2. 00:19:168 (2) - I feel only one reverse here sounds better, idk why though, just feeling so, here is hard to follow lyric
I'm only worry about the 3.5 star normal, it is required one map should have a easiest diff that around ~2.5/3 star, I'll ask other to see if this is fine
Other looked pretty nice

EDIT: After discussing with other members, we think this map need a "real easy", those stack notes and overlaps can be hard to newbie :/
ryuu
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ryuu
thanks, sapphire and breeze.
i understand and partially agree with you about easy difficulty, but i ask to consider as a special case, because it was a birthday map for rock ,and only two difficulties may match with the lyrics in the chorus. i recently saw some ranked maps with 2-diffs mapset, so I wish mine was ranked too. i'm agree to make the normal easier, please point out the things that disturb you the most - i'll try to fix them. what's about hearts - i tried to remake them in a better way, but it didn't make them actually more readable..so if you have any thoughts - please help me out :3
Breeze
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Breeze
Those anti-jump stack notes, must be hard to newbie to understand, Although it's fun for me :/
If you want to make your normal easier, try delete some notes that are 1/2 beat after another notes or slider, that would be help
ryuu
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ryuu
updated.
Breeze
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Breeze
Sadly the Normal difficulty still shows a 3.5 star, but ranking rules said each mapset need at least one difficulty is 2.5~3 star, I'm afraid you had to add another easy diff, if you don't want to add an easy, then you had to make your normal more easier, sorry but I can't make this exception for you
ryuu
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ryuu
then why someone made ​​an exception for this or this?

and one more thing. let's all modders will say "make map better", "make normal more easier", "make map more readable".
so i ask that you pointed me to certain objects.
how would you make this normal more easier if it were yours.
Breeze
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Breeze
After another discussion with other members, yup this normal is played "normal" enough
So let's give this a shot
ryuu
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ryuu
thank u Q_______Q
rockleejkooo
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rockleejkooo
thank you very much, breezy :3
Aleks719
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Aleks719
offset 38~

реснапить все и вся о/

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edit : offset and some another stuff were fixed, rebubbled~
IceBeam
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IceBeam
не хотел особо придираться,но все же буду 8-)

[I Am Yours]

00:16:973 (2,3,1,2) - мне не очень этот паттерн нравится,я бы переделал:
во-первых убрал бы этот слайдер,и добавил бы 1 репит к 00:16:973 (2) - как раз будет заканчиваться и фраза и слайдер на 00:17:941,а потом бы с 00:18:425 сделал бы реверс-слайдеры с синими тикам,тем более так было тут - 00:41:650 (3,4)
SPOILER
00:45:037 - почему здесь пустота? намапить надо бы что-нибудь с ритмом вроде этого:
SPOILER
00:46:731 (1,2,1,2,1) - и так на сложность жаловались,может убрать эти "прыжки"? раз уж изи нету
00:56:167 (2,3) - не знаю почему никто это не выделил,но мне еще в первый раз бросилось в глаза - мне кажется это гораздо сложнее для новичков,чем всякие там 1/2 ритмы. слишком уж короткие слайдертреки - могу предложить только заменить на один реверс-слайдер с двумя репитами,ну или как дальше,с сирклом и реверс-слайдером
01:25:441 (1,2,1,2,1) - опять же спейсинг,и я бы подвинул как-то 01:28:344 (2,1) - наверное,так и задумано,но мне показалось неаккуратным D:
01:56:408 (1,2,3,4) - а вот тут мне кажется можно было облегчить ритм,перегружен 1/2 :/ тем более следующая подобная часть совсем иначе намаплена

[You Are Mine]

01:45:279 (2,3,4) - тут все объекты тоже в 0,75 - думаю,так не должно было быть
02:06:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - и тут

ну а если было так задумано - тем более исправь :D

и еще - все сердца на обоих диффах понравились,кроме 02:11:892 (1) - не знаю даже почему..наверное,хотелось чтобы конец с началом больше расходился,как во всех остальных
ryuu
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ryuu
у себя всё исправила.
рок проснётся, придёт, глянет.
спасибо.

заебалась с этим сердцем. успела пореветь. в конце концов оно мне не нравится. хуйня какая-то.
rockleejkooo
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rockleejkooo
все пофиксил, да.
спасибо, бим
IceBeam
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IceBeam
ranked!
Beige
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Beige
Congratz!!! :3
rockleejkooo
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rockleejkooo
спасибо О______О

поздравляю рюшеньку с первой мапой :3
(envy)
JoJo
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JoJo
wow~ Grats ryuu! :>
ryuu
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ryuu
спасибо, айсбиму-сан :3

спасибо, милый. и не завидуй. и с первой ранкнутой дифой тебя *О*

thanks, white ~

thank u, jojo >w<
Gabriela
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Gabriela
Very nice the song!

:D ~

I love it!

Grats!
ryuu
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ryuu
thanks, gabiacob :3
Reiji-RJ
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Awawawawawaw
Поздравляю, няшки! *О*
ryuu
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ryuu
спасибо, реееееейджииииик ;www;
rockleejkooo
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rockleejkooo
нян :3 спасибо, рюшик :3
спасибо, рейджи-сан :3
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