LunarSakuya wrote:

hi

General
good

Normal
00:51:136 (3) - http://puu.sh/ogqJ, so it doesn't overlap the slider intentional
nice normal

Hard
00:04:727 (4) - NC
01:14:341 (1) - Delete NC
01:15:004 (1) - ^
01:34:064 - Add a note, stack it on (6)
01:34:727 (2) - Change stack into this http://puu.sh/ogzi, more gentle transition for me
01:39:866 (5) - Stack on the wavy slider http://puu.sh/ogAf or something
01:42:849 (1) - Random shape?
01:57:269 (5) - Make a 1/1 slider http://puu.sh/ogCQ
03:03:733 (1) - Move somewhere else so the 300 doesnt block the note
03:15:667 (1) - make concave http://puu.sh/ogFF ok.

Insane
00:08:374 (4) - Ctrl + R
00:26:440 (3) - Spacing, make equidistant with (2) and (4) ok
00:46:993 (4) - put it somewhere downwards instead http://puu.sh/ogJC, so it's not off the grid ok
00:58:429 (3,4,5,6) - make jumps? http://puu.sh/ogKu
01:06:385 (3,4) - Ctrl + R these separately, idk then i like the transition between (4,5)
01:09:203 (4) - Stack at the beginning 01:08:705 (2) instead of at the end
01:13:346 (4) - http://puu.sh/ogMj Small variation
01:38:208 (1,2,3) - Style suggestion: http://puu.sh/ogO1, (2) is stacked on the beginning of 01:37:711 (1) small variation.
01:46:495 (3) - Stack this on 01:46:827 (1) http://puu.sh/ogOZ
02:00:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use soft sample set for this combo lowered vol instead.
02:20:308 (2) - Ctrl + R?
02:21:302 (5) - NC, you did it before so do it ok
03:01:081 (1,2) - Make a slider
03:04:230 (5,6,7) - this part seems a little funny, do one of your crazy spacings
03:30:335 (1) - Maybe cut this spinner short and add a note at the really end

Hope something helps, good luck!

Thanks for modding and star!

Star Stream wrote:

Hard
00:05:059 (5,7,1) - ctrl+r, it's too hard ok
00:26:109 (1,2) - copy/paste from 00:27:269 (5) - made different change..
00:41:523 (4) - (next)distance 1.1x plz. like this note 00:45:501 (2) - ok
00:59:092 (1,2,3,4) - maybe it's too hard to play in 'Hard' diff, but if you wanna use this pattern, make more smoothly : http://puu.sh/okjH ok
01:14:672 (1) - don't stack it, maybe you can make them like a diamond changed..
01:15:667 (2) - distance at least 1.4x plz ok
01:40:197 (1,3) - make symmetry slider i think its fine~
02:57:103 (1,2,3,4) - change to 1/2 Decreased spacing to make it easier.. I really like these repeats ><
03:19:645 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - reduce distance I think they should be bigger :X
02:58:428 (T) - unsnapped kiai timing, plz put it at 02:58:429 - nice catch!

(In Hard diff)Normal whistle :
00:59:092 -
00:59:424 -
00:59:755 -
01:00:087 -
01:04:396 -
01:04:727 -
01:05:059 -
01:05:390 -
01:09:700 -
01:10:031 -
01:10:363 -
01:10:694 -
01:15:004 - (head and slider body)
01:15:667 - (head and slider body)
same in 2nd,3nd kiai
added all!~

Insane
Too hard.. too easy! D:

Nyquill wrote:

01:03:070 (1) - This slider is very flow breaking, not really sure about what you can do about it though.

Only thing I did not change, thanks for modding and star

Quilt wrote:

hihi~~!!! \o

this is my mod~~!!

Normal

01:50:805 (1,2) - no touch?

01:57:435 (3,4) - ^

Hard

01:57:269 (5) - sliderend set 01:57:600?

01:57:766 (6,7) - (7)note delete and (6) one reverse slider ? ok

Insane

fine!!! good!!!! i cant mod it...sorry...



that's all!

sorry noob mod..orz

I think this map will be ranked!!! good luck!

Thank you for mod Quilt~

1. Everything's fine on the block. To the diffs.

1. 00:28:595 (3) - Unstack? I didn't expect this to be stacked below the end of the previous slider.
2. 00:50:970 (4) - Flip this slider vertically?
3. 01:33:899 (7) - Place this in a way that makes this circle and the previous two form a triangle? Move (6) to (252,128) and (7) to (296,56)?

1. 00:03:070 (5) - I actually expected this to be a circle...
2. 01:10:031 (7,8,1,2) - Stack (1) below (7) and (2) below (8)?

Nyquill wrote:

[Normal]
Niiiicceeeeeeeeee
I'm not sure if its rankable for you to have a diff with 2 minutes of blank though :/

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. Let's begin the mod

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. Everything's fine on the block. To the diffs.

>Hard

1. 00:28:595 (3) - Unstack? I didn't expect this to be stacked below the end of the previous slider.
2. 00:50:970 (4) - Flip this slider vertically?
3. 01:33:899 (7) - Place this in a way that makes this circle and the previous two form a triangle? Move (6) to (252,128) and (7) to (296,56)?

>Insane

1. 00:03:070 (5) - I actually expected this to be a circle...
2. 01:10:031 (7,8,1,2) - Stack (1) below (7) and (2) below (8)?

Normal's already fine.

Well, just that. Your beatmap's pretty great.

Good luck on the way

Oh, and stars.

No changes, but thank you for stars!!

1. fine

1. 01:15:004 (3) - i prefer add finish instead to whistle to start of the slider. and add clap instead to finish to repeat of the slider. and add finish to end of the slider

1. 00:00:750~00:12:683 - Why do you not use S:C1? I prefer silence sliderslide than now
2. 00:06:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - i think use DS1.1x is better. you are using in the main the DS1.1x
3. 00:27:269 (5) - add NC and 00:27:766 (1) - remove NC. ( vocal follow ) or 00:27:766 (1) - remove NC and 00:28:098 (2) - add NC
4. 00:52:628 (1) - add clap instead to finish is better imo
5. 01:09:700 (1,2,3,4) - It is better aligned to clean. http://puu.sh/oQon
   

   36,296,69700,6,0,B|36:216,1,75,2|0
   104,152,70031,2,0,B|104:232,1,75,10|0
   172,296,70363,2,0,B|172:216,1,75,2|0
   240,152,70694,2,0,B|240:232,1,75,10|0

6. 01:14:009 (2) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/oQpi i think this form is more good flow :3
7. 01:34:064 (x) - It is recommended that you add a note. You have put a note in accordance with the vocal。but only here feels a different thing slightly unnaturally to me.

1. 00:00:750~00:12:683 - same Hard diff
2. 00:12:683 (5) - add finish
3. 01:04:396 (5) - add NC
4. 01:16:330 (1) - add finish ?
5. 01:38:208 (1) - remove NC and 01:38:705 (4) - add NC ?
6. 02:58:429 (5) - add finish instead to clap to start of the slider

kosiga wrote:

hi~ Mythol

from m4m ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. fine

[Normal]

1. 01:15:004 (3) - i prefer add finish instead to whistle to start of the slider. and add clap instead to finish to repeat of the slider. and add finish to end of the slider

Changed to whistle at start, clap on repeat, and finish on end.

[Hard]

1. 00:00:750~00:12:683 - Why do you not use S:C1? I prefer silence sliderslide than now
2. 00:06:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - i think use DS1.1x is better. you are using in the main the DS1.1x
3. 00:27:269 (5) - add NC and 00:27:766 (1) - remove NC. ( vocal follow ) or 00:27:766 (1) - remove NC and 00:28:098 (2) - add NC Only thing I did not use, NC was used to show that I'm following the piano for this part.
4. 00:52:628 (1) - add clap instead to finish is better imo
5. 01:09:700 (1,2,3,4) - It is better aligned to clean. http://puu.sh/oQon
   

   36,296,69700,6,0,B|36:216,1,75,2|0
   104,152,70031,2,0,B|104:232,1,75,10|0
   172,296,70363,2,0,B|172:216,1,75,2|0
   240,152,70694,2,0,B|240:232,1,75,10|0

6. 01:14:009 (2) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/oQpi i think this form is more good flow :3
7. 01:34:064 (x) - It is recommended that you add a note. You have put a note in accordance with the vocal。but only here feels a different thing slightly unnaturally to me.

[Insane]

1. 00:00:750~00:12:683 - same Hard diff
2. 00:12:683 (5) - add finish
3. 01:04:396 (5) - add NC
4. 01:16:330 (1) - add finish ?
5. 01:38:208 (1) - remove NC and 01:38:705 (4) - add NC ?
6. 02:58:429 (5) - add finish instead to clap to start of the slider

agree with all~
good map star☆ ~

Good luck~

Thank you for everything!

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

Tips: Your map have the same BG with http://osu.ppy.sh/s/44728 - [Normal] I will talk to them, I'm sure I had it first D:

[Hard]

00:04:727 (4) - NC
00:07:545 (4) - ^
00:55:114 (1) - this note is far from center and 1 tick after spinner end, which may cause difficulty
02:19:810 (4) - stack under 02:19:147 (2)? flow better imo.
03:02:407 (1) - change to a slider like 03:13:015 (5)? or change 03:13:015 (5) to a spinner? ok

[Insane]

01:04:893 (2,3) - change ds to 1.0x? ok
01:42:849 (1,2) - the slider does not looks good, try this: http://puu.sh/pcEX
02:07:711 (5,6) - change to this? http://puu.sh/pcFz
03:03:567 (1) - only 1/2 tick after spinner end, which is too short for 181bpm
03:08:871 (2) - add a note

That's all I can find. GL~

Ty mod.

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Mythol

From Net & Nich's Modding Queue

General

1. Nothing

Normal

1. I don't find the problem.

Hard

1. 00:04:727 (4) - Move left 1 grid
2. 00:05:722 (7) - Move right 1 grid
3. 02:37:877 (5) - Make to this
   

   396,60,157877,2,0,B|460:36|520:68,1,112.499996647239
   448,168,158540,6,0,B|424:224|368:252,1,112.499996647239

   going to need a puush of how it looks, if you're going to post codes...
4. 02:59:424 (4) - Move last point left 2 grid

Insane

1. 00:05:390 (3) - Move up 1 grid

That's all, that I can find them.
nice map, give a star

Good luck~

thx for mod+star

336,368,73843,1,0
284,284,74009,2,0,B|368:212|372:100,1,200,8|0
276,52,74506,1,0
371,110,74672,1,8

wmfchris wrote:

Ahhhh this miku is irresistable >_< ><\

[General]
Some issues on tags:
1) Tag vocaloid2 (this is simply linked with vocaloid) ok
2) "collection feat." just wonder feat. with what? -w- feat. Hatsune Miku, but I put that as artist so~
3) Map your normal till finish. ok!

[Insane]
00:05:722 (4) - If you don't want (4) overlapping on (1), why don't you rotate (1,2,3,4) each by 90 degrees instead of (1,2,3) rotating 120 degrees? hmm, i prefer this pattern. and the overlap doesn't show at all in play mode.
01:01:081 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/290126 ok
01:14:009 (6) - you can adjust this a bit so that the coming slider stacks on (6)'s end, ref code:

336,368,73843,1,0
284,284,74009,2,0,B|368:212|372:100,1,200,8|0
276,52,74506,1,0
371,110,74672,1,8

code is exact same as what I had lol, but it doesn't really need to be changed..
02:12:683 (4) - same as 01:01, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/290129 ? ok~

[Hard]
00:50:308 (2) - move it to the left a bit ok

seems good to me, find some more mods and find me for recheck again

and the miku is so moeeeee D: baka miku! www

thx mod~

Laurier wrote:

>w</

Insane
HP+1 ? HP6 is easy >,<
00:01:081 (2) - (nazi) move waypoint more right? http://puu.sh/pzdS
00:02:904 (4,5) - How about this? http://puu.sh/pzcG (4) use x1.8 spacing . (5)end stack on (1)end
00:29:424 (4) - try this http://puu.sh/pzfS or http://puu.sh/pzgw
00:53:788~00:55:114 use soft hit sound?
02:16:330 (8) - stack on (4) is better
03:02:241 - add note

Hard
00:51:468 (5) - add newcombo?
01:33:567 (5) - ^
02:03:733 (4) - (nazi)1 grid right and (4)end stack on 02:02:075 (3)

Normal
good for me

That's all >.<

Thank you Laurier!!
fix all~

Starry wrote:

I am here for m4m this map p/1438596#p1438596 Thank you!

[Hard]

02:17:158 (7) - New combo here? Start of new vocal.
03:08:540 (1) - Remove New combo here?
03:09:037 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - To be honest, these all can be 1 combo.

[Insane]

Feel a bit fast maybe AR-1?

03:02:407 (1) - This spinner is a bit too fast o_o

Awesome Diff!

That's all I could find!
Good Luck and have a star.

hm... no changes but thanks for star!

Zapy wrote:

SPOILER

05:55 <Zapy> : dont you think these are a bit hard to read? 01:37:711 (1,2,3) -
05:56 <Mythol> : would NC on 3 help
05:56 <Mythol> : i used to have it, but someone suggested to remove ._.
05:56 <Zapy> : i mean
05:56 <Zapy> : half of that slider is hidden
05:57 <Zapy> : under 01:36:882 (2) - hitburesrt
05:57 <Zapy> : and 01:37:214 (4) - this one's
05:57 <Zapy> : would be fairly easy to fix
05:57 <Mythol> : ok I'l move it down
05:57 <Mythol> : and re-arrange
05:57 <Zapy> : just move 01:37:214 (4) -
05:57 <Zapy> : and it's fine
05:58 <Mythol> : nah i'll move 1 and 2
05:58 <Zapy> : unless you want to redo it completely
05:58 <Zapy> : the slider is fine as it's swapped hor+ver
05:58 <Zapy> : imo
05:58 <Zapy> : looks pretty good as where it's now
05:58 <Mythol> : orz
05:58 <Mythol> : but i like the reflected pattern
05:58 <Zapy> : well do as you wish
05:58 <Mythol> : 01:35:059 (1,2,3,4) -
05:58 <Zapy> : :p
05:58 <Mythol> : from this
05:58 <Mythol> : omggg
05:58 <Zapy> : ye
05:58 <Mythol> : WHAT DO I DO
05:58 <Mythol> : OMGLOGMOGMOGFM
05:58 <Zapy> : change both
05:58 <Zapy> : xd
05:59 <Zapy> : i mean 01:35:556 (2,3,4) - and the future one
05:59 <Zapy> : ^^
05:59 <Mythol> : http://puu.sh/pF5a
05:59 <Mythol> : how does that look
05:59 <Zapy> : really do as you please
05:59 <Mythol> : i moved 1 and 2
05:59 <Zapy> : mods only ruin maps
05:59 <Mythol> : and then i changed 2 and 3's position
06:00 <Zapy> : dafuq
06:00 <Zapy> : i dunno
06:00 <Mythol> : oh wait
06:00 <Mythol> : but then its uneven spacing
06:00 <Mythol> : and its weird
06:00 <Mythol> : fogmdfiomgiajfioajsf
06:00 <Mythol> : FK YOUUUUUU MODS
06:00 <Zapy> : i think it's better when it's symmetrical to 01:37:379 (5) -
06:01 <Zapy> : i'd just do this
06:01 <Zapy> : http://puu.sh/pF5T
06:01 <Zapy> : or something
06:01 <Zapy> : lol
06:01 <Zapy> : 01:47:324 (2) - this is a bit hidden
06:02 <Mythol> : took your suggestion~
06:02 <Mythol> : i think its fine since
06:02 <Mythol> : I used the same pattern right before
06:03 <Zapy> : 02:40:280 - add a note here perhaps?
06:03 <Mythol> : should be read-able ..
06:03 <Zapy> : yeah probs
06:03 <Mythol> : should i just add a double stacked on 02:39:866 (1) -
06:04 <Zapy> : nah
06:04 <Mythol> : then I dont like having a note there..
06:04 <Zapy> : 1.0x is probably fine
06:04 <Zapy> : it NEEDS a note
06:04 <Zapy> : jesus it feels weird without
06:04 <Mythol> : OKAY
06:04 <Zapy> : since there's an obvious drum hit in the music
06:05 <Zapy> : even autoplay looked weird on that part
06:05 <Zapy> : D:
06:05 <Zapy> : really
06:05 <Zapy> : sorry for omdding
06:05 <Zapy> : i'm a huge dick
06:05 <Mythol> : LOL
06:05 <Mythol> : keep going
06:05 <Zapy> : i'll kill myself after
06:05 <Zapy> : split these into 2 combos only 02:57:103 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
06:05 <Zapy> : imo
06:06 <Zapy> : doesnt really need that 12341234 spam
06:06 <Mythol> : ok
06:06 <Zapy> : make it 12345678 spam instead
06:06 <Mythol> : yup
06:07 <Zapy> : 03:04:396 (6) - partially hidden
06:07 <Zapy> : doesnt look so good as where it's now
06:07 <Mythol> : k i'll stack on 3
06:07 <Mythol> : and re-arrange abit..
06:08 <Zapy> : i'd do this instead
06:08 <Zapy> : http://puu.sh/pF9h
06:08 <Zapy> : or somethinglike that
06:09 <Zapy> : this is hidden too 03:10:860 (8) -
06:09 <Mythol> : that looks good
06:09 <Zapy> : 03:23:622 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
06:09 <Zapy> : you know
06:13 <Zapy> : not so sure about these 01:33:567 (1,2,3,4) -
06:13 <Zapy> : on hard
06:17 <Mythol> : ok I'll change~
06:19 <Zapy> : dunno
06:19 <Zapy> : perhaps lower drain by 1
06:19 <Zapy> : on insane
06:19 <Mythol> : i JUST raised it
06:19 <Mythol> : to 7
06:19 <Mythol> : lol..
06:19 <Zapy> : oh
06:20 <Mythol> : 6 is pretty low
06:20 <Mythol> : but the map is pretty jumpy
06:20 <Mythol> : idk what to sue
06:20 <Mythol> : use*
06:20 <Zapy> : well the map would've owned me with casual mouse only plaing
06:20 <Zapy> : playing*
06:20 <Mythol> : fine 6..
06:22 <Zapy> : you fool
06:22 <Mythol> : no u
06:22 <Zapy> : tell me what this motherfucker is doing here 03:33:236 (1) -
06:22 <Zapy> : normal diff
06:22 <Mythol> : o.o?
06:22 <Mythol> : idk
06:22 <Mythol> : LOL
06:22 <Mythol> : I didn't even notice this
06:23 <Zapy> : one song of a motherly bitch it is
06:23 <Zapy> : make the spinners like you've done on hard
06:23 <Mythol> : its not my normal
06:23 <Mythol> : = =
06:23 <Zapy> : really?
06:23 <Zapy> : whose is it then
06:23 <Mythol> : hoLysoup
06:23 <Zapy> : IN THAT CASE
06:23 <Zapy> : rename the diff
06:24 <Mythol> : he said his name's too long
06:24 <Zapy> : to hoLysoup's Normal
06:24 <Mythol> : so just keep lol
06:24 <Zapy> : well
06:24 <Zapy> : something like
06:24 <Zapy> : i dunno
06:24 <Mythol> : lol
06:24 <Zapy> : would've been too perverted
06:24 <Zapy> : i better keep that to myself
06:25 <Zapy> : anyway
06:25 <Zapy> : map hard and insane's end like the normal or remove that spinner from normal
06:25 <Mythol> : I'll just ask him to change it later
06:25 <Mythol> : wait
06:25 <Mythol> : which one do you like more
06:26 <Zapy> : hmm
06:26 <Zapy> : well that end is kinda strange to map
06:26 <Zapy> : i'd keep the current
06:26 <Mythol> : current = hard/insane?
06:26 <Zapy> : yush

That psp really deserves a bubble

terametis wrote:

Hi~
These are all suggestion.

[Insane]
awesome.

00:01:081 (2)　　　　Ctrl+R
00:08:374 (4)　　　　Ctrl+R
01:15:004 (1)　　　　Ctrl+H
01:15:667 (2)　　　　Ctrl+H
01:57:269 (5)　　　　Ctrl+R hmm.. no :/
02:03:567 (2)　　　　remove clap
02:03:733 (3)　　　　add clap
02:04:064 (1)　　　　Ctrl+R no~
03:01:981 (1)　　　　How about this?

SPOILER

too hard x.x
03:07:711 (5)~(7)　How about this?

SPOILER

[Hard]
Looks good for me.

[Normal]
good

I love your mapping <3333 <3
I wish your map is Ranked. I will try my best ><
bye~

thank you for star!

meiikyuu wrote:

hai

Normal
can't find anything Dx.
good diff ~

Hard
00:02:738 (3) - move slider one grid down (so at x:472 y:100)
00:52:462 (4) - add finish? no~
02:35:225 (5) - add clap at beginning of slider, not include end
02:37:877 (5) - ^

Insane
General:
- how about AR8? ~..just my feeling though lol nope~
----
00:22:462 (4) - remove combo OR remove combo at 00:22:959 (1) no! D:<
00:53:622 (4,1) - new combo at 4 & remove new combo at the next note/slider


good luck this map shows lots of improvement ♥

Bobo wrote:

Hi - From the mod queue, lol

[General]

Who else sees the Cirno in that bg o-o

[Insane]

00:12:352 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stacking is boring, make a stream using .2 spacing and place it slightly to the upper right of the center.

00:22:959 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stack it with that (1) there, looks neater.
00:28:429 (5,6,7) - x:244 y:116
01:03:070 (1) - 4 grids right just so it blankets (4) better.
01:07:877 (2,4) - Swap these :3
01:14:672 (8) - I really dislike random jump back patterns like these, I'd move this.
02:40:280 (2,3) - Looks better if you just stack with the endpoint.
02:58:429 (1) - The straight slider looks too bland, try something like this.
03:24:617 (5) - Same as above, also add a NC for consistency.

[Hard]

00:32:904 (4) - Delete (5) and give (4) a slider repeat.
00:50:639 (3,4) - Hm, you didnt have anything like this in [Insane], perhaps shorten (3) to the white tick?
01:57:269 (5,6) - Same here, except with a red tick.

[Normal]

... Seems fine :L

Good luck getting bubbled, nice mapset.

ertyukjh010 wrote:

hello,
[Hard]

00:44:506 (1,3,1) - Does not look good, a little arbitrarily. Try this > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/292814
00:50:639 (3) - End at 00:50:805 ? no~
01:39:866 (5) - Don't overlap here will be better for read.
01:57:269 (5) - End at 01:57:600 ^

[Insane]

Fine

Good luck ~

S h i a wrote:

In-game request.~

[overall]
I think let spinner end at 03:33:236 - fit better. the guitar sound on the next red tick makes it sound weird >< so I'm ending it there~

[Normal]
fine.

[Hard]
AR+1? I think hard is already too hard ><
00:28:595 (3) - stack with 00:28:761 (1) - slider head seems better to me.
01:06:716 (5) - suggest

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[Insane]
all were suggestion. if you keep yours it's ok.
00:55:777 (3,4,5,6) -

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better to read. better to play. just suggestion
01:38:208 (3) - this spacing is weird here. so.. suggest 01:38:042 (2,3,4,5) - like this

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this one's too hard!! x.x
02:19:478 (2) -

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ahaha. hope those offline/online information won't bother you.
02:40:363 (3) - add note?
that's all.

some flow really weird to play. but I think it's fine. it's your own mapping style so I didn't point them out. good luck

fixed everything else, ty !!!

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General
since you don't have a storyboard or something, why not turn on the letterbox during breaks? ok~


[Normal]
fine.

[Hard]
Issues
02:01:081 (1) - new combo bug o.o add a new combo here. fixed ty

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:47:158 (1) - very nazi but I think this slider may curve more TAT current is not very beautiful imo. curved more..
01:34:728 (2,3,4) - seems like the only place you are using triple hits in this diff =3=.. yup.. o.o no change though
03:16:330 (3,4,5) - I didn't quite understand why you increase the distance at here a little bit o.o just to make the ending more fun~


[Insane]
fine for me.


cute song and bg~ good luck!

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi

Insane

01:15:501- add note (sound better)
01:29:258(1) - this note is too low, you should lift it or put in other place
01:34:645 - add note
02:21:799 - ^
02:40:280 - remove this note end next

Hard

00:28:098 - start this slider from 00:27:932 make double and remove note on 00:28:595
00:51:633 - add note
00:52:296 - ^
01:34:230 - ^

Normal

00:24:948 - make this slider shorter to white big section and add note on 00:26:274
00:31:910 - add note
00:47:158 - make this slider shorter on white section and add note on 00:48:153
02:12:352 - add note

Good luck ^^

those wrote:

I feel real bad for posting here, but it really irks me how my suggestions that are purely based on musical knowledge and understanding were ignored without reason. You're probably going to rage at me and be like, "why did you mod a bubbled map" and all that, but I feel it's worth it since you may have a chance of learning something here. Therefore, I'll tell it to you again, and hopefully you'll learn to accept it this time because I'm explaining the reasoning a whole lot more.

those wrote:

I feel real bad for posting here, but it really irks me how my suggestions that are purely based on musical knowledge and understanding were ignored without reason. You're probably going to rage at me and be like, "why did you mod a bubbled map" and all that, but I feel it's worth it since you may have a chance of learning something here. Therefore, I'll tell it to you again, and hopefully you'll learn to accept it this time because I'm explaining the reasoning a whole lot more.

[Insane]
If you notice how 00:33:899 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/qJyU and 00:35:225 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/qJzd are, and you listen to the music, it's obvious that 00:36:543 (1,2) - should follow the mapping pattern of having been rotated 180 degrees. But right now it does not: http://puu.sh/qJzJ. In addition, 00:39:195 (1,2), 00:40:521 (1,2), and 00:41:846 (1,2) don't follow the pattern of being rotated 180 degrees, until you get to 00:43:172 (1,2), which is done pretty well.

In the next phrase, 00:44:498 (1,2) and 00:47:150 (1,2) don't follow the pattern, but 00:45:824 (1,2) - does. This makes the patterning in your map harder to follow and may cause confusion for players with a better musical sense.

However, the next time the prechorus comes in, it appears you tried to follow the pattern of rotating 180 degrees and reversing the slider, as seen here: 01:40:189 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/qJBq. Therefore, you should replace 01:42:012 (2) - with a rotated and reversed version of (1), maybe like this? http://puu.sh/qJBY. This applies for 01:42:841 (1,2) as well, but you only need to Reverse (2) in this scenario.

The rest of the rotation patterns make sense since they're all just rotated 180 degrees and not put through any other transformations like how you did near the beginning. It also pleases me that you did follow some of my suggestions that would have made gameplay better, such as reversing 00:01:073 (2) (even though you didn't choose to reverse it based on my mod, I don't think).

I've told you I looked up to you yo. I just can't stand to have your mapping that have patterns that don't follow "musical reasoning". Maybe this is the effect of over twelve years of musical experience, but I am more than certain that this will make your map much better. Unless you have explicit reasons why the patterns aren't being followed, these suggestions should definitely be taken into consideration. It's true that these won't unrank your map if it ever got ranked, but it's not really about that; it's better I had posted this now rather than a week later.

afk; doctor's appt.

xcherry wrote:

those wrote:

I feel real bad for posting here, but it really irks me how my suggestions that are purely based on musical knowledge and understanding were ignored without reason. You're probably going to rage at me and be like, "why did you mod a bubbled map" and all that, but I feel it's worth it since you may have a chance of learning something here. Therefore, I'll tell it to you again, and hopefully you'll learn to accept it this time because I'm explaining the reasoning a whole lot more.

well now that someone else decided to mod, I think I might try my hand at it... I see some things that can use some fixing. Mythol, if you still want my mod, can you tell me? Because I think you could benefit from it and it would make your map a whole lot better.

Lybydose wrote:

offset +26 (768)

ask someone else to "recheck" the map, not me, since I the only thing I even looked at was the timing.

1. Since hoLysoup has done this difficulty, you should rename it "hoLysoup's Normal".
2. 00:10:047 (1) - Since there is a "drum stream" 1/1 earlier you should end this spinner here (00:12:368). Otherwise its end sounds too late. You should also start the break at 00:10:047 like this :
   
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3. 01:00:765 (1) - I'd not do a 2/1 slider here. Like what you did for other patterns, you should follow the vocals and use a 1/1 slider (or circles, depending on what you want to do). Like this :
   
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4. 01:16:428 (1) - For the same reason as before, I would end this spinner 1/1 earlier. (and start the break at the spot where the spinner ended before).
   
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5. 03:04:080 (1) - Same as 01:00:765 (1).

1. 00:10:047 (1) - Since there is a "drum stream" 1/1 earlier you should end this spinner here (00:12:368). Otherwise its end sounds too late. You should also start the break at 00:10:047 like this :
   
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2. 01:16:346 (1) - ^
3. 01:57:285 (5) - I see why you put its end on a blue tick, but it actually plays and sounds quite awkward. You should end it at 01:57:616. ( 1/4 earlier ). It fits really better.

1. In my opinion, AR9 doesn't fit for this song so I'd use AR8.
2. 00:09:716 (6) - There is nothing that need to be mapped at 00:09:882. So I don't see why you have done a slider here, just remove it and put a circle at 0:09:716.
3. 01:16:346 (1) - As in Normal and Hard, reduce this spinner by 1/1 and start the break at 01:18:998.

Kurai wrote:

Hello ~ !

[Hard]

1. 00:10:047 (1) - Since there is a "drum stream" 1/1 earlier you should end this spinner here (00:12:368). Otherwise its end sounds too late. You should also start the break at 00:10:047 like this : sorry.. but I really think it sounds better ending where it does now..
   
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2. 01:16:346 (1) - ^ ^
3. 01:57:285 (5) - I see why you put its end on a blue tick, but it actually plays and sounds quite awkward. You should end it at 01:57:616. ( 1/4 earlier ). It fits really better. ok changed~

[Insane]

1. In my opinion, AR9 doesn't fit for this song so I'd use AR8. I want to keep AR 9
2. 00:09:716 (6) - There is nothing that need to be mapped at 00:09:882. So I don't see why you have done a slider here, just remove it and put a circle at 0:09:716. im mapping the vocal "na" here..
3. 01:16:346 (1) - As in Normal and Hard, reduce this spinner by 1/1 and start the break at 01:18:998. :(

Kurai wrote:

Hello ~ !

[Normal]
Since hoLysoup has done this difficulty, you should rename it "hoLysoup's Normal". I don't really mind. If Mythol wants to change the diff name he's free to do it. I have other Guest Diffs that just say 'hoLysoup'
00:10:047 (1) - Since there is a "drum stream" 1/1 earlier you should end this spinner here (00:12:368). Otherwise its end sounds too late. You should also start the break at 00:10:047 like this :

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ok no that makes the spinner very awkward when it doesn't end on the downbeat.
01:00:765 (1) - I'd not do a 2/1 slider here. Like what you did for other patterns, you should follow the vocals and use a 1/1 slider (or circles, depending on what you want to do). Like this :

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This is true. However, if I wanted to follow the vocals here it would break the beautiful symmetrical slider that comes after AND I would have to use 4 circles instead of 3 because the vocals stretches out to 4 syllables. so no change here. Plus, it's much easier to play this simple diff when simply tracing sliders.
01:16:428 (1) - For the same reason as before, I would end this spinner 1/1 earlier. (and start the break at the spot where the spinner ended before). same reason as above

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03:04:080 (1) - Same as 01:00:765 (1). same reason as above
sorry, no changes made.