GeneralWhy do you have audio leadin?
Normal00:06:156 (2,1,2) - Try to make these spacings closer to 1.01. Notice in the top right, that those numbers. It goes right into 1.03, and then there are slight variations. I think 1.01 would balance out everything. You can use manual spacing, or you can press alt+shift to more accurately adjust distance spacing. If you find that the spacing stops you for whatever reason, then you can turn grid snap off, or refer to method 1. Pardon my instructions if you already know this. I'm tired of people not understanding spacing related issues.
00:40:156 (3,1,2) - You should just turn grid snap off and adjust the position of 1 so that it's perfectly 1.0 here.
00:43:156 (2) - Looks like it's just squished in there. adding a curve similar to the slider in the previous combo would give it more meaning. Here is one way to do it
http://puu.sh/1tNST00:49:156 (2,3) - Shape is a bit weird IMO. Could you think of something better?
01:06:406 (1,2) - Curves are a tiny bit unpolished. If you lowered the end position of 1 and made both curves less, it would look cleaner IMO.
http://puu.sh/1tO8A < something generally like this. My image may not be perfect since I didn't work out the absolute center of the new curves, and didn't pay much attention to how the new spacing affects things. Use this as an example of what I mean and not specifically exactly what I mean.
01:36:156 (3,1) - A couple things.
- 1 I'm not sure about having a whistle on the end of that. Personally a finish would work better.
2. slider 2 looks too high in comparison to 1. It doesn't look right to me. Ideally it should be placed around here http://puu.sh/1tOkH Don't need to follow this as your way can work too. But I don't quite agree with the unevenness of the slider points. The first slider looks fine, but the second sliders looks odd pointing down like that with it being so high on the screen. The down pointing end method would be better if it were like the screenshot IMO.
Just my opinion.
01:44:906 (1) - End seems kind of noisy don't you think?
01:54:656 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't play right to me. I guess it's easier than the alternative beat, but the off beat aspect is really noticeable here.
Taiko FutsuuNot a taiko player sorry.
01:04:156 - why is there a gap here?
Hard00:16:906 (2,3) - Circles do not feel good. Maybe a slider instead?
00:31:906 (6,7,1,2) - Curve can be improved. Notes should be more left.
http://puu.sh/1tP7w00:34:156 (1) - Looks like it should be more to the right.
00:46:406 (6,1,2) - Spacing could be closer to 1.0
00:50:656 (1,2,3,4) - Exactly 1.5 would be better.
00:51:656 (4,5,1) - ^
01:10:406 (5,1,2) - Make a less dramatic curve shift?
01:11:906 (4,1) - Closer to 1.0 flows better.
01:19:406 (2,3,4) - Flow is poor here. I prefer regular spacing.
01:22:406 (4) - Random hitsound? also it doesn't flow well into the next slider. Having a repeat slider here instead sounds and plays a lot better.
Try this timeline?
http://puu.sh/1tPoO01:37:656 (5,6) - 1.0? Also maybe curve 6 in the opposite direct instead.
ConclusionIf the taiko difficulties check out, this mapset is not far away from a bubble. good luck!